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INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Gary charges into the cottage. Throws his coat on the floor and pours himself a glass of whisky from the drinks cabinet, he knecks it in one in anger.
The sound of Tanya's car outside can be heard. She storms in.
Tanya: Look Gary its not what it looked him i promise you babes!
Gary: Am i really meant to believe that! I saw the pair of you... full on... kissing... i saw it with my own eyes Tanya!
Tanya: Its as much as a suprise to me as it was to you... he just came at me... all of a sudden...
Gary: With no provocation? Your telling me he just "randomly" forced a kiss on you?
Tanya: Yes...exactly like that...
Gary: Oh come on! You must have been flirting with him like mad!
Tanya points her finger at Kyle, we start to get unsual shots of them, high angled, low angled and side views from different heights.
Tanya: How dare you even suggest that! You are the ONLY man for me.. with no dispute... if i loved or even liked Gregg then it would have been him i married those years ago... i'd me Tanya Bryant by now... but im notim Tanya Donagoon, your wife... im married to you... YOU... your the only man i ever want to kiss...
Tanya kisses Gary passionatley. The pair end up kissing on the sofa.
INTERCUT:
INT. HOLIDAY CAMP SHALLET - NIGHT
A television screen shows Tanya and Gary on the sofa. The camera pans out to show a whole room of surevlance cameras showing many different views of the interior and exterior of Honeyscukle cottage. Microphones are picking up their conversation.
Gary: You know i love you dont you?
Tanya: Of course i do... trust me Gary...Gregg is not a problem...
The camera cuts to Gregg who is sitting in the shadows, the glare from the tv screens shining in his face siniserly.
Gregg: Oh yes I am Tanya... oh yes i am...
bakedbean
12-03-2006, 21:20
Oh my god wow i think this is a soap first. Gregg has got some serious issues Abi and Bondboffin you two are the best script writers and this storyline is fantastic i cant wait to see what happens next. Gregg you creep lol!!!
JustJodi
12-03-2006, 22:25
Not only a creep but a scary dude, I hope they have him run outta town, before he does some real damage,, Tanya really knows how to pick em doesnt she .Bry and Abi,, you both have cranked out some real good stuff,, keep it up u two,,:cheer:
Ok woah!!! gregg is super creep and I am sure he is getting paid by hiliary but it looks like she could have saved her cash, he is major stalker.
JustJodi
13-03-2006, 13:10
Ok woah!!! gregg is super creep and I am sure he is getting paid by hiliary but it looks like she could have saved her cash, he is major stalker.
Hee hee just think of it , she shells out some major dosh, that means she will have less moola if things go wrong, and I have a feeling it will :angel: :rotfl:
Hee hee just think of it , she shells out some major dosh, that means she will have less moola if things go wrong, and I have a feeling it will :angel: :rotfl:
things will go very very wrong here. he is a major freek.
bakedbean
13-03-2006, 17:03
Ohhh i wonder what the outcome of this stoyline will be maybe he will kidnapp Tanya or something like that???
INT: ANDREW'S HOUSE
Claire is making a drink, while balancing the phone on her shoulder.
Claire: Yeah, just got back pretty much... well it was a bit last minute!!
Theres a knock at the door
Claire: Look, can you give me a second? Think someones forgotten their keys... yeah, i'll ring you back in a bit. Bye.
She puts the phone down, and idley walks to the door. She opens it, and find Chris on her doorstep, however for a few seconds it doesn't register as to who it is. Before she has time to close the door again, his foot is already holding it open...
Chris: Claire! You can't avoid me Claire, we have things to discuss...
Claire: Look... i, er.... I'm kind of busy at the moment...
Chris: Stop this! Lets just talk...
Claire: (shouting at the door, while trying to hold it shut) Just go away! Leave me to get on with everything. I dont want to see you. Not now, not ever, so just GO!
Chris: Tough. Because we have things we need to discuss, and you can't deny that.
Chris shoves at the door, and gets in to see a red faced, watery eyed Claire, taken aback by his entrance.
BAYMOORE BEACH
Tanya is walking along hte promenade, looking out to the sea, when Gregg comes up behind her, and taps her on the shoulder...
Tanya: Bloody hell, Gregg! You nearly scared the life out of me!
Gregg: Sorry babes, i just wanted to see you...
Tanya smiles.
Gregg: Your freezing, Tan! Look, come here...
Gregg goes to hold her, she resists and takes a step back from him.
Tanya: Gregg, you need to stop all this. Come on, we're not together anymore, you can't keep acting like we are...
Gregg: But you know, we could sort that...
Tanya: No, we can't Gregg. Because i love Gary, not you (holds her hand out, showing her marriage ring) I'm married now. Things have changed.
Gregg: All i wanted was to take care of you, but...
Tanya: Yeah, and thats sweet of you, but if you carry on like this then...
Gregg: Then what?
Tanya: (pauses) You'll always be in my heart, Gregg. But as a friend, and nothing more.
Greggs eyes well up with tears. He turns, and faces out to the sea, then gazed up at the sky...
Tanya: Come on Gregg, dont be like that. Its just the way it is now..... Dont cry, Gregg
She goes through her bag, and takes out a screwed up tissue...
Tanya: Here take this...
Gregg: (quietly) Thanks... i just need some time alone...
Tanya: Ok, see you later.
She puts her arm round him, then walks off. He turns and watches her walk off. Then wipes his eyes on his sleeve, and sniffs into the tissue.
Gregg: Oh, Tanya.....
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
Chris follows Claire into the house.
Chris: Are you okay? Whats with all the tears eh?
Claire: Oh its err...nothing...look have you come for anything in particular because...
Chris: Im not going until you tell me whats upset you...
Claire: If you must know its Romeo!
Chris: What...what about him? Is he okay??
Claire: (laughs to self) Yes he's fine...
Claire collapses onto the sofa, Chris has a confused look on his face.
Chris: Then...whats the problem?
Claire: Its me and him... we're on the rocks...big time...
Chris: Why whats happened?
Chris sits down on the sofa next to Claire.
Claire: Well he's not ready to come back to Baymoore yet... hes too obssesed with staying over there... and when i was there...he just didnt seem to want me there...
Chris: Well his uncle has just died....
Claire: That was over a month ago Chris... besides...oh i dont know..its just..erm...i just dont know where we stand any more...
Claire starts to cry again, Chris holds her in his arms. She shakes him off
Claire: Look Chris...i told you to drop this... im not in the right state of mind... i dont know what i want at the moment...
Chris: Thats alright... i understand... at the moment all i want is you... but im prepared to wait...until the time is right...
Chris gets up and leaves, leaving Claire alone to gather her thoughts
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - MORNING
Tanya is painting her nails. The house phone rings. She picks it up to answer it.
Tanya: (Into Phone) Hello.... hello?...hello? who's there? Heloo...
Tanya puts down the phone and thinks nothing more of it. Gary walks into the room carrying the twins. He places them down on the floor where they begin playing.
Gary: Who was that babes?
Tanya: Oh erm wrong number...
Gary: Again!? Im sick to the back teeth of them recently...
Tanya: Oh just ignore them...
Gary: So then... did you get chance to speak to Gregg yesterday...
Tanya: Yes i put him straight...he got the message
Gary: A good job and all cus id have had to show him my fists otherwise...
Gary finishes his toast.
Gary: Right then id best get these little rugrats off to the creche.
Gary kisses Tanya, picks up the kids and leaves.
Tanya: Bye babes...
Tanya continues to paint her nails. The phone rings again.
Tanya: Yes!?... Hello!?... Oh for god's sake...pack it in will you!
Tanya hangs up and throws the phone onto the floor in frustration.
INT: MANSFIELDS HOUSE- morning
Vicky is flicking through some magazines. Kyle knocks at the door, and she answers it...
Kyle: Just thought i'd pop in to say hi to Daniel...
Vicky: That would be a bit difficult
Kyle: Meaning?
Vicky: (points to the clock) He's at school. He wont be back for hours. Surely a parent would realise that...?
Kyle: Stop all that, before you start again. Look, i need to know when i can see him. On a week-to-week basis, like.
Vicky laughs
Kyle: Whats so funny? Is it too much to ask to want to see my own son?
Vicky: For you, yes it is. I can't beleive you seriously think i'd openly give my son to you for the day. You've met him once- thats all you're getting.
Kyle: Oh, so we're back to this again are we?
Vicky: Obviously we are.
Kyle: Well i wont give up. You can't stop me seeing my own ****ing son- he's just as much your flesh and blood as mine. Now i tried to settle this out, person to person, but obviously that aint good enough for you.
Vicky: Face it, Kyle. You're not going to get him. Not now, not ever.
Kyle: Thats where you're wrong. See, i'll fight for him. No matter how long it takes- days, weeks, months. Even years if you drag it on that long. You could have had this easy, Vicky. A few hours a week in private. Nothing much, but enough. But oh no, you wouldn't give me that, would you? I dont care what you say- i am going to get him, at all costs. He's mine, Vicky. Face it, and accept it. I'm getting custody of Daniel, whether you make it easy or not.
With that, Kyle storms out of the house.
Red Rum Pub Upstairs Flat- evening
Natasha is in the upstairs flat with Patrick. Its obvious she's been there for a while. He's leaning against the wall, while she is coming closer and closer to him...
Natasha: Amys out... No work to do... you thinking what i'm thinking...?!
Patrick: No, Natasha, not now right?
Natasha: Babes, whats up? Theres nothing stopping us...
Patrick: There is actually...
He walks over to the sofa, and sits down. Natasha sits on the arm of the chair next to him, and crosses her legs flirtaciously...
Natasha: Whats the problem with you recently? You're so serious all of a sudden. We're just having a bit of fun...
Patrick: This aint fun though. Val saw us the other day, down the alleyway. Now she's been demanding money off me. She's already asked for a grand, but you know what that womans like, she aint gonna stop at that!!
Natasha: Well just dont give it to 'er then!
Patrick: What? And let her tell everyone about us? Yeah right, Tash, get a grip!
Natasha: Well, whats so bad about that...?
Patrick: No way... this is just between us. No one else is gonna know...
Natasha: Well at least then everythings out in the open, and you can leave Amy, and then...
Patrick: What?! No, stop right there!! No way... just, No way!!
Natasha: Which part?!
Patrick: I'm not leaving Amy. Not for you, not for anyone! She's my wife, i can't just leave her... Look, i think its about time you went...
Patrick pushes her gently over to the door. She leaves, turns back to say something. He slams the door in her face. He goes to the window and watches her walk away from the pub, then once shes turned the corner, he also leaves.
Ok Chris.. where did your need for claire come from? Gregg, you are way to creepy for me and Patrick put your pants back on and stick with your wife. Kyle, not a hope in hell of seen your son if you keep that up with Vicky
INT: RED RUM PUB
Vicky is sitting at a table, obviously distracted by something. Nick comes over with some drinks...
Nick: There you go... whats wrong babes? Theres something not right...
Vicky: Its just Kyle...
Nick: Might have guessed!
Vicky: He's trying to take Daniel though, Nick. I know i sound repeatative... but i'm scared. I dont want to lose my son. I cant... i just...
Nick puts her arm around Vicky, she puts her head on his shoulder...
Nick: You can get through this
Vicky: But i can't- thats the point. He'll drag it through the courts for months if thats what it takes. I can't handle that, let alone afford it! I mean the cost of transport, and a barrister, and...
Nick: Dont worry about the money, concentrate on Daniel...
Vicky: I dont get how i can't though... its not like its magically gonna be sorted! Even if i did keep him, all the costs would cripple me!
Nick: I'll get you the money for him, so dont worry about it!
Vicky: What? From Richard you mean?
Nick: Yeah. And then we can put all this behind us, and be together again as a family. Just you, and me, and Daniel.
INT. Natasha's Flat - Morning
Patrick and Natasha are lying in bed.
Natasha: Oh god that was brilliant...and your telling me you prefer frumpy old Amy over me?
Patrick laughs at this.
Natahsa: If you were with me we could have this all the time... hot sex...passion...fun... no comitment...
Patrick: And then wheres the commitment? I know no matter what Amy will be there for me... shes my rock...and i need that... so that i know these flings wont leave me alone...
Natasha: We've been seeing each other for six months... I thought we were more than a fling?
Patrick gets out of the bed and starts getting dressed.
Patrick: Its just harmless fun and good sex... im not going to change my words...i will never leave Amy...
Natasha: Oh but your fine with shagging behind her back!?
Patrick: In a nut shell yes...
Patrick goes into the bathroom, whilst he is gone Nastahsa takes off one of her earings and places it in Patrick's jacket.
Patrick: Amy's so desperate that she'll never leave me...
Natasha: (To Self) We'll see about that...
Natasha has a smug grin on her face
awww, kyle had better not get his hands on daniel - surely he can't.....
Brilliant stuff Abbey and Bry, its all been fantastic reading, as usual!! Send it to a tv station, get it televised :D
INT. HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE - NIGHT
Craig walks into the house and takes off his black coat. Mandy is waiting for him hands on hips.
Craig: Evening babes... oh looks like im in for some fun tonight...
Mandy: Kal called around earlier...
Craig looks shocked, but tries to play cool.
Mandy: Kal the drug dealer...
Craig: Oh yeah...what did he want?
Mandy: You know Fing what!
Emma throws the wirless phone at Craig, but it skims him narrowly and hits the wall.
Craig: Careful Mand', that nearly hit me! :D
Mandy: No more crimes you said! No more lies!!!
Craig: Look i dont know what...
Mandy: "Tell Craig The Deal's Still On"... I cant believe i let you make such a ruddy fall of me!
Craig: I can...you've got Mug written all over you...
Mandy runs over to him and tries to hit him, but he grabs her arm, and starts to squeeze it hard, she screams in pain.
Craig: God Mand', Scream any louder and you'll be putting Justin Hawkins out of buisness...
Mandy: You *******!
Craig lets go, she goes to slap him aroiund the face but he pushes her onto the floor. She violenlty crahses into the wooden table, and drags it down with her. She starts to scream in pain.
Craig: Oh shut up you winge...
Mandy: Craig...help me... i think ive broken something... owww...
Craig picks up the wirelss phone and throws it at her.
Craig: Call yaself an ambulance then... im off down to the pub.
Craig walks out leaving Mandy in agony.
Is she going to leave him??? Shes got to!! Especially after this - hes still lying to her!!
JustJodi
15-03-2006, 22:31
He did what Dennis did to Johnny allen,, threw her the fone so she could call an ambo...
Again fantastic stuff Bry and Abi.. I am totally gripped. Way Way better than eastenders and I love my EE
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Amy and Val are standing in the kitchen drinking coffe...Amy is loading the washing machine, including Patrick's coat from yesterday.
Amy: Things are finally looking up for change Val, its weird, i feel like a little girl again...
Val: Thats good to hear babes...
Val feels guilty of not telling her friend about Patrick's affair. Amy finishes loading the washine machine, she switches it on and it begins to wash the clothes.
Amy: Its like...ever since we come back from that holiday hes been a different bloke...its like we were kids again.. im lovin it Val!
Val: Once a cheat always a cheat thats what I say...
Amy: Oh no Val...im sure he has changed this time... i think hes realised hes getting too old for bed hopping with girls half his age... he knows that me and him are forever...
Val: Yeah okay babes...but he'll hurt you again... im sure of it...
Amy: (Jokes) Why? Know something i dont do you?
Val finds it uneasy lying to her friend.
Val: Of course not babes...im just saying...you know what hes capable off.
Amy: Yeah and if he ever cheats again I'll chop his knackers off! :D
The pair laugh. The washing machine makes a funny rattling noise and stops working. The pair look on at the machine in bafflement...
Will Amy Find Natasha's Earing?
JustJodi
16-03-2006, 18:59
Amy is starting to drive me nuts.. and how big is this earring to make so much racket in the washer :rotfl: Surely it isn't larger than Pat Evans ear bobs :p Val should fess up, but again if she does will she fess up for blackmailing old Patrick ???
INT. NICKY'S FLAT - DAY
Patrick is lying on the bed in his underpants.
Patrick: God how much longer do you expect me to wait for this suprise...
Natasha: Just a seocnd longer babes...
Natasha walks in dressed in a tight superwoman swimming costume. Patrick wolf whistles to her.
Natasha: You ready for take off Superman!? :p
Patrick pulls Natasha onto the bed, the pair start to wrestle around the bed giggling and having fun.
Natasha: God this feels so right... i cant wait for us to be an item...
Patrick: I told you babes...you'll never be mroe to me than the other woman...
Natasha: We'll see about that....
Patrick: What?
Natasha: Did Amy find my earing yet?
Patrick gets up off the bed in shock.
Patrick: You what!?
Natasha: My earing... i accidently lost it in your coat pocket :p
Patrick: What!? Are you mad!?
Natasha: I'm mad for you... and I'll do anything to get you...
Patrick rushes to put his clothes on...
Patrick: How could you be so stupid!? I swear if Amy find out...
Patricks rushes out of the flat. Natasha likes her lips in triumph.
Natasha: Superwoman saves the day :lol:
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Tanya is alone in the cottage. She is watching the Paul O Grady Show, the phone rings. She jumps out of her skin but answers it.
She doesnt speak, but hears heavy breathing...
Tanya: Will you stop this! Whoever it is...please just leave me alone!
Tanya puts down the phone and curls up in a ball, she starts to shake nervously. Tanya sees a figure cut across the living room window, and then the sound of a milk bottle being knocked over outside.
Tanya jumps out of her skin again. She runs to the front door and opens it. She picks up the milk bottle and looks around.
Tanya: Just go away!
Tanya runs inside a nervous wreck. The camera zooms out to Gregg, who is waiting around the corner with a sinister look on his face.
Tanya gets a phone call when shes home alone, she shouts down the phone, hears a noise outside. She goes outside and screams. In the distance Gregg stares at her and smiles.
Jada-GDR
16-03-2006, 21:25
ooh scary stuff! and i cant wait for natasha and patrick's affair to be exposed - hopefully it will anyway
Brilliant stuff yet again!! I so wish this was on my tv, but in other ways, its even better imagining this happening......
JustJodi
16-03-2006, 21:49
Damnnnnnn I am scared.. I am afraid to take the dog out for a walk now, Gregg is a real bad boy,, Bry you do real well with the sinister stuff,, u go baby !!!!!!!!:cheer:
INT: HARVEY'S HOUSE
Mandy is struggling to drag a bag across the living room, to the sofa. Craig walks up behind her, picks it up, and takes it for her...
Mandy: Thanks for that...
Craig: Look, i'll give ya a hand...
Craig tries to put his arm around her waist, and help her to the sofa. She screams in pain
Mandy: ****ing hell Craig! What you trying to do?!
Craig: well a thanks wouldn't go amiss!
Mandy: Thanks for nearly breaking my other ribs you mean?!
Craig shakes his head, and sits on the armchair opposite her. She struggles down, and eases herself into the sofa. Mandy looks over into the kitchen...
Craig: What d'ya want? A drink...? coffee yeah? Am i right...?
Mandy: Craig look..
Craig: Its tea aint it. Right, ok...
Craig walks over to the kitchen. Mandy calls him back...
Mandy: Stop all this. It aint suiting you, ya know.
Craig: What..?
Mandy: Trying to be all supportive all of a sudden. Its not you, so stop pretending it is! If i want a drink, then i'd do what i've always done, and get it myself- broken ribs or no broken ribs.
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Patrick runs up the stairs and into the kitchen, where Amy is making herself a sandwich. Patrick stares at her...wondering if she has coottoned on...
Amy: Afternoon babes... fancying a sandwich?
Patrick: Erm..Amy...
Amy: What do you want on it... maybe...Earing!?
Amy throws the earing at Patrick.
Patrick: Look Amy let me explain...
Amy: I always knew you were stupid but to leave clues so ruddy obvious as that around!!!! I just cant believe you Patrick!!! Just when i thought that you and me were on the up... you have to bed some cheap little slapper!
Patrick: I havent worn this jacket in ages...it isnt recent...
Amy: And that makes it all the better does it!?
Patrick: Look babes...you know im a changed man now...and i dont want anythign to change that...
Amy: Earlier on...id have believed all that bollocks...but now... this earing... it might not be recent...but its reminded me what your really like... i cant control you... because you are just a lying cheating scumbag.
Amy lowers the breadknife down to trouserline. He has a look of horro on his face
Amy: I dont ever wanna be messed with again!! You understand me Patrick!? Becuase if you do... ill be having a sasauge sarnie instead of ham salad you get me!?
Patrick nervously nods...
Amy: Now i know your a cheat... and i know your probably having it off with some floozy at the moment...but it stops now... im sick of being the ruddy mug Patrick! And if you carry on... then i swear thats the end to you and me... i'll divorce you..
Jada-GDR
17-03-2006, 23:04
sausage sarnie!!!!! :rotfl: love it!
INT: HARVEY'S HOUSE
Mandy is in the bedroom, packing clothes into a case, whilst holding her side...
Craig: What the hell do you think you're doing?!
Mandy: Get a grip, Craig. what does it look like?
Craig: Mandy dont you even think about...
Mandy: Oh yeah, thats it. Dictate every single bloody thing i do, again and again, as per usual!
Craig: Well if you stopped being so pathetic and packing all your ****ing stuff, then maybe i'd stop!
Mandy: This aint just about now. This is about always. you're not the person i married- face that, and just leave me to pack in peace
Craig: No way (shouting) No way are you leaving me! Now get your ****ing **** down those stairs and forget about this.
Mandy: Thats right, Craig. Get all melodramatic, and drag this out longer than it would have done...
Craig: Well what d'ya expect?!
Mandy drags the bag down the stairs, Craig chases after her...
Craig: Stop being so stupid, Mandy. You can't leave me!
Mandy: Forget it, Craig...
Mandy opens the door in rage. To her shock there is someone standing outside. A woman dressed in designer clothes, carrying too large suitcases, she is wearing an austalian hat, she turns around with a confident look on her face and looks to kill for.
Leah: Hiya sis...long time no see
Oooh the sister from Oz eh!? Is she going to sort Craigs backside out then?! Hope so!!
Great stuff again guys - keep it coming......
INT: HARVEY'S HOUSE
Leah is standing, with one hand on her hip, and one out right inspecting her nails. She bends down seductivly, to adust her fish net tights, then stands back up, and ruffles her hair. Craig is standing in the kitchen, making coffee, looking back at her every few seconds. Mandy is with Leah...
Mandy: You should have said you were coming back, Leah! Honestly, just turning up like this!
Leah: Well hun, i had to leave in a hurry. But now i'm here and (laughs)... i'm here to stay
Mandy: Well...erm. what d'ya mean? What happened?
Leah: Ryan. Well... (looks to check Craig isn't looking, then says slightly quieter)...he was cheating on me, with some slut. He was cheating on...me! I couldn't beleive it.... i mean, come on. What could she have that i dont?!
Mandy: couldn't say...
Leah: Anyway, i left the stupid *******, and thought i'd come back to see my big sis! (sees her obviously painfull side) and it looks like i've come just in the nick of time.
Leah gestures to Craig disapprovingly. She then sits down, pulls out a diamond covered mirror frm her gucci handbag, and reapplies some lipgloss. Craig comes in with some coffee, and places it in front of her.
Leah: Dont drink coffee, love. Bad for the teeth, you know? No wait, you wouldn't, would you?
He picks up the coffee, and takes it back to the kitchen, obviously annoyed. He pulls Mandy's arm as he does so...
Craig: How do we stand then? Last thing i know, you were about to leave me...
Mandy: There is no we. End of.
INT: RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT
Patrick is pacing the flat, checking his watch every few seconds for the time. He walks to the curtain, and peers out the window. He spots Natasha walk to the side door to the flat. He goes to the mirror, checks himself, then opens the door as she is walking up the stairs. She walks in and immeditaly kisses him passionatly...
Natasha: Hey big boy...getting keen to see me, are we?!
Patrick pulls away from Natasha, and stands back at the window, looking out. Natasha walks up behind him, and puts her hand on his shoulder...
Natasha: Whats wrong, Patrick...?
Patrick: I can't do this anymore
Natasha: Can't do what..?
Patrick turns to face Natasha
Patrick: This. You and me. We can't carry on like this anymore. I'm sorry but..
Natasha: You want to go public? Well you know how i feel about it, need you ask more?!
Patrick: No, you're getting this all wrong... You and me. We're over Natasha.
Natasha takes a step back
Natasha: What?!
Patrick: I can't lose Amy, not for you at least. She's my wife, i need to stick by her and...
Natasha: What d'ya mean "not for you at least"?! What are you trying to tell me Patrick?!
Patrick: I dont WANT to be with you Natasha. This has been fun, dont get be wrong, but thats all it was. Fun and sex. Now that stops. Because i'm married, and i can't lose Amy. Is that blunt enough for you?
Natasha: But i thought that we...
Patrick: You thought wrong. "we" dont exsist anymore, Natasha. Not now, not ever.
Natasha tries to retaliate, but can't find the words. She whispers under for breath...
Natasha: You meant the world to me Patrick...
Patrick doesn't hear, and she storms out.
INT. HARVEY'S HOUSE - AFTERNOON
Leah and Mandy are in the living room. Craig walks past them, putting on his coat.
Craig: I'm off down the garage...leave you two ladies to catch up on all those years that youve lost since you pissed off to Australia...
Leah gives Craig a menacing look.
Leah: Best place for you... anywhere but here...
Craig laughs it off as stupidity and leaves the house.
Mandy: You know Leah, you really shouldnt start a fight with him... hes a dangerous man...
Leah: Oh dont.... your making me shake in me Jimmy Choos... trust me Mand' i find Lala more menacing than that pillock...
Mandy: (laughs) I tell you what...it certainly makes a change having you back around the place...lets hope its for keeps this time...
Leah: The way i left it...i can safely assure you i wont be going back down the Ozzyland for the forseebale future...
Mandy: Oh lucky them, did they get the Leah Kage treatement?
Leah: First hand, hardcore...
The pair laugh. Mandy gets up off the seat. She gives out a sound of discomfort due to her broken ribs
Leah: You ok Mand?
Mand: Oh yeah im fine...just me old age...
Leah: For frigs sake your only 45...whats really up eh?
Mandy lifts up her top to show Leah the bruised body.
Leah: Christ Mand! Did you have a hit and run with a sumo wrestler or someat!?
Mandy: 3 broken ribs... it kills...
Leah: Yeah and ten guesses who's behind it...
Mandy: Look Leah...please just leave it... we could all do without the aggro...
Leah: Aggro!? Well tough...hes gonna get it! Im not gonna let him smack my Sister Around like a Pita Bread! I'm gonna give him a peice of my mind.
Leah grabs her Guchi handbag, swings it over her shoulder and marches out of the house confidently.
Go Leah!!!! Yey - Is she gonna sort Craig out!???! I hope so, he needs sorting thinking he can treat Mandy like that...
Mandy mandy, why didn't you just walk , take your sister to your mum's and Amy, you're an idiot, Natasha is going to tell you everything.
excellent job again abi and bry
INT. HARVEY’S MOTORS - NIGHT
Leah’s high hells drag across the concrete floor of the garage. Craig looks up from his desk, and wolf whistles.
Leah: Oh for Christ’s sake… anyone would think you were 20 years old…
Craig: I am where it counts…
Leah pulls a face in disgust to this comment.
Leah: Is that all you men think of…
Craig: The bottom line? Yes… so do what do I owe this pleasure?
Leah: Mandy…
Craig: How did I guess. .. she been telling tales on me?
Craig laughs mockingly. Leah gets angry and kicks him in the balls with her high hells, he falls to the floor in pain.
Craig: You crazy bitch! What did you do that for!?
Leah: No one messes with Mandy!!! Not even you!!!
Craig: What the…
Leah: Broken ribs! You ruddy animal! You should have your ruddy tackle ripped off!
Craig: And you gonna do that then?
Leah: Don’t tempt me… I’m a lot different to the little sister you saw before I went to Sydney Craig… I’ve toughened up… I know the rules… I live in the real world… I’ve dealt with bigger ****s than you….
Craig: You’d be stupid to mess with me…
Leah: You don’t scare me with your empty threats and pafetic whining. Al Capone!? More like Al Murray!
Craig tries to get up, Leah kicks him in the shin so he falls back down onto the floor.
Leah: You want to know why I left Sydney in a hurry?
Craig: (Uninterested) Enlighten me…
Leah: Caught Ryan with some cheap little tart… I gave her a pasting…shes in intensive care now… and as for him… I cut up his clothes and burned down his house…
Craig has a look of shock on his face…
Craig: You’re a ruddy mad woman!!!
Leah: No I’ve got it switched on up here…(points to head) I just don’t let morons like you and Ryan ruin my life… and my family and friends… you don’t mess with me do you understand!?
Craig: I’ve never been scared of a woman in my life, and I don’t intend to start now…
Leah: Well you’d better get scared matey…because if you ever hurt Mandy again, the police will be the least of your worries.
Leah walks out of the garage, leaving a dazed Craig on the floor.
INT: HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE
The house is empty, and silent, untill a few seconds later, when a mobile rings on the coffee table. The camera zooms into it, the screen reads...
Gregg Ringing
It rings out...
1 Missed Call. Read?
The camera zooms back out, Gregg forces the backdoor open, and walks into the house, with a satisfied smile on his face
Gregg: Now, now, now, what do we have here...?
Gregg sits on the sofa calmly, and flicks through magazines on the table. He spots a handbag, and looks through it...
Gregg: Nice purse, Tanyas a suppose... i'll have that...
He walks over to the fireplace, and takes a photo album off the top, and puts both that, and the purse in his back pocket. He goes to walk out, when he spots the phone on the table...
Gregg: 1 missed call?....Nasty bit of evidence that could have been!!
Gregg deletes the memory of his phone call, puts the phone in his pocket, and walks out the back door with a satisfied smile.
Something seriously sinister about Gregg - oh my, don't like him.....bad feeling
Loving leah already - giving Craig just what he deserves!!!
Ok Gregg is scaring me. Poor Tanya!.. Leah, you go girl, not afraid of the big bad wolf and standing up for your sister.. :cheer::cheer:
JustJodi
21-03-2006, 11:14
Leah kicks ***, I am soooooooo glad some one beat him up and it was by a girl !!!!:cheer: Craig is gonna be limping around for some time :rotfl:
Gregg is like the proverbal boogy man, you are scared to be around him,
bakedbean
21-03-2006, 16:20
Go leah...go leah oh yeah someone showed that no good rotten Craig who is boss loving Devon Seas as always
INT. HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE - DAY
Leah walks into the room dressed in a nightie with a strong coffe. Mandy looks up at her.
Mandy: What time do you call this eh? It's nearly middday!
Leah: Yeah well the thought of Fern Britton on my TV is enough to make a grown man cry...
Mandy laughs at this
Leah: So then got any plans today sis?
Mandy: Erm well id best be going to do the cleaning around the Rum in a bit...pay the wages you know...
Leah: Let Craig do that for a change... where is the fat pillock anyways?
Mandy: He's in Exceter...which means he's at his brothel...
Leah: (chokes in cofee) What!? He has a brothel!?... Just as i thought that pig couldn't get any worse!!!
Mandy: Trust me Leah...after all these years married to him...nothing suprises me anymore...
Leah: Why do you stay with him Mand!?
Mandy: Who else can i be with at my age!? The fat ugly cleaner... i know im lucky to have Craig... a comfortable home for the family... i can live to deal with it
Leah: Yeah but you shouldn't have to live with it! If he was my husband id have him in a shallow grave by now!!! It makes me sick to see the way he treats you Mand...
Mandy: Well its not a barrel of laughs either for me Leah
Leah: Im not saying it is... it's just...i dont understand...why havent you divorced him by now!?
Mandy: You want the truth?... I'm scared... of what he'd do to me... of what life id live without him...this is all ive ever known... i dont know the consequences if i did it...
Leah: You wouldnt be alone Mand', what ever decison you made id be right there besides you... scared of Craig!? Dont be.... if you want to divorce him I'll help you...
Fantastic... maybe Mandy can leave if she has leah's guts
INT: HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE
Gary is sitting on the sofa watching TV. Tanya walks up behind him, sipping a cup of coffee.
Gary: Thanks for offering to make me one!!
Tanya: You're welcome :p There's no milk left anyway, so tough :p...
Gary: Give us some money, and i'll go get some more, if you want...
Tanya: Fair enough...
Tanya picks up her bag from the table, and looks through it, paniking.
Gary: Tanya? Whats up?
Tanya: Its not here. My purse- its gone missing...
Gary: Its got to be around here somewhere...
Tanya: This isn't funny anymore, Gary. Thats the third thing thats gone missing in this house.... my phone and photo album aren't around anywhere either!! Gary- whats going on?!
INT:ANDREWS HOUSE
Claire walks into the room, with a big bowl of melted chocolate. They both take a scewer of fruits, and dip it in, while talking...
Claire: Its funny how things change, aint it...
Vicky: What d'ya mean?
Claire: Well a few years back, when we were teenagers or something, this would just be normal wouldn't it? Now its...
Vicky: Babyish?
Claire: (laughs) yeah, a little!!
Claire sighs, shes obviously got something on her mind...
Vicky: Come on, Vicks. Whats up? your not normally like this...
Claire: Its just....how do you know when that sparks gone?
Vicky: Spark?
Claire: Yeah... the spark in a relationship... you know what i mean...
Vicky: I dunno.... is there something you want to tell me? About Romeo?
Claire: Its just... i dont know. He's not the person i first met...
Vicky: Has he hurt you?
Claire: Sort of... i dont know anymore. Claire- i think i'm falling for someone else...
Vicky: Who?!
Claire: Chris... i just can't get him out of my head...
The camera zooms out, to show Chris, who is standing at the top of the stairs. He's been listening to everything...
Jada-GDR
21-03-2006, 22:05
nice stuff as usual bry and abi
claire: oops
leah: go girl!
tanya: :eek:
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DONT FORGET TO VOTE FOR DEVON SEAS IN THE SCRIPT AWARDS!
http://www.soapboards.co.uk/forums/showthread.php?t=50231
Claire you idiot, can't believe you are falling for him..
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
Lunch time. The pub is busy with the lunchtime drinkers. Claire is serving someone a drink.
Claire: There you go..
Claire gives a punter a drink. He gives her the correct change. Claire goes to the till and put sthe money in, Patrick is doing the same.
Claire: God it's busy this lunchtime aint it?
Patrick: Well they've all flocked to see me and my sexy body :p
Claire: The two blind woman over there maybe, but no one else...
There is a commotion by the doorway, Chris bursts trough the doors carrying a large picnic basket.
Claire: What the...!?
Chris: Thought i'd take you out for the afternoon...
Claire: But I'm working?
Chris: Oh come on, everyone deserves a break every now and again.
Claire: Yeah but...
Chris: Look Paddy mate you dont mind if she has the afternoon off do you?
Patrick: No, go ahead, have fun...
Claire: I'm not sure you know...
Chris: Oh come on! I'm not taking no for an answer... get your coat you've pulled.
Chris drags a slighty happy Claire out of the pub.
BAYMOORE BEACH
Claire is sitting on the beach, blind folded. Chris is getting out foods for a picnic...
Claire: Can i take this off yet?
Chris: Wait a sec.... ok, now you can.
Claire takes the blind fold off, looks at the picnic, and smiles.
Claire: Chris... you did all this for me?
Chris: Course i did....:o
Claire: awww, thanks
Claire hugs Chris. She then sits back down, and looks at the food.
Claire: this is great, but its bloddy cold out here!!
Chris: Tell me about it! Here, 'ave my jacket
Chris stands and takes off his jacket, and puts in over her shoulders. Claire laughs as he does this..
Chris: Whats so funny?!
Claire: You tickled me when you did that!!
Chris: Oh yeah? And your ticklish are you?!
Claire doesn't say anything, just looks at him, and tries not to laugh. Chris jumps over to her, and tickles her. They roll over on the beach...
Claire: No!! Chris, stop!! Argh!!
Chris stops tickling her. They look into each others eyes- Claire is still lying on the ground, Chris is over her. He moves in, and kisses her tenderly. Claire pulls away...
Chris: Whats wrong? I thought we both wanted this....?
Claire: I do... i like you. I like you a lot. But its not fair on Romeo.... i cant hurt him like that. Sorry Chris...
Jada-GDR
22-03-2006, 22:04
oh no! poor claire, she must be kinda confused!
i hope she doesn't fall for chris's charms. he seems like a bad egg to me.
Mmm poor Claire.. her boyfriend is ignoring her and his best mate is spoiling her.. poor woman must not know what to do
JustJodi
23-03-2006, 10:26
Uh ohhhhhhhh Claire better be CAREFULLLLLLLLL, Chris is leading her down a path right into his bed, Claire is a bit "confused" since Romeo isn't giving her the attention, so shes sort of "liking" the attention but not wanting to fall in a pit......
THE SINGH'S HOUSE- Morning
Sanjita walks down the stairs, while wrapping her dressing gown around her. She picks up the post from the doorway, and take it into the Kitchen, where Kash and Ruby are talking.
Kash: Morning
Sanjita: Is it?!
Sanjita yawns and looks through the post. She chucks most of it on the kitchen, and looks at a mail shot...
Ruby: Whats that...?
Sanjita: Junk, as usual. You know, i swear they deliberatly put this through the door to annoy me...
Ruby: (laughs) I doubt it! Whats it about then?
Sanjita: Marbal. A new place, its opening soon. Looks like an alrite place, doesn't it?
Sanjita shows Ruby the picture on the mailshot. Kash smurks, and sees Sanjitas disaproving face...
Kash: How can you think that looks alright? Its just a glorified hell hole in the middle of Devon! Honestly, what do you think they're deliberatly trying to force all the tramps around here, or is that just a bi-effect?!
Sanjita: Honestly Kash...
Ruby: Well i think it looks good. Heaven knows we need somewhere around here where we can shake our bootys!
Sanjita and Ruby both laugh, Kash rolls his eyes...
Ruby: Well i'm up for going. Looks like a laugh.
HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - Day
Gary is sitting on the sofa, Tanya is pacing the room...
Tanya: Something is seriously wrong here. I can't place my finger on it... but somethings not right...
Gary: You're reading too much into this...
Tanya: No i'm not!!
Gary: Look, i'm sure theres a resonable explaination for all this...
Tanya: What? For my phone and purse going missing? And my personal photos?! Get a grip, Gary. Those type of thigns dont just vanish into thin air!
Gary stands up, and puts his arms on Tanya
Gary: Calm down Tanya. Dont get yourself worked up about something, that you dont even know for certain happened....
Tanya: Gary... i just dont know anymore...Its just...
Tanyas eyes well up with tears. Gary wipes them, and says calmly...
Gary: Just relax, Tanya. Dont get upset about all this...(gets some money from his wallet) Here, take this. Go shopping, and have some fun...
Tanya: but Gary that wont help...
Gary: It'll take your mind off things. Go on, have a laugh
At the shop Val asks Sanjita is shes gonna go to the opening, she says she will. Kash has a go at her, she tells him to get lost he cant control her life.
INT. SINGH & SON CONVIENCE STORE - DAY
The shop has a few customers browsing the eisles. Snajita is doing a stock check, Val bumps into her.
Val: Alright Sanjita babes...how you doing?
Sanjita: Val...erm...yeah...im fine thans....you?
Val: Could be better...ya know how it is... so then you going to Marbal's opening night?
Sanjita: Probably not...Kash wont let me...
Val: Stuff Kash... you know you have the time of your life on our girly nigths out... go with you heart not your head...ive found that works best for me over the years! :lol:
Sanjita: Yeah i suppose it wont do me no harm...
Val: Good I'll see you tonight then... i'd best be off...go up to Torquey...
Val walks off out of the shop. Kash walks over to Sanjita
Kash: Did i just hear that Valarie Andrews asking you to that den of iniquity?
Sanjita: Yes and...?
Kash: And i dont want my wife socialising with cheap harlots and drunken hooligans... you will not be going to this "Marbal" place....
Sanjita: Yes i will Kash.....you dont control me you know...
Kash: Im your husband! You should do what I say!!!
Sanjita: Your wife, not your slave! I have a mind of my own Kash and if i want to go with my friends to a nightclub then I'll do just that! :angry:
Kash: Sanjita!
Sanjita: I'm not having this argument...you dont control my life...full stop. ...Now I'm off to get ready for tonight... so I'll leave you to do the stock check
Sanjita walks off, despite the look of disgust on Kash's face.
Good on you Sanjita - you tell him - have a good time and enjoy yourself!
YOu go sanjita... don't let him rule you.. :cheer::cheer:
Good on you Sanjita - you tell him - have a good time and enjoy yourself!
i couldn't have put it better myself :)
EXT. TORQUEY HIGHSTREET - DAY
Tanya walks out of Debenhams carry a lot of shopping bags. She answers her phone.
Tanya: (Into Phone) Yes...hi Gary...erm... yeah ive just done some shopping, I'll head back in a bit...ok byes babes...
In the distance we see Gregg following her. Tanya continues walking but catches someone dressed in a hoody in the corner of her eye. She starts to walk a bit faster, but then begins to run. Gregg continuyes to follow her.
Tanya breaths heavily in fright. She runs out into the road just as car is driving towards her....
WILL TANYA SURVIVE?
INT. GREASY GARY'S - DAY
Claire is sitting down in the cafe, staring into her cup of cofee. She is confussed by recent events. Natasha comes in, and sits down next to Claire.
Natasha: Hiya babes, hows it going?
Claire: Oh Hi Tash...
Natasha: What's up with you? You look right down...
Claire: Just man trouble...
Natasha: You!? Your dating the sexy Italian Stalion! What you got to worry about eh!?
Claire: Erm.. well... he ent in the country...and i just dont know how i feel about him anymore.
Natasha: Let me guess someone else has come along?
Claire: In a way... but i dont know what to do...if i went with him, I'd feel like i was cheating on Romeo...
Natasha dosent say anything: after all she is having an affair! :D
Claire: I just never knew i felt this way about him... and now Romeo's gone...i'm just not sure what to do... i mean for all i know Romeo could turn up at any moment....
Natasha: And so what if he does!? He's the one thats messed you around... at the end of the day Claire babes you have to live for the moment...take every chance you get... becuase you leave this world on your own...so how cares who you hurt?
Claire: That's a bit harsh isnt it?
Natasha: Yeah well sometimes people need that... love is complicated...just have fun...your young...you can settle down when your older...anyways I'd best order me cuppa and get going before Mrs C starts having a go at me...bye babes
Natsha goes to the counter. Tanya finishes her cofee and stares at the moment of her mug, seeing her reflection.
WHAT WILL CLAIRE DO NEXT!?
EXT. TORQUEY HIGHSTREET - DAY
Vicky: Tanya!
Tanya turns around to see the car driving directly towards her. Tanya screams and drops her shopping bags. The car's breaks allow it stop directly infront of her. They bib their horn.
Vicky runs over to a shacken Tanya and picks up her bags.
Vicky: Oh my god Tanya, are you ok?
Tanya: I...I...I...
Vicky: It's okay...you've had a nasty shock... I think it's best we get you back home dont you?
Vicky leads Tanya away, as the car drives off, Tanya looks over her shoulder but by now Greg has disapeared.
CUT TO:
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Tanya is curled up in a ball on the sofa, the televison on. Vicky walks in with a cup of tea.
Vicky: Come on, get this down you...got some whiskey in it...will settle your nerves...
Tanya: Thanks....
Vicky: I dont know what's got into you honestly... i mean its not like you to walk into a road when a car's coming...
Tanya: I'm being stalked Vicky...
Vicky: Stalked!?
Tanya: Your the only one that knows this...so dont tell anyone...especially Gary....he'll do his nut...
Vicky: Well...erm...do you know who's doing this?
Tanya: No...i have no idea... but im just so scared...
Vicky sits down next to Tanya.
Vicky: Christ Tanya...have you told the police!?
Tanya: I can't...they wouldnt believe me...and besides im a Taylor...i should be able to fight this...
Vicky: Stuff being a "Taylor", this almost cost you your life earlier, you need to do something about this Tanya!
Tanya: Get out!
Vicky: What!?
Tanya: I dont need you hassling me! Just get out!
Vicky leaves relucantly, Tanya slams the door on her and starts crying. Tanya runs into the living room turns off the lights, draws the curtains and switches off the tv. She curls up into a ball once more and starts crying to herself.
Tanya: (screams) I hope your happy!
EXT. MARBAL - NIGHT
The residents are queing up for the opening Night of the Marbal Nightclub. The music is blasting out, and the bouncers are slowly letting in everyone.
Claire, Vicky, Natasha, Chris, Tom, Luqina, Ruby, Val and Sanjita are standing in the crowd.
Val: Oh come on lads we're freezing our legs off out here!
Chris: Thought you were gonna say someat else for a second then :p
Val: Oi you cheaky!
Kash is locking up the shop and he sees Sanjita in the crowd.
Kash: Sanjita!?
Sanjita: (To Val) Oh god, here we go...
Val: Just ignore him darl'....stick with us and enjoy your night...
The group head on inside. Kash brages trough the crowds to get to Sanjita.
Kash: Sanjita dont ignore me!!!
Hazey The Bouncer: Oi mate! There's a que get to the back!!!
Kash: I have to see my wife immeditaley!
Kash squeezes trough. The nightlcub is dark, loud and busy. Everyone is having fun and dancing. Val and Sanjita head to the bar.
Val: Hey darling 2 barcadis and cokes when your ready!!
Sanjita: I hope Kash doesnt cause a stir...
Val: Just let him... im in the mood for a good old barny!
Kash storms over and grabs hold of Sanjita.
Kash: Come on out of here now...
Ruby: Get off her dad! Honestly who do you think you are!?
Kash: Her husband! I will not have her behave like this!
Sanjita slaps Kash
Sanjita: How dare you control me! And humilate me infront of my freinds! Just get out of my way kash and let me enjoy my evening.
Kash: I forbid it!
Hazey: I think you'd better come out here...
Val: Your a ruddy control freak Kash!
Kash: And your a cheat little tart... i will not let you bring Sanjita down to your low level!
Claire: Eh watch your lip! That's my mom your talkin' about!
Kash: Like mother like daughter...dressed like a tarlot with your short skirt and your "boobtube"....
Val: Right that's it!
A brawl starts between Claire, Val, Ruby, Sanjita and Kash. Hazey the bouncer talks into her walkie talkie.
Out of the managers office step Iqbal and Marcus, dressed in smart suits.
Iqbal: Break it up! Now!
Hazey and another body guard restrain Val and Kash. Iqbal walks into the centre of the group.
Iqbal: How dare you brawl in my club like this!
Kash: Iqbal!? Marcus!?
Iqbal and Marcus are relatives of Kash's. The singh family are reunited.
diamond1
25-03-2006, 20:20
hey, just finsihed catching up with all your episodes i really wnt to say wow some of the stuff ive read of yours on here is so talented with this and sbbb i really dunno what else to say other than wow :thumbsup:
hey, just finsihed catching up with all your episodes i really wnt to say wow some of the stuff ive read of yours on here is so talented with this and sbbb i really dunno what else to say other than wow :thumbsup:
thanks for your comments
its hard work doing the two, but the end results are worth while.
bakedbean
26-03-2006, 17:39
So the singh family are reunited sounds intresting
I am finally getting caught up with this *cheers* This is fab well done, can't wait to read more :p xx
INT: MARBAL NIGHTCLUB- day
Iqbal is cleaning tables in the nightclub. He's humming to himself, when Kash coems up behind him. Iqbal jumps...
Iqbal: Bloody hell, Kash!! You trying to kill me or something?
Kash: That depends, i suppose... (sniggers)
Iqbal: On what....?! Come on Kash, dont be so stupid...
Kash: What are you doing here then?!
Iqbal: You're gonna have to make more sense than that...
Kash: Why you back from India?! I thought everything was going great there.... and why the hell did you buy this hell hole?!
Iqbal: Excuse me. This "hole hole" is my buisness.
Kash: Gawd knows why!!
Iqbal: Is it so bad that i might want to make something of myself?
Kash: Become a doctor then!
Iqbal: Come on, Kash. Stop sounding like Dad. i can do what the hell i like...
Kash: (mockingly) stop sounding like Dad.... honestly. anypne would think you've had a bloody personality transplant. Being a doctor is acceptable, its good. This place is just...
Iqbal: Is just what?!
Kash: You know what i mean, Iqbal
Iqbal: This is the 21st century Kash. We dont all have to become doctors now, or didn't anyone tell you? I can do what i want, when i want, and nothings gonna stop me. Not you, not religon.... not anything. So if you dont like, then you can just go piss off, can't ya.
INT: MARBAL NIGHTCLUB
Ruby is sitting flirtaciously at the bar. Marcus is making her a drink, she leans over the bar to talk to him....
Marcus: wo wo wo! You trying to make me see too much?!
Ruby sits back up, and adjusts her top
Ruby: Well that depends...
Marcus gives her a drink, and sits down close to her
Marcus: And whats that then?
Ruby: Nothing.....
Ruby smiles flirtaciously at Marcus, and sips her drink. He smiles back...
Marcus: So you seeing anyone tonight?
Ruby: Not sure...
Marcus: Oh really?!
Ruby: Well you know... if some gorgeous hunk comes my way, then i might get busy...
Marcus: :eek: I'm offended!!
They both laugh, and look into each others eyes for a moment longer than normal. Iqbal walks in, holding some letters...
Iqbal: Oi, oi! Whats going on here then?!
Marcus and Ruby both jump, and move away from each other, grinning...
Iqbal: No need to stop on my behalf....:D
Marcus: Dont be stupid!! We were just....
Iqbal: I could see what you were doing!! Honestly, shes your cousin! People of today, eh?! Either trying to shoot each other, or get off with each other...
Iqbal walks out, laughing to himself. Marcus and Ruby look back to each other, and smile...
Claire has an argument with Romeo over the phone, she is In tears, Chris wipes away her tears and comforts her, she ends up kissing him passionately.
INT. MARBAL - NIGHT
Tom and Luqina are snogging. Chris and Claire feel like gooseberrys. Claire's phone rings, Romoe is calling her.
Claire: Hiya babes... hows you?.... yeah i'm fine i suppose... any chance that you'll be coming home soon.... oh.... well no... im not happy with that.... im starting to think that you dont give a damn about us!!!!.... you what!? well if you feel that way then we might as well just forget it... no youve said what you really felt... oh just get lost!
Claire cancels the call and runs off towards the toilet in tears.
Vicky: Claire!?
Vicky starts to get up to comfort Claire, but Chris gets up before her.
Chris: Dont worry...I'll go...
Chris walks past the crowds and goes over to Claire.
Chris: Claire, whats up?
Claire: Its Romeo...the selfish pig! He has no intentions on coming back has he!?
Chris: I donno Claire...
Claire: He's treating me like an idiot! I just dont know if i love him anymore
The mascara runs down her face. Chris lightly strokes her face, whipping away her tears. Claire goes in for a kiss and Chris responds. The pair end up kissing passionatley.
diamond1
26-03-2006, 21:41
cant belive chris would do that to romeo ....
another thing the mile high forum? please excuse me for being a bit dumb but i have been looking for ages for the after hours episodes way back when you first posted about them but i still cant find it can you give me help of where to find it please?
cheers
cant belive chris would do that to romeo ....
another thing the mile high forum? please excuse me for being a bit dumb but i have been looking for ages for the after hours episodes way back when you first posted about them but i still cant find it can you give me help of where to find it please?
cheers
its in the chat section of the mile high forum...
you can acess the mile high forum once youve got 1000 posts, i cant post some episodes in hear as they are unsuitable for a younger audience
Bryan this is really good both you and Abi are superb Writer's! I try not to miss an episode just like i am with eastenders:p But if i do i go back to where i last read and i read from there.
INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - MORNING
Claire wakes up with the noise of Tom and Luqina having sex in the next room. Claire lefts herself up and looks at Chris who is lying naked, asleep.
Claire closes her eyes wishing it was a dream, she quietly gets out of the bed and put her clothes on. Chris starts to stir put goes back to sleep.
Claire rushes down the stairs and ends up sitting on the staircase in tears, regretting the actions of the previous night.
EXT. BAYMOORE BEACH - MORNING
Ruby is walking towards home after staying out clubbing all night. She looks plastrerd from last night. She rubs her head in pain.
Natasha is about to go into Valentinos restauraunt to go to work. She bumps into Ruby.
Natasha: Christ Rub babe, you look as rough as sand paper!
Ruby: Cheers....
Natasha: I take it you contiunued the party after we went home...
Ruby: Yeah went into Brixham and got slozzled!
Natasha: And know your seeing the side effects...
Ruby: Hey it's all part of the fun...
The girls laugh.
Ruby: So then did you get lucky last night?
Natasha: Nah i'm still set on getting back with my married man...
Ruby: Dodgy buisness...
Natasha: Yeah well he's good where it coutns... anyways you pull last night?
Ruby: Erm not exactly but I have got my eyes on someone...
Ruby looks over the road and sees Marcus bending down to pick up some crates for the nightlcub. She smiles and licks her lips.
JustJodi
27-03-2006, 17:52
Claire:wall: :wall: what have you done :confused: I have a feeling you are gonna regret it even more when Romeo does turn up !!!!!!!!!!!!! You dumb cow.. letting your hormones rage !!!!!
Ruby ruby tsk tsk, what are we gonna do with you ...Nat,, leave that horrible horrible married man alone, if he can cheat on his wife with you, what makes you think he won't do it to you IF IF IF he ever leaves amy for you...... dream on my girl you are NOT SPECIAL .. you were just a tumble in bed !!!!
its in the chat section of the mile high forum...
you can acess the mile high forum once youve got 1000 posts, i cant post some episodes in hear as they are unsuitable for a younger audienceHave you posted the Claire/Craig bit, as I can't see it in there :searchme: Or is it somewhere else?? Or am I being daft?? :D :D (Actually don't answer the last question! :rotfl: )
BAYMOORE BEACH
Claire is sitting on the beach, looking out to see, shivering. Chris walks up behind her, and sits down next to her. He goes to kiss her, she pulls away...
Claire: No, Chris... just....just dont.
Chris: Claire, whats wrong babe? First you just up and leave this morning, then your like this...
Claire sighs and looks out to see again. A single tear rolls down her face.
Chris: Claire! Talk to me Claire! for Gods sake, i thought after last night we were...
Claire looks back to Chris, and stares him in the eyes harshly...
Claire: Last night. Last night was nothing. it was a mistake. A huge, dirty mistake. It shouldn't have happened.
Chris: But i thought it meant something. To you AND me....
Claire: I was....it was a betrayal. Something that shouldn't have happened. Sorry but i love him. After everything, i still love Romeo. i can't stop thinking about him, every moment since.... since last night.
Chris: But you said...
Claire: I know. I know what i said. I just feel so cheap right now, so..... so dirty. Please, Chris. Just forget last night ever happened....
Chris: But what about me...?
Claire: Sorry...
Claire runs back to the promenade, another tear rolls down her face. Chris stays on the beach front, alone, and looks out to sea.
Have you posted the Claire/Craig bit, as I can't see it in there :searchme: Or is it somewhere else?? Or am I being daft?? :D :D (Actually don't answer the last question! :rotfl: )
I was just wondering that myself actually!! :lol: I went to go have a look, so i know where i'm going from with my episodes, and i couldn't see it either... :hmm:
I was just wondering that myself actually!! :lol: I went to go have a look, so i know where i'm going from with my episodes, and i couldn't see it either... :hmm:Well, it can't be both of us having blonde moments :rotfl:
i decided graphic discritions of sex in a bog wasnt necessary in the end! :D
i decided graphic discritions of sex in a bog wasnt necessary in the end! :D:rotfl: Thats ok - just from that, I now know what happened :rotfl: Cheers hun :D
i decided graphic discritions of sex in a bog wasnt necessary in the end! :D
:rotfl: classic!!!! :rotfl:
Good news Em- we're not going mad!!! :lol:
:rotfl: classic!!!! :rotfl:
Good news Em- we're not going mad!!! :lol::rotfl: I was panicking thinking I'd missed it.....but then when you hadn't seen it either i thought maybe it werent me - bry - you shouldn't have teased us like it!!! :rotfl:
:clap::clap::clap: this just gets better and better, fab work as alway Bry and Abi.
Oh my god Claire you idiot!! i knew you would do something and regret it...
INT: RED RUM PUB
Claire is sitting at the table alone. She is staring into a drink, thinking. Chris comes and sits next to her...
Claire: We said all we needed to say yesterday, Chris.
Chris: No, we didn't. Look... we can work on this. Theres something between us, you know there is...
Claire: A spark, maybe. But thats all it is.
Chris: We can work on it though. Just give us a chance, Clare. You never know, it could work.
Claire: It could...
Chris: (puts his arm around her) So lets give it a go then.
Claire wriggles away from Chris's arm..
Claire: It could, but i dont want that. I dont want us. You and me... we just wont work....
Chris: but how will you know untill you give us a shot?!
Claire: I just do, Chris.
Chris: (pauses) This is about Romeo, aint it?
Claire: Yeah... look, i'm gonna tell him...
Chris: What?! Tell him what exactly?!
Claire: About.... you know what about!! I'm not keeping secrets from him... Do you understand?
Chris: (sarcastically) Oh yeah, course i understand! Go on, tell him all about it! Make him a meal as well, while your at it!
Claire: Dont be like that Chris...
Chris: Like what? Go on, if you dont want secrets, then tell him. As soon as you can, if thats what you want (pauses). But i know your not that stupid.
Claire: Dont even...
Chris: Your not gonna tell him anything. Thats not you, is it Claire?
Chris hands Claire his mobile phone
Chris: So go on, if you think you can, then why not do it now?
Claire sits and stares at the phone. Chris takes it back.
Chris: Didn't think so...
INT. MARBAL UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Natasha gathers the remainder of her items and walks out of the flat just as Iqbal and Marcus are walking in with theres.
Natasha: God would you jump in my grave as quick?
Marcus: What!?
Natasha: I ent even out of the front door before moving your stuff in... this was my home...
Iqbal: Look i dont feel good about this... but you only rented it... and this flat came as part of the club... and we need someone to live...
Natasha: Yeah well lucky for you i got a flat down the road isnt it...
Marcus: Give dad a rest he said he was sorry...
Natasha: Yeah whatever...
Natasha walks out of the scene. Iqbal and Marcus sit down on the sofa.
Marcus: I dont know...its a big move ent it dad...from India to err...Devon...
Iqbal: I reckon it was the right one...its best to stay close to your family... we need them to get us trough it son...
Marcus: It's been a year since mom died tough....
Iqbal: Yeah...but India was plagued with bad memories.... no point upsetting ourseleves... a fresh start is just what we needed, and besides... running a nightlcub is what I've always wanted to do!
Marcus: Uncle Kash isnt the best person to be around...
Iqbal: You'll get used to him...besides youve got your cousins...and this country is far more liberal... you can live your life without your gran breathing down your neck...
Marcus: God you know how to talk your way into things dont you!
The pair laugh
Iqbal: Yes I think we will have fun here...
EXT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
Patrick flicks trough a wod of bank notes and places them into an envelopes, he sighs at the displeasure of having to hand Val money. He walks up to the Andrews' House and knocks on the door. James answers.
James: Alright Paddy mate, what can i do for you?
Patrick: A grand here...give it to your beloved with...
James: Wow wow... a grand!? Wait a second mate... what's this for?
Patrick: Oh its blackmail...im sure she'll tell you it all...
James: Look mate we dont need your money....
Patrick: Juts give it her please James mate...
Patrick starts to walk off
Patrick: Oh and you can tell her from me... she's a bitch!
James starts to leave the house to hit Patrick
James: Oi mate! That's why wife your talking to!
Patrick: Speak to her! Then she if its justified...
Patrick walks off leaving a confused James alone outside in the cold.
Oh nasty nasty patrick.. telling James about Val's blackmail
INT. RED RUM - NIGHT
Amy and Patrick are behind the bar, there are very few punters in.
Patrick: Christ it's as dead as a stiff in here tonight...
Amy: I blame Marbal... that place has took all our buisness....
Patrick: Yeah well we need to get the buisness back or we'll be out on the streets...really is there any need for a nightclub in a village like this!?
Amy: We'll obviously there is, seen as its packed to the rafters everynight...
Patrick: I've got a good mind to march over there and give him a peice of my mind!
Amy: And what good would that do eh!? Look the shine will soon go off...they'll come back...they just need some persuading...and not with your fists...how about a karoke night this friday!?
Patrick: A karoke night!? What kind of pub do you think i run here...
Amy: An ABBA theme...i can imagine it now... disco balls and fancy dress! That'll get em all in... a 100 quid prize for best singer!
Patrick: And wheres the 100 quid come from? Aladin's lamp!?
Amy: No... but think of all the moolah we'll get in the till... oh i cant wait its going to be so fun! :D
Patrick is not too impressed :rolleyes:
INT: MARBAL NIGHTCLUB- night
Claire, Ruby and Natasha walk into the nightclub, and try to look through the crowd...
Natasha: Its a bit busy tonight aint it?!
Ruby: Nothing wrong with that. All the more men, if you get my drift!!
Claire: (playfully hits her arm) Your dreadfull, Ruby!!
Ruby: Dont you know it!!
They push through the crowd towards the bar. Claire sees Chris, Tom and Luquina at the other end of the bar.
Claire: Might have known that lot would be here....
Natasha: Typical men, trying to pick up every living thing in a skirt! Whose that? With Chris?
Claire: I....erm.... i dunno. Never seen her before...
Natasha: Ah well, looks like someones in for a good night!!
Natasha looks away, and orders a drink. She notices Claire is still staring at Chris and the others.
Natasha: Whats up Claire?
Claire: Nothing..... nothing at all....
Ruby leans against the bar, as Marcus walks past. She grabs his shirt, and pulls him next to her....
Ruby: hey stranger!
Marcus: Hey Ruby, sorry, i'm a bit busy right now...?
Ruby: Going to see another girl are we?!
Ruby sticks her bottom lip out, and laughs.
Marcus: no, nothing like that!
Ruby: Is that cause of your girlfriend in India?!
Marcus: No.... we split...
Ruby: Really?! I didn't know...
Marcus: Look, i really have to go, i'll catch you in a bit...
Marcus walks off, leaving Ruby trying to hide the smile on her face...
INT: ANDREWS HOUSE
Val is sipping a glass of chardonny, while perching on an armchair. James coems up, and drops the bundle of banknotes on her lap...
Val: Whats this? Raining money all of a sudden, darling?
James: I thought you'd be able to explain to be actually.
Val: you're gonna have to give me more clues then that, babe!
James: Its from Patrick. Does that help?!
Val: I was wondering when this was going to arrive... (she looks up, and see's his obivously angry face) darling, its just a bit of cash...
James: Its a bloody grand! Why the hell is he doing giving you that kind of money?!
Val: This and That. You know how it is.
James: Well, no i dont! I dont want that bloke thinking this family is a charity case! I'll provide for this family no matter what!
Val: I'm sure you would, mind a bit of pocket money wont go a miss.
James: Just tell me why he's gving you the bleeding money!
Val: I know something about him. The poor darling doesn't want it getting out, so he's giving me little presents like this, Convinent aint it?!
James: So your blackmailing him!? Val, how could you?!
Val: Easily. He's breaking poor Amy's heart- i might as well get something out of him before it all gets out!
James: What d'ya mean "breaking her heart"?!
Val: He's having it off, with someone else. An affair, a bit on the side, whatever you want to call it. Fact is he's doing it. With someone, not too far from Amy's friendship circle...
:hmm: I wonder if Val will tell James who it is
bakedbean
30-03-2006, 16:32
I hope she does or maybe a bit of blackmail???
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Gary and Hilary walks into the living room. Richard is sitting down with some files, Melissa and Jacob are playing on the floor.
Hilary: Busy day at the cafe?
Gary: So so, not too bad for this time of the year...just come to pick up the kids, they been ok?
Hilary: Yeah as good as gold... (to kids) come on kids up you get Daddy's here...
Richard turns around as Gary enters the room.
Richard: Oh hello Gary, hows things?
Gary: Not too good really Richard...
Richard: Still no improvment?
Gary: No...she's just sitting in the house...not doing nothing... not going nowhere...
Hilary: Sounds like she needs to snap out of it...no good getting stuck in a rutt
Gary: Easier said than done... she's convinced she has someone stalking her... and i dont reckon this is going to go away anytime soon...
Hilary has an evil and satisified grin on her face.
INT. MARBAL - NIGHT
Natasha and Ruby are having fun in the nightclub. Ruby is staring over at Marcus in the distance.
Marcus is changing a whisky bottle, a blonde at tyhe bar checks out his ass and starts chatting him up.
Blonde: Nice view in here...
Marcus: Want a postcard of it? :p
Blonde: Oh theres me hoping to get the real thing...
Marcus: Patientce... i have a club to run...
Blonde: Why call it Marbal?
Marcus: Well im Marcus and me dad's Iqbal... put them together and what do you get!?
Blonde: Marbal... so your Indian then?
Marcus: Yeah fancy taking away and Indian to your place? :p
Blonde: Only if i get double helpings...
Marcus: Oh I'm sure I'll be able to deliver....
Marcus and the Blonde begin to snog over the bar. Ruby sees this and runs outside in tears. Natasha follows her.
Natasha: Ruby whats up babes? Why you crying for!?
Ruby: Its him! In there!
Natasha: What Marcus!?
Ruby: Yeah! Snogging that cheap little tarts face off right in front of me!
Natasha: So bloomin' what? What's the big issue?
Ruby: I love him Tash'! I love Marcus!
Natasha: But he's your cousin!?
Ruby: I've loved him for years! Ever since we were kids!
INT: ANDREWS HOUSE
James is pacing the room, whilst Val is sitting on the sofa, very relaxed looking. She files her nails as she talks to James....
James: You know what gets to me more than anything? The fact that you'd rather get a fat loada dosh, then have friends around here!
Val: Darling, its called munipulating the situation
James: And boy do you know how to do that!
Val: Never denyed it, never will
James laughs, sarcastically...
James: how could you be so... so calluous....
Val: Posh word for you, hun!
James: Joking aint gonna get you out of this one, Val. Nothing will.
Val: Oh yeah?
James: Yeah. because if you dont tell Amy about Patricks bit on the side...
Val: Pffft...
James: Then i will...
Val: Oh, i'm shaking!
James: I'm not joking anymore, Val. So take your "darlings", and your stiletos, and march to Amys and tell 'er, before i do!
JustJodi
30-03-2006, 23:10
Well done James, call Val's bluff..I am looking forward to the next installment,,
I hope it is James that ends up telling Amy...
Good man James and Ruby euh!! he is your cousin.. Are they distant or 1st???
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - DAY
Tanya is sitting alone in living room, the curtains drawn in total darkness. A key can be heard in the door as Hilary marches in.
Tanya: How the hell did you get in?
Hilary: (Patronising) Err...spare set of keys... i presumed youd be stuck in here like a retarded hermit so i thought i'd let mysef in..
Hilary draws the curtains open, bring lots of light into the room.
Hilary: Look at you... have you any dignity... you lot a state...
Tanya: How dare you come into my home and start insulting me! Who did you think you are!?
Hilary: Hilary Blackstock sweetie... and ill dish it out in bucketsfull if it makes you see sense. This doesnt just effect you! If effects Gary, your kids... and your father...
Tanya: Oh as if you give a damn about him!
Hilary: That is irrelevant! He's worried about you... just because you think you have a stalker... pafetic...
Tanya gets up and points at Hilary.
Tanya: I dont think, I Know! They're out there all the time... waiting for me to go out... theyre making my life a living hell!!!
Hilary: Save it Tanya, i couldnt care less... i just dont want you upsetting Richard... pull yoursefl together and snap out of it...
Tanya: I bet its you isnt it!?
Hilary: Pardon!?
Tanya: Your the one stalking me...
Hilary: Oh please...give me some credit... I have much better things to do with my life than stalk paranoia barbie everywhere she goes... i despie you... but i wouldnt waste my time on you...your nothing... i hope they send you mental...
Tanya charges towards Hilary.
Tanya: You evil cow!
Tanya grabs hold of Hilarys hair and starts to Pull it. Hilary fights back by pulling and pushing Tanya around the room. The pair scream as they crash into furniture trashing the room.
Hilary: Get off me you deranged little slag!
Hilary gives Tanya a dry hard slap around the face, tanya collapses onto the floor, holding her face in pain.
Hilary: I've had it up to hear with you... Richard's duaghter or not... you've over stepped your mark...
Hilary gives Tanya an evil glare, she leaves the house, Tanya alone in tears.
RED RUM PUB UPSTAIRS FLAT
Val is sitting on the sofa, obviously thinking about something. Amy is making coffee in the kitchen. She walks through to the living room, and gievs Val a coffee. She then stands sipping at it..
Val: Look, darling... i might want to sit down...
Amy: Nah, i'm fine thanks.... whats up with you today, Val? Your not normally so....uptight...
Val: I've got something i need to tell you....
Amy: Uh huh... (sips coffee, and looks to Val)... whats that then?
Val: Your not taking this seriously, Amy...
Amy: Whats there to take seriously?! the coffee?!
Val: (inpatiently) Amy, its Patrick... He's...
Amy: What the hell are you on about...?
Val: Patricks having an affair. With Natasha...
Amy laughs, obviously not taking her seriously..
Amy: Yeah, and i'm a 6 foot super model!
Val: Amy, listen to be darling. Your husbands having an affair, with Natasha...
Amy looks at Val, her eyes well up with tears...
Amy: No.....no, you've.... you've made a mistake. He wouldn't do anything like that.... not again....
Val: I caught them together, down the aleyway...
Amy: And you didn't think to tell me?!.. i can't beleive.... i can't beleive he's doing this... not again...not now...
Val puts her arm around Amy, Amy puts her head on her shoulder and cries..
Amy: How could he do this to me?! With....With Natasha!! He's a..... he's a...
Val: Let it all out... it'll make you feel better...
Amy: Nothings gonna make me feel better... he's my husband, val! I thought i could trust him...
Amy wipes her tears, and looks at Val...
Amy: how long has it been going on for?! Like... how long have you known for?
Val: A few weeks maybe....
Amy: What!! So its not just the once?! And you didn't bother telling me?! What the hell did you think you were doing?!
Val: He..... he paid me off. Gave me money...
Amy: So you thought the money was more important than me?! Than my marriage?! So your telling me, that not only has my husband been having an affair with my mate, but my best friends lied to me about it?!
Val: (laughs slightly) Thats about the whole of it..
Amy stands by the window, crying into her hands. Val walks up behind her, and puts her hand on her shoulder. Amy turns, and pulls it off..
Amy: Dont touch me, Val.... just....just dont.
Val: Well what can i do then?! I can't just leave you like this, in this state!
Amy: (stares back out the window) I need an audience. As many people as possible. Patrick aint gonna get away with this- not again. He thought he's keep Natasha as his "bit on the side"....pfft... we'll see about that.
INT. HARVEY'S MOTORS - NIGHT
Craig is about to leave the garage, he switches off the lights but in walks Hilary.
Craig: Well if it sint the lady of the manor...
Hilary: Not just yet...
Craig: What brings you down here, fancy a bit of common muck as oppose to mr moneybags?
Hilary: If it gets me what i want...
Craig: And whats that then?
Hilary: Revenge...
Craig: Oh lobely...my specialist subject...who on?
Hilary: Our mutual enemey... Tanya... i want her to suffer... i want her to feel pain...greater than anyone has felt before...i want you to help me make that bitch pay for messing with us!
Craig has a satisifed look on his face
Craig: You... have got yourself a deal.
The pair shake hands and laugh evily.
RED RUM PUB- night
The Pub is packed, for a singing night. Richard and Hilary are on stage, enthusiastically singing "money, money, money"....
Richard and Hilary: (singing) All the things i could do, if i had a little money. Its a rich mans world
Patrick is behind the bar. He mutters under his breath...
Patrick: You couldn't make it up, could ya!? Talk about ironic song choice!!
Natasha walks over to the bar. She leans on the bar, and catches Patricks attention. He walks over.
Patrick: What can i do for you?
Natasha: Ah! The million dollar question!
Patrick looks around, uneasy that people might have overheard her. Natasha sees this, and grabs his tie. She drags him out to the hallway at the back of the pub...
Patrick: Natasha! What are you doing?!
Natasha: You still want me, Patrick. You can't deny it any further..
Patrick: But i said...!
Natasha: forget what you said, you weren't fooling anyone. I want you, you want me, wheres the problem.
Patrick looks at Natasha, and kisses her passionatly.
Natasha: Thats more like it.....:D.... you know, we could go upstairs...
Natasha looks around to see if anyones around. She looks to the doorway, her face drains...
Patrick: Yeah, we could....:D.... Natasha? Whats up?
Natasha pushes him away slightly, and mutters, trying not to move her lips...
Natasha: Its Val. She saw us...
Patrick: What?!
Patrick looks to the door, and sees Val give them a smug wave. Natasha runs out of the hallway. Patrick follows, trying to lok relxaed...
Patrick: Look, Val...
Val: Save it for the jury, doll
Patrick: What?
Val: It doesn't matter whether i saw or not. Fact is, Amy knows.
Natasha turns, she overheard what Val said...
Natasha: you WHAT?!
Val: Couldn't keep it to little old me, could i?! Sorry, hun!
Natasha looks at Patrick...... :eek:
INT. RED RUM - NIGHT
The pub is crowded with people. Hilary and Richard leave the stage, everyone cheers.
INTERCUT:
The scene cuts to Patrick and Natasha in the hallway. Patrick is pacing the room trying to formulate a plan.
Natasha: What are we gonna do eh!?
Patrick: I dont know...
Natasha: Shes gonna be King Kong on us!
Patrick: (Baffled) I cant belive she hasnt done anything...or said anything...
Natasha: Maybe Val's bluffing us?
Patrick: No she was serious! Christ! Why did i let this get out of hand!
INTERCUT:
The scene cuts back to Amy who is half drunk, she staggers up to the stage with a bottle of Vodka in her hands.
Amy: The next song...I'd like to dedicate to my scumbag of a husband...
S.O.S starts to play. Everyone looks baffled and starts to whispering amongst themselevs...
Amy: Where are those happy days, they seem so hard to find
I tried to reach for you, but you have closed your mind
Whatever happened to our love?
I wish I understood
It used to be so nice, it used to be so good
INTERCUT:
Patrick: I just knew i shouldnt have got involved... i cant loose her..i just cant...
Natasha hears the song in the background.
Natasha: Shhh will you!
The pair listen to hear Amy Singing
Amy: So when you’re near me, darling can’t you hear me
S. o. s.
The love you gave me, nothing else can save me
S. o. s.
When you’re gone
How can I even try to go on?
When you’re gone
Though I try how can I carry on?
Patrick: ****!
INTERCUT:
Patrick and Natasha rush out into the crowded pub, Amy is in tears, everyone is staring at Patrick and Natasha.
Amy: You seem so far away though you are standing near
You made me feel alive, but something died I fear
I really tried to make it out
I wish I understood
Patrick rushes to the stage and tries to force the microphone away from Amy, she struggles with him.
Patrick: Stop it Amy!
Amy: Get off me Patrick!!!
Patrick: You're making a bloody fool of yourself!
Amy: No its you!!! Your the fool!!! Your the selfish pig that's reduced me to this!!!
Patrick: Oh dont talk rot!!!
Val: Game's over Paddy mate. Your times come...
Amy pulls out the plug. The pub is in total silence.
Amy: As you all probably know Patick has never been the most... loving husband... but even i thought he'd changed... how wrong i was... becuase all along hes been sleeping with another woman!
There are gasps from around the pub. Patrick can barely face the pub.
Amy: A full on affair! With someone old enough to be his own ruddy daughter! .... I'm sorry to ruin your evening folks... but my whole life has been ruined... thanks to this ******* and her!
Amy points over at Natasha. The entire pub gives her evil glares.
Amy: I hope your both happy!
Amy bursts into tears and runs into the hallway, in floods of tears. The pub stares at Patrick and Natasha.
The Affairs Out... What Next!?
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Oh My God!!!! Poor Amy, but you go girl - letting everyone know like that!
Whats going to happen next?? Quick, post Bry/Abbey, either of you, both of you - don't leave us in suspense like this!! :D :D :clap:
bakedbean
02-04-2006, 17:13
bondboffin that was a superb edition of Devon Seas the affairs out Devon Seas is getting better and better
:eek: That was fab honey!
See i caught up aren't you proud of me? :p That was fab, poor Amy
More soon please x
Jada-GDR
02-04-2006, 18:31
at last!!! go val heh... pattie and nattie have had it coming. great writing bry, loving it :cheer:
:eek: That was fab honey!
See i caught up aren't you proud of me? :p That was fab, poor Amy
More soon please x
that harassing on msn paid off then!
read each day and it wont be so big a deal!!! :p
glad your enjoyed it! keep reading as this is the start of some good stuff!
at last!!! go val heh... pattie and nattie have had it coming. great writing bry, loving it :cheer:
Thanks JADA, its been a long time coming but worth it...now we can see the aftermath and the effects of the affair! Bring it on! :cheer:
Jada-GDR
02-04-2006, 18:38
Thanks JADA, its been a long time coming but worth it...now we can see the aftermath and the effects of the affair! Bring it on! :cheer:yay! :cheer: looking forward to it great writing bry and abi
that harassing on msn paid off then!
read each day and it wont be so big a deal!!! :p
glad your enjoyed it! keep reading as this is the start of some good stuff!
I will keep up i promise, if not just carry on harrassing me! :p
INT. RED RUM - NIGHT
Amy bursts into tears and runs into the hallway, in floods of tears. The pub stares at Patrick and Natasha.
Val: How the hell can you live with yourself!?
Patrick: Oh shut up Val!!
James: I suppose its all one big joke to you ent it Paddy!? Theres a woman in that coridoor in tears! Her life destroyed!!!
Patrick: (Emotional) Dont you think i know that!
Patrick feels the prescence of everyone staring at him.
Patrick: Get out! All of you! Go on! Your all barred!
The punters start to get up, showing their disatisfaction to being asked to leave.
Patrick: Come on out...
Val: Dont worry we're going...
One by one the punters leave the pub. Natasha and Patrick are alone in the pub, the distant sounds of Amy crying.
Natasha: What a mess eh!?
Patrick: Oh dont even bother...
Natasha: What!?
Patrick ignores Natasha and heads towards the flat, where Amy is crying on the staircase.
Patrick: Amy... im so sorry babes...
Amy: Sorry!? Sorry for what!? That you got caught!!!
Patrick: No that i did it...
Amy: Dont lie to me Patrick!!! If you were so sorry you wouldnt have done it in the first place!
Natasha shyly walks into the hallway. Amy laughs to herself in disbeleif.
Amy: Oh great, the third member of the love triangle...
Natasha approaches Amy.
Natasha: Amy...im sorry it got out of hand..it was just meant to be a bit of fun...
Amy: Shut the hell up you marriage wrecking slut!
Amy slaps Natasha around the face so hard that Natasha falls backwards with the impact. Patrick grabs old of her. Natasha rubs her face in pain.
Amy: Dont ever think of speaking to me again, or I'll bloody kill you!
Amy is shaking with anger. Patrick notices this and faces Natasha.
Patrick: I think you'd better leave...
Natasha: Patrick?
Patrick: You've done enough damage...just go...
Natasha: Oh i see, affair over...now i can be thrown out with the trash?
Patrick: Tash...just go now...
Natasha: (laughs in disbelfi) What did i ever see in you?
Natasha swings her handbag over her shoulder and heads out of the pub. Silence falls on the Red Rum. Amy looks up at Patrick.
Patrick: It's just you and me now...let's talk...
its taken me months to read it bry but im glad i finally have, loved the affair being revealed t the pub loved it!!!
willl read from now on i promise! the nagging has paid off!
INT. RED RUM FLAT - NIGHT
Patrick and Amy walk into the flat slwoly.
Patrick: Is there anything i can get you?
Amy: Its a bit late to be playing the dutiful husband now isnt it Patrick? Just pack you bags and get out...
Patrick sicks down next to Amy.
Patrick: Im so sorry babes...
Amy: Sorry!? No your not...youve used that word too many times..its lost its effect...you dont know the meaning of it...
Patrick: She meant nothing to me...
Amy: Then why did you do this Patrick! Why did you ruin our marriage!
Patrick: Becuase i got bored!
Amy slaps Patrick hard around the face.
Patrick: I deserved that...
Amy: Too damn right you did! If you dont leave right now I'll do more than slap you!
Patrick: Amy let me explain...
Amy: I dont want explanations! I just want a conculsuion... an end to you and me!!! I want a divorce!!!
Patrick: (Emotional) No..Amy you dont mean it...
Amy: You'd better believe it Paddy.. becuase i want you out of my life for good... and i want the pub...
Patrick: Amy...you cant leave me...please I'm begging you...
Patrick is on his knees crying, he grabs hold of Amy's legs. She tries to shake him off.
Patrick: I might have my affairs... but they mean nothing, your the one babes! The one and only! Your my rock... your what keeps up going!!! The only one I've ever loved...I need you!!
Amy tries to hold back the tears and stay strong.
Amy: Well i dont need you... so please Patrick...just get out...
Patrick gets up, he stares at Amy for a while, she turns his back on him and heads to the window.
Patrick: (Quietly) I love you Amy...
Patrick walks out of the flat, Leaving Amy alone, looking out of the rainy window.
NATASHAS FLAT- night
Patrick knocks at the door, Natasha opens it, then goes to shut it in his face. Patrick forces his way in...
Patrick: What i said back there.... i didn't mean it.... i just didnt want Amy getting all histerical again, you know what she's like...
Natasha: Oh yeah?! And how can i beleive you?!
Patrick: Because i wouldn't be here if you didn't mean anything to me! I'd be sitting at the flat with bloody Amy trying to stop her drinking herself to death or something!
Natasha: I think i know what you think of me now, Patrick, i heard it all back there. So stop the sob story. Just cause you've lost your wife, it doesn't mean you can come running back to me, and expect...
Patrick: Expect what?
Natasha: And expect me to still be standing here waiting...
Patrick: Well it doesn't look like theres anyone else around..!
Natasha: Is that what you think of me, Patrick?! That i'm that much of a whore that i've already got another fella on the go?!
Patrick: No, i dont think your a whore. I think your a dirty slut- and thats exactly how i like you :p
Patrick winks at Natasha, she looks away in digust...
Patrick: Come on, we've got something good going on here. Dont throw it away cause of that wreck of a woman at the pub!
Natasha: How do i know your not gonna run back to her, first chance you get?
Patrick: Cause i wouldn't be standing here if i was...
Natasha looks at Patrick, trying to suss him out. Patrick pushes the door open more, and kisses Natasha passionatly. he gradually starts un-doing her shirt....
INTERCUT:
Amy is alone at the pub. She pours a large Vodka, finishing off a bottle...
Amy: This ones for you, Patrick, my ****ing ******* of a husband!
She downs the vodka, and looks at the empty bottle. She picks it up, and throws it at a picture of Patrick standing behind the bar, smashing the glass everywhere. She leans against the wall next to the glass, and falls to the floor. Amy picks up pieces of glass with her fingers, and throws them across the bar, cutting her fingers as she does so, and downs another vodka...
awww Poor amy :( I have decided i don't like paddy no more, he is mean and yeh!
This is fab well done guys x
Jada-GDR
03-04-2006, 09:54
oh no! poor amy, pattie's a meanie. i dont like him any more. well, i never liked him in the first place, but hey... i like him even less now! :D
Wow!!! well done Abi and Bry, brilliant piece of writing. How nasty is Patrick, gets kicked out on his wife for cheating and goes back to the mistress saying he loved her all along.. horrible horrible man :angry:
EXT: RED RUM PUB- morning
Vicky bangs on the front doors to the pub. She shouts through the doors...
Vicky: Amy? You in there?!
She bangs again on the doors, she hears a faint moan from inside...
Vicky: Amy? Look, the doors are open... I'm coming in...
Vicky opens the doors, and walks into the pub. She walks around the bar looking for Amy. She spots her sitting on the floor next to the glass, shaking. She bends down next to her, and puts her hand on her shoulder...
Vicky: Amy... You dont deserve any of this... Come on, lets get you cleaned up...
Vicky goes to help Amy up- Amy pulls her arm away from Vicky, and rocks backwards and forwards on the floor...
Vicky: Amy?! Amy- your scaring me! Come on, dont let Patrick do this to you! Dont let him win!
Amy: Dont let him win?! you think its that easy....?
Vicky: No, i just-....
Amy:I can't handle this... all alone, no one to turn to.... no one to trust...
Vicky: You've got me, Amy. I'm here for you, i can help you...
Amy: Thats what Patrick said...
A tear rolls down Amys face, Vicky gives her a tissue..
Vicky: You can get through this, just let me help...
Vicky tries to help her up again, Amy pulls away, and rests her head on her knees while shaking....
Amy: just leave me alone...
Vicky tentavly walks out, even though she obviously wants to help. As she walks out the doors, she turns to see Amy in floods of tears...
BAYMOORE BEACH- day
Vicky is sitting on a bench, gazing out to sea, thinking about Amy earlier. Val struts down the promedade behind her, and spots her sitting alone on the bench. She walks over...
Val: Hey darl, whats a pretty girl like you out in the cold on a day like this!?
Vicky: Val. Might have known i'd see you here. Just fancied a think, thats all. Bit of peace and quiet, you now how it is sometimes...
Val: We're in Devon, doll, its hardly LA!
Val laughs, Vicky rolls her eyes...
Vicky: Well sometimes people make it seem like that, dont they Val?!
Val: Three guesses what you're tryin' to say. Amy, right? Hows she doing? Poor thing was in an awfull state when i saw 'er...
Vicky: No thanks to you! How could you do that, Val? How could you have the nerve to put money before Amy?!
Val: Girls gotta do, what a girlls gotta -
Vicky: (interupts) Bull****. You were just looking out for number one as usual. Selfish ****ing number one.
Val vaguely shrugs her shoulders...
Vicky: How do oyu live with yourself, Val? Have you seen what you've put Amy through?!
Val: What Patrick and Natasha put her through, dont you mean!
Vicky: Your as much to blame! You could have put a stop to this. Told Amy as soon as you saw 'er, stopped it carrying on any further. But did ya?!
Val goes to explain, but Vicky doesn't stop talking...
Vicky: you know what you are? Your disgusting. A disgusting slut. Amy is destroyed because of you and your silly money games. You've reduced a grown woman to.... to... to nothing. Hope you can live with yourself.
Vicky storms off down the promenade, living Val reeling on the bench.
INT. SINGH HOUSE - NIGHT
Kash is reading the newspaper on the sofa. Sanjita is rushing around laying the table.
Kash: Come on Sanjita...Iqbal and Marcus will be around soon... dont wont them thinking your not a good hostess do we?
Sanjita: (Hesitant) No...
Kash: Come on then...hurry hurry...
Sanjita leaves the room and heads for the kitchen. The house phone rings. Kash answers it...
Kash: Hello... yes speaking.... yes...i see... i beg your pardon!?... yes thank you...
Kash gets up in fury.
Kash: I do not believe it!
Sanjita runs into the room.
Sanjita: What is it Kash!?
Kash: Andonis' college has just phoned... he is underachieving...in all subjects, and are debating whether to permanatly exclude him...
Sanjita: Oh dear...
Kash: Oh dear!? I am outraged! And ashamed!!! I have told him too many times not to put that Andrews tart above his education! But will he listen to me? No!
Sanjita: Kash, maybe you should...
Kash looks trough the net curtains and sees Andonis kissing Emma goodbye outside.
Kash: Right that's it...im having no more of this nonscence, if he doesnt end it with her then ill make sure they dont see each other ever again!
Right, what happen with Val? I know she was a curtain twitcher but she is now a complete bitch with no feelings for her friend. Kash, leave your son alone, it has nothing to do with Emma if he is underachieving
Kash just leave your son alone! Fab guys hope amy is okay ....
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
Emma walks through the front door, and into the living room.
Emma: Back! What times tea mom!?
Val walks into the room. James is sitting down watching the 6 o clock news.
Val: Oh just be a cupple more minutes...
Theres a violent bang at the door.
James: Who the ruddy hell's that!?
Val: I'll go get it...
James: No you wont...could be a maniac for all you know...
James gets up and answers the door, in marches Kash.
James: Kash, what the hell you playing at!?
Kash: Is Emma in!?
James: Yes erm...why?
Kash walks into the living room. Emma and Val are on edge.
Emma: Kash?
James: Now listen up! And listen clear!...Becuase I'm not saying this again! You will not see Andonis again! Do you understand!!!
Emma is too upset to speak.
Val: Look what's all this about Kash!?
Kash: She is affecting his education! Sending him down the road to ruin...he can do much better than this!
Kash gestures at Emma with disgust. James takes offence and walks towards Kash.
James: And what the hell is wrong with my daughter!?
Kash: Parading around like a slapper at 16 years of age! With her short skirts and her low cut tops! I do not want my son dating a sex mad whore!
James lashes out at Kash, the pair begin to fight. Emma is screaming.
Emma: Mom stop them! Stop it!
Val tries to split up the fight.
Val: Oi you two! Stop it!
James lets go, still giving Kash angry looks.
Val: (To Kash) Now you, get the hell out of our house! And if I hear you bad mouth my daughter again I'll have you done for slandor....
Kash points at Emma in warning, and then leaves. Emma sits down in tears on the sofa.
Aww bless poor emma, its not her fault *shakes head* Kash was out of order *nods head* See look i am regularly reading now :p x
James, well done for defending your daughter , Kash has no right to say that about Emma :angry:
Good on you James - defending Emma like that :cheer:
INT. VALENTINOS RESTUARUNT - NIGHT
The restuaraunt is fairly busy. A painost is playing on the piano. Natasha and Patrcick and eating out. Natasha keeps looking around.
Patrick: Christ woman, will you just eat your bloomin' food!?
Natasha: I just cant help getting the feeling that everyones watching and talking about us...
Patrick: Oh dont be so ruddy paranoid...
Natasha: It's just getting to me...ya know?
Patrick: You've got nothing to worry about...its out in the open... and you can get on with your life now...
Natasha: Yeah but it kinda takes the shine off our love dont it?
Patrick: Love? Its a bit early to be thinking about that isnt it?
Natasha: Not really..because i know i love you...
Patrick: Yeah well dont expect me to say that any time soon...
Natasha: Oh thank you...
Patrick: No i mean...its just going to take some time to get over Amy... she's all I've ever known...
Vicky notices to pair dining in her mothers restaraunt, she storms over to them.
Natasha: Yeah But...
Vicky: I dont believe the pair of you! How can you have the nerve to show your face after what you've done!?
Natasaha: Oh leave off eh Vicky?
Vicky: Leave off!? Do you even care what poor Amy is going trough... i caught her drunk out of her head this morning...on the pub floor...in a rec!
Patrick has a concerned look on his face, worrying for his wife.
Vicky: But do you care!? No... you rub it in her face... go out in public, blattantly disprecting her! You make me sick...
Patrick: How is she Vicky?
Vicky: What do you care!? You had a goodun' there Patrick...all she ever did was love you, and you threw that away for that...
Vicky gives a dirty look at Natasha. Natasha gets up to start a fight.
Patrick: Just sit down! Stop making a fool of yourself!
Vicky: She want last Paddy...and when she's gone... and your all alone... you'll only have yourself to blame...
Vicky walks off in disgust, Patrick reflects on what has been said.
hahahaha I am glad Vicky gave him something to think about.. Tasha won't last cause the excitment has gone but she would let him go either...
Ooh yey go Vicky!! Patrick will soon dump Natasha - the elusiveness and excitement of the secret has gone .....
bakedbean
04-04-2006, 19:05
Well said Vicky i am loving this affair storyline and now its out in the open it is really gripping lol keep up the good work the both of you
BAYMOORE BEACH- day
Emma and Andonis are walking down the beach, holding hands, whilst talking...
Andonis: I love you so much, Emma. You know that, dont you?
Emma: Course i do. I love you too...
Andonis: Its just...
Emma: Just what...?
Andonis is silent, he stops on the beach, and looks at Emma hesitantly....
Andonis: I just dont see how this can work out...
Emma: But we love each other, surely thats enough?!
Andonis: Well it would be.... but....
Emma: Its your dad, isn't it?
Andonis doesn't say anything
Emma: Come on, 'fess up. He's getting to you, isn't he? Well look, nothing can get to us two, not him, not anyone...
Andonis: But he can. Dad can. I just dont think this can work out, if he doesn't back us.....
Emma: Well lets prove him wrong then! We're good, you and me. Lets make him see that...
Andonis: He wont, Emma. Beleive me, i know him...
Emma: So what are you saying then?!
Andonis: (pauses, and looks down, avoiding eye contact) I..... I dont think this is gonna work...
Emma: You and me, you mean?!
Andonis: (hesitantly) yeah...
Emma: So you're ending it?!
Andonis: I love you Emma.... i just dont think this will work...... i'm so sorry...
He goes to hold her, she pulls away.
Emma: (holding back tears) I.... I understand...
Emma runs off the beach in tears, leaving Andonis alone on the beach, heartbroken...
Well i am glad vicky said what she said! Poor emma though, i think that kash has said something ...... x
Poor emma :( why can't adonis just stand up to his dad..
So sad! Adonis should grow a backbone and stand up to his dad if he loves Emma that much
Baymoore Pre-School-day
Tanya pulls up in her car, and gets out. She walks through the playground, towards the doors. She sees her kids run to the other side of the playground...
Tanya: For gods sake, what they doing now?
She looks at her watch...
Tanya: I wanted to get home quickly...
She looks across the playground, and sees them hugging Hilary. Hilary guides them towards her car. Tanya storms across the playground towards her...
Tanya: Excuse me, but what the ruddy hell do you think your doing?!
Hilary: Tanya, darl. Now, Now., keep hte temper under control- the kids are around!
Tanya: I'll do what i like in front of my kids!
Hilary: Mothering instinct obivously hasn't matured yet...
Hilary continues getting them into her car. Tanya pushes her away, and gets them back out again...
Tanya: What the hell do you think your doing with my kids?! I'm taking them home, not you!!
Hilary: Its called a favour, taking my grandkids home...
Tanya: Yeah, well, i'm here. Its not your place to just waltze in here and take them, so i'd appriciate it if you didn't!
Tanya grabs her kids hands, and marches them to her car. As she struggles to get them into the car, the camera zooms out, to show a silohette of someone watching her. They laugh, and drive off....
But who is it? And what have they got planned?
OMG - What is Hilary up to now!! She should leave Tanyas kids out of it...... :angry:
This feud isn't between Tanya's kids and Hilary, It's between Tanya and Hilary. Hilary should not be getting the kids involved.
They are not even her grandkids yet!!! she only just came back into richards life and Tanya is not her daughter. Leave the kids out of it Hilary :angry:
JustJodi
06-04-2006, 09:52
If I had been Tanya I would have been calling the police for attemped child napping,, gawd Hilary is a real bad bad bad person !!!!!!!!!!!!!
They are tanyas kids! And who was that watching?!?!
They are tanyas kids! And who was that watching?!?!
I am assuming Gregg her stalker who has been driving her mad for weeks
JustJodi
06-04-2006, 11:47
It has to be Gregg cos hes the only BOGEY MAN that I can think of , did he just go into hiding ???I have missed reading stuff since over a week ago,, will have to go back and read up on what I missed,, Gregg was a real nasty piece of work :sick:
It has to be Gregg cos hes the only BOGEY MAN that I can think of , did he just go into hiding ???I have missed reading stuff since over a week ago,, will have to go back and read up on what I missed,, Gregg was a real nasty piece of work :sick:
Wait a sec.. didn't Hilary go to Craig (dogdy guy who runs the garage, beats up his wife and already tried to kill Tanya with the burning cig in the hairdressers).. maybe it is him!!!!
BAYMOORE BEACH- day
Emma is sitting on the beach, running sand through her fingers. She gazes at the sea, and starts crying. She wipes her tears away and then carries on running sand thorugh her fingers. She sighs, trying to hold back more tears. Tom is walking on the beach, he sees Emma sitting alone, and walks over to her. He stands behind her, not realising shes crying...
Tom: Dont normally get too many people around here this time of year. I end up just standing here alone most the time. Summer and its, like, way busy though....
Tom looks down at Emma when she doesn't reply. He notices shes crying...
Tom: Hey! Emma, babes, whats up?
Emma cries, and throws the sand in her hands to the beach. Tom bends down, wipes her eyes, and hugs her...
Tom: Come on, no more tears.... whats up babe? This aint like you...
Emma: Andonis..
Tom: Andonis? Whats he done, Emma? I swear if he's....
Emma: Its over. Me and Andonis... Oh god, Tom... I loved him so much... I just..
Tom: You'll be fine, Emma. Andonis must be mad for letting you go like this... its all a bit sudden though, aint it? I thought you guys were good...
Emma: We were... Its his family. They.... (cries some more)... they dont approve of me...me and him...
Tom hugs Emma again, emma clings onto his back...
Emma: I just dont know what to do... He meant everything to me...like...
Tom: Like what?
Emma: (pauses) Nothing...
Emma looks into Toms eyes. She looks away, wipes her eyes, and looks back to Tom...
Emma: How could i screw everything up so badly...
Tom: You haven't. He'll see sense sometime...
Emma: (looks lovingly into Tom's eyes, and says quietly)...but.... but maybe i dont want him to...
Emma tenderly kisses Tom. A moment later, Tom pulls away...
Tom: Emma! Look... this.... this wont work. Sorry Emma, but i...
Emma's eyes well up with tears again. Tom tentiavly hugs Emma, and sheepishly walks off. He turns and says quietly..
Tom: I think i should... just...i think i should just go...
Tom walks off. Emma goes to run after him, but stops on the beach, and collapses onto her knees in tears...
Baymoore Pre-School - Day
Tanya walks runs past the crowds of mother and toddlers in a rush, she is late picking up the kids.
Tanya gets to the gates. Melissa and Jacob are nowhere in sight, Tanya looks around frantically for them.
Tanya: Melissa!? Jacob!? Melissa!?
One of the pre school teachers approaches Tanya.
Miss Laurence: Hello...can i help you?
Tanya: Melissa and Jacob Donagoon!? Where are they!?
Miss Laurence: Erm...i dont know I presume their mother had picked them up...
Tanya: I am their mother!!!
Miss Laurence: Oh well...erm...oh my gosh...
Tanya: Did you see anyone take them!?
Tanya starts to get worried, breathing heavily and looking all around her on edge.
Miss Laurence: No...as well when everyone is being picked up its hard to keep track...
Tanya: You sure you didnt see anyone!? What about a woman... old...red hair!?..Hilary her name is...
Miss Laurence: No i cant remember seeing anyone like that...
Tanya: I swear to god if i dont find them, i'm holding this ruddy nursery responsible!
Tanya runs off in a panic towards her car, everything spinning around her.
Miss Laurence: Mrs Donagoon!? Mrs Donagoon!?
Tanya speeds up the car, as she drives menacingly to face Hilary.
Who Has Taken The Twins? What Will Tanya Do Next?
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bakedbean
06-04-2006, 21:27
Oh i wonder who has taken the twins another twist in Tanyas life im loving this hope the twins are okay
Who has got the kids :eek: Quick next part i need to know!
Who has the kids? hilary? the stalker? quick post the next bit, I hope they are safe
:eek: The children - who has them?? who's watching? So many questions.....next part required.....now!!
Jada-GDR
07-04-2006, 13:45
oh no! where's tanya's kids??? is it hilary? is it not? dun dun dun!
i think stupid old pattie should end up with NO ONE.
i'll read the rest just now :D
INT. JENKINS MANOR - EVENING
Hilary is making herself a cocktail at the bar. Classical music is playing, all is calm. Hilary sips a mouthful of her drink.
Tanya slams the door and charges in a rage.
Hilary: Tanya, what are you doing here?
Tanya: What the hell have you done with my kids!!! :angry:
Hilary: I dont know what your on about...
Tanya pushes Hilary into the bar in force, Hilary smashes into the glasses of spirits in the cabinet, shards of glass all over the floor. Tanya smashes Hilary's cocktail glass and points the jagged edge near Hilary's throat. Hilary gasps for breath in Panic.
Tanya: Dont you dare mess me about Hilary! Theyve gone missing! And i know you have something to do with it!!!
Hilary: (scared) I swear to you...i havent... please Tanya you've got to believe me...
Tanya: You've taken this too far you evil bitch! It was between you and me...never the kids! You'd better tell me what you've done with them! :angry:
Hilary: Tanya...i promise...i havent done anything to them...why would I? They are near enough my grandkids...i love them to peices...you've got to believe me...
Tanya: Believe you!? Your full of lies! How can i trust you!?
Hilary: Maybe you cant...but i swear...hand on heart... that I dont know where they are Tanya... come on you need to focus on finding them...
Tanya: Yeah...yeah i do..but i swear to god...i swear...if i find out you've got anything to do with this....It'll be more than a sharp glass in your throat! I'll make you suffer like hell!
Tanya removes the glass from Hilary's throat. Hilary gasps for breath in relief.
Hilary: (Venamous) You'll regret that bitch!
Gary walks into the room, oblivious of everything.
Gary: Tanya, what the hell's going on?
How Will Gary React To The Bad News? Has Tanya Over Stepped The Line With Hilary?
Oh what has happened with the kids? Has hilary planned this? More now i need to know ...
INT: JENKINS MANOR
Tanya is standing, still bitterly glaring at hilary. She hears Gary's voice behind her. She drops the glass onto the floor, narrowly missing Hilarys foot, yet still making her jump in shock. Tanya turns and stares at Gary, her eyes wellling up with tears...
Gary: Well? What the hells going on here?! Tanya?!
Tanya stares at Gary, in shock.
Gary: Well come on then! Whats so bad that you've got to.... well, do all this!!
Tanya: (megerly) They're.... they're gone...
Gary: (laughs slightly) Aprils fools day was last week, Tanya!! Come on, whose gone then?
Tanya: The kids...
Gary: To a party? Didn't realise they had a party today. Was i meant to buy a pressie for them to take...? ****, totally forgot..... come on Tanya, whats this got to do with hil-
Tanya: (interupts) For gods sake Gary, Listen! The kids have gone. They've... they've been taken...
Gary is silent for a moment...
Gary: Our... our kids?! Oh my god, Tanya, what.... what we gonna do??!!
Gary holds Tanya as she cries into him. He's eyes well up with tears, as Hilary sheepishly leaves the room, to leave them alone...
EXT: RED RUM PUB
Gary is running around outside the pub, asking random people frantically if they've seen the kids. Patrick and Natasha walk past- Natashas clinging onto his arm...
Gary: Patrick. Natasha... Dont ask questions, but have you seen my kids?!
Patrick: Your kids? (shakes head) Nope, dont think i have... have you Natasha..?
Natasha: I dont really look for them in all honesty...
Before Natasha finishes her sentence, Gary runs off, to ask other people...
INTERCUT
Tanya is banging on people's doors, also looking for the kids....
Tanya: (shouting) Melissa?! Jacob?! You in there?! (welling up with tears) Come on darlings, where are you?!
She continues down the street, banging on doors, and shouting for the kids. She goes past the Singh's house. Kash leans out the window...
Kash: For gods sake, woman. Some on us have work to do. We dont need all you faffing around out there!!
He slams the window shut. Tanya looks up at the shut window, and shouts towards it...
Tanya: Get a heart, Kash!!
She stands in the centre of the road, alone, with no one around her. She mumbles her kids names under her breath, and collapses onto her knees. She cries into her hands, mumbling...
Tanya: Melissa....Jacob...
Where are they??? They've got to find them!! Don't keep us in suspense....post...post...post!!!! (Please :D )
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Hilary is sweeping up the glass with a dustpan and brush, Richard is home and in a panic.
Richard: Well where on earth are they? They cant have just...gone...
Hilary: I have no idea...despite what Tanya might think
Hilary rubs her neck in pain.
Richard: She had no right to firghten you like...in your own home aswell..
Hilary: She's going trough a tough time though Richard...
Richard: Even so, there's still no excuse.
The door slams shut as Gary walks in, holding Tanya tight.
Richard: Oh my god Tanya are you okay!?
Richard runs over to Tanya and hugs her.
Hilary: (To Gary) Any luck?
Gary: No...we've looked everywhere...i just...just...cant believe it...who'd be so evil as to steal our kids!?
Hilary walks over to Tanya and gives her the cordless phone...
Hilary: Tanya sweetie...it's about time you handed it over to the police...you've done all you can...
Tanya glares at Hilary and snatches the phone off her. She dials 999
Tanya: Police please... yes...i would like to....(starts sobbing)...to...er...report two misisng persons...my little babies.... please...just help me...
Tanya bursts into floods of tears, Gary grabs the phone to continue the conversation. Hilary pours herself a shot of Vodka from the bar and necks it in one, rubbing her neck in pain, but with a sinister grin on her face.
Hilary!! Shes got to have something to do with their disappearance - what a bitch!!! And Richard, defending her!! *shakes head*
MARBAL NIGHTCLUB
Marcus is behind the bar, making a cocktail for a girl, whilst looking flirtciously into each others eyes. He passes it to her, and she leans over and kisses his check, before leaning on the bar suductivly. Ruby is the other end of the bar- she watches them, obivously annoyed. Chris comes up behind her..
Chris: Hey you!.... You dont look too happy there! Green eyed monster?! (He winks)
Ruby: Me? Jealous of.... her? Nah...
Chris: (laughs) Ok, Course you're not :cool:
Ruby: So whats a guy like you doing here alone? I'd have thought you'd have girls lining up around the Bay to come with you!
Chris: (laughs) Hardly! No, i just fancied i quick drink. You know, see who turns up...
Ruby looks around
Ruby: Looks like you're stuck with little old me then!
Ruby looks down, then looks up flirtaciously at him...
Chris: Dont put yourself down, Ruby! Your a fab girl...!
Ruby: Aww, bless ya!
Ruby hugs Chris sudectivly, and sips her drink. The camera zooms out, as they carry on flirting...
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Tanya and Gary are sitting next to each other on the sofa. Tanya is whiping tears from her eyes with an overused tissue. Gary is holding her hand. The police are in the room asking them questions.
PO: So then when was the last time you saw your children Miss Donagoon?
Tanya: First thing this morning... i ...err...dropped them off at the pre-school as usual... walked them to the gate, kissed them goodbye... and then...well...
PO: Yes?
Tanya: I havent seen them again (bursts into tears)
PO: I can understand how distressing this is for you Mrs Dongaoon...but me need to ask you these questions if there's any hope in finding you children...
Gary: Shouldnt you be out there!? Looking for them!? Instead of asking us questions!?
PO: Mr Donagoon...we have numerous men out on the streets looking for your children...but the questioning could speed up the search...
Gary: Yeah...im sorry...its just...ya know...its just so hard...
PO: We can understand... so Tanya...did you notice anything susciious when you picked them up?
Tanya: What apart from the fact they wasnt there!? :rolleyes: ... erm no...it was just so crowded..with cars and parents...as it usually is... no one saw anything...they just presumed i'd already took them...
PO: Could someone have taken them that knows them... a relative or friend...who has them safe and is unaware..?
Tanya: No...we've asked everyone we know...its got to be someone who hates us!
PO: And have you got any enemies Mrs Donagoon...anyone who'd want to do this to you both...or the children?
Tanya: God yeah... Craig Harvey...
The Police Officer starts to scribble down notes...
Tanya: Hilary Blackstock...
Gary: Oh god Tanya now your being ridiculous!
Tanya: Gary i just know shes got something to do with it! She hates my guts!
Gary: She doesnt! She's a good person...
Tanya: Yeah right...(to police) anyways can you just get out there and do something please!? We're just desperate...we want them back!!!
Yet Again Tanya begins to cry, Gary comforts her.
PO: I promise you Mr and Mrs Donagoon...we'll do the best we can to find your children...
Ok.. have caught up after weekend. What bitch Hilary is.. if she has the kids please say something. poor tanya is worried out of her mind.. Ruby bit of a slut but then again so is Chris who is supposely in love with Claire.. excellent work again guys :cheer::cheer:
Have just caught up poor tanya and gary :( Who has there kids and where are they!?
what a cruel thing to do to tanya. hilary is definitely behind it.
JustJodi
10-04-2006, 13:29
Hilary has got to be behind the missing kids, and another thing is she is really messing with poor Tanya's mind and I am sure that horrible boogey man is also behind it as well, Hilary and the boogeyman should both be put behind bars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
INT. SINGH HOUSE - MORNING
Kash is drinking cofee and reading his newspaper. Andonis is packing his bag for college.
Kash: (To Andonis) Shouldn't you be off to college by now!? Come on i want your grades to be boosted up...
Andonis: Yeah im on my way dad
Andonis kisses Sanjita goobye.
Andonis: See ya mom..
Sanjita: Bye son.
Andonis leaves the house. Kash gets up from the kitchen table and looks at his watch.
Kash: Its gone nine o clock...Ruby should be down the job centre!
Sanjita: Oh leave the girl be Kash..let her have a lie in!
Kash: Every moment she spends is bed is time wasted... she could get yourself a job in that time!
Sanjita: Is it any wonder she doesnt respect you, when your always on her case!?
Kash: Dont you dare speak to me in that manner Sanjita!
Kash storms up the stairs. He bangs on Ruby's door.
Kash: Get up out of bed you lazy girl! Come on open this door.
The door opens. Chris is standing there in only his boxers. Kash has a disgusted look on his face. Ruby walks up behind Chris and wraps her arms around him and smiles at Kash.
Ruby: Morning Dad...you alright?
Kash: What on earth is this idiot doing in my house! In your bedroom!?
Chris: Hey easy Kash mate, who you calling and idiot!?
Kash: Get out of my house you male whore!!! Taken advantage of my daughter like that!
Ruby hands Chris his clothes.
Chris: I think it was more the other way round :p .
Kash physically drags Chris down the stairs, opens the front door and throws him outisde in only his boxers.
INTERCUT:
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - MORNING
Claire looks out of the window and notcies the comotion. She sees Chris in just his boxers. She has a hurt look on her face. She runs up stairs and to the bathroom where she throws up into the toilet. :sick:
Has Kash Overstepped The Mark? Does Claire Still Have Feelings For Chris?
"throws up in the toilet" do I smell a pregnancy???? Romeo's or Chris's??? :hmm::hmm:
Jada-GDR
10-04-2006, 16:58
can i just ask - the pictures of amy and patrick in the character page look different to the ones on all the banners, are they the same people?
can i just ask - the pictures of amy and patrick in the character page look different to the ones on all the banners, are they the same people?
ive changed the actors now jada for them... they are now proper actors aidan quinn and susan sarandon as oppose to two unkown catalouge models. :)
Jada-GDR
10-04-2006, 17:28
ahh right thanks :D and keep up the good work :D
INT: JENKINS MANOR
Tanya is sitting on the stairs, holding her face in her hands, yet not crying. Gary is in the front room with Hilary and Richard. Richard hands him a whisky...
Richard: Here, have this...
Gary: Cheers. What we gonna do? They've.... they've gone...
Richard: Hey, no talking like that! Come on, think positive.
Hilary whispers, thinking no one can hear...
Hilary: Think positive my ****...
Richard: Hilary. Stop it. Just... just dont, darling.
Tanya looks over through to the living room, and sees Richard comforting Gary. She sees Hilary roll her eyes at Richard, and stand there smugly watching them. She storms into the room to confront Hilary...
Tanya: Why dont you see what she's like, Dad?!
Richard: What whose like?
Tanya: This bitch here! Shes lying! Its obvious! Shes so smug, so cunning...
Hilary: Honestly, Darl, you're delerious or something. You dont know what you're on about.
Tanya turns and pushes Hilary to the wall. She pins her against it, so she can't move, and shouts into her face...
Tanya: What the hell have you done to my kids, Hilary!? Games over. Just tell me!
Richard jumps up and pulls Tanya off Hilary, and forces her to sit down next to Gary...
Richard: You're going through the worse thing any mother could go through, i'll give you that. But how can you say this has got anything to do with Hil?! She's innocent in all this! Just... just leave her out of this, and get a serious grip on reality, Tanya. Before you do, or say something thats...
Tanya: (sinisterly) Thats what?
Richard:.... unforgiveable...
Jada-GDR
10-04-2006, 21:43
stupid stupid richard :nono: *gives big slap* (well it might not even be hilary's fault, notice i say MIGHT, but she's still a bitch)
INT. GREASY GARY'S - DAY
A woman is working behind the counter, due to Gary's absence. Marcus is drinking a coffe and listenting to his ipod. Ruby and Natasha come in and sit down next to Marcus, who turns off his i pod.
Ruby: Hiya babes, hows it going?
Marcus: Just taking it easy ya know...before tonight...
Natasha: Up all night every night...you'll get yourself a reputation...
Marcus: What like you and Patrick?
The group laugh.
Ruby: Ignore her...she's becoming a right old jesabelle of late
Natasha jokingly hits Ruby, but the conversation continues.
Marcus: From what i heard on the phone this morning Kash has been saying the same about you...
Ruby: Oh has he now!? Yeah well...
Marcus: Chris werent it!?
Natasha: What Chris!? No way! (Joking) Ruby how could you stoop so low!?
Ruby: Yeah well...i need someone to bide my time...until i get the man i want... my perfect partner.
Ruby eyes up Marcus as she says this. She smiles at him, but he does not get the hints at all.
Marcus: Does he exist!?... We good luck trying Rube!
Ruby runs outside in tears. Marcus is totally oblivious to what he has doen or said. He getsures for Natasha to explain to him.
Marcus: Wh...what have i done?
Natasha: Oh come on, you dont know?
Marcus: Err...no..?
Natasha: She's really into you big time....she loves you Marcus!
Marcus has a shocked look on his face.
Hilary just give Tanya her kids back and richard wise up, you are been played big time :angry:
Singh & sons convienece store
Tom, Nick and Chris are in the Shop, buying some food, whilst talking over the shop displays to each other...
Nick: What are we buying then...?
Tom: I dunno.... food i guess....
Nick: Well dur! Thats what they sell here, you nonce!
Nick playfully hits the back on Toms head. He ducks, making Nick send a stack on cereal flying across the shop floor. Chris notices, and quickly tries to put them back...
Nick: That was your fault, Nick!!
Tom: Shut up!!
Nick laughs, and notices Chris putting everything away quickly. He bends down to Chris's level to help...
Nick: Hey, Whats up? Its only Kash here, he aint gonna care if its a bit messed up...
Chris: Well, he might do, cause its me, like...
Nick: Why? What've ya gone and done?
Chris looks sheepishly to the floor, then looks at Nick, and says quietly...
Chris: Ruby....
Nick: Omg, you and Ruby? Seriously? Gawd, since when?!
Tom obviously didn't hear...
Tom: What about Ruby..?
Nick: Chris has only gone and shagged her!!
Chris: It wasn't like that, Nick!! It was...
Tom: It was what? Was it good? Is it luuuve?! :rotfl:
Chris: Wouldn't go that far, Tom!
Kash comes out from the back of the shop, notices the cereal on the floor. He stops himself from going over straight away, and stands out of view, listening...
Nick: So come on. Since when have you and Ruby been an item?!
Chris: Well.... i dunno really. It just sorta happened.... not that i'm complaining or anything!.... what a women...
Kash steps out from the counter, grabs Chris's hood on his jacket, and drags him to the door...
Kash: Thats my daughter you're talking about! Dont you dare talk about her like she's a cheap prostitute!
Chris: Kash! I....er.... i didn't mean it like...
Kash: I dont care what you meant it like! Get out of here, and leave my Ruby alone! You hear me?!
JustJodi
11-04-2006, 17:50
Uh Oh Kash is not pleased to have heard that about his daughter, I do not envy Ruby when he clashes with her about what he has over heard,, yikes
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE
Tanya is filing her nails obsesivley. Gary walks into the room with police officers.
Gary: Tanya...the police have come round...
Tanya: What again?... (To Police) Got anywhere since we last spoke eh!?
PO: Im afraid not Mrs Donagoon...
Tanya: Why the hell not!? What does it take for you lot to do your ruddy job properly!? Devon ent the bigger place in the world: finding two kids shouldnt be too ruddy difficult!
Gary: Tanya...
Tanya: No Gary! I've had it up to hear with these idiots... (to police) have you any idea how much worry me and him are going trough!? How many sleepless nights we've had! Our 3 year old children have been kidnapped! And you lot couldnt give a damn!
PO: I can assure you Mrs Donagoon we are doing the best we can to find your...
Tanya: The best you can do!? I'd hate to see you at your worst! You've been investigating for over a ruddy week! Have you even got any leads yet!? Huh!?
PO: No we haven't Mrs Donagoon...
Tanya: :rolleyes: (To Self) Why am i not suprised?
PO: Which is why we need your help...the pair of you...
Gary walks over to Tanya and holds her, as the pair look at the police.
PO: We've searched the entire geogrpahical area, and followed all leads you have given us...but nothing has come of it... we need to find new leads...new evidence...new witnesses...
Gary: Yeah, how can we help with tha tough, we've told you all we know?
PO: We want you both to hold a press conference...asking the public for any information regarding the whereabouts of your children...
Tanya: A press conference...
Tanya stares at Gary in worry.
bakedbean
11-04-2006, 20:01
Oh this is getting more and more addictive loving this storyline long live and reign Devon Seas baby
INT. SINGH HOUSE - NIGHT
Kash slams the front door shut and marches into the house, throwing his large coat onto the sofa. Sanjita comes in to see what the comotion is.
Sanjita: Bad dady at work hun?
Kash: Bad doesnt even cover it Sanjita!
Sanjita: (Concerned) Why what's up!?
Kash: What...other than me being subjected to listenging to the local males mocking Ruby's sexual exploits!?
Sanjita: What?
Kash: That "Chris" Telling the full on details to his friends, about him and Ruby's dirty shennigans, that happened under my roof may i add!
Sanjita: Kash... if you go off at her she'll only go worse to resent you...
Kash: The stupid girl! She needs to learn some discipline! She is nothing but a cheap little tart! Shes tarnsihing the family name!
Sanjita: That's a bit of an over reaction!
Kash: No it is not! You may not mind your daughter being discussed about like a prostitute, but i do! I'm going to make sure she settles down, the only way i know how...
Sanjita: Dont make no harsh decisons Kash...
Kash: I have enough contacts in India...I'm going to arrange a marriage for her...
Sanjita has a total look of shock on her face.
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE NIGHT
Tanya is sleeping. All of a sudden she hears a smash of glass and the screaming of her children.
Melissa/Jacob: Mommy! Mommy! Mommy!
Tanya stirs slowly, she hears her kids once more and runs out of the bedroom in delight. She tries to wake Gary but he is sleeping. She runs into the living room where the children are, but someone violently swings a crowbar against her head.
Tanya falls to the floor unconcious, her head pouring with blood..
CUT TO:
Tanya stirs slowly, the entire room in a blur. Everything is moving fast, and nothing can be seen clearly. The vague outlines of Gregg, Hilary and Craig can be seen.
Tanya: Hilary!?...Hilary!?
Hilary laughs evily as Tanya slowly crawls across the floor to her children.
Craig: They're gonna die Tanya! We're gonna kill them! They're gonna die!
Gregg grabs a sharp knife and brutally stabs Melissa and Jacob infront of Tanya.
TANYA: (Sceams) NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tanya passes out in agony.
CUT TO:
Tanya has vivid images of her kids being stabbed, repeating in her head, the evil laughs and muttering of Hilary, Craig and Gregg can be heard. Tanya starts to breath heavily, as she hears Gary's voice.
Gary: Tanya... Tanya...
Tanya wakes up in a panic. Her face is sweating, she is breathing heavily.
Gary: Bad dream?
Tanya: They killed them Gary...they killed the kids!
Gary grabs hold of Tanya.
Gary: Dont worry....it's was just a bad dream Tan...come on... up you get... we need to go and do this Press Conference.
Tanya gets out of the bed and heads to the bathroom. In her head she can hears Craig's menancing whispers.
Craig: They're gonna die Tanya! We're gonna kill them! They're gonna die!
JustJodi
12-04-2006, 17:07
That was quite a vivid night mare that poor Tanya had,She is going to look the perfect terrified mom during the press conference !!!!!
excellent part. i was sitting on the edge of my seat hoping it was a dream.
oh my god.. Poor Tanya.. how do you recover from a dream like that?
Jada-GDR
12-04-2006, 17:40
Kash: No it is not! You may not mind your daughter being discussed about like a prostitute, but i dont! don't you mean "I do"? sorry, i'm being picky :D
INT: HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE- morning
Tanya is sitting on the edge of the bed in her nightdress, staring at a picture of the kids. Her eyes well up with tears again. Gary walks in, tying up his tie. He doesn't notice her tears...
Gary: Come on, Tan. We need to get going soon...
Tanya wipes her tears from her eyes. Gary notices this time, and sits down next to her. He puts his arm around her, and she cries into his shoulder...
Tanya: I can't do this... its all too much...
Gary: We'll get through this, Tanya... I know that dream freaked you out but this press conference will find them... I'm sure it will...
Tanya: But i can't do it... i can barely handle not breaking down when i'm here... how can i do it in front of the press?! I'm not strong enough Gary...
Gary: You're the strongest person i know Tanya. I love you, you mean the world to me... we can get through this, Tanya. You and Me. Together...
Tanya: I haven't slept in days, Gary. I spend all day trawling the streets for Jacob and Melissa... and all night thinking about them... i haven't got the energy anymore... I can't handle it. I just.... i just want my babies back in my arms...
Tanya cries into Gary once again...
Gary: You need a break... maybe once we've done this conference you could just stay here and...
Tanya: But i can't just stay here! Those police people are useless.... i need to go out myself and find them... i'm their mother, they need me. I need them... I should.... i should be out there right now!...
Gary: I know you feel like you need to be out there looking for them 24/7... but you can't. Tanya, you've spent every day and night since... since it happened looking for them. You need a break... cause otherwise when they're back.... when they're back they wont have their mummy to play with....
Tanya looks at Gary...
Tanya: I can't just sit and do nothing...
Tanya tries to hold back the tears, she tries to get dressed. She opens her wardrobe, a teddy bear falls out on the floor. Tanya grabs it, and cuddles in close to her, as she cries on the floor. Gary kneels down next to her, and puts his arms around her...
Gary: We'll get through this. Our kids will be safe. I'm sure they will. But we need to do this conference... You're the strongest person i know, Tanya. You need to show that... to me. to the press. (pauses)... to our kids.
JustJodi
12-04-2006, 17:51
I sort of figured that Kash would come up with the arranged marriage thing, but will the chosen groom take on DAMAGED GOODS ??????
don't you mean "I do"? sorry, i'm being picky :D
well spotted! :D :lol: I've changed it now! :rotfl:
Jada-GDR
12-04-2006, 18:14
well spotted! :D :lol: I've changed it now! :rotfl:lol :D ... sorry i'm being picky. devon seas is very good :bow:
:eek: My gawd poor Tanya, I hope the kids are alright!
And Kash is doing my nut in!
More soon x
Poor Tayna.. Where is Richard in all this? he has loads of cash, it is his grandchildren surely he can find the manpower to search and put up a reward for the return of the kids... Craig or Hilary better not have done anything to those kids :angry: .. i feel sorry for her, they say that the chances of finding someone, especially a child, alive after 48 hours is slim.. fingers crossed for a slim chance...
INT. BAYMOORE HOLIDAY VILLAGE - DAY
The hall is filled with journalists and reporters. A table with 5 chairs at the front lay empty.
Out come Tanya, Gary, the Leading PO, Richard and Hilary. The cameras flash. Tanya tries to sheild her face from them, it is clear she has been crying.
PO: Ladies and Gentlemen of the press...i would like to thank you all for coming today... on 6th April 2006, Jacob and Melissa Donagoon were adducted from the Baymoore Day Centre. Today we are urging for any witnesses to come forward with evidence. I shall now hand you over to the twins' parents: Tanya and Gary Donagoon.
Gary: Erm...thanks... erm well we'd just like to say a few words to you all day...in hope that the culprit comes forward...or we find some more evidence...
Tanya: We really love our children...more than any other parents in the world....(cries) it is breaking our heart to be apart from them... we just love them so much... (cries)
Tanya is unable to cope anymore, bursting into tears, Richard comforts her as Gary continues to speak to the press.
Gary: The twins have always been so full of life...energtic and happy... our home and our lives feel empty without them... we miss them so much... and all we want is for them to be returned to use, safe and well... We, and the police, have explored all avenues and we havent yet had any luck in finding them...we urge anyone with evidence, how ever minor they make think it is to come forward... we need everybody's help if we are to find Melissa and Jacob...and if you are the culprit...who has our children...then please give them back... we wont be mad...we will be thankful...we love our kids and want them back...no need them back... thank you
The press are eager to ask questions
PO: Thank you... has anybody got any questions?
Matt Arnold: Hi, Matt Arnold, GMTV... your father Richard Taylor, grandfather of the children...is a multi millionaire...how come he hasnt invested any of his money into organising mass search parties or...?
Richard: Erm thats where you have all been misinformed... I would like to make it clear to the press that i am other a £250,000 reward to anyone who brings forward evidence that leads to the conviction of the adbuctor.
Jenny Frost: Have you any ideas who might be involved with this!? Is it motivated to the Taylor family wealth... a ransom...or a vendetta!?
Tanya stares at Hilary and is about to speak. Gary answers the question instead.
Gary: At this stage we have had no communciation from the adbuctor...so we are presuming it isnt a kidnap... we have no ideas who could have done this, but as we've already said we urge them to come forward as soon as possible....
PO: That's all thank you everybody...we will provide more information as and when we get it...
Tanya stares at Gary in depression.
Gary: Dont worry Tan, its all over now...now we should get some results...
Excellent Bry.. more please.. I need to know who has the kids
Who has them?! Are we going to find out?! Where are they? I need to know!!! :D :D
More soon guys, this just keeps getting better and better
INT: SINGH'S HOUSE
Kash is on the phone, talking to another distant Indian relation. He puts the phone down, and jots something onto the edge of the newspaper. He puts it down, with a satisfied grin, and calls to Sanjita...
Kash: Sanjita! Where is my cup of tea? I told you i wanted it by the time...
Sanjita: Calm down dear....
Sanjita hands Kash a cup of tea. He doesn't thank her. She rolls her eyes, and sits on the sofa, flicking through TV channels...
Sanjita: Who was that on the phone then?
Kash: A friend from India...
Sanjita: Oh yeah? Any news...?
Kash: Well, as you asked.... Its about Ruby.
Sanjita: Kash! You.... you haven't have you?!
Kash: (nods) Sanjita, i told you what i was going to do. Dont question by intentions, woman!
Sanjita: So.... So Ruby's gonna...
Kash: Ruby will be married. This time next week. The plans are all set- i've found a lovely young man. An interlectual. His parents- top class. Yes... he's perfect for her. Intelligent young man, good parents.... She'll love them...
Sanjita: And... If she doesn't?
Kash says nothing, and gives Sanjita a glare.
Kash: She has no choice, Sanjita.
Ruby is not going to be impressed.. I can see her leaving and never returning.. Kash reconsider this if you don't want to lose your daughter :angry:
EXT: BAYMOORE HOLIDAY VILLAGE
Tanya runs out of the hall, crying. Gary and Richard rush after her. Gary touches her shoulder, she flinches...
Gary: Tanya, I...-
Tanya: just... Just leave me alone. All of you... Just, let me be alone...
Tanya runs around the corner, and stops by a wall. She cries into her hands, and leans against the wall. Someone comes up behind her...
Tanya: I told you all, i just want to be alone!!
Tanya turns, and sees Gregg behind her...
Tanya: Oh... Sorry, i thought... I thought it was...oh, never mind...
Tanya cries again into her hands, Gregg puts his arms around her...
Gregg: Come on, Tanya. This isn't like you...!
Tanya: My kids haven't been taken before, thats why!! do you realise what i've....what i've just had to do?!
Gregg: Yes....Come on, i'm sure they're fine. No harm come to them...
Tanya: And you'd be the one to ask about that one, wouldn't you!?
Gregg: Meaning..?
Tanya: Well it could be you thats.... thats taken them! My two little babies... I.... I just... i just want them back, Gregg! If you know anything.... if it was you... then -
Gregg: (interupts) Come on, tanya. You're getting histerical...
Tanya: What do you expect?! My kids have been taken. And for all i know, they've been taken by you!!
Gregg hugs her again, she flinches away...
Gregg: All i've done for you, is because i love you Tanya....
Tanya looks at him, disgusted. A look of realisation comes over her face. It could have been Gregg. Shes runs away from him to be alone, both shocked and upset. Gregg watches her run, with a menacing grin.
Why does kash feel he has controk over everyone he doesn't Pffft <_<
And please let the kids be okay.
EDIT: Does gregg have them :eeK: oh gawd
Gregg: All i've done for you, is because i love you Tanya....
Tanya looks at him, disgusted. A look of realisation comes over her face. It could have been Gregg. Shes runs away from him to be alone, both shocked and upset. Gregg watches her run, with a menacing grin.
that ******* has the kids.. give them back you low life piece of ****!!!!!!!!
that ******* has the kids.. give them back you low life piece of ****!!!!!!!!
Getting into this story, are we?! :rotfl: :rotfl:
Getting into this story, are we?! :rotfl: :rotfl:
always did, have you seen just under my name.. I am yours and Bry's no 1 fan!!! bring on more :cheer::cheer::cheer:
Jada-GDR
14-04-2006, 14:25
Kash = Bum. i mean what father would do that? well, yeah, i know many do, but HOW CAN THEY??? IS THIS NOT A FREE WORLD?
INT. MARBAL UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Marcus is watching the tv, theres a knock at the door. He goes to answer it. It's Ruby.
Marcus: Ruby...
Ruby: You've left me god knows how many missed calls?
Marcus: Yeah, we'll I've been trying to get intouch with you... you've been avoiding my calls...
Ruby: Yeah well you know where I live...
Marcus: You havent been in...
There's an awkward silence as Marcus closes the door. The pair walk into the flat.
Marcus: Look... Natasha told me... how you feel about me...
Ruby: Yeah well she shouldnt have!
Marcus: No...it's best i know... so i can sort it out...
Ruby: Yeah well nothings needs sorting out! I know nothings going to happen...but i cant help the way i feel about you!
Marcus touches her cheak with affection.
Marcus: Your a pretty girl...a funny girl...but your my cousin...it would be so...complicated...
Ruby: Is that a no then?
There is a silence, as the pair look into each other's eyes...
Marcus: I dont know...
Ruby: Well let me make my mind up for you...
Ruby goes in for a kiss, the pair passionatley kiss as Marcus pushes her onto the sofa. All of a sudden they hear a key in the door. They get up and act innocent.
In walks Kash and Iqbal.
Ruby: Dad!? What you doing here?
Kash: I've come to tell you that you need to pack your bags...both of you
Marcus: Why what for?
Kash: We're off to India...for a wedding...we've off to India...tomorrow.
Marcus and Ruby stare into each others eyes...
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I don't know what to say! Apart from i don't like kash *sticks tongue out* neh! He can't make ruby marry anyone.
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INDIA WEEK!
Look forward to an entire week of the Singh Family In India.
Will Kash force Ruby into an arranged marraige?
Will Marcus and Ruby admit their true feelings?
Who's had an affair in the past?
Will the Singh Family stand up to bully Kash once and for all?
Will the Singh Family stand up to bully Kash once and for all?
God lets hope so - for everyones sake! :p
INT. EXETER AIPRORT - MORNING
Kash, Sanjita, Ruby, Iqbal, Marcus, Andonis and Mohammed are all in the cafe at the airport, drinking coffee, awaiting their flight.
Marcusing is talking to Andonis who looks down.
Marcus: Hey, whats up mate...you should be happy..your off to India for a few days...
Andonis: (sarcastic) Oh...i can hardly wait...
Marcus: Mind you a family wedding isnt on the top of my wish list either...
Andonis: I've only just broke up with Emma...i could do without the romantic love ceremonies, know what i mean?
Marcus: Yeah mate... well it's gonna take time to get over Emma...she obviously meant the world to you...
Marcus sees Ruby catching glances at him whilst talking to her parents and Iqbal.
Marcus: Look when we get back from India...I'll take you out on the pull...show you what you've been missing out on...alright?
Andonis: Yeah i suppose...
Andonis cheers up a bit. Ruby hears what Marcus has just said, and speak loudly to make sure he hears.
Ruby: Oh i cant wait for this wedding you know... so romantic... i just love it when people are honest about their feelings for one another...
Kash: Definatley...honesty is always the best policy...
Ruby smiles inncoently, unaware of Kash's scheme. Sanjita gives Kash dirty looks of dissaproval, but he ignores them.
Jada-GDR
15-04-2006, 12:42
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INDIA WEEK!
Look forward to an entire week of the Singh Family In India.
Will Kash force Ruby into an arranged marraige?
Will Marcus and Ruby admit their true feelings?
Who's had an affair in the past?
Will the Singh Family stand up to bully Kash once and for all?wow looks exciting and that's a lovely picture! i wish i was going with them! :D
INT. EXETER AIRPORT - DAY
The Singhs are walking down the coridoor, ready to board the plane. Sanjita still has an angry face.
Kash: Cheer up Sanjita... your going to a wedding for heavens sake!
Sanjita: Forgive me for not being all smiles... but i happen to find it disguting the way you are treating our daughter!
Kash: (under breath) Sanjita, this is nor the place or the time to be having this disuccion!
Sanjita: What scared that she'll find out!?
Kash: I am not scared of anyone, especially my own daughter! Look right I am doing will benefit the entire family...
Sanjita: And what about Ruby!? The person it'll actually affect...
Kash: What about her!?
Sanjita: You dont see anything wrong in enforcing a marraige onto her!? A marraige to someone she hasnt ever meet!?
Kash: I'm aware of teh circumstances Sanjita...and i know its the best option...she'll thank me for it eventually...
Kash boards the plane. Sanjita shakes her head in disgust and hesitantly follows.
INT. INDIAN HOTEL - DAY
The Singhs walk into the hotel lobby and check in. Mohammed runs off to the bookshelevs and picks out a book to read.
Andonis: Have they got a pool here dad?
Kash: They should do the price im paying for us to stay here...
Andonis: I'm off to find one then...
Andonis walks off...
Kash: Andonis!
Sanjita: Oh just leave him Kash, he justs wants to enjoy his time here... you deserve him that at least...
Kash: I beg your pardon?
Sanjita: Well you've made him split with his girlfriend... just give him a break...
Kash shrugs off this commnet as a family of Indians walk up to them...
Kash: Oh its the Khans...
Sanjita: Who?
Kash: Our future in laws...
Kash walks over to them and shakes their hand.
Ajit: Kashmire! Long time no see... a pleasure to meet you again...
Kash: You pleasure is all mine Ajit, all prepared for the big event?
Kash: Yes of course... you know my son... Rajan dont you?
Kash shakes hands with Rajan...
Rajan: May i see Rubina? Have a look at my future wife?
Kash: Of course... (calls over to Ruby) Ruby... could you come over here for a second.
Ruby: Yeah sure
Ruby walks over to the group with a smile on her face.
Kash: Ruby...these are the Khans... our future in laws...
Ruby: (Shakes hands) Hi, a pleasure to meet you all, i cant wait until the wedding...
Kash: Neither can I, it will be good to see your cousin Kamala get married...
Ajit and Rajan have a confused look on their face. Kash makes eye contact with them assuring them everything is fine.
Sanjita looks on at the scene in disgutst, she shakes her head in disgust and storms off. Iqbals sees this and follows her in concern.
:eek: kash is evil *nods* i don't like him! You tell him Sanjita, and poor ruby!
EXT: INDIAN HOTEL
Sanjita is standing on the grounds of the Indian Hotel, looking out over the view. Iqbal comes up behind her...
Iqbal: What was all that about?
Sanjita doesn't reply. She looks out at the scenery, before replying...
Sanjita: Its beautifull out here isn't it... You know, i thought i could stop him. Make him see that she doesn't deserve this. When we got here, like....
Iqbal: Your not making sense...
Sanjita: I shouldn't have let it get this far... I've been stupid. So, so stupid. And now...
Iqbal: Whats going on?! You can tell me...
Sanjita: ...And now its too late...
Iqbal: Too late for what?!
Sanjita: That family... they're.... they're...
Iqbal: Oh yeah, thats the groom isn't it? They seem alright enough...
Sanjita: you really think so? Good enough for....for...
Iqbal: For what?!
Sanjita: Ruby...
Iqbal: (laughs) Well, you know, i think she'd have a few things to say first! I dunno really... anyway, its not like its true or...
Sanjita: It is. Kash.... Kash is making her have an aranged marriage, and... and i dont know what to do....
Sanjitas eyes well up with tears...
Iqbal: he's doing WHAT?! That man?! He's... he's marrying Ruby?! What does she think about this?!
Sanjita: She doesn't know.... What am i gonna do?!
Iqbal looks shocked, while he comforts Sanjita...
What will Iqbal do? How will Ruby react?
Jada-GDR
16-04-2006, 19:01
Iqbal should beat him up. yeah. probably wont happen though. and sanjita would be like "yeah!" and ruby would be like "yeah!" and I would be like "YEAH!!! WHOOOOO!!!"
tell ruby and let her like disown Kash or something ohhh yes i like........
more sil vous plait! x
EXT: INDIAN HOTEL
Iqbal is still on the balcony of the hotel, reeling from the shock of what Sanjita told him. Kash walks past, looking for Sanjita. He walks over...
Kash: Have you seen Sanjita? She stormed off earlier...
Iqbal rolls his eyes...
Iqbal: As if you care...
Kash: Excuse me?!
Iqbal: You dont care about her! You dont care about any of us!
Kash: Everything i have done is for hte benefit of this family. I've worked my whole life for...
Iqbal: (interupts) And yet, you insist on destroying your own daughters life!
Kash: I.... I dont know what your on about. Now listen here, Iqbal. I have raised my family...
Iqbal: (inerupts again) Oh, dont act all the innocent. I know, alright? So no more screwing around. I mean, come on! Do you have no morals?! How can you do this to her? To Ruby of all people!
Kash:I've done what is best for my daughter. She is my daughter, i know what she needs.
Iqbal: Stop kidding yourself! You just can't accept that she's a normal young woman! Not everyone is like Sanjita- not everyone will bow down to you. Let Ruby have her own life. Let her make her own mistakes. Dont try and rule her like this!
Kash: I'm protecting my daughter. And this is none of your buisness. All the plans are set, nothing can change that now.
Iqbal: Are you deliberatly trying to treat your family like ****?!
Marcus overhears this, and walks out in a rage...
Marcus: OK, can someone tell me what the hell is going on?
EXT: INDIAN HOTEL
Iqbal and Kash are staring at each other, hatefully, on the balcony. Marcus is standing nearby...
Marcus: Well? Whats going on?
Kash: Never mind, its none of your buisness.
Iqbal: Your can't deny this anymore, Kash. He has a right to know as much as anyone else.
Marcus: I am here you know!
Iqbal: Oh really? The hitman must have got the wrong address :rolleyes: You deserve to know. This.... this man is making Ruby have an arranged marriage.
Marcus: He's doing WHAT?!
Iqbal: An arranged marriage. That family in there... well, meet the in-laws.
Marcus: How the hell can you do this? She's your daughter, Kash, not your possession!
Kash: I'm doing whats right for -
Marcus: (interupts) For yourself, thats who! How can you stand by and do that to her? Destroy her life like that! Its sick, Kash. Just sick.
Kash: Its a well known Indian tradition.
Marcus: My **** it is! That went out the window years ago! You need to get a grip on things, Kash, and let her make her own mistakes.
Kash: I know exactly what i'm doing.
Marcus: Well you obviously dont, if you'll do this to your own flesh and blood! Or maybe someone needs to makes you get a grip.
Marcus clenches this hand, and goes to punch Kash. Iqbal grabs his hand before he manages this, and twists it back, forcing Marcus to turn the other direction. He holds his hand behind Marcus's back, and drags him away. Marcus shouts...
Marcus: He deserves this, Iqbal!...... You'll get whats coming to you, Kash!
INT: INDIAN HOTEL FOYER
Sanjita is sitting in the foyer, having her hand henaed. She stares into space, reflecting on whats happened. Kash storms into the foyer, and drags her away, leaving a dark sploge on her hand...
Sanjita: What the hell are you.....(coughs)... look what you've done to my hand...
Kash: I'm going to tell you this once, and never again. Dont you dare go around telling people my personal buisness in the future, do you hear me?
Sanjita: I just... i didn't know what... i was confused... i just...
Kash: What did you think you were doing? What lead you to do such a stupid thing, woman!
Sanjita: She's my daughter, i just want to see her happy! Not dragged into some forced marriage...
Kash: I know whats best for her, i'm her father. Dont you dare think otherwise!
Sanjita: And i'm her mother! I gave birth to her!
Kash: That doesn't mean anything. I've decided whats going to happen, and thats the end of it.
Sanjita: So, what? I dont even get a say? And what about Ruby?!
Kash: Decisions like this are too much for you two to handle. Now let that be the end of this..
Kash storms off through the reception. Sanjita calls after him. Kash stops to listen
Sanjita: You know what, Kash. I hate being married to you. I hate it more then you'll ever know.
Sanjita rushes off in the other direction, confused and hurt, leaving Kash reeling in the reception. He notices everyones staring at him.
Kash: Just leave me and her alone. All of you!
:angry: I hate kash Grrrr! Iqbal should of just let marcus hit him, and poor sanjita.
Ohhh that man makes me what to slap him so hard!! his family should just up and leave and let him stay in india... :angry::angry::angry::angry::angry:
Jada-GDR
18-04-2006, 16:02
Ohhh that man makes me what to slap him so hard!! his family should just up and leave and let him stay in india... :angry::angry::angry::angry::angry:they should run off home with his money and passport and leave him there!
Well, as you all probably know, Bry's away this week. But fear not- Devon Seas will go on! :rotfl: The episodes written today (Tuesday), Wednesday and Thursday have all been written by him, and sent to me to post. Friday's, Saturday's and Sunday's will be by me, then everything will go back to normal next week. So, anyway, thought i'd just say so that you lot all know whose done the writing :rotfl:
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INT. INDIAN HOTEL – NIGHT
Iqbal throws Marcus into their hotel room, after holding him back with resistance.
Iqbal: Do you mind telling me what that was about back there eh!?
Marcus: What about it!?
Iqbal: You were calling your uncle Kash every name under the sun!
Marcus: Yeah well… he deserved it…
Iqbal: Even so… you know he’s not the kind to behave like that too… he’ll never forgive you…
Marcus: I couldn’t give a damn about it…I hate the man!
Iqbal: Marcus…
Marcus: No dad, he ent got no rights to treat Ruby in that way!
Iqbal: Yeah but…
Marcus: There’s no buts! And I know you agree with me cus you were having a go at him before I walked in!
Iqbal: I’m his brother! Im trying to knock a bit of sense into him!
Marcus: So was I…
Iqbal: Look it’s bets to leave Kash and Ruby to sort the matter out between themselves…
Marcus: Kash is a bully… Ruby wont be able to hand him! She needs by help!
Iqbal: Why the sudden enthusiasm to defend Ruby!?
Marcus: Because I love her!!!
Iqbal: Yeah…I love her aswell…she’s my neice…but…
Marcus: No dad… you don’t understand me… I love her more than a cousin… I’ve fallen in love with her!
Iqbal is stunned at this comment.
What will Iqbal do next!?
oh my god.. marcus loves Ruby.. maybe they will end up getting married :cheer::cheer:
Jada-GDR
18-04-2006, 18:28
what'll kash think when he finds out :eek: i dont want to imagine it...
:eek: Marcus loves Ruby! :ee;: What will they all say about that??
INT. INDIAN HOTEL – NIGHT
Kash paces his hotel room, angered at what Sanjita has said to him. Sanjita stands on the spot, worried at Kash’s anger.
Kash: I can not believe what I am hearing from you Sanjita!?
Sanjita: I didn’t mean it…
Kash: Then why did you say it!?
Sanjita: It wasn’t a spare of the moment thing…
Kash: “I Hate Being Married To You”… its not the kind of thing you casually drop into a conversation…
Sanjita: Kash…please…just forget I said it…
Kash: There must be some truth in it! Something to make you say that!
Sanjita: Ok…maybe there is… sometimes I feel that way… when you shout at me… belittle me… take charge of the family…
Kash: I am the head of the family! It is my duty to control and discipline!
Sanjita starts to cry.
Kash: And now you come here with your tears…trying to get sympathy and affection from me… well you shall not get it!
Sanjita: Kash..please…just don’t shout…speak amicably…
Kash: Amicably!? What have you done for me to speak to you amicably!? You have stated that you are unhappy with our marriage! Well I tell you something for nothing you’d better get used to it and accept it! A marriage is a union of soles... for eternity! I meant my wedding vows! And I shall remain married to you until the day I die! You will not get rid of me that easily!
Sanjita breaks down into tears and runs out of the hotel room.
Will Sanjita work trough her marriage, or has Kash over-stepped the line?
God poor sanjita :( Kash is evil, if i were sanjita i would get out and move as far away as possible from kash!
INT. INDIAN HOTEL – NIGHT
Marcus and Iqbal are sitting outside on chairs on the balcony of their room. In the distant is a view of the Tajh Mahal. A few minutes have passed…
Marcus: I’ve always felt that connection between us…even since we were kids… I was so close to her… but I never for one moment thought she’d feel the same way… but I found out recently that she does…
Iqbal: Look son, Im not like Kash…. Im not going to tell you how to live your life…but you understand, this cant happen don’t you?
Marcus: Why though?
Iqbal: Well other than the obvious...?
Marcus: It’s as simple as two people loving each other… whats wrong with that?
Iqbal: It’s just…not… the done thing…
Marcus: Cousin’s can get married dad… the Queen married her cousin!
Iqbal: I could grow to the idea… I could accept it… but it just wouldn’t work out… the family wouldn’t allow it… the whole of Baymoore wouldn’t accept it… is it worth loosing all your friends and family over?
Marcus: If we were together…yes…
Iqbal: She’s not the only woman in the world Marc… you could find yourself another girl… be happy with her… have a non complicated relationship…
Marcus: I don’t want another girl tough… I want Ruby… I Love Ruby
Iqbal: Im not doubting that… im just saying… in the long run it would be better to forget about it… move on… avoid all the troubles….
Marcus: So what do you expect me to do? Just let Kash bully her into this marriage…
Iqbal: If you think it will deter you from staying with her… then I’d advise it Marcus…
Iqbal gets up.
Iqbal: The decision is yours Marc… you make your own choices… just be aware of the consequences…
Iqbal leaves. Marcus is left alone to dwell on what his father has said.
Will Marcus follow his heart or his father’s advice?
Follow your heart.. bit mad to marry your cousin but if that is how you feel.. go for it
EXT. INDIAN HOTEL (RIVERSIDE) – NIGHT
Andonis is sitting on the bank of the river, his trousers rolled up, dipping his feet in the river. He is skimming stones. Ruby walks over to him, hands her pockets.
Ruby: What you doing out here on your own bruv?
Andonis turns around and sees Ruby walking towards him…
Andonis: Hi Rube’…I was just having a few minutes to myself you know…
Ruby: I know what you mean It can get a bit mental at times…especially when our families involved.
Andonis half laughs. Ruby sits next to him.
Ruby: How are you Don’? You’ve it hard the past few days ent ya?
Andonis: Yeah… I loved her so much… it’s hurting me…
Ruby: It’s about time dad realised what effect his ways had on us… he reckons its for our best interests…but it really isn’t…
Andonis: I sometimes doubt if I should listen to him… if I should just ignore him…
Ruby: You should do what makes you feel happy…
Andonis: I suppose…love conquers all…even your parents opinions…
This makes Ruby realise that Kash’s opinions are not important. She stares at the river in reflection, then smiles: her mind clear.
what's ruby going to do now? god i'd hate to have a father like kash.
INT. INDIAN HOTEL – NIGHT
Iqbal walks outside, a drink in his hand from the bar. There is a beautiful view of the Indian sunset. He notices Sanjita sitting alone, crying. He walks up to her and puts his hand on her shoulder.
Iqbal: Sanjita…
Sanjita turns around in shock, and whipes her eyes quickly.
Sanjita: Iqbal…didn’t see you there…
Iqbal: We’re making a habit of this…
Sanjita: Oh what?
Iqbal: You crying…and me finding you…
Sanjita: Oh…it’s nothing…
Iqbal: Didn’t look that way…
Iqbal sits down next to Sanjita at one of the tables.
Iqbal: Come on…we’re both adults here… you can trust me… what’s up?
Sanjita: It’s Kash… he’s just getting to me…
Iqbal: Whats new? He gets to all of us every now and again…
Sanjita: Yeah well im sick of it Iqbal… every minute or every day he’s telling me what to do… how to behave…. And he’s running our kids lives!
Iqbal: He means well… in his own weird way… but it’s just life Sanjita… nothings easy…you have to take the rough with the smooth…
Sanjita: I just don’t think I can do it any more… (cries) I’m just too weak to handle it anymore….
Iqbal whipes her eyes with a tissue and holds her hand in support.
Iqbal: You can… you’ve got your friends…your kids… you’ve got me…
Sanjita looks up at him with puffy eyes. They stare into each other’s eyes for a while. Iqbal leans forward and kisses her.
oh my god, talk about keep it in the family... :eek:
JustJodi
19-04-2006, 14:21
oh my god, talk about keep it in the family... :eek:
Oh dear Sanjita is doing a NO NO :nono: ...wonder what her reaction will be on the next episode ? Wonder if Ruby is gonna throw a spanner in daddys "well meant" plans :hmm:
INT. INDIAN HOTEL – NIGHT
Sanjita and Iqbal continue to kiss. All of a sudden Sanjita pulls away.
Sanjita: No I cant do this…
She awkwardly turns her face away from Iqbal.
Iqbal: Why not?
Sanjita: Im sorry…I just shouldn’t have… forget it…
Iqbal: You kissed me… I cant just forget that….
Sanjita: Well you’d better had…
Iqbal: Why did you respond if you didn’t want it to happen…
Sanjita: I did… I do… but…what if Kash found out?
Iqbal: (Laughs to self) Why you so concerned about Kash… he’s just had you in tears…again…
Sanjita: Because he’s my husband….I’m meant to remain loyal to him…regardless of how he treats me… his lecture was right… a marriage is for life…
Iqbal: That’s not stopped you all them times before… what are you so scared of all a sudden?
Sanjita: You!… I’m scared that if I get close to you again it’ll end in tears… like last time… when you went back to India with Hemangi…
Iqbal: That’s not going to happen again… I come back to Baymoore for you… I believe there’s something there…
Sanjita: Is there?
Iqbal: We’ve been on and off for over 20 years Sanjita…there’s got to be surely…
Sanjita: It’s a big decision your asking me to make…it’s going to take time for me to decide.
Sanjita picks up her handbag and walks off, leaving Iqbal alone. He takes a deep sigh.
Who will Sanjita choose?
:eek: it has been going on for ages.. didn't see that coming... excellent job here Bry and abi
Jada-GDR
19-04-2006, 18:19
Wonder if Ruby is gonna throw a spanner in daddys "well meant" plans :hmm:or in his you-know-what, that would be preferrable
god i have missed a few!
Marcus and ruby, together! *nods*
And jees :eek: didn't see that kiss coming, who will she chose more soon
and well done x
ok, ok i lose the bet. I said that episode would get an "awww" reaction. Bry said it would get a ":eek:" reaction. Guess i lost!! :( :rotfl:
Jada-GDR
19-04-2006, 19:06
ok, ok i lose the bet. I said that episode would get an "awww" reaction. Bry said it would get a ":eek:" reaction. Guess i lost!! :( :rotfl:i say both. shocking but sweet. like a haribo flavoured electric shock :p :D
Oh my! Sweet, but didn't see that coming!
Great stuff guys - roll on next part....
INT. INDIAN HOTEL - NIGHT
Kash is lying in bed, reading a book in a mood. Sanjita nervously walks into the room. Kash gives her one disapoving look and returns to his book.
Sanjita: Look Kash...
Kash: I have nothing i want to say or hear from you Sanjita...so save on the Oxygen...
Sanjita: Now thats not fair!
Kash: No! I tell you whats not fair!... Making a fool of me in public! Giving up on our marriage!
Sanjita: Thats not fair at all! I just kept to our marriage vows!
Kash: What do you mean by that!?
Sanjita: Nothing that concerns you... you keep your secrets...i keep mine...
Kash: I am sick to the back teeth of this family!
Sanjita: And we're sick and tired of you Kash!
Kash: I dont know what your problem is with me exactly...but once this wedding is over...we can return home...and sort out our issues!
Sanjita: Maybe i dont want to sort them out! You've blown your chance... be the selfish moron that you are...see if it bothers me...
Sanjita storms out of the room muttering to herself
Sanjita: (Quietly)To think I turned down Iqbal for you...
Sanjita.. go back to Iqbal.. get your kids and leave India now.. Leave Kash to be at the wedding alone.. it is what he deserves
JustJodi
20-04-2006, 17:10
Hmmmmmmmm now this has turned into an interesting twist,, not sure how the Indians view divorce, but Sanjita should take her kids and run and let dumb butt Kash sort out the NOT GONNA HAPPEN WEDDING:ninja:
INT. INDIAN HOTEL - NIGHT
Iqbal has just stepped out of the shower, a towel wrapped around his waste. He hears a knock on the door, he heads to answer it..
Iqbal: Marcus... i told you to remember to take your key...
Iqbal opens the door, Sanjita is standing there, he half covers his body with his arms..
Iqbal: Sanjita...i err...wasnt expecting you...
Sanjita walks into the room and longs down at Iqbal, dressed in only a towel.
Sanjita: Dont worry, its nothing I havent seen before...
Iqbal looks out to see no one saw her enter from the coridoor. He closes the door.
Iqbal: What can i do for you?
Sanjita: It's Kash...i've had enough of him...
Iqbal: Look it's a bit late to have this conversaton Sanjita...maybe in the morning?
Sanjita: Oh dont worry...i dont want to talk...
Sanjita walks over to Iqbal and starts to rub her hand over his chest.
Sanjita: I've had enough of him and his morals...I've had enough of him in my life...
Iqbal: Are you sure this is what you want?
Sanjita: What have i got to loose? A marraige i hate... sure im sure...
Sanjita and Iqbal passionatley kiss. She whipes off his towel and she leads him to the bed...
JustJodi
20-04-2006, 17:29
Now that was a good one,, guess shes gonna make her bed and lie in it !!!( no pun intended ) did Bry or Abi ever post any pix of this Indian family ???
Go Sanjita... wahey girlie :cheer::cheer: Go back and tell Kash how great his brother is in bed
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