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EXETER AIRPORT- day
The Loud Speaker sends out a message to the waiting room...
Would all passengers travelling First Class on the 12:15 flight to Paris, please preceed to the plane's entrance. Thank you.
Nick and Vicky are walking quickly towards the entrance to the plane.
Vicky: Please dont tell me you've organised all this, Nick!
Nick: Course i haven't! I wanted this to just be me and you!
Vicky: You best not be lying to me or i'll....
Vicky stops, and trails off....
Nick: They wont ruin our holiday. i wont let them. After all, they're probably not even staying in our hotel!!
Nick tries to reassure himself and Vicky. The camera pans over to Tom, Chris and Luqina. Tom jumps onto Chris's back, ruffles his hair, and starts shouting/singing...
Tom: When you walk through the crowd, hold your heeeead up high!!
Luqina: Talk about strangling cats!
The group laugh, as Nick and Vicky cringe in front...
As you can see folks since the New Year alone Devon Seas has reached 1000 posts!
This couldnt have be done without the support and comments from all of you Devon Seas fans!
On behalf of Abi and myself, we'd like to thank you all for sticking with Devon Seas and making it a pleasure to write for you all!!!
To Another 1000, and another 1000...
Long may Devon Seas continue!!!
:bow: :cheer: :bow:
As you can see folks since the New Year alone Devon Seas has reached 1000 posts!
This couldnt have be done without the support and comments from all of you Devon Seas fans!
On behalf of Abi and myself, we'd like to thank you all for sticking with Devon Seas and making it a pleasure to write for you all!!!
To Another 1000, and another 1000...
Long may Devon Seas continue!!!
:bow: :cheer: :bow:
You don't have to thank us.. it is not a hard task to stick with it when you are totally gripped and can't get enough and that is down to the brilliant writing of you and Abi... I enjoy every minute of it and I am really looking forward to Fashion week!!!! I hope Tom finds out exactly what Luquina is like and I have a feel Nick and Vicky are not coming back on happy terms, vicky will tell all :clap::clap::clap:
Oh BTW, Richard you are mad marrying that woman
JustJodi
22-05-2006, 10:04
Richard Richard u doofus,, why on earth would you wanna marry that scheming woman ??!!! Wonder how long hes got left on this earth once he marries that vulture ???:mad:
EXT: HILTON HOTEL PARIS
Tom, Chris, Luquina, Nick and Vicky get out of a Taxi outside the Hilton Hotel, Paris. Tom and Chris are in awe at the hotel...
Tom: Bloody hell! You haven't done things by half, have ya Luquina?! Look at this place... Its got chandeleors and everything!
Luquina: Course it does! Might as well live in luxery every now and again! Anyway, we're late for the meeting....
Chris: Meeting?!
Luquina: With Chris Birks. Thats why we're here, remember?!
Tom: Oh great, another Chris. Just what we needed!
Tom nudges Chris, he promptly hits him back. They laugh. Nick picks up his and Vicky's bags...
Nick: We're gonna go check in. Hope everything goes well with this Chris Birks bloke...
Nick and Vicky walk off quickly. Luquina touches up her make up, and walks glamourously up the red carpet to the foyer of the Hotel. An offical, buisness man type person if standing in the doorway. He holds his hand out.
Chris Birks: Its a pleasure to meet you, Luquina.... and.... friends...
Luquina: Like wise :D
Chris Birks: Well Paris is the capital of fashion, as they say. A girl like you belongs here!
Chris and Tom roll there eyes. Luquina smiles at Chris Birks. He looks back outside of the hotel, where 4 streched cars have just pulled up..
Chris Birks: Talking of people who belong in Paris...
He opens the glass doors back open, and ushers the group through. From 3 of the cars, a large group, with notebooks, mobile phones, and wearing offical suits, get out. They line by the doors to the centre car. One of them opens the door. From the car steps a glamourous woman, dressed in a floor length fur coat, wearing designer sunglasses, and diamond necklaces. She pouts into her mirror, then passes it to an assistant, and struts over to Chris Birks in her red Stilleto Heals.
Chris: Luquina. May i introduce to you, Miss Jodi Hamilton.
Jodi air kisses Luquina, then inspects her painted nails
Jodi: Its a pleasure, Darl
Luquina: Jodi Hamilton! :eek: I mean.... its, great meeting you! :D
Jodi: Call me Jodi, hun. Just... Jodi :cool:
Luquina smiles in awe of Jodi, whilsy Tom and Chris look jealously at the smart, and obviously very wealthy, Chris Birks.
JustJodi and Chris.. now you are famous!!! Wonder who plays you in the TV series when it is released??? :D
JustJodi and Chris.. now you are famous!!! Wonder who plays you in the TV series when it is released??? :D
"IF" it is released...
i put images up of the actors i imagine would play these two characters!
INT. HILTON HOTEL - PARIS
Chris Birks gestures for Luqina to move away from Jodi.
Chris Birks: I hate to break you two ladies up...but I have to show you around Luqina...show you the guided tour...
Luqina: Yeah of course...Jodi...its been a pleasure...
Jodi: Maybe we can talk later...
Luqina: Yes I'd enjoy that...
Jodi and her entorouage walk off towards the hotel elevators. Chris Birks and Luqina walk around the hotel, Tom and Chris following them like shadows.
Chris Birks: Of course the Paris Fashion week is all about showcasing the best in designer fashion... as well as promoting new models...
Luqina: I'm not new tough...I've been on the scene for years...
Chris Birks: Not on this style Luqina! The Paris fashion week goes beyond FHM and Nuts... this is where the glamarous and majestic models have their chance to shine...
Luqina: (Shy) I'm not sure if I fit into that catagory.
Chris gives a sleezy grin and kisses Luqina's hand.
Chris Birks: Of course you did...you are perfection...a woman of great beauty and devinity...an angel from heaven...for the fashion world to adore!
Tom: (To Chris) What a creep eh?
Chris: I thought we were coming on Holiday?
Tom: We are on holiday...
Chris: Spending a weekend walking around as Luqina's little puppy dogs is not what I had in mind!
Tom: Well what else do you propose we do!?
Chris: We're in the city of love and culture! Lets go and explore!
Tom: But what about...?
Chris is already running down the lobby to the hotel entrance.
Chris: Come on Tom! Leave them to it!
Tom follows Chris...the Bachelor Boys have been let loose in Paris!
INT. HILTON HOTEL - PARIS
Luqina is walking around the hotel with Chris Birks still.
Chris: And that about ends the tour...i'll have the schedule faxed to your room later on... but for tonight you can kick back and enjoy yourself...
Luqina shakes Chris's hand and gives him a flirtatious look.
Luqina: Thank you Chris..I promise you..I wont let you down...
Chris' phone rings. He answers it and heads off. Luqina walks down the coridoor where she sees flashing lights.
She walks behind a blind and sees Jodi Hamilton in the middle of a photoshoot. She is havign pictures taken of her wearing glamarous clothes.
Cameraman: (To Luqina) Hey you! Out of here!
Luqina: (Confused) Oh...sorry...I didnt realise...
Jodi: No it's okay...let her stay...(to crew) have 10...call it a break...
The crew walk off. Luqina stands nervously on the spot.
Jodi: Come on in babes...help yourself a drink...
Luqina picks up a drink.
Jodi: (Friendly) There's no need to be nervous...
Luqina: It's just...I cant belive I'm in the same room as you...I'm such a big fan...
Jodi: And I am of you...
Luqina: (Surprised) You are!?
Jodi: Sure...it takes a lot of guts to get back on the ladder after a fall from grace...I admire that... and I should know...
Luqina: How do you mean?
Jodi: Well with the cocaine... and the courtcase...of course not to mention my rock star fiance... the press hated me...but I came trough... and now look at me!
Luqina: Well you've certainly done well for yourself!
Jodi: And so will you babes! I'm sure of it!
Jodi gives a positive smile. Luqina is pleased. They toast their glasses, and sip their champagne.
JustJodi
22-05-2006, 22:35
Omg I am a star:thumbsup: Hmmmmm I was sorta waiting for Chris to tell Luqina she was getting too heavy or too old for the type of modeling that was on the scene now ( after all Luqina has done nothing but lounge around Tom's place for months ) I think this will be an interesting chapter of Devon Seas :) Now I wonder how Luquina will treat Tom after this little chat shes had with Jodi:searchme:
INT: PARIS HOTEL
Nick and Vicky are in the hotel room. He walks over to the french doors, leading onto a balcony. He opens the door, and puts his hand out for Vicky, who is standing in the room.
Nick: Come over here and check out the view, babes!
Vicky holds his hand, and walks over. They stand on the balcony together, Vicky leans her head on his shoulder...
Nick: The city of love... i see why the call it that now. Its perfect.
Vicky looks up, and smiles at Nick.
Vicky: Yeah... perfect. Just like you...
Nick: Dont be silly.... but this is great, aint it? Having the time here together, just you and me...
Vicky: And Luquina, and Tom and Chris!
They laugh...
Nick: Well maybe not completly perfect then!! But this is just about me and you. You mean the world to me....And yeah, i know i sound soppy... but i'm gonna prove how much you mean to me.
Vicky: Nick, i...
Nick: (interupts) I love you, Vicky. More then anything in the world.
Nick kisses Vicky passionately on the balcony, then walks slowly into the room. He calls back through to the balcony...
Nick: Sorry, did you want to tell me something?
Vicky: Me? Erm.... No.... No, nothing...
Vicky closes her eyes tightly, and signs deeply.
Vicky: How can i keep it from him...?
Ok Vicky you can a) tell him and hope he understands or b) let him find out from Kyle cause you know he will just gloat about it... my advice.. tell him now while you are away from everyone and he can't really run away from you. he would have to talk it over
INT: FRENCH CAFE
Chris and Tom walk into a posh cafe. They sit at a table, Tom hands over a phrase book to Chris.
Tom: I'm gonna get some postcards from next door- show that lot in Baymoore what sort of places we can get to! Take the phrase book and... order some drinks or something.
Chris: Yes.... mother!
Tom hits him on the arm, and exits the Cafe. An attractive waitress walks over. Tom reads her name tag: Aimée. He talks very slowly, and deliberatly...
Tom: Erm....Bonjour, la femme de beautifull. J'aimerais beaucoup de choses de vous
She replies in English, with a very strong French Accent...
Aimée: Excuse me?!
Tom: (coughs) You speak English?!... Erm.... This is nicely ackward...
Aimée: You want many things from me?!
Tom: Is that what i said?.... Erm... Of... Of course i didn't mean that... I meant.... Drinks! Can i order some drinks....please?
Aimée: you most certainly said that!
Tom: Sorry, i....
An older looking man walks over. Well built, he towers over Tom. He too talks in a strong French accent. Tom reads his name tag: Fredrico
Tom: (mutters) Fredrico... very... Italien...:hmm:
Fredrico: My worker has taken offence to you, and soon after you do the same to me! Explain yourself!
Tom: Sorry, i didn't... Erm....
Fredrico: Us have a certain way of dealing with people like you around here!!
Fredrico clenches his wrist, and throws a punch towards Tom. He moves out the way, and ends up hiding behind Aimée. As he rubs past her body, she screams, and rushes away from him. He holds his hands up in defence....
Tom: Sorry... I didn't mean....
Fredrico launches another punch in his direction. Chris walks back into the cafe, and automatically grabs the phrase book, and talk extremely quickly and loudly...
Chris:Il est arrogant et britannique. S'il vous plaît l'avoir des objections
Chris grabs Toms arm, and pulls him out of the the door of the cafe. They run round the corner a bit, then stop.
Tom: What the hell did that mean?!
Chris: "He's arrogant and British. Please mind him"
Tom: Arrogant?! Was that the only thing you had a chance on reading?!
Chris: I dunno... I thought it was a pretty accurate description!
EXT. NOTRE DAMN - DAY
Nick and Vicky walk towards the Notre Damn hand in hand. Nick is in ore of the famous landmark, however Vicky has something on her mind.
Nick: Wow! Look at it Vicky...!
Vicky: At what? An old church?
Nick: It's not just any old church...its the Notre Damn! As in the hunchback!
Vicky: Oh great...:rolleyes:
Nick: How much is it to get in?
Vicky: What, have i become a tour guide all of a sudden?
Nick: No but your holding the handbook...
Vicky is flustered and takes her time to get the book out of her handbag.
Nick: Dont bother...I'll just have a run up there and see the prices...ill be back in a bit babes...
Nick kisses Vicky and runs off like a happy child towards the church. Vicky checks to see Nick is clearly out of earshot and gets her phone out. She phones up Amy.
The scene cuts continously between Vicky by the Notre Damn and Amy in the Red Rum.
Amy: Hello...the Red Rum?
Vicky: Amy...it's me...I havent got long...
Amy: Oh Vicky babes...I've heard he's whisked you off to the city of love for the weekend...
Vicky: Yeah...but i need to tell you something...
Amy: You dont sound too pleased to be there hun...
Vicky: I would be in any normal circumstances, but...
Amy: But what!? If Patrick took me away to...
Vicky: I slept with Kyle!
Amy: You did what!?
Vicky: I know...i'm stupid...i was drunk...oh my god Amy! I feel so guilty...
Amy: So you should... does Nick know?
Vicky: No...but it's breaking my heart to keep it from him...I just feel like he should be told...so we can move on...
Amy: Well maybe it's best to tell him the truth then Vics?
Nick walks back towards Vicky.
Vicky: Yeah...maybe it is...
Vicky hangs up the phone and puts it back in her pocket. Nick returns to Vicky.
Nick: 20 euros for a guided tour...not bad eh!?
Vicky smiles half-heartedly as the pair head off towards the church.
INT. EIFFEL TOWER - EVENING
Nick and Vicky are sitting together in the restauraunt at the top of the eiffel tower. A pianist is playing music to the room, where sophisicated couples are dining.
Vicky: This is just beautiful Nick...I really don't deserve this...
Nick: Of course you do babes! Only the best for you...
Vicky: It's just...I'm not used to this rich life...i feel as tough I shouldnt have it...
Nick: Of course you should have it... you...and Daniel...will want for nothing anymore Vicky...I love you...and want to provide for you...
Vicky: You make it sound like I'm in it for the money...
Nick: Well you're not are you?
Vicky: Of course not!
Nick: Well there you go then... Vicky you are not like any other girl I've been with...your just...perfect... your hunny, clever...drop dead gorgeous and well...I know you and made are for life...
With each word, Vicky's guilt increases to the point where she is in tears.
Vicky: Nick...stop I have something important to tell you...
Nick: Not now Vicky... what I have to say is very important... I couldnt imagine spending my life with any other woman... you and me...are for life...
Nick gets up from the table and bends down on one knee.
Nick: Victoria Mansfield...would you do the greatest honour...of becoming my wife?
Vicky holds her hand to her mouth in shock. Tears run down her face... tears of joy or tears of sorrow?
Oooo - is Vicky going to confess now ?? Oh what a palava !!! Hes going to be heartbroken!
INT: FRENCH HOTEL
Nick and Vicky are at the bar near the foyer of the hotel. Luqina is with them. Chris and Tom rush over, out of breath and eager to say something...
Chris: You'd never guess what just happened!
Tom: I was at this restaurant..
Chris: Being an idiot... :p
Tom: Yeah, yeah, whatever! Anyway, this bloke started throwing punches at me cause a said a few things to a waitress! (points to Chris) He comes over, and says some crap in French, and we run for it. The looks on their faces!
Chris: Good ol' Chris saves the day!
Tom: Wouldn't go THAT far!
Chris: Oi, you watch it! I wont bother next time- i'll stand and watch while you get beaten to a pulp by a French Bloke!!
Chris and Tom burst out laughing, followed by Vicky, Nick and Luqina. Tom smiles suspiciously at Vicky- she smiles back... Luqina gives Tom and Chris a look...
Luqina: Come on, whats going on?!
Nick: Going on...?
Chris: The smiles on your two faces!! Come on, what you been up to..... or shouldn't i ask?! :p
Nick looks to Vicky, who says quietly...
Vicky: (quietly) Go on...
They smile at each other, and Vicky holds out her hand to reveal a huge, diamond ring..
Luqina: Omg... your not.... are you?! :D
Nick: We are! We're engaged!
Chris: Good on you mate!
Tom: Yeah, congrats and all that!
Vicky: Thanks. Its great, isn't it?! :D
Luqina looks coyly to the side, thinking...She smiles, with realisation...
Luqina: OMG! Thats it!
INT: PARIS HOTEL
Luqina pulls Tom over along the Bar a little bit, away from Nick, Vicky and Chris, who are talking about the engagement...
Tom: What did you mean back there, babes?
Luqina: Well.... we're good, you and me, aren't we!?
Tom: yeah...
Luqina: And you know how much i want to get my career back on track...
Tom: Yeah...
Luqina: Well, how about we follow suit?
Tom: Follow suit? With what?
Luqina gestures towards Nick and Vicky...
Tom: You mean get married?! :eek:
Luqina: Come on, we could earn mega bucks with it! All those deals with magazines... OK! Hello!, the works! Magazine rights, newspaper deals, who name it, we could do it! Me and you.... together...
Tom: You want us to get married for fame?!
Luqina: Well not fame exactly...
Tom: Money then?!
Luqina: For my career! I love you honey... we could do it, you know....
Tom: I love you too, but no!
Luqina looks hurt...
Tom: You know how much i love you, and how much i want you to get your career back in line... but i can't marry you to make that happen! I wont be used as a means to boost yuor career... sorry babes, but i just wont!
EXT: PARIS HOTEL
Luqina storms out of the hotel in tears, after being turned down by Tom. She stands in the empty gardens, alone. Chris Birks walks up behind her, notices shes crying, and smirks. Luqina turns to see him...
Luqina: Sorry, i... i didn't see you there.
Chris: Hey... whats with all the tears?!
Luqina: Just Tom... dont worry about it....
Chris: Come here...
Chris holds her tightly, his hand reaching down her back to her bra strap. She steps backwards, and he follows, standing close to her again.
Luqina: D'ya mind?!
Chris: Course i dont, pretty girl like you
Chris upshes her against a fence, and puts his hand on her cheek...
Chris: Because this is the way we do things around here. Thats the way the buisness works... Jodi did it too, and look where it got her!
He rubs his hand along her leg, up towards her skirt. She tenses up, and pushes him away.
Luqina: Get off me, you perv!
Chris: Ooh, a fighter! Just how i like them! :cool:
Chris moves towards her again, and underdoes his trousers. He pushes her against the fence again, this time more violently. As he pulls down his trousers, he puts his hand over her mouth, to stop her screaming. Luqina looks terrifed. As her eyes well up with tears, she knees him, sending him reeling backwards. He collapses to his knees in pain, and Luqina tries to run away. He grabs her heel on her shoe, sending her too to her knees...
Chris: Oh no you dont!
He crawls over to her, pinches her tights at the knees, and rips them off. She kicks him in the face, and rushes out of the garden, terrified, shocked, and in tears.
INT: PARIS HOTEL
Luqina rushes through the hotel foyer in tears. She heads for the lift, and gets inside alone. She leans against the wall of the lift, and collapses to the floor, and cries into her hands in tears. He lift stops, and Tom walks in. He realises its Luqina, and kneels down next to her, and hugs her. She wriggles away.
Tom: Luqina! Whats wrong?!
He notices her ripped tights...
Tom: Luqina....?
Luqina: I didn't know what to do...
Tom: What d'ya mean?!
Luqina: I thought he was just looking out for me... trying to be kind... trying to get my career back on track...
Tom: You mean that Chris Birks bloke?!
Luqina cries into her hands again. Tom puts his hand on her back...
Tom: Luquina? Luqina, what did he do?!
Luqina: I was upset about me and you... i just needed some air, some time to clear my head.... i didn't know he was there...
A look of realisation crosses Tom's face...
Tom: Luqina... did he....?
Luqina: He tried to... he tried to... he tried to...
Luqina holds Tom, and sobs into his shoulder...
Tom: Did he try to rape you?
Luqina cries even harder into his shoulder. He puts his hand on her back, trying to comfort her... shocked.
INT. HILTON HOTEL - NIGHT
Luqina is sitting on the bed, dressed in a hotel bath robe. Tom pours her a drink from the mini bar.
Tom: Here...get that down you...
Luqina drinks the alchohol.
Tom: I just cant belive that creep would do that to you... he makes me sick at the thought...
Luqina: I dont want to take it further Tom...
Tom: Why!? Just incase he ruins your career!?
Luqina: I've already done that by rejecting him... I might aswell give up hope on that front!
Tom: Nonscence...he's not the only agent in the world...we'll get your career working...one way or another...
Luqina gives a faint smile.
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Luqina: You know...there would have been a time that I'd have slept with him...
Tom looks on at her in horror.
Luqina: I'd have done anything to get to the top of my career...but ever since I met you... things have changed... you are the most important thing in my life...and I'll never do anything to risk loosing you..
Tom takes this to heart
Luqina: I love you Tom Adams...
Tom: I love you too Luqina...and do you know what?
Luqina: Go on...?
Tom: Maybe us two getting married isnt a bad idea after all.
Luqina is shocked beyond beleif. She sceams in joy and hugs Tom. She kisses him on the lips, as the camera tracks out to the paris skyline at night.
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - DAY
Claire is in her bedroom packing her suitcase. She feels her bump, and takes a deep sigh. She removes the picture of Romeo from the frame and places it at the top of her suitcase. She zips up her bags.
There is a knock at the door, as Val walks into her bedroom.
Val: All set then?
Claire: As ready as I'm ever gonna be...
Val: It's for the best love...give you some time to think things over...
Claire: If your gonna do it anywhere then you might as well do it in LA!
Val: There's no need to worry about your Aunty Lynda...she doesnt know about the baby... that's down to you to tell her when you get there...
Claire: That'll be fun...:rolleyes:
The pair sit down on the bed.
Val: I shan't lie to you babes...it's going to be a tough time... one of the hardest in your life... as you get your mind around things and decide what your gonna do...
Claire: Well I know I want to keep it....
Val: Yeah but you've got to think about when you come back... what you going to do? What you going to say? Both of them lads will want to say the kid's theres...
Claire: But I dont even know...
Val: So what? What matters is you decide for the best upbringing for your child. Romeo or Chris? You just tell them it's there's...
Claire: But that would be like lying to them...
Val: Sometimes lies are the best thing to do... especially when it regards your children... anyways come on... we've got to get you to the airport.
The pair get up. Claire grabs her suitcase and slowly leaves the room. She switches off her light and takes a deep breath.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Richard and Hilary are playing chess in the living room. They hear a car pull up on the gravel outside.
Richard walks towards the window in excitment. He sees Nick and Vicky get out of the car.
Richard: Oh, they're back!
Hilary gets up, the pair head towards the hallway, as Nick and Vicky walk in.
Hilary: Hi! Glad to see your back safe and well! Have a good time?
Nick: Yes...you could say that.
Nick and Vicky share a secret smile between them.
Richard: What's so funny?
Vicky: How do you mean?
Richard: Well it looks as tough your hiding something...
Vicky: Oh, you mean this...
Vicky holds out her hand and shows her engadment ring.
Hilary: Is that a!?
Vicky and Nick cant not contain their hapiness a moment longer.
Nick & Vicky: Yes!
Richard: (Overjoyed) Congratulations!
Richard and Hilary congratulate the pair by hugging them.
Richard: Well me and your mother have some news of our own...
Nick: (Curious) Oh yeah?....What now?
Hilary: We've decided to bring forward our wedding date!
Nick: Wow! That's fantastic news!
Richard: Isn't it just!? Two sets of good news at once...I think this calls for a bottle of champagne!
Vicky: I like the sound of that!
The 4 of them laugh, as they walk into the living room to toast their engadgments.
EXT. ANDREWS HOUSE - DAY
A taxi pulls up on the street. Out steps Tom, Chris and Luqina. They are all singing and making fools of themselves.
All: Guess who just got back today?
Them wild-eyed boys that had been away
Haven't changed, haven't much to say
But man, I still think them cats are crazy!
Luiqina almost falls over, Tom catches her, the group laugh. Tom pays the taxi driver his fare and he drives off.
Chris: You two head off inside...I'm just going to see how Claire is...
Tom and Luqina walk off towards their house. Chris walks up the Andrews garden path and knocks on the door.
Emma answers it.
Emma: ...Chris...what do you want?
Chris: I was just calling to see if Claire's in...
Emma: No she isn't...
Chris: Oh...
Emma: And she wont be for a very long time...
Chris: (Suspicious) What do you mean by that?
Emma: Well she's going to live over in LA for a while...
Chris: "Going"!? You mean she hasnt left yet!?
Emma: No... her and mom have just gone off to the airport...
Chris: Exceter right!?
Emma: What!?
Chris: Exter airport!?
Emma: Yeah...
Chris rushes down the path and gets into his car. He speeds off.
WILL CHRIS MAKE IT TO THE AIRPORT IN TIME?
bakedbean
26-05-2006, 16:12
I cant wait to see what happens next
INT. EXECTER AIRPORT - DAY
Val and Claire are by the depatures lounge. A large glass window shows the plane that Claire is going to board.
Val: It look's like this is goodbye then hun...
Val tries to hold back the tears but starts to cry
Claire: Dont mom... you'll start me off in a minute...
Val: My big, brave little daughter has all grown up...im so proud of you...you know that dont you?
Claire starts to cry.
Claire: How can you be after this...(gestures to her bump) I've let everyone down...
Val: No! No you havent Claire! You havent!
Claire: I dont think I can go mom... I dont want to go to LA...
Val: It's too late now... the tickets are brought...your luggage is on the plane... you've got to go now... it's for the best.
Claire hugs Val goodbye.
Claire: I love you mom...
Val:I love you too...be brave... do us proud...
Claire grabs her hand luggage and kisses Val goodbye. She heads down the depatures tunnel, having had her security check. In the distance Chris can be seen running towards her.
Chris: Claire!!!!
Claire turns around and sees Chris, she does not reply, she simply turns her back on him and walks out of site. Chris looks on in devastation as the security close the doors behind her.
Jada-GDR
27-05-2006, 14:45
i cant believe how many posts there are on this! 1,025 (now to become 1,026) is well good. go, devin seas!
INT. EXCETER AIRPORT - DAY
Maroon 5's "This Love plays over the action of the scene. Chris holds his head in disbelif. Claire walks down the passageway with a concerned look on her face.
I was so high I did not recognize
The fire burning in her eyes
The chaos that controlled my mind
Whispered goodbye and she got on a plane
Never to return again
But always in my heart
Val whipes tears from her eyes. Chris walks over to her.
This love has taken it’s toll on me
She said goodbye too many times before
And her heart is breaking in front of me
I have no choice cause I won’t say goodbye anymore
The pair stand next to each other and have an awkward silence.
Chris: You know dont you?
VaL: Yeah...
Chris has a concerned look on his face.
Val: (Disgusted) Dont worry...your secret's safe with me...
The pair stare at at the plane, as it begins to move.
I tried my best to feed her appetite
Keep her coming every night
So hard to keep her satisfied
Kept playing love like it was just a game
Pretending to feel the same
Then turn around and leave again
Claire looks out of the window of the plane, as she rubs her stomach gently.
Claire: (Whispers to bump) It's just you and me now...
Claire smiles to herself, whiping away the tears. The plane takes off. Chris and Val watch as the plane goes into the air.
This love has taken it’s toll on me
She said goodbye too many times before
And her heart is breaking in front of me
I have no choice cause I won’t say goodbye anymore
EXT. BAYMOORE STREETS - DAY
Andonis is returning from college. Kevin, the racist teenager who harassed Emma recently is following Andonis, along with a couple of of his friends, they are shouting abuse at Andonis.
Kevin: Christ lads can you smell curry!? It's making me feel sick!
The group laugh at Kevin. Andonis ignores there comments are hurries on by.
Kevin: Oi! Andonis! (Andonis does not respond) Oi! Speak you stupid "Paki".
Andonis turns around in a rage.
Andonis: I am not a "Paki"! My family are from India not Pakistan! And besides you have no right to call anyone that name!!!
The group of lads look at Andonis with disgust and disregard what he has just said.
Kevin: I'll call you what I like...you asian scum...
Andonis walk towards Kevin, with an aggressive look on his face.
Andonis: (Outraged) What have i done to you eh!? What have I done that's so bad to deserve you treatming me like this!?
Kevin: No one likes a grass! Running home to "daddy" about the bullies...(Kevin shakes his head in disgust) how pafetic!
Andonis: No! Your the one that's pafetic!
Kash comes out of the shop to fill up the fruit and veg stands. He sees the group surrounding Andonis. The lads start to beat him up in the distance. A furious Kash charges towards them.
Kash: Oi! Get off him! Now!
Kevin and the lads run off.
Kevin: (To Andonis) We're gonna get you! And your "paki" family!
The distant laughter of the group can be heard. A tear rolls down Andonis' face as Kash reaches his son.
Kash: (Concerned)Are you alright son?
Andonis: (Lying) Yeah...i'm just fine...
EXT. DARTMOUTH FERRY - DAY
Dartrmoth - Devon. A ferry crosses people over to Dartmouth town centre. Vicky is on the phone to Nick, whilst crossing over on the Ferry.
Vicky: (Into Phone) Yeah...I'm just going to meet up with Amy... we're gonna have a quick look around the bridal shops...get some ideas...pick up some brochures...you know... (pause) okay then babes... see you later...love you...bye.
Vicky hangs up the phone and puts it in her handbag. The ferry stops and the passengers get off. Vicky bumps into someone.
Vicky: Oh...I'm sorry...
Vicky looks up and sees who it is: Kyle.
Vicky: Kyle...
Kyle: We need to stop bumping into each other like this...
Vicky: Bumping into each other? More like you stalking me...
The pair follow the passengers off the ferry and walk up towards the town centre.
Kyle: (Jokes) Now come on Vicky...would I really do a think like that...
Vicky: It wouldnt suprise me... look what do you want exactly!?
Kyle: Why? In a rush?
Vicky: I'm going window shopping with Amy...
Kyle: Clothes? Shoes?
Vicky: Wedding dresses if you must know
Kyle: Of course...the wedding of the year... I havent had chance to congratulate you have I...
Vicky: Look Kyle...for once in my life...I'm happy...and everything is going right... please....I'm begging you...dont ruin it...
Kyle: Ruin it?
Vicky: What we did...was wrong...it shouldn't have happened...can we just leave it between us...please...
Kyle: Alright...on one condition....
INT. DARTMOUTH TOWN CENTRE – DAY
Kyle: Only on one condition….
Vicky: What now Kyle…I’ve had it with all your complicated mind games…
Kyle: Oh it’s quiet a simple request…
Vicky: (Irritated) Go on…hit me with it…
Kyle: I want legal access to Daniel… agreed by you in writing…
Vicky: You what!? (Shakes her head in disbelief) No way Kyle!
Kyle: Oh come on Vicky! Why not!?
Vicky: Why not!? Because you don’t deserve access to him!! You have not been in his life for the past 12 years! So why now!?
Kyle: Oh come on! If I knew you were pregnant I would never have left… I know I haven’t been a good father to him…so I want to make it up to him now…. Give him a father figure…
Vicky chooses not to respond to Kyle’s request.
Kyle: If you want me to keep quiet about our one night stand…
Vicky: Are you blackmailing me!?
Kyle: Blackmail? No… I’d prefer to call it a mutually beneficial deal… you get your perfect life with mr right… and I get to see my son of the weekend…
Vicky: Yeah and whats to say after I sign it over you’ll tell Nick anyways? I know what you’re like…you’re never satisfied unless you make others unhappy!
Kyle: (Genuine) You have my word Vicky… when it concerns my son… I’m not going to lie to you….
Vicky’s mind is buzzing. She is clearly distressed.
Vicky: I just don’t know whether I should say yes or not…
Kyle: Come on…think of it from Daniel’s perspective… their wont be no nasty court battle between the pair of us…arguing…fighting…he doesn’t need the stress… and it would save us both thousands in legal fees for a battle I know I’d win…so what do you say?
Vicky: (Hesistant) Okay…I suppose so… but I can’t help feeling like im making a deal with the devil…
Kyle laughs and gives a satisfied grin.
Kyle: I’ll bring the papers around first thing in the morning…
EXT. SINGH AND SON'S CONVIENCE STORE - NIGHT
Kevin and his group of thugs return, dressed in dark coloured clothes and wearing hoodies.
Kevin: Come on lads...we 'ent got long!
The lads open a sports bad and each grab a spray can.
Kevin: Teach these “Paki” *******s a lesson once and for all ent it lads!?
The group laugh at their leader. They start to spray offensive and racist words over the walls and windows.
Aaron: Eh mate!? Do you think we should be doing this?
Kevin: Of course we should! It’s ****ing funny…and they deserve it… scum that’s what they are…
The group step back and look at their handywork.
Kevin: That’s mint lads… but it ent enough…
Kevin looks into his sports bag and gets out a baseball bat. He bats it against his hands and laughs menacingly.
Aaron: No mate, you ent gonna smash it up are you!?
Kevin: Yeah, so what if I am!? You lot up for it? Some ciggies and booze!
The group give dubious looks but agree. Kevin runs over to the window and spaces it in with a baseball bat. He follows suit with the other windows. The group of lads rush into the shop.
INT. SINGH AND SON’S CONVIENCE STORE - NIGHT
The shop alarm rings out loudly. Some of the lads take to trashing the shelves and smashing up the displays. Kevin, Aaron and a couple of others stuff their bags and pockets with cigarettes, alcohol and the contents of the shop till.
Kevin: Come on lads! Get out of here! Now!
The group rush out of the shop. Laughing to themselves…
Can I just take a moment to let you all know about BakedBean's soap Exeter on soapboards.
It's well worth a read and I've become a fan of it! If you have any spare time please check it out!
Ok.. I have finally caught up on the weeks events.. So another leaves Baymoore and 2 couples are getting married... Still think Tom is an idiot for falling for Luquina but hey!!!
INT. IQBAL & MARCUS' FLAT - NIGHT
The alarm from Kash's shop can be heard troughout Baymoore. It wakes up Ruby who is sleeping in Marcus's bed.
At the same moment Sanjita wakes up, who is sleeping in Iqbal's bed.
Both women get up and put on a dressing gown. They both leave the bedrooms and walk into the hallway.
Ruby drops her glass of water as she sees Sanjita coming out of Iqbal's room...
Ruby: Mom!?
The pair look at each other in horror and disgust as Marcus walk out of his room shirtless.
Sanjita: (Shocked) Ruby...what are you doing here!?...
Uh oh!!! Sunjita is caught out.. doesn't Kash worry where she is at night??? :searchme::searchme:
INT. IQBAL & MARCUS' FLAT - NIGHT
Sanjita looks in horor at Ruby and Iqbal...
Ruby: Mom. What are you doing here!?
Sanjita: Erm... me and your father have had a bit of an argument...Iqbal said i could spend the night here...
Ruby: What!? In his bedroom!? In his bed...!?
Sanjita: Never mind me... what on earth are you too playing at!?
Ruby: Well it's kind of obvious isn't it...
Marcus sheepishly walks into the lounge, trying to keep Ruby quiet...
Marcus: Shhh Ruby babes...
Sanjita: "Ruby Babes"!? How long has this been going on!? Eh!?
The pair look at each other but dont answer Sanjita.
Sanjita: (Shouts) I said "How long"!?
Marcus and Ruby look concerned. Iqbal rushes into the room, dressed in only a dressing gown. He has a look of shock on his face when he sees Ruby and Marcus in there...
Iqbal: What the blooming heck is going on here!?
Sanjita: These two have been... you know... at it!!!!
Iqbal: Marcus...I thought I told you not too continue this...
Sanjita: (To Iqbal) What!? You mean you knew about this!?
Ruby: Look mom whether you like it or not...me and Marcus are a couple...get over it!!!
Sanjita: Over my dead body!!!
Marcus, Ruby and Iqbal are all concerned at Sanjita's sudden change of character...
:hmm::hmm: Could Iqbal be Ruby's dad??? Clever how Sunjita turned the tables around and got out of why she is in Iqbal bed :D
INT. IQBAL AND MARCUS' FLAT - NIGHT
Ruby: What's up with you mom!? Why are you taking it to heart!? It's the kind of reaction I'd expect from dad...not you...
Sanjita: Of course im taking it to heart! It's...just...wrong!!!
Marcus: Why is it so hard to understand!? Me and Ruby love each other... what can be so wrong with that!?
Iqbal: Apart from the fact that she is family!?
Marcus: Yeah, but not direct family...we're only cousins...
Sanjita: I just cant believe it...
Ruby: Cousins get together all the time... the Queen married her cousin... I just dont understand why your so upset mom?
Sanjita: Because he isn't your cousin...
Before Sanjita speaks, Iqbal figures what she is saying and he turns pale with fear. Ruby and Marcus both look at Sanjta in confussion.
Sanjita: He's your brother...
:eek:
:eek::eek: yuk Ruby... you are in love with your brother!!! :sick::sick:
INT: MARCUS AND IQBALS FLAT
Ruby looks at Marcus, confused, then back at Sanjita...
Ruby: He's my what?!
Sanjita: Your brother... Marcus is your brother...
Ruby: Dont even go joking about something like that!
Sanjita: I'm not joking, i'm telling your the truth. Both of you. You're brother and sister...
Ruby: (interupts) No, no, no! Come on... stop lying...
Sanjita: I'm not... i'm sorry...
Ruby: Sorry?! Sorry you didn't tell me we're bloody brother and sister?!
Sanjita looks away, Ruby's eyes well up with tears...
Ruby: Why didn't you tell me?! Why did NO ONE tell me?!
Sanjita: You can't see him anymore, Rubes...
Ruby: Answer me question!
Sanjita: It doesn't matter, thats not the point. The point is, he is your brother, and thats the end of it. You can't see each other any more. End of.
INT: MARCUS AND IQBALS FLAT
Marcus sits down on a seat, with his face in his hands, thinking. Iqbl walks over, but Marcus shuns him off. Ruby is still with Sanjita...
Ruby: You can't ask us to split. We're in love, thats it!
Sanjita: I'm not asking you. I'm telling you. You'ev got to split up, Rubes... you can't be in love with your own brother!!! Let alone... well, you know.... with him!
Ruby: Well we are in love, and thats it. I dont care if we're brother and sister, i can't just loose the feelings i have for him! Its not that easy! Sorry, mom, but we're in love.
Sanjita looks away as she says this.
Sanjita: You can't Ruby...
Ruby looks to Marcus for support...
Ruby: They can't make us split up, can they Marcus?!
Marcus doesn't reply...
Ruby: Marcus?! Tell them Marcus!
Marcus: This changes everything, Ruby... Sorry, but we can't just ignore it...
Ruby starts crying, and storms out the room in tears
excellent stuff as usual. i feel sorry for ruby and marcus. the sins of their parents.
EXT. HARVEY'S MOTORS - NIGHT
Leah walks towards the garage, which is locked up. She grabs Craig's set of keys from her pocket and opens up the garage.
Craig's mercedes pulls up in the distance. He sees someone walk into his garage.
INTERCUT:
INT. HARVEY'S MOTORS - NIGHT
Leah decides not to swicth the main light on. Instead she flick on a torch and shiens it around the garage. She walks towards Craig's desk and looks for incriminating evidence.
All she can find is invoices and order forms. She moves on to the filing cabinet and gets on her knees attempting to pick the lock. The light comes on.
Leah gets up immeditaley in shock, and stares Craig directly in the face. She takes a nervous gulp.
Craig: Well well, what have we hear?
INT. MARBAL NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
Natasha is sitting alone at the bar, drinking a cocktail, in a sad mood. She looks over at Amy and Vicky who are dancing and having a laugh.
Kyle walks into the bar in an equally depressed mood. He takes a stool by the bar and requests a drink.
Kyle: (To Natasha) Why the long face?
Natasha: Oh your back on the scene are you? You made a fast getaway after you dumped me...
Kyle: Yeah sorry about that...but hey leave it in the past yeah?
Natasha: Yeah i suppose so...after all I'm not one to judge on relationships...
Natasha finishes her cocktail.
Kyle: Can I get you another drink.
Natasha: Thanks
Kyle: (To Barman) Another one of those aswell please mate.
Natasha looks over at Amy and Vicky once more.
Kyle: You should take a leaf out of their book... enjoy life...
Natasha: Yeah well I dont think they'd like me joining in... I just wish I'd never had that affair...it's ruined my life...I feel so lonely...
Kyle: I know the feeling... but theres no point in looking at your mistakes and regretting, it'll only eat away at you... you need to look to the future, be positive?
Natasha: The future? Thats a joke... serving tables at Valentinos for the rest of my life... living in a one bedroomed flat... alone. I'd rather give up now...
Kyle: The beauty of life is that when you think life is one long predictable road, youll turn a bend in the road and head off in an entirley new direction. All you need is something to make you happy again...
Natasha: Yeah like what?
Kyle: Like this....
Kyle goes in to kiss Natasha. She pulls away.
Kyle: Two lonely people... looking for fun... what do you say?
Natasha: Yeah I suppose so... what have I got to loose?
Kyle smiles cheesily. The pair get up and leave the nightclub together.
INT. HARVEY'S MOTORS - NIGHT
Craig approaches Leah, who is shaking nervously.
Leah: Craig I was just...
Craig: There's no need to make up a pack of lies... I can tell what you were doing, you were snooping...
Leah: (Confident) Yeah, so what if I was?
Craig: Well its not your information to snoop for is it? It's personal to me....
Leah: What? Hiding something are you?
Craig: If I was do you think I'd leave it lying around this place...where anyone can get their hands on it...
Craig presses himself closely towards Leah, she moves her head away from him.
Craig: Besides I dont keep things in writing...too easy to be used as evidence...i keep it all up here (points to head) then no one can get to it...
Leah: I'll get you one day...
Craig: Is that a fact?
Leah: You might be able to scare Mom and Mandy and half of Baymoore but not me! I will get what I need to nail you!
Craig: You wouldn't want to do that tough would you? Because you couldnt live without me...
Craig smiles sinisterly as he presses Leah up against the wall.
Leah: What are you on about!?
Craig: You can't deny the feelings you have for me... the passion... the spark...
Leah: Yeah right
Criag goes in to kiss Leah, at first she resists but then gives in. The pair passionatley kiss as he begins to take off her jacket. It is clear that there is a lot of sexual chemistry between the pair. All of a sudden Leah pulls away.
Leah: No! I will not let you do this to me! Not again!
Craig: (Teasing) Do what?
Leah: Messing with my mind! Making me kiss you!
Craig You know you want it... you just showd me that... you've taken the first step...it's only a matter of time before you come running back for more.
Leah rushes out of the garage in a fluster. Craig stands there smiling to himself with a satisfied smile.
well well Leah!! who would have thought that you could do that to your sister especially with a man so dangerous.. bad girl :nono:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/bondboffin/madon22.jpg
Siobhan Burke (Madonna Ciccone)
The new manager of the holiday park. Taking on Gregg Bryant's job Siobhan is a sexy and sophisticated singleton in her mid 30s. She is an immediate hit with everyone in Baymoore, especially the Taylors. However Siobhan hides many secrets that will change the Taylors life for ever...
ladies and gentlemen... yes I do look that hot!!!
:thumbsup::thumbsup: I am in DS :cheer::cheer:
Siobhan - your gorgeous!! Older than I thought, but if I look that good at your age, I'll be more than happy :D :D
Ruby and Sanjita talk about why she lied all these years. It was because of fear of Kash…she gave up her happiness because she was scared of the consequences. Ruby promises that she will never tell Kash. Marcus calls around.
INT. SINGH'S HOUSE - DAY
Ruby and Sanjita are alone in the house. The pair are having a conversation.
Sanjita: How are you coping love?
Ruby: I feel as tough my heart has been ripped apart...I dont know if I can cope mom...
Sanjita: Of course you will...I know it's a shock...but you will get over it...I promise you...
Ruby: Why did you never tell me mom!? If I'd know I could have saved myself all this heartache!
Sanjita: It wasn't in your best intrests to know...
Ruby: Why not!? What could have been so wrong in knowing who my real father is!? All these years I have had to put up with **** from Dad... but I havent had to listen he's said!!!
Sanjita: I just couldn't...
Ruby: Why not!? Why did you keep this a secret all these years!? I had a right to know! So did Iqbal!
Sanjita: Because I was scared what would happen
Ruby: You've never loved Dad so why would you care if he'd divorced you?...You could have been with Iqbal and had the life you've always wnated...
Sanjita: It wasn't as simple as that... too many people would have got hurt....Iqbal was married...and if me and Kash split up I would have brought shame on the family...I wouldnt have been able to live in India...
Ruby: So you stay with a man you hated.... you sacrified your future hapiness becuase you was scared of the consequences!?
Sanjita: Yes!
Sanjita starts to cry. Ruby comforts her.
Ruby: And what about now? Are you going to tell Dad?
Sanjita: Are you serious!? He'd kill me...
Ruby: No he wouldnt...I think he'd prefer the truth...and then you and Iqbal can have the future you've always wanted...
The doorbell rings. Sanjita jumps to live and whipes the tears away. She gets up to answer the door. In walks Marcus. Ruby has a look of unhapiness about her when she sees him enter the longue.
Ruby: Marcus...
Sanjita: I'll leave you two it...you need to sort out your problems...
God i missed loads :rolleyes:, i think you need to start do a text service so you can get Devon seas where ever you may be :lol:!
Oh god Ruby and Marcus brother and sister :eek: thats a shocker!
EXT: HOLIDAY PARK
"Never met a girl like you before" is playing...
I've never known a girl like you before
Now just like in a song from days of yore
Here you come a knockin', knockin' at my door
And I've never met a girl like you before
You give me just a taste so I want more and more
A black sports car revs up outside the holiday park, and pulls to a stop. A glamourous woman, Siobhan Burke, is sitting inside the car. She reapplies some lipstick, and takes a tie from her hair, letting it caress over shoulders. She smiles into the mirror, puts on some black shaded sunglasses, and steps out of the car.
INTERCUT:
As Siobhan struts to the entrance of the holiday park, Tourists gawp at seeing such a glamourous woman, in Baymoore.
INTERCUT:
INT: HOLIDAY PARK
Siobhan confidently struts into Nick's office. He double-takes at her, and smiles shyly at her.
Nick: Siobhan Burke.... isn't it?
Siobhan: You betcha! So, this job your offering...
Nick: As holiday park manager? Yeah, i've been looking through your CV...
Siobhan: Rest assured that everything is perfect. Just, perfect.
Nick: (coughs) Well, erm... yeah.
Siobhan: You seem... tense?
Nick: I just wasn't expecting someone like you to want a job around here...
Siobhan: Oooh, i dont know. I'm sure i'll find something... or someone... to amuse myself with! :cool:
And now you've come along
Yes you've come along
And I've never met a girl like you before
The pair talk, as the music plays. After a few seconds, of showing Siobhans confident, smile, the pair stand up.
Nick: So the jobs yours... i'll see you when you start!
Siobhan: Yep, you bet you will!
Siobhan flicks her hair over her shoulder, clutches her handbag and walks confidently out of the office
Nick is a taken man, i hope she isn't planning on ruining that!!!
INT. SINGH HOUSE - DAY
Sanjita leaves the room, Marcus sits down beside Ruby.
Marcus: How are you Rube'?
Ruby: What do you think? I'm heartbroken... you?
Marcus: It's not easy for me either Ruby!
Ruby: Yeah well, your the one that's making it hard!
Marcus: Oh come on...you cant blame it on me...
Ruby: I dont know who esle to blame...
Marcus: Circumstances! Morals! I dont know but a brother and a sister just cant be together!
Ruby: What and cousins can!?
Ruby turns away from Marcus, tears rolling down her face.
Marcus: Look Ruby babe... this is as hard for me as it is for you...
Ruby: How can you just expect us to loose the feelings we have for each other!?
Marcus: Dont get me wrong Ruby...I'll never stop loving you...it's just... we can't.
Ruby faces Marcus, he whipes the tears from her eyes. The pair share a tender kiss goodbye.
Kash walks into the room with a look of horror and disgust on his face. Marcus and Ruby pull away from each other and look at each other in horror.
Nick is a taken man, i hope she isn't planning on ruining that!!!
You betcha!!!
:eek: What will Kash have to say.. will Ruby blurt out that he is not her dad????
JustJodi
02-06-2006, 12:38
Oh dear the next time Kash gives Ruby some grief, I bet she blurts out " I don't have to take your BS any more cos u aren't my father":eek:
Siobhan u nasty thing LOL Ur gonna lure poor innocent :rolleyes: Nick down the path of temptation,, gonna love your character buddy !!!
INT: SINGH HOUSE- day
Kash looks at Marcus and Ruby in disgust...
Kash: What the hell is going on?!
Ruby: Erm... nothing, it was just... nothing.
Kash: Well it didn't look like nothing! Dont lie to your father Ruby, why are you kissing each other!?
Ruby: Just leave it...
Marcus puts his hand on Ruby's arm, she looks up at him.
Marcus: We can't keep it from him forever... this is already hurting enough to do that.
Ruby looks to the floor, thinking, then looks back up to Kash, with tears in her eyes...
Ruby: It...It was the final goodbye. OK? So just leave it...
Kash: The final goodbye?! (shouting) THE FINAL GOODBYE?!
Marcus: Dont get angry, it was just something that happened... and now its over...
Kash: Since when?
Marcus: Since when what?
Kash: Since when has this.... disgusting relationship been going on from?!
Ruby: (quietly..) Since India...
Kash: India?! But that was weeks ago... months!
Marcus: Yeah.... yeah, we know...
Kash is in complete shock
:eek:
Is it goodbye or are they going to carry on anyway?
INT. MANSFIELD HOUSE - DAY
Vicky runs down the stairs in a hurry and grabs her handbag from in the living room. There is a knock on the door, and in a hurry she answers it.
Kyle: Heya Vics, got a minute?
Kyle walks in, Vicky is clearly annoyed.
Vicky: No not really... I'm late for work as it is...
Kyle: This wont take a second...
Kyle sits down at the dinner table.
Vicky: What wont?
Kyle gets out a form and a pen.
Kyle: The documents... giving me rights to see Daniel.
Vicky: Oh...
Kyle: Well you didn't thing I'd forget about it did you...
Vicky: I'm not happy about this you know...
Kyle: (Grins) As far as I see it you haven't got a choice...
Vicky sits down and reads trough the document reluctantly.
Kyle: If you want my silence... then sign on the dotted line...
Kyle hans Vicky the pen. Vicky takes a deep breath and signs the document. Kyle grins to himslef and takes the document back off her.
Vicky: I swear to go Kyle you had better be a good dad to Daniel...
Kyle: Don't worry I'm gonna be their for him forever... for both of you...
Vicky shows a look of unhapiness at signing over her son to Kyle.
INT. SINGH HOUSE - DAY
Kash storms into the room, disgusted at what he has heard.
Kash: Months!? How could you!? Why did you!? You are family for goodness sake!!!
Ruby: Because we loved each other!!!
Kash: Love!? You are only 20 years old! And you cant love him!!!
Ruby: Why not!?
Kash: Because it is wrong! Disgusting! You make me feel sick... my daughter and my nephew!
Ruby is about to burst something as Sanjita and Iqbal rush into the room. The pair look on as Kash raises his fist to Ruby.
Iqbal: What the hell is going on here!?
Marcus: He was about to hit Ruby!!
Sanjita: (Shocked) Kash!!!
Iqbal pulls Kash away from Ruby, who grabs hold of Marcus.
Kash: They have been sleeping together! Incest! How else am I meant to react!?
Sanjita: I thought we were meant to be seeing a new you...
Kash: I can not let my family share each others beds...
Iqbal and Sanjita look at each other (:rotfl: :D :lol: ) and then Ruby and Marcus give them thilthy looks.
Ruby: Just drop it okay!? We've split up!
Kash: Oh and you having your tounge down his throat... thats just a family kiss is it!?
Ruby: It was a kiss goodbye! We are over! So just leave it at that! We are over!!!!
Kash: Why!? Finally realised what a thilthy little whore you are!?
Ruby: No!!! Beacuase he's my brother!!!
Sanjita and Iqbal look scared. Kash turns around slowly in total shock, his blood boiling with rage.
Why do i have the feeling that Kyle is up to something really sneaky?!
And :eek: What is Kash gonna say/do now??
Uh Oh!!! Ruby let the cat out of the bag!!! Whats Kash going to do now!? Things are going to get interesting here!
INT: SINGH HOUSE
Kash stands, emotionless, beforewalks forward, pinning Sanjita against the wall. He says quietly and sinisterly...
Kash: What is she on about?
Sanjita: Kash, i....
Kash: (Now obviously angry) What the hell did she mean, Sanjita?! :angry:
Sanjita: I'm not going to talk to you when your like this...
Kash pushes her arms against the wall, and grabs her wrists. Sanjita is obviously in pain...
Ruby: Get off her!!
Kash: I will get off her, when i bloody well like! Now explain, Sanjita! Now!
Sanjita: Me and Iqbal...
She hesitates, and looks at her wrists. Kash lets go, but still stands over her...
Sanjita: Me and Iqbal... we've.... we've... we've been seeing each other.... for years now...
Kash turns, and stares at Iqbal. Iqbal backs away from Kash. Kash explodes in rage, and holds Iqbal up against the wall by the neck. Iqbal struggles to breathe...
Sanjita: Get off him, Kash! Its my fault just as much as him, for heavens sake!
Iqbal: You can't solve everything by.... by violence, Kash...
Kash: Oh can't i?! You're hardly the person to listen to, are you?!
Kash punches Iqbal in the eye, and lets go of his neck, and lets him collapse to the floor...
Sanjita: Iqbal!! How could you, Kash?!
Kash: How could i?! How could I?! You and my brother have been having it off for years, and you ask how I dare?! Well, the answer to that, love, is easy....
Kash picks Iqbal up by the neck, and slams his head on the coffee table.
Kash: Because i'll do what i ruddy well like! :angry:
Kash kicks his back, and punches him again, over and over, while the rest look on in hopeless horror.
INT: SINGH HOUSE
The family is looking on in horror as Kash violently beats Iqbal up. Marcus storms forward, grabs Kashs back, and slams him against the beack of a sofa, to get him off Iqbal. Kash launches himself back forward, but Marcus slams him back again.
Marcus: Get off him!!!!
Kash: I am the head of this family, i will do what i want to who i want!
Marcus: Oh yeah, and your really acting like it, aren't you?! Whats happened to this family, eh?! Everyones gone mad! Its disgusting, to be honest! We call ourselves a family...? More like a bloody zoo!
Kash dismisses Marcus's comments and points at Sanjita....
Kash: Out.
Sanjita: What?!
Kash: Get out of this house. Get out of this family. Get out of my life.
Sanjita: What.... you.... you can't do this!
Kash: Lets remind ourselves whose been having the affair.... oh yeah, that would be you! I'm perfectly within my rights, it would seem. So you heard me, get out!
Ruby: Come on, dont be like this...
Kash: This is between me and her, stay out of this Rubina!
Sanjita: You can't make me leave.... what about Andonis? And Mohammed!? They need me, i'm their mother!
Kash: You know what you are? A cheating slag, thats what you are! Your a disgrace to our reputation! Mohammed and Andonis will survive without you!
Sanjita: But they...-
Kash: (interupts) And besides, you should have thought about them, before you and him....
Iqbal: Kash, you should reconsider...
Kash: Get out. Both of you. Out of my house! :angry:
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - DAY
Val has her ear pressed against the wall listening to the arguments from next door.
James: What are you doing!?
Val:It's all kicking off next door!!!
James rolls his eyes in disbelif and continues reading his newspaper.
CUT TO:
INT. SINGH HOUSE - DAY
Kash is sitting down holding his head in distress. Ruby and Marcus walk out of the room. Ruby tugs on Sanjita's hand for her to follow. Sanjita approaches Kash.
Sanjita: Kash...
Iqbal: (To Sanjita) Leave me to have a word with him babes...
Sanjita follows Ruby out of the room, they leave the house. Iqbal sits down to Kash.
Kash: (Quietly) Why did you do it?
Iqbal doesnt answer.
Kash: Why did you feel the need to sleep with your brother's wife.
Iqbal: It's more than sex Kash... we love each other...
Kash: And you think I don't! She is my wife! My whole life! All that I do is for her! I love her too you know!
Iqbal: Well you have a funny way of showing it...
Kash: What do you mean by that?
Iqbal: Oh come off it.. you've treated her like **** for years... was it any wonder she left you for another man!?
Kash: Left me! She never left me! You can't have meant that much to her! Or she would be with you now!
Iqbal: We have been seeing each other for 30 years Kash! It runs deeper than any other affair! We love each other... Sanjita has never loved you!
Kash: Then why did she marry me!?
Iqbal: Because someone forced her too...just like you tried to with Ruby... she never got to be with the man she loved...
Kash: But...but your my brother... you shouldn't... you cant...
Iqbal: I can, and I have... I've treated her the way she deserves... like a godess. I love her...and she loves me...
Kash: Well I love her too!
Iqbal: Too little too late Kash... you've lost her...and you've only got yourself to blame.
Iqbal gets up and walks out of the room. Kash is alone, sitting on the sofa, in tears.
I'm almost feeling sorry for Kash......almost.....but then again....nah, its gone again lol
Yeh i do kinda feel sorry for him to.....Nah i'm over it! Kash deserves everything he gets, he is mean!! Now maybe Sanjita & Iqbal can be together properly/
INT. RED RUM - NIGHT
Saturday night. The pub is filled with many of the locals. There is no one at the bar. Amy walks up to Vicky who is staring into space.
Amy: Hey you... why you so glum?
Vicky shakes away from her daze.
Vicky: Oh...I'm fine.
Amy: Well you don't look it.. what's up eh?
Vicky: It's Kyle...
Amy: Christ! You haven't...again have you!?
Vicky: God no! I'm not that stupid! Once was enough...and I regret that so much...
Amy: What's the problem then? He's going to keep quiet isn't he?
Vicky: Yes... but I've had to give him legal acess to Daniel.
Amy: I hate to say it babes but you brought it on yourself...
Vicky: Yes i know...I just...wish he could leave...so me and Nick could move on...it makes me feel sick knowing that I'm lying to Nick everyday... he's my world...
Amy: Then you'd better hope Kyle keeps to his word...
Vicky: Even if he does tough Amy... he's always going to be here, a constant reminder...my betrayal is going to be here forever...
Vicky sighs. Amy gives her friend a hug in support.
Luqina shows her rock to Natasha and Ruby. They say they are pleased for Tom and Luqina. Tom tells her its about time everyone knew. He announces their engadment to the pub.
INT. RED RUM - NIGHT
Tom, Luqina and Chris walk into the Red Rum. Natasha and Ruby call Luqina over.
Natasha: Luqina! Over here!
Luqina walks over to them and sits down beside them as Tom and Chris go to fecth drinks.
Luqina: Hiya girls, how are you both?
Natasha: I'm great thanks! Havent seen you since you got back from Paris, how was it?
Luqina has a grin on her face.
Ruby: I wish I had your hapiness...
Luqina: What's up love, man trouble?
Natasha: Isn't it always the case.
The girls laugh.
Natasha: So then come on... what did you and Tom get up to in the city of "luurrrvvve"?
Luqina: Oh nothing much... except this.
Luqina shows them her large and expensive engadgment ring. The 3 girls scream in excitment.
Ruby: Oh my god! Your getting married!
Natasha: I didn't see that one coming! When's the big day then?
Luqina: As soon as possible...we hope to be married come Autumn.
Ruby: It seems like everyone is in love and getting married around here :rolleyes:
Natasha: Oh cheer up Rube', I'll take you out on the pull in the week...
Tom walks over to the table and sits down next to Luqina, and puts down their drinks.
Natasha: So you've finally popped the question then Tom?
Tom: (To Luqina) You've told them?
Luqina: Well I couldn't keep it a secret forever could I?
Ruby: Oh come on Tom, you should announce it to everyone... you should be glad to be getting married to her.
Tom: I am but...
Natasha: No buts (shouts out to pub) Oi! Everyone... Tom and Luqina have some news for you all.
Tom looks embarassed. He looks at Luqina, who urges him to speak. The pub falls silent, Tom gets up and adresses the pub.
Tom: Well me...and Luqina.. we've decided to get married...soon...very soon!
The is a positive response from the pub, with a combination of cheers and "awww"s.
Amy: Well that calls for a few bottles of bubbly on the house!
As the residents celebrate Emma sits beside Val with a look of sadness on her face. She is heartbroken.
JustJodi
04-06-2006, 14:36
Hmmmmmm how can Tom afford a sparkler like that.. I mean he lives in a bachelor pad with a bunch of guys so obviously.. he had to go into debt for that rock on her finger,,
As for Kash,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, do i feel sorry for him,,, do I "hear" violins in the distance,hmmmmmmm NAHHHHHHH not a bit,, a bit too late for his so called tears, he is only weeping cos he has lost his "whipping girl" tuff noogies......
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INT: RED RUM PUB
Val and Emma are sitting at a table, after hearing the announcement. Emma is stunned. Val puts her arm around her..
Val: Are you ok?
Emma: Yeah... i... erm... it's just a bit of a shock, aint it?
Val: You're telling me! Come on, em... you need another drink...
Emma spots Chris at the bar. She walks over, avoiding eye contact with Tom, heartbroken...
Emma: Well, i never saw that one coming...
Chris: Well, Luquina can be a bit like that...
Emma: I mean, come on! Whats got into him?! Can't he see her for what she really is?!
Chris: Maybe he just doesn't want to... But its up to him what he does...
Emma: Even if he's destroying his life?! People can't just stand by and let him do that!
Chris: Its hardly destroying it, just...
Emma: (interupts) Shes a manipulating money-grabbing bitch! Why would anyone want to get legally binded to someone like that?! Especially not Tom...
Chris: Come on, Emma, She's not that bad... I mean, i see where you're coming from, but he'll work out the problems himself...
Emma: She is that bad! Am i the only one that can see that?! He can't marry her! Not Tom... he can't marry [I]her[I]!
My god!! So Ruby let it all out! Dont feel one bit sorry for Kash at all, he brought this all on himself.
MMMMM!! I am sure Kyle has something in the papers beside access to Daniel, and Vicky was to busy to read it all, she signed something really really bad
INT. BAYMOORE HOLIDAY PARK - DAY
Richard and Siobhan are having a meeting in her porter cabin office. They have files spread over the desk discussing buisness.
Richard: Well I must say Siobhan I am really impressed with you work so far...
Siobhan: It's nothing much...just a re-ogranisation of your advertising plan... you need to get the adverts in local newspapers all over the country... people will soon sign up.
Richard: Yeah they sure have... you've nearly booked up the whole park for the summer... record booking that is... well done...
Siobhan: It's nothing much, honestly
Richard: Dont be so modest, it's brilliant, your boosting our profits within a week of starting... it's all down to you that is...
Siobhan: Why thank you Richard...
Richard: I tell you what, why don't you join us for a meal at Jenkins Manor tonight, as a way of thanking you...
Siobhan: Oh i dont wish to impose
Richard: Nonscence, one extra plate is no hassle. It's the least I can do.
Siobhan smiles happily at her boss's satisifaction of her job.
INT. SINGH HOUSE - DAY
Kash is sitting alone in the living room, the rays of the daylight sun shining trough the curtains. A glass of whiskey in his hand, and a picture of him and Sanjita in the other.
Andonis walks into the room and pulls open the curtains.
Andonis: What are you doing sitting in the dark dad?
Kash: I felt like it...
Andonis: Do you realise what time it is dad!? You should have opened up the shop by now!?
Kash: I can't be bothered...
Andonis: Dad, what's up? And where's mom?
Kash ignores his sun and stares longily at his wedding photo, he downs his drink and pours himself another one.
Andonis: Dad!?
Kash: Your mother has left me...
Andonis: What do you mean, "left you"?
Kash: She has been having an affair with your uncle Iqbal... I threw her out of the house...
Andonis is lost for words.
Andonis: What is it with this family!? Eh!? I just dont understand you all...
Andonis storms out of the room and out of the house, slamming the door behind him. Kash does not even react to the loud bang, he just stares at the photo.
All of a sudden he goes into a rage throwing the photo against the wall followed by his glass. He falls onto his kness in tears.
Kash: Why did you do this Sanjita!? Why!?
nope, still not feeling sorry for him.. where is mohammed in all this? he is only a kid so is he with Kash or Sunjita???
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Siobhan, Nick, Richard and Hilary are all seated at the dinne table eating a 3 course meal. Siobhan is telling the Taylors an amusing story.
Siobhan: So I said to the warden, think of that fine and times it by a hundread, and thats how much I'll sue you for it you put the ticket on my car!
Richard and Nick laugh at his. Hilary gives Siobhan a frosty reception, feeling threatended by any females seeking Richard's attention.
Nick: Hilarious! You'll have to come for dinner more often... it's like a graveyard half the time with these two...
Richard: Hey watch your cheak you!
Siobhan smiles at the pair's banter. Hilary gives her an evil look and chilling questions her.
Hilary: So then... Siobhan... how are you adapting to life in Baymoore?
Siobhan: "Adapting"?
Hilary: Well you speak of London... it must be a bit of change from Baymoore.
Siobhan: I'm loving it here... the fresh sea air... the wonderful views...and the fantastic company.
Richard coughs, flattered by the comment.
Hilary: I fail to see why a smart "city girl", such as yourself, would want to take the job of the manager at a cheap holiday park in Devon...
Siobhan: Well I fancied a change...we could all do with some every now again...
Hilary: Indeed...
Siobhan: I mean don't get me wrong it has its downsdies... living at the B&B is hardly giving Baymoore a positive reputation, but...
Richard: I tell you what... if you are okay with it... you can come and live up at the manor, couldn't she Hilary?
Hilary chokes on her food and gives Richard a look of atonishment
Hilary: You've only known the woman five seconds...
Richard: I always say if someone makes a good first impression then they are a good person...
Siobhan: It's a very kind offer Ricchard but I wouldn't want to be a burden to you all..
Nick: God you wouldn't, this old Manor has far two many spare bedrooms, it seems a share to let them go to waste...
Siobhan: Well if you are all sure...
Richard: Of course I'm sure, it sounds like a fantastic idea!
Siobhan: Then thank you very much Richard.
Siobhan, Richard and Nick are all pleased at the arrangment. Hilary reserves judgment and sits giving Siobhan a look of clear resentment.
Oh, I hope Siobhan takes on Hilary... I am glad she is uncomfortable with her been there.. should stir things up at the taylors :thumbsup:
DaVeyWaVey
05-06-2006, 19:34
I predict.........a bitch fight between Hilary and Siobhan!! Am i the only person who feels sorry for Kash?!?!
I predict.........a bitch fight between Hilary and Siobhan!! Am i the only person who feels sorry for Kash?!?!
yep you are the only person.. he was just so horrible to his family that it is impossible to say "ha! you got what you deserved"
bakedbean
06-06-2006, 16:24
Another explosive episode of Devon Seas and i am loving the site
INT. HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE - EVENING
Mandy is in the kitchen cooking tea. Leah sits alone on the sofa watching "What Not To Wear". Craig walks trough the front door and into the living room.
Mandy: (Off Sceeen) Is that you Craig?
Criag: Yeah, hurry up with that tea I'm starving.
Leah rolls her eyes in disgust. Craig sits down right beside her, despite the choice of many sits in the room, she tries to shuffle away and resorts to turning her body away from him instead.
Mandy:(Off Screen) Pie, mash and mushy peas okay?
Craig: Not really, you cooking it now?
Mandy: (Off Screen) Yeah, shall I cook something else instead then?
Craig: Yeah, you do that...
Craig starts to caress Leah's tigh. She stares at him in shock, and tries to move but he has her trapped. The pair whisper a conversation. Craig starts to caress her arm, as he removes the strap on her stringy top.
Leah: What the hell do you think you are doing!?
Craig: What does it look like... im undressing you...
Leah: Mandy's next door!?
Craig: (Shouts Out) Mandy...
Leah gets nervous all of a sudden.
Craig: I'll have pie after all...
Mandy: Oh Craig! I've just put it in the bin!
Craig: Then cook another one! :rolleyes:
A frustrated Mandy continues to cook in the kitchen, which Craig mauls Leah.
Leah: You are one sick ******* you know that...
Craig: Yeah but you love me for it..
Leah: Like hell I do...
Craig: I know I'm what turns you on at night... I know you still want me...
Craig brushes Leah's hair with his fingers and begins to kiss her neck. She resists at first but begins to give in, sighing lightly.
Leah: Oh god... why do I let you do this to me, I should hate you...
Craig: But you don't...
Craig places his hands on Leah's breast as they have a slow and passionate kiss.
Craig: You've never been able to resist me...you can't deny the chemistry we have...
Leah: What "chemisty"?
Craig: The reason why you ran of to Sydney all those years ago...because you couldn't trust yourself not to end up in bed with me everynight.
Mandy: (Off sceen) Oh Craig...
The pair realise Mandy is coming into the room. Leah pulls away fast and tries to act normal. Craig sits back relaxed and satisifed. Mandy walks into the room, wearing a grubby pinny, with her hair tied back, looking unglamarous.
Craig: (Annoyed) What!?
Mandy: Well me and the girls were gonna have a night in around Val's... a few bottles of wine... a dvd...is it alright if I go?
Craig smiles, looking at Leah, who is staring at the tv, trying not to repsond to the conversation.
Mandy: Sure...take as long as you like... me and Leah will be alright on our own wont we?
Leah gives a faint sound of aknowledgment.
Mandy: You can come with me if you like Leah...
Craig: Oh no, she's alright here with me...
Craig slides his hand onto her thigh again, Mandy has not noticed this.
Craig: I promise I'll take good care of her...
Craig has a devious grin on his face.
Mandy: Oh right then, I'll go give Val a call.
Mandy leaves the room. Craig looks Leah up and down, and licks his lips.
Craig: So then Leah... looks like it's just you and me tonight...:cool:
arrrrrrgggggggghhhhhh!! i hate that man.. he is a complete bollox
DaVeyWaVey
06-06-2006, 18:01
Craig is such a womaniser!! I wish that Leah would reject him!
EXT. PAIGNTON POLICE STATION - NIGHT
James and his friend Larry park their police car in the parking bay, after having a day of busy callouts.
Larry: Cor Blimey, what a day eh!? I'll be glad to come...sit down and watch Crime Watch...
James: Chrime Watch!? Christ I'd have thought you had enough of the real thing each day...
Larry: You leave my crimwatch alone... it's better than spending the night reading the newspaper...
James shakes his head, laughing it off as a joke. An attractive woman, Lorraine Purvis is by the entrance of the police station, shaking hands with a senior officer at the station. She walks down the stairs towards the car park.
Larry: Cor, would you take a look at that... the things you could do with a bird like her...
James: Oi you, that's our new Super Intendant...
Larry: As of tomorrow...
James: Even so I dont think she'd take too kindly to you talking about her like that...
Larry: I dont care... a man is entitled to his thilthy thoughts :p... Oh come on your telling me you wouldn't play away from home with her?
James: I'll have you know I'm a happily married man Larry!
Lorraine walks past their police car and stares at James for a while, she gives him a breif smile then walks on bye.
James: She is attractive tough...
Craig is such an a**e :rolleyes: ! And i have a feeling something is gonna happen between Hilary and siobhan!! And a new super, interesting!
DaVeyWaVey
06-06-2006, 19:07
Larry and Craig are both womanisers! I hope James isn't thinking of playing away......:hmm:
INT: HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE
Craig opens the door and ushers Mandy out..
Mandy: So, i'll be back at about... midnight? I'll try not to be any later...
Craig: Yeah, yeah, whatever. See you later.
Craig shuts the door on Mandy, and looks at his watch. 9.00. He goes into the front room, and kisses Leahs neck...
Leah: No, Craig, we can't do this...
Craig: Why not? Come on, house to ourselves and all that!
Leah: Because of her!! You're married to my sister, Craig... its just, not right on her...
Craig: But there something between us, right?
Leah: Like what?
Craig: Chemestry, a click, you know what i mean.
Leah: Well... yeah, i guess so, but thats besides the point.
Craig: How is it?! Come on, its not like i'm about to get down on bended knee, or anything!
Craig kisses Leahs neck again. She pushes him away gently.
Leah: Theres nothing like that between us!... well, not really...Come on, i can't do this anymore. Dont make this hard, its not your style.
Craig: Fine then... you don't...go back to Sydney...convince yourself there's nothing there... you and I both know we want each other, but if you want to deny it...
Craig begins to leave the room.
Leah: Craig...wait...
Leah grabs Craig back into the room and keeps her hand on his arm. The pair stare at each other for a second then lock lips. They passionatley kiss as Craig takes off his jacket, pulls off his tie and unbottons his shirt.
The pair head to the wooden dinner table where Craig lays her down. Craig unzips her skirt and pulls it down, pinning her to the table and passionatley kissing her...
god that craig is so horrible. leah's not very nice either. sleeping with her sisters husband.
INT. PAIGNTON POLICE STATION - DAY
James is taking a shower in the men's changing rooms at the station. We see the close up of a womans high heels walking across the changing room floor. It is Lorraine, she picks up James towel and waits for him to finish his shower.
The shower stops pouring, James shakes the water off his hair then steps out of the public showers to grab his towel. He is shocked to see Loriane standing there, his immediate reaction is to cover his privates.
James: Lorraine! Erm... I Mean Super Intendant Purvis... I was just... erm...
Lorraine: Oh dont mind me...it's noting I haven't seen before.
Lorraine checks out James' body and smiles to herself. She gives him a flirtatious look.
James: Erm...can I have my towel Marm...
Lorraine passes James his towel, he wraps it around himself.
Lorraine: You can call me Lorraine... dont mind the formalities... I'm quite a releaxed person...
James: Was there something that you wanted?
Lorraine: Oh yes you...
James has a shocked look on his face.
James: Pardon!?
Lorraine... In my office... as soon as you can. I need a word.
James: Oh...okay...I'll be right up...
Lorraine: I'll lock forward to it.
Lorraine walks out of the changing rooms. James has a confused, but slightly pleased look on his face.
mmmmmmm is James thinking of cheating on Val?? she will kill him
JustJodi
07-06-2006, 13:14
Leah and Cragig... tsk tsk,, Leah messin around with her sisters no good hubby.. not sure where this is going, but its gonna end up in tears for sure !!!!!!
James oh dear,, mid life crisis hits??????
:eek: Leah and craig, that is naughty and the way Craig is treating mandy! Wonder why the super wants to see james...
JustJodi
07-06-2006, 17:13
My guess is the Super isn't after his quota on the beat he works, she may be after James middle aged bod :rotfl: Can any one say "sexual harrassment ????? " :nono:
INT: JENKINS MANOR
Siobhan is looking through a photograph album on the patio in the grounds of the manor. Nick walks up, and sits next to each other. He points at a photo of him and Richard...
Nick: That was from a few years ago. We went on this holiday to Tunisia. He was chatting to an old woman in some shop, and she said something in Arabic. He didn't understand, so just walked off. And this woman came up to him and just started whacking him constantly with a stuffed Camel!! It was so funny!
Siobhan: He never?!
Nick: Yup, he did! You should have been there...
Theres an ackward silence between the pair.
Siobhan: Whats it like... to have all of this?
Nick: What dya mean?
Siobhan: To grow up with all the money, the big houses...
Nick: Well... you know... its all i've ever known...
Siobhan: People must look at you differently... I dont want to sound rude or anything, but you've got everything you'd ever want....
Nick: I guess so. Its tough, sometimes, but thats just life. Everything has its up and downtimes.
Siobhan: Yep, thats the way the cookie crumbles!
Nick: I wouldn't change any of it though. Not the cars, the money, the houses... none of it. Its worth the bad luck.. the users... everything.
bakedbean
07-06-2006, 21:32
I wonder if it really is Nick how much more can the family take???
INT: PAIGNTON POLICE STATION
Lorraine is sitting on the edge of her desk, leaning over changing her shoes. James walks in, and coughs quietly...
James: Sorry, is this a bad time?
Lorraine: Oh, no no, sorry. Come on in.
James: You called?
Lorraine: Yeah, i've been looking through the records of all the police officers here, and i think its about time theres an overhaul.
James: An overhaul? What are you trying to say?
Lorraine: Well, some people are going to have to go, aren't they... i mean, if you take a look at the records of some of the people here, you'd think we didn't have a job to do.
James: You mean.... you're sacking me?!
Lorraine: no, of course not James! I wouldn't do that to you!
James: So, why are you telling me all of this...?
Lorraine: I want to promote you. To inspector.
Lorraine smiles gently at James. He grins with delight.
A promotion?? but at what cost? will he have to sleep with the boss to get it??
INT: ANDREW'S HOUSE
James walks into in house, with a huge grin on his face. He throws his jacket he was carrying onto the floor, and rushes over to Val and hugs her tightly.
Val: Whats all this?!
James: You never guessed what happened at work today!!
Val: No, i can't... But hurry up and spit it out, i'm going to a shopping sale in Torbay. They have shoes to die for!
James: I've got a promotion!
Val: Oh right, thats great... Anyway, i'll be back once the sales over. I'll get myself a bargin yet!
James: Didn't you hear me?! I got a promotion, Val! To inspector!
Val: Yeah, i did. And thats great. But i'm going out now, so i'll see you later.
Val kisses him on the cheek and walks out. James feels deflated and frustrated.
Poor James.. all excited and Val doesn't seem to care but still no excuse of cheating on her James!!!!
INT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Nick walks into the living room and opens up his breifcase on the cofee table. He picks up a pile of wedding magazines, moving them to the side, he has a breif look trough and shakes his head in stress. Siobhan walks into the room.
Siobhan: Oh come on, it cant be that bad...
Nick: (Confused) Sorry?
Siobhan: The wedding... you dont seem too pleased...
Nick: oh no, dont get me wrong...I can't wait to marry her Siobhan...it's just....
Siobhan: What?
Nick: Well I just havent got a clue where to start planning for it...theres so much to arrange in such a short space of time...
Siobhan: You've got many...hire a wedding planner, that's what they're there for...
Nick: Yeah i might do...but it kind of removes the romance doesnt it?
Siobhan: Maybe... oh it's going to be soo exciting two wedddings in the family in the same summer...(jokes) hey maybe you could have a joint wedding.
Nick shows a clear disatisfaction at the suggestion. Richard walks past the living room hearing Siobhan's suggestion. :hmm:
DaVeyWaVey
08-06-2006, 18:13
I think Lorraine is really trying to impress James, what with promoting him to inspector!!
I think her plan could work as well, i feel that James and Val are drifting apart, she didn't seem too interested when he revealed that he was promoted to inspector, so i think James could go running to Lorraine...... :hmm:
INT. HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE - DAY
Leah is staring into the varnished dining table, we see flashbacks of her and Craig's night of passion on the table. Leah is listening to Mandy's mundane conversations. Mandy walks in and places down two cups of cofee.
Mandy:There you go sis'
Leah shakes away from her day dream.
Leah: Cheers, so then.... have a good night last night?
Mandy: Yeah it was a right laugh... you should come next time...
Leah: Yeah I might well do that...
Leah continues to satre the table that they are seated it, unable to shake the mental images of the previous night.
Mandy: You know things are starting to look up again for a change...
Leah: How do you mean?
Mandy: Well...after that rocky patch between me and Craig...I think he's turned over a new leaf... we seem to be getting on well...
Leah: But I thought you wanted to divorce the lying cheating *******!?
Mandy: I did...but I love him...and well... I think we could well have a good future a head of us...
Leah takes a deep sigh, feeling guilting for betraying her sister.
DaVeyWaVey
08-06-2006, 18:47
I am sure Leah and Craig's passionate fling on the table won't be kept hidden forever!! Mandy is going to get really hurt!
If only mandy knew what craig had been up to :rolleyes: And Val should of been a little happier that James got a promotion.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Nick is finishing his work in the living room. The door slams shut and in walks Vicky. She puts down her bag and coat and collapses on the sofa.
Nick: Hiya babes, bad day at work?
Vicky: I have been run off me feet... I never thought so many people would be going to watch the World Cup...
Nick: Yeah well, it's a big part of our culture isn't it?
Vicky: What, lager louts and football!?
The pair laugh at this. Richard and Hilary walk into the room.
Richard: Oh Vicky your back... great
Vicky: Oh hi Richard, Hilary...
Hilary: (With Contempt) Victoria...
Richard: I'm glad I caught the pair of you together...I wanted to put forward a suggestion.
Nick and Vicky look at each other in confusion, then at Richard. Hilary clearly is not happy with Richard's suggestion.
Richard: Well all four of us are getting married soon... so why not make it a double wedding!!!
Nick: Really!? Wow that's a fantastic idea!
Vicky is about to air her opinion but Richard interupts her with delight!
Richard: Great! I think we should toast this!
Richard runs off for a glass of champagne. Hilary shakes her head with a disatisied look on her face. Nick smiles excitedly at his mother and Vicky, neither share his enthusiasm.
EXT. HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE - NIGHT
Leah is lying on a sunbed in the back garden wearing a short denim skirt and a bikini top. She hears the front door open. She hurries on inside.
INTERCUT:
INT. HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE - NIGHT
Leah: Mand', is that you!?
Craig walks into the room, admiring the lack of clothes Leah is wearing. He wolf whistles
Craig: Hello sexy...
Leah rushes to grab a towel from the sofa, she wraps it around herself.
Craig: No need to cover yourself up on my account...nothing I haven't seen already...
Leah: Yeah well that was a one off...
Leah gathers up her things in a fluster.
Craig: Sure it was... you'll come running back for more...
Leah ignores Craig and attempts to pass him, he grabs her and stares at her.
Craig: Sooner rather than later I hope...
Leah: No Craig! Not anymore! It ends now, okay!?
Craig: That's what you said the other day...
Leah: The other day was a mistake...I can't do this to Mandy...
Craig: You already have...
Leah: Yesterday she was talking of how happy she is with you...we were sitting at that table! The table we had sex on!
Craig: I prefer "made love"
Leah slaps Craig around the face. He grabs her arm, and stares into her face, he leans towards her, she turns her head. Leah cries in desperation
Leah: Why do i do this!?
Craig: Becuase you love me...
Craig kisses Leah's next, she moans in delight. The pair passionatley kiss as he removes the towel. The pair follow walk up the staircase....
INT: JENKINS MANOR
Vicky has taken Nick to the side. She is leaning against the wall, sipping her drink, talking quietly to Nick...
Vicky: This wedding idea... i'm not sure about it...
Nick: You dont want to get married?!
Vicky: No, of course i do! But.... a double wedding?! With... your parents?! Not exactly my kind of thing, you know
Nick: But it wont be any different from them just being 2 seperate ones!
Vicky: I just wanted it to be just about you and me... no one else... just us two showing everyone how much we love each other...
Nick: But it will be. They're not going to take over our day- i promise.
Vicky: Can't we just have our own one...?
Nick: But this way, we have everything we wanted, but it wont cost us anymore!
Vicky tries to smile, meekly. Nick tenderly kisses her, and walks back to Hilary and Richard. Vicky gulps down her drink in one, and mutters...
Vicky: So it comes down to money... so much for romance! :rolleyes:
bakedbean
09-06-2006, 22:08
A double wedding i cant wait for that
EXT. PAIGNTON ROADS - DAY
Nick is driving trough the roads of Paignton, returning from a buisness meeting. He is listenting to the World Cup Commentary on the radio.
Commentator: And there it goes! Another goal for Germany! They are thrashing Costa Rica!!!
Nick rolls his eyes at Germans winning. His car reaches traffic lights. He stops the car, behind two other cars. Nick casually look at the street, where the local GPs is.
Nick notcies Siobhan leaving the GP's, tears rolling down her face. He looks concerned for her, but before he has chance to go to her, a car horn beeps. Nick realises the lights have turned green.
Nick continiues driving, a worried look on his face...
INT. PAIGNTON POLICE STATION - DAY
Lorraine is flicking trough a folder. There is a knock at her office door.
Lorraine: Come in...
In walks James. Lorriane is pleased to see him.
Lorraine: James, glad you could come... take a seat...
James: What is it that you want?
Lorraine: Craig Harvey
James: What about him!?
Lorriane: I believe he lives near you...
James: Yeah, a couple of doors down... why?
Lorraine passes James the file.
Lorraine: His name is coming out far too often... but we can never seem to nail him...
James: Yeah, he's clever like that...
Lorraine: You seem to have some knowledge on him...
James: Well it's just stuff I've picked up on over the years, you know?
Lorraine: Tell me what you know about him then...
James: Well it's obvious he's in a high place on the criminal ladder... has his finger in loads of pies, but always has someone lower down to do the dirty work and pin the blame on. Drugs, prostitution, robbery, human tafficking... you name it, he's probably done it...or brought it into Torbay...
Lorraine: Sounds a pleasant man :rolleyes: ...
James silently laughs at her joke.
Lorraine: I want this scumbag off the streets, I want you and me to work closley together to nail this ******* once and for all...
INT. JENKINS MANOR - EVENING
Siobhan sits in her bedroom, reading a book. It is clear she has been crying. Nick knocks on her door and walks in.
Siobhan: Hi Nick... want do you want?
Nick: I just came to see if your okay?
Siobhan: Yeah, thought I'd get out of everyones way for the evening
Nick walks over to Siobhan and sees her teary eyes.
Nick: You sure about that?
Siobhan: It's just hayfever...
Nick: I sure you by the GP's earlier...your health is alright and everything isn't it?
Siobhan: (Snappy) Like I said hayfever...
Nick: Okay no need to snap...
Siobhan: Yeah well you shouldn't be spying on me then, should you!?
Nick: I was only showing some concern...
Siobhan: I dont want any...
Nick: Fine then, maybe I should just leave you on your own.
Nick leaves the room. Siobhan is clearly distressed. She grabs a letter from under her pillow. It is an adoption certificate. Naming Richard and Hilary as her parents.
bakedbean
10-06-2006, 20:19
Oh my god no way well that has put a spanner in the works for her and Nick then what a shocker
INT: HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE- day
Leah and Craig are in bed. Leah is laying her head, on Craigs bare chest, while talking to him...
Leah: You know what.... i hate you really.
Craig: Oh, so all that just then was hate, was it?! Didn't sound like it to me! :cool:
Leah: Yeah well... its true. When you're with Mandy your so munipulative... so abusive... and i just..
Craig: (interupts) Love it, dont you?!
Leah: Sometimes... maybe. Just maybe. Dont go adding that to your ego, its huge enough already!
Craig: Are we still talking about my ego, or my....?
Leah: Oi you! You know what i meant!
Leah playfully hits Craig, they kiss passionatly. Leah lies back on his chest and relaes. Theres a sudden lous thump at the front door. Leah bolts upright, shocked, and worried of getting caught.
Leah: Who the hell is that?! :eek:
Craig: Just be quiet... they'll go away soon enough.
Leah: Oh yeah, its ok for you. Your not the one sleeping with your sisters husband! She'd kill me!
Craig: I doubt she'd exactly wellcome me back with open arms, you know!!
Leah grabs a dressing gown, and walks out the door. She turns back, and talks quietly to Craig..
Leah: Just get changed. And you know... do something!
Leah rushes down the stairs. Craig lies back in bed, relaxed. Leah looks in the mirror, and muffles her hair, to make herself look ill. She does a fake cough, and opens the door.....
INT. RED RUM - DAY
Amy and Vicky are standing behind the bar, a group of football fans are watching the World Cup in the corner, other than that it is quiet.
Amy: So then, you fixed a date yet?
Vicky: For what?
Amy: For the wedding of course!!!
Vicky: Oh (disgusted) yeah...
Amy: Well dont soudn too confident about it will you hun...i mean after all you're only getting married to the man of your dreams
Vicky: Yeah with Richard and Hilary standing beside us...
Amy: Eh!?
Vicky: "They" have decided that we're going to have a double wedding...
Amy: What? And you dont get a say in it?:
Vicky: As if!... I just dont want to get married under the massize shadow of Richard and Hilary. Its meant to be mine and Nick's day...not some big Taylor event...
Amy: Yeah well hun, your gonna have to get used to power of the Taylor fmaily if you want to marry Nick.
A couple wallk into the pub and to the bar. Amy walks towards them.
Amy: Alright loves, what can I get ya?
Vicky ponders on what Amy has said, and takes a deep sigh in acceptance.
INT: HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE-day
Leah opens the door a crack, and talks through the door, in a fake-croaky voice, trying to sound ill...
Leah: I'm feeling ill... can you come back later...
A deep voice replies...
Carl: Oh, is that anyway to greet your fiance?!
Leah forces the door open quickly, and looks shocked, when she realises her australian fiance, Carl, is standing at the door. He looks behind her at the house...
Carl: No men around. Looks promising so far.
Carl walks in, carefree, passed a shocked and bewildered Leah. He hears the floorboards creak above him..
Carl: Or maybe i spoke too soon...
Leah talks quietly, still shocked...
Leah: Thats Mandy's husband. Got back from work early... just having a lie down...
Carl: Working on a Sunday?! God, he must be mad!... You've seemed to have recovered quickly!
Carl walks into the front room, Leah closes the front door, in total shock...
So Siobhan is Hilary's and Richard's daughter, there's going to be a big double wedding, Leah and Craig are at it again :rolleyes: And now Leah's fiance has turned up! Oh fun for all! :p
mmmm what makes me think Richard and Hilary wedding will not be the talk of the town.. it will be Siobhan's confession!!!!!
Craig will have Carl killed so don't get to use to his character :rotfl::rotfl::rotfl:
JustJodi
12-06-2006, 10:03
Ohhhhhhh dear, sounds like a shocker is afoot,,remember when Hilary made her entrance... well Sibhan is gonna rock the town with her confession???????:searchme:
Ah ha Carl is in town,, wonder if Craig is gonna give him cement shoes:lol:
Siobhan asks if he can have a word with them all, Richard says he is busy planning the wedding but he’ll find time to do it tonight.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Siobhan walks down the stairs holding the adoption certificate. She holds it close to her chest then folds it up and puts it in his pokcet.
She walks into the living room, where Richard is on the phone to a flourists.
Richard: So would that cover all the table displays aswell!?... Hmmm... well she really did want Roses... I tell you what... I'll get back to you about it... okay?
Richard puts the phone down as Siobhan approaches him.
Richard: Hi Siobhan, got any plans for the afternoon?
Siobhan: No... not much to do in Devon is there really?
Richard: Go out for a swim... or go to the beach...
Siobhan: It's not really my scene is it? Anyways... I was wondering if I could have a word with you and Hilary...
Richard: Wlel Hilary is out shopping and well I have so much to arraneg for this wedding... a double wedding has made matters come complicated...
Siobhan has a disapointed look on her face.
Richard: Is it important?
Siobhan: Very...it concerns the whole family...
Richard: Oh okay...well erm... how about tonight...we'll all have dinner and discuss it then? Is that alright?
Siobhan: Yeah sure...:rolleyes:
Siobhan walks off, deflated. Richard returns to his phonecalls.
Richard: Ah yes is that Laurence Peterson's bakery?
Siobhan takes a deep sigh and returns to her bedroom.
WILL SIOBHAN REVEAL THE TRUTH TO THE TAYLORS?
JustJodi
12-06-2006, 13:10
Ohhhhhhhh this is gonnnna be goooooooooood,,, Siobhan is gonna upset the apple cart,,:cheer: Bry darlin, please do not leave us hanging:love:
DaVeyWaVey
12-06-2006, 15:52
This is getting really good now......i bet that something will come up and Siobhan won't end up revealing the truth, i bet she will reveal she is Richard and Hilary's daughter on the double wedding!! That would be great!!
This is getting really good now......i bet that something will come up and Siobhan won't end up revealing the truth, i bet she will reveal she is Richard and Hilary's daughter on the double wedding!! That would be great!!
that is what I was thinking.. she will try tell them lots of time but will only get to do it at the wedding.. well at least they get a new child at their age :rotfl::rotfl:
just an add on: if Siobhan is richard and hilary's then Tanya is going to be way pushed out.. she was the only girl richard had.. this should be interesting
bakedbean
12-06-2006, 16:10
This is cracking im looking forward to seeing how this pans out
INT: HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE
Craig settles down in the front room, Leah is still standing up, looking anxious...
Leah: What are you doing here then?!
Carl: I just wanted to sort things out between me and you...
Leah: Yeah, well, its too late now. I've moved on.
Carl: Moved on? To who?!
Leah: (pauses) I didn't mean it like that. But you and me are in the past now, i thought you got that.
Carl: You torched my flat!
Leah: You cheated on me!
Carl: Oh, come on, you destroyed all my stuff... my clothes, my belongings, everything! Everything i worked for, you sent up in flames! But now i'm willing to forgive and forget.
Leah: You're "willing"?! You cheated on me, Carl. Now you might be able to "forgive" me, but i'm not. I've got a new life now, and you're not part of it.
Carl stands up, and puts his hands on her hips. He kisses the top of her head, and she squints in disapproval. At the same tiem, Craig walks down the stairs, walk dressed, wearing a towel. Carl doesn't notice him...
Carl: I'm so sorry about oz, Leah... come on, you and me are soul mates, here!
Craig interupts, with a loud cough...
Craig: Well, well, well... whose this then?!
Carl: (To Leah, gesturing to the towel) Oh, so it was you're brother in law was it?! Looks like it! :cool: (he looks to Craig) Carl- Leah's finance.
Leah: EX finance
Carl: Yeah... details, you know.... And you'd be... her bit on the side?!
Leah: This is Mandy's husband, i've already told you that!
Carl: Coming down in a towel... and i'm sure i heard you come down the stairs to open the door.... convineant...
Craig: Well... a mans allowed to have a shower, isn't he?!
Carl: Course. But alone, or with someone else... and not you're wife.... well, thats more debatable...!
Leah: Oh for gods sake, drop it Carl!
Leah gives Craig an anxious look. Carl sees, and looks suspicious....
bakedbean
12-06-2006, 16:51
Oh trouble at bay another good episdoe dont forget to check out exeter folks
uh oh! is carl going to blackmail Craig.. bad move buddy!!!
DaVeyWaVey
12-06-2006, 17:50
Another good script, it's all hotting up now, the outcome should be interesting! Don't forget to check out Hinston High either folks!! :)
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Richard, Hilary, Nick and Siobhan are all seated at the dinner table. They are half way trough their meal.
Richard: So then Siobhan...you had something you wanted to tell us?
Siobhan: (Nervous) Erm...well yeah I did it...
Hilary: Out with it then...:rolleyes:
Siobhan: I haven't been entirley honest with you all...
The three of them look on at Siobhan intriged. Richard's face turns to one of unhapiness.
Nick: What?... You mean you've been lying to us!?
Siobhan: Well not really...it's just...well I've created the impression I lived up a glamarous life in London...
Richard: And you saying that you haven't!?
Siobhan: Well...erm...yeah
Hilary: I could have told you all that... London girls have more class to them...she's as common as muck...
Nick: Mom!
Siobhan: No Nick... (gives Hilary a dirty look) she's right... I was brought up in a rundown part of London... i might have made out my life was glamarous...but it wasn't....
Richard: Look you dont have to explain this to us...we all tell little white lies to make ourselves feel good...
Siobhan: Yeah well I feel I need to... infact I have to... you see I was adopted...
Hilary: (Laughs to self) Is it any wonder...
Richard: Hilary! (To Siobhan) I fail to see why we need to know this Siobhan...
Siobhan: Because (Takes deep breath) I'm your daughter...
Richard and Nick are in total shock. Hilary turns as pale as a ghost, with a sudden revealation hitting her...:eek:
So did Richard forget about signing the adoption papers with Hilary then?? Whats Siobhan going to do next? Is revenge in the cards for a less than great upbringing?! :hmm: Can't wait for the next one guys ! :cheer:
mmmm So it this a new revelation to both Richard and Hilary.. Is siobhan going to take them for everything that is owed to her???
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Siobhan: Because (Takes deep breath) I'm your daughter...
Richard and Nick are in total shock. Hilary turns as pale as a ghost, with a sudden revealation hitting her...
Richard gets up from his seat. Looking at Siobhan with a look of complete shock.
Richard: What did you just say!?
Siobhan (With more confidence) I'm your daughter...
Richard: No... no you can't be... I only have 3 children... not any more!!!
Siobhan: I'm not lying to you Richard! I'm your daughter!!!
Richard staggers towards the mini bar and pours himself a glass of whisky to steady his nerves.
Richard: I have stade faithfull to both my wives!!! It...just...doesnt add up...you can't be...
Hilary holds her head in her hands, shaking like a nervous wreck. Nick notices this.
Nick: Mom... do you you know something about this?
Siobhan: Go on Hilary...tell them both how you put your newborn baby up for adoption! 30 years ago this year!
Richard: 30 years ago!? But... we had...
Hilary: I wasn't going to bring up your baby Richard...not after you'd cheated on me and ruined my life...!!!
Richard: But I never even knew you were pregnant!
Hilary: It wouldn't have made any difference Richard...
Richard: Any difference!? It would have made ALL the difference!
Hilary: Oh come on Richard! Just because I adopted a child...it doesn't mean to say that this common little tramp is our daughter! She's probably lying all about it!
Siobhan: No! No I'm not... and this says otherwise!
Siobahn gets the certificate out from her pocket. She waves it in the air, Richard grabs it and reads it, absorbing the facts, a look of horor on his face.
Richard: (To Self) Oh my good god...
JustJodi
13-06-2006, 18:53
uh oh cats outta the bag......so Hilary GAVE SIOBHAN UP FOR ADOPTION,,wow,, How the heck did she trace her folks:searchme: ... guess her papers were not sealed,,
This will also cool down Nick,, becase he was getting all hot and bothered around Siobhan,,,Actually neither Hilary or Richard owe Siobhan any thing,,if they give her any thing it will be purely voluntarily
Hmmmmmm Carl is going to be fitted with cement shoes and 2 tones of chains ... he obviously does not know much about Craig :p Should be verrrrrrrrrrry interesting when Craig and Carl have "words",
INT. Torquey Wine Bar - NIGHT
James and Lorraine are seated at a table in a trendy wine bar in Torquey. Lorraine them both a glass of red wine.
Lorraine: I hope your wife doesnt mind me keeping you out like this...
James: I couldn't care less about what she minds and doesnt mind... I'm entitled to a drink with a fellow worker after hours...
Lorraine: I doubt she'd agree if she knew I was female tough :rolleyes:
James: She doesnt seem to care about much these days, she's driving me up the wall...
Lorraine: I tell you whats driving me up the wall...
James: What?
Lorraine: Craig bloody Harvey! It justs annoys me that he's getting away with blue murder...and more... we know hes as guilty as hell, but.... god! I just wish we could get that scumbag banged up!
James: Believe me, I'd love nothing more than to see Craig Harvye banged up for the crimes he's commited...but let's face it Lorraine...without evidence.... there's just no chance
Lorraine: Well then...it's a case of having to find some evidence then isn't it?
Lorraine is deadly serious, James does not share her enthusaism for messing with Torbay's number one criminal.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Richard puts the down the certifcate. Hilary swipes it from him.
Hilary: Let me have a look at that...
Hilary looks at it, facing facts that Siobhan is indeed her daughter.
Siobhan: You cant deny it Hilary... I'm your daughter...
Richard: I can't believe you've kept this from me Hilary! For all these years!!!
Hilary: You didn't need to know!
Richard: I had the right to know!!! She's my daughter for heaven's sake!!!
Hilary: We'd split... we were over... I wanted to move on... remove all traces of you from my life! You're lucky I didnt abort it!!!
Richard sits down on his chair, clutching his chest.
Richard: I just...cant get my head around this...you must have been what, 4 months pregnant!?
Hilary: 3! I'm not enjoying this either Richard! Having her turn up was the last thing I ever expected!!!
Siobhan: I never wanted this to happen...
Nick: Well surely you imagined it'd cause fireworks!?
Siobhan: Yeah, but I just had to come to Baymoore and find my biological parents...
Hilary: Why did you come eh!? Why did you have to come after all of these years! Digging up the past! Causing all this upset and heartache!!!
Siobhan: Because...well you all need to know something...
Richard: What!? What else could we possibly need to know eh!? Other than the reason your here... I doubt it's for you to trace your roots... I bet it's all about the money isn't it!?
Siobhan: No!
Richard: Isn't it!?
Siobhan: No!!!
Richard: Then why the hell have you turned up!!!
Siobhan: Because I'm dying!!!
Her sudden announcement, shocks the three of them, they stare at each other, lost for words. A mixture of emotions filling the room.
OMG!!! :eek: Dying!! I, like Richard, Hilary and Nick, am speechless!!
Siobhan is dying???? :eek: What is going to happen next.. more please bry and abi
JustJodi
14-06-2006, 10:41
Ohhhhhh wow that is quite a bombshell !!!!! Maybe Siobhan is going to tell them she has a heridity disease and Nick may have it ?? One of the parents are carriers ?? :searchme: :searchme: :searchme: What about Tanya ??
INT: JENKINS MANOR
Siobhan is standing in the corner, facing the wall, talking quietly over her shoulder to the family, who are sitting behind her at the table, in shock...
Richard: Dying?!
Siobhan: Its called Sickle Cell Anemia. Its a blood definecy.
Hilary: Wait a sec... i've heard of that. Isn't that....?
Siobhan: Hereditory. Yep. I'm so sorry to pile this all onto you, but its true. I've not got long left... and well, you needed to know.
Richard: So, you're saying that one of us could have this two?! Me... or Hilary, or Nick, or Tanya.... any of us?!
Siobhan: No. Well, yes. Well, kind of. Its a recessive disorder. You only notice any problems or symptoms if you inherit two faulty genes. Sorry, Richard... but that means both of you probably have it.
Siobhans eyes well up with tears. Richard hugs her, and holds her in his arms. Hilary is in shock...
Siobhan: I might be wrong... all this science jargon goes over my head, but thats what i understood of it.... You should go get tested. And tell this Tanya too....
:eek: Oh god!! Now that is a kind of suprise!! Pile it on why don't you love :rolleyes: !
EXT. BAYMOORE BEACH - EVENING
Andonis and Emma are sitting on a bench near Valentinos restauarant. Andonis is talking to Emma but she is concering herself on Tom who is in distance, packing away the deck cahirs in the beach hut.
Andonis: It's just so unpleasant these days... mom coming around... dad arguing with her...her running off in tears...I don't think I can take much more of them all!
Emma mumbles to show she is listenting. She sees Luqina walk down to the beach. Tom greats her.
Andonis: I can't believe mom and Iqbal!? And then there's Ruby and Marcus!? Everyone's just at it with each other! But do they stop and think of the consequences!? No! They don't care who gets hurt... mainly me and Mohammed!
Luqina passionatley kiss Tom. Emma's heart sinks.
Emma: I just can't believe them two! When will Tom realise that she is just bad news for him!?
Andonis gets up in a rage.
Andonis: For god sake Emma! I'm fed up of this obsession you have with Tom!
Emma: Obsession!? I'm just looking out for a friend!!!
Andonis: He's more than a friend tough isn't he!? Well he is to you anwyays!!!
Emma: Oh don't be so ridiculous Don'!
Andonis: Ridiculous!? Me! I tell you what is ridiculous, a teenage girl obsessing over a man 10 years older than her! Do you know what Ems!? I'm sick of it! So you're welcome to him!
Emma: What are you saying?
Andonis: You and me... we're trough!
Andonis walks off leaving Emma lost for words. She looks over at Tom and Luqina, as the pair walk into the beach hut and close the door behind them.
bakedbean
14-06-2006, 20:11
Aghhh poor Emma!!! I dont think Sibohoon is telling the truth i think it is revenge on the family???
JustJodi
14-06-2006, 21:00
I am confused, I didn't know Hilary and Richard were Africans, So how did Siobhan end up with Sickle Cell Anemia,,:searchme: I must go back to my medical books and find out if this disease is fatal,, tsk tsk Hilary is now gonna have to go thru a bunch of tests as Richard will too, Nick and Tanya ..At least I was right on the money when I said it was a hereditary disease....
Adonis has the right idea, dump Emma, shes an idiot, she is pining away for some one who doesn't even know she is alive..Well done Adonis.........you no longer have to be Emma's door mat.:rolleyes:
INT: JENKINS MANOR
Siobhan is sitting on the balcony at the back, looking out to the view of Baymoore. Richard comes up behind her, pulls up a seat, and sits next to her.
Richard: How are you feeling?
Siobhan: I'm fine. I'm the one that's had time to get used to it all... you've had a bomb shell put on you...
Richard is silent...
Siobhan: If you think this is going to get ackward, then i'll move out. I'm sure there must be somewhere around here for me to go..
Richard: Oh no! It just takes some time to get used to. And hey, Hilary's ringing the Doctors now... you never know... we might be ok...I dont know must about this Sickle Cell myself...
Siobhan: Yeah... at least you have a chance...
Richard puts his arm around Siobhan...
Richard: Its not too late, Siobhan. Theres got to be some kind of treatment. They're always making new medicines and treatments up. They must have made something to treat this...
Siobhan: Its too late. I'm sure of it.
Richard: Any amount of money, and i'll pay it. You know that.
Siobhan: Thanks... but its too late. I didn't come here for money, i just came to tell you whats happening... I'm going to die soon anyway...
Is she going to die or be killed???? :searchme::searchme:
INT: HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE- morning.
Margaret is sitting at the breakfast table, buttering some toast. Leah storms down the stairs, throws her phone on the table, and sits down, annoyed.
Margaret: No need to be like that! Come on, whats happened now?!
Leah: Got another call from Carl. He's not leaving me alone!
Margaret: Well... what did he want?
Leah: You know, the usual. I dont even know why he's here! I've moved on, he should too...
Craig walks down the stairs, and sits down at the table, listening. Margaret and Leah don't react.
Leah: You know... why wont he leave me be?!
Margaret: So your not thinking about taking him back?
Leah: Hell no!
Craig butters some toast, listening to the convosation, slightly jealous...
BAYMOORE BEACH- day
Luqina and Tom are walking, arm in arm, along the beach. They're talking about the wedding...
Luqina: I can't wait for this wedding. Its gonna be everything we ever dreamed of. The church... the dress....
Tom: Its not all material though!
Luqina: No, of course not. But still. Its gonna be so great.
Tom: It's your's and my day. Of course it will be! :cool:
Luqina: We should hurry up and organise it, you know. What with the Taylors' Weddings coming up. And we all know what they're like- they'll spend millions on them! Maybe if we organised ours quickly, then we could make it so much better then theirs, that people would compare theirs to ours....
Tom: Like a competition?!
Luqina: Not a competiton exactly. I just dont want people thinking we can't afford the best...
Tom: They're millionaires.... billionaires, in fact, hun!
Luqina: Yeah... but that doesn't mean they have to out-do us! Come on, if we go back now, we could get organising the reception. We still need to find a venue...
Tom: No, i dont think so.... I dont want this to be a competition... its just going to be about you, and me, and us loving each other. I dont care if we had it in the back of a Ford Escort in the Deep South of America! As long as its all about you and me, then i dont give a damn... So lets not rush it, yeah?!
Luqina reluctantly nods her heard, disappointed.
What is the rush with everyone to get married? I can understand Richard and Hilary as they know each other years but the other couples don't know each other that long.. it will end in disaster (that if it even gets of the ground)
JustJodi
15-06-2006, 14:29
Some one needs to tell Luqina that a fancy wedding is not gonna make em happily ever after.. Can some one tell me where all the money for this wedding is coming from?? Surely Tom is not rich.:hmm: ....I am sure some one can enlighten me on this issue :searchme:
EXT. ELMCROFT CLOSE - NIGHT
Leah is walking home from Singh & Sons with a bag full of shopping. She sees Carl's car parked outside her house, he is resting beside it waiting for her to come back.
Leah runs back away from the close, Carl catches a glimpse of her and follows after her.
Carl: Wait! Leah! Come Back! Leah!
Carl catches up with Leah who has gave up running. She faces him with iritation.
Leah: For god sake Carl, will you just leave me alone!?
Carl: I would...if I knew it's what you wanted...
Leah: Of course it's what I want....hence the reason I keep telling you to get out of Baymoore! And out of my bloody life!!!
Carl: You can't just dismiss the feelings you have for me!
Leah: Not have Carl...had! I stopped "feeling" for you the moment I caught you shagging that cheap little tart in our walk in shower!
Carl: Hey and you burnt down my house...I think we're even now... so come on...what do you say... give me a chance...
Leah: What have you done to deserve one? Eh!?
Carl: Oh come on Leah, I've haven't travelled all the way across the world for you to say no... I am serious about us saving this relationship!! And I'm not going to let go as easy as you'd like!
Carl places his hand on Leah's face and gently stokes it. In the distance Craig sees this scene from his BMW, and looks on in jealousy.
JustJodi
15-06-2006, 22:29
Carl is gonna be a dead man soon, and my guess is Leah is gonna feel pretty bad if Carl ends up dead, and her sister finds out shes been boinking with her old man :nono:
Watch your back Carl, you are messing with the wrong woman
INT: JENKINS MANOR- morning
Richard passes Hilary a glass of orange juice, and sits next to her at the breakfast bar...
Richard: I think we need to talk, dont we?!
Hilary doesn't reply...
Richard: Why didn't you tell me we had a baby?!
Hilary: I'd left you, once i found out. And i could hardly just walk back into your life, and announce i was pregnant!
Richard: Why not?! I would have listened...
Hilary: Because thats not how i do things. And i couldn't bring up a baby on my own! I wanted a life... Friends... everything like that...
Richard: So you wouldn't let me bring up our child, but you didn't want to either, so you just gave it away?!
Hilary: In a nut shell, yes. I mean, you get all these women going on about how they can bring up kids on their own... but thats hardly me, is it?! Can you imagine me... all maternal, and what not?!
Richard: You could've at least told me, once you came back to me...
Hilary: I gave her up for adoption. And i admit it, i wanted that to be the end. I didn't want a baby then....
Richard: And you dont want her back now?!
Hilary doesn't reply.
INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - EVENING
Tom and Chris are watching the Football on the TV, drinking bear and being typical males. Luqina rushes into the house, excited.
Luqina: Oh my god! Oh my god! Oh my god!
Tom: (Half Intrested) Hiya babes... what is it?
Luqina: I have just had a brilliant idea!!!
Chris: Well there's a first for everything I suppose...
Luqina gives Chris a dismissive look in disgust.
Luqina: It's a theme for the wedding babes! It's just like so perfect!!!
Tom: Yeah? What is it then?
Luqina: Greek mythology! Imagine it, everyone dressed in togas and stuff! I can be Athrodite and you can be Eros... the god and godess of love!!! Oh my god OK will love it!!! What do you think!?
Tom: No way!
Luqina: (Disapointed) Tom!
Tom: No Luqina, it's something you'd expect to see on Footballer's Wives, not the real world... If we get married it's going to be normal... and simple...
Luqina: But Tom!! The magazines would love it! And the guests would love it! It would shake up Baymoore!
Tom: I wouldn't love it tough...and if you even dare think of havign any out of this world theme then I for one wont be turning up to the ceremony!
Chris: You and Emma Andrews then...
Luqina: What!?
Chris: Well she's already said she isn't going to come to the wedding...so she can keep Tom company if he dosent show...
Luqina grits her teeth in anger.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - EVENING
Siobhan is sitting in the longue watching a classic movie. Nick walks in and sits down besid her.
Nick: Hiya sis, what you watching?
Siobhan: "Sis"!?
Nick: Well it's what you are isn't it?
Siobhan: Yeah well I didn't expect you to be calling me that so soon.
Nick: It just seems so right to say it...
Siobhan: (Pleased) Well I'm not stopping you..I just wish Hilary was so keen on building a relationship
Nick: Oh give her time, she's just very careful who she gives her trust to, she's been hurt so many times over the years
Siobhan: Yeah well I don't want to hurt her...(jokes) she's my mother for christs sake!!!
Nick laughs at this.
Nick: You know the moment we meet I knew there was something there between us...some sort of bond... it's as tough I knew we were connected in some way... and well I couldn't think of anyone else I'd rather have as my sister...
Siobhan: Oh Nick...that's so sweet.
Nick: I want to get to know you... no matter how long we have left :)
Siobhan: I'm just so pleased that I have my family here beside me...
INT. HARVEY'S MOTORS - DAY
Leah walks into the garage and closes the door behind her. Craig looks up from his desk and stares at Leah in the darkness.
Craig: Hiya sexy... I was wondering how long it would be before you show...
Leah: Oh, and why was you so sure that I would turn up?
Craig: Becuase you cant keep your thilty...but sexy...little mits off me...
Leah: We really shouldnt...
Craig interupts Leah mid sentance
Craig: "We really shouldn't be doiung this to Mandy" god your like a stuck record...Mandy is never gonna find out...you want it....I want... so nothing and no one is gonna get in our way...
Leah: Except Carl...
Craig: (Annoyed) What about him!?
Leah: Well he wont take no for an answer will he...
Craig: How do you mean?
Leah: He just refuses to belive that me and him are over...he is so persiatnt...he wont drop it...I swear It's starting to grind on me!
Craig: I'll sort that lowlife scumbag out! Put him into place! Give him a peice of my god damn mind!
Leah: No Craig... and give his reason to suspect us!? Look.... I'll dela with it in my own way...
Craig: But...
Leah: But nothing... I know what I'm doing... just promise me you'll leave him alone...
Craig: I promise :rolleyes:
Craig has an obvious look of disgust at agreeing to Leah's terms.
INT: TORBAY GP'S- day
Ryan is at his desk, filling in some forms, after a patient leaves the room. The secretary rings through, he puts the phone on answer phone...
Ryan: I'm just about to go take my lunch break... is everything ok?
Secretary: Someones here to see you. Personal matters, apparently.
Ryan: Well, ask them to ring me later, please...
Secretary: She's insisting..
Ryan rolls his eyes...
Ryan: Fair enough, send them in.
Ryan looks up at the door, as Hilary enters the office. He stands up, and leans on the back of his chair.
Ryan: Well....?
Hilary: Is that anyway to greet me?!
Ryan: I've got a finance now, Hilary...
Hilary: And...?
Ryan: Well i dont want us to have a relationship anymore!
Hilary: Relationship?! Just though it was sex, to me.... And thats not what i'm here for, anyway!
Ryan: Thats all you're ever here for... :rolleyes: :cool:
Hilary: Sorry to disappoint you, love, but its more about a medical matter then that.
EXT: HARVEY'S MOTORS- Day
Carl walks passed the Garage. Craig looks up and sees him. he wonders out, and, trying to be discreet, grabs his shirt and pulls him into the Garage.
Carl: What the hell?!
Craig: I'm going to tell you this once, and this once only! Get out of Baymoore.
Carl: Excuse me?! Who are you to tell me where i can and can't go!?
Craig: You've spent enough time obsessing over Leah. Well, it stops now, you hear me?
Carl: She was my finance, i think i have every right to obsess over her if i damn well want to :rolleyes:
Craig: You've getting to her, and me? Well, i dont like it when people upset Leah.
Carl: What does it affect you if she's pissed off with me?! God, its not like you're her boyfriend!
Craig says nothing, but punches the thin metal wall to the side of Carls head/
Carl: Wait a sec.... you two aren't....?
Craig: You leave Baymoore, or you're going to have a damn well more of these "friendly" chats. And you do not want that, or me to deal with, you hear me?!
Carl faintly nods. Craig grabs his shirt against, pulls him away from the wall, and shoves him out the garage, and walks off. Carl picks himself up from the floor, and looks at Craig as he walks off. He has a smug grin on his face, knowing he must have been right about Craig and Leah....
What is carl going to do now? Craig should of just left alone.
INT: HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE- Morning.
Mandy is in the kitchen, cooking breakfast for Craig. He walks up behind her, puts his hands on her waist, and kisses her neck tenderly....
Mandy: What was that for?!
Craig: Is it so surprising that i want to give my wife a kiss in the morning?!
Mandy: Course not! Just wasn't expecting it, thats all....
Craig: Wont do it next time then, if you dont want... :cool:
Mandy: Dont be like that!!
Mandy leans forward, and tenderly kisses him. Leah walks in the room, and sees. She walks out in horror. Mandy sees in the corner of her eye...
Mandy: Whats wrong with her today...?
Craig: God knows. Always got the hump, that one!
Craig follows Leah out the room, and closes the door behind him. Mandy continues cooking. Craig grabs Leahs hand, turns her around, and goes to kiss her. She pulls away...
Craig: Whats all this then?!
Leah: Me?! I think you'll find you're the one thats gone all wierd! You know how bad i feel about Mandy, and you go and flaunt it in front of me!
Craig: Get a grip, woman! I'm a married man, for gods sake. You can't go all hot and cold with me, and get pissed off with me and Mandy! Stop acting so childish, and get a grip!
Leah storms out the house.
INT. TORBAY GPS - DAY
Hilary: Sorry to disappoint you, love, but its more about a medical matter then that.
Hilary sits down, Ryan is not pleased to see her in his office.
Ryan: What kind of medical matter?
Hilary: Well it appears that me and Richard have a new daughter...
Ryan: How!? Your not pregnant are you!!!???
Hilary: Hell no, its some little runt I put up for adoption years ago...anyways she's come with the sob story telling us all that she has some illness... that we all could have to
Ryan: And have you all got tested!?
Hilary: Yes...and we all all A OK... which leads me to suspect her...
Ryan: Well what is the ilness?
Hilary: "sickle cell anaemia"
Ryan: I agree with you Hilary, it is highly unlikely that she has this disease...
Hilary: Why so?
Ryan: Because, in general, it is only those from Africian or Caribean decent that get this...and seen as you and Richard are NOT either of the above... it poses some questions really...
Hilary: So she's lying then!?
Ryan: As far as my knowledge goes I can safely say yes...she is..
Hilary: (Delighted) Brilliant!
Hilary lights a cigarette and smiles to herself in satisfaction.
INT. RED RUM - EVENING
Leah marches into the bar, with a confident smile on her face. She notices Craig and Mandy sitting in the corner of the room, but decides to ignore them.
Amy: What can I get you Leah?
Leah: The usual...and on the rocks please...
Amy pours Leah's drink. Carl walks into the bar. He pinches Leah's bum. Craig looks over at the scene with a concerned look on his face.
Carl: Hello my little firestarter
Leah: Still not gone?
Carl: Oh well you know me, I always come back for more :p
Leah: Pity it's not just with one woman...and then we could still be together hapilly in the Sydney sun...
Carl: We still could be...
Leah: Yes we could... but I'd phycially be vomitting each day at the thought of inhabiting the same air as you for more than ten minutes at a time!
Leah looks over at Craig for support, but sees him laughing and joking with Mandy. She decides to play him at his own game.
Leah: I tell you what...one drink...on me...prove to me...why I should take you back...
Amy hands Leah her drink, she sips it and rests on the bar, waiting for Carl's response.
Carl: Becuase we were **** hot in bed... and because you and me were...no...are...meant to be...
Leah strokes Carl's arm, he moves in for a kiss, but Amy gives him his drink.
Leah: (Raised Voice) And another one for my "**** hot" lover...
Craig sees the scene and storms out of the pub in a rage. A bemused Mandy following him.
Mandy: Craig love! Are you okay!?
Carl: So then, have I earnt my drink?
Leah picks up the drink and throws it on Carl, he is drenched and has a shocked look on his face.
Carl: What was that for!?
Leah: For thinking I'd take you back... your so pafetic!
Leah laughs to herself and walks out of the bar. She sees Craig kicking his car in a rage in the distance. She smiles to herself in satisfaction.
INT. HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE - MORNING
Leah is eating breakfast in the living room. Craig walks into the room. He ignores her and heads to the dinner table.
Leah: You just going to ignore me then?
Craig: Like you did to me last night you mean!?
Leah: What!? I was just having a drink with my EX fiance!
Craig: It looked like more than that from where I was seated.
Leah: So what if it was!? Does it really bother you that much!?
Craig: Of course it does! You are meant to be in a relationship with me!!
Leah: No Craig! You are in a relationship with Mandy...
Craig: Then what are we!? Hows your father on a twice daily basis!?
Leah: Look all I'm saying is you can your fun with Mandy...and I do what I want aswell...no strings attached...
Craig grabs Leah by the arm and stares at her in the face.
Craig: (Vicious) Now listen Leah, no one makes a full out of me! Not even you! Just becuase I've slept with you dont mean to say I can't get one of my men to shoot your brains out!
Leah: Is this some meaningless threat?
Craig: No...it's a promise...now you get that Aussie lover boy out of Baymoore pronto....or I'll be dealing with him...and I tell you something now Leah, I wont be pleasant about it!
He lets go of Leah, who catches back her breath. Craig storms out of the house, slamming the door behind him, leaving Leah stunned at his words.
diamond1
19-06-2006, 15:32
Craig:[/B] No...it's a promise...now you get that Aussie lover boy out of Baymoore pronto....or I'll be dealing with him...and I tell you something now Leah, I wont be pleasant about it!
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someone tell the plastic reggie kray wannabe that 1965 called they're sick and tired of him but he's free to join us in 2006 anytime...i know its a fiction (and a good one:) ) but i hate people like him
INT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Hilary walks out to the swimming pool with a smile on her face. She lies down on a deckchair and takes a sip form her cocktail. She whistles in delight. Nick is sitting at the garden table outside, working on his laptop.
Nick: What you got to be so happy about mom?
Hilary: Knowledge that I am right Nick...
Nick: About what?
Hilary: Your so called "sister" Siobhan
Nick: What do you mean by that!?
Hilary: Well she isn't all she appears to be...infact she's been telling us a bunch of porkies...
Nick: Give it a rest mom! You really need to give her a chance to prove herself!
Hilary: Oh she's proved herself alright...proved she is a devious little liar. Telling us about her "sickle cell anameia", worrying us sick to death thinking that we had it! And after all that it turns out that she's been lying!
Nick: Lying!? You don't know that! Infact I can't believe you could even suggest it! Why would she!?
Hilary: I dont know, but that's what I intend to find out... dont worry Nick I'll prove to you all that I'm write... people always show their true colours eventually...
Nick: You really are a nasty peice of work at times mom! You just can't face it that me and dad want to get to know her! You're a jealous and bitter old woman!
Nick storms inside the house carrying his laptop with him. He leaves Hilary alone by the pool.
Hilary: We'll see about that...I'll get that Siobhan if it's the last thing i do...
INT: SINGH AND SON'S CONVINENCE STORE
Emma is in the shop. She goes to the till, and pays for a bottle of coke, and walks to the door. As she goes to open the door, Tom walks in. She rolls her eyes, and tries to walk past him. He grabs her arm, and follows her out. They stand outside the shop door...
Tom: Emma... whats wrong with you?!
Emma: Whats wrong with ME?!
Tom: What are you trying to say....?
Emma signs with fristration, then says quietly...
Emma: It's just Andonis... Just walking into that shop reminds me....
Tom: Dont worry, hun. You'll be ok.
Tom tries to hug Emma. She pushes him off her.
Emma: That wasn't an invitation, you know! But you know whats been getting to me more? You. And that slut, Luquina.
Tom: Oh god, dont you start!
Emma: Actually, i think i will, thank you very much! What is with you two?! Getting married all of a sudden! I mean, for a start, she's a slut thats just using you to get in the Tabloids again... and for a second, how the hell can YOU afford a wedding that will suit her?! Come on, you're totally going to get into debts for her. And does she deserve that? Nope! And will she even care? Nope!
Tom: Well, its hardly any of your buisness how i'm paying for it! Me and Luquina love each other- i'll do anything for her. And if that meant getting into debts, then so be it.
Emma: Got you wrapped around her little finger then! :rolleyes:
Tom: You know what?! Its got absolutly nothing to do with you! We love each other, and if you can't accept that, then it just proves what an immature school girl you really are, doesn't it!?
Emma: I'm not the one that can't see whats in front of my eyes! She's using you!
Tom: I dont even care what you think about me and her, to be frank. We're getting married, whether you, and everyone else, likes it or not.
Emma: Well when she runs off with her fame, and your money, then dont come running to my doorstep! Cause she'll drag you through the mud, she will. Her type always do.
Emma storms off down the street.
Wow - just caught up! Fantastic stuff! So...Siobhan... what are you playing at eh? Why have you chosen Richard and Hilary?? Well done Emma for telling Tom like it is! Shame he can't see what shes up to like Emma can! So, Craig is getting all jealous eh....hmm....is Carl going to "disappear"? Is Mandy going to find out what her sis has been up to with her hubby?
Can't wait for the next segments guys ! :cheer:
EXT: SINGH HOUSE- day
Sanjita nervously walks up the path to the house, and knocks on the door. Andonis opens the door, sees its her, and tries to shut it again....
Sanjita: Andonis, wait...
Andonis: I haven't got anything else to say to you, Mum. I can't beleive you'd cheat on Dad like that! How could you be so... heartless?!
Sanjita: I wasn't being heartless. You know what your father can be like sometimes...
Andonis: All the same, you've split this family apart, and i dont want anything else to do with you!
Andonis tries to shut the door, Sanjita puts her foot in the door to stop him, and calls through the crack..
Sanjita: Andonis! You can't just disown me like this- i'm your mother! I gave birth to you!
The door flies back open. To Sanjitas surprise, Kash is now standing at the door, with Andonis standing at the stairs behind him.
Kash: Whats did i tell you!? I told you to leave my life and my house, so now do it!
Sanjita: I have the right to see my family, whatever you think!
Andonis: Well we dont want to see you! Dont you get it, for Gods sake?!
Sanjita: And Mohammed?! You can't just take my whole family away from me, Kash, i have rights!
Kash: Well its bloody well obvious Andonis wants nothing to do with you! And Mohammed will feel the same!
Sanjita: Once you've brainwashed him against me, like you have with Andonis, maybe....
Andonis: Dad has done nothing! He's not the one that cheated, and split the family up!
Sanjita: You can't stop me seeing my son. Either of you!
Kash: Well you know what? If you think i'm gonna lay down, and let you take Mohammed away from me, after you've gone off with my brother.... well you're having a laugh. I'm not going down without a fight, you hear me?!
Kash slams the door in Sanjitas face
EXT: PRIVATE YACHT
Richard and Siobhan are having a trip on his private yacht, in the Bay. He brings it to a halt, and sits down next to Siobhan, chatting, whilst looking at the vew of Baymoore...
Richard: (pointing out to Baymoore) Look closesly over there, and you might see the Pub.... Look at the Pier, and then to the right... you can just about make it out...
Siobhan: Oh yeah, i reckon i can see....
Richard looks at Siobhan. Siobhan notices...
Siobhan: Whats wrong?
Richard: Nothings wrong... Its just strange how things can change so quickly. This could've easily been me and Tanya...
Siobhan: I know what you mean... not so long ago, i had a normal life. Nothing special, just normal... Didn't worry about the future, and now thats all i can think of. Or rather, the lack of it....
Richard: Dont talk like that...
Siobhan: Its true though. I never thought i'd be here with you...on a yacht with my Dad...
Richard smiles as she says "Dad"...
Richard: Well you know what, no matter how long we've got left, we're gonna make sure you have the best life you can. Promise.
Siobhan smiles, and looks back out to the view...
INT. BAYMOORE B&B - NIGHT
Annie lets Leah into the B&B and directs her to the living room, where Carl is relaxing.
Annie: He's in there love...I'll leave you to it...
Leah: Thanks Annie
Leah walks into the living room. Carl has a delighted look on his face. He switches off the TV and turns to face Leah.
Carl: Leah, what a nice suprise! Come to aplogise have you?
Leah: Apologise? What for?
Carl: For pouring a glass of the Red Rum's finest on me!
Leah: Oh yeah...sorry
Carl: Something gives me the impression that you didn't come around here for that tough...
Leah: (Blunt) Get out of Baymoore.
Carl: Excuse me!?
Leah: If you know what's good for you Carl, you'll get out now! Alright!?
Carl: Where's this all come from!?
Leah has an uncomfortable look on her face.
Carl: Craig has put you up to this hasn't he?...
Leah's silence confirms this.
Carl: I knew it! The jealous old git! Well you can tell him this Leah! I am not leaving Baymoore just becuase he says so! I'm not scared of him! For christ's sake he is a 50 year old fat bloke! Who does he think he is giving out orders!?
Leah: I've seen too many people get hurt at the hands of Craig, Carl. If he says something, he'll do it...it's not worth the risk...I don't want you to get hurt... please...for me...just go...
Carl: I've said no...now if you don't mind...I'd like you to leave me alone...
Carl gestures for Leah to leave.
Leah: Fine! But dont say I didn't warn you!
Wow - just caught up! Fantastic stuff! So...Siobhan... what are you playing at eh? Why have you chosen Richard and Hilary?? Well done Emma for telling Tom like it is! Shame he can't see what shes up to like Emma can! So, Craig is getting all jealous eh....hmm....is Carl going to "disappear"? Is Mandy going to find out what her sis has been up to with her hubby?
Can't wait for the next segments guys ! :cheer:
My thoughts exactly.. I can see Carl just disappearing and Siobhan been caught out.. why target Richard and Hilary? she must know a lot about them for her to know that hilary gave up a baby
diamond1
21-06-2006, 11:42
Carl: I knew it! The jealous old git! Well you can tell him this Leah! I am not leaving Baymoore just becuase he says so! I'm not scared of him! For christ's sake he is a 50 year old fat bloke! Who does he think he is giving out orders!?
see!? go on carl dont be afraid of him go round there and show him who's the boss...he's a has been.
INT: JENKINS MANOR- day
Siobhan is in the front room, flicking through the paper. Hilary walks in, checks around for Richard, and closes the door behind her, when she sees he's not around. She walks over to Siobhan, and stands next to her, overpoweringly...
Hilary: You know, i would've beleived you. I aint a Doctor, so maybe that makes me gullible, who knows....
Siobhan: I dont know what your on about....
Hilary: But then i thought, if your going to come back and find your parents, why wait untill your dying?!
Siobhan: I've already explained all this... i just wanted to get you lot to get yourself tested...
Hilary: Like hell you did! I've spoken to the Doctors... this "Sickle Cell Anemia" only ever affects Carribean people and people like that- not White British peope!
Siobhan is silent, then says quietly...
Siobhan: Well this Doctor ought to be struck off, if he's giving out information like that thats so obviously wrong!
Hilary: Give it up, Siobhan. I know your lying, so stop pretending! I mean, come on, if your "dying", then why haven't you had any symptoms!? You've not even had a twinch!
Siobhan: Because i hardly wanted everyone to see me like that! Now sorry, if i'm trying to make everything easier for you lot, by covering up all the pain... but thats what i thought was best!
Hilary: So, anyway, all these made me think.... if you can lie about dying. About having a disease... then what else can you lie about?!
Siobhan: (Her eyes welling up with tears) I was just trying to help you by coming here and telling you about the disease.... for all i knew, you could've been a ticking bomb for it!
Hilary: Oh, give up the melodramatics! I know your lying, and i dont like it. And when i dont like things, i get rid of them. So now i'll ask you nicely. Get out of Baymoore.
Siobhan: What...?! I'm only just beginning to get to know my family... i can't do that! You can't make me!
Hilary: Well then, we have a little problem, dont we?! Because i dont like your lying about your disease
Siobhan: (interupts) I'm not bloody lying! Why dont you trust me?!
Hilary: Because its near-on impossible thats why! So heres what i'm gonna do. If you wont leave, then i WILL find out the truth about what your doing here. And i'll tell your precious Richard, who you've already got wound around your little finger. I'm going to uncover the truth, Siobhan. And when i do- your life wont be worth living!
Wow this is getting good as usual it is brillaint more soon guys
Hilary V's Siobhan!! very very interesting.. will Richard believe hilary or will he respect his new daughter?
Hmm this could be interesting - with Richard enjoying his "daughter"s company now (she still may be their daughter, just not dying from sickle cell) I'm inclined to think hes going to believe everything Siobhan says, may be even cause the break up that Tanya unsuccessfully tried. I'm thinking something runs very deep for Siobhan though, intrigued to know what it is though.
INT: HARVEY'S MOTORS
Carl walks into the Garage, and eyes Craig working under a car. He stands there, waiting for Craig to notice him. When he does, Craig stands up, menacingly...
Craig: Well, well, well... still not got the message have we?!
Carl: Cut all the crap, Craig. I know why you're so desperate to get rid of me.
Craig: Oh yeah?! And whys that then?
Carl: Because of you and Leah :rolleyes: You know, i should've seen it from the start. She always did look ackward when she was around you. But now its so bloody obvious, i'm surprised Mandy hasn't already found out!! I mean, sleeping with your wifes sister?! How low is that, Craig...?
Craig: You're so sure of yourself, aren't you :rolleyes:
Carl: Actually, yeah i am. Because unless you stop intervening with me and Leah, then i'll go and tell your precious wife what a low-life you really are!
Craig: Well you can forget that idea!
Carl: No, because something tells me that neither you, nor Leah, would want her to know what you to really feel about each other. So leave me to do what i damn well like, you hear me?!
Carl storms out the Garage. Craig picks up his phone, and dials a number...
Craig: (on the phone) I've got another job for you... The names Carl... He's been sneaking around Baymoore... Just the standard "Beat 'em and show 'em" sshould do the trick... Come round the garage and i'll give ya the details.
well he has been warned often enough!
Carl, played with the wrong guy.. I dont' think Mandy would believe him.. Leah can always say he is saying that so that mandy will kick her out and she would have to go back with him...
INT. MULTI-STORY CAR PARK - NIGHT
Hilary is waiting in her car at an empty car park. She is reading a magazine of Heat Magazine, whilst waiting for someone.
A silver land rover speeds into the car park. Hilary smiles to herself and gets out of the car. Out of the land rover appears a man in a smart suit and sunglasses. He removes them.
Hilary: Jack Musgrove P.I?
Jack: Yeah... Hilary I presume?
Hilary nods to confirm this.
Jack: What can I do for you?
Hilary passes Jack a brown enevlope. He takes out a picture of Siobhan from the enevlope and takes off his sunglasses to take a closer look.
Jack Whose the blonde?
Hilary: "Siobhan Burke", or so she claims to be... I want you to find out everything you can about this woman...dig out all the evidence you can... I need to nail this bitch!
Jack: I'm onto it...
Jack shakes Hilary's hand and steps back into his land rover. He speeds off. Hilary smiles once more and then returns to her car.
bakedbean
21-06-2006, 19:08
Oh Hilaray at her scheming best again cant wait to see what she does next.
Jeees i have missed soo much :rolleyes: ! Is Siobhan really lying then? I wans't expecting that! And Carl should have taken leah's warning!?
So is she really Siobhan Burke or is she impersonating her then??!! :hmm: The plot thickens. I wonder what the private investigator is going to turn up on her and if Richard and Nick will believe what is discovered too....
JustJodi
21-06-2006, 21:31
I presume this Siobhan must be quite a healthy LOOKING specimen for some one dying of "sickle cell anemia"...... OK Hilary hires this private dick...he goes digging up evidence,,,I am hoping the only thing he digs up is that she is indeed Hilary and Richards daughter and has gotten the lying, cheating,scheming genes from Hilary :p
OH!! maybe "Siobhan" did a Eve in Home and Away??? Bumped of the real Siobhan and now wants revenge but that begs the question who she really is and why is she targeting Richard and co??? (btw, it looks really good to see my name in this :D:D )
INT. IQBAL AND MARCUS' FLAT - NIGHT
Iqbal is sitting back on the sofa, relaxed, watching the world cup. Sanjita walks trough the door, looking tired and depressed.
Iqbal: Hiya babe, where you been?
Sanjita collapses onto the sofa in exhuastion.
Sanjita: "Trying" to talk my ignorant husband... all I'm asking for is to see my children! Is that too unreasonable to ask!?
Iqbal: No of course not...
Sanjita: He's being so pig headed about it! Just because I've left him!...He has no right to do this! I want....I need my sons!
Iqbal: Even after what Andonis said?
Sanjita: He didn't mean what he said...that's all down to Kash brainwashing him! I need to get my boys out of there before Kash drills his drivel into their heads and poisons them against me!
Iqbal: Calm down babe...you're doing yourself no favours getting worked up like this...
Sanjita: I know! I Know...but it's just...one big mess
Iqbal: No it isn't...its going to work out fine... and now that Kash is out of the picture...we can be together officially...and happy..for once...
Iqbal whipes the tears from Sanjitas eyes and kisses her sensativley.
EXT. BAYMOORE SIDE STREET - NIGHT
Carl is walking back to the B&B with a bag of chips in his hands. He is whistling to himself. Out of an alleyway step a group of welt built men in dark clothes. They block Carl's path.
Carl: Excuse me please...
Carl tries to move out of their way but they block him from walking away.
Carl: Can I get past please
Thug: I'm afraid I can't let you do that....
Carl: What the hell is this all about!? Eh!? Get out of my bloody way will you!
One of the thugs pushes Carl to the floor. He bags of chips falling onto the floor into a puddle of water. The group of thugs begin to violently kick and thump Carl to a pulp. At first he screams out in pain until he falls unconcious. The thugs continue to kick him in the head.
Thug: Enough! Craig told us to beat him up not put him in a coma!
All of a sudden James and Val appear on the side street. James sees the group of thugs and Carl on the floor.
James: Oi! You lot! Stay there!
James runs towards the group of thugs, who all run off down the road and speed off in their mercedes.
James goes up to Carl and checks a pulse. Val appraoches them, keeping a distance from the sight of Carl covered in blood, battered and bruised.
James: Quick Val! Call an ambulance before we loose him!
INT. RED RUM PUB - NIGHT
Kash is standing at the bar, looking into a half empty pint glass, drowning his sorrows. Iqbal walks into the pub, looks around and spots Kash. He grabs Kash and turns him around.
Iqbal: I've been looking everywhere for you... we need to talk
Kash: I dont want to talk to...
Iqbal: Well that's tough becuase you have no choice!
Kash: You gave up the right to give me orders the day you slept with my wife!
The pub goes silent at the erupting argument.
Iqbal: We love each other! Face it Kash! She never loved you! But don't punish her for it!
Kash: She deserves it for what she has done to me!
Iqbal: It's no more than you deserved, dictating what everyone does! Thinking you rule the family! Is it any wonder they all hate you!?
Kash: Dont you dare! DARE! Talk about me like that!
Iqbal: Sanjita might be scared of you but I'm not! She is a good woman! And I don't want to see you messing her around! She has the right to see her children! You can't stop her from seeing them!
Kash: If she cared for this family she wouldn't have gone sleeping around like some common street whore!
Iqbal's anger builds up, he punches Kash who collapses onto the bar, his hand smashing into a point glass. He lifts himself up, his hand bleeding.
Iqbal: If you want to keep any respect that you have, then be a man! Learn to deal with what's happened and let Sanjita see her children!
Kash looks around the pub, with everyone staring at him in disgust. He walks out of the pub in a fluster, feeling hurt and abused.
diamond1
22-06-2006, 21:11
oh no is carl alright?
and carl can't get the police involved because theres no evidence of craig being involved.
damn craig someone should teach him a lesson..:ninja:
oh wonder if Carl will be ok!! I think now he will tell Mandy about Craig and leah.. this is only going to get worse
JustJodi
23-06-2006, 09:43
oh no is carl alright?
and carl can't get the police involved because theres no evidence of craig being involved.
damn craig someone should teach him a lesson..:ninja:
Too late the cops are involved it was James who saw the thugs speeding away and he found Carl,, sooooooooooo:searchme: Carl can just be UNCOOPERATIVE with the cops when he comes to,, thats how I see it happening,,, or he spills the beans,,,:searchme:
diamond1
23-06-2006, 13:11
he will have to lie to james because if he 'grasses' it might be worse next time he might end up under a flyover:ninja: ...carl might have to leave or even worse have to resort to desparate measures lke accidently run over craig? or 'by accident' drop a brick on his head.
JustJodi
23-06-2006, 14:09
If James is a sharp eyed cop as I HOPE he is being portrayed.. he will see right thru Carl's fabricated story ( if he isn't in coma or something ) James and his partner both want to land Craig in it,, soooooo lets hope that Carl pulls thru..... also I can see Leah coming to the hospital with Craig,, and Craig hissssssses in Carls ear,, now leave the country ..:hmm:
DaVeyWaVey
23-06-2006, 15:02
I just caught up with 6 pages of devon seas!!! So much has happened!! I think Siobhan is lying about her illness but i wonder if Jack will be able to reveal the truth?!! I think Richard will believe Siobhan over Hilary....
I hope Carl will be ok, Craig is a nasty piece of work. Why can't he fight his own battles?! Instead he has to hire a gang of thugs!
Ooooo - whats Leah's reaction going to be when she finds out that Carl is in hospital - shes going to know Craig was behind it....is she going to confront him :hmm: So much to think about !!
I have a feeling Kash is going to disappear with the boys - he doesn't want Sanjita seeing them, whats the easiest way to do that and give them a traditional upbringing .... plus, whilst they aren't so keen on seeing Sanjita, now is the easiest time to get them away from her..... :eek:
INT: TORBAY GENERAL HOSPITAL
Carl is lying unconcious in an empty hospital room. Leah walks up to the room, and looks in the door. She sees his battered body, and sighs hard. She looks around for nurses, and walks in, when she sees no one is around...
She sits down by his bed, looking at him. Then stands up in rage...
Leah: What did i say, eh?! Did i not tell you to get the hell out of Baymoore?! I told you what he'd do to you, but did you listen?! I mean... what is with you?! Did you want to go and get yourself nearly killed?!
Leah slams the side of the bed, and sits down again... She talks, more quietly...
Leah: I was just trying to protect you, Carl... You dont know what Craig is like, and face it, you got off lightly.... if you'd seen what he's done to other people... I told you not to mess with Craig. You should've listened. Now you've got what was coming to you....
Leah walks to the door, and looks back to Carl over her shoulder...
Leah: I'm sorry...
INT: HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE
Craig is flicking through the TV channels. The doorbell rings. He reluctantly gets up and opens the door, to see its James. He leaves the door open, and sits back down, James walks in and shuts it behind him.
Craig: What you here for then?
James: Just a few questions, nothing much...
Craig: Come on then, spit it out. I aint got all day!
James: That Carl, me and Val found him beaten up down some alleyway last night...
Craig: And...? Why do you reckon i've got anything to do with it?! :rolleyes:
James: Come on, everyone knows what you think of Carl! Enough of us have seen you pulling him into the garage... threats, i'd imagine! So come on, are you behind this?!
Craig: Are you insinuating that I beat him up?!
James: Well, no... but you have contacts... you know people...
Craig: Was i there when this man was beaten up!?
James: No, but come on, you move in those circles....
Craig: Then tell me, what evidence do you exactly have against me?!
James doesn't reply...
Craig: Well then, if i were you, i'd take your pathetic little face back down to that copper scum-house with your slag of a wife, and find out EXACTLY, who did this. You have notihng against me, so if i were you, i'd get my hand out the pan before i get scolded!
James: Everyone knows what your like, Craig. And thats the last time you get away with it. I'm not dropping this, beleive me. And no matter how many threats you give me.... its not going to stop me. You hear me?!
James storms out the house. As he gets to the door, Craig shouts.
Craig: Yeah, you better keep walking. Scum like you dont belong in a place like this.
INT: JENKINS MANOR- day
Hilary is in the bedroom, applying another layer of make up. Her mobile phone rings, she picks it up, and looks at who is ringing...
Ryan
She closes the door, answers the phone, and puts it on speaker phone...
Hilary: Ryan. Pleasure..
Ryan: I'd love to say the same...
Hilary: You mean, your not pleased to talk to me?! Heartbroken, i tell ya! :rolleyes:
Ryan: Oh, aren't you just the sarcasm queen?!
Hilary: So, what did you want to tell me then?!
Ryan: Siobhan Burke... i've got a hold of her medical records....You do realise i could get struck off for this, dont you?!
Hilary: So what do they say....?
Ryan: I've not had a chance to look at them yet. But i'll take a look later this evening.
Hilary: Ok, thanks Darl!
:eek: No!!! You've got to reveal her medical records now - not later!! You can't keep us hanging like that!!!
More NOW please :D :D
:eek: No!!! You've got to reveal her medical records now - not later!! You can't keep us hanging like that!!!
More NOW please :D :D
they will keep us waiting like they always do Em!! it is not fair :(
they will keep us waiting like they always do Em!! it is not fair :( Thats soooo unfair!! They can't do that to their avid fans - we need to know now! I want to know what Hilary is going to do to you..i mean siobhan..when she knows whats in those medical notes!! :D :rotfl:
At least I'm going to be here for a fair while tonite - waiting for the next Hilary/Richard/Siobhan installment (hopes BB and Abi take note of this to make sure they post it tonite :rotfl: )
DaVeyWaVey
23-06-2006, 17:40
Wow what a cliffhanger! I wonder what Siobhan's medical notes are like, it will probably reveal some of her big black lies!!
I hope Craig gets his just desserts, and i hope Carl recovers soon too.
INT. TORQUEY WINEBAR - EVENING
Ryan walks into the wine bar, his breifcase in his hands. He sits down at a table where a waiter comes to take his order.
A car pulls up outside of the winebar. Siobhan steps out of the car and walks into the winebar. She walks up to Ryan's tabel and sits down.
Siobhan: Mind if I join you?
Siobhan sits down, with a flirtatous look on her face. Her hair is down, and she is wearing a revealing dress.
Ryan: Do I know you?
Siobhan: You know of me...
Ryan: (Flirtatious) I'm sure I'd be able to recognise someone like you...
The waiter brings a bottle of wine to the table and two glasses. Ryan nods his head in appreication.
Siobhan: Siobhan Burke ring a bell?
Ryan: Hilary's daughter! (Suspicious) Why do I get a feeling that this isn't a coincidence?
Siobhan: How do you mean?
Ryan: Well one minute your mother is questioning your health...and the next...your here...with me...
Siobhan: Oh don't be so cynical Ryan...lighten up...relax...it's after office hours....
Siobhan is rubbing her foot up Ryan's inner leg. He chokes on his drink.
Ryan: Siobhan... I dont know if I'm givign out the wrong messages here...but I'm in a relationship...
Siobhan: That doesnt stop people having a bit of fun every now and again does it?
Ryan: Trust me..."fun" always ends up with the opposite...let's just talk instead...
Siobhan: (Seductive) Well what is it that you want to talk about?
Ryan: Oh I don't know...Sickle Cell Anameia perhaps?
Siobhan laughs to herself.
Siobhan: Influenced by my dear mother no doubt? (Strokes Ryan's arm) Look Ryan I know that the disease is very rare in white women...but I can assure you I'm not lying... but I'm sure that my family are in danger...
Ryan: Their test results say otherwise...
Siobhan looks Ryan up and down, he catches this and smiles flirtatiously. His phone rings.
Ryan: Oh I'm sorry...its my fiance...I have to take this...
Siobhan: Dont mind me...
Ryan gets up and answers his phone. Whilst his back is turned Siobhan gets a tablet from her purse and puts it in his glass. The drink fizzes and then settles.
Ryan: (Into Phone) Actually babes... I might be a home a little later than I expected... something's come up
Siobhan looks down at Ryan and smiles flirtauously. Ryan walks over to the table again and strokes Siobhan's arm.
Ryan: (Into Phone) Dont wait up...I could be gone all night...ok bye babes...
Siobhan bites her lip seductivley.
Siobhan: Well who's a naught boy then?
Ryan: I know, I'm a devil arent it...I need to be punished...
Ryan drinks down his wine in one mouthful.
Siobhan: So then...your place or mine? :cool:
Siobhan smiles to herself with satisfaction.
INT: TORBAY GENERAL HOSPITAL- Day
Leah is in Carl's hospital room, nervously watching his motionless body. A nurse comes in...
Nurse: He's out of the danger zone now. He's been taken off life-support, so everythings showing good signs. He should re-gain conciousness in the next few hours, i'd expect.
Leah: (smiling) Ok, thanks. Thats great news.
The nurse wheels a machine out the room, and Leah sits on the edge of Carls bed. She strokes his hair... Craig walks into the room, making Leah jump up...
Leah: What are you doing here?! Come to gloat?!
Craig: I'm just visiting, no laws against that!
Leah: Come on, you know what you've done to him. You're goddam lucky he's not dead! You could've been up for murder, Craig.
Craig: They've got nothing against me- no proof. No one knows what's happened to poor, little Carl
Carl twiches slightly, as he regains conciousness. Neither Craig nor Leah notice, as he listens in on them...
Leah: Don't you even feel a bit sorry for what you've done?!
Craig: You know as well as i do that he had it coming. He shouldn't have messed with us
Leah: Us?! Dont you even think about dragging me into this! You're the one that got your thugs on him, not me! How could you be such a monster?!
Craig doesn't reply, just looks at her menacingly...
Leah: I can't do this anymore. I can't watch you do things like this... its evil, Craig...
Craig: So, what are you saying...?
Leah: I need some time away from you. Sorry, but...
Leah kisses Craig gently on the cheek, and leaves the hospital room. Craig looks at Carl in anger, and leaves the room, also. Carl smiles slightly, having heard the conversation...
I'm confused - why the sudden change of heart?! :searchme: One min all he wants to do is talk, then his fiancee phones and he decides he wants to spend the night with Siobhan - surely it would normally be the opposite way round wouldn't it?!
DaVeyWaVey
24-06-2006, 20:34
Do you think Ryan could be using Siobhan to get the truth out of her about her illness?! Maybe if he thinks he can get close to Siobhan, she might tell him the truth....just a thought :hmm:
Good on you Leah! She made the right choice about staying away from Craig, hopefully she will keep out of his way permanently before she gets hurt too....
INT: TORQUEY APARTMENTS
Siobhan leads Ryan into his flat. He is obviously drunk, and high on the drugs she slipped in his drink. He tries to kiss her, she stops him...
Siobhan: Shh... All good things come to those who wait :cool: And trust me, you've been a naughty naughty boy tonight!
Ryan: Punished.....
Siobhan: You sure will be, big boy! But first, a girl needs to get ready.
She guides him to the sofa. Siobhan goes to the kitchen and pours him a glass of wine, slipping in another pill at the same time. She goes back to him, and gives it to him. As he sips at it, satisfied...
Siobhan: Now you sit, and enjoy...
Ryan gives a faint smile, and downs the drink in one. He settles down on the sofa, and slowly passes out. Siobhan, standing in the bedroom, sees this. She smiles...
Siobhan: Poor Ryan... all drugged up by the nasty woman! Shame!
Siobhan searches the flat, in drawers, cupboards etc. She opens up his breifcase, and finds some files...
Siobhan Burke
She smiles. Siobhan opens her bag, and takes out some identical files. She puts these files in the case, and takes his copies out- swapping them. She closes the suitcase, and leaves the flat, smiling, satisfied...
INT: PAIGNTON POLICE STATION
James is sitting at a table in the canteen, picking at a plate of food. Lorraine comes over, puts her tray down....
Lorraine: Mind if i sit here?
James: Nah, course i dont...
Lorraine sits down, and starts eating. She notices he's looking tense...
Lorraine: Hey, whats wrong?
James: Nothing... dont worry about it...
Lorraine puts her hand on his arm...
Lorraine: Come on, you can tell me
James: Its just my daughter. She's dumped her boyfriend. Again. I just.... I just wish she'd settle down and be happy, sometimes...
Lorraine: I wouldn't worry about it, hun. Its all just part of growing up- breaking up, and making up... We've all done it, when we were their age, didn't we?!
James: You might've done, but i was never like that.
Lorraine: Seriously?
James: Nope. By the time i was 20, i was married to Val. So i didn't do any of that stuff.....
Lorraine: Well, at least your happily married. Not many people get that.
James: I wouldn't go that far!
Lorraine: (laughs slightly) What?!
James: "Happily Married". Come on, this is Val i'm married to, remember!
They both laugh, slightly nervously. They catch each others gaze, and look away almost immediately.
James: I... I should get back to work. Wouldn't want the boss on my back! :cool:
James walks off. Lorraine carries on eating her food, smiling..
INT. TORBAY HOSPITAL - DAY
Carl is sleeping. Leah is beside him, saying her goodbyes.
Leah: Well i'm off then....I'll see you soon maybe...
Leah gets up and leaves. Carl stirs a few moment later and lifts himself up. He gets a pen and paper from his beside table and starts to write a letter:
Dear Mandy
We might have only meet in passing, but you are a good woman and don't deserve to be lied to. You deserve the truth. What I'm about to tell you will no doubt upset you, but you have the right to know. And they deserve to be punished for the heartache they have caused people: both you and me.
Your beloved husband Craig has been having an affair with your sister Leah. They have been at it for ages from what I can gather, and they have made fools of both you and me. You know where I am if you need more answers.
Carl
As Carl finishes his letter a nurse walks in.
Nurse: You alright love? Just come to see how your doing.
Carl: Yeah a lot better thanks...it's a bit stuffy in here tough
Nurse: Oh No worries, I'll open the window for you
The nurse adjusts the blinds and opens the window, letting fresh air into the room.
Nurse: Your dinner will be brought in in about half an hour alright love? If there's anything else you need just give us a buzz
Carl licks the envelope, and hands it to the Nurse.
Carl: Could you put a stamp on this and make sure it gets sent in the next post?
Nurse: Sure..
The nurse leaves the room with the envelope. Carl smiles to his self.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Richard walks into the living room, on the phone to an old friend.
Richard: (Into Phone) We're just getting an idea of numbers at this stage Bobby, but yeah we'd love it if you, Pamela and the boys could come.... erm well we've got it planned for late July... we'll send the exact date on the invitations...
Richard walks past the coffee table that is filled with bridal magazines. Hilary's phone rings: Kanye West's "Golddigger". Richard picks up the phone and sees that Ryan is calling. He has a distressed look on his face.
Richard (Into Phone) Look George...something's just come up...I've got to go...ok...bye.
Richard puts his phone into his jakcet pocket. He takes a deep breath, clearly upset. He pulls himself together and calls up the stairs.
Richard: Hilary! Your phone is ringing!
Hilary: (O.S) I'm coming!
Richard walks off into the kitchen, however checking to see that Hilary is answereing the phone. Hilary runs into the room and picks up the phone. Richard eavesdrops on the conversation.
Hilary: Ryan darling...a pleasure as always... oh right... fantastic news!... Oh?.... Well yes I suppose we can meet later.... ok...cya you then...bye.
Hilary puts down the phone. In the next room a heartbroken Richard closes his eyes to prevent himself from crying.
DaVeyWaVey
25-06-2006, 21:23
Uh-oh!! Seems like Mandy will find out the truth about Craig and Leah. :eek:
Poor Richard, he really doesn't know what's going on, he's got it all wrong!!
Cool!!!! Siobhan switched files, Richard has heard hilary on the phone to her ex, Mandy will find out about Craig and leah and I am going away this week so I will have lots to catch up on when I get back.. NOT Fair
EXT. DEVON CLIFFTOP - DAY
Ryan and Hilary are sitting at a picnic table at the clifftop, overlooking Baymooe. Several children are playing on the grass verge, and several dog walkers are around.
Hilary: So then, you had chance to look over the records?
Ryan: Yeah, I just hope it's worth all the effort I've gone to...I've risked my relationship in order to get some truth from her
Hilary: How do you mean?
Ryan: Let's just say when it comes to the Taylor women I've had the set...
Hilary: Too much information Ryan... instead of informing me on your sexual past I'd ,much like to know what Siobhan's records say.
Ryan: Well... I'm afraid to say it looks like she's been telling the truth
Hilary: You what!? It's postive!? She has the disease!?
Ryan: Yes she has....
Hilary: I dont not believe it! She must have faked them or something! There is no way that that bitch is telling the truth! I'm sure of it!
In the distance a car skids into the carpark.
Ryan: I can appreciate your frustration Hilary...but the truth is here in black and white...Siobhan has Sickle Cell Anameia. I must admit it is a first from my knowledge... a medical miracle so to speak.... but she does have it...
Hilary gets up from her seat, with an annoyed look on her face.
Hilary: Well I guess I'll have to try other methods to prove her for what she is.... thanks Ryan, I appreciate this.
Hilary turns to leave, but she looks forwards to see Richard standing infront of her.
Richard: Well do you care to explain what the hell is going on here then!?
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - EVENING
The theme tune for Eastenders plays as the show ends. Emma gets up from the sofa and heads to the kitchen to make herself a drink.
All of a sudden there is a violent knock on the door. Emma walks towards the door and answers it. Luqina barges past Emma and marches into the living room.
Emma: What do you want, barging into my house like this!?
Luqina: I've come to give you a peice of my mind...
Emma: Cant be that much then seen as you have the intelligance of a 2 year old!
Luqina walks over to Emma, towering her with her high heels. She points her manicured finger at Emma.
Luqina: I don't know what your issues are with me lady but I suggest you put a sock in it before i end up plastering your face over these 4 walls!
Emma: My "issues" are that you don't deserve Tom...he's a good man and he can do a whole lot better than some bitchy little ghetto sket who wants to be a model but is failing miserably!
Luqina: Now listen here lady! Tom is with me for a reason, he wnats a real woman now some stupid little interfing school girl with a crush. Now i suggest you start reading your revison guides instead of trying to get your dirty little mits into my boyfriend's pants. You get me!?
Emma: You don't scare me!
Luqina: That right!?
Emma: Yeah!
Luqina slaps Emma around the face, Emma falling backwards collpasing onto the wall. Luqina charges towards her and pulls out some of Emma's hair.
Emma: Get off me you bitch!
Luqina: I love Tom and I am gonna marry him! Heaven help you if you get in my way! I swear to god you stupid little girl I'll claw your bloody eyes out!
Val walks into the room, her coat on. She sees the scene that is taking place.
Val: Oi oi! What the bloody hell do you think your doing! Get the hell off her!
Val grabs Luqina and throws her out of the living room. She drags her out of the house, Luqina screaming to Emma.
Luqina: This ent over bitch!
Val: Go on sling ya hook!
Val throws Luqina out onto the street and slams the door behind her. Emma is a nervous wreck in the living room: shaking nervously.
DaVeyWaVey
26-06-2006, 18:26
Oooh it's all going on!! Siobhan got out of her tight spot....what will Hilary say to Richard now?! I can't wait to hear Hilary explain herself!
Yay! :cheer: Catfight!! I love them :thumbsup: Luqina seems a nasty piece of work!
diamond1
26-06-2006, 18:33
Luqina seems a nasty piece of work!
you think?
:rotfl: :rotfl: luqina is great and is heading for a fall I forsee an affair with craig maybe in the future:eek: that would be even more evil than charlie and tracey
DaVeyWaVey
26-06-2006, 18:37
Yeah i think she is a nasty piece of work, she just barged into Emma's house and started a catfight! Just because Emma said Luqina didn't deserve Tom wasn't a good reason for flying off the handle....Luqina should have just ignored Emma....
EXT: DEVON CLIFFTOP- day
Continued...Hilary turns to leave, but she looks forwards to see Richard standing infront of her.
Richard: Well do you care to explain what the hell is going on here then!?
Hilary: (Taken aback) Richard! I... I didn't realise you were there!
Richard: Well, thats a bit bloody obvious! So come on, got bored of sneaking around Baymoore, so you thought you'd have your cosy meetings on the clifftop?!
Ryan: Richard, its not like that...
Richard: Oh well, isn't it?! You and Hilary having secret meetings behind my back?! Phone Calls?! What else is it!?
Ryan: Actually, its about -
Hilary turns to Ryan, and signals for him to shut up...
Hilary: I think this is between me and Richard, if you dont mind...
Ryan leaves the clifftop, slightly annoyed and concerned...
Richard: So now we've got your bit on the side out the way, you think you can lie your way out of it?! Thats not going to work, Hil. Not this time.
Hilary: I'm not going to lie my way out of it. Yes, i've met up with Ryan a few times. And yes, i told you i wouldn't. But it wasn't like that , it was.... you know....medical...
Richard: Medical...?
Hilary: (Slightly uncertain) Yeah...
Richard: Oh, pull the other one! I'm not just going to lit down and let you walk all over me! You and him are having an affair- plain and simple! And after everything thats happened...
Hilary: Stop getting histerical, Richard! Its not like that!
Richard: And how do i know that, then?
Hilary: Because i love you!
Richard is taken a back...
mmmmmmmm does she really or is she saying that to stop Richard asking more question? :searchme:
EXT: DEVON CLIFFTOP- Day
Richard and Hilary are still on the top of the cliffside...
Richard: You....what?
Hilary: You heard me, babes! I love you...
Richard is taken aback by this...
Hilary: I'm not the munipulating bitch everyone thinks i am. I'm not after your money... i'm after you! I wouldn't be marrying you otherwise...
Richard: Why didn't you.... you know, say something before?!
Hilary: Well, its hardly the kind of thing you just drop into a conversation, is it?! I admit it, when we started seeing each other again, i didn't love you... i cared for you more then anything in the world, but i didn't love you. But after everything with Gary and the twins... Well, it just made me see how much i need you....
Richard: I'm sorry... it just took me by a bit of a shock... I didn't think anyone like you would ever love a man like me! I just thought you cared for me, maybe...
Hilary: I want to spend the rest of my life with you. Every second, of every moment, of everyday. You're the love of my life.... I'm just hardly the kind of person to admit that i've fallen head-over-heels for someone, am i?!
Richard: I'm sorry about earlier... with Ryan... i should've known that you wouldn't be seeing him again... I love you too, Hil :wub:
They smile. Richard walks slowly back towards his car, Hilary looks at to see and rolls her eyes, muttering quietly...
Hilary: Poor git, falls for it every time! (Mockingly) Yep, i most definetely love you. Like a ruddy hole in the head! :rolleyes:
Richard hears a faint muttering, but disregards it. Hilary walks over to him, holds his hand, and walks to the car with him...
EXT: ANDREW'S HOUSE
Val throws Luquina out the house, and drags her onto the street...
Val: So heres what your gonna do, You're gonna walk down this street, and get the hell out of mine and Emma's faces, you hear me?!
Luqina: I'm not having common muck like you or Emma mess around with my buisness. She had that coming to her, and if she doesn't learn, then it wont just be another slap she's heading for, next time!
Val: (Angry) Common Muck?! Who the hell are you to call us common muck?! Look in the bloody mirror, and taste the coffee, woman!
Luqina: Denial. How sweet. The lot of you better watch your backs, cause i'm not the kind of person to let things go. You say one more thing, and mess around with my buisness one more time, then you WILL regret it, Bitch!
Val: Oh, well i expect it takes one to know one! :rolleyes:
Luqina storms down the street, annoyed and frustrated. Val goes back into the house, to see Emma....
Val: You okay? She's not going to get away with that, you know that, right?
Emma: You bet she's not going to get away with it! I mean, who the hell does she think she is?! What is Tom- deluded or something?!
Val: She's just sucked him in. He'll regret it someday.
Emma: And you know what? That day aint gonna be far off!
Val looks slightly confused...
Emma: She thinks she can storm in here, and tell me how it is!? Nope, shes not going to get away with it. She's gonna pay, no matter how much it takes.
I knew it.. Hilary is just using Richard for everything and Richard the idiot doesn't know better. I wonder what Emma has in store for our Diva :hmm:
DaVeyWaVey
27-06-2006, 17:56
Oh my goodness! Hilary is using Richard, she's just pulling him along on a bit of string, i hope he finds out soon how scheming Hilary is, preferably before the wedding!
I wonder how Emma will make Luqina pay, maybe sabotage her and Tom's wedding?? :searchme:
JustJodi
27-06-2006, 18:11
:rotfl: love it !!!!!!!!!!!!! Richard is finally catching on that Hilary isn't the woman hes put on the pedestal . Lets see her talk her way out of this..
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Hilary is sitting alone watching a french film noir movie. The house phone rings.
Hilary: Hello? Jenkins Manor...Richard...you coming home soon...oh.... no well take as long as you need....infact I'd rather you stay the night at a motel....best not drive whilst your tired... oh they are both out aswell...don't worry Richard...I'll be fine....ill see you the morning...okay...bye.
Hilary puts down the phone and returns to her film. The doorbell rings. At first Hilary decides to ignore it. However the doorbell continues to ring. Hesitantly she gets up to answer it. In staggers a tipsy Ryan.
Hilary: (Suprised) Ryan...?
Ryan: I needed some one to talk to.
Hilary closes the door.
Hilary: About what?
Ryan: Well not talk
Ryan advances towards Hilary and attempts to kiss her. Hilary pulls away and distances herself from him.
Hilary: No, no, no. We argreed that we would put a stop to this a long time ago...
Ryan: She's dumped me Hils...
Hilary: Your fiance?
Ryan: She found out about me...and Siobhan...and well we're over...I just need some comfort...some loving...
Ryan walks overs to Hilary again and kisses her neck, she moves her head away.
Hilary: If Richard found out...
Ryan: Who cares about that fat old slob?
Hilary: I'm into a coshty deal with him...half of the Taylor assets, and I wont jeopardise that by getting caught in bed with a playboy doctor...
Ryan unzips Hilary's dress and unclips her bra.
Ryan: Then we'll have to make sure that he doesnt catch us then, wont we?
Ryan leans in for a kiss, Hilary finally responds. The pair passionatley kiss as Hilary leads Ryan upstairs.
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
Emma creeps into Claire's room and closes the door. She rumages trough her besdie cabinet, and pulls out an adress book, she sighs in releif, relived that she has found it.
She turns the pages until she finds the number of Romeo's mobile. She gets out her own phone from her pocket and dials the number.
The following scene cuts between claire's bedroom and a busy kitchen in the Carboni's Italian restutraunt in Italy.
Romeo: Buon giorno!?
Emma: Romeo....is that you?
Romeo:Hello, Emma?
Emma: I'm sorry but I just had to call you....
Romeo: Why!? Is everything okay....is Claire and Rebecca and...
Emma: They're all okay...
Romeo: What then?
Emma: It's Tom.... he's getting married to Luqina.
Romeo: (Livid) You what!?
Emma: I've tried to talk him out of it but he wont listen...
Romeo: What about Chris and Claire!?
Emma: He doesnt seem to care...and well Claire....well...erm...she's not in the country....
Romeo: What do you mean she's not in the country! She never told me...
Emma: Why would she? You split with her remember...
Romeo's heart sinks at Emma's words of truth.
Emma: Anyways the important thing now is Luqina...I need your help Romeo...we need to nail this bitch! Once and for all...
EXT. PECKHAM HOUSING ESTATE - MORNING
Peckham (London): a run down and vandalised council estate, truent school children playing football and riding bikes. Jack: Hilary's PI is questioining a young mum with a pushchair.
He gets out a photo of Siobhan and shows it her.
Jack: We know her as Siobhan Burke...but she could be going under any name....do you regonise her?
Mum: Nah I don't... how much is it worth tough? You get me?
A man in his mid twenties barges past Jack and the young mum. He is dressed in a sports tracksuit, wearing trainers and gold chains. He is smoking a spliff (cannabis). He looks over at the pair talking, concerned at their topic of conversation.
Jack walks over to a group of old pensioners.
Jack: Excuse me ladies...I was wondering if you could help me... Im looking for a woman called Siobhan Burke...I've traced her to this estate...
The man walks up a staircase leading to a coridoor of flats. He looks down on Jack and the old women from a balcony. Nervoulsy he dials a number and awaits a call.
Man: Yeah babes, it's me.... they're on to you... you'd better hurry up with the money....
INT. HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE - MORNING
Craig, Leah and Mandy are sitting at the dining table. Leah is looking into her cup of cofee, trying to avoid eye contact with Craig.
Mandy: For god sake would you two try to be civil to each other at least?
Craig: (To Mandy) I'm more than willing to be civil....but it has to works both way babes, she couldn't give a damn...
Leah: Too right I couldn't! I didn't think you could stoop so low!
Craig: You still on about that pafetic battered little shrimp!?
Leah: Yeah I am! And whose fault is it that he is battered eh!?
Mandy: Oh come on Leah, you don't know that, give Craig a break for a once...he's done nothing wrong to you.... or me... so just lay off...
Leah: Dont even start Mand'! You don't even know the half of it!
Leah storms out of the room, grabs her coat from the stair rail and slams out.
Mandy: God knows what's eating her...
Craig finishes his coffee and gets up
Craig: Dont (kisses Mandy goodbye) worry about it... I'll see you later babes...
Mandy: Don't work too hard...
Craig: I'll try not to...
Craig leaves the house. Mandy takes a sigh, then collects up everyone's dirty crocks and takes them into the kitchen to wash them up.
The postman comes to the door and pushes some letters trough the letterbox. Mandy picks them up and flicks trough the pile: junkmail and bills. She stumbles across a hand written enevlope adressed to her.
She opens it, and reads it. Her face turns to one of utter devastation. A tear rolls down her eye. She collapses onto the staircase, sits downs and sobs into the letter.
The affair is revealed...what next?
diamond1
28-06-2006, 13:04
oh dear craigs been rumbled,I was half expecting him to find the letter I think as he is a dodgy bloke she should ring all those 'contacts' who have been screwed over by craig in the past and set him up...and hopefully this time next year he will be buried in concrete:thumbsup:
DaVeyWaVey
28-06-2006, 17:55
Uh oh!!! Mandy has discovered the truth!! I wonder what she will do now!
Can't wait to see how Mandy deals with this - will she just let fly at them, or is she going to be cunning and arrange Craigs downfall.....what is she going to do to Leah, and now she knows about it, will she put two and two together about Carl's beating and help to nail Craig :hmm: so many questions lol
diamond1
29-06-2006, 12:03
mandys gonna flip out she should drag leah in the street paint her all over the walls rip her hair out then tell her to leave forever......then cut up all craigs suits and overalls put his mobile number in a phone box for desparate people to ring non stop then divorce him,slap him so hard mexico can hear it and finally take half of EVERYTHING
or maybe theres a twist and the letter isnt carls ooooh that would be good as well
INT: RED RUM PUB
Tom is at a table, sipping at his drink. Luqina gets up, and goes to the ladies, leaving Tom at the table. His phone rings, with an international number...
Tom: Hello?
Romeo: Tom? Is that you? Or is that the pathetic loser thats marrying that whore Luqina?!
Tom: Romeo...? How do you know.....?
Romeo: Come on, i was bound to find out some time! So come on, what the hell has got into you?!
Tom: Don't you start as well... Its my life, i'll do what damn well want to!
Romeo: Including ruining your life with Luqina?! Shes using you!
Tom: I can't be doing with all you lot getting at me 24/7. I'm marrying her, because i love her- why can't you lot just be bloody happy for me for a change?!
Tom slams his phone on the table, and hangs up, frustrated. He sips again at his drink. Luqina walks back over to the table, oblivious...
Luqina: Hi Darl, whats up with you?!
Tom: Romeo :rolleyes:
Luqina: Sorry...?
Tom: He's only been on the bloody phone to me, making out your some kind of monster! I dont even know how he even found out!
Luqina thinks, then a look of realisation spreads across her face...
Luqina: (Quietly) Of course... (Louder) I think i know how he found out...
Tom: Come on then, how!?
Luqina: Dont you worry, hun. I'll sort out the problem, one way or another. Trust me on that!
INT: JENKINS MANOR-Day
Siobhan is at a computer. She finds a website about cures which are being produced for Sickle Cell Anemia, and are being tested in America. She opens up another window, and minimises it behind the other window.
She waits for Richard to walk in. As he does, she waits untill he's seen the screen, and minimises it...
Richard: What was that, Siobhan?
Siobhan: Erm.... what was what!?
Richard: That site. Go back onto it...
Siobhan goes back onto the site, reluctantly....
Richard: Siobhan.... this site is about a cure!! Siobhan, this is just what we wanted!
Richard goes to the door, and calls Nick. He walks into the room, and reads the computer screen...
Nick: OMG, this is fantastic! America... Thats not so hard now a days to get to!
Richard: $1 Million Dollars.... We can get our hands on that, no problem...
Richard and Nick continue talking about the new method of treating the disease, as Siobhan sits, content.
JustJodi
29-06-2006, 17:43
mandys gonna flip out she should drag leah in the street paint her all over the walls rip her hair out then tell her to leave forever......then cut up all craigs suits and overalls put his mobile number in a phone box for desparate people to ring non stop then divorce him,slap him so hard mexico can hear it and finally take half of EVERYTHING
or maybe theres a twist and the letter isnt carls ooooh that would be good as well
OOOOOOOHHHHHHHH I like the way you think ooooh yea,, hell lets get her to take EVERY THING :readtheru
JustJodi
29-06-2006, 17:44
Hmmmmmmm now me thinks Siobhan is content like the cat that ate the canary......shes thinking of all that lovely money she is gonna get her mitts on,, :nono:
Uh oh...something tells me Emma had better watch her back!!!!
Very sneaky Siobhan, very sneaky - good way of conning Richard out of a few pennies eh!
INT. HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE - EVENING
Mandy is in kitchen, cutting vegetables with added anger. She looks oevr her shoulder seeing Leah walk trough the front door. Her heart sinks as she continues to prepare the tea.
Leah walks into the living room and throws her coat on the sofa, she sees Craig and begins to leave the room.
Craig: Come back here and speak will you...instead of running away...
Leah: We have nothing to speak about...I've said what I feel...and I'm not prepared to change how I stand on the situation!
Craig grabs Leah's arm and prevents her from leaving, she hesitantly sits down, checking to see that Mandy is not in site.
Leah: Seriously Craig I meant what I said! We need time apart...what you did to Carl...is unforgivable...it's below the line!
Craig: You know what kind of person I am...the things I do...you've knew all along so why the sudden change eh!?
Leah: Because I never expeirenced it first hand before! It was because of me...and you... that Carl is lying in a hospital bed...fitting for his life!
Craig: You are over reacting! I did that to him because I care for you!
Leah: He got in your way...you punished him... what if I got in your way...would you send your thugs to beat the living **** out of me too!?
Craig: I wouldn't do that to you...I love you...
Craig stops holding Leah's arm, instead he strokes it. Leah flinches and moves her arm away.
Leah: Yeah well Craig I cant take that chance... I've got no choice...I cant do this no more.
Leah gets up, Mandy walks in moments later. She has a brave smile on her face.
Mandy: You two arguing again!? Honestly can't you set your differences aside for the evening whilst we have dinner... I have an extra special suprise for you both this evening...
Craig and Leah look at her intriged, Mandy smiles uncontroably, a look of sheer evil hidden behind her eyes.
OMG!!! Whats Mandy put in their food?! Shes put something in there! What is it?!!
diamond1
29-06-2006, 20:29
alright mand....time for vengence forget those good times you had with craig and focus on wiping that smug look of his face if you do this you will be a....a... dare I say soapboard legend:eek:
DaVeyWaVey
29-06-2006, 21:23
Oh my goodness!!! Mandy is all out for revenge!! She must have put something in that food!! :eek: :eek: I can't wait to find out what happens next!
JustJodi
30-06-2006, 09:01
The old adage is true HELL HATH NO FURY A WOMAN SCORNED.......what ever Mandy dishes out those two deserve it...Especially Craig he deserves alot more thrashing or whatever than Leah !!!!!!:angry:
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Nick and Richard are overjoyed at Siobhan's internet discovery.
Nick: Oh my god! I can't believe this! It's amazing! All we could ever ask for!
Siobhan: There's no garantees that this cure would work you know...
Richard: Well god dammit it's worth a try! If it gets my daughter fit and well again then I don't care!
Siobhan: Look...Richard...dad.... I can't ask you to give me this kind of money... it's just too much!
Richard: No it isn't Siobhan! You can have it without a moment's hestitation. Anything to keep my family safe and healthy... I've lost too many members of this family this year...I don't want to loose another.
Hilary strides into the room and pours herself a drink. She sees the looks of delight on everyone's faces.
Hilary: What are you lot looking so happy about?
Nick: Siobhan's found a cure...over in America...for Sickle Cell Anameia!
Hilary: Really? Have you any idea how many of these "cures" are hoaxes for idiots who are fool enough to hand over extortionate amounts of money?
Siobhan: (To Nick) See I told you Nick....but you both wont listen will you...
Hilary: What do you mean "wont listen"?
Richard: I've told Siobhan that we will pay for her treatment
Hilary has a look of pure venom in her face.
Hilary: You said what!?
Richard: Let's not overreact here Hilary...she's our daughter!
Hilary: You've only known her five seconds and your handing over half of your fortune to cure her of some make belief disease!
Nick: Mom! How can you say that!? Upsetting Siobhan like that...
Siobhan: Don't bothering shielding me Nick... go on "mom"...let it all out...say what you really think...
Richard: Hilary we haven't been there for Siobhan all of these years... she's our daughter...and she's dying... it's the least we can do...
Hilary: I refuse to accept this! I can not let you give her all of our money! I just wont allow it!
Richard: Well you better had! Becuase if you don't care for your daughter...and what the rest of this family wants then you can get the hell out of this house and out of my life!
Richard bangs his fist against the drinks cabinet and storms out of the room. Hilary is left dumbstrcuk at Richard's outburst. Siobhan smiles to herself secretly.
Oh dear, oh dear - Siobhan has really sucked Nick and Richard in - can't wait to see how this develops and what will happen when they finally realise they've been duped if they eventually do find out...
INT: HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE
Craig and Leah sit down at the dinner table. Mandy is in the kitchen. She opens a drawer, and gets the letter from Carl out, and puts it in her pocket. She glances at Craig and Leah in anger, and finishes serving out the food...
Craig: (Quietly) Leah, long time no see :cool:
Leah: Yep...
Craig: So how about tonight then?! Once we've got Mandy out the way....
Leah pauses, and slightly reluctantly says...
Leah: You know we can't...
Mandy walks into the room, with the plates of food, and a fake smile... She gives out the food, and sits down. No one says anything.
Mandy: Come on you two, whats wrong with you two?!
Leah faintly smiles...
Mandy: You know, i heard some interesting news about you two...
Craig looks up quickly, Leah looks slightly paniked, however Craig puts his foot on Leahs foot, to make her stay quiet. Leah tries not to react.
Craig: Oh yeah?
Mandy gets the letter out from her pocket, and starts reading...
Mandy: Dear Mandy
We might have only meet in passing, but you are a good woman and don't deserve to be lied to. You deserve the truth. What I'm about to tell you will no doubt upset you, but you have the right to know. And they deserve to be punished for the heartache they have caused people: both you and me.
Mandy looks up and the paniked pair..
Mandy: Any ideas what its about yet?!
Leah and Craig stay silent...
Mandy: Oh i see, lie all the way to the end, are we!? Oh well, i'll continue...
Your beloved husband Craig has been having an affair with your sister Leah. They have been at it for ages from what I can gather, and they have made fools of both you and me. You know where I am if you need more answers.
Mandy looks up at the pair in fury and anger, and slams the letter on the table between Craig and Leah...
Mandy: from Carl.
:eek:
diamond1
30-06-2006, 13:52
siobhan you have ripped off two people and made them think you are dying it is cold and caculated.....but is a great plan and you have given me such a good idea cheers babe :)
and mandy take note of what siobhan is doing go massage craigs back ready for when you plunge the dagger into it at dinner lmao I cannot wait for the revenge this could be the biggest thing since den handed angie divorve papers
go get em mand.......as i posted i noticed the revenge was already up ooops
How is Craig going to react to Carl, knowing hes spilt the beans though?? I can see another hospital visit from Craig or one of his "contacts" coming up....
Go get em Mandy - its payback time - I hope you really go for it.....
EXT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Siobhan is outside by the swimming pool, smoking a cigarette: the moon reflecting in the pool. Hilary steps up beside her, with her usual venomous face.
Hilary: Well done... you seemed to have fooled them....
Siobhan: You know Hilary I wish you would change the record...its starting to grate me on... Richard and Nick believe me...so why can't you?
Hilary walks up to Siobhan are stares her in the face, eyes cold.
Hilary: Because I know what you are... a lying...devious... manipulative little bitch...
Siobhan: Like mother like daughter... you just can't face that I'm getting the attention....
Hilary: I swear to god! No one has ever got the better of me and I won't let you be the first!
Siobhan: Oh don't you worry, I have... for once I have the upper hand over you! By the time I'm done with you...no one will want to know you... you'll be out on the streets...where you belong... little a dirty old ho!
Hilary lashes out at Siobhan slapping her around the face. Siobhan deals her an equal blow black. The pair tackle each other, wrestling each other to the ground. Hilary pushes Siobhan onto the glass garden table. Smashing the glass.
Outraged Siobhan gets up and charges towards Hilary. She grabs Hilary's hair by the roots and throws her into the pool, Hilary attempts to drag Siobhan down with her but she manages to mantain her balance.
She stands on the poolside, hands on hips, looking down at Hilary who is drenched and humilaited.
Hilary: I swear to god! You little bitch!
Siobhan: Sticks and stones will break my bones... but words will never hurt me... saying that...words can be damaging... especially confessions...
Siobhan gets a dictaphone out of her handbag and plays back a message to Hilary. It is Hilary's confessions to the priest.
Hilary: But i was involved in their deaths. I didn't mean it... not like that. I just wanted to show that Tanya a lesson, you know?! Didn't think it would go this far... i didn't mean for them to die, honest i didn't! It just... happened..
Preist: Murder is a mortal sin, Hilary.
Hilary: It wasn't exactly planned, father! But... But how can i tell Richard what happened?! And Tanya?! Gary's only just holding on to dear life, what if he doesn't pull through?! What do i do then?!
Siobhan: It's amazing what you can buy with the right kind of money...
Hilary looks on in complete horror, panting for breath.
Siobhan: Look at you...you sad pathetic old hag... don't worry... this is just insurance...If you even think of badmouthing me to Nick and Richard... if you even think of stopping me getting what is mine... then I swear to god I will play this tape to the whole of Baymoore!
Siobhan eyes Hilary up and down with disgust.
Siobhan: I'd say you look like a drowned rat...but that would be an insult to the rat...
Siobhan laughs to herself and walks off leaving Hilary speachless.
diamond1
30-06-2006, 14:20
:eek: OH MY GOD X3 noooo way i cannot belive siobhan did that...good grief girl id forgot about that confession thing :clap: to you for being so damn smart I really need some classes on how you go about buisness
Bondboffin with ideas like this why not just be a master criminal or something lol damn Im shocked by this 10/10 whoa im taken back
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