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Abi
28-07-2006, 15:45
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT

Val walks into bathroom, mopping up the champagne from her clothes with a towel. She sniffs the towel and then throws it into the laundry basket.

She takes off her clothes and steps into the shower. She starts to sing to herself as the shower runs.

Val begins to wash herself. As she is rubbing her breast she discovers a lump. She freezes on the spot and feels again. An obvious lump can be felt…

diamond1
28-07-2006, 15:46
To help with your speculation theories (Or maybe just confuse you a little bit more.....:p ), theres just 5 more instalments left of Devon Seas. With 4 of them being posted tomorrow, and the final installment on Saturday, where does that leave your theories?! my theroy goes as this...siobhan/emma is back with a gun does anyone else think this is a strange conicidence that jared has turned up as well, No chance I think that someone will be shot and that person will be Nick I think he will be getting out his car as he see's siobhans secret lover jared pointing a gun at hilary (while she outside for some reason) he will make the save and get hit by the bullet.

Craig will frame Both leah and carl for murder as both their dna are in the house but while he goes home and sits down someone batters him round the head with a doorstop and kills him....who dunnit though?

all well of the mark completley but I cant think of what else could happen

Abi
28-07-2006, 16:06
INT. JENKINS MANOR – NIGHT

Guests are beginning to leave Jenkins Manor. Richard and Hilary are saying their goodbyes to people and leading them out of the front door.

Richard: Speak to you soon Geoffrey, thank you for coming…

As the final guests leave Richard takes a deep sigh of exhaustion.

Richard: What a day eh?

Hilary: Don’t sound too over excited will you… you’ve married the woman of your dreams…again…

Richard: I’m too old for all this rushing about and fuss… from now on it’s going to be the simple life for us Taylors.

Hilary laughs at this comment. Nick and Vicky walk out of the great hall and walk towards Richard and Hilary.

Nick: Laughs on the first day of marriage, wonder how long that will last?

Richard: For eternity here’s hoping…

Hilary: The novelty will soon where off.

The four of them walk towards the living room.

Richard: So then….have you decided on a date for the wedding yet?

Nick: Christ dad! We’ve only just decided not to get married today…there’s no rush…is there babes?

Vicky: No…we love each other and that’s the main thing…

The four of them enter the dark living room.

Emma Jones: Awwww Doesn’t it bring a warmth to your heart? Love is in the air…

In a shock Richard puts the light on. The four of them have looks of horror on their faces as they see Emma Jones (Siobhan) sitting on an armchair, a shotgun pointed at them.

Richard: Siobhan…

Emma Jones: Sit down…shut up… and get ready to pay the price for pissing me off!

Siobhan
28-07-2006, 16:08
:eek::eek: that woman means business... Now I bet we are left with "who got shot" as the cliff hanger

bakedbean
28-07-2006, 16:25
Wow god i hope Tanya arrives to save the day

Abi
28-07-2006, 16:46
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DS Season Finale... Last installment: Tomorrow

Jojo
28-07-2006, 16:46
Wow - yay - go me/you Siobhan!!! Who are we shooting again??! :rotfl:

Love it, love it, love it - did I count 4 already, or was it 3. Please let it be 3 so there will be another one later tonight before tomorrows big finale *crosses fingers*

Val's found a lump :eek: And whilst James having a "meeting" with Lorraine! Oh no! Its all happening in Baymoore (I'm so excited, Emma/Siobhan is back!!)

DaVeyWaVey
28-07-2006, 17:35
Oh my goodness! Siobhan has turned up again....she definetly means business but will she use that shotgun?!?! And James, don't even think of playing away!

Jojo
28-07-2006, 22:31
Oh my goodness! Siobhan has turned up again....she definetly means business but will she use that shotgun?!?! And James, don't even think of playing away!
Siobhan is back, but shes really Emma :D Back for the finale!! yay :cheer:

DaVeyWaVey
28-07-2006, 22:39
I will have to read the finale next week..i am going away on holiday tomorrow. :D

Jojo
28-07-2006, 23:04
I will have to read the finale next week..i am going away on holiday tomorrow. :D Oh no!! :eek: You are going to have to wait till you get back for the finale and who me/Siobhan shoots (and possibly kills, if this is what happens)! Now thats one reason i am glad i haven't gone away yet this year lol

DaVeyWaVey
28-07-2006, 23:07
Oh no!! :eek: You are going to have to wait till you get back for the finale and who me/Siobhan shoots (and possibly kills, if this is what happens)! Now thats one reason i am glad i haven't gone away yet this year lol

lol i know i will be back next saturday so i can read it then! :)

Abi
28-07-2006, 23:16
You are going to have to wait till you get back for the finale and who me/Siobhan shoots (and possibly kills, if this is what happens)!

But you know Devon Seaas.... will things really be that simple?!

:p :rotfl:

Jojo
28-07-2006, 23:19
As long as I don't shoot myself - I'll be happy :rotfl: :rotfl:

Katy
29-07-2006, 11:09
CAnt wait for the finale. Talk about cliffhangers.

Abi
29-07-2006, 11:09
INT. JENKINS MANOR – NIGHT

Richard, Hilary, Nick and Vicky stand motionless in the living room. Siobhan gets up from her seat and begins to wave the gun around.

Siobhan: Didn’t you all hear me!? I told you to sit on the god damn sofa!

Richard: Why should we listen to a doped up con artist like you!?

Siobhan: Because you’re the ones with a shotgun pointed at your bloody head! Unless you want a bullet in your skull and a pool of claret then do what I ******* say!

Hesitantly the four of them sit down.

Siobhan: Look at you…quivering like little cowards… the almighty powerful Taylor family… scared of death…

Siobhan laughs to herself sinisterly.

Hilary: Why have you come back eh!? Haven’t you already done us enough damage!?

Siobhan: Revenge… because of you I lost out on 1 million dollars… money that could have brought me all the drugs I could ever want! But you had to ruin it didn’t you!? Thinking your so god damn clever! One bloody cheque was all I needed! And now you pay for the price…one way or another!

Richard: Look you can have the money… just don’t hurt any of us! Please!

Siobhan fires a gunshot. The Taylors duck and cover themselves, Siobhan laughs once more. She has shot at the bookcase.

Siobhan: I’m deadly serious… you lot are gonna pay for ****ing me over! You’re not gonna leave this room alive!

As Siobhan begins to circle the sofa like a predator to its prey, Richard and Nick look at each other and silently formulate a plan.

Siobhan: Living a crappy life I always thought it would change…I’d get some kind of repayment for the abuse! The poverty! Everything! So when I meet Ed… I thought it was all going to change… we planned it… how we would con you all and rob you blind… and then he has to go and get killed!

Siobhan slides to the floor. Pointing the gun at her head.

Siobhan: He was my world… we had it planned… we’d go and move abroad… make right all the wrongs in our life… and then once more life threw more **** at me! And I knew I had to go ahead with it! Take every ******* penny that you had!

Siobhan looks to the floor in Depression. Hilary attempts to get up, but in seconds Siobhan is alert and pointing the gun at them again.

Siobhan: Don’t you even think about it bitch! I’m not stupid!

Siobhan gets up and rubs the tears away from her face. She moves close to Hilary and presses the gun against her face.

Siobhan: You’re scum… more of a nasty piece of work than me… I should shoot you last…make you see everyone that’s close to you suffer before you do… not that It would matter to you… you’ve already seen it before.

All of a sudden Richard violently kicks Siobhan in the shins. She falls to the floor in agony, the gun sliding across the floor. Nick gets up and begins to tackle her, the pair fight for the gun. Richard runs towards Nick and Siobhan trying to help his son. In a panic Hilary and Vicky attempt to leave the room.

Siobhan: You’re all gonna bloody die! You *******s!

The close up shows a tussle of hands trying to grab the gun.

INTERCUT:

EXT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT

An exterior shot of Jenkins Manor is shown. A deafening gunshot can be heard, and the thud of a body hitting the floor…Somebody has been shot dead…

Who pulled the trigger? Who took the bullet?

END OF SEASON 1!

Jojo
29-07-2006, 11:14
:eek: OMG !!! Who is dead?! Is it Hilary? Is it Siobhan?! :hmm: Noooo!!! I want to know now - you can't leave it that way. Thats not fair!! I can't wait till Season 2 - Bry/Abbey please tell me, pretty please with sugar on :D :D

Abi
29-07-2006, 11:18
So thats all, people! Season 1 of Devon Seas is now officially over!

I just want to say a huge Thank You to everyone whose been reading this season. Its been great to read everything you've had to say about it, and it makes it so much better to write, when you know its being read and (hopefully!) appriciated by everyone else.

DS will be back with season 2, probably in about September/October time, though i dont think we've properly set a date yet (Correct me if i'm wrong, Bry. I'm a bit forgetfull! :lol: ).

So i hope you've enjoyed this season, and you come back and read season 2 when its back, to find out more about those cliffhangers!

Thanks again! :thumbsup:

Jojo
29-07-2006, 11:23
Its been fantastic - I loved reading all of it and thanks to the both of you for writing such a superb script.

How about Season 2 starting the first week of September, I might be able to cope with that :rotfl:

bakedbean
29-07-2006, 11:36
Well thats it the end of the most exciting soap for a month or so? Another Taylor cant die can they?

Katy
29-07-2006, 11:41
Well done you guys it was great. I cant believe we have to wait to find out who has been shot.

Bryan
29-07-2006, 20:21
over 10 pages in a week - filled with posts from Devon Seas most loyal fans, it goes to show what an over all sucess this show has been over the past year.

I have two big thank you's to make. Firstly to Abi, whos contribution to the writing has been top quality and has been a big help to me, without her Devon Seas would have ended at the start of this year.

And secondly a thank you to all of the members who have read/ or continue to read these scripts. It is you who its written for and it's you who give me and Abi the encouragment to continue writing.

We have had one amazing year writing it, and I'm sure you have all had an amazing year reading it and commenting about it.

Stay tuned to the Scripts forum for the Soap Awards in August (Run By BakedBean) Where Devon Seas will go head to head with Soapboard's other Soaps: Exceter and Hinston High. I hope you all vote for Devon Seas: it's storylines and its characters in the many catagories that BakedBean has in store.

Secondly at the start of september I will be posting six parts of a mini series, detailing the history of the Ashworth family: who will be taking a major role in season 2.

Devon Seas will return later this year. Until then keep checking for the latest additons to the Devon Seas website at www.freewebs.com/devonseas and the latest spoilers in the scripts section.

Thank You and Goodbye! :thumbsup: :cheer:

Siobhan
31-07-2006, 09:22
Thank you Bry and Abi for such a wonderful season.. i loved every minute and can't wait until September to find out who got shot!!! Brilliant Brilliant work both of you :bow::bow:

diamond1
31-07-2006, 12:04
I would also like to say a big thank you to both Bondboffin and Abi for bringing us this quality soap on a daily basis.I have enjoyed Devon sea's from start to finish.
Nice one

and I cannot wait for series 2 :)

Layne
01-08-2006, 20:21
I have finally caught up! Yay me! See Bryan i did do it Meh!

You can't leave it like that though :eek: :eek: That is sooo mean.

I have just read 33 odd pages of script as i hadn't been keeping up to date, i was busy okay! And well i've been on the edge of my seat, this is an amazing script, and i can't wait for season two, Well Done both Abi and Bryan. I am now a total Devon Seas Addict!

This soo better be made into a soap on TV!!

Jada-GDR
01-08-2006, 20:37
i havent commented on this very much recently but i sure have enjoyed it! im looking forward to reading season two and the mini series, and good luck with writing both of them! thanks for giving us readers something fabby to read :cheer:

DaVeyWaVey
05-08-2006, 16:17
wow! I am speechless....what a cliffhanger ending! :eek: I love cliffhangers and this is an excellent one!

I can't wait until season 2 begins...and thank you bry and abi for entertaining me and everybody else with devon seas...you obviously put a lot of hard work and commitment into making such a wonderful soap...now i can't wait until Season 2! :)

Bryan
08-08-2006, 14:53
just a note to all that the Devon Seas mini series: Thicker Than Water is now being posted in the scripts section:

http://www.soapboards.co.uk/forums/showthread.php?p=430528#post430528

please take time to read this!

Jojo
08-08-2006, 15:07
I agree - everyone read it!! Its fantastic!! All you DS fans will not be disappointed - far from it :D

Siobhan
09-08-2006, 12:38
Message from Bry: Soap awards are now open for voting so getting vote for DS... I did!!!

Siobhan
29-09-2006, 16:24
DS is back tonight.. :cheer::cheer: we finally find out who gets shot!!!
Come on Bry... I need my fix :angry: