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JustJodi
05-02-2006, 20:12
Poor Amy.. her lil heart is broken :-(
Hilary must be rubbing her hands together in evil glee now she knows how much moola Richards plot is worth,, hmm:hmm: Hell hath no fury a woman scorned !!!!!!!!!
Torbay Hospital
Amy and Val are sitting in an abadnoned coridoor. Val is dressed in her usual tarty clober, filing her nails and applying make up.
Val: Dont worry Babes it will be fine...
Amy: (Nervous) I'm sorry for asking you to come, but I had no one else...
Val: No worries love, any time...whats that hubby of your playing at tough he? Galavanting off around Torbay when hes wife abot to be told...
Val stops in her tracks,
Amy: To be told what?
Val: Oh ignore me...
There is an awkward silence.
Val: I mean i shant lie to you...i like my lies ins of a morning... cheese toastey under the duvets and watching the Jermey Kyle show...hes much better than Trisha you know...he really deals with peoples problems...eh you should get yourself on there with Patrick (outrageous laugh)... and you should see the tarty get up that some of them women wear on there!
Amy takes a breif glance at what Val's wearing and laughs to self.
Val: Hey, i saw that you cheaky mare!
The doctor comes out of his room and approaches Amy and Val.
Doctor: Amy O Brien?
Amy gets up, the doctor introduces himself.
Doctor: Paul Greasly...im here to talk you trough the results of your Hysterosalpingogram.
Val: A what!?
Amy: (Iritiated) Val can you just shut up for a change!
Val: (taken aback) Fine...
Doctor: (Gestures to his room) If you'd like to follow me ladies...
The pair follow the doctor into the room, the door closes behind them as Amy awaits her fate...
INT. Torbay Hospital
Val is reading her latest copy of "Heat Magazine" whilst holding the hand of a nervous Amy. Val is not intrested in the conversation at all.
Amy: Look doctor, no offence, but i have been thinking this over since i came for the test, and i want to know, pure and simple...no jargon...no explanation...can i have babies...yes or no?
Doctor: Mrs O Brian...
Amy: I SAID....Yes..or No?
The Doctor looks uncomfotabel and finds it hard to make eye contact with her. Val puts down the magazine.
Val: Oh for heavens sake (To Doctor) Can... she... have... a... ruddy... baby!?
Doctor: No...
Amy starts to cry immediatley, and covers her face, Val starts to hug her to comfort her.
Doctor: The Hysterosalpingogram showed that that there was a severe problem with the endometrial cavity of the uterus and the fallopian tubes...all tough this is not damaging to your health...it does mean you cant concieve...
Val: Whats that mean for those of us who dont speak freaky geeky medicine?
The doctor begins to speak, but Amy interupts him...
Amy: It means that i cant have kids...ever...
Amy gets up and leaves the room. She turns the corner but then clings to the wall in dispair, she slides down until she is on the floor is tears. Her dreams of being a mother destroyed....
Firstly :clap::clap::clap: thank you so much Abi.. Glad you are helping Bry so I can get my dose of DS...
Wow.. poor amy!! can't wait to see what hilary is going to do next
Fantastic as usual
:crying: That last scene :crying: Poor Amy
Fab episodes Abi, well done you, they're brilliant. Thanks for helping Bry on this.
Oh and your episodes were as great as usual Bry - sorry babes :D
Whats Hillary going to next though, now she knows how much the mansion is worth?? Is Patrick going on a trip, or has he gone for a few dirty nights with a bit on the side?? Ooooo, can't wait for whats coming up :cheer:
:crying: That last scene :crying: Poor Amy
I know yeah poor gal, dont get much look. However things dont seem to get any better for her in the next few months tough...she may have lost out on a mother but will she loose out on being a wife?
she better not... I was meant to go on to see the sBBB thing on friday, came on briefly on saturday and read dS... see I know where my priorities lie BB
she better not... I was meant to go on to see the sBBB thing on friday, came on briefly on saturday and read dS... see I know where my priorities lie BB
glad to hear it Siobhan! Nice to know theres a loyal fanbase to the show..even tough it isnt really that good!
But mark my words it gets a lot better as the storylines are slowly being introduced now. :)
I meant to post this earlier, but i've been ill in bed all day.....!!!
Brixham community college
Steve is packing his books away after a lesson. Emma walks in, and stands in silence for several moments, clearly checking him out
Steve: Sorry, Emma, didn’t see you there! What’s a girl like you doing here after school?!
Emma: Well its just…. This is going to sounds so weird…. I need you, Steve
Steve: What?!
Emma: I need your help. With that poetry coursework, I just don’t get Robert Frost…. Why….what did you think I meant?
Steve: I just…didn’t understand what you wanted. Yeah, I’m sure I can fit you in somewhere….
Emma: (whispers) I’m sure I can fit you in somewhere too….
Steve flicks through a diary, Emma glares into his eyes continuously, then pulls her jumper off
Steve: How about tomorrow after your lessons? Or maybe the day after…
He looks up, as she is taking her jumper off. This makes him jump, as her blouse rides up slightly. He drops his diary.
Emma: It’s a bit hot in here, don’t you reckon?
Steve: Erm…yeah, I guess so…
Emma: Steve. You dropped your diary, you know.
Steve: yeah, sorry, I just sort of….. I dunno what came over me….
Emma: Here, let me get it
Emma bends over in the flirtatious way, so that he gets a clear view of her body, and picks up the diary.
Emma: (As she hands him the diary) So you’ll have me tomorrow then?
Steve: Come again?!
Emma: For the tutoring. What else could I mean?
Steve: yeah, tomorrows fine. See you then.
Emma: You sure will. It’s a date
Emma gives him a flirtatious wink, turns and leaves the room with a big smile on her face, leaving Steve feeling a bit confused
see Emma has moved on... flirty woman
EXT: Red Rum Pub
Patrick’s cab pulls up outside the Red Rum pub. He opens the door, goes to the boot and pulls out his suitcase. He then goes back to the door.
Patrick: Now are you sure that you’ll be ok going home alone?
Blonde: Course I will, babe.
Patrick: (to the driver) now make sure she gets home safely. Wouldn’t want anything to happen to my angel, would I?…. thanks for a fantastic weekend, gorgeous. Hope we can do it again soon.
Blonde: Sure will.
Patrick leans into the cab, gives the blonde girl a kiss, then leaves and shuts the door. The cab pulls away, and the blonde girl is clearly visible blowing Patrick a kiss. Patrick smiles, and turns to walk to the pub.
Val: Well look who it is. Nice golf trip?
Patrick: Ah, Val. Golf trip? What golf trip?
Val: The golf trip you just got back from. Amy told me all about it, after we went to the doctors. Poor thing, she was in bits. Surely you remember?
Patrick: Erm, yeah it was…great. Very relaxing. Did I hear you right? You went with Amy?
Val: Sure did. As I said, she was desperate for a shoulder to cry on. Bless her; I dunno if she’ll ever get over it.
Patrick: Well I’m sure it wont take her that long to get over going to the doctors!
Val: You have no heart, do you? She won’t get over not being able to have any children! But you didn’t even remember that that was the reason she went, did ya? You’re too busy thinking of ya blonde, to care about what she’s going through!
Patrick: (Shocked)….no children?? You mean, she’s….
Val: Infertile. Yeah, got it in one. The one thing she thought she could give ya, and she can’t. Anyway, I’m sure she’ll be thankful for your compassion.
Patrick: Val, I never said I didn’t care about it, or her. It just slipped my mind, so I’m sorry if I’m not perfect but…
Val: (mockingly) slipped ya mind? (Shouting) slipped ya mind? How the hell could something like that “Slip ya mind”? Patrick. You don’t deserve her, not a hair on her head. And if you think that your going to keep her, then you’ve got another thing coming. Get your act together, Patrick, before someone else gets in there before you. She needs you right now, Patrick. Just do us all a favour, and be there for her, or get out of her life.
Val turns and goes to walk off, when Patrick grabs her on the shoulder
Patrick: I don’t need any of your advice, Val. She’s my wife, and I know what’s good her. So get your nose out of my business, and my marriage.
Val looks horrified, so turns once again, and walks off
Patrick: (Shouts) and do us all a favour and get some dress sense!!
INT. JENKINS MANOR – NIGHT
Richard and Hilary are eating a delicious meal in the dining room. The table is laid out with a fancy table cloth, lighted candlestick and the finest china.
Richard: More wine?
Hilary: Anyone would think your trying to get me drunk and lead me astray…
Richard: (Laughs) Would I do a thing like that?
Hilary: No… because I wouldn’t let you…give me some credit…
Richard: I don’t know, I invite you up here…give you one of the finest meals cooked in Devon and your still not happy…
Hilary: A bottle of vino and a slap up meal isn’t going to undo years of hurt Richard…
Richard: No…but it’s a start to rebuilding our relationship…
Hilary: Relationship?…We have no “relationship” Richard, and I don’t intend us to either…
Richard: Cant you just forgive me and forget about all that?
Hilary: “All that”… as you so innocently put it…ruined my life… every problem in my life…all these years of misery…depression…are all because of you…so I hope you appreciate why im not jumping back into your arms, expecting everything to be ok again…
Richard: And I appreciate that…I just want you to know how much I regret that one kiss…and I promise you Hilary it was just that…one meaningless kiss…you always were, and still are the only woman I have ever loved…and when I lost you…ever since I lost you…my life hasn’t been complete…I love you Hilary Taylor…
Hilary: Blackstock…Hilary Blackstock…and do you know what Richard…id probably say the same back to you…it isn’t necessarily that you kissed her…its what has happened to my life ever since…it all went wrong, I have lived thirty years of unimaginable uncomfort…that someone like you could never imagine…and it all boils back to when I left you…how can I say I love you when I resent you for making my life a misery!?
Richard doesn’t answer this…the pair eat their meal silently. The clanging of cutlery against the china is haunting.
Hilary: (Reminiscent) God I miss this place you know…the one place that I’ve ever considered home…its just so beautiful…much better than that run down bed and breakfast down in the village…
Hilary smiles, knowing Richard’s next move.
Richard: You know…you could always move in here….as friends I mean…I mean it’s the least I could do for you…save you having to spend the rest of your life in the B & B.
Hilary: No thank you….I’m fine…once I’ve settled down ill get myself a job and a flat…I don’t need to rely on you Richard….
Richard: Look you’ve said yourself you don’t like the B&B…and well I really don’t mind…what with Ed gone and Nick always away with his lady friend it gets quiet lonely up here…I could do with some adult company around here…id really appreciate it…
Hilary: IF…and only If I decided to stay here, it would be rent free, and I would have no obligation to form any relationship with you what so ever… I would merely be doing it just to spend more time with Nick…
Richard: Look I know all this…and its fine…if you don’t want a relationship…then that’s fine…over time when we’ve got to know each other again that might change…who knows…
Hilary: It wont change…I don’t fancy a cretin like you now and never will… I’ll get Nick to bring my bags up tomorrow morning…and I expect freshly pressed bed linen by the time I arrive…. (pause) pass the salt please…
Hilary smiles triumpathly.
Strick one.. Hilary get back into the manor and on her terms with invite from Richard.. no fool like an old fool...
JustJodi
07-02-2006, 11:33
Strick one.. Hilary get back into the manor and on her terms with invite from Richard.. no fool like an old fool...
Yea I was thinking the same darn thing,,she has the guy buy the **lls:)
Red Rum upstairs Flat
Patrick opens the door to the flat, to find Amy sitting on the sofa, shredding pages from baby magazines up. She’s obviously been crying. He slams the door, and puts the case on the floor. He then stands there, emotionless, staring at Amy, you doesn’t react to him coming in at all.
Patrick: Val told me.
Amy: Yeah, I thought she would. And..?
Patrick: And what? Am I meant to feel something here? Anger? grief? Sadness?
Amy: Well I thought you might feel something. Or was that asking too much from m,y husband?
Patrick: Do you wanna know the truth?
Amy: Go on. Hit me.
Patrick: I’m glad. I’m glad you can have children, because you’d be a crap mother. You’re already a crap wife, what would be different about a kid?! Its had a lucky escape. After all, who’d want to be anything to do with you for the rest of their lives?!
Amy: You, Patrick. You did. The day you asked me to marry you.
Patrick: Well that was a mistake, wasn’t it
Amy: Don’t you know what this meant to me? This was the future, this child was everything to me. To us, I thought. How dare you say it had a lucky escape
Patrick: Well it’s the truth, or can’t you face that?
Amy: I’d have given a baby anything. Everything. I’d have died for a baby. I still would…
Patrick: So why you then? What’s left here for you? (Comes close to her, and faces her one on one) Your nothing Amy. You have no baby. No life. Why don’t you just die,
Amy pauses, facing him in the eyes, with tears running down her cheeks.
Amy: I hate you Patrick. I hate the day I even met you.
Patrick: Coming straight back at ya, love
Amy runs out of the flat, and slams the door. The shot still stays on Patrick, however the footsteps and sobs of Amy can be heard clearly. He looks harsh, and still unemotional. He grabs his phone, and makes a call.
Patrick: (on the phone) Hey babe, you get home ok?
Blonde: Just stepped through the door this minute. Yeah I’m fine hun, and yourself?
Patrick: Been better, to say the least!
Blonde: Looks like someone needs cheering up…
Patrick: Sure do. How about tonight? My place?
Blonde: I’m there. Bye sexy
Ok, I offically hate Patrick.. Poor amy, she is not a crap wife, a stupid wife for putting up with him but poor woman, she would have found something in her life that had meaning.. :crying:
JustJodi
07-02-2006, 17:05
Dang I am not allowed to cuss on the boards, oh I wanted to call Patrick every name in the book, the ******* !!! :angry: Poor Amy, I wanted to run after her and give her a shoulder to cry on.
Dang I am not allowed to cuss on the boards, oh I wanted to call Patrick every name in the book, the ******* !!! :angry: Poor Amy, I wanted to run after her and give her a shoulder to cry on.
I know what you mean.. I was biting my tongue or holding my typing more to the point.. I hate him and hope he catches something nasty of that blond..
INT.HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE EVENING
Craig walks trough the front door. Mandy is sitting on the sofa watching "Deal or No Deal".
Craig: Alright babes, hows it going?
Craig takes off his jakcet, and pulls off his tie, he kisses Mandy on the neck, she flinches...
Craig: What is your problem eh? Whenver i show you a bit of affection...you turn away...
Mandy: Im not sure if i should be letting you...
Craig: Im your husband...of course you should be letting me...
Craig sits down and starts coming onto Mandy, kissing her body. She pulls away.
Mandy: No! Craig no!
Craig: Come on out with it...why shouldnt you be letting me...
Mandy: I just dont know....i mean people have been saying all this stuff about you...how can i sleep with a murderer?
Craig: Oh dont be so damn daft woman! Ignore what theyre saying...theyre just talking drivel...
Mandy: How can i tell that tough!
Craig: You should trust your husband!
Mandy: I know i should...but i dont feel like i can....youve always been dodgy...and ive never questioned it...ive always known that some things you did werent exactly legal...but i just let it pass...selling dodgy motors... putting money into fraud accounts...harmless really...but then all this about drugs...and...and...murder!? I just dont know what to believe!
Craig walks up to Mandy and squeezes her throat.
Craig: You believe me...stuff the Taylors...stuff big gob Val Andrews...and stuff your ruddy mother...if i tell you im legit...then i am...
Mandy: Dya know what Craig, you've just proved to me that they are telling the truth...now youd better start talking if you still want a marraige...
DEVON SEAS AFTER HOURS
GO TO THE DEVON SEAS AFTER HOURS THREAD IN THE MILE HIGH FORUM TO READ OF STEVE'S DRAMTIC RAPE ATTEMPT ON EMMA ANDREWS...WILL SHE BE SAVED IN TIME???
(Not reccomended for anyone under 16 years of age)
Torbay Hotel Room - Morning
Patrick is lying shirtless on an unmade bed. The sound of someone in the shower can be heard. Patrick gets a text:
Hiya babes, ent sin u in a few days, wanna meet up???
It is clear that the blonde he has been seeing is not his mistress.
Blonde: So then... got any plans for today...
Patrick: Nothing really...accept cheating on my wife...
The blonde walks into the room, a bath towel wrapped around her. She starts to dry her hair with another towel.
Blonde: Well I've got to go to work...so that might be a bit of a problem..
Patrick: Who's saying its gonna be with you?
The blonde turns around and faces him...
Blonde: What dya mean by that...?
Patrick: Look Trish', it's been fun, but i cant really see it lasting...
Blonde: Oh my god...your dumping me arent you?
Patrick: We werent in a relationship for me to dump you...
Blonde: But what about... the last week!?
Patrick: Sex...pure and simple...no strings attached...
Blonde: (Emotional) Well I didn't see it like that!
Patrick: Tough titty...becuase you were nothing more than a shag...and not a good one at that...
The Blonde slaps Patrick around the face.
Blonde: I thought we were something special!
Patrick: Special? You ent special darling...blonde hair...big boobs...all your good for is a quick role in the sheets!
Blonde: You told me you loved me!?
Patrick: Yeah and it worked didnt it...into my bed within half an hour of meeting me...
Blonde: Oh my god...you really are that shallow...i dont know how your wife puts up with you...sleeping around...oh my god...please dont tell me that your already cheating on her..!?
Patrick: Yeah, im out for all i can get...especially when it comes to the female species...
Blonde: Dya know what!? Get out before i tear you tackle into next tuesday!
Patrick: Dont worry...im done here...the noveltys worn off with you... (throws her some cash) ill leave you to settle up the bill..
Patrick walks out of the room smirking.
JustJodi
08-02-2006, 15:03
Patrick is offically on my doo doo list, I wish that blonde had messed with his wedding tackle !!!!:angry:
bakedbean
08-02-2006, 18:11
A bit of a J.R. sort of thing going on with Patrick i think, i really like his charecter a real playboy lol
INT: Jenkins Manor (Day)
Nick is lying on a sofa, watching the TV, while Richard is reading the stocks and shares in the newspaper. Tanya is in another room on the computer. There’s a knock at the door.
Tanya: (after a minutes pause, and deliberately to Nick and Richard, as she walks past the room their in, and comments) I guess I’ll be getting that then…
Tanya walks to the door and opens it. She then shuts it, without saying a word, and goes back to the computer.
Richard: (shouts) who was it Tanya? (Pause) Tanya?
Nick: What’s she playing at?
There’s another knock at the door. Richard gets up to answer it. As he opens the door;
Richard: Hilary! You’re here! You should have told us you where coming so early! (Shouts) Nick, Tanya, quickly, Hilary’s here!
Nick comes straight to the door, and greets Hilary. Shot goes to Tanya, who is still sitting at the computer.
Richard: Tanya. Don’t you care that Hilary’s here?!
Tanya walks to the doorway, and leans against the frame
Tanya: No, actually
Richard: (to Hilary) Where’s all your stuff? Do you only have one case?!
Hilary: This is just my Jewels. Couldn’t trust anyone to carry these, you know how much some of them cost?! No, the rest is in the boot of the cab. Be a darling, Nick, and go help the driver?!
Nick: Some people never change! (Goes out the front door to help)
Richard: Come in, come in! Make yourself at home! Tanya, take her coat would you?
Tanya: No, I don’t think so.
Richard: What? Just take the coat Tanya, don’t mess around
Hilary: Don’t worry Richie, I can do it myself. Tanya’s probably just feeling a bit overwhelmed, not everyday someone moves in! (Hilary and Richard smile at each other)
Tanya: Yeah, whatever… (walks back into the room, leaving Hilary and Richard smiling at each other flirtatiously)
JustJodi
08-02-2006, 19:26
A bit of a J.R. sort of thing going on with Patrick i think, i really like his charecter a real playboy lol
Yup, I was trying to think of a character on TV who was like Patrick, but you nailed it before me, good going BakedBean !:cheer:
INT: Red Rum pub (night)
Nick, Vicky, Amy and Patrick are all in the pub. Nick and Patrick are at the bar, as Patrick is getting the drinks. Amy and Vicky are chatting at a table.
Patrick: so how’s everything going with you and Vicky?
Nick: Great. For once, I feel like my life is sorted. We’re just great together. Have you ever had that feeling where you realise that everything is just….perfect?
Patrick: No. Can’t say I have.
Nick: Mate, you’re missing out on a lot. And you know what…..i think Vicky’s the one.
Patrick: the one?
Nick: Yeah, I know, its weird isn’t it? Buts its true. I love her….
Patrick: Why have one then?
Nick: What you mean?
Patrick: Well, women are for making love with….not falling in love with. Why have one, when you can have several….
Nick looks a bit shocked about what Patrick said. He looks over to where Amy and Vicky are sitting …
Vicky: You and him seem so….tense. Is everything ok?
Amy: Well….i guess…well to be honest….i dunno. I think so, but how can I be sure?
Vicky: aw Amz, you two will get through this, I’m sure.
Amy: yeah, hope so…. Anyway, I think I’m gonna go home. Got a migraine coming on I think, best to relax I guess. You mind?
Vicky: Nah, course not. Hope you feel better soon
Amy slides out of the seat, knocking Patrick’s jacket off the table in the process.
Amy: ****! Oh god…hopes he doesn’t notice!!
Amy and Vicky laugh to each other. Amy stands and picks up the jacket. From the pocket, a small box drops out. Amy picks it up…
Vicky: What’s that?
Amy: I dunno…it fell out of his pocket.
Amy opens the box, hiding it from Patrick’s view, who is still detracted by Nick at the bar. She finds an engraved bracelet. She looks shocked and hurt, slips it into her pocket, and leaves the pub, without saying a word.
JustJodi
08-02-2006, 19:35
Patrick Patrick Patrick if you are gonna cheat on your wife, for cryin out loud don't get your gifts engraved with some one elses name,,what a doody head. Should be interesting to see how Amy confronts him with that bracelet :mad:
Harevy/Kage House - Morning
Craig walks into the living room, on the phone to one of his workers.
Craig: (Into phone) well yeah, i can raise the funds...well i cant pass up a batch like that...yeah drop them in tomorrow...alright see you...
Mandy is sitting at the breakfast table eating some toast, giving Craig an evil glare.
Craig: Morning babes...having a good morning...
Mandy: I was until you come into the room...
Craig: Oh havent you dropped this little paddy fit yet? Im growing tired off it...
Mandy: Well tough Craig, we need honesty in our relationship!
Craig: I gave you honesty when i said i didnt do anything!
Mandy: Well i dont belive you...
Craig: Now who doesnt show trust!?
Mandy: Oh come on Craig, for years everyone has been telling me what your like...but for some reason ive just ignored them...no not Craig...no not my husband...hes not like that...but dya know what...im sick of it...
Craig: And im sick of this...im going to go and have my breakfast down the cafe, i dont fancy a bacon sarny with you giving me evils!
Mandy runs infront of Craig blocking him from leaving...
Mandy: You're going to tell me everything...
Craig trys to tackle her out of the way...
Craig: Get out my way you daft mare...
Mandy: Ed Taylor...what happened to him...what REALLY happened?... did you kill him Craig? huh? DID YOU KILL HIM?
Craig punches Mandy in the face, she bangs her mouth on the edge of the chair. Her mouth is bleeding, she holds it in disbelief.
Mandy:..oh my...i cant believe you just did it...
Craig throws her his hankercheif...
Craig: Clean yourself up, you look like a right mess...
Craig starts to leave the house, Mandy is starting to cry, holding her face in pain.
Mandy: Its not over yet Craig! Not by a long shot!
Jenkins Manor - Day
Richard is packing his breifcase in the study, Tanya is talking to him.
Tanya: I still cnat here why you've let her come and live here!?
Richard: Beacause i wnated her here, she's Nick's mom...
Tanya: And your ex wife...
Richard: And good friend, id rather her be here than down that grotty B&B....got a problem with that?
Tanya: Yes actually...she making a mug of you...and you cant even notice that!
Richard: Look i know she isnt, and if im wrong...then so what...ill learn later..until then just drop what ever it is you have against her...ok!? ive got to go out to a meeting now so just make sure you dont kick anything off...
Richard leaves, Tanya has a disastified look on her face.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Hilary walks across the lounge, her high heels echoing across the room. She looks in the mirror and applies her make up. She then drags her finger across the mantlepeice checking for dust, knocking over a photograph. She picks it up: its of Richard and Doreen.
Hilary: Doreen...you dosy little mare...you might of stole him off me and been Mrs Taylor for the last 30 years...but my oh my...your time is over...
Another sound of high heels can be heard. Hilary looks in the mirror and sees Tanya staring at her.
Tanya: How dare you!
Hilary: Oh look who it is...daddy's little princess...
Tanya: At least i care for him!
Hilary: And what's that supposed to mean?
Tanya walks up to Hilary
Tanya: You know exactly what that means...your not intrested in my dad at all...just his money...and some twisted revenge scheme...well i tell you now...im not going to let you hurt him...youll have to get trough me first...
Hilary: Am i meant to be scared of that?...I've beaten bigger women than you in my time...you might have all this attitude now...but i know how to break you...i can exploit your weaknesses and reduce you to the shrivelling wreak that you really are...
Tanya: How dare you threaten me in my own home!
Hilary: It isnt your home tough is it...its my home...you live in a little cottage paid for by daddy...now take some advice form me...go home...spend time with your family...and dont show your head around here again...because to be quiet frank i dont like you...your a stupid little girl, whos antics i can do without...
Tanya: Im not going to let you ruin my mothers memory... or hurt dad!
Hilary: You sound like a stuck record Tanya...you can try and be a bitch, but it wont work...becuase baby im the biggest bitch that you'll ever meet, trust me you wont want to mess with me...
Tanya: Ill do anything to protect my family...and i mean anything...
Hilary: (smiles) Then you've got yourself a battle Tanya, and i promise you know i will win.
Hilary drops Doreen's photo on the floor, it smashes. Tanya glares at her
EXT: Brixham Community College
Emma is walking down the steps from college, on her way home. The bag on her shoulder slips, and falls to the ground, making some books fall out. Andonis comes up behind her…
Andonis: here, let me help you with that…
Emma: ah thanks…… Andonis! Sorry, didn’t realise it was you!
Andonis: No worries, (stands up and offers the bag back to Emma) there you go.
Emma: Thanks.
Andonis goes to walk away, Emma holds his shoulder back, he turns back to face her
Emma: About yesterday…thank you so much. I don’t know what I would have done if you didn’t turn up….
Andonis: No fear. Don’t worry about it, anyone else would have done the same.
Emma: Even so, you saved me. You don’t know how grateful I am…
Andonis: (grins) I’m sure I do!
Emma: D’ya wanna eat up sometime for dinner? My treat.
Andonis: Erm….yeah I guess so….. you don’t have to though
Emma: I want to though. I wanna get to know you a bit more, after all, you did all that for me, and I don’t know a thing about you…… so how about, Saturday night?
Andonis: Yeah sure. I’ll come pick you up.
Emma: Thanks. I’ll be looking forward to it…
Andonis: Me to (Smiles)
Wow.. there is no way Tanya can take on Hilary and win
And Emma what are you doing girl.. you have jumped from man to man, I hope this one is better.
bakedbean
09-02-2006, 16:56
My gosh Tanya and Hilaray loving it but i think that there will be a twist and Tanya will get rid of Hillary once and for all.
My gosh Tanya and Hilaray loving it but i think that there will be a twist and Tanya will get rid of Hillary once and for all.
I don't think she can bakedbean... hilary is a lot more devious and Tanya is naive
bakedbean
09-02-2006, 17:01
maybe but you never know in devon seas anything can happen
maybe but you never know in devon seas anything can happenlol, dont you know it! :lol: :lol:
Harvey's Motors -Day
Craig is in the garage. A drug dealer is with him, giving him some drugs..
Kal: My contacts tell me its worth a fair few grand on the streets
Craig: It'd better be good quality stuff...want them addicted ya know??
Kal: (Laughs) Yeah its the real deal...mind blowing stuff...
Maragret hobbles into the garage. Craig notices her.
Craig: Anyways Kal, ill get the money to you by the end of the day, cheers for that...
Craig locks the drugs in the safe, Kal walks out, Margaret giving him an evil look as he goes.
Margaret: Was that what i think it was...in the safe?
Craig: Well look who it is...the wicked witch of the west...what do you want eh? Come to give your son in a law a mouthful of abuse...
Margaret: As it happens yes...
Craig: What for now? Using up all the milk? Levaing my wet towels on the bathroom floor...
Margaret hobbles towards Craig.
Margaret: You think you have the answers to everything dont you?...welcome explain this...how comes my daughter has a split lip?
Craig: Has she!?...cant say ive noticed...
Margaret: She claims she walked into a door...
Craig: Well there you go then...
Margaret: But i dont believe her, i know just what your like... and im warning you now lad...no ones hits my daughter...not even you...
Craig: "not even me"?
Margaret: I wasnt born yesterday...the police might be able to act dumb, but i know what your really like...and by the looks of it Mandy is starting to find some sense aswell...
Craig: Look I'd watch your mouth if i was you...
Margaret: Or what!? Youll hit me aswell!?...Does it make you feel big hitting your wife!?...Does it make you feel clever...!?
Craig pushes Margaret onto the bonet of one of the cars in the garage, she starts to Panic, he pins her down and advances towards her...
Margaret: Get off me!
Craig: Im sick to the back teeth of people telling "me" what i can and cant do...now what goes on between me and my wife has nothing to do with you...so i suggest you sod off...before i snap your neck in half...and thats a promise...if you infere with my marriage ever again ill have you killed...and i will spit on your grave...conpronday?
Margaret nervously nods her head. Craig lets her go and straightens his tie.
Craig: Now clear off and pick up your pension you old hag...
Margaret starts to walk out nervously, she turns to face Craig...
Margaret: ...she'll figure out what your like eventually...
The Red Rum Public House - Night
Patrick comes up the stairs after closing hours. Amy is sitting in the dark, lights off. Patrick switches on the lights. He is shocked to see Amy sitting on the sofa.
Patrick: Be jesus! What you sitting in the dark for woman!?
Amy: Donno, felt like it...
Patrick: (Dismisant) I worry about you sometimes...
Patrick heads to the drinks cabinet and pours himself a whiskey. Amy holds the bracelt in her hands. She quotes the engraving
Amy: "To my darling, sorry for the past week, love P..."
Patrick has a shocked look on his face, he rushes towards Amy.
Patrick: What you doing with that!?
Amy: Why worry Patrick, ive found it now...no point covering it up...what tart you calling "my darling" now?
Patrick: If you must know...it's for you...as a way of an aplogy...for the past week like...
Amy: (Uninterested) Really?
Patrick: Is it that hard to believe?
Amy: Well considering you wished me dead a couple of days ago...
Patrick: Look that was a bit harsh i know...
Amy: A bit!?
Patrick: I'd had that Andrews woman lecturing me about my marriage, and then you learched on me as soon as i came trough the door...
Amy: You'd left me to get the results on my own...
Patrick: I know, and thats why ive got you a bracelt...for that and the other stuff...look i feel dead guilty...
Amy: If it were anyone else Patrick...id belive them...but i know you inside out...and all this emotional crap doesnt stick...you had no intentions on giving me this braclet...it was intended to go on the wrist on your latest little slapper...
Patrick sits down next to Amy, he holds her.
Patrick: Look Amy, will you get this notion out of your head...there is nobody else...you are the "only" one for me...its a fresh start for us now...no more arguments, no more tears..."we" are for keeps babes...you and me till the end...
Amy stares at Patrick, unsure of how to react.
Amy: If you mean this...if you really mean this...then this is your final chance Patrick...no more cheating, no more arguing...im not strong enough to cope with this anymore...promise me...
Patrick kisses her tenderly on the lips.
Patrick: I promise you...
Amy snuggles up to Patrick and lies down on him. Patrick strokes Amy's hair.
Amy: If you ever cheat on me again Patrick..ill make you pay for it...
Patrick has a nervous look on his face
OOoo, Patrick should be afraid, very afraid, especially with Val knowing about his weekend.....
Can't believe Amy fell for his patter.. she know full well what he is like. I hope she does a lorraine bobbit on him when she finds out about the tart
JustJodi
10-02-2006, 12:12
I am dying to find out what next, gawd I would drug him and tie him up in bed and drip hot candle wax all over that part and then do a Lorena Bobbet on him.ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :angry:
I am dying to find out what next, gawd I would drug him and tie him up in bed and drip hot candle wax all over that part and then do a Lorena Bobbet on him.ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :angry:
stupid question, and maybe it was before my time, but who is lorena/lorraine bobbet??? :searchme:
stupid question, and maybe it was before my time, but who is lorena/lorraine bobbet??? :searchme:Did you not hear about the bobbitts bry - he had an affair, she cut it off!!
JustJodi
10-02-2006, 13:31
Bry I am sending you a link to the story, its a bit too graphic for the SB K??
Did you not hear about the bobbitts bry - he had an affair, she cut it off!!
maybe we could include this in the after hours thread in the MHC!
maybe we could include this in the after hours thread in the MHC!Now theres a thought - I know what I'd do if I caught my hubby cheating :D Wouldn't be a pleasant sight!! :sick: :rotfl:
JustJodi
10-02-2006, 13:41
Bry did you get the link I sent you ??? You should read some of the stuff in that link, give you a general idea whats happening,,:)
Bry did you get the link I sent you ??? You should read some of the stuff in that link, give you a general idea whats happening,,:)
im at college at the mo so i cant read it incase teachers etc wonder what the hell im reading lol! i'll read it when i get back earlier.
JustJodi
10-02-2006, 13:43
Now theres a thought - I know what I'd do if I caught my hubby cheating :D Wouldn't be a pleasant sight!! :sick: :rotfl:
Hmm we could do the Burning Bed thing, or the Lorena Bobbitt thing..the list goes on and on muwahhahahahahahah:lol:
JustJodi
10-02-2006, 13:44
im at college at the mo so i cant read it incase teachers etc wonder what the hell im reading lol! i'll read it when i get back earlier.
Gotcha, wouldn't do if the teacher caught you reading about some one getting whacked off :rotfl:
im at college at the mo so i cant read it incase teachers etc wonder what the hell im reading lol! i'll read it when i get back earlier.Ummmm, you're skiving :nono: :rotfl: You'll have to use some of the info towards some of the MHC stuff though - that would be brilliant!
Bachelor Boys House - Morning
Claire is lying alone in her bedroom, all that can be heard is the banging of a bed against the wall from Tom and Luqinas room ( :wub: ). Claire stares at a photo of her and Romeo. She strokes it and sighs. She then gets up and heads towards the bathroom. As she opens the door Chris comes out, naked, he covers his private areas and grins.
Claire: Oh Chris...im so sorry...i didnt...
Chris: No worries...always a pleasure to show myself to a beautiful blonde...
Claire doesnt know how to respond.
Chris: So then...like what you see?
Claire: Chris..what you being like this for...?
Chris: Why whats wrong?
Claire: Your hitting on me big time...
Chris: You love it really... :p
Claire: No Chris..i dont..incase youve forgotten, im dating your best mate...
Chris: He's not hear at the moment...
Claire: And if he was hed have flung you down the stairs by now!
Chris: When the cats away...
Claire: The mice bite away the mans overactive tackle! :angry:
Chris: You know what...ill drop it...
Claire: Good
Chris heads to his room, he looks back at her.
Chris: But you can bite on my overactive tackle anyday :p
Chris closes his door. Claire feels uncomfortable about this
INT: Bachelor Boys House
Luqina is watching TV, while filing her nails. She picks up her phone and makes a call…
Luqina: Hey babe, how you doing?
The scene splits, featuring Luqina, and on the other side, Tom at work.
Tom: Yeah I’m fine thanks. Had a ton of people come in today though, been a bit hectic.
Luqina: Aww bless ya. What you wanna do tonight then?
Tom: So I get to choose? Well there’s an offer…
Luqina: Trust you to think of that….
Tom: Well what d’ya expect?!
Luqina laughs. A knock at the door is heard…
Luqina: Hang on a sec babes, someone’s at the door…
Tom : tell you what. I’ll have a think about tonight, and ring you back later after you’ve finished at the door.
Luqina: Alrite. I’ll look forward to it. See ya sexy.
Tom hangs up the phone, therefore the scene goes back to being just Luqina. She goes to the door, with a smile on her face.
Luqina: What the hell…..?
The shot stays on Luqina. She looks obviously shocked. A voice is heard…
Kal:Well don’t be too pleased to see me….long time no see, babe
INT: Jenkins Manor (evening)
Richard, Hilary and Tanya are having dinner in the dining room. Its obvious there’s tension around. After a long silence….
Richard: So how you settling in Hil?
Hilary: yeah, everything’s great darling. Perfect, in fact.
There’s another silence.
Richard: Tanya, what’s up? There’s no need to be like this. You might not be happy about Hilary moving in but now’s not the time…
Tanya: Yeah, whatever.
Richard: Come on, get it over and done with. This silence really is deadly.
Tanya: Well aint it obvious? (gestures to Hilary)She’s here. Isn’t that enough
Hilary: Oh I might have known. The little girls throwing a strop again.
Tanya: (stands, through fury) Stop acting like this is your home. Your not wanted here, don’t you see that?!
Richard: Tanya! I asked her here…
Tanya: oh, and I bet she loved that. Getting her stupid little feet through the front door was exactly what you wanted, wasn’t it?
Hilary: How dare you? Such a thing never went through my mind! I’m here because I want to. I have just as much right as you, and if you don’t like it, then you know where the front door is.
Richard: This isn’t a competition for me, you know. I’m not a prize. Your both important to me, everything I could want in the world is sitting here. I don’t want you arguing.
Tanya: Come on, you must see….
Richard: No, I don’t want to hear it. You two are the most important people in my life, just don’t argue. Please.
Hilary: Of course not, darling. Just a little…..disagreement, isn’t that right Tanya? (glares towards Tanya)
Tanya: Yeah, whatever. I don’t want to hear it Hilary.
INT.Bachelor Boys House - Day
Luqina has a look of shock on her face, Kal, the drug dealer from earlier on in the week, storms in.
Luqina: Look i dont know what you want with me!?
He slams the door shut and heads into the living room, trashing the place...
Kal: You know what i want...you owe me 2 and a half grand...and i ent leaving this place till i get it babes...
Luqina: Do you "babes" me...
Kal: You liked it when it suited ya...but you cant just piss people about Luqina...once a tart always a tart...im sick of you...and i just want my moolah, so i cant get out of here...
Luqina: I havent got no money tough...
Kal: Well you see to be perfectly cushty here...got your own gaff.... a new bloke...mind you a flash of them double ds and your anyones...
Luqina slaps Kal around the face. He laughs it off..
Kal: You silly little girl...now i see two options...you give me the dosh...or i tell lover boy...and the rest of this stuck up little villlage your dirty little secret
Luqina: Look Kal...
Kal: Dont think he'll be into you when he knows what your really like... so come on Luqina, where's my money?
Luqina has a nervous look on her face.
INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - DAY
Luqina: Me reasonable Kal, i cant just get that sort of money to you on the spot...you know what i was like when i left you...not a penny to my name...
Kal: Yeah and in great debt to me...i cant just let you walk away when you owe me this kind of money...if anyone else messed me around like you have id have broken their arms...but i didnt want to get violent with you...
Luqina: Then dont get violent with me...
Kal: If you give me whats owed then i will leave now...let you start a new life, shcaked up with lover boy...
Luqina: How many more times i havent got any money!?
Kal walks towards her, he strokes her hair in a suggestive manner.
Kal: You can always pay off your debt in another way...
Luqina: No! No way! Not any more!
Kal: Oh come on Lu...you know more than anyone else that sex pays...
Luqina: Ive changed my ways like that...im moved on...
Kal: Once a tart, always a tart....i cant see no other way of you paying off your debts... so shut up and get on with it...
Kal lowers her down onto the sofa, he starts to kiss her and at first she allows him to. However she pulls away...
Kal: What are you doing you stupid...
Luqina: I will not reduce myself to that!...I'm not going to risk what i have with Tom for the sake of a few grand...
Kal: But your prepared to take the risk of what he says when i tell him every sordid little secret about your past...
Luqina: Yes...yes i am...he loves me...and i love him...its maybe for the best if he knows the truth... get it out in the open...then you have nothing on me at all...so go on, tell him! See if i care!
Kal gets up and straightens his jacket, he smirks.
Kal: Right then, I'll do just that...
Kal leaves the house, Luqina gulps nervously.
The Red Rum Public House - Day
Patrick is unloading the delivery. A brunette dressed in a tight leather bikers outfit comes in, holding an envelope in one hand and her helmet in the other. Patrick wolf whistles.
Courier: Patrick O Brian?
Patrick: That i am darling, and who are you?
Courier: A courier...come to deliver you this...
She hands Patrick the envelope. He puts it down on the bar and continues to talk to her.
Patrick: Thanks...(looks at helmet) any chance of a ride? :p
Courier: No chance...its a one person bike...
Patrick: Shame...
The courier walks out of the pub, Patrick admires the view for a second. Once she has left he opens the envelope, in it are 2 tickets for a health spar. Patrick phones up his mistress.
Patrick: Heya babes...yeah theyve just come...a couple of ways away from Baymoore...should do us the world of good...pamepering, relaxation and most importantly of al...no Amy...(laughs) yeah ill pick you up around 7 tonight? ok...see you then...
Patrick gives off a satisfied smile.
INT:Valentinos Italian Restaurant- Night
Emma and Andonis are at the restaurant. They’ve got their meals, so have obviously been chatting for a while…
Emma: so….
Andonis: Yeah?
Emma: Well I was just wondering….
Andonis: carry on then!
Emma: Well I was just wondering….about your love life…
Andonis: What about it? Its not like there much to tell
Emma: How d’ya mean?
Andonis: Well I’ve never really had much luck, you know. I meet all tons of girls, and we get on and all that….but passed that, and nothing really happens…
Emma: ah, I see…
Andonis: Why you ask?
Emma: No reason….
Emma smiles at Andonis, and their eyes meet.
Andonis: and what about you?
Emma: (looks away for a second )well you know….
Emma looks back to Andonis, then leans forward and gives him a kiss. At first he looks surprised…however doesn’t complain….
Red Rum upstairs flat
Amy is busy tidying up the living room. She picks up a pile of magazines, and begins to straighten them. Patrick comes out of the bathroom, wearing a towel…
Amy: Had a good shower?
Patrick: Yeah, fine.
Patrick goes to sit down and read the paper, when something drops out from the pile of magazines onto the floor….
Amy: (looks at the envelope, and then at Patrick) Whats this?
Patrick: Give it here! I mean…. Its just a bill, no need for you to worry…
Amy: Oh, for the gas? I've been waiting for this to come through…
Amy opens the envelope. Patrick looks like he’s bracing himself.
Patrick: Babe…
Amy: What’s this? A health farm? Why the hell have you got tickets for a health farm?!
Patrick: Its nothing. It was a surprise, that’s all.
Amy: What, for me?
Patrick: ……Course its for you!
Amy: (hugs Patrick) that’s great! Sorry for ruining the surprise though. We can really do with this…
Patrick: I can’t go...
Amy: What?
Patrick: The dates. They clash with a meeting, I wanted to change them, but they wont.
Amy: Not to worry. It’s the thought that counts.
Patrick: But you can still go. Take a mate, have a laugh.
Amy: You sure? You wont mind?
Patrick: Course not! You could take Val;
Amy: Great idea! Thanks, Patrick. I’ll go give her a ring now…
Amy walks to the phone, picks it up and dials, then walks out the room. Patrick grabs his mobile from the coffee table.
Patrick: Hi babe… yeah I’m great…look, something’s happened…..yeah, she found them….yeah, I’m sorry….she’s taking a mate…..no, we can still have fun, you know what they say, when the cats away the mice will play… yeah, my place…..good, bye babe.
Patrick hangs up his mobile, with a smile on his face.
big bro fan
11-02-2006, 18:54
fantastic it is the best thing on the boards.
Ooooo, Patrick you dirty dawg!!! Fantastic stuff Abi - brilliant.
EXT: Red Rum Pub
Amy is carrying a bag out of the pub. Patrick is outside, standing next to a cab….
Patrick: (goes over to Amy) here, let me take that…
Amy: Thanks babe. I dunno why its so heavy, its not like I’ll be gone for ages….
Patrick lifts the bag into the boot, and Val comes up behind him.
Val: You can take this too…
Patrick: Val. great to see you…. :rolleyes:
Cab driver: Are we goin or what? I can’t stick around forever.
Amy: (to Val) we should go.
Patrick: (shuts boot) have a great time babe (kisses Amy on the cheek)
Val: Make sure you don’t overwork yourself…
Patrick: Course not!
Val and Amy both get into the cab, and drive off. Patrick waves them off, then smilies and walks back into the pub.
Baymoore Beach
Andonis are Emma are sitting on the beach front. Andonis has his arm around Emma, and her head is resting on his shoulder
Andonis: this is great, you know
Emma: Sure is. Its been so long since I can just relax with a boyfriend…
Andonis: And is that what you want?
Emma: course it is. Lets just…take it slow, yeah?
Andonis: If you’re sure that’s how you want to play it…
Emma: (laughs) lets just see how it goes….
EXT: Harveys Motors
Craig is standing outside the garage, obviously waiting for someone to arrive. Kal walks towards the garage, and is ushered inside by Craig
Craig: So what is it you wanted?
Kal: now, now. All good things come to those that wait.
Craig: (looks outsde) Just spit it out.
Kal: (moves closer To craig, and quietens down to almost a whisper) Tomorrow. I’ve got some more coming tomorrow.
Craig: drugs?
Kal: (almost angry that Craig said it) Course its that!
Craig: good. Anything else?
Kal: Theres a rumour about. About a brothel in Exeter, that’s up for sale.
Craig: I see…..(thinks)….That’s just a rumour though?
Kal: Yeah, but my source is reliable. He’s not the type of person that would spread gossip, if you get my drift.
Craig: Ok…Well you know the drill. Get the details, and come back to me.
Kal: So your interested?
Craig: Course I’m interested! Get the details, meet me here, same time tomorrow
Kal: (Puts hand out) Good doing business with you.
Craig looks at his hand, and then back at Kal. He then sarcastically ignores him, and walks off.
big bro fan
12-02-2006, 14:57
wow good part abi wonder what mandy will do if she finds out.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Shania Twain's song "Kaching" plays over a montage of Hilary on various internet shopping sites buying clothes, jewelerry and designer handbags. She is using Richard's credit card.
The montage stops with Hilary on ebay bidding for a diamond necklace...she has just lost out on a bid.
Hilary: Damn it! As if boobtube2002 would appreciate the quality of that!
The infamous sound of Tanyas heels on the pine floor can be heard. Hilary turns around and sees Tanya standing in the doorway, arms folded.
Hilary: Taannyaaa. You know you really must find a hobbie, as it seems like your spending an unhealthy amount of time spying on me...
Tanya: If it gets you out of this place then ill do it for a lifetime...
Hilary: If you spent half the amount of hatred you have for me into loving your kids, youd be mother of the year 2006.
Tanya: Dont you dare bring my kids into this...
Hilary: Tanya i really cant be bothered to have an argument with a little brat whos scared she wont get all of daddy's attention...now just leave me alone...
Tanya stares at Hilary, then she looks at the computer screen...
Tanya: Ebay!? I thought you hadn't got any money?
Hilary: Where theres a will theres a way...
Tanya grabs Richard's credit card from Hilary's hand, Hilary tries to grab it back.
Tanya: Well well well, what have we hear? Does dad who youve been having a mini shopping spree courtsey of his Mastercard?
Hilary: Its none of your buinsess...
Tanya: Your bleeding my dad dry! Of course its my buisness...
Hilary: Tanya i advise you shut up and give me that card back...because if you tell Richard about this...you WILL regret it...
Tanya: Thats a risk im willing to take...
Tanya walks off holding the credit card, a satisfied smile on her face.
big bro fan
12-02-2006, 21:05
dont leave it there i want more more more
bakedbean
12-02-2006, 21:06
Ohh it looks like Tanya may have won i hope not lol
This is getting better and better guys - well done both of you :cheer:
Patrick, Hope he gets caught by his manhood. What is tom playing at with Caroline. Tanya is going to get burnt, I can feel it coming
Well done Bry and Abi.. still loving this
INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - NIGHT
Tom and Chris are sitting next to each other on the sofa, Claire is also sititng down trying to avoid Chris, who keeps on eying her up.
A nervous looking Luqina is sat in the corner filing her nails.
Claire: What's up with you? Guilty concience...
Luqina What?...Oh...er...
Tom: Just ignore her, she dont no when to stop it..
Claire: You'll find out one day, and then youll have no one to support you..
Tom: Claire just drop it! Okay?
There is an awkard silence. There is a violent knock on the door. Luqina jumps out of her feet and rushes towards the door.
Luqina: I'll get it..
Luqina opens the door, Kal charges trough, Luqina tries to close the door on him but he smashes it open, bagning it against the wall, pushing Luqina to the wall, he walks into the living room, where Tom and Chris have got up to see what the comotion is.
Chris: What the hell is going on here!? Who the hell are you!?
Kal: (To Luqina) This loverboy?
A scared Luqina shakes her head.
Tom: No i am...what the hell do you think your doing charging into my house...
Kal: I thought there were a few things you'd like to know about your precious Luqina...she ent the little angel that you think she is...
Luqina: Please Kal, dont, i'll get you your money...
Tom: (To Luqina) Wha...what money?
Kal: My money...money she owes me fro drugs!
Tom is shocked by this...
Tom: Drugs?...no it cant be...
Kal: That ent half it mate...she was a full on smack head...she'd do anything for her addiction...sell herslef...i got sick of her...leaching off me... the only reason she's turned up here is to find some other loser to spounge off...
Claire: Well well, looks like the truth is finally coming out...
Luqina: Shut up Claire!
Claire: I knew you werent just some innocent little hairdresser..
Tom: Shut up Claire! We dont need you chipping in aswell!
Kal: Hairdresser? (Laughs) Is that what she told you..?...She ent no hairdresser at all...shes nothing but a dirty little slag... a model...and im not talking catalouges and catworks...im talking about x rated top shelf stuff...
Tom: (shocked) No...
Kal: Yeah thats right, Luqina is nothing but a dirty little pornstar...with a drug addiction...
Chris: God i knew id seen her somehwere before!
Luqina is now in tears, she approaches Tom...
Luqina: Look Tom...i didnt mean for it to come out like this...
Tom: SHut up! I cant believe you... (To Kal)... how much does she owe you?
Kal: Nothing now...ive got my payment...and done myself a favour to the community aswell, nice guy ent i?
Kal grins, spits his chewing gum onto the floor and walks out of the house, leaving Luqina to face the music...
What is tom playing at with Caroline. Ta
what you on about tom and caroline? :searchme: :lol:
what you on about tom and caroline? :searchme: :lol:
sorry, I meant claire, I was just talking to someone called caroline at work before I posted :rotfl::rotfl::rotfl:
there I go again, saying Tom instead of chris.. I all a muddle today.. opps
sorry, I meant claire, I was just talking to someone called caroline at work before I posted :rotfl::rotfl::rotfl:
dont you mean chris rather than tom :lol: yam getting all your names muddled up bab!
Please no tom, don't forgive her. she is using you and :rotfl::rotfl: Chris comment on recognising her
Chris: God i knew id seen her somehwere before! Absolute classic line :rotfl: Fantastic stuff bry - god Tom, dont forgive her, now you know the truth, shes just using you!
JustJodi
13-02-2006, 12:16
I nearly fell off my chair,,,whoaaaaaaaa...Kai was good to his word and said he would telllllllll,, sooooooooooo La is in troubbbblllleeeeeee :rotfl: and gawd I hope Tom throws her out on her smack head butt !!!!!!!! I am ready for what happens next:cheer: Good one Bry :bow:
INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - NIGHT
Claire and Chris are in the kitchen, leaving Tom and Luqina alone to talk things trough.
Luqina: Well say something...anything...(grabs Tom) slap me! kiss me! scream at me! hug me!... do something or say something please...!
Tom: How could you...not tell me all that?
Luqina: I didn't see that it was necessary...
Tom: Of course it was necessary...
Luqina: I wnated to move on from all that...when i advertised for a date...i wnated to forget about all that had happened...
Tom: Or to find another mug to take for a ride...
Luqina: No Tom it wasn't like that at all... i'd had enough of men mistreeting me...thinking all i was good for was sex... do you think i wnated to live a life as a pornstar...drugged up to the eyeballs...no...i knew i had to get out of there...
Tom: Oh come off it, if Kal hadnt chucked you out you'd still be in that sitaution...
Luqina: Yeah but he did...and it made me realise that things had to change...since I've been with you...all that seems like a distant memory... you have been my rock...the one good thing in my life...i was hoping it could be a fresh start for me...a chance to show what i good person i really am... (cries) but i guess I've blown all that...
Tom: Look...as far as i see it, the past is the past, all the time ive known you youve been fine...you've stayed clean, youve given up that carerr...your no longer using sex...(embarassed) well other than the obvious... all that i cant forgive you for is that you never told me...you should have been able to trust me...
Luqina: Its not the thing you tell on a first date... hey im luqina and i got "my tits out for the lads"...avaible to buy on video and dvd from your local smutty newsagents... if id told you that...and about all my past...then id have lost you (cries)... but whats that matter now eh?...i have lost you...
Tom: No...you haven't lost me...i want to help you...we'll find you an agent...you can beocme a model... a proper one... youve got the looks...and the figure...you'll be the next Kate Moss...
Luqina: ...minus the drugs...
Tom: Yeah minus the drugs, if you stick with me i'll get you sorted...i love you...and nothing...and no one will change that...
He hugs Luqina, she grins at Claire who is staring at her from the kitchen.
nnnnnnnnnooooooooooo!!! Tom you are an idiot! she is taking you for the biggest ride of your life
Nooooooo, Tom you idiot - get her out of there.
:rotfl: Snap Siobhan!! How stupid is he!!! Hes letting his heart rule his head, hes gonna get hurt
JustJodi
13-02-2006, 12:45
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I am gonna kill that slaggy b--ch.. omg,,tom is a total MUG,, snap out of it man, a woman like that doesn't change,, Claire was right about this coke wh--e.....arrrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhhhh:angry: :angry: :angry:
Hurt!!! that is not the word for it. She is not only going to break his heart but I reckon she is going to break his bank too. Silly Tom, just because he was alone for so long
BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - NIGHT
Claire and Chris are in the kitchen
Claire: I dont believe...how can he fall for her lies?
Chris: Maybe he's willing to give her a second chance...
Claire: She doesent deserve one...she's venomous, why cant he see she's using him for a house and his money!?
Chris: Why you so concerned?
Claire: Because hes a good man...and Romeo's mate...and yours...you should be a bit more concerned for his best intrests...
Chris: He'll learn the hard way...until then i have a nice bird to stare at everyday...
Claire: Oh typical...
Luqina drags Tom out of the living room and up the stares, in which time she manages to give Claire an evil stare...
Chris: Ten guesses what theyre gonna do...
Claire: Dirty little slapper...
Chris: Jealous are you?
Claire: Of her!?
Chris: With Romeo away, its only natural that you feel certain urges... and well im here to satisfy them if you so need...
Claire turns around and faces Chris.
Claire: For christ sake...have you got any morals!? Im your best friends girlfriend...plus i dont find you remotley attratcive!
Chris: You know...and i know...that thats not true...now ill be patient...ive got other offers...but as soon as your ready just say...
Claire: I dont believe you!
Claire gets up grabs her coat and storms out of the house. Chris smiles thinking it is all harmless fun.
Oooo Chris, naughty!! Will Claire fall for it though, whilst Romeo is away?!
I hope not. anyway what is Chris playing at, she is his best mate's girlfriend and from my opinion strickly a :nono:
I hope not. anyway what is Chris playing at, she is his best mate's girlfriend and from my opinion strickly a :nono:A definite :nono: Siobhan - the guy obviously has no morals
JustJodi
13-02-2006, 15:55
Lets hope that Clarie remains TRUE to her guy and contiunes shunning Chris's manipulation..Gawd I wanna pull out LA's hair and light bamboo under her nails, she is EVIL,,:angry:
INT.JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Richard comes trough the front door, looking tired. Tanya runs towards her father and hugs him.
Richard: (Laughs) What a nice welcome home, you ok?
Tanya: Yeah fine...where have you been all this time?
Richard: With an old school friend...discussing a few potential deals...why..is everything ok?
Tanya: No..not really...you never guess what i caught Hilary doing...
Richard: Oh not this again Tanya...
Tanya: No listen dad, for once im talking the truth...ive nailed her...
Richard: (Unintrested) Really?
Tanya shows him his credit card...
Richard: Where...where did you get this?
Tanya: Hilarys had it...been going on a virtual spending spree with it..
The front door opens and in walks Hilary, with a smile on her face. This soon goes away when she sees Richard and Tanya together.
Tanya: Oh look who it isnt...
Hilary: Nice to see you too Tanya...oh Richard...i suppose you want to talk to me about the credit card...im so sorry but i had to use it...
Tanya: Im sure you could live without a designer handbag...
Hilary: I was just borrowing some money until my credit card came trough...living back in the uk and all...
Richard: Look you dont have to worry about paying me back...thing of it as my treat...you deserve a bit of spoiler, think of it as me making it up to you...
Hilary: Well thank you Richard, that is very genrous of you...much appreciatred...
Richard: No worries, now can i leave you two ladies to go and get a drink, whilst i sort a few things out in the study...
Hilary: Of course Richard darling, I'll pour you one at the same time...
Richard heads off to the study, Hilary and Tanya walk towards the lounge.
Hilary: I didnt seriosuly think youd go trough with it...
Tanya: I told you i would, and i always stick to my word...
Hilary: I didnt think you'd be that stupid...because now Tanya...youve made our battle personal...i wasnt really going to hurt you...why would i? i had no real reason to...but now...i will enjoy seeing you suffer...so then fancy a drink?
Hilary smiles evily.
:eek: Whats Hillary going to do!!! :eek: Can't wait for the next installment
JustJodi
13-02-2006, 21:28
Hillary is really playing the woman scorned big time and to the HILT .. whoaaaaaaa.....Bring on the next page Bry I am all EYES:)
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - MORNING
Claire and Emma are in the bathroom. Emma is getting ready for college.
Emma: It's nice having you around the place again...was starting to miss you...
Claire: Yeah well I cant stand it a second longer around that place, that Luqina....Tom is being such an idiot...oh and Chris is coming onto me every 2 seconds...
Emma: No way!?
Claire: Yeah he's desperate for it...
Emma: And are you?.... Desperate for it...
Claire: No...im with Romeo...
Emma: Stuff Romeoe...he buggered off to Italy without you...
Claire: For this brother's funeral!
Emma: Yeah but he could have taken you with him...teach him a lesson...have a bit of fun with Chris...
Claire: That is SO not going to happen Ems...anyways what's the latest in your love life...got over Tom yet?
Emma: Totally!...As it happens ive got a boyfriend...
Claire: Whos the lucky lad...do I know him?
Emma: You might do...its erm...Andonis Singh.
Claire: Oh christ Ems...you sure...?
Emma: Oh not you aswell Claire, dad's pulling his nose up at me dating an asian...
Claire: No its not that...but have you seen his parents!? His dad Kash...hes a blooming control freak! Ruby, his daughter, she's always telling me how much he lets it get to his head...
Emma: Yeah Andonis has been telling me all about him...god Claire I'm dreading meeting them...they sound a nightmare!
Claire: You shoulda thought of that before you got envolved with him...
Emma: But im dating him...not his family...
Claire: To Asian's family are the msot important thing Ems, and if your not good enough for their son they'll do the best to stop it...
Emmas face turns to disapointment.
What is with the men in Devon seas, they are swallowing all the **** the women are giving them. Tom and Richard should take courses in how to grow balls
INT. MANSFEILDS HOUSE - MORNING
Nick and Vicky are having fun in bed. All of a sudden the front door bell rings and they are interupted.
Nick: Oh god, who's that?
Vicky: Just ignore them...
The doorbell rings again
Vicky: They arent going to go away are they?
Nick gets out of bed and wraps a towel around his waste, he looks out of the windows and sees who is at the door.
Nick: Christ! (runs away from window) Its your mom!
Vicky: What's she doiing back!?
Nick: I dont know...but you need to hide me...
Vicky: Why?
Nick: Becuase we agreed, no one finds out about us until the time is right...
Vicky gets out of bed, and puts on a silk dressing gown, she heads out of the room.
Vicky: Stay in here and shut up...
Vicky runs down the stairs and opens the door to Rebecca.
Vicky: Mom!? Didnt think you were due back till next Wednesday...
Rebecca: I'd have been back earlier but there was a delay at the airport..Oh i couldnt stand a minute longer with the in laws...
Vicky: That bad?
Rebecca: They all still blame me for taking Gisepi away from Italy... you know what Italians are like for baring grudges...
Vicky: Romeo isnt with you?
Rebecca: No, he decided to stay on a bit longer...help out with the family buisness...
Vicky: Claire's going to be pleased about that...
Rebecca: She'll live...come on dont just stand there, bring in my cases and get the kettle on...
Vicky: (Sarcastic) Yes mam!
Rebecca: Dont be so sarcastic Victoria, it doesnt suit you...so anything happened since ive been gone...found yourself a peice of hapiness yet?
Vicky: (Heistant) No...not yet...
Rebecca: We'll youd better get your act together...or youll die a sad old spinster like me...so then wheres this cup of tea?
Vicky laughs to herself and heads to the kitchen.
CrazyLea
14-02-2006, 14:29
wow well after missing weeks of this, i've just caught up. i feel so sorry for amy, shes so silly for trusting patrick!!!
hilary is great, im loving her! wonder how long it is till richard see's through her!
claire and chris are soo gunna get it on arent they, haha gosh.
well very good bry and abi!!!!! cant wait for more!!
JustJodi
14-02-2006, 14:54
Andonis family is not going to accept a "white" girl in the family, but sounds like emma is setting herself up for another HEARTBREAK...
I am also willing to bet like Lea says that Clarie and Chris might end up doing the horizonal mambo..And ol'Romeo is gonna catch em ??? Ok ok I am jumping ahead of MYSELF lol
INT. HARVEY'S MOTORS - NIGHT
Craig is looking over the books at the garage. Chris comes in with a petrol station punch of flowers and a cheap tacky card.
Chris: Right boss...managed to get what you wanted...thats 2 29 then...
Craig: I'll add it to your wages..
Chris: (Laughs) Dont bother, can i go?
Craig: Yeah sure...and if Mandy asks...i brought them from a florists in Darmouth for a fortune...alright?
Chris: Sure boss
Chris leaves. Craig starts to write his valentines card whilst on the phone.
Craig: Yeah Cal...Craig...tell him i'll buy it...whatever the price...cant miss out on a top class brothel like that... yeah tell the girls ill come and "break them in" later on in the week... oh yeah and as far as your concerned...give them some drugs...get them hocked...and take the money out their wages...(laughs) yeah...well sereves them right for working for me... (laughs) yeah alright then mate...see you soon.
Craig has an evil grin on his face. He selas the enevlope, picks up the flowers and heads home.
JustJodi
14-02-2006, 21:33
ooooh I do not like Mr Craig, hes a really evil person,,you would think he would want to keep his wife sweet by splurging on real good flowers, and something really nice, rather than getting gas station flowers and an el cheapo card:angry: Hope he comes down with some pecker rot or something from his brothel workers !!!!!!!!
nasty nasty nasty man!! I am not like him :angry: Mandy will go mental when she finds out what he is up to and I hope she does
JustJodi
15-02-2006, 10:02
I guess I am a bit worried about what that evil man would do to Mandy, he loves knocking people around.And has no problem doing it, hes a big old bully and I hate his guts :angry:
bakedbean
15-02-2006, 10:54
I really do not like Craig who knows what he is going to do???
Red Rum Pub Upstairs Flat
Amy and Val come into the flat, carrying bags. Amy puts her bag down just inside the doorway, Val does the same and sits on the sofa.
Amy: We’re back!…..Patrick? Patrick, are you about?
Val: Guess he’s not in.
Amy: Maybe… I’ll go check the rooms.
She goes into the bathroom, and finds nothing but empty bottles and packets. She goes back into the living room
Amy: He’s not in the shower…. Ah well, he must be out.
Val: The question is; where, and with who?
Amy: Val, he’s not like that any more. Trust me. He wouldn’t go behind my back again…
Val: Well…
Amy: Just gonna go and put my bags in the bedroom, then. You just….stay there!
Val: I’m not going anywhere. I’ll try and preserve that calmness from the spa, shall I?!
They both laugh. Amy picks up her bag, and takes it into the bedroom. She struggles to lift it onto the bed, and when she does, she collapses onto her bed in relief.
Amy: (mumbles to herself) honestly, I put all new sheets on, and he still manages to mess them up….
Amy looks around the room. It looks suspiciously tidy, compared to the rest of the flat. She shakes her head, in dismissal of it. Then lies on the bed..
Amy: (mumbles) If only I could be back at that spa….the sheets smelt as nice as these, that for sure…. Hang on, how can this bed be soo messy, but smell so nice??
She sniffs into the pillow…
Amy: that’s not conditioner… that’s perfume… (she takes another sniff)….and its not mine, that’s for sure…
wow patrick, you are going to get caught out but know him he will have some stupid lame excuse like "eh I got a sample and thought if you like it, i would get a big bottle for you"
JustJodi
15-02-2006, 13:11
wow patrick, you are going to get caught out but know him he will have some stupid lame excuse like "eh I got a sample and thought if you like it, i would get a big bottle for you"
OOOOHHHHHHHH I wanna do the Lorena bobbitt on this dude, hes gonna get caught.. but lemme think,, I honestly wonder why he is STILL married if he wants to play around :searchme: I just do not get it :searchme:
INT: Jenkins Manor
Hilary is in the living room, flicking through shop magazines. She’s humming “money, money, money”. Tanya stands at the doorway, watching her in disgust.
Tanya: (from the doorway) You think you’ve got it all sorted, don’t you.
Hilary: Darling, didn’t see you there. Honestly, some of the things you come up with, they’re so abstract.
Tanya: Stop acting all innocent. I know what you’re up to, and you aint gonna get away with it!
Hilary: Tanya, what makes you think that anything I do with my life is your business?
Tanya: Your in my house, cause it’s my business.
Hilary: (stands up) I’m in Richards house. Because he asked me to. So you might as well stop all this, I told you before, if you want a battle, I’ll give you one. But you’re not going to win. I wont be pushed out, and that’s the end of it.
Tanya: Your not going to get anything, so why don’t you just leave?!
Hilary: Because I’m my own woman, and I can do what the hell I like with my life, because its my business.
Hilary leaves the room. Tanya goes over the phonebook, and flicks through it. She obviously angry, until she finds a number. She rings it, with a grin on her face….
Tanya: Private investagator, please. The best you have, cost doesn't matter...I want to know everything about hilary Blackstock. What she does, where she goes, you know, the usual stuff……yes that Hilary Blackstock…Tanya Donagoon…when you’ve got the stuff, ring me on my mobile….07792035769…thanks. (hangs up the phone, with a smirk on her face) she’s gonna get what’s coming to her…
JustJodi
15-02-2006, 13:22
Ohh a private eye .. love it,, hope she takes over photos of hilary and all sorts of info so the private eye can dig up some gooood dirt on her !!!Let the battle commence :cheer:
What is the bet Hilary will find out, sleep with the private investigator and bribe him to give false information to Tanya
JustJodi
15-02-2006, 14:16
I abet she does, and makes him an offer he can not refuse:p I hope she keeps it from Tanya that she knows, then throws it in her face.Should be verrrrrrry interesting :hmm:
Red Rum Upstairs Flat (night)
Amy is watching the TV, she looks uptight, and glances at the clock every few seconds. She hears a key go in the lock, and automatically jumps up, in fury.
Patrick: (walks through the door) Hi babe, how was the spa?
He goes to kiss her, but she pulls away straight away
Patrick: Hey, what’s up?
Amy: You really think I’m stupid don’t you.
Patrick: What d’ya mean?
Amy: Your meeting went on a bit long, didn’t it?!
Patrick: Well, yeah. We had a lot to discuss…. You know how it is
Amy: (tuts) I don’t know how I could be so gullible…
Patrick puts his arms on her waist, she steps backwards…
Amy: Don’t touch me, Patrick. Just….don’t.
Patrick: What’s all this about?! Why are you being like this to me?
Amy: I know you had someone here.
Patrick: what?
Amy: There’s perfume on the sheets. And its not mine.
Patrick: (sighs) not this again…
Amy: And I don’t know how I could be so stupid! Of course you didn’t have a meeting…
Patrick: Amy, I’ve done nothing. I’ve had a long meeting, I can’t be doing with this! You’ve imagining that perfume. Either that, or its yours. But no one else has been here.
Amy: Stop lying! I’m not imagining it…. Well, I can’t be….. I don’t…
Patrick: You’re confused. That’s understandable. But you need to get over this obsession that I must be having an affair. If you don’t love me, if you don’t trust me, then get a divorce. But I know as well as you do, that you can’t live without me.
He walks out, slamming the door behind him, leaving Amy confused.
JustJodi
15-02-2006, 17:03
Our Amy is a bit thick , Patrick knows just how to push her buttons, and get her so confused she doesn't know if she is coming or going. Why does he need her ?? does she have a poop load of money?? some one enlighten me on this one please..:hmm:
Tom , Amy and Richard should form the "gullible people of baymoor society" they fell for all that stuff
JustJodi
15-02-2006, 17:06
Tom , Amy and Richard should form the "gullible people of baymoor society" they fell for all that stuff
and wear t shirts that say I am dumb as a box of rocks and if you say I am I will be lieve you, gawd. These folks are plain STUPID
Our Amy is a bit thick , Patrick knows just how to push her buttons, and get her so confused she doesn't know if she is coming or going. Why does he need her ?? does she have a poop load of money?? some one enlighten me on this one please..:hmm:
we intend to explore Patrick and Amy's relationship in greater depths next month jodi
JustJodi
15-02-2006, 17:39
we intend to explore Patrick and Amy's relationship in greater depths next month jodi
Thank u sweetie, I was just wondering if I might have missed something.
CrazyLea
15-02-2006, 17:55
great parts! poor amyi feel so sorry for her!!
and oo a private investigator..sounds exciting :cheer:
INT: Jenkins Manor
Nick and Richard are in the living room. Nick is flicking through various papers, while talking to Richard…
Nick: So profits are up by 37% this month…
Richard: Annually speaking?
Nick: Well, if everything carries on like this, then over the year that would be…. (Flicks through papers)… a 43% rise on last year
Richard grins. Hilary is seen at the doorway putting a jacket on, and is obviously trying to listen in on the conversation.
Richard: Well that’s great news then. Theoretically speaking, that would be how much profit this year?
Nick: Well, its too early to speak, but in the millions. Definitely in the millions
Richard: Great. As it should be, might I add. Cause for celebration, I think.
Richard stands, and goes to go over to a wine cabinet.
Nick: Honestly, what are you like?! It’s too early for me.
Hilary comes into the room
Hilary: Right, boys, I’m off.
Richard: Where you going?
Hilary: You know, here and there.
Nick: Come on, you can tell us!
Hilary: Well if you must know, to the doctors. Women’s stuff.
Richard: oh…ok. Well I hope everything’s ok…
Hilary: Don’t fuss, Richard. Cheerio!
Hilary walks out of the room, and out of the house. She walks through the frontcourt. As she walks through the gates, she is oblivious to the world around her…. including the private investigator following her…
duh duh duuuhhhh!!! and the plot thickens
THE RED RUM PUB - DAY
Vicky is talking to Nick at the bar.
Nick: So then hows it going with Rebecca back?
Vicky: God dont mention it...the woman is doing my head in...
Nick: Well thats Rebecca for you...pour me a pint babes
Vicky starts to pour a glass of beer...
Vicky: Oh, ive just got to go and change the barel...
Vicky heads down to the cellar, she hears crying and sees Amy sitting on a barrel in tears.
Vicky: Amy?...Are you ok?
Amy: Yeah...im bloomin terrefic!
Vicky heads towards Amy and hugs her.
Vicky: Whats he done now?
Amy: He promised me...he promised me Vics...that he wasnt going to cheat anymore...
Vicky: I take it he has then?'
Amy: He says im making it up...crazy old Amy...loosing the plot...but i tell you Vics...after all these years...after all these affairs i know when he is cheating on me! I know the signs... and he's cheating alright...
Vicky: Oh god...babes...i dont know what to say...
Amy: Neither do i, but i know what to do... in the past I've just let him get away with it...but not this time...oh no...im sick to the back teeth of being made a mug of! I'm gonna nail him...im gonna find the proof...and boy am i gonna shame him and that tart of his once and gor all!
JustJodi
16-02-2006, 18:39
Good for Amy. maybe she will grow a back bone and hire a private eye to tail him and catch him !!!!
CrazyLea
16-02-2006, 18:45
yay! glad amys finally seen through the lies
Mansfield House
Nick walks up the path, and rings the bell of Mansfield House. Vicky is seen go to the window, look to see who it is, and then comes to the doorway.
Vicky: What are you doing here?
Nick goes to kiss her, Vicky grabs his top, and pulls him inside, shutting the door behind him
Vicky: I thought we agreed, babe. Not in public!! You know, you’re lucky moms out…
Nick: Vicky, you know I love you don’t you?
Vicky: course I do….why, what’s going on?
Nick: I’d do anything for you. I love you to the end of the earth… I just can’t carry on like this…
Vicky: (takes a small step back) What are you saying?
Nick: I’m tired of all this. Of all the stolen moments in your hallway, all the denying and lieing…
Vicky: (slightly paniky) and?!
Nick: I want us to go public. The times right, I’m sure it is.
Vicky: you mean…. tell them? Tell everyone? About us?
Nick: (steps closer to Vicky, and puts his hands on her face) Course I do. Its about time they knew…
Vicky: (looks away from him) I dunno… its just…
Nick: Babe, I love you. Lets tell them that.
Vicky: (looks back to him, and smiles) ok then. Lets do it. Let tell everyone. Tomorrow.
TORBAY GP'S
Hilary buttons up her blouse after taking them off behind the blinds. She then approaches Dr Ryan Organo.
Hilary: So then Dr Organo...how am i doing? Fit?
Ryan: As a fiddle...i dont know why your putting your top back on...
Hilary: My my, whos a horny little fellow...
Ryan: You've had no complaints so far...
Hilary brushes herself against Ryan. The pair kiss passionatley, it clearly isnt the first time...
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mmmm interesting. Hope Amy catches him and about time Vicky and Nick came out of the couple closet
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SURFS UP CROSS OVER!
Coming soon to Devon Seas is Mandy's sister Leah kage, but watch her wild antics in Big Bro Fan's soap "Down Under" set in Sydney Australia.
big bro fan
17-02-2006, 12:32
Just to add to that she is coming into my soap tonight.
INT: Mansfield House
Vicky is in the front room, flicking through channels on the tele. Rebecca is in the kitchen. Vicky calls through to Rebecca…
Vicky: Thought I’d cook tonight. Maybe…..spag bol?
Rebecca: Nice thought, but theirs no need.
Vicky: But your always saying I should cook more…
Rebecca: Any other day, and it would be fine, but we’ve been invited to Jenkins Manor tonight.
Vicky: (pauses, then unconvincingly asks;)…why’s that?
Rebecca: I’m not sure. Guess we’ll find out when we get there. Cup of tea?
Vicky: Yeah….sure.
Vicky gets her phone out of her pocket, and writes a text.
INTERCUT
INT: Jenkins Manor
Nick is reading the text, Vicky just wrote;
Just heard bout 2nite. Can’t wait 2 c u. Everythin will be kl, I’m sure. Love you. Vicks x
Zooms out, to reveal Richard standing by a cabinet full of wines, and other alcoholic drinks.
Richard: Come on Nick, stop ogling over your phone. We need tonight to be perfect, and it wont be if the wines not right.
Nick: (still looking at the phone, grinning) yeah, just coming..
Richard: There’s just one thing though that’s bothering me… why do you want everyone here?
Nick: Well, you know….just thought it would be nice..
Richard: even Rebecca and Vicky though?
Nick: Why not?
Richard: Don’t get me wrong, it’s a good idea, its just so many people at such short notice, what with us lot too...
Nick: you’ll find out in good time what its about. Mark my words. So where were we?
Richard: wine.
Nick: Yeah… how about this French white, from last summer?
INT: Jenkins Manor
Hilary is in the hallway, reapplying some lipstick. She then picks up her coat from a hook, goes to the door and calls out;
Hilary: I’m off out! (pause) Don’t I get a goodbye, Patrick?
Tanya walks down the stairs, half way down she stops;
Tanya: he’s on the phone. You know how it is, business and all that.
Hilary: Well tell him I said bye then
Hilary goes to open the door, Tanya walks to the bottom of the stairs, and stands with her arms folded
Tanya: And where should I say you’re going?
Hilary: Out. Just out.
Tanya: Come on, Hilary. Spill. Unless its something he shouldn’t know about….
Hilary: course it’s not. Its my business, if he wants to know then I’ll tell him when I get back.
Tanya: So its something I shouldn’t know about then? Come on Hilary, I know you’re up to something.
Hilary: Honestly, stop going on about something that you know nothing about.
Tanya: Oh but I do. And I’ll catch you out. You’ll slip up, and be caught out.
Hilary: (laughs) how wrong you are
Tanya: Course you will. The truth will out, and so will you. Out of your cosy little place in my home.
Hilary: Stop being so thick, Tanya. Just tell him I’m going out.
Hilary walks out, slamming the door behind her.
brill, brill, brill. god i wish we could watch this!
brill, brill, brill. god i wish we could watch this!
I know what you mean. And as we don't know what time or when Bry or Abi will post it makes it more exciting waiting to see what happens next
INT. GREASY GARY'S - DAY
Emma and Andonis are sitting down in the cafe holding hands. Emma is distressed.
Andonis: What's up babes...you seem...troubled...
Emma: I suppose i am...
Andonis: Come on, whats up...you can tell me
Emma: Im nervous...about meeting your family like...
Andonis: Why (laughs) Theres nothing to worry about...
Emma: Yeah but its a big deal isnt it...meeting your boyfriends parents for the first time...
Andonis: Only if you make it out to be...
Emma: I just want them to think I'm right for you...
Andonis: They will do...and if they didnt...then i wouldnt give a toss (laughs) because i'll do what i like anyways...i wanna be with you for keeps...and they wont change it...
Emma: So then, whos who in the Singh household? (Laughs)
Andonis: You make us sound like the Waltons...theres just me...and my little bro Mohammed... my big sis Ruby...shes off around the world on a gap year...
Emma: It ent them im worried about...its your parents...what are they like...Claire was saying they're really strict...
Andonis: Dad is...god...hes so strict, rude, bossy...he thinks he rules us...but well we do what we like...chances are he'll hate you becuase your not a good asian girl from a respectable family...but just ignore him...your perfect...
Emma: And your mom? What's she like...
Andonis: She's sound Ems...she cant wait to meet ya...shes the total opposite of dad...shes kind...friendly...i dont know why shes put up with him so long... look babes...just dont worry about tomorrow...it will be fine...we love each other and that's all that matters...
Emma: (laughs nervously) Bring on tomorrow then...
INT. Jenkins Manor - Night
Richard, Tanya, Gary, Jessica, Jacob, Nick, Vicky, Rebecca and Daniel are all sitting down around a large table. They are waiting for Hilary to arrive.
Richard: I dont know what's taking her so long...must be bad traffic
Tanya: In Devon!?
Gary: Tanya...
Richard: I hope i told her the right time, or we could be waiting for ages...dont want to spoil the meal...
Rebecca: I'm sure it will be fine Richard, im intrigued to now why we're all here...
Richard: I dont even know Rebecca...Nick is keeping it a secret from us all.
Nick and Vicky smile at each other and hold hands from under the table. Hilary walks in, throws her coat on the sofa and heads over to the table.
Tanya: (Under breath) Look what the cat dragged in...
Hilary: Sorry all, had some important buisness to attend to...
Hilary sits down, with Tanya giving her a dirty look. The butler and maid starts to serve everybodys plates to trhe table.
Rebecca: Well i must say this is very nice Richard...
Gary: Yeah top stuff Richard...and this is coming from the pro...
Hilary: Eggs and chips hardly compares to this tough Gary
The group laugh at this except for Tanya.
Gary: (Under breath to Tanya) At least look as tough you're enjoying yourself babes...
Richard: So then Nick... come on...we cant wait much longer...what have you got us all here for...
Nick gets up holding Vicky's hand...the pair are smiling.
Nick: Me and Vicky have something we'd like to share with you all... for the past month or so we've been seeing each other...and well we didnt want to tell you..until we knew it was for real...but now we know.. we are in love... and want to announce it to everyone...
The pair hug, and await the response. Richard is the first to get up
Richard: Well that is fantastic News!
Everyone gets up and starts congratulationing Nick and Vikcy.
Tanya: Well done Bro! You've got a gooden there...
Gary: Yeah congratulations Mate...and you too Vics!
Hilary pats Vicky on the shoulder and heads to the corner of the room. Vicky follows, everyone is till congratulating Nick in the background.
Vicky: So then, you pleased?
Hilary: Of course i am...hes picked from an admirable family...you'd better not break his heart tough...becuase if you hurt him...i want be repsonbile for my actions...
Hilary smiles as she walks Vicky back to the table, Vicky has an uneasy look on her face.
bakedbean
18-02-2006, 11:22
Ohhh Vicky you have been warned good stuff Bondboffin and Abi
Baymoore Streets
Vicky and Nick are walking the streets of Baymoore, holding hands and discussing things.
Nick: Its so good to have it out in the open... there was nothing to worry about really...everyone was so relaxed with it...
Vicky: (laughs to self) yeah except for your mom...
Nick: She was as pleased as everyone else
Vicky: Nick, she took me to one side and threatened me...
Nick: Threatened you?
Vicky: She said if i ever hurt you...
Nick: But you wont too...dont worry thats just mom...shes got a defensive nature...im one of the few things she cares about in this world... trust me...she likes you really...
Vicky: Well she's got a funny way of showing it....
Nick: Well at least we can spend as much time with each other as we like...without having to worry about being caught out...
Vicky: I know its great...you know i never thought id be able to say "i love you" to anyone after Kyle...
Nick: Daniel's dad?
Vicky: Yeah...i mean he left before Daniel was born...he really hurt me...i lost all confidence in love...until i met you...
Vicky and Nick walk past the B&B where a man is getting his bags out of the boot and heading into the B&B, where Annie and Eddie are welcoming him. Vicky shakes her heads to see if her eyes are deseving her...she regonises the man!
THE HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE
Mandy is sitting on the edge of the bed looking into her vanity mirror, she looks at the wedding photo of her and Craig, and then back at the mirror where her split lip is showing.
Craig comes up behind her and starts massaging her shoulders. She turns around and he hands he a rose.
Craig: Happy Anniversary babes...
Mandy grabs the rose, sniffs it and throws it on the vanity table.
Craig: Look what can i do to take it up to you?
Mandy: Crawl up and die...
Craig: Oh come on Mand', you need to speak to me eventually...it was one moment...one stupid moment of me loosing my temper...
Mandy: And that makes it all alright does it?
Craig: No it doesnt...and you cant make me feel any more guilty than i already am...look let me take you out tonight and make it up to you...if want do you any harm will it?
Mandy: No i suppose not.
Craig: Get ya gladrags on then...cus im taking you out to the best resturaiunt in Torbay!
Craig kisses Mandy and heads off. She picks up the wedding photo and stares at it and smiles, then sees her reflection in the glass and her split lip, the smile goes away.
THE MANFEILDS HOUSE - NIGHT
Nick, Vicky and Daniel are playing Monopoly on the living room floor, they are clearly having fun.
Nick: 1...2...3
Vicky: Oh i do belive i posses that house...you owe me 12 quid!
Nick: Ahhh the truths coming out now...you only want me for my money...
Vicky: Amongst other things...
The pair laugh and giggle...
Daniel: Mom!
Nick: Yeah honestly Vics...your go babes...
Vicky rolls the dice and moves her house onto a square where Nick has 3 hotels.
Nick: Haha! About time i got some moolah...thats 950 quid please!
Vicky: Typical Taylor...after everyones money
Nick: Oi you!
Nick pushes Vicky to the floor, the pair start to giggle and wrestle. Daniel sneakily takes some hotels from the game tray and places them on his lots without them noticing.
The door bell rings...
Vicky: Ill get it...its probably mom...
Vicky walks towards the door and opens it. Standing there is the man she saw earlier from the B&B.
Kyle: Ello Babes...god ent you still the dogs whatsits...
Vicky: (shocked) Kyle...
INT. The Lighthouse - NIGHT
The Lighthouse, an expensive restuaraunt in Dartmouth. Craig and Mandy are sitting at a candelight table overlooking the harbour.
Waiter: Would Sir like any wine to accompany the meal?
Craig: Yeah the most expensive bottle of plonk youve got mate...
Mandy: Craig...
Craig: Youre worth it darling...see im not a total monster after all...
Mandy: Maybe not...but it dont excuse you for throwing me around the room like a bag of walkers...
Craig: I cant say how sorry i am...it wont ever happen again...
Mandy: Your right...cus i wont let you...
Craig and Mandy start to eat their meal, the waiter comes over and pours the wine into glasses for them...
Craig: Ta Mate...
A woman dressed in a tracksuit, with her hair tied back comes over to them.
Linda: Craig Harvey!?
Craig: Yeah, whos asking..
Linda grabs his glass of wine and throws it over his face, Mandy is shocked.
Craig: You blooming nutjob! You got any idea how much this wine costs!? More than your doll money in a year you little sket!
Linda: Oh you think your mr it dont you... eating in your fancy restaurant, drinking your fancy wine...
Craig: (To Waiter) This the local headacse mate... cus shes got a screw loose...
Linda: Paid for with what!?...How can you sleep at night...knowing what youve done to my daughter!
Craig: I dont know your blooming daughter...
Linda: Calypso Marlo!... Oh come on mate dont tell me you dont know her...youve got her working in your knock in parlour up in Exeter!
Mandy is shocked...
Craig: (To Mandy) Look babes, this woman is radio...
Linda: You any idea what its like to see my daughter seeling herself like a cheap little tart!?...
Craig: Like mother like duaghter...
Linda slaps Craig around the face.
Craig: (To resturaunt) ABH! you saw this hobbo hit me! I want you attested you mad cow!
Linda: And then to top it off...you get addicted to drugs! And i ent on about calpol...im on about full on heroin!
Mandy: Is she telling the truth!?
Craig: No she ent, shes radio Mands... (to Linda) now piss off...its my wedding anniversary...
Mandy: Dont worry you've spoilt it...
Mandy gets up and leaves the restuaraunt. Craig gets up to follow her.
bakedbean
19-02-2006, 11:06
Ohh mandy knows about Craig wonder what will happen next???
JustJodi
19-02-2006, 12:29
I am so glad that Mandy found Craig out, he is a terrible person. and what ever happens to him he deserves it and more !!!
INT. THE MANSFEILD'S HOUSE - NIGHT
Vicky stands in shock, seeing her ex boyfriend Kyle infront of her after all these years.
Kyle:Well you gonna let me in then? Im freezing my knacker off out here!
Vicky pulls him in and pushes him into the kitchen and closes the door. She rushes into the living room.
Nick: Who was that at the door...
Vicky: Look Nick, i need you to take Daniel out for a bit...
Nick: Why whats up babes?
Vicky: Ill explain later...
Nick gets up.
Nick: Come on then Dan, ill take you down to the beach for a bit...
Nick and Daniel leave the house. Vicky goes into the kitchen where Kyle is making himself a cofee.
Kyle: Fancy some coffee Vics, im parched...
Vicky: (Laughs in disbelief) I dont believe you... you just turn up out of the blue after ten years!
Kyle: Yeah great ent it?
Vicky: No its not great! The last time we spoke you were dumping me... after us being together for 2 years!...And now you come back as if nothings ever happened
Kyle: Hey, i was young then, what can i say!?
Vicky: So was i! 18 in fact! Have you any idea what its like to have your heart broken at that age...
Kyle: We had our whole lives ahead of us Vics, i didnt want to get tied down...have kids or anything...
Vicky: Yeah well you...
Vicky stopped in her tracks, deciding not to mention Daniel
Kyle: Well i what?
Vicky: Nothing...... (pause) so then why you back around here?
Kyle: Would you believe for you?
Vicky: (Unintrested) Really?
Kyle: Ive had my 10 years of fun...and now i realise what i turned awa...you and me...we were dynamite...and i was wondering if there was any chance...
Vicky: You had it...and you blew it... I've got my life now...my kid and my boyfriend Nick...and i dont intend on changing that for you...
Kyle: They always say you never forget your first love...and i dont intend on forgetting about you and me... im sticking aroiund here vics...cus i know we can make it...maybe not now but in the future...youl come around...
Vicky goes mad at this
Vicky: How dare you suggest what im going to do! I love my boyfriend...hes ten times the man you ever were...
Kyle: You cant deny that we had something...
Vicky: Had! Its in the past where it belongs, now get out! Come on! Leave Baymoore cus theres no way im ever going to fall for that trick again!
Vicky chucks him out of the house, slams the door shut and leans against the wall breathing heavily.
INT: The Singh’s House
Andonis, Kash, Sanjita and Mohammed, are bringing various dishes into the dining room, for dinner. There’s a knock at the front door…
Kash: I guess I’ll be getting that then!
Sanjita: You guessed right! (Laughs)
Kash goes to the front door, Emma is there
Emma: hi, sorry, is Andonis around?
Kash: We’re just starting dinner, so no
Emma: Oh! Sorry, didn’t mean to interrupt, I’ll just get going then….
Kash: yeah. I think you should
Andonis comes to the door, and sees Emma walking down the path. He pushes passed Kash, and calls…
Andonis: Emma! Where you going…?
Emma: home. I didn’t realise you were busy eating….
Andonis: Come in! I’m sure there’s plenty, we always end up making too much, you know how it is…
Emma is completely oblivious to Kash’s obvious disapproval. Instead, she smiles and walks inside. They walk into the dining room…
Andonis: Mohammed, we’re gonna need another plate. Emma, you sit here next to me.
Sanjita: hi….Emma isn’t it?
Emma: Yeah, hi. Sorry to intrude….
Kash: So you should be. A bit of notice wouldn’t go a miss.
Sanjita: (quieter, and obviously embarrassed) Kash. Just….just don’t.
Andonis: (to Emma) Just ignore him. He’s just jealous (smiles)
Kash: Of that tart? Yeah right!
Sanjita: Kash! Don’t be so rude!
Kash: Well we all know its true, aint that right Mohammed?
Mohammed doesn’t reply, just keeps his head down and serves the food. Emma is obviously embarrassed.
Emma: Look…maybe this isn’t the best thing. I should go…
Andonis: No, don’t go babe.
Sanjita: He’s just being awkward. We really want to get to know you…. Kash?
Kash glares at Sanjita, obviously annoyed about how she welcomes Emma. He then glances at Emma, rolls his eyes, and starts to eat his food. Emma looks shocked and awkward, as Sanjita tries to keep conversation.
INT. HARVEY/KAGE HOUSEHOLD
Mandy storms trough the door, Craig following her.
Craig: For Christs sake Mandy stop being a bloody fool!
Mandy: I dont want to talk about this!
Margaret is watching something on the tv, she gets up and sees what the pair are arguing at.
Margaret: Hey Hey whats all the shouting for!?
Craig: Oh do us a favour and bog off!
Mandy: (To Craig) Dont speak to me mother like that!
Craig: I'll speak to her how i damn well please! Ive already warned her to get her snout out!
Mandy: Oh threatening my mother aswell... anything else i should know about!?
Margaret: What's happened Mandy love...
Craig: Unless you wanna eat liqiuidised branflakes trough a straw for the rest of your life i suggust you sod off down the bingo hall!
Margaret puts on her coat.
Margaret: (To Mandy) If you need me love you know where i am.
Mandy: Thanks mom...
Margaret leaves the house.
Craig: Now she's buggered off...we need to talk!
Mandy: Talk!? I dont wanna hear anything that youve got to say...itll all be a pack of lies...you promised me that you were legit....that you did nothing wrong...and you were bull****ting me all along!
Craig: I thought it best that you didnt know all this stuff...
Mandy: Why incase i left you!? Well dya know what Craig...you wanna talk? Lets talk! Because the way im felling im going to be doing just that...
Mandy sits down on a dining room chair, awaiting Craigs response.
JustJodi
19-02-2006, 21:33
Mandy needs to reinforce her back bone where Craig is concerned, I think Mandy should just leave the son of a bi**h,,talking to Craig is like banging your head against a brick wall,, this is another couple I do not understand, why does Craig keep Mandy ??:searchme:
INT. HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE - NIGHT
Mandy: Come on, im waiting for you to speak...
Criag is sitting down on a chair now, his hands covering his head.
Mandy: Well come on!
Craig: How can!? How can i make it sound good!? Youev already made your mind up...that you want out!
Mandy: Well explain it to me!
Craig: Explain what!?
Mandy: Everything! Your life of crime... you! Your whole world! What ever it is youve been trying to steal from me for the past 20 years!
Craig: Your not going to like it...
Mandy:So Bloody what!? Im sick to the backteeth of lies in this marriage! I want it all...down to the last bloody detail!
There is a long silence...
Craig: (laughs to self) Once upon a time...
Mandy thorws a vase at the wall
Mandy: For once in your ****ing life cut the comedy! And be bloody serious!
Craig gets up and lights a cigar, he walks around the dining table, circling Mandy...
Craig: What can i say? Its just what ive always known Mand... since i was a child....dad was just like me...his fingers in every dodgy pie out there... i grew up thinking crime paid...why have a proper decent career when you can break the law and get double the moolah...
Mandy: Because some people actually have morals....they know right from wrong...
Craig: Well I didnt! ... all i knew was what dad practiced...and he was the worst thing since Al Capone! .... "Survival of the fittest" is what he always tought me..."manipulate the world...or it will manipulate you... stand alone..dont fear the law...you be the law..."
Mandy: SO your blaming it on the parents!?...You didnt have to follow in his footsteps...you could have gone straight!?
Craig: I didnt want to...and once i was in...i couldnt get out...a never ending cycle...but i kept adding it to it...it started with little things and got worse... and now...theres nothing i cant say ive done... i could give you a list Mandy... of the people ive hurt, the lives ive ruined...the things ive done...but what would be the point?... You've made your mind up about me...im bad rubbish...take out the trash and move on...
Mandy: Is it any wonder? I expect a loving husband...and i end up with a villain!
Craig: Since when have i ever treated you badly!?
Mandy laughs and gestures towards her split lip
Craig: Apart from that! That was one moment when i lost my rag... ive always kept my buisness away from home... to give you the proper life.... you one you deserved... ive never told you...because why do you need to know? what good will it do?...if you live a happy life without knowing then i didnt see fit...
Mandy: Honesty! The fundamental part of a marraige...besides...why me eh!? Im not the most glamaorus...nor am i the best you could do...why are you still with me instead of some 20 year old gangsters moll!?
Craig: Because i dont want a 20 year old gangsters moll! I want you!
Mandy: You have the strangest way of showing it...
Craig sits down next to Mandy and holds her hands.
Craig: Let me make it up to you, just give me one last chance, and ill try to change...
Mandy: Once a crook always a crook...
Craig: One more chance...thats all im asking of you...and if it doesnt work out...then ill let you walk out of my life and find the hapiness that i cant give you...
Mandy: Okay
Craig smiles and kisses her hand. All Mandy can do is look at her split lip trough the varnished table. Is she making the right choice?
Mandy what are you doing taking Craig back? Brilliant as usual!
mandy mandy mandy, what are you doing girl?
Kash what is your problem with Emma? I bet this has something to do with the attempted rape, he probably thinks she lead him on or something
The Singh’s house…
Andonis walks back into the room- he’s obviously just seen Emma out. Kash, Sanjita and Mohammed are taking plates to the kitchen and clearing the table…
Andonis: Well that was awkward!! What’s up with you? Why can’t you just be happy for me, for a change?
Kash: For a change? (angry) For a change?! If you’d stop messing around with girls, and get on with your education, then maybe I would be!
Andonis: Like Mohammed you mean?
Kash: Yeah. Like Mohammed. Emma’s not the sort of girl you should be with anyway. A blind man could see that!
Andonis: what are you trying to say then?
Kash: Come on, Andonis, you’re not a bird, so use your brain! You and Emma are just…. Wrong. Religiously, and morally wrong!
Andonis: Might have known it would come back down to that…. How much more predictable can you be?
Kash: Well if you’re going to be like THAT, then maybe I wont bother next time. Let you ruin your life, should I? Would that satisfy you? Would THAT make you happy?!
Sanjita: Kash…. Your taking this too far…
Kash: Stay out of this, Sanjita. This is between me and him, nothing to worry your little brain about.
Andonis: trying to get at her now, are we? Why can’t you just accept that this isn’t the old days. There’s nothing wrong with me and Emma being together! And there’s nothing wrong with her being concerned about all this!
Kash: And what would you know? Women and children need to be protected. End of.
Sanjita: Meaning I can’t have an opinion? Meaning I can’t be part of anything?
Kash: Sanjita. What did I say?! Stay out of this!
Sanjita storms into the kitchen with some plates. Kash and Sanjita can still be heard faintly in the background arguing. She leans over the sink and mumbles…
Sanjita: Great…another time when I can’t be involved. What does he think I am…? a slave? This is just… this is getting way to hard to handle. I can’t stick him when he’s like that…any more and I’ll…. Well. What can I do? I'm stuck... completly stuck in this...this so called "life"...
Singh & Son’s convenience store
Vicky is flicking through some magazines, choosing one to buy. Someone puts there hands over her eyes…
Vicky: Nick, you gave me the shock of my life!! I thought you were working late…? (pause) Nick?
A voice whispers into her ear…
Tell me that you love me, and I’ll let go
Vicky: (laughs) you know I love you babe!
The hands go away from her eyes. She turns, her grin turns into shock, when she sees Kyle…
Kyle: I always knew you loved me, babe. No denying that!
Vicky: what the hell did you think you were doing?
Kyle: Just having a laugh…. Like we always did, if I remember right…
Vicky: Whatever…. Move out my way….
Kyle: Aw, but don’t you want to tell me you love me, just one more time?!
Vicky: You know as well as I do, that I thought you were Nick…. So move out my way.
Kyle: So who do you love then?
Vicky: Nick.
Kyle: didn’t you used to say that about me? I remember when you couldn’t stop saying it… in bed on a Sunday morning after we’d…
Vicky: (interrupts) Ancient history. I’m with Nick now, do us all a favour and accept that and leave.
Kyle: I’m not going anywhere. I’ll wait for you. however long it takes. You’ll be back, guaranteed.
Vicky: (smirks) You can dream, love
Kyle: We’ll see about that. Catch you around, babe
Kyle goes to kiss her, and she pulls back…
Kyle: You know you’re gaggin’ for it really, Vicks
Kyle turns, and leaves the shop.
INT. RED RUM PUB - DAY
Vicky walks into the pub, flustered from the events in the store. She takes her coat off and comes behind the bar where Amy is laughing and joking with some punters.
Amy: And then i said to him...what's the point of staying sober in a pub for...(laughs)
Amy walks over to Vicky
Amy: Alright Vics hows it going?
Vicky: (Concerned) Yeah, but Amy...are you alright?
Amy: Im really good thanks...infact never better
Vicky: Well...the other day...
Amy: Forget the other day babes, a moment of weakness...
Vicky: But you were so down, and upset...
Amy: Im fine honestly babes...
Vicky: Are you sure?...it isnt just a facade is it?
Amy: No Vics...i promise you...look...Patrick might have had his affairs...maybe he still does...but im the one he married...im the one he always comes back to... the one he loves...
Vicky: He has funny ways of showing it...
Amy: Its just his nature...the loveable rouge...the man i fell in love with...i cant change the way he is... he'll relaise one day...and itll be me he settles down with... i just need to make him realise how much i love him...and that he wants to spend the rest of his life with me
Vicky: And how are you gonna do that?
Amy: Well our wedding anniversary is coming up soon... ill make him appreciate our marraige...and then we'll see how it goes from there
Amy smiles happily and heads off to serve a customer, Vicky shakes her head in concern
Oh Amy, Amy, Amy, wake up honey!!
JustJodi
21-02-2006, 06:59
<<slapping Amy>> wake up wake up hes playing you as a fool girl !! Men like Patrick do not CHANGE:nono:
JustJodi
21-02-2006, 07:01
Kyle really is HUNG up on himself , and is quite self absorbed !! :wall:
JustJodi
21-02-2006, 07:03
Bryan and Abi this has been a fantastic read, always looking for the next chapters:) i love the stuff,,, red rum pub,, murder pub eh ??
Bryan and Abi this has been a fantastic read, always looking for the next chapters:) i love the stuff,,, red rum pub,, murder pub eh ?? Hey, Jodi, I hadn't thought of that!!!! You could be on to something there!! :hmm:
Excellent job again Abi and Bry... I know it has already been said but Amy, wake up love, smell the other woman's perfume on your man's shirt
bakedbean
21-02-2006, 16:33
Wow This Is Fantastic I Cant Wait To See What Happens Next
Red Rum Pub- Upstairs Flat
Amy is on the sofa, flicking through magazines, while listening to an MP3 player. She sees Patrick go to the door and mouth something. She takes her earphones out….
Amy: huh? What was that?
Patrick: (obviously irritated) I said that I’m going out to do some shopping.
Amy: In torquay?!
Patrick: Yeah…
Amy: Its for me isn’t it?! My pressie? (looks excited) Oh my god, it is aint it?! Come on, what you getting me?!
Patrick: Well its…
Amy jumps up, and puts her finger on his lips, to stop him talking
Amy: No! Wait! Don’t say anything! (smiles) just make sure its got diamonds on it!!
Patrick: Expensive taste, as always!!
Amy: Well what d’ya expect?! Just make sure you’re not late back…
Patrick: I’ll try not, but you know what its like sometimes…
Amy: Patrick…..please, just get back soon….
Patrick: Don’t worry. Be back later, bye babe
Patrick kisses Amy, and leaves. Amy backs up against the door, smiling and excited.
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - NIGHT
Amy walks into the room and places down too plates of food onto a candletight table. Romantic music is playing in the background and scented candles are lit all around the room. She smiles happily.
Amy sits down and looks at her watch, she waits a moment later then gets up her phone and dials Patrick's number.
INTERCUT:
INT. BAYMOORE BEDROOM - NIGHT
Patrick is busy having sex with a Baymoore resident, loud noises can be heard and Patrick's ringtone can only just be heard.
INTERCUT:
INT. RED RUM FLAT - NIGHT
Patricks answerphone message can be heard: "Hi this is Paddy, im not avaible at the moment so leave a message after the beep"
Amy throws the phone on the floor. She then blows the candles out. She sits down to eat her meal but starts crying.
Amy throws the plate at the large photo of her and Patrick's wedding day. The picture falls off the wall and the glass smashes everywhere. She gets down on her knees and starts to weep. The glass in her hands
INT: Torbay GP's- Night
Ryan is in his office. There’s a knock at the door…
Ryan: yeah, who is it?
Hilary: Just little old me..
Ryan stands up, and goes straight over to Hilary, obviously happy….
Hilary: I need a….check up. You think you’ll be able to handle that?
Ryan: Course, its my job. Love to check people up…or out…
Hilary: now, now, now!
Ryan: Little less of the talking?
Hilary: (grins) You know me too well…
They kiss passionately, Ryan begins to unbutton her blouse…. He mumbles…
Ryan: I love you so much…
Hilary: What happened to no talking? Aren’t you a naughty boy!!
They both laugh, flirtatiously…
Hilary: So come on….what d’ya say?
Ryan: that I love you…..
Ryan goes to finish unbuttoning her blouse….Hilary stops him…
Hilary: This isn’t about love. This is sex, nothing more, nothing less. I thought you got that….
Ryan: Course I do….erm… its was a……a moment of weakness….
Hilary: Lets keep it that way…..now where were we?
Ryan undoes her blouse…. The shot zooms out, to reveal the private investigator taking pictures of their silhouettes on the desk in the distance…
bakedbean
21-02-2006, 20:48
Gotcha Hilary has been caught out wonder what she will do if she finds out???
WHAT DOES AMY DO NEXT!? READ AMYS SUICIDAL ACT OF DEPRESSION IN:
DEVON SEAS AFTER HOURS THREAD (FOR 16+ MEMBERS)
INT. SINGHS HOUSE - MORNING
Kash is sitting at the dining table reading his paper, Sanjita is serving up breakfast. Andonis is getting ready for college, Mohammed is studying.
Kash: Mohammed go fetch the post...
Mohammed: Im not a dog dad...
Kash: No but you're my son, so do as your told
Mohammed drags his feet to fetch the post, it is clear he is used to being bossed around.
Mohammed: (To Andonis) And i hope you dont intend to go to college dressed in a tracksuit and trainers...
Andonis: Dad we can wear what we like at college...
Mohammed walks in and hands Kash the post, he opens the mail whilst continuing the conversation.
Mohammed: I dont want you dressed like a "chav", you have to mantain the family reputation (looks at post ) oh what have we here...under acheiveing in maths...and science... and computing...
Andonis: Maybe if you didnt force subjects on me...
Kash: They are for your future...you dont get anywhere in life with a grade in "Media Studies"
Andonis rolls his eyes and stops arguing with him. The door opens..
Kash: Who on earth is that...
Sanjita walks out into the hallway. Standing there is Ruby, the Singh's eldesy daughter. She has a big backpack on her back.
Sanjita: Ruby your home!
Sanjita runs over to Ruby and hugs her. Kash gets up from his seat and heads out to the hallway
Kash: Rubina...finally decided to come back and face some responsiblilty?
Ruby: Welcome back to you to dad...
Andonis and Mohammed go over to Ruby and hug her.
Ruby: Alright dont suffocate me (laughs)
Andonis: How are you sis?
Ruby: Yeah I'm great ta... it's been unbelivable going across the world! Meeting new people, seeing new places...
Kash: Waste of time!...Anyway you've had your fun...now you can go to university and get yourself a career...
Ruby: What like you you mean...owning a grocery store?
Sanjita: (Peacefully) Ruby, don't cheak your father....
Ruby: Yeah well, i've decided im not going to university... i want to have fun...live life to the full
Kash: Fun!? You've been having fun for the past year, at my expense! You will go to university! You will get a career!
Ruby: I'll do what i god damn please dad...im not a little girl no more...im my own person...and i dont have to do what you say anymore...
Kash: Rubina!
Ruby: That's final dad! (To Sanjita) Any brekkie on the go mom?
Ruby and the others head off into the kitchen, Kash is not impressed.
EXT. RED RUM PUB - DAY
Patrick walks towards the pub, a smile on his face and a spring in his step. He sees a group of regulars standing outside the pub door, he looks at his watch.
Chris: Come on Paddy its gone 12, why ent you open?
Patrick: Donno Mate, Amy must have slept in...(to group) ill be open in ten folks..
There is a general displeasment with the crowd. Patrick heads upstairs to the flat.
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Patrick opens the door. The living room is in darkness with the curtains drawn. Patrick swipes the curtains open.
Patrick: What you playing at Amy!? Its gone 12 o clock...
Patrick stops in his tracks as he sees Amy sitting on the sofa, slit wrists and an empty bottle of Vodka. He rushes over to her and grabs the bottle
Patrick: What the hell is all this then!? Turning into a drunk are you!?
Amy: It numbs the pain!
Patrick: What pain is that!? The one in your ****...becuase thats what your being to me at the moment woman!
Amy: You think its all a laugh...cheat on your wife...i wont care will i...im not human am i!? Im void of feelings... as long as you have your fun it doesnt matter about me...what i feel.... what i want and need...
Patrick: What is your probelm exactly!?
Amy: Of all the nights to leave me on my own...it had to be our wedding anniversary!
Patricks shows a sign that he clearly forgot...
Amy: What!? Forget about it did you...!?... Dont worry...im use to that by now... 12 years of marraige... 12 long years... and what a crap 12 years that has been!
Patrick: They are what you make it...
Amy: No theyre what YOU make it!...An absoulute bloody misery!... Living Hell! And thats all done to you!
Amy is in tears, her hair is messed up and dried mascare is all down her face. Patrick grabs her off the sofa, grabs her by the waiste and forcefully drags her into the bedroom.
Amy: Get the hell off me!
Patrick shoves Amy's face near the bedroom mirror.
Patrick: Look at that!... Take a long hard look at yourself... your a state! A bloody ugly wreck! (shouts) Look at you!... And you wonder why i trade you in for another model! Even a blind man would turn their nose up at you!
Amy: I HATE you!
Patrick: (Casually) Good...
Patrick lets go off her, she bursts into tears and runs out of the bedroom and into the bathroom. He smiles and walks down the stairs.
Patrick: (Shouts trough bathroom door) Come on, get yourself together, we've got a pub to run...
CrazyLea
22-02-2006, 21:18
just caught up *phew* lol
brilliant. loving the patrick and amy stuff. silly amy!!! cant believe she did that.
EXT. BAYMOORE PIER - NIGHT
Tanya's high hells make a noise as she walks along the wooden peir. She reaches the end and places her hands on the bars. Next to her is a man with a breficase.
P.I: Tanya?
Tanya: Yeah... so then what have you got for me?
P.I: She's been easy buisness...got loadsa of snaps for you... she's spent a lot of time with Dr Ryan Organo... in a more than professional way if you get my drift.
The Private Investigator hands her some polaroids of Hilary and Ryan in a passionate embrace.
Tanya: Excellent...
P.I: Is That all then?
Tanya: For now...
Tanya hands him an envelope of money, he flick trough it and shakes hands with her.
Tanya: Pleasure doing buisness with you.
The Private Investigator goes away. Tanya looks trough the photographs once more. She smiles to herself
Tanya: I've got you now Hilary, you're going down!
Amy you silly silly woman. Leave him and let him run the pub by himself see how much time he has for women then
Just leave him Amy - enjoy your life without that selfish pig - go transform yourself, get a new bloke and let him run the pub on his own.
JustJodi
23-02-2006, 10:49
Amy amy amy dear.....time to move on,, that jerk is not worth it, he doesn't love u girl , wheres your damn pride !!!!.Hey I thought she cut her wrists ??? I am confused:confused:
good one tanya you caught her now how to approach richard with the evidence ?? Hope she isnt stupid enuff to confront Hilary with her findings first .....But Hilary will probably laff in her face...
I do not like Adonis daddy one iota !!!!
yes she did from script above "Patrick stops in his tracks as he sees Amy sitting on the sofa, slit wrists and an empty bottle of Vodka. He rushes over to her and grabs the bottle"
does Patrick not see this? how stupid is he not to call an ambulance
JustJodi
23-02-2006, 12:03
the uncaring lout shoves her face in the mirror, she is bleeding for crying out loud,, gawdddddddddddd hes blind too and a right *******:angry:
CrazyLea
23-02-2006, 12:06
ooo tanyas got hillary now. she better be careful!
INT. SINGH HOUSE - MORNING
Ruby sneaks down the stairs in her nightey, she leads a man down the stairs who is buttoning up his shirt and holding his shoes in his hands. He almost falls but she catches him, the pair laugh but she sushes him.
Joe: Whats with all the tip toing about?
Ruby: Dad will go ape if he finds out you stayed...
Joe: Daddy's girl are you?
Ruby: Hell no, but i dont want world war 3 starting out...
Joe: Is he that bad?
Ruby: Worse.
Joe almost leaves the house, but Kash appears in the hallway, hands on hips. He coughs, Ruby squints her face.
Kash: And who is this young gentleman, Rubina?
Joe: Rubina? (Laughs)
Kash: What didnt you even get chance to learn her name before you lead her astray...
Joe: Yeah, but its just...
Kash grabs Joe and chucks him out.
Kash: Get out of my house! Go on!
Kash slams the door shut. Ruby walks down to the hallway.
Ruby: Dad that was totally out of order!
Kash: No whats out or order is you offering yourself out to the male population like some common jesabelle!
Ruby: I beg your pardon!?
Kash: Getting yourself drunk on alcahol...the root of all evil...sleeping with the first man you grab your hands on...
Ruby: (Stunned) I dont belive you...
Kash: And i cant believe you either..i will not let my daughter act like a common tart!
Ruby: I'm my own person dad! I'll do what i like!
Ruby heads off back upstairs.
Kash: Rubina! Dont turn your back on me whilst im talking to you! Rubina!
Ruby slams her bedroom door shut. Kash rolls his eyes and returns to the dinner table.
Jenkins Manor
Richard is sitting at the computer in the study. Tanya walks to the door, with a grin on her face…
Tanya: Would you just come out here for a second?
Richard: Can’t it wait; I’m just going through some plans…
Tanya: No. It can’t.
Richard reluctantly follows Tanya to the lounge. She sits on the sofa, he remains standing.
Richard: Well. What is it?
Tanya: You might want to sit down…
Richard: I’ll be fine, what is it? I’ve got work to do…
Tanya: Its about Hilary…
Richard: For gods sake, wont you just let this drop?
Tanya: Hear me out. Everything I’ve been saying is true and…
Richard: Accusations, accusations, accusations! I’ve heard this a million times before
Tanya: But this time I have the proof
Richard: What….?
The front door is heard shut. Tanya grabs something from the coffee table, and stuffs it in her pocket. Hilary comes into the room…
Hilary: Well, what’s this then?
Richard: (sighs) Well apparently Tanya has proof of what she’s been saying….(mumbles) can’t wait to see this then…
Tanya pushes the photos into his chest…
Tanya: there you go. Everything I’ve been saying, its true. And there’s your proof. Take a look. A long hard look, and see what she’s like. She what she’s hiding. She what she really thinks of you.
Tanya looks smugly at Hilary. Hilary grabs the photos, and flicks through them…
Hilary: What the….? how the hell did you get these?!
Tanya: I have my ways. But you know, it took a lot of luck. After all, I wouldn’t have got the proof, if it hadn’t all been true. Hilary: You’ve been Framed.
Hilary looks shocked; she tries to take the photos. Richard grabs them…
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Hilary points her finger at Tanya.
Hilary: You... had NO right taking pictures of me...!
Tanya: I didnt take them though...but i have every right... i need to show my dad what an evil twisted little bitch you really are...
Richard: Tanya!... Can you just leave please!?
Tanya: But dad...theres concrete evidence there to send her packing...
Richard: Tanya! Just leave me to deal with it in my own way!
Tanya picks up her handbag and walks out of the room giving Hilary an smug grin as she leaves. Hilary takes off her coat and approaches Richard...
Hilary: Richard...im really sorry...i dont know what to say... ill pack my bags...
Richard: No you dont have to do that... i said all along... there was no relationship comitments to you living here...your free to do what you like...
Hilary: Yes...but i can see how upset you are... ive made a fool of you...
Richard: No you havent... look Hilary... the only thing i dread is that your going to leave Jenkins Manor...
Hilary: For Ryan? (Laughs) Its a casual fling...nothing major...or serious...
Richard: Maybe not this man...but what about the next one that comes along?...I cant bear to see you with someone else Hilary...
Hilary: Where is this leading Richard?
Richard gets down on one knee and pulls out a ring.
Richard: Hilary...will you marry me?
Hilary is in total shock.
Richard, you are an idiot. she is playing you like a fiddle. cop on mister :angry:
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
Amy is lauging and joking with the punters, Vicky is standing in the distance watching her friend.
Amy: Common Vics, you could at least look like you're enjoying yourself...
Vicky: Its work Amy...
Amy: (Laughs) Yeah i suppose it is... but hey a smile wont go a miss will it?
Vicky: Amy, I'm concerned...
Amy: About what babes?
Vicky: You...
Amy: Me!? Im fine...
Vicky: Your not tough, i mean your wrists and everything...
Amy: Look Vics, whats the point of letting it get to me... i need to accept the man he is and get over it... hes never going to like a snivelling wreck that gives up hope is he?
Vicky: But theres no point keeping it all built up inside Amy... it'll all be worse that way...
Amy: He loved the young and fun loving Amy...and that's what he's going to see... he's not going to get me down anymore... and tomorrow... whilst he buggers off to his tart im going to have a party... a good old girls night in...get everyone to come around...
Vicky: (Weary) Are you sure?
Amy: Yeah its been a long time since we all got together with a bottle of wine and a dvd...
Vicky: Knowing us lot tough we'll need a crate not a bottle!
The pair laugh. Amy looks at Patrick who is serving a female.
Amy: No way am i gonna let him get me down...
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Richard is on his knee propising to a shocked Hilary.
Richard: Well come on...i dont think my knee can stand much more (laughs to self)
Hilary: Oh get up you daft sod...
Hilary walks around the room is disbelif...
Richard: I take it its a no then?
Hilary: What the hell are you asking me to marry you for!? Did you think you'd just skip the dating and romance stage!?
Richard: We've been all there before...
Hilary: (Laughs in disbeleif) 30 years ago! Christ Richard... you cheated on me... we cant just go back to how we were....
Richard: Do you want to?
Hilary: Not partciualry no...the moment i came back here...and again when i moved into the manor... i told you we'd never be an item...
Richard: I know you did but...
Hilary: No Richard! As far as i see it there shouldn't be a but!
Richard: Its just...well I've had it planned for a while... i mean i didnt need Tanyas photos to know you were having an affair...
Hilary: It wasnt an affair! You and me are not an item!
Richard: I know we're not and its tearing me apart! I love you Hilary! I always have done and always will do!
There is an awkward silence. Hilary pours herself a shot of Vodka and downs it in one...
Hilary: The feeling is not the same... and you know that... so why loose your dignity by asking me?
Richard: Becuase i know... you have a buisness head...and as far as i see it, it could work to your benefit...
Hilary: What on earth are you blabbering on about Richard?
Richard: Money... its what you like isnt it... what you want above all else... well i know one thing i do good for and it's just that... if you married me... youd have half of the Taylor Empire when i die... as long as you stayed with me till my dying day...
Hilary: Dont talk daft, your not going to die...
Richard: I will do one day... and sooner rather than later... times getting on Hilary, we're not those young childhood sweethearts anymore...we've seen life...and its drawing to the end, i want to live out my days with you Hilary
Hilary sits down, unable to get her head around things.
Hilary: But Richard... i cant see how any of this benefits you?
Richard: You... are the most important person in my life...always have been...always will be... and you might not feel the same way...but to call you my wife once more...it would just...make my life complete...give it meaning...and over time you never know we could find them old feelings... so come on Hilary...you've got to have some decison surely...what it is?
Hilary looks up and stares him in the face.
INT: Red Rum Pub- day
Patrick is in the upstairs flat, flicking through the newspaper. He picks up his phone, and dials a number, cuts to a woman who picks up her mobile, and walks into the shower room…
Patrick: Hi babes, how you been?
The women’s legs are seen, and a towel drops. Shot stays low, just showing her feet…
Woman: Fine of course, and yourself?
Patrick: Great…would be better for seeing you…what was that noise?
Woman: Just putting you on speaker phone. Caught me just going into the shower. You have a habit of doing that….!
Patrick: What I’d do to be joining you…
The woman is seen go into the shower. Through a transparent glass door, she says to the speaker phone...
Woman: Why don’t ya then? Plenty of room for two, if you get my drift.
Patrick: your onto something there. Amy’s having some pathetic night in with the girls….she’ll never notice. How about that hotel down the coast road? Thick walls, privacy and peace and quiet….perfect
Woman: She’ll be too busy with the dvd’s to care. Then I get you all to myself…..fab. Sounds great, hun.
Patrick: dvd’s?
Woman: huh?
Patrick: Who said they’re having dvd’s?
Woman: Well it’s just the normal kind of thing that girls do, aint it…
Patrick: Since when did you ever think Amy was normal?
Woman: (laughs) well you know…
Patrick: You already knew about it, didn’t ya?
Woman: Course not! Why would i…..?
Patrick: Because she’s invited you. I’m right aren’t I?
Woman: Well i…
Patrick: And you wanted to fool her by going there!
Woman: Where’s this all coming from, babe? One second we’re talking about our little meeting, then you accuse me of all this…
Patrick: Because I can read you lot like a book! Why d’ya think of doing that?
Woman: I dunno… I just thought…
Patrick: Leave it. Just talk about this another time…
Woman: And what about tonight?
The shot goes back to Patrick. He is silent.
Woman: Pat? What about tonight?!
He hangs up.
JustJodi
24-02-2006, 22:10
Patricks little tryst may be falling around his ears..now who is the niked woman in da shower
INT: JENKINS MANOR
Tanya and Nick are in the front room. Tanya is pacing backwards and forwards, looking smug, yet slightly uptight. Nick is on the sofa…
Tanya: I can’t believe today is the day…the day she gets out of my life, and dads, forever! This is too good to be true…
Nick: What makes ya think she’s going anywhere?
Tanya: course she is! Didn’t you see those pictures? There’s no way she can deny any of that, and she’d be thick to even try!
Nick: What she did is her business though. You had no right barging in there and destroying their trusts in each other!
Tanya: She’s the one that’s been lying. She’s the one that did all that crap, not me, so don’t try and get at me cause of it.
Nick: You’re just as much in the wrong as she is. Why did ya have to go and drop her in it? We had it sorted here, we were happy….i was happy. Then you go and destroy it all! D’ya get kicks from this kind of thing?
Tanya: because its about time that everyone saw her for what she really is. She’s not this saint that you all make out she is, so stop trying to make her into it. I did what I did, because Dad deserves to see her for what she really is. Take off his rose tinted glasses and all that. Its about time you did the same.
Nick: I can’t believe you! You get a bloody PI onto her, and then make out she deserved it? She never denied what she was doing, so why did ya have to go and make a big deal out of it?
Tanya: If its not wrong, then why lie about it? Face it, Nick. She dropped herself into it, and deserves everything that’s coming to her.
Nick goes to retaliate, but Richard and Hilary walk into the room holding hands…
Richard: I think we all know that we have to discuss all this…
Tanya: What’s to discuss? She’s got to go, end of it.
Hilary: how wrong you are…
Nick: What?
Richard: Everyone, just calm it…… Look, I’m not going to go around the point, so I’m just going to say it. We’re engaged.
Tanya: (laughs) what?
Hilary: Me and Richard are spending the rest of our lives together. Every moment- together. I’m going to be his wife, Tanya.
Tanya looks mortified, and humiliated. Whereas nick, look ecstatic, and Hilary smug.
Red Rub Upstairs Flat- night
Amy, Val, Claire, Vicky, Natasha, and Mandy are having a night in, in the upstairs flat…
Amy: So I’ve got…..50 first dates, my big fat Greek wedding and love actually…what d’ya wanna watch?
Emma: Not too romanced based then!
Claire: I dunno…. I love a good romantic click flick!
There’s a knock at the door. Amy goes and answers it…
Amy: Sanjita! Omg, you actually got let out?! That’s great news!
Sanjita: Got let out….sneaked out…what’s the difference?!
Natasha: you didn’t?!
Sanjita says nothing, just smiles…
Mandy: omg, she so did!!
Amy: And good on you! Shouldn’t let those so called excuses for men stop us having our fun!
Sanjita: exactly. Hear hear!
Val: Well you know. What would we do without them?!
Amy: We’d have a hell of an easier life, that’s all I know!
Sanjita: I thought you and Patrick were ok……?
Amy: (her eyes welling up) well, so did i….
Amy cries into her hands, the rest of the girls all gather round her, to comfort her. She sits up again…
Amy: Its all a mess. All this time we’ve been together, and he goes and does all this….how can I forgive him for having an affair. another affair. I loved him so much, yet he does all this crap to me time and time again. I can’t handle this any more. Love is meant to be happy and perfect…..its meant to be everything you ever wanted. But what do I get? I get a self obsessed bloke who has affair after affair, time and time again….
Val: (puts her arm around Amy) I didn’t realise it was so bad…
Amy: Well what did you expect? Val, don’t you get it? He’s been having an affair, and lied to me time and time again about it. And you know what….? I don’t know what to do anymore. I really don’t.
Amy cries back into her hands again…
INT: JENKINS MANOR
Tanya is sitting alone on the sofa, staring into space. She’s obviously shocked. Hilary walks in…
Hilary: Just thought I’d tell you. You wont have to call me mum, unless you want to of course… After all, you’re a grown woman, and I don’t want to be seen as old enough to have you….
Tanya: How the hell did you spindle your way into this one?!
Hilary: I did nothing. In fact, you’re the one that pushed me and Richard together. You’re the trigger for our engagement. You and your pathetic little photos. I should really thank you for that, shake your hand or something…. but I was always told not to touch dirt.
Tanya: Your not going to get away with this. I set you up once, I can do it again. You think your going to be his wife? (laughs)yeah right. Happiness only happens in fairytales.
Hilary: but your forgetting. He’s the one that wants to marry me, so theirs no way you can poison him against me. Thanks to you, he’s seen the worse in me, yet he STILL wants to marry me. So as I said, you can’t break us anymore Tanya. The fun and games are over. I’ve won.
Tanya: I’m not thick. I know you wanted this to happen for so long…. You’ve……you’ve set him up haven’t you? Making him marry you…..forcing him!
Hilary: Get a grip, Tanya. Would he really be so happy if I’d have done that?
Tanya: Well i…
Hilary: Just face the facts, Tanya. Richard wants me to be his wife. We WILL be getting married. Half of everything you see around you, will be mine. We’re going to spend the rest of our lives together, no matter what. Nothing will come between us, not even you.
Tanya: You shouldn’t be so self-assured, Hilary. Didn’t anyone ever tell you that you don’t get everything you want?
Hilary: In this case, I do. I’m going to be your step-mum, Tanya….. don’t I get a welcome to the family?!
JustJodi
25-02-2006, 13:30
Ok one of those women in Amys chick party is her husbands bed partner,,sighhh..
Tanya is just too immature.. she needs to grow up and then try to trap Hilary..basically she has only seen the private eye stuff in movies or on Tv she really does not have the maturity to understand the workings of these folks other than taking dirty pictures.. she needs more than dirty pictures to convince Richard.
Hilary also sounds like a 16 yr old who is a play ground bully who has won something from one of her victims,, :searchme:
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
Amy is crying on the sofa, Vicky and Val are supplying her with tissues, everyone else has left.
Val: There you go Amy, blow it all out... as my old mar used to say...
Amy: The way im feeling Val i could blow for england...
Val: Thats a way to get Patrick back...
The three women laugh.
Amy: So much for a girls night in eh? I cant believe im so selfish...
Vicky: Nonscene babes...if you are upset we all want to be there for you...
Amy: Thanks, youre both great, all you girls are...but i want to be on my own now...
Vicky: Ok if your sure?
Amy: Yeah ill be fine...need some time on my own.
Val and Vicky say their goodbyes and leave Amy alone, she starts to cry again.
INT.HOTEL ROOM - NIGHT
Patrick is lying on the bed alone, watching some sport on the tv, he is depressed that hes had to spend the weekend alone. He gets a phone call and he picks it up immediatley.
Patrick: Hi babes, changed your mind then?
Woman: Patrick...i cant believe you... you've really upset her you know...
Patrick: Hey i dont see you complaning...
Woman: It's wrong, she's an emotional wreck...i felt dead guilty...
Patrick: Dont...she deserves it...now come on...get yourslef around here as im bored and horned up beyond beleif...
Woman: Do you know what im sick of doing the running... if you want me then come and get me...ill meet you by the beach later.
The woman puts the phone done. Patrick gets his coat and leaves.
INT. RED RUM - NIGHT
Amy is sitting alone in the dark, the clock is ticking, she sits alone shaking herself on the sofa. Tears slowly rolling down her eyes.
She sends Patrick a text:
Hiya Babes, Missing U, I Need U BK, Luv Amy
EXT. BAYMOORE BEACH - NIGHT
Patrick lies against the wall underneath Valeintos Resturaunt. He gets Amys text and ignores it. He lights a cigarette and blows a puff of smoke out. In the distance a dark shilouette can be seen.
Patrick smirks, and he wolf whistles
Patrick: Hi sexy.. knew you'd not be able to resist me...
We get a shot of her high heels as the camera pans up the back of her.
Natasha: Of course not... you might be hurting her... but im loving every minute of it.
Natahsa and Patrick passionatley kiss and Patrick pushes her against the wall.
Just caught up it's really good!
INT. BOOKIES UPSTAIRS FLAT - NIGHT
Natasha's flat. Patrick and Natashsa are lying together in bed, they are snuggled up in bed together.
Patrick: Talk about the perfect Sunday Morning...
Natahsa: Its great...
Patrick: No It's perfect... we're just so great together its untrue... a good pair...
Natahsa: Yeah...but i still cant help feeling guilty at times...
Patrick: Dont... its harmless fun...
Natasha: Harmless? I saw her last night...in tears! It wasnt harmles...
Patrick: In this world babes you have to look out for number one, and no one else... im having fun...your having fun...thats all that matters...
JustJodi
26-02-2006, 14:31
What a selfish ba*******d.. gawd I hate him:angry: :angry: , and I hope Natasha has a fit of guilts so bad she spills the beans on Patrick.
BACHELORS HOUSE- Day
Claire is flicking through channels on the TV, Chris comes downstairs, wearing just a towel, having come out of the shower…
Chris: Hey Claire, how you doing?
Claire: Good thanks, you?
Chris: Great. Met a fab girl last night. Long blonde hair, blue eyes….just pure sexiness, you know the type. Anyway, one thing lead to another…she’s upstairs if you wondering.
Claire: I wasn’t
Chris: You know what? She’s the best girl I’ve met in a long time. Great looks, great brains, great…
Claire: I don’t really want to know, Chris, I just wanted to say…
Chris: Why’s that? Jealous are we?
Claire: Cause I’m not jealous. I just don’t want to know all the details about your sex life!
Chris sits on the edge of the sofa, right next to Claire. She shuffles to the side..
Chris: you are, aren’t you? you’re jealous of her!
Claire: Don’t be so stupid. She’s welcome to you.
Chris: but you can’t deny all this. This tension between us. Come on, I know as well as you do that we have feelings for each other. Why put yourself through all this, when you’re so obviously obsessed with me…
Claire: What are you on about? Still drunk from last night, or something? Since when has there ever been feelings between us?
Chris: For a long time. Come on Claire, don deny it! You’re only going to hurt yourself, so why don’t we just let our feelings do the talking…
Chris goes to kiss Claire. She pulls away, and stands up, disgusted.
Claire: what was that for? Come on Chris, there’s nothing like that between us!
Chris goes to kiss her again
Claire: There’s no way this is going to happen! I’m not going to suddenly fall in love with you. I don’t want to date you, got that? Not a hope in hell! I just came here to say…
Chris: you know your gagging for it…
Claire: stop this! I’m with Romeo, and i….
Chris: He doesn’t have to know.
Claire: what?
Chris: I’m not making you split from him. No ones stopping you seeing me as well though (whispers) I wont tell him if you don’t
Claire: no… I just….Chris, i….
Chris: It’s a shock, I know. But we’re good together.
Claire: I just…can’t….I’m going to Italy, Chris.
Chris: what?!
Claire: just for a bit… to clear my head. I don’t know how long I’ll be gone… I just wanted to tell you, and say goodbye…
INT. Ryan's Flat - NIGHT
Dr Ryan organos luxury flat overlooking Torquey harbour. He is siiting on his leather sofa watch football. There is a knock on the door, he goes to answer it and standing there is Hilary.
Ryan: Hilary...i...i wasnt expecting you tonight...
Hilary walks insdie
Hilary: (observes untidyness) Evidentally...
Ryan: But its great that you've come...you know me never say no to a...
Hilary: I havent come for sex Ryan...
Ryan: Oh... what do you want to talk then or something?
Hilary: I'll be blunt with you... its over....you and me finito...
Ryan is shocked, he sits down on the sofa devastated at the news...
Ryan: Well...is there a reason why?
Hilary: Im marrying Richard...
Ryan: Marrying him!? But you dont even love him!?
Hilary: Its too good an oppurtunity to waste...and im not going to spoil it by having a quick meaningless fumble with you...
Ryan: It wasnt meaningles to me...
Hilary: Well thats where you and me differ Ryan...all it ever was sex... there wasnt nothing more than that as far as i saw it...
Ryan: You used me!?
Hilary: See it like that if you like... but you had no complaints at the time...
Ryan: You'll never have that spark...that passion...with him...
Hilary: Its not about sex or love with Richard...its money...and im not going to waste away a vineyard in France for a hump with you..
Ryan is speechless. Hilary sits next to him and strokes his face.
Hilary: Look it was good whilst it lasted...were we a good pair... as far as i see it someone like you could be useful on my side... we can do each other favours in the future...
She lightly kisses him on the lips and leaves the flat, and a devastated Ryan alone.
JustJodi
26-02-2006, 19:40
Just cause I can not stand Hilary.. I do hope that Tanya and Ryan join forces and take Hilary down..
Glad Claire is taking off to Italy, things were getting just a tad bit too uncomfortable with Chris ...
Baymoore beach- day
Val and Amy are sitting on a bench, looking out to sea. They’re both gazing out to sea, while talking to each other..
Amy: This is great isn’t it. Just to be able to sit here and chat, and look out at all this..
Val: What I’d do to be sitting in Spain somewhere doing it though…. On the beach, all the booze, all the fags, all the men…..perfect…
Amy: God yeah! It so bloody cold here! Feels like I haven’t seen the sun in ages. Look at me skin, white as a ghost! Imagine being able to just go top up your tan on the beach tomorrow…
Val: Claire’s got it best, aint she
Amy: What you mean?
Val: She’s off to Italy for a while. It’s a bit out of the blue, but I wouldn’t complain if she invited me!
Amy: On her own?
Val: Don’t know. I heard it over the bar, so I don’t know many details…
Amy: I used to do all that with Patrick. Once, we went to Cannes. We went to the port, and he’d booked a boat. We spent the sunset on our own boat, looking out to the sun and the coast. God, it was so nice…
Val: He really did that?! Doesn’t seem the type.
Amy: he was once. Don’t know about now… (pauses) Maybe that’s what I should do. Take him on a holiday.
Val: No offence, but why?
Amy: Well this place, its just when we’re around here, we always have distractions. We can never be together, because something pulls us apart….work and stuff, you know. Maybe if I took him on holiday we could….rekindle things. Spend time together…
Val: Well you could. But when you get back, nothing might not have changed. It could go back to how it is now, just like that.
Amy: not if I make him fall in love with me again. It could go back to how things used to be… the old Patrick. (turns to Val) You know what? I’m gonna do it. I’m gonna win him back.
Ok caught up on everything. Hilary must be in her element, she is getting what she wants. amy, still a very very silly women if she thinks she can change patrick. And Chris.. bad boy romeo is going to kill you when he knows what you have been trying
You whats even more scary though Siobhan - it almost looks like Claire is starting to falter, what with the, but I can't line...good jobs shes going away for a bit if you ask me.
EXT: Bachelors house
Claire is lifting her bags into the boot of a mini cab. She gets into the cab, and starts to put her belt on. Chris comes out of the house, and knocks frantically on the windows. She winds it down…
Chris: Claire, you don’t have to do this. You don’t have to go. Please, Claire.
Claire: But what about that girl inside?! Come on Chris, no amount of persuading is going to stop me. I’m going and that’s the end of it. You can either let me go right now, or drag it out, and make me hate you even more. Your choice.
Chris: We just need to talk this over. We can sort this, just come back into the house…
Claire gets out of the cab, closes the door and leans against it…
Claire: stop all this. We don’t have anything to talk about, and frankly, I wouldn’t want to if we did.
Chris: why did you get out of the cab then?!
Claire: because unlike some, I don’t want all sorts of people knowing my private business.
Chris moves closer to Claire, and puts his hands on her hips…
Chris: We’d be good together, babe. Give us a chance, yeah? All we need to do is talk about this.
Claire wriggles away from Chris, making him let go of her hips. She opens the door to the cab…
Claire: I’m going, and nothings going to stop me. Not you, not anyone. And while I’m gone, just forget the whole “you and me” thing. We’re not going to be together. And ever. When I get back, this will all be over, and we’ll just be mates.
Claire gets back into the cab, and turns to Chris through the open window…
Claire: If you ever liked me, then just do that one thing for me (turns to the front again) ok, I’m ready to go now.
Claire’s cab leaves, leaving Chris standing in the road, alone.
INT: Red Rum Pub
Patrick is leaning on the bar, talking to Natasha…
Patrick: Hey babe, how you feeling today?
Natasha: (trying to look relaxed) Great thanks, Patrick. Met a bloke the other day…he’d gorgeous…
Patrick: Oh is he now?! Well you know, what’s a great man without a fabulous woman?!
Natasha: Nothing (laughs)
Patrick: Got any plans for tonight?
Natasha: thought I might get dressed up, get out that lingerie from Christmas, and see what….or rather who….might come my way, if you get my drift…. And yourself?
Patrick: Might go see this cheap tart I’ve been seeing……(laughs and winks)
Natasha: Cheeky sod!
Amy comes behind him. Natasha automatically turns the other way guiltily. She grabs him on the shoulder, and turns him around
Patrick: Amy! you scared the life out of me babes!
Amy: Your bags are packed.
Patrick: What?
Amy: you heard me. I’ve packed your bags for you.
Natasha turns, they both have shocked expressions on their faces.
Patrick: This isn’t how it seems…. I thought we were cool babe!….youi can’t just chuck me out on the streets!
Amy: What the hell you on about?! Anyway, as I said. Your bags are packed and ready to go.
Patrick: I’m not going anywhere Amy. You can’t do this to me!
Amy: Well that’s the first time you’ve refused a holiday!
Patrick: What?!
Amy: We’re going on holiday babes. Back to Spain, for a fortnight- I even managed to get the same hotel that we met in! We leave tomorrow, aint that great, Patrick?!
Patrick: Yeah, that’s great…
Amy: So as I said. I’ve packed your bags.
Patrick and Natasha give each other a longing and knowing look. Patrick gives Amy a kiss, Amy then leaves the bar area, and walks out of the pub all together. Patrick gestures to Natasha to the door that leads to the upstairs flat.
Patrick: 2 weeks from tomorrow…. We should make use of the time we have left (winks at Natasha)
Natasha: I thought she knew about us for a second there!
Patrick: She'd never do that. Way too thick. Anyway, we've not got much time left.....(once again, he gestures to the door)
Natasha: (whispers) You go now, 5 minutes and i'll follow :cool: :wub:
Patrick goes to the upstairs flat, with a smile on his face, leaving Natasha disheartened, yet excited.
Amy is insane if she think patrick will change. And Chris, leave claire alone. where did the obsession come from?
INT. VALENTINO'S RESTUARAUNT - DAY
Natasha is laying out tables for dinnertime. Vicky follows her around havign a friendly chat
Vicky: So common Tash, dont you thinks its about time you let the girls in on who your mystery man is?
Natasha: I dont think i want to...i could ruin it...ya know?
Vicky: Come on, alls fair... we and Nick announced our love to everyone...
Natahsa: Yeah but your meant to be...
Vicky: Yeah, but whos to say you two arent?
Natasha: A minor complication... his other half, what if he wont leave his wife for me?
Vicky: And what if he does... you need to keep positive babes...its all you can do...
Natahsa: Yeah i suppose so...
Rebecca walks in from the kitchen.
Rebecca: Only since Romeo left we havent been able to find a chef that's good enough... and come on Natasha, havent you got tables to be laying rather than chatting away to Victoria?
Natasha: Yeah Mrs C
Natasha continues to lay tables. Vicky and Rebecca head over to the other side of the room.
Vicky: You shouldnt be so hard on her...
Rebecca: I need to keep discipline in the ranks Victoria, otherwise she'll walk all over me... and thats one thing i will never let happen...
The door opens and in walks Kyle, Rebecca is shocked to see him here.
Kyle: Alright ladies, wondered if i could have a quick word with Vicky?
Rebecca: (angered) What the hell are you doing here!?
Kyle: Alright Becca, still the old cow i always knew...
Rebecca charges towards Kyle, and throws him out of the shop.
Rebecca: Get out of here! Go on! And dont you start bothering Victoria again... she's coped well enough without you!
Kyle: But...
Rebecca: Out!
Rebecca returns to Vicky with an angered look on her face.
Natasha: Bloomin heck what was all that about eh!?
Rebecca: Oh go on! Get out...have the afternoon off! I need to talk to my daughter.
Natasha quickly hurries out of the restaraunt, pleased at the day off.
Rebecca: Did you know he was back!?
Vicky: Mom...
Rebecca: Did you!?
Vicky: Yes
Rebecca: Then it looks like we have a problem on are hands then!
EXT. BAYMOORE BEACH - DAY
Kyle is leaving Valentinos and heading down the beach, Natasha runs after him calling him.
Natahsa: Hey mate! Oi! You!
Kyle stops and turns around
Kyle: You talking to me?
Natasha stops and catches her breath
Natasha: Yeah (holds hand out) Natasha Jones... i work up at Valentinos...
Kyle: (shakes hand) Enjoy the floor show?
Natasha: No of course not, Rebecca does my head in... and she has no right arguing with a bloke... especially one as good looking as you
Kyle: Anyone would think you were coming on to me...
Natasha: Maybe i am...
Kyle: Oh you are are you?
Natasha: Got a problem with that?
Kyle: No... quite flattering really...
Natasha: Sounded like you knew Vicky...
Kyle: Yeah we go way back...
Natahsa: Kule...fancy talking about it over a drink?
Kyle: Yeah sure why not...
Natasha smiles and the pair head towards the Red Rum.
INT. VALENTINOS RESTAURAUNT - DAY
Rebecca sits down next to Vicky holding cups of coffee.
Rebecca: So when did he first show up then?
Vicky: The weekend...
Rebecca: And you didnt think to tell me?
Vicky: Because i know exactly what your like... you just showed it... you'd have caused more trouble than its worth...
Rebecca: I'd have ensured he was out of your life for good...
Vicky: I dont need this aggro mom... he'll go soon enough, he knows theres nothing here for him...
Rebecca: I take it you havent told him then...?
Vicky: No...and im not going to...Daniel doesnt need to know who his father is... its best that way... i dont want Kyle... close...
Rebecca: Why? Scared you wont be able to trust yourself?
Vicky: How do you mean...?
Rebecca: You and Kyle...you were also so...right for each other in way... a good pairing...you bounced off each other...and were so passionate... you can tell me all thats gone away?
Vicky: He left me on my own and broke my heart mom!
Rebecca: And just your remember that... Nick's a good man... and his family are close friends of mine... i dont want you ruining it just becuase you want to rediscover your first love...
Vicky: That's not going to happen mom...
Rebecca: Good...and make sure it stays that way.
me thinks that Tasha is going to tell Kyle about Daniel..
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
Natasha and Kyle are sitting in one of the booths with a drink.
Natahsa: So you use to live around here?
Kyle: Yeah... went around the world tough...went to live a little... Asia...America...
Natasha: And you've ended back up here? (Laughs)
Kyle: I've come back for Vicky tough...
Natasha: Minor complication... her new boyfriend... and shes madly in love with him...
Kyle: Yeah well...she's gonna fall me again....just a matter of time...
Natasha: Im in the same boat (looks over at Patrick)... need to show someone...so if ya want someone to bide ya time with... have a bit of fun with you know... then im here for the taking
Natasha starts to rub her foot up Kyles leg under the table.
Kyle: Fancy showing me your flat?
Natahsa: Yeah sure...
The pair get up to leave. Patrick stares at over at them. Amy puts her arm on his shoulder, he turns around
Amy: Come on...its time to go hun... for a couple of weeks in the sun!
Patrick relectuanlty picks up his bags and the pair head out to the cab. The cab drives off and in the background he can see Natasha and Kyle snogging.
Patrick is concerned, but Amy grabs hold of him as the cab drives off to the airport...
natasha's right to have some fun with kyle, he seems to be a bad egg but an improvement on patrick.
INT. BAYMOORE STREETS - MORNING
Val and James are walking from the shops, Val is walkng the family dog: Billy.
Val: Bloomin heck James.. have a look at that...
Builders are boarding up the bookies, next down to Val's old salon, and putting up a for sale sign.
Val: The curse of Baymoore eh?
James: This rate its going to turn into a shanti town...
Val: Wouldnt suprise me if the Taylors snapped it up...
James: They own the rest of Baymoore so it wouldn't suprise me.
The postman walks past, Val calls him back.
Val: (To Postman) Hey Ted, got any mail for us?
Ted Just the one...
The postman hands Val a letter, and she opens it...
James: What is it Val?
Val hands him the letter
James: Final reminder... 2 grand!?
Val: I donno hun... when is it all gonna end?
Val has a tired look on her face.
EXT. NATASHA'S FLAT - MORNING
Vicky is waving Daniel off, as he gets on the bus.
Vicky: See you later son
Daniel: Bye mom
The bus pulls off. Vicky can see Natasha and Kyle snogging on her doorstep. Natasha goes back in doors and Kyle heads over to Vicky.
Kyle: Morning sexy...
Vicky: Dont call me that...
Kyle: Well it's the truth... and getting more and more so by the day...
Vicky: What you doing kissing Natasha?
Kyle: Oh havent you heard... me and her... were a kind of an item now... just casual you know...
Vicky: Do you even like her!?
Kyle: Of course, why would i be seeing her otherwise?
Vicky: I know your state of mind at the moment... and its not fair to use her as a weapon to make me jealousy, its not fair on her...
Kyle: Someone sounds jealous...
Vicky: Oh Natasha!? No!... I dont want to get back with you!
Kyle: You will do...
Vicky: (Laughs in disbelief) I cant see how you can be so... crude...
Kyle: I want you... and im gonna have you... im your first love... that will never go away....
Vicky: It did! The day you broke my heart years ago! Now just leave Natasha alone... better still Leave Baymoore!
Vicky heads off to the Red Rum, Kyle wolf whistles as a joke.
Jenkins Manor- Night
Nick and Richard are in the office. Richard is putting some papers back into folders, while they talk…
Richard: so how’s Vicky?
Nick: She’s great. We’re great too, actually. Look, I wanted to talk to you about this…
Richard: (looks up) About what?
Nick: Me and Vicky are great… I just wanted to tell you that I want to spend more time with her.
Richard: And?
Nick: And I’m gonna advertise for a holiday park manager; to ease the load, you know? Everything’s to great with Vicky, I don’t want work to mess it all up.
Richard: ok. Well as long as you organise everything, then I’m sure that will be fine. I know how you feel about her, I don’t blame ya for wanting to be with her more. Hope everything works out for you.
Nick: Thanks Dad. I knew you’d understand.
Richard looks to the door. He sees it moves slightly…
Richard: What’s that…?
He goes to the door, and pulls it back, to reveal Hilary standing there.
Richard: Hilary? What you doing up here….?
Hilary: Nothing much, darling. Just wondered if you wanted a coffee, but I saw you were busy, so being the fool I am, I thought you wouldn’t want one. Of course you would though!
Richard: (grins) You know me too well.
Richard turns back into the office. The show follows Hilary, who walks round the hallway, and gets her phone out her pocket.
Hilary: (on the phone) Hey its me again… yeah, I think I’ve found you a position…. Not that kind of position, you know what i mean!....Well its the one chance your probably going to get to come get in his little empire for a while… Holiday Park manager…
She sees Richard come out of the office, so turns and walks the other way
Hilary: (on the phone) look I’ve got to go….i’ll ring you with the details later…..bye darling.
who is the mystery man on the phone Hilary is chatting too :hmm::hmm:
JustJodi
03-03-2006, 10:59
Hmm that is what I was thinking,, maybe it was some one she has been attached to for some time before going back to Baymoore ?? Her partner in crime to get Richards moola,, orrrrrrrrrrrr it might be Richards SON that Hilary had with him ????that he doesnt know about ??? nah,,, my imagination is taking a gallop LOL
INT. VALENTINOS RESTAURAUNT- DAY
Vicky and Rebecca are talking.
Rebecca: So then... how are you and young Nick doing?...Still ok?
Vicky: Yeah we're fine... why you..?... oh you dont think?
Rebecca: I dont know what to think Vicky...you've made mistakes in the past...
Vicky: In the past mom, i know that Nick's my rock... im lucky to have found him...and im not going to let him go... not for no one...especially Kyle!
Rebecca: I'm glad to hear it.
Kyle and Natahsa are outside. They snog, and then Kyle hugs her, staring inside and winking at Vicky. Vicky is in disbelief. Natasha walks in all happy.
Natasha: Morning Vics... Mrs C...
Rebecca mutters a greeting under her breath and heads into the kitchen. Natasha takes off her coat and scarf.
Natasha: It sure half ent nippy out there... good job i only work over the road... blooming snow... mind you at least i had Kyle to keep me warm last night! (giggles)
Vicky: Yeah well dont get too attached to him...
Natasha: Why thinking of running off back to him are you?
Vicky: No... but i know what he's like...once he gets bored of you, he'll leave you and break your heart... trust me...im speaking from experience. ...
Natasha: Get a grip for christs sake... that was ten bloody years ago! He's grown up...he's a changed man...
Vicky: And how would you know!? You wasnt there when he left me... on my own at 18!
Natasha: Save the sob story Vics i dont wanna hear it! People change... Kyle has changed.... now let us be happy...
Vicky: Im only looking out for your hapiness Tash, and being with them isnt going to make you that...
Natasha: Just becuase you want him for your self! You cant have 2 men at once!
Vicky slaps her around the face. Natasha points her finger at Vicky.
Natasha: You...keep you nose out of my buisnes...and your hands off my man... or i'll claw your eyes in infront of the whole of the village! Do you get me!?
Vicky nervously nods and Natasha walks off.
Jenkins Manor
Richard and Nick the office. They’re both looking at pieces of paper. A tall, thin woman is seen leave the room…
Nick: Definitely not. She’s not working with us. End of.
Richard: You know, I’m not so sure. She could be an asset to us…
Nick: Dad, just don’t. That’s just….wrong.
Richard: (laughs) What is?!
Nick: Mental Images, Dad. And I really don’t want to go there again. She’s not working for us, that’s the end of it!
Richard: What d’ya take me for? I’m engaged, remember?!
Nick: Yeah, whatever (laughs)
Nick crosses a name off the list, and the door opens, and Gregg Bryant walks in. Richard and Nick both stand.
Richard: Gregg. Good to see you. Long time no see, as they say.
Richard and Nick both shake hands with Gregg, and they all sit down
Gregg: Hi. I’m here about the holiday park manager job…. But you knew that didn’t you… ok, that wasn’t the best start…
Nick: don’t worry about it, nerves get to the bets of us. So why do you want this position?
Richard: There’s no need to worry about all the paperwork, Nick!
Nick: What d’ya mean?
Richard: you’ve seen his CV. He’ll be great for the job. I must say Gregg, you’ve been hard working since we last met. All these qualifications! Anyway Nick we know him, and can trust him. Why bother with the interview?
Nick: Well even so I think we should….
Gregg: Richard, you don’t have to give me special treatment just because we know each other. Alls fair you know.
Richard: Of course I’m not. You’re what we’ve been looking for, why waste time with minor details like interviews. So if we’re in agreement…. (looks to Nick)
Nick: (Resistantly) Ok Dad, I agree.
Richard: Gregg, we’d like to offer you the job in the holiday park.
Baymoore Park
Vicky and Daniel are in the park. Daniel runs over to the swings, and Vicky goes to push him…
Daniel: I’m not a baby, Mum. I can push myself now! Watch…
Daniel swings on the swings, Vicky sits on the bench and watches
Vicky: you’ll always be my baby boy!! :p
Daniel: Ew, Mum!!
Kyle is kicking a football through the park. He spots Vicky in the playground, and goes in…
Kyle: Hey sexy
Vicky: What did I say about that?! Just don’t, ok.
Kyle: (sits down next to her) Playing mumsie I see…
Vicky: Well, he is my son
Kyle: Its strange aint it…. I never thought of you as a mum….
Vicky: Meaning…?
Kyle: Relax! All I meant was that I never thought you’d be a good mum. Must have been wrong.
Vicky: Well I`ve tried to do whats right by him….but sometimes its hard…
Kyle: Don’t blame ya. Believe it or not i’ve always wanted to be a dad…
Vicky: really?!
Kyle: Yeah. I’d love to be able to come down here, kick a ball around with him, and you know, just do the dad thing…
Vicky: And if it’s a girl?!
Kyle: Well you know, she could be a tom boy….! It just… I wish I’d had kids. Not many, just a few, maybe just one even…
Vicky: Well i…. you know…
Kyle: Come on Vicks, don’t feel sorry for me. I’m sure it’ll happen one day…
Vicky tries to say something back, but can’t find the words. Daniel jumps off the swing….
Vicky: Daniel! Are you ok?! (runs over to him)
Daniel: Well duh, course I am. (spots Kyle and his football) Nice ball! Mum, get me one!
Kyle: here, have this one (hands Kyle the ball)
Vicky: kyle, you don’t have to…
Daniel: (interrupts) thanks!!
Daniel runs out of the playground and starts kicking it about….
Vicky: I should go after him… thanks Kyle, and you know…. Hope you find what your looking for….you know, with kids and everything….. so, erm, yeah….bye
Kyle: Cheers. See ya around sexy (winks at Vicky)
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
Vicky has just finished serving a punter. Nick walks in and comes to the bar.
Vicky: Hi babes, how are you?
Nick: Yeah im good thanks... look i just popped down to tell your invited for a meal tonight up the manor...
Vicky: Oh I cant babes... me and Claire are stuck here until closing...was it anything important?
Nick: No he just wants to show off the new holiday park manager... which my add i hired so i can spend more time with you...
Vicky: (Sarcastic) Awww bless you...
Nick: Oi you!... So then what did you do this morning... or did you just spend it in bed? :p
Vicky: No... I took Daniel to the park actually...
Nick: Have fun?
Vicky: No not really... Kyle was there...
Nick: Oh for god sake, is that man ever going to stop intervering...
Vicky: He made me feel dead guilty tough, he was on about always wanting kids...
Natasha walks by from the toilets, but eeavesdrops, she stands still and continues listening.
Nick: You know Vics... maybe you should tell him...
Vicky: Why? He left be alone... pregnant! He doesnt deserve to be a dad...
Nick: He never knew tough did he?
Vicky: Even so Nick! Whats he done to deserve a child!?
Nick: Its about rights not what hes done to deserve them...
Vicky: No way Nick, no one except me you and mom know... and thats how i want it to stay.
Natasha walks off with a huge grin on her face: she has the upper hand.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Everyone is seated at the dinner table waiting for Gregg to arrive.
Tanya: I dont know dad, you dont half go over the top... all this faff for a manager?
Richard: You know me Tanya...those who i take in to work for me... i consider them part of the family... plus we go back years...
Tanya: Do i know him...
Richard: Oh yes...you certainly do...
Nick gives Richard and evil glare
Nick: (Under breath) Dont you think you should tell her!?
Tanya: Tell me what?... Who is it dad!?... dad!?
There is a knock at the door, Richard goes to get it.
Tanya: Nick...who is it!?
Richard walks into the room...
Richard: Everyone i would like you to meet Gregg...
Gregg steps into the room, Tanya looks up.
Richard: Gregg Bryant... the new Holiday Park manager
Tanya has a look of horror on her face.
Tanya: (Faint) How could you Dad?
Tanya nervously gets up and runs out of the house. Gary following behind her.
Hilary: Great... right then... is it time for tea!?
EXT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Tanya runs out towards the swimming pool, breathing heavily. Gary follows her down there.
Gary: Tanya! Tanya!
Gary approaches Tanya who refuses to stare him in the face.
Gary: Tanya babes, are you ok?
Tanya: Just leave me alone Gary...I'll be fine in a minute...
Gary touches her but she pulls away.
Gary: Tanya? What is the score? Who is that Gregg bloke?
Tanya: He's no one... just forget it..
Gary: He must be someone if he's got you into this state... its not often you cry so something must be up...
Tanya: Okay! Do you really want to know?
Gary: Well yeah it would be nice, instead of being kept in the dark...
Tanya turns around rubbing the tears from her eyes.
Tanya: He was my fiance!
Gary is speechless.
Tanya: Let me guess... you wasnt expecting that?... well I wasnt expecting him to turn up again!
Gary: You Fiance...?
Tanya: Yes...
Tanya sits down on one of the luxury deckchairs. Gary sits down on one facing her.
Gary: I always thought that we were... like i was your...
Tanya: We never got married...it never got that far...
Gary: But..but...why did you never mention him? Not even once in passing?
Tanya: Becuase he wasnt that important...
Gary: (Laughs in disbeleif) You were going to marry him... that makes him pretty important!
Tanya: I was young and foolish then! Christ Gary at 18 how was i to know what love was? I thought he was the one... but he wasnt...i realised that the marraige suited Dad better than it did me... rich marries rich... and a buisness deal...
Gary: Did you love him... as much as me?
Tanya: i didnt love him... i could barely stick the man...
Gary: So what did you do then?
Tanya: I jilted him... left him at the alter...packed my bags and went travelling... i never saw him again... and didnt think i ever would... christ why has dad given him that job!?.... and why's he back here... after all this time!?
Gary hugs Tanya. The camera cuts to Hilary looking down from Jenkisn Manor at the pair, she smiles will delight at seeing Tanya upset.
Hilary: (To Self)... Stage 1 completed...
EXT. BAYMOORE STREETS - MORNING
Kash and Sanjita are walking of their house to the shop.
Kash: I really feel that this Emma noncesnce should be stopped...
Sanjita: Just let them be Kash, theyre doing no body any harm...
Kash: It is affecting Andonis's grades! And a boy without grades is no use to anyone... especially me...
Sanjita: Oh come on Kash, dont pretend you were any different at your age...
Kash: I was most certainly not! I was taking oiver the family buisness which Andonis should ideally be doing!
They pass the bookies and Val's salon that are boared up.
Sanjita: Hey look Kash, theyve sold them both...
The pair look at a poster on the board advertising a new nightclub called Marbal.
Kash: A new nighclub... thats all we need... a place for sex, drugs and drunken behaviour! We need some discipline in this town!
Kash walks off, Sanjita bites her lip then follows him.
Torquey Luxery Apartments
Kyle comes into the bedroom holding a tray of food….
Kyle: You awake babes?
Natasha: Yeah…
Kyle: I brought you some food up, I found some post on the mat as well.
Kyle gives Natasha the tray, and gets into bed next to her. She opens the mail. Natasha pushes the tray to the side, and sits up in shock.
Kyle: Natasha? What’s up?
Natasha does say anything, but frantically flicks through the letter…
Kyle: Natasha?!
Natasha: Oh my god…
Kyle: What’s happened?!
Natasha: I’ve got 2 weeks to get out of the flat. They’re moving new tenants in, they done think I’m reliable enough on the payments…
Kyle: Don’t worry babes, I’m sure you’ll sort something out soon.
Natasha:It not that easy to find places around here you know!! But... i could always move in here....
Kyle: What?!
Natasha: Into your apartment. We could move into here, with you…
Kyle: no, no, no, that wont work….
Natasha: Why not?!
Kyle: Because I’m not sticking around this dump! I’m just passing thorugh as it were. This is great what we’ve got going on here, but its not gonna last forever…
Natasha: Your not gonna stay around?!
Kyle: That’s what I said
Natasha pauses and looks down. She then looks back to him…
Natasha: Not even for you son?
JustJodi
06-03-2006, 06:19
Oooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh Nat hit below the belt .."Not even for your son " Kyle is gonna have a hissy fit.
that natasha one's some b****. she deserves patrick.
duh duh duh!!! wonder what Kyle reaction will be or more to the point, Vicky is going to kill tasha
Torquay Luxury Apartments
Kyle and Natasha are still in bed, Kyle is sitting upwards look to Natasha, whilst she is staring downwards, avoiding eye contact…
Kyle: What do you mean “not even for your son”?
Natasha: You heard me…
Kyle: don’t be stupid Natasha, I haven’t got a son.
Natasha: (looks up) Sure about that?
Kyle: What the…. look, Natasha, I don’t know what’s got into you. I haven’t got a son, you know that. I have nothing to keep me here…
Natasha: Daniel.
Kyle: What about him…?
Natasha: Come on Kyle, your brain aint the size of a pea, so use it!
Kyle: Don’t be so stupid Natasha… he can’t be…. (shakes his head) No, Vicky would have told me if he was…
Natasha: Work out the dates then. When was he born? And 9 months before that was….?
Kyle: (pauses and looks away) when me and Vicky were together…
Natasha: And hey-presto, along comes a little bundle of joy, as they say.
Kyle: Nah, its just coincidence. Vicky would have told me.
Natasha: You sure about that? Come on, face it Kyle, you’re a dad.
Kyle: but i…… its just….. but we were so careful…
Natasha: Well obviously not careful enough. So are you still insisting you have nothing to stay around here for…?
EXT: Red Rum Pub
Patrick and Amy pull up in a cab outside the pub. Patrick gets out of the car, and opens Amy's door for her. She gets out, and they kiss, before she goes to the boot to get the bags out...
Patrick: no, babes, you just relax. I'll get them...
Amy: Such the gentleman, aren't we?!
Patrick: I have my moments....:D
He takes the bags to the door, then goes to go in...
Patrick: No. Wait. This is wrong. (puts the bags down, and picks Amy up) We might not have got married again, but we're close. And i want to do things proper from now on. From the start.
Amy: (shrieks) Patrick!!
Patrick carries her through the doorway of the pub, and puts her down. She goes up to the upstairs flat, and he returns to the doorway to get the bags. He opens the door, and at the doorway is Val..
Val: Well, well, well...
Patrick: Vaaal, how are you?
Val:Stop all the nessesseries. I saw Amy with you.
Patrick: Its great isn't it. I think we're finally back on track, after all that crap
Val: Well it better stay that way. Holidys dont last forever ya know, otherwise i wouldn't be 'ere would i?! You wipe that smiles off 'er face, and.... i aint gonna be responsibe for my actions.
Patrick: Threats, is this?!
Val: no. Just a warning. You hurt Amy- I hurt you. Fair deal, don't you reckon?!
Val turns and walks away. Patrick watches her walk away in disgust...
Patrick: (mumbles) Mad old woman.....
He picks the bags up, and goes to turn. Something catches his eye over the road. He sees Natasha, and goes to walk after her. She turns, and to Richards shock, kisses Kyle....
INT. MANSFIELD'S HOUSE - NIGHT
Vicky and Nick are sitting down watching a movie and talking.
Nick: I knew this manager idea would be good...means i can spend more time with you...
Vicky: So then is this new bloke any good?
Nick: Yeah he's not too bad... Tanya is a bit upset with him coming back
Vicky: Im not suprised...Gary had no idea... secrets are realling damaging...
There is a knock on the door. Vicky goes to get it. She opens the door and Kyle storms in.
Vicky: Kyle! You cant just barge in here like this!!
Kyle: Shut up! How could you!?
Vicky: How could i what!? Look i havent got a clue what...
Kyle: You never saw it fit to tell me!!! I thought better of you than that!
Vicky: I've not kept anything from you...
Vicky stops in her tracks and has a look of horror on her face...
Vicky: Oh god...how did you find out?
Kyle: Natasha! And its a good job she did... becuase i have a right to know! How dare you keep something like this from me!
Vicky: Look...
Kyle: Theres no conversation required here Vicky! I want to see my son! now!
How can he do that? he doesn't even know his son, how can he demand to see him
INT. NATASHA'S FLAT - NIGHT
Natasha is pacing her flat, she rings Kyle but speaks to his answerphone.
Natasha: Look Kyle...dont go doing anything hasty... do it calmy...or you wont get anywhere...im here if you need me... bye...
Natasha puts down the phone and continues to pace the room. There is a knock on the door, she rushes to the door to answer it. Patrick walks in...
Patrick: (Saracastic) Hiya babes... brought your stick of rock...
Natasha: Patrick...
Patrick: What expecting your new lover boy were you!?
Natasha: How did you...
Patrick: Got your tounge down his throat in publc...hardly discrete...you got any dignity!?
Natasha: Look Patrick now isnt the time...really...
Patrick: Why on a promise are you!?
Natasha: The whole world doesnt revolve around you ya know! Christ you think your God's gift dont you...
Patrick: So did you until you starting cheating on me...
Natasha: (Laughs in disbelief) Says the man whos sleeping behind his wife's back! At least im not married and in no commited relationship!
Patrick: I thought we had something... and now your with some...idiot!
Natasha: Anyone would think your jealous...
Patrick: Oh that loser!?
Natasha: You dont even know him... hes twice the man you ever are!
Patrick: Be jesus! What is it national hate Patrick day!?
Natasha: I dont see what the big issue is here...youve got two partners...ive got two partners... i cant see a problem...
Patrick: Fine do you know what!? Stuff ya! ... Cheap blonde tarts are two a penny! Amy is much more a woman than you are... you want out... then that's it...we're trough.
Patrick begins to leave. Realising that he's serious, Natasha changes her character.
Natasha: Patrick babe... you know i didnt mean it... look just wait a second will you...
Patrick: You've made your bed...now go sleep it in... frankly im glad i ent gotta join you no more!
Patrick storms out of the flat and slams the door shut, leaving Natasha is a daze.
Baymoore Holiday Village
Tanya is walking out of the holiday Village, talking on her phone…
Tanya: I know. I couldn’t believe it either. After all this time, and everything that happened between us. Come on, getting his way into my dads business to get at me, that’s low….. ok, chat later, bye
Gregg comes up behind her, and touches her shoulder…
Gregg: Talking about me, were we?! Your making me sound like an ogre….!
Tanya: Gregg! You scared the life out of me! (looks at his hand, which is still on her shoulder) Get off me, Gregg.
Gregg: (moved closer) That’s not what you used to say…
Tanya: Yeah, well times have changed. I’ve moved on, so should you
Tanya goes to walk away, but Gregg follows her, and continues talking…
Gregg: Come on Tanya, the past is the past. Lets leave that.
Tanya: Quite.
Gregg: (shouting after Tanya) You cant avoid me forever, babes. I’m not going anywhere.
Tanya: And god I hope you would.
Gregg: Tanz….
Tanya: (turns around to face him) I haven’t been called Tanz in years. And I don’t want it to restart now…it always annoyed me…
Gregg: Well if you’d just have a civilised talk with me, then maybe I’d know these things!
Tanya: you want to talk? Come on then. Talk.
INT: Mansfield House- Night
Kyle and Vicky are having an argument about Daniel…
Kyle: So why the hell did you keep this from me? I’ve had a son for 10 years! 10 ****ing years!
Vicky: Because I knew you’d want nothing to do with him. So I saved him the heartache of knowing.
Kyle: you can’t just make decisions for me like that! Vicky, you don’t understand, my own flesh and blood has been walking around this town, and I didn’t even know it. Because of you. Don’t you know how that makes me feel?! Don’t you get how ****ing selfish that is?!
Vicky: Well if your that angry about it, then maybe you shouldn’t have spent your life moving around from place to place, without telling us where the hell you were!
Kyle: You know I wouldn’t have done that if I knew we had a kid.
Vicky: You didn’t stick around for me, what would have been any different?
Kyle: Because I had a ****ing son here!
Vicky: So you’d stick around for a baby, but not for the girl you loved?! Pathetic.
Kyle: You know what I meant. You should have told me. Its my RIGHT to know
Vicky: You gave up all your rights.
Kyle: Even to Daniel? Your telling me I gave up my rights to see my own son?! What the hell are you on about?
Vicky hears a noise at the top of the stairs. She looks up;
Kyle: You know you really are a little bitch Vicky.
Vicky looks back to Kyle, then walks past him to the bottom of the stairs. Daniel walks down- he’s heard everything.
oh poor daniel. the cheek of patrick. god i'd love to strangle that man.
excellent as usual.
Poor poor daniel. Where does kyle get off anyway? Nicky didn't know she was pregnant til he was gone and he moved around so how was she suppose to tell him :angry::angry::angry:
oh wow abi i never knew you helped write a script your english skills are coming in handy!! :lol:
bakedbean
08-03-2006, 16:31
Poor Daniel and who does kyle think he is
INT. MANSFIELD HOUSE - NIGHT
Daniel starts to walk down the stairs.
Daniel: Mom...
Vicky: Go back upstairs son...
Daniel continues to walk down the stairs.
Kyle: Hello son...
Vicky: Dont! Dont you dare!
Nick drags Kyle outside.
Nick: Get outside now! Come on!
Nick closes the door behind him.
Daniel: Is that my daddy?
Vicky stares at her son and bursts into tears. Daniel comes down and hugs her.
Daniel: Mommy dont cry...
Vicky: I'm just so sorry its come to this... i wanted to tell you when you was a little bit older...
Daniel: I dont know him tough mommy...so it doesnt matter...
Vicky: Yes but you should have known him... but thanks to me youve had to grow up without a daddy...
Daniel: So...i've always had you and nanny, and thats all that matters...
Vicky: But you should know him...hes your dad...
Daniel: If he loved me he'd have known me ages ago... dont cry mommy its you and me... we'll never loose each other.
The camera zooms out slowly seeing mother and son together.
EXT. THE MANSFIELDS HOUSE - NIGHT
Nick pushes Kyle outside. They end up standing on the lawn
Kyle: Get you hands off me mate!
Nick: Mate!? Im not you mate! Why do you go and pull a stunt like that for!?
Kyle: Just saying hi to my son...is it a crime?
Nick: It is when he's never seen you before! Vicky had it all planned when she was going to tell him!
Kyle: Thats bull and you know it! If Natasha hadnt told me...
Nick: Yeah well she shouldnt have...
Kyle: Yes she should have! Otherwise id have lived my whole life thinking i hadnt got any kids!
Nick: Thats the way you made it.. you left her pregnant...
Kyle: She never told me!!!! Id have stayed...
Nick: Yeah well thats your fault for leaving her...
Kyle: Im back now...and we'll get back together
Nick: (laughs in disbelief) Oh no you wont, shes with me now and im never going to leave her like you did!!!
Kyle: Your forgetting me have a kid together... you cant break their bond... and ill make sure i get back with her...if only for Daniel's well being.
Nick lashes out at Kyle and pounches him to the floor.
Nick: How dare you use your son as a pawn to get a woman!
Kyle: Not any woman Nick...my woman...
Kyle gets up and holds his mouth in pain. He starts to walk off..
Kyle: Im not going to give up on this Taylor!...I'll get my son and girl back... just you wait...
Baymoore Holiday Park
Gregg and Tanya walk through the reception of the Holiday Park, and go onto the back patio, to talk…
Tanya: so what did you want to talk about?
Gregg: All this! Everything! Come on, I’m working for Richard now, we’re gonna see each other, so we might as well sort this out.
Tanya: Look, I’ve changed, and I didn’t want to see you ever again. Is that enough for ya?!
Gregg: you didn’t want to see me again, because we just took off, I’m guessing. Come on Tanya, all it would have taken was one phone call to tell me why you’d just gone and left. Was that too much to ask?
Tanya: I never wanted to marry you in the first place!
Gregg: So why let it go that far?
Tanya: Because we were young. I didn’t know what I wanted, and when I did, I didn’t know how to handle it. So I left. I’ve put it all behind me now though…well, until you turned up I had…
Gregg: So have i… I just want to get to know the real you again….
Tanya: And you can.
Gregg: But what about Gary?
Tanya: What about him? Its not like anything is going to happen between you and me is it…
Gregg: Course not…
Tanya: So we’re ok then?
Gregg: Yeah
Tanya and Gregg hug, and Gregg leads her back into the reception. The shot zooms out, to reveal Gary in his car. He’s seen everything, and he’s not happy.
kyle is a nasty little ****. Hope he never gets to see daniel, he doesn't deserve it.
JustJodi
09-03-2006, 12:54
OOOOOOH I wanted to get in there with Nick and punch him a few times where it hurts the most,,,:angry:
OOOOOOH I wanted to get in there with Nick and punch him a few times where it hurts the most,,,:angry:
You get very involved in this Jodi.. I just wish it was on tv. Wasn't the scene with Daniel and Vicky so sad and sweet? :(
JustJodi
09-03-2006, 13:00
Yea it was sniff sniff... made me wanna go hug my big son :crying:
Bry and Abi are churning them out , and at least nothing ends up on the cutting floor :rotfl:
INT. MANSFEILDS HOUSE - MORNING
The morning after the night before. Vicky and Nick are sitting at the dinner table.
Vicky: He didnt sleep well, he was up all night...
Nick: So were you... look you shouldnt let it get to you...
Vicky: It's going to be on my mind forever now... he knows who is dad is...whats to say he wont want to get to know him given time...
Nick: He told you he wouldn't...
Vicky: All it takes is for Kyle to bump into him in the street and brainwash him...
Nick: Look do you want me to have a word...ill give him some money, make him leave...
Vicky: No Nick, i dont want you lowering yourself to his level...leave him be... he'll soon get bored and go, like he did before...
Daniel walks into the room. The conversation finishes.
Vicky: Daniel Honey...are you ok?
Daniel: Not really..im tired...
Vicky: (Jokingly) I'm not suprised, you didnt go to sleep you naughty boy...
Daniel: Mommy...i want to ask you something...
Vicky: (Concerned) What?
Daniel: I want to see my daddy...
There is a shocked look on Nick and Vicky's faces.
EXT: Jenkins Manor
Nick is walking out of the court yard of Jenkins Manor. Gary drives in, in a fury. He spots Nick, and pulls over next to him, and gets out...
Gary: (slams door) Nick, i just wanted to ask you something...
Nick: Yup...
Gary: Its about Tanya....and Gregg...
Nick: (laughs) what about them?
Gary: Well you know, whats going on between them...?
Nick: Nothing. She'd never go there again!! And anyway, shes with you now.
Gary: Yeah, but she said all that to you before he was back, didn't she?!
Nick: Well she did, but just because he's back, shes not going to go have some wild affair with him, is she?!
Gary is silent.
Nick: ok, i get where you're coming from. Dad's always liked him, everyone has...
Gary: includig Tanya i take it then!
Nick: Well....yeah, i guess so. Look, she liked him, but she never loved him. Not like you anyway. The family liked him, but she never thought of him as being the love of her life or anything. Shes never regretted leaving him....
Gary: Sure?
Nick: Well as sure as i can be! Come on Gary, you know her. She'd never do anything like that to you. You know that.
Nick hits him lightly on the arm, and walks away. He shouts over his shoulder...
Nick: I'm off out. Catch ya later.
Red Rum Pub Upstairs Flat (night)
Amy is in the kitchen un-corking a bottle of wine. Patrick walks in. His phone rings- its Natasha. He rejects it...
Amy: (talks over her shoulder) Who was that babe?
Patrick: Someone from work. They'll wait (smiles)
His phone rings again. He rejects it again, and throws his phone into a drawer. Amy jumps as he does this...
Amy: Why did you...?
Patrick: Let not them ruin a good night :D
Patrick comes up behind Amy, and puts his arms around her, and kisses her on the neck...
Amy: (smiles) Patrick...! Whats brought this on.....? :D
Patrick: Can't i be with the woman i love....? You know, we should have a quiet night in...
Amy turns around to face him...
Amy: Definetly...
They kiss. Amy puts the wine down behind her and spills it, but neither of them even notice......:wub:
Gregg asks Tanya if she would like to go for a meal fro his Birthday later in the week, she says yes sure…Gary is a bit cautious of her going for a meal with her ex.
EXT. BAYMOORE HOLIDAY PARK - DAY
Tanya and Gary park up in the holiday park.
Tanya: I wont be long babes... just drop off these letters for Dad, and we've got the whole day to ourselves...
Gary: (Happy) Cant wait... :wub:
Tanya smiles and then gets out of the car. She walks past the swimming pool where toursits are having fun. She knocks on the mangers cabin.
INTERCUT:
INT. GREGG'S CABIN - DAY
Gregg is busy with some spreadsheets on his computer. There is a knock on the door.
Gregg: (distracted) Oh erm come in...
Tanya walks in. Gregg looks up and smiles enthuaistically.
Gregg: Tanya...how nice of you to drop by... what can i do for you?
Tanya: Oh just a breif visit... dad wnated me to give you these documents... not sure what they're about but youll no doubt know....
Tanya hands Gregg the documents.
Gregg: Oh yes ive been expecting these for a couple of days.... do you want a cofee or something?
Tanya: Oh no i'd best get back... Gary's waiting for me in the car...
Gregg: Oh ok...as long as your not avoidining me...
Tanya: No (laughs nervously) I thought we'd made the peace...
Gregg: Yes we have, just checking... erm its my birthday tomorrow... i dont suppose you'd like to accompany me for a meal down Valentinos?
Tanya: Oh Gregg im not sure you know...
Gregg: Oh come on Tanya, what harm is a meal between two old friends... the only think i promise ill bite is my food...
Tanya: Okay i suppose it wont do any harm...
Gregg: Great stuff!!! I'll see you tomoreow night then!
Tanya leaves. Gregg has an excited look on his face.
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - NIGHT
Amy is lighting some candles in the bedroom to add to the atmosphere. "Thank You" by Dido is playing. Amy walks up to the mirror and checks herself out, she is wearing a small and seductive nightie, she seems happy with her marraige.
Amy sprinkles some rose petals down on the bed, and lies down waiting for Patrick to arrive home.
EXT: Natashas Flat
Natasha is on her way out of the flat. She spots Patrick walk past she grabs him, and drags him down the alleyway...
Natasha: What the hell was that last night?
Patrick: Well you hardly expected me to answer you, did ya?
Natasha: You rejected me calls all last night!! Your pathetic, you know that.
Patrick: Well it has been said.
Natasha: You know, all I wanted was one ****ing word with ya, but you were too busy with (mockingly) little baby amy, that you couldn’t even give me that!
Patrick: Get a grip, Natasha. I had every right to do what I wanted to do last night, I didn’t have to speak to you, so get over it..
Natasha: Oh and give me one guess what YOU were busy doing…
Patrick raises his eyebrow
Natasha: What did I ever see in you, Patrick? You’re mug. No, worse. You’re a ****ing ****.
Patrick: (moves closer to her) Just how you like it, I remember…
Natasha: oh yeah?
Patrick: yeah. (whispers into her ear) just what you always wanted…
Patrick kisses Natasha passionately. Amy runs her fingers through his hair, and kisses him back seductively. The shot zooms out, to see Val in her garden….
Val: Bloody cats, wish they’d stay outta that bloody alleyway, and let me grab 40 winks…
She leans over the garden fence, to see Patrick and Natasha kissing…
Baymoore Beach- Day
Patrick is walking along the pier on the phone. He sees Val, hangs up, and walks over to her.
Patrick: So?
Val: Great ruddy welcome i get!
Patrick: whatever, what did you want?
Val: just wonderin' how the lovebirds are gettin on...
Patrick: me and amy? yeah, we're alright, is that all you wanted?
Val: bull****.
Patrick: what...?
Val: you think you can take everyone for a mug, dont ya. Well not me, love. I saw ya! Last night.... with Natasha.
Patrick: You're going mad in your old age
Val: Shut it. And dont you dare lie to me about this. I know what i saw.
Patrick: well you saw wrong.
Val: its the same ass excuses time and time again with you, aint it! You really wanna risk everytihng you've got with Amy for some dirty fling in an alleyway?!
Patrick is silent
Val: Its always the same from you. You break 'er 'eart time and time again. Well not this time.
Patrick: and why not?
Val: because i know about it this time. Games up, Patty!
Patrick: (sniggers slightly)What d'ya want then? Or do ya get your kicks from this kind of thing at your age..
Val: You underestimate me. (whispers into his ear) A grand.
Patrick: what..?
Val: A grand, and i keep me trap shut.
Patrick: (laughs) Easy. You know, i'd have thought you'd have had more of a backbone...
Val: By the end of the weekend.
Patrick: you're having a laugh! how the hell do i get my hands on that much money in a coule of days?!
Val: Looks like i've grown a backbone, dont it.
Val turns, and stomps back down the pier. Patrick watches her flaunt off in her mini skirt and stilettos, in disgust.
INT: MANSFIELDS HOUSE (day)
Daniel and Vicky are watching a kids programme together on the sofa. Theres a knock at the door...
Vicky: He's here. And you're sure you want to see him?
Daniel: Yeah Mummy. Dont worry about me (jumps up) i'm a big boy now!
Vicky laughs weakly, and opens the door. Kyle walks in and goes straight over to Daniel, ignoring a hurt Vicky.
Kyle: (to Vicky) Any chance of some privacy?
She walks into the Kitchen, obviously upset...
Kyle: hi son. I'm really pleased you asked to see me...
Daniel doesn't say anything, just sits there looking at him.
Kyle: Look, i brought you a present!
Daniel: For me?! Wow!!
Daniel grabs a bag off Kyle, and opens the box to a pair of trainers.
Daniel: thanks...
Kyle: Dont you like them?
Daniel: (looks back up to Kyle) but i'm a size 6...
Kyle: oh... well you can....grow into them?!
Daniel: yeah. thanks.
Daniel hugs Kyle loosely, and sits back on the sofa to watch TV. Kyle looks ackward, and doesn't know what he's meant to say. He sits down next to him, and says nothing.
INT. VALENTINOS RESTAURAUNT - NIGHT
Tanya and Gregg are dressed up smart, and sitting at a table at Valentinos. Tanya is agitated.
Tanya: I dont know whats taking Gary so long, he was only meant to go and drop the kids off up the Manor...
Gregg: I'm sure he wont be long...I've taken the liberty to order you a glass or Red...its still your favourite isnt it?
Tanya: Yeah...yeah it is...
Gregg: See...years can pass but I'll never forget all them small details about you... what you like...and what you dont...what makes you tick...
Tanya: I thought you'd have moved on Gregg...
Gregg: I have...but it doesnt mean i dont hold a place for you in my heart...you were always very special to me...
Tanya blushes uncomfortably.
Tanya: Look Gregg...as flattered as i am...maybe we should just change the topic...
Gregg: Why scared to admit your true feelings?
Tanya: True.... what do you mean?
Gregg: I know you still love me... and if that 'Gary' wasnt around you'd be falling into my arms in seconds...
Tanya: Erm no Gregg!
Tanya gets up to leave, but Gregg holds her hands down, he leans over to kiss her, and ends up snogging her.
At this moment Gary walks in and is horified to see the scene in front of him. Tanya pushes Gregg away and sees Gary standing there.
Tanya: Gary...
Gary rushes out of the restauraunt. Tanya screams for him and runs off.
Tanya: Gary!!!
bakedbean
11-03-2006, 19:58
Someone needs to sort that Gregg out
INT. MANSFEILDS HOUSE - NIGHT
Kyle and Daniel are sitting on the floor playing a racing game on his PS2. The pair are laughing and joking and having fun.
Vicky is looking on from the Kitchen, a hurt look on her face, Nick is holding her.
Nick: They seem to be getting on well...
Vicky: I just hope he dosent hurt him Nick... get close to him...and then just go...
Nick: Maybe you should give him a chance...
Vicky: I did...10 years ago... and he ruined it...
The camera cuts to Kyle and Daniel again.
Kyle: I havent had this much fun in ages!
Daniel: Me neither...mom cant play ps2 like you can!
Kyle laughs. Vicky comes in and turns off the tv. Daniel is displeased...
Daniel: Awww mom! We were having fun...
Vicky: Come on Daniel, its way past your bed time... come on go upstairs and ill sort you out in a minute...
Daniel: But mom...
Kyle: Do as you mom says Dan... ill see you next weekend...
Vicky: Erm I'll see about that...
Daniel hugs Kyle.
Daniel: Bye bye daddy...
Vicky tries to hold back the hurtful tears. Daniel heads off upstairs.
Kyle: Just what is your problem Vicky!?
Vicky: You...you are my problem...walking into Daniles life so casually and being the "perfect parent"
Kyle: What jealous are you...that he likes me more than you?
Vicky looses her rag and slaps Kyle around the face. Nick runs into the room to see what the comotion is.
Vicky: How dare you! Ive spent the last 10 years looking after him on my own! Whipping his bottom! Dressing him! Comforting Him! Reading him his bed times stories... and you come in trying to take all that away... i dont think so... "ill see you next weekend son", oh no you wont...becuase im not letting you see him ever again! Do you hear me!?
Kyle: (Cooly) Well im not going to let this go... i know my rights... and im going to make sure i get toi see my son...infact i want full custody of him...
Vicky has a look of horror on her face.
JustJodi
12-03-2006, 11:08
Someone needs to sort that Gregg out
Hmm wonder if Gregg was paid by Hilary to shake things up ????
I personally cannot stand Greg...
JustJodi
12-03-2006, 11:12
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - NIGHT
Amy is lighting some candles in the bedroom to add to the atmosphere. "Thank You" by Dido is playing. Amy walks up to the mirror and checks herself out, she is wearing a small and seductive nightie, she seems happy with her marraige.
Amy sprinkles some rose petals down on the bed, and lies down waiting for Patrick to arrive home.
amy is getting dumber and dumber and totally loosing the plot :rolleyes:
BAYMOORE BEACH- night
Val is standing on the end of the pier. Shes tapping her heel, and watching her watch every few minutes. She bends down to adjust her fish net tights, when she sees Patrick walking towards her...
Val: Fancy seein' you 'ere!
Patrick: Quite.
Patrick looks around, to check if anyone is watching...
Patrick: Heres the money.
He hands her the money, and walks off. Val does a small cough...
Val: Excuse me.
Patrick turns around and walks back...
Patrick: What? Thats what you asked for, so thats what you're gettin!
Val: (flicking through the money) Thing is... (laughs)...i'm a greedy little girl...
Patrick: Point being?
Val: That aint all the money i want, darlin'!
Patrick: but you said...
Val: i said a grand by today. i never said that was the end of it. Catch ya later, hun!
Val strides down the pier, smuggly holding the money
EXT: Andrews House- night
A cab pulls up outside the Andrews house. Claire gets out, pays the driver, and it drives off. She stands looking at the house for a moment, when the door opens and Emma rushes out...
Emma: Claire! your back! (hugs Claire, then looks at her) how are you?
Claire: Better. A lot better. So whats new?
Emma: this and that. Come on, come inside.
Claire and Emma go to walk up the path, when Val rushes down the street...
Val: Claire, darling!
Claire turns and hugs her
Claire: hey!!
Val: Darling, you should have said when your flight was...
Claire: I didnt want a fuss. God, its bloody freezing out here! Italy was so warm..
Val: Come inside, tell us 'bout your fun n games!
Claire, Val, and Emma all walk inside. The shot zooms out, then zooms in on Luquina, who is peering through the window...
Luqina: She's back...
Chris: who..?
Luquina: Claire! Who else!
Chris: Shes......back? Omg.... i, erm..... i think i'l just go say hi...
Chris grabs his coat, and walks out of the house, without saying a word, leaving Luqina watching him walks down the path to her house, shocked and disgusted...
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