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Wow!!! Just caught up and ...... !!!
I hope Lauren and Jared get whats coming to them.....Tanya had done nothing to them...I hope she's got that cassette (or at least another copy of it hidden somewhere) as I can't see Will giving it to her anymore....
Glad you're enjoying it.
But remember, the only copy Tanya had was at Bellamy house, Jared found it and burnt it, hence why Hilary was so smug, no evidence, no conviction.
:eek: One copy !!!! Nooooooo!!!! Why didn't she have a back up copy?! Silly girl!!! Her only evidence against her and its gone!
INT. VALENTINO'S RESTAURAUNT - DAY
Mandy walks into Valentinos, looking a bit uneasy, Jon catches her eye, she walks towards him and sits down. Jon grabs her hand and kisses it.
Jon: I'm really glad you could make it, I felt as tough I'd blown my chances with you Mandy...
Mandy: Yeah, well seen as you'd made the effort to book a table...
Jon: Don't be so coy, you wouldn't have come if you didn't want to give us another go..
Mandy: Look Jon, I've been hurt too many times before, by people like you and Craig...
Jon: Please, don't compare me to him...
Mandy: Well you're both gangster apparantly...
Jon: Yes, but unlike Craig I have respect for people I like... and believe me Mandy I have no intentions of hurting you...
Mandy: Craig said the same thing... at the end of the day it's just words...I need you to promise me, that if we become an item, you will treat me well...
Jon holds Mandy's hand and says each word, with emotion.
Jon: I promise you.
Jon pours Mandy a glass of wine.
Jon: I was married to my wife for many years, before she died...I loved her with all my heart, and never saw any harm come to her. I sheltered her from my... lifestyle... I drew a clear line between that and my private life...
Mandy: That's nice to hear, I'm sorry to hear about her death...
Jon: It came as a blow, as I'm sure you can imagine, to love someone and have them taken away from you so cruely...I never thought I'd get a second chance at love, and then you came along...
Mandy: Easy now, we're only just getting to know each other
Jon: Oh I know, but I have a feeling this is the start of a long lasting, and very promising relationship.
The pair toast their glasses, and smile at each other.
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - DAY
James rushes towards the house. The front door is wide open. James hurries into the house, breathing heavily.
James: Val!? Claire!? Emma!?
No response. He walks into the living room, which is totally ransacked. The TV and mirror smashed, sofa and chairs sliced open, curtains torn, dvds and ornaments thrown all over the floor.
James: Jesus...
James phone rings. Lorraine is calling him. A disturbed James picks up the phone immeditaley.
James: What the hell have you done with them!? Where are my girls!?
INTERCUT:
INT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - DAY
A dark and depressing warehouse. Val, Claire and Emma are sat on wooden chairs, tied up with rope and gagged. Lorraine is dressed in black leather, pacing around the three in a predator/prey fashion, on the phone to James.
Lorraine: They are in safe hands...as long as you exactly what I say..and if you don't...I'll kill them all...
Lorraine cocks her gun and points it at the girls heads, muffled screaming can be heard trough the phone as the scene cuts back to James. He stands on the spot, petrified, awaiting Lorraine's instructions...
EXT. DEVON ROADS - DAY
James is in his car, speeding down the empty Devon Road, on the phone to Lorraine. Sweat is pouring from his face, as he exceeds the speed limit.
James: Why the hell have you done this eh!?
Lorraine: You know why....
James: You twisted bitch!
Lorraine: Time's ticking James...
James: You tell me where the are! You tell me where the hell they are, now!
Lorraine: Do as I say and you all will become clear...
James: Damn you Lorraine!
Lorraine: Oh by the way, have you found my little present yet?
James: Present?...What present?
James looks around, confused. He chacthes a black box on the back seat in the corner of his eye. With one hand remaining on the wheel, the other reaches out to open the box, half focusing his attentions on what's inside the box.
James: Jesus Christ!
In the box is a bomb with a count down timer on it. 10 seconds, 9 seconds, 8 seconds...
:eek::eek::eek: don't stop.. I want more.. oh my god!!! sorry I am sitting here with my mouth open!! this is more shocking then Leah killing her mum!!
Excellent Bry
don't leave it like this. please please please!
don't leave it like this. please please please!
a bit of good news.. Abi is posting 2 more later so we might get something from her
don't leave it like this. please please please!
a bit of good news.. Abi is posting 2 more later so we might get something from her
brilliant, will we be punished and not got any tomorrow though?
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - DAY
Tanya bangs on the front door of Bellamy House, looking worse for wear. Hair ruffled, make up worn off Tanya is a physical/emotional wreck.
Lauren opens the door, a smug smile on her face.
Lorraine: Well if it isn't little miss sexuality crisis...
Tanya screams as she lashes out at Lauren. The pair engadge in a vicious bithcight as they grab hold of each each other, throwing themselves around the room.
Tanya: You bloody bitch! Ruining me and Will's relationship!
Lauren: You're the one that ruined it, by hopping into bed with his sister!
Tanya: And whose fault is that!? You and your twisted mind games!
Tanya flings Lauren into a side table, Lauren falls backwards, collapasing onto a table, knocking an expensive vase over. Will rushes down the stairs, having heard a commotion.
Will: Tanya!? Lauren!? What the hell is going on!?
Tanya: Will...
Lauren: She just flung me into this table, she's phycotic aswell as lesbian!
Will: Shut up Lauren! (To Tanya) What do you want?
Tanya: To talk...
EXT. DEVON ROADS - DAY
10 seconds, 9 seconds, 8 seconds...
James hastily breaks in the middle of the road. He hurries to unbuckle his seatbelt and open the door, scared for his life.
James staggers out of the car, and tries to run away from the car as fast as he can. Within a matter of seconds a loud explosion can be heard as the car goes up in flames and is flung into the air.
James is thrown back by the impact of the explosion. Close up of James lying unconcious, bleeding....
WILL JAMES SURVIVE?
nooooooooooooo!!! You can't leave it like that.
go on Tanya.. kick her ass.. Good work guys. loving this
:eek: :eek: and more :eek:!!!
Great stuff!!! Next installment....now.....please :D
EXT. BELLAMY HOUSE - DAY
Tanya and Will walk trough the grounds of Bellamy house, as they discuss things.
Tanya: Just so as you know, no matter what happens, I'm sorry for what I've done...
Will: It's a bit too late for aplogies now Tanya, the damage is done...
Tanya: I still love you Will, surely we can work it out?
Will: Tanya...
Tanya: You've been my rock for the past few months Will...
Will: You'd have said that to anyone who'd have helped you out back in Miami. It's not me you love, it's the attention, a shoulder to cry on...
Tanya: Please Will, give me a chance...just one more chance...
Will: There's no way I can forgive you Tanya, not for this...
Tanya: Well, I guess it's goodbye then...
Will: Yeah, I guess it is...
Tanya takes off her engadgment ring and hands it back to Will. She tries to kiss him goodbye but he pulls away.
Will: Bye Tanya...
Will walks off, leaving Tanya alone and emotional.
EXT. DEVON ROADS - DAY
James is thrown back by the impact of the explosion. Close up of James lying unconcious, bleeding....
Moments later a car pulls up beside the burning wreckage of James car. Patrick gets out of the car and runs towards James.
Patrick: James! James!?
Patrick gets down on his knees and begins to shake James.
Patrick: James!? Can you hear me James!?
James begins to stir, holding his head in pain.
Patrick: Oh thank god! James are you okay!? What's happened!?
James: It's Lorraine, she's blown up my car, she's got the girls...
Patrick: What!? Why!?
James: We haven't got time Patrick...we need to find her...
Patrick: Where is she!?
James: I dont know, but she's got the girls! And I'm scard that she's going to kill them!
James and Patrick are both worried for the safety of Val and the girls.
Thank god James is ok.. my god that Lorraine is a nut job
psycho lorraine hey. poor tanya. will could at least listen to her side.
INT. TORBAY HOSPITAL - DAY
Natasha paces around the coridoor, waiting to speak to the doctor who looked after her. She keeps on peering trough his office window, where he is talking to see someone.
Suddenly the doctor and patient both get up and begin to leave. Natasha pounces at the doctor.
Natasha: Dr Goodyear..
Doctor: Ah Natasha, good to see you up and about...
Natasha: Can I have a quick word?
Doctor: Well I was just about to have a spot of lunch...
Natasha: It'll only take a minute, please...
Doctor: Okay then.
Natasha and the doctor head into his office.
Doctor: Well what can I do for you?
Natasha: It's about my memory, I need to remember who attacked me, but I can't...everything is a total blur...
Doctor: This is very common for people who sustain severe head injuries like you did...
Natasha: I don't care if it's common or not, I need to know if it will come back to me!
Doctor: It's hard to say really Natasha, sometimes it can, sometimes it can't. I'm not really in a position to say either way.
Natasha: (Excited) But it could come back, yeah? That's what you're saying!?
Doctor: Well it has been known to happen... the simplest of things could trigger you to remember everything, a smell, a sound, anything really...
Natasha: That's brilliant! Thanks doctor!
Doctor: But remember what I said, it might not...
Natasha leaves the office, unsure whether to be excited or disheartened.
EXT. DEVON ROADS - DAY
James: We haven't got time Patrick...we need to find her...
Patrick: Where is she!?
James: I dont know, but she's got the girls! And I'm scard that she's going to kill them!
James and Patrick are both worried for the safety of Val and the girls. James phone rings, he instantly answers it. It is Lorraine.
James: Lorraine!
Lorraine: Ah, I see you've survived the suprise, pity...
James: Please! I'm begging you! Don't hurt my girls...
Lorraine: If you don't get to me in the next ten minutes I'll shoot one of them dead...
James: Please, Lorraine, where are you!?
Lorraine: Oh come on James, where would be the fun in telling you that?
James: If what we had means anything to you Lorraine you'd stop this now...for my sake...
Lorraine: Don't you see James, I'm doing this becuase of what we had... because of what you've given up on... if I can't have you, I'll be damed if I let this lot have you!
James: Damn you Lorraine!
Lorraine: I'll give you a clue...infact no, go fish...
Lorraine hangs up. James curses at her. Patrick looks at him, confused.
Patrick: Well, what did she say?
James: Nothing new, she was going to give me a clue but...
Patrick: But what?
James: Wait a minute! "Go Fish"! That's where she's got them!
Patrick: Where!?
James: The harbour! Come on, we've got to hurry!
The pair get into Patrick's car and speed off.
WILL THEY SAVE VAL & THE GIRLS IN TIME?
:eek:
Go James/Patrick!!! Go!!!!!!!!
Will they get there in time?!
*looks around* Wheres Abi for the next installment, or is that you tonight Bry?!
Whoever it is, post it nowwwwww!!!!
EXT. CRAIG'S CAFE - DAY
Jon steps out of Craig's cafe, having just finished his breakfast. Craig is just getting out of his BMW to go into the cafe.
Jon: Ah Craig, we have to stop bumping into each other like this
Craig: Too damn right, what's your problem eh Kerrigan? This is my turf...and I want you out of it...
Jon: Easy Craig, I'm not here to take over Baymoore...
Craig: Then why the hell are you here then?
Jon: To have my breakfast, is that a crime now?
Craig: It is when you're eating it at my cafe!
Jon: For heavens sake Craig Baymoore is a bloody holiday village, if I was thinking of taking over someone's turf it would be something a bit more large scale than this...
Craig: Then why do you keep hanging around here like a bad smell?
Jon: Let's just say I have some valuable intrests keeping me around here...
Craig: If it's my wife your on about then you can have her for all i care, take her away with you, and get the hell out of my turf!
Jon: (Laughs) You're turf? What a greasy spoon and a third rate backstreet garage? Don't make me laugh... it's hardly a criminal empire is it?
Craig: I swear to god Kerrigan!
Jon: Don't worry, I'm going.
Jon gives Craig a condesending look, and laughs before leaving. Craig is left feeling small.
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
The bar is reasonably quiet. The pub phone rings, Amy goes out back to answer it.
The scene cross cuts between her, and Patrick who is driving towards the harbour with James.
Amy: Hello, Red Rum...
Patrick: (Agitated) Amy, it's me... look you need to call the police...now!
Amy: (Concerned) What? Why?
Patrick: It's Lorraine...she's kidnapped Val and the girls...
Amy: Oh my god! What about James!?
Patrick: She blew up his car, but it's ok...he's with me now...
Amy: I can't believe it, what shall I do!?
Patrick: Call the police, tell them that Lorraine is at the habour!
Patrick hangs up. A nervous Amy immediatley dials 999.
Amy: (Worried) Hi...police please... yes it's an emergency...
INT. HARVEY'S HOUSE - DAY
Craig is sat in the armchair, top button undone, jacket off, a drink in his hand. Leah is sat on the sofa, listenting to him ranting on about Jon Kerrigan.
Craig: Where does that fat prick get off insulting me and my buisnesses!
Leah: Look babe, I wouldn't take it to heart, sod what he thinks...
Craig: I can't have him making a laughstock of me!
Leah: Ignore it, it's just a macho crisis, if he wants to be the big I am then let him, you don't mess with people like Kerrigan...
Craig: I don't know what's worse, the fact that he said it, or that he's got a point! I mean how can I be taking seriously with just a cafe and garage under my belt!?
Leah: Well it's not like you have the opportunity to expand is it?
Craig: I could have the club...
Leah: (Mocks) Slight complication there babe, the Singhs already own it...
Craig: (Laughs) Since when have I let a little complication like that get in the way... I alwasy get what I want...
Craig has a devious grin on his face, his mind plotting away...
DaVeyWaVey
03-02-2007, 17:38
Bloody hell!! :eek: Lorraine is an absolute nutter!!! This is just absolutely fantastic!! I am totally loving this psycho Lorraine storyline!!! Truly superb! Well done Abi and Bry. :bow: Fantastic!
Quick, please post more soon on this! I need to know if Val and the girls will survive! And the bomb! I didn't see that coming at all! :eek: Brilliant!
INT: RED RUM PUB- Day
Amy is pacing backwards and forwards in the pub. Romeo leans over the bar..
Romeo: Whats wrong?!
Amy: Oh God, where do i start..
Romeo: Come on, you look proper paniked!
Amy: Its cause i am "Proper Paniked"! That Lorraine has kidnapped the girls...
Romeo: What? What girls?
Amy: ...And shes bombed James Car.. And she'll... She might..
Romeo: What?!
Amy: Val, Claire and Emma! Shes going to kill them, at the Docks!
Romeo turns to Chris who is sitting at the table. He grabs him by the jacket, and drags him to the door. Amy follows..
Romeo: We're going down there..
EXT: BAYMOORE DOCKS- Day
James runs up to the docks, and next to a warehouse. He hears a gunshot, and looks paniks. He runs inside, and sees Lorraine standig with the gun in the air, and the 3 women in the middle of the warehouse, tied up..
Lorraine: That was just a tester..
James: What the hell do you think you are doing, Lorraine?!
Lorraine points the gun at him...
Lorraine: I'd watch it if i were you- remember who is in control here!
Lorraine circles the 3 women, with a smug smile on her face. James tries to move towards them. Lorraine shots into the air again..
Lorraine: One more step, and the next bullet will be yours!
Lorraine looks at the 3 women again, and holds the gun to all their heads in turn. They look terrified..
Lorraine: Now, this is where the fun starts..
She moves towards James..
Lorraine: Your choice- who do i shoot first?
DaVeyWaVey
04-02-2007, 09:15
Oh my goodness!! :eek: James has to do something and quick!
INT.MARBAL NIGHTLCUB - DAY
Craig walks into Marbal. Iqbal and Marcus are unloading the crates.
Iqbal: We're closed Craig...
Craig: It'll only take a minute...
Iqbal: Well go on then
Craig: I want you to sell up.
Marcus: I beg your pardon?
Craig: I think you heard me the first time. I want this place on the market by the end of the day...
Marcus: (Laughs in disbeleif) You're kidding us right!?
Craig: Do I look like I'm messing around?
Iqbal: And why should we do what you say?
Craig: Well it's your choice, but if you want to be eating your meals out of a straw for the rest of your life...
Marcus: Oh please, if you think we're gonna get scared of a plastic gangster like you...
Craig gets a gun out of his pocket, shows it them, then puts it back in his pocket.
Marcus: You won't shoot us...
Craig: Oh won't I now?
Marcus: (Agitated) No...it's not loaded...
Craig: But it could be...I might not do it, but I have a lot of contacts that could do it at the expense of a phone call...
Iqbal: Why are you doing this?
Craig: Because I can... it's your one and only warning, sell up or else...
Iqbal: Get out! Go on! Sling your hook!
Craig casts them a threatening look, then laughs at them.
Craig: You're choice.
Craig leaves, a sinister look on his face. Iqbal and Marcus look at each other, concerned.
hopefully shell shoot herself first. shes a psycho. This is great BB.
INT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - DAY
Lorraine: Now, this is where the fun starts..
She moves towards James..
Lorraine: Your choice- who do i shoot first?
James tries to approach her, hands held up, trying to come to a truce.
James: Look Lorraine, please don't do this... you're greivance is with me... not them...
Lorraine: Yeah but shooting them will be payback!
James: Payback for what!? Me choosing my wife over you!?
Lorraine: Yes! You told me you loved me!
James: Yeah, well I didn't mean it! I thought I did, but I didn't! It's Val I love!
Lorraine points the gun at Val's head.
Lorraine: Looks like you've made your choice... if I want to hurt you then I kill her...my love rival...
James: No, Lorraine! Don't!
Lorraine: Give me one good reason why I shouldn't!?
James: Because... because of the cancer!
This prevents Lorraine from shooting Val. The girls look at James, and Val in confusion and shock.
Can i point out that i've been written Devon Seas for exactly 1 year now :D
Theres been points when i didn't think we'd make it, but we're here and still going strong, so yeah... Party time! :cheer:
Can i point out that i've been written Devon Seas for exactly 1 year now :D
Theres been points when i didn't think we'd make it, but we're here and still going strong, so yeah... Party time! :cheer:
I'm glad you've remember Abs, as I wouldn't have :lol:
But honestly, jokes aside I wouldn't have been able to do this without you. You write amazing scripts and are as bid a part of ds as the characters and the fans. You're a great mate and thanks for the help you've given and any you give in the future! :D
Chloe O'brien
04-02-2007, 12:52
My word 1 year old ready, time does fly by. Well done you both and keep up the good work.
over a year, blimey, it last longer than EE at this rate. Cant ait to see Lorraines reaction to that.
DaVeyWaVey
04-02-2007, 17:20
I love a psycho and Lorraine beats Cathy Bradford hands down! I wonder what she'll do next?!
INT: MARBAL NIGHTCLUB- Day
Marcus and Iqbal are argueing in the nightclub..
Marcus: You know what Craig is capable of, you dont want to get on the wrong side of him. For your sake, and mine!
Iqbal: Thats never going to happen! We can't get everywhere in life by bullying people, and forcing them to get trodden on.
Marcus: You can't put pride over your life!
Iqbal: You think i'd let him kill me?!
Marcus: Would you seriously have a choice with a person like Craig?!
They pause, and he continues
Marcus: You're going to regret what you said to him... You really will, i can tell...
INT: ABANDONED WAREHOUSE- Day
Lorraine stands, facing James, shocked. She talks in a more hushed voice..
Lorraine: Cancer?!
James: Yes... I'm sorry, but i couldn't carry on seeing you, when my wife might have been dying!
Lorraine snarls, looking angry. She shouts at James...
Lorraine: You're WIFE?! You didn't ****ing care about her all those times we were having sex! She didn't so much as cross you're ****ing mind!
James: It was a mistake, Lorraine! I know that now... I love Val more than anything, and if i have to die because of that, then so be it!
Lorraine holds the gun up at him, circling him. James tenses up..
James: Look at them..
Lorraine maintains her eye contact with James..
James: Just ****ing look at them! What you've done to them! Shes got cancer, and you put her through this?! Shes suffered enough, she doesn't need your sick mind games anymore. None of them do!
Lorraine looks at the 3 women, struggling in the centre of the warehouse....
Lorraine: All i wanted was you, James. You and me.. None of these kids, no wife...
She moves back towards James, still holding the gun at him
Lorraine: You wanted some cheap, tacky woman over me.... Over my dead body, James. Over my dead body..
She trails off, not making sense. She turns away, and holds the gun at her head..
Lorraine: All i wanted was for us to be happy...
James launches forward at Lorraine. He falls just in front of her..
James: Lorraine!
Lorraine pulls the trigger, and collapses to the floor next to James, her lifeless arm lying over his body.
The camera pans out... The 3 women staring, shocked and terrified in the middle of the room... With Lorraine's dead body lying over James. James looks shocked... Lorraine finally rested where she had fought to be for so long
:eek::eek::eek: Oh my god.. this is fantastic.. Lorraine did the only good thing in the end killing herself
I just want to add. Bry starting writing this way before christmas 2005 and I was hooked from first time I read it.. Bry said he might have to give up cause he couldn't write it all by himself which I didn't want to happen so I want to say another thank you to abi for taken this on with him.. With both of you working on this, I can get my daily dose of a soap I would love to see on tV.. Thank you guys, I am still hooked over a year on and I want more of this!!!
great stuff as usual guys. i see craig back to his bullying ways.
well done on the fab writing and like i said in season 1 it's a pity this wasn't a soap on televison.
Well, blooming heck!!! Lorraine took herself out and no one else! Thought she might shoot one of the others before herself so total :eek:
Will they sell to Craig...:hmm: It would be even better if they sold to Jon under Craig's feet lol
Great stuff guys and thanks Abs for coming on board to allow DS to carry on to where it is today. And thanks Bry for bring DS to Soapboards in the first place :bow: :bow:
INT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - DAY
Lorraine falls to the floor dead. Val, James, Claire and Emma breath a sigh of relief, but look on at the scene in absolute horror.
The doors to the warehouse burst open and the police storm in, followed by Patrick, Romeo, Chris and Tom.
Tom: Oh thank god!
The police untie the girls. Tom runs towards Emma, they hug and kiss.
Tom: I thought I was going to loose you...
Romeo and Chris are unsure what to do, Claire gestures for them to give her a hug, they both hug her. The events of the past few weeks appearing insignficant.
Claire: No matter what, we all can't fall out, life's too short.
Val is untied. James walks over to her and gives her a hug.
James: I'm so glad you're safe.
Val, naturally, isn't eager to kiss and make up. James gestures for Emma and Claire to come towards them. He hugs them all in turn.
James: I'm so sorry for all this, it's all been my fault...but don't worry, it's over, it's all over now...
The 4 hug each other. As the camera pans out to show the scene of devastation and a family united.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Richard and Nick are in the study discussing the new lesuire complex.
Richard: So then, had any ideas who we should ask to work there...
Nick: I thought just interviews?
Richard:No, I wont this to be a local thing, owned by locals, run by locals for locals... would be nice if we could get some well known faces working there, give it the friendly touch...
Nick: Yeah, that's a good idea I suppose...
Richard: How about Val? After all we do owe her a job, what with the bingo hall... she could work in the salon...right up her street...
Nick: How about Leah to work in the gym? She's into fitness and all that...
Richard: I tell you what write me a list of who can take what roles and we'll see about getting in touch with some of them...
Nick: Right, will do :D
INT: HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE
Craig walks into the house..
Craig: They said no. Point Blank.
Leah: Is it any wonder, really? You can't go demanding things like a game of monopoly, Craig. You're messing with people's lives here!
Craig: Yes, i no... Fnacy a meal out tonight?
Leah: Dont change the subject...
Craig: So i'm not allowed to take you out now, am i?!
Leah: Your up to something...
Craig: Me? Never. Go and make yourself even more beautifull, eh Leah?
Leah rolls her eyes and goes to get ready. Craig picks up his mobile..
Craig: Hi mate. Stock up on the petrol- your gonna need it tonight :D
EXT: ABANDONED WAREHOUSE- Day
Val is standing outside alone, thinking. James comes out, and stands with her..
James: How are you feeling?
Val: You dont have to ask me that... Especially after how i've acted towards you...
James: What? No, come on, none of this..
Val: I shouldn't have acted so badly towards you, recently..
James: But me and Lorraine were... (pauses)... You had good reason to..
Val: You risked your life for me in there, James. Me and out children..
James: I couldn't leave you
Val: I know... And the thought of leaving you too was..
Val pauses, and looks at him in the eyes, tenderly...
Val: I thought she was going to kill me... I really did... And i didn't want... I didn't want her to do that, untill i had the chance to say good bye...
Vals eyes well up with tears. James holds her, and she talks..
Val: I love you, James..
James smiles, happy...
James: Even after everything thats happened?
Val: Of course.. We can forget about all that...
James kisses her on the cheek, and holds her hand in his..
James: Yeah... Course we can :D
ahhh!! :wub::wub: how sweet is Val and James!! I am so glad that they are back together
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Richard, Hilary, Nick, Tanya, Michelle & Callumn are eating a meal.
Callumn: So then Richard, hows the new buisness venture going?
Richard: Great thanks, just need to add the final few touches...
Michelle: When's it due to open?
Nick: By the end of the month hopefully.
Richard: That reminds me, I have a proposition to make to the pair of you...
Michelle: Really?
Michelle and Callumn look on, with curious looks on their faces.
Richard: Well me and Nick have been allocating jobs to the locals, but I felt that we should play an active part in it, make it a family buisness
Callumn: And?
Richard: Well if you're willing, we'd like you both to run the wine bar at the lesuire complex...
Michelle: Really!? Oh my god that's amazing, isn't it babe?
Callumn: Yeah it's brilliant. Thanks Richard
Richard: I'll take that as a yes then?
Callumn: Yes please :D
Tanya gets up in a huff.
Richard: Tanya?
Tanya: It's nice to know where your loyalties lie...
Richard: I'm sorry Tanya, I didn't think... what with all that's happened recently I presumed...
Tanya: Just forget it!
Tanya storms off, clealry annoyed. Michelle and Richard follow after her, concerned.
INT. VALENTINO'S RESTURAUNT - EVENING
Craig and Leah are sat down, eating their meal. Rebecca comes over with another bottle of wine
Rebecca: Your wine...
Craig: Thank you Rebecca, and may I say you're looking lovely tonight...
Rebecca: You Flatterer...
Rebecca heads off.
Leah: What was that for?
Craig: The more people that remember we're here tonight, the better. Call it an insurance policy.
The pair are silent for a moment as they eat their meal.
Leah: You know you might appear to me some cruel gangster, but deep down... you're a big softy...
Craig: Careful, I could loose my reputation :p
Leah: I don't reckon you're as evil as you make out...
Craig: I have my moments...
Craig's phone rings, he answers it to Leah's annoyance.
Craig: Hello...everything in place? Great...I hope to hear from you in the morning.
INTERCUT:
INT. MARBAL NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
Craig's associate puts his phone away. He looks over at Marcus who is it at the bar, flirting with a girl. The associate grins, a cunning plan about to unfold...
INT: JENKINS MANOR- Day
Tanya stops in the hallway, and turns to Richard and Michelle..
Tanya: As if i should have expected better from you Dad though... I knew that you wouldn't "accept" me back so easily..
Richard: Come on, be fair!
Tanya: Why should i?! I'm the daughter that you've known longer... The Daughter that you provided for for so long... You should be offering the job to me, not some cheap tart like her!
Michelle: Excuse me?!
Tanya: You heard me! I'm his real daughter, not you, darling!
Richard: Enough! There are enough arguements going on around here, without you two having a go at each other at every moment. We could do without them inside the family.
INT: MARBAL NIGHTCLUB- Night
The club is mostly empty, as Marcus is closing up. He walks over to the Girl..
Marcus: I was going to close, you know :p
Girl: You're not going to kick me out are you?!
Marcus: Oh no, i'm sure we could think of something to do... :cool:
The girl smiles flirtaciously, and sips her drink through a straw. She places it on the bar, and takes Marcus's hand..
Girl: You got an office?
Marcus: Naturally!
Girl: Want to show it to me? :cool:
They smile at each other, and Marcus guides her around the back.
Craigs Henchmen break into the club, holding Petrol Canisters. They pour it over the Bar, Dancefloor, and sofas. One of the men takes a Box of Matches out of his pocket, and strikes a match, smiling...
:eek::eek: OMG.. Craig doesn't believe in getting his hands dirty.. they are going to know it is him!!!
Ok Tanya is been a spoilt brat but what is richard thinking give Callum a bar job.. he is a drunk!!!
INT. MARBAL NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
"Light My Fire" is played over the action of the scene.
Craigs Henchmen break into the club, holding Petrol Canisters. They pour it over the Bar, Dancefloor, and sofas. One of the men takes a Box of Matches out of his pocket, and strikes a match, smiling...
Henchman: Come on lads, let's get out of here...
The scene cuts to the office where Marcus and the blonde girl are kisssing passionatley.
The fire begins to spread quickly around the nightclub.
Craig's henchmen leave the club, get into a black transit van and speed off.
Marcus lowers the girl onto the table as he undoes her blouse. The pair are totally unaware of the inferno out front....
EXT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Tanya is sitting by the side of the pool, staring out towards sea. Richard comes approaches her.
Richard: What you doing out here?
Tanya: Just, thinking...
Richard: Well you'll catch a death of cold at this rate...
Tanya: I'm sorry about earlier it's just...well what were you thinking offering the job to her and her alchy of a husband?
Richard: Like I said I want the Taylors to have an active role in the buisness...
Tanya: But they're not even Taylors!
Richard: Tanya don't take it to heart, if you'd let me explain, the only reason why I didn't offer you the job was becuase i want you to take total control of the place....
Tanya: What, you mean be the manager!?
Richard: Yeah, it's just what you need, a bit of responsibility. The Taylor empire is for the whole family, Nick at the holiday park and you at the lesuire complex... it just feels right...
Tanya: Thanks dad! I don't know what to say!
The pair share an affectionate hug, burrying the hatchet, hopefully new times for Taylors...
:eek: Is Marcus going to get out alive?!
:hmm: Was that Richards plan all along then? Can't see Callum being too happy about that though. Could be interesting.
INT: RED RUM PUB- Night
Hayley stops Amy in the corridor out back of the pub, as she gets some crisps...
Hayley: Look here, i want my money!
Amy: You know i'll pay, but not yet..
Hayley: You promised me that cash, you've got to keep to your end of the bargain..
Amy: I will, but once the baby is born!
Hayley: I'm the one carrying this baby, i'll call the shots. You know, i could get rid of this behind your back whenever i wanted! Theres nothing to stop me..
Patrick walks down the stairs...
Amy: Patrick, try to make her see sense about the money..
Hayley: I can see perfect sense, dont be so... so.. condensing!
Patrick: Condesending, do you mean? :rolleyes: I'm not having anything to do with buying babies..
Patrick walks off into the bar.
Hayley: I want that money tomorrow. You just go see to that, ok?
INT: IQBAL'S FLAT- Night
Mohammed walks into Sanjita and Iqbals room..
Mohammed: Mum... Theres Fire Engines everywhere..
Sanjita: Really? I wouldnt worry about it, Val's probably set the sofa on fire with a Cigerette end!
Mohammed looks out the window..
Mohammed: No really, there must be a proper huge fire somewhere..
Iqbal looks out of the window, and panics..
Iqbal: Get the hell out of here, both of you! The Marbal is on fire!
The scene cuts to outside the Marbal, with crowds gathering...
Iqbal: ****! Marcus is in there!
INT. MARBAL NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
Marcus and the girl are lying on the desk, having fun. The girl turns her head towards the door and immediley jumps up.
Girl: Jesus Christ!
Marcus: What!?
Girls: There's smoke! Coming trough the door!
Marcus: You stay here
Marcus opens the door, burning his hand on the hot metal door handle. The flames from the club can be seen, he quickly closes the door again.
Marcus: ****! There's a fire!
The girl picks up the fire extingisher from the side.
Girl: Should we put it out!?
Marcus: That's gonna do no good, it's too big! Come on, out the back!
Marcus heads towards the fire exit, he smashes the door in and grabs the girl, as the pair run outside.
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
Emma and Claire are sat on the sofa talking. Val walks in and sits down on the chair.
Val: You alright, you look down...
Emma: Yeah well...
Val: Look I know it was hard going trough all that, but it's over now...
Claire: That's not what's bothering us mom, it's the fact you never told us about your cancer...
Val: Yeah, well I didn't want to worry you see....it didn't seem to fair to give you the extra burden, what with the rape...and Nathan...
Emma: We had a right to know Mom!
Val: Believe me I wanted to tell you both, but I felt I could go it alone!
Claire: But you wouldn't have had to mom, we'd have been there for you...we still can be!
Val: The worst is over with, I just have a bit more treatment to go trough...
Claire: And we want to be there for you throughout it, together, as a family...come on...
Val walks over towards them and sits down on the sofa between them. They hold her hands and hug her.
phew!! Marcus got out.. wonder if Sanjita and Iqbal can get out too.. they live above the club and if it has already taken hold it might be a problem
EXT: MARBAL NIGHT CLUB- Night
Marcus and the Girl break out of the club, their skin red and burnt. They cough and splutter and collapse to the floor..
Iqbal: Marcus!
The Paramedics go over, and take them into the Ambulence on strechers. As they are preparing to leave, Craig pulls up in his car next to Iqbal...
Craig: Looks like you've not a bit of a mess on your hands there..
Iqbal: You were bloody responsible for this, werent you! I'l effing kill ya!
Craig: We've been out all night. You're being delusional.
Iqbal: You're men then!
Craig: Get a grip Iqbal! I couldn't give a damn about whats happened!
Iqbal: You will when we have to sell up though, wont ya!
Craig laughs, and drives off. Iqbal runs to the Ambulence to see Marcus
EXT: HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE- Night
Leah and Craig get out of the car...
Leah: Did you really do that?
Craig: Maybe... Maybe not..
Leah: How can you joke about something like this?! You could go down for Arson! You've destroyed their livlihood, and you nearly kill their son- for Gods sake, thats not something you bloody joke about!
Craig: They still have their corner shop... Thats what Pakis are here for...
Leah: Dont you go saying stuff like that! You nearly killed 2 people tonight, at least show some seriousness for that!
Craig: Come on, what can i do about that? Collaterial Damage, thats all it is..
Leah slaps him hard around the face
Leah: I can't beleive how evil you can be at times..
Leah storms into the house. Craig calls after her..
Craig: Look on the bright side, at least i can get the club at this rate!
Leah slams the door shut.
I hope if they do have to sell up, they sell the club to Jon now - that would wipe the smile off Craigs face!
I hope if they do have to sell up, they sell the club to Jon now - that would wipe the smile off Craigs face!
here here.. and to rub their faces in it even further.. get Jon to give the Club to Mandy
I hope if they do have to sell up, they sell the club to Jon now - that would wipe the smile off Craigs face!
here here.. and to rub their faces in it even further.. get Jon to give the Club to Mandy
Now that would be pure genius!!!! *gets on bended knees hoping Bry and Abi are reading* :D :D
INT. IQBAL & MARCUS FLAT - DAY
The front door opens as Sanjita and Iqbal come in followed by Marcus who has just been discharged from hospital. Iqbal helps his son towards the sofa.
Sanjita: You take it easy now...it's a miracle you're still here...
Marcus: I'm sorry, you know, for the fire...
Iqbal: You've got nothing to be sorry about, if anyone's apologising it should be Craig bloody Harvey!
Marcus: He shouldn't be able to do this...
Iqbal: Well he has and we can't turn the clocks back...we have a burnt down club...
Marcus: Yeah but the insurance will cover surely?
Iqbal: Some of it, but we haven't got enough to do it back up just him Harvey to go doing it again...that man wants our club and he doesnt care what he has to do to get it...
Sanjita: What are you saying babe?
Iqbal: I can do without the stress, what with the baby and all... I'm selling up...
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
Val enters the pub and sits down beside Leah who is already seated, having a drink. It's clear they don't really approve of each other.
Leah: Val
Val: Leah
Val sits down. Leah looks down at her, as if it say "why am i sitting with you?" Nick enters the pub with a pile of folders and a breifcase under his arm, looking flustered.
Nick: Hi ladies, can I get you both a drink?
Leah: Cut to the chase Nick, what's this all about?
Nick sits down opposite them in the booth, putting his folders down.
Nick: Well as you know dad's got this new lesuire complex in the pipeline...
Val: Don't we just know it :rolleyes:
Nick: Dad's given me the responsibility of assigning jobs, we want locals working there, and well you're names have come up...
Leah: Work? I don't work...
Nick: Not even as the main fintess instructor at the gym? I thought that was your thing, and well I thought you'd want something to do with your time...
Leah: Hmm, I suppose I could be persauded...
Val: And what about me?
Nick: Well after all your years at the salon...and the fact that you lost your job at the bingo hall... we want you to run the salon and beauty salon, if that's okay?
Val: Really!? You joking me!?
Nick: No, you're the best hair cutter this side of Devon...
Val: Wow! I'm dead chuffed! I'll get drinks to seal the deal!
Val runs off towards the bar, an excited look on her face.
Nick: So then, what am I going to have to do to persaude you?
Leah: Dya know what? Stuff the persuasion's I'll take it, need my own independance...
Nick: Great! One problem though..Craig...
Leah: What about him?
Nick: Well it's no secret he doesn't like us Taylors, will he be ok you working for us?
Leah: He'll have to be ok, becuase I want to... so then when do I start? :D
mmm wonder what Craig will say.. I know Leah is saying she is independant but I think he has a lot more hold on her than she realises
Craig isn't going to be a happy bunny is he! I can foresee trouble ahead.
glad they all got out the fire ok.
It was really sweet the scene between Val and the girls.
INT: RED RUM PUB UPSTAIRS FLAT- Day
Hayley is sitting in the sofa, waiting for her money. She sits, patting her stomach smugly. Amy and Patrick walk in..
Patrick: This is immoral..
Hayley: I'm just taking the money which is on offer. Nothing wrong with that.
Patrick: Well, you haven't said no!
Hayley: And neither would you have!
Patrick: Well... I've never been pregnant!
Hayley: Thank the lord for that...
Amy walks over to Hayley, and gives her the money. She flicks through the buddle of notes..
Hayley: Hmm... Thats great..
Hayley pats her stomach again, trying to annoy Amy..
Hayley: Its like all my Christmases have come at once...
INT: HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE- Day
Leah goes gome, and talks to Craig in the kitchen...
Leah: I've got myself a new job, Craig!
Craig: Oh right... Where abouts?
Leah: With the Taylors, at their new complex...
Craig: Oh no you dont..
Leah: Excuse me?!
Craig: You can't work for them!
Leah: And why not?!
Craig: They're the enemy! Taking all the tourists, and the money..
Leah: They're what made this village. They put it on the map. I wanted a job, and i've got one, and like hell i'm turning it down!
Leah stands tall and confident.
Leah: I need to get out there and meet people. Have a chat with people i've never seen before... I need to have a life. I can't stay around here like some boring housewife like Mandy did. I refuse, point blank! I'm not your slave, and i wont be treated like one.
Leah kicks her heel, and begins to walk away..
Leah: So come on, get your gladrags on, we're celebrating!
INT. IQBAL & MARCUS' FLAT - DAY
Iqbal: I can do without the stress, what with the baby and all... I'm selling up...
Marcus: No way dad! You can't!
Iqbal: I'm sorry Marcus, but I don't want it anymore, it was a mad idea all along, I've never known the first thing about running a nightclub...
Marcus: Yeh and what about me!? I have half shares in the place!
Iqbal: Yesterday you were all too ken to hand it over to Craig...
Marcus: Yeah well it's a matter of prinicipal, he can't just set fire to people's livelyhoods and expect them to sell up!
Iqbal: Yes! Yes he can! That man is dangerous, and I for one don't want to get in the way of him!
Marcus: Coward!
Iqbal: And so what if I am!? The safety of me and my family come before some silly nightlcub...just sell up Marcus and enjoy the money...
Marcus: This is just wrong...
Iqbal: Yes, it is, but there's nothing we can do now... Craig has won...
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
The pub is busy, with the usual Saturday Night rush. Natasha walks into the pub, and the mood instantly turns dull. She walks to the bar, where Patrick is acting funny with her.
Patrick: Erm...Tasha...didn't expect you up and about so soon...
Natasha looks round, many people are staring at her, there is an awkard atmosphere in the pub. She turns around and adresses the pub.
Natasha: What's your problem eh!? Don't know how to act around a rape victim!?
Patrick looks down at the floor, unable to make eye contact with her...
Natasha: It's nothing to be ashamed of you know! If anyone should be ashamed of themselves it should be the monster that did this to me...and the others!
Kash and Andonis look uncomfortable at this, unsure where to look...
Natasha: I tell you all now, whoever is responsible for this is going to pay! Sooner or later I'm going to remember who did this...
Kevin Mitchell and his yobby friends, who are sat around the corner, secretly drinking a bottle of Vodka from the shops, look at each other uncomfortably.
Natasha: And when I do, I'll make sure they go down for life!
The Bachelor Boys look into their pints, unsure of what to do or say...
EXT. BAYMOORE STREETS - NIGHT
Craig is walking home from the garage. He sees the "for sale" sign being put up. He laughs smugly, picking up his phone he dials the number on the sign.
Craig: Hello, yeah i'm intrested in making an offer on the Marbal Nightclub, yeah I'll hold...
Craig has a smug smile on his face as he continues walking home.
EXT. NATASHA'S FLAT - NIGHT
Natasha is walking home, outraged by the audacity of the punters at the Red Rum. A dark figure begins to follow her, wearing a hoody, swinging a cricket bat in their hand.
INT. NATASHA'S FLAT - NIGHT
The scene cuts to Natasha closing her front door, she throws her coat onto the sofa in a rage, switches on the kettle and then the television.
There is a knock at the door. Natasha sits down and ignores it. They knock again, this time more violently. Natasha gets up, slightly worried.
Natasha puts the chain on the door before opening it. The hooded man smashes the chain in half with the baseball bat.
Natasha immediatley tries to slam the door shut, but he pushes it open, flinging Natasha onto the floor, she breaths heavily, scared for her life...
:eek:
OMG !!
Is this the rapist again, after Natasha, wanting to silence her forever?! Oh gawd, I hope shes ok.
And I hope Craig doesn't get his hands on the club - let someone else have it (Jon as a gift for Mandy or something equally evillll)
INT. TORBAY SHOPS - DAY
A montage of Hayley walking around shops, trying on and buying clothes. As she leaves each shop, she is carrying more and more bags.
INTERCUT:
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - NIGHT
Hayley struggles up the stairs, with about 30 shopping bags in her hands. Patrick walks out onto the landing to see what the noise is about.
Patrick: What on earth?
Hayley: Help me with some of these bags before my arms drop off!
Patrick takes some of the bags and has a nose inside of them.
Patrick: What's in all these bags?
Hayley: Just the essentials, you know clothes, shoes...
Patrick: 30 Bags!?
The pair walk into the living room, where Amy is sitting on the sofa.
Amy: Where have you been?
Hayley: Shopping of course!
Amy looks at the amount of shopping bags with horror.
Amy: How much you have bloody spent?
Hayley: About 7 grand of it...
Amy: Oh, Jesus Christ!
Hayley: What!?
Patrick: That money was supposed to go towards the future..
Hayley: The money goes where I see fit best... besides clothes are the future :D
Hayley grabs the bags off Patrick and walks confidently towards her room. Amy and Patrick look at each other, clearly unimpressed.
Thats a sounds like a woman speaking. I bet she had a good shop. Hope ANtashas going to be OK.
INT. NATASHA'S FLAT - NIGHT
Natasha puts the chain on the door before opening it. The hooded man smashes the chain in half with the baseball bat.
Natasha immediatley tries to slam the door shut, but he pushes it open, flinging Natasha onto the floor, she breaths heavily, scared for her life...
Natasha crawls backwards, nervously. The man lurches towards her. She puts her hand behind her, trying to grab whatever she can to throw at him.
The man grabs her arm away from the table, the pair tussle and fight on the floor.
Natasha: Get off me you *******!
The man tries to swing the bat towards her, but she bites his arm. He grunts in pain, but smashes her head against the corner of the table.
Natasha becomes dizzy, but the knock on the head triggers flashbacks of the night of her rape. Blurry images of the rapist, but she can't make who it is...
The man begins to throttle her. She sniffs, smells his aftershave, and recognises it.
She kicks him in the groin and pulls off his balaclava.
Natasha: Oh god! It's you!
Natasha gets up, nervously, the man is still rolling around on the floor in pain. She holds her hands against her mouth in shock and nervously runs out of the flat...
:eek: OMG Who is it!!! I need to know who it is?!
thats a heck of a cliffhanger, who is it, at least she realised it was the same man !!!.
DaVeyWaVey
11-02-2007, 17:18
Wow! What a cliffhanger!! :eek: I need to know who the rapist is now! Atleast Natasha knows who it is now...it looks like the rapist's time could be up.
I hope Craig doesn't get his hands on Marbal nightclub!
EXT: BAYMOORE STREETS- Night
Natasha runs onto the street in histerics, screaming for help. Sanjita and Iqbal run over..
Sanjita: Nat, whats wrong?! Nat!!
Natasha: I... I know who attacked me!! I know who the rapist is!
Natasha sobs into her hands..
Sanjita: In there?! Are they in your flat?!
Natasha nods..
Iqbal: I'll go have a look..
Iqbal runs into the shadows. Sanjita comforts her. After a few minutes...
Sanjita: There can't be anyone there anymore... Come on, lets go back on up and calm you down...
They walk into the block of flats. The rapist sees them, and runs off...
INT: NATASHA'S FLAT- Night
Sanjita is sitting with Natasha. Iqbal gets her a drink, and passes it to her...
Natasha: I was walking along the street. I remember hearing footsteps behind, so i ran back here. There was a man with a baseball bat, he came after me... He tried to get in..
Natasha begins to cry. She wipes her eyes, and carries on...
Natasha: He got in here, i wasn't strong enough to stop him. And he pushed me, and he fell and... And thats when i saw him..
Sanjita: Saw who? Who was it?
Natasha: And i mean... I wasn't sure to start with.. How could it be him?! But now i'm certain... I pulled his balaclava off, and saw him face-to-face... It all makes sense now...
Sanjita: Who, Natasha?!
Natasha: Kash. Kash is the rapist.
Sanjita looks up at Iqbal, and then back at Natasha, gob-smacked..
:eek:
Kash??!!! The rapist is Kash?!! OMG I wasn't expecting that!!!
I knew it!!! I was talking about this and he was on the top of my short list... OMG!! :eek::eek::eek::eek:
great stuff Bry and Abi
INT: NATASHA'S FLAT- NIGHT
Sanjita: Who, Natasha?!
Natasha: Kash. Kash is the rapist.
Sanjita looks up at Iqbal, and then back at Natasha, gob-smacked. Iqbal runs his hands trough his hair, unable to comprehend what he has just heard.
Sanjita: No...no...it couldn't be...
Natasha: Yes Sanjita, it could...he tried to attack me just, and he was wearing the same aftershave that I smelt that night!
Sanjita: But...why? Why would he?
Natasha: Because you two have split up...and Emma, becuase of what happened between her and Andonis..
Sanjita: Yeah but you! What's the motive for you!?
Natasha: Look, Sanjita, I know who I saw and it was Kash!
Sanjita: I just...can't believe he would have done this!
Natasha: Well you better had believe it, becuase it's the truth...
Iqbal: Right, well we call the police then...
Natasha grabs the phone off Iqbal.
Natasha: No, we get revenge in our own way...
Natasha has a look of deadly seriousness on her face.
INT. NATASHA'S FLAT - NIGHT
Natasha: No, we get revenge in our own way...
Natasha has a look of deadly seriousness on her face. She searches the phone book and dials Emma's number.
Natasha: Hi...Emma....it's Natasha, can you come around to Sanjita's...it's very important...ok...bye
Natasha puts the phone down. Sanjita and Iqbal look at her confused.
Sanjita: Do you think it's wise telling her about this?
Natasha: She has a right to know who did this to her!
Sanjita: I'm not so sure Tash... she's vulnerable as it is, she's with Tom now, trying to rebuild her confidence, this could knock it all down again...
Natasha: All three of us need to decide what we do to make that ******* pay!
Iqbal: The only way to deal with this is via the police! Get him arrested for his crimes!
Natasha: No way! Have to relive the ordeal in a court room!? And then for him to sent to prison for sky tv and a pool table!? He needs to pay and realise he can't get away with what's done!
Sanjita: And what do you propose we do!?
Natasha: (Devious) Leave it to Emma, as you say she's young, unstable... this could tip her over the edge, who knows who she will react...but let her do our dirty work...
Natasha.. you evil evil cow!!! you are just using a innocent girl here:angry::angry:
INT: NATASHA'S FLAT- Night
Natasha: (Devious) Leave it to Emma, as you say she's young, unstable... this could tip her over the edge, who knows who she will react...but let her do our dirty work...
Sanjita: But, you can't do that! You said yourself, shes young... You can't push her into something like that!
Emma walks in the door..
Emma: Whats going on... Can't make who do what?!
Natasha: Emma!
Sanjita glares at Natasha..
Natasha: I was attacked tonight...
Emma: What?! But... Did they..
Sanjita: I'll deal with this, Tasha.... Thing is, Emma... She thinks she knows who it was..
Emma: Oh my God, really?! Have you called the police?! I guess they'll need a statement, right? Is that why i'm here?
Natasha: Enough with the questions! It was Kash, ok?!
Emma is silent, shocked..
Natasha: Kash is the one who attacked me... And Kash is the one that raped you and Sanj...
Emma: But.. He... Have you called the police?!
Sanjita: Thats what i suggested...
Natasha: Course not! Dont you get what this means, Emma? Calling the police, will mean he gets away with it. He'll live his pathetic little life, in a cell, with other wierdos, not a care in the world. No responsibilities, nothing. Do you think thats what he deserves?! He attacked you, Emma... He broke you down, ripped off your shirt and raped you. And he had the guts to look you in the eyes, after it. And you both think i should call the police and let him get away with that?!
Emma looks her in the eyes, and breaks down. She runs out of the flat, in tears. Angry, and Shocked.
Sanjita: If she does anything to him. Anything at all. Then God help you, i'll kill ya. She doesn't deserve to go to prision because of your munipulation, no one does.
good woman Sanjita... go after Emma and stop her doing something stupid.. you are right, she doesn't deserve to go to prison for Natasha
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Hayley is sprawled over the sofa, watching daytime tv. Amy is trying to do the hovering. She basses the vacum into Hayley's feet.
Amy: Feet up!
Hayley: Watch it!
Amy: Shouldn't you be at college?
Hayley: Half term...
Amy switches off the vacum and gets her purse.
Amy: I tell you what, go and buy some baby clothes...
Hayley: You what!?
Amy: I want you to be active in the pregnancy, I don't want you to feel the baby is just mine...
Hayley: Why, guilty concscience?
Amy: No, it's just I thought you might like to do a bit of shopping for your little baby sister...
Hayley gives Amy a dirty look. Amy gets some money out of her wallet.
Amy: 300 quid, i'm sure you can get some good baby clothes from Mothercare or something with that...
Hayley: If I must :rolleyes:
Hayley walks off, a grin on her face as she rolls up the money and puts it in her shirt pocket.
INT. SINGH'S HOUSE - NIGHT
Kash is sat at the dinner table, doing the books. Andonis is sat watching some tv. There is a loud knock at the door.
Kash: Can you get that?
Andonis reluctantly gets up and opens the door to Emma.
Andonis: Emma?
Emma: Out of my way!
Emma barges past Emma, Andonis follows after her. Kash sees the scene unfolding and gets up. Emma walks into the kitchen, and grabs a knife of the drawyer.
Andonis: Emma what are you doing!?
Emma: What I have to!
Kash walks into the kitchen.
Kash: What on earth is all this commotion about!?
Emma walks towards Kash, with the knife aimed between his legs.
Emma: You're gonna pay for what you did to me, you rapist scumbag!
:eek: No Emma! Don't!!! Don't make a mistake you will regret for the rest of your life, doing Natasha's dirty work.
INT: TORBAY SHOPS- Day
Hayley walks into the Charity Shop, and picks up a bundle of baby clothes. She takes them to the till...
Lady: Quite a bunch of clothes you've got there!
Hayley: Well, duh, if i didn't want that amount, then i wouldn't be standing here waiting for you to bag them! :rolleyes: Now how much is that?
Lady: Lets call it... 20 pounds young lady?
Hayley throws a 20 pound note on the till, and picks up the bag of clothes. She leaves the shop, and crosses over to the Shoe Shop, with a smile on her face...
INT: SINGH'S HOUSE- Night
Emma walks towards Kash, with the knife aimed between his legs.
Emma: You're gonna pay for what you did to me, you rapist scumbag!
Kash: What the... Get off me you mad woman!
Andonis: What?! You called him a...
Emma: Rapist? Yep, heard it in one!
Kash: Get off me, you mad woman!
Emma: Me?! Mad?! I'd like to bloody think so! But no, its true. So just admit it!
Kash: You've made some kind of mistake...
Emma: Pfft... How did i guess you'd say that? How did i guess that you wouldn't be man enough to face the woman you raped?
Kash: I didn't do anything!
Emma pushes the knife hard against his skin...
Andonis: Emma, please... Put the knife down...
Emma: (Looks at Andonis) I can't...
Emma holds the knife hard in her hand, and begins to lunge it into him. The door swings open, and Sanjita runs in..
Sanjita: For God's sake Emma, no!
:eek::eek: Emma, put the knife down.. you will regret what you have done if you don't...
INT. SINGH'S HOUSE - NIGHT
Emma holds the knife hard in her hand, and begins to lunge it into him. The door swings open, and Sanjita runs in..
Sanjita: For God's sake Emma, no!
Emma is a quivering wreck, she turns to Sanjita, dazed.
Sanjita: Don't do it, it's not the way...
Emma: He has to pay Sanjita! For what did to us!
Sanjita: Stab him and you'll go to jail, where's the justice in that!?
Kash is shaking, the knife milimetres from him. Emma drops the knife, Sanjita kicks it out of the way. The police run into the kitchen.
Sanjita grabs hold of Emma who is an emotional wreck. Kash is a bag of nerves.
Kash: This girl tried to stab me! Arrest her!
Instead of going towards Emma, the police handcuff Kash, who is shocked at this turn in events.
Policeman: Kashmir Singh, I'm arresting you for the rapes of Emma Andrews, Sanjita Singh, and the attack of Natasha Jones, you do not have to say anything, but anything you do say may be taken down, and used against you in a court of law...
The police lead Kash out of the house, Andonis, Emma and Sanjita are left shocked.
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Amy is just finishing the cleaning, polishing the mantelpiece. Hayley comes in with a couple of bags of clothes, in clear white bags.
Amy: Get anything good?
Hayley shrugs her shoulder and throws the bags of clothes onto the floor. Amy picks them up and has a look at them with disgust.
Amy: What's all this eh? They're frayed, dirty and stink to high heaven!
Hayley: Well what did you expect from a charity shop?
Amy: A charity shop!? What the hell do you think you're playing at!?
Hayley: You told me get clothes, you didn't say where to get them from...
Amy: I was thinking Mothercare more than ruddy Oxfam!
Hayley: Well you should have said then shouldn't you!
Amy: I'm sick of you taking liberties missey!
Hayley: The sooner you realise that I want nothing to do with this little sprog, the better!
Amy: There's no point neglecting this baby! You might not want it, but face facts you've got it, that's what you get for being a dirty little whore!
Hayley slaps Amy around the face. Amy is shocked but slaps her back.
Hayley: You best start showing me some respect or you can kiss goodbye to this baby!
Hayley storms off, leaving Amy angered, yet worried.
Oh!!! wonder if Iqbal called the police, I am sure he did
Hayley is a cow... she is just plain evil, mind you, if Amy wants the baby, she should have brought the clothes
EXT: SINGH'S HOUSE- Night
Kash is being dragged out of the house by the policemen. They force him into the car. Natasha follows out, and puts her arm around Sanjita..
Natasha: He's getting what he deserves...
Sanjita smiles at Natasha, and walks down the street, getting some air to breathe.
Policeman: We're going to have a word with you 3 soon. Please dont go far.
Sanjita nods and walks off. Val approaches the scene, and walks over to Natasha..
Val: Whats going on? I saw the lights and...
Natasha: You thought you'd come see if you could get a glimpse?!
Val smiles, sheepishly. She looks into the car..
Val: Kash? What was Kash...
A look of realisation crosses her face....
Val: It was him, wasn't it?
Natasha nods..
Val: He was the scumbag that raped my daughter!! (Shouting) You ******* Kash... You ****ING *******!
INT: RED RUM PUB UPSTAIRS FLAT- Day
Hayley is in her bedroom, with 20 pound notes all over her bed. She flicks through it all, smiling. She opens the phone book, and flicks through the A pages. She dials a number..
Hayley: Hi, I just wanted to make an enquiry about the price?
She pauses, and looks towards the door, checking Patrick and Amy dont walk in...
Hayley: 3 Grand? If that's what it takes to get rid of the little sprog, then sure...
Hayley is going to abort!!! what an evil selfish cow.. surely she has to pay back all the money
OMG - shes not going to is she? Although will anyone know the situation - would they dare tell everyone that they paid her £30k to buy the baby from her...oo this could be interesting - although she is a selfish cow! Thinking only of the money and nothing besides :angry:
OMG - shes not going to is she? Although will anyone know the situation - would they dare tell everyone that they paid her £30k to buy the baby from her...oo this could be interesting - although she is a selfish cow! Thinking only of the money and nothing besides :angry:
Maybe not Em but this is her Dad she is taken money from.. although he will probably tell Amy she got what she deserved trying to buy a baby
OMG - shes not going to is she? Although will anyone know the situation - would they dare tell everyone that they paid her £30k to buy the baby from her...oo this could be interesting - although she is a selfish cow! Thinking only of the money and nothing besides :angry:
Maybe not Em but this is her Dad she is taken money from.. although he will probably tell Amy she got what she deserved trying to buy a baby
I think he will - he was against it from the start - hopefully this will actually make him see Hayley for the manipulative cow that she is
Are you joking.. he doesnt' even see her! I think that why she is a cow.. her mum sent her to Uk to find her dad and he doesn't give a toss
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Hayley is packing her college bag, lunch, books, and the wods of cash for the abortion. She leaves her room and walks into the lounge.
Hayley: Right then, I'm off...
Patrick: Best of luck love
Amy: You take it easy, don't go overdoing yourself okay?
Hayley: Yeah I will...look Amy I'm sorry about how I've been acting recently, it's just I'm scared of what's going to happen...
Amy: Don't worry, we'll both we there for you and the baby whenever you need us...
Hayley: Thanks Amy, it means a lot
Hayley leaves the flat. Patrick and Amy give her other an optimistic look. The scene cuts to Hayley, the fake smile removed from her face, she calls her friend.
Hayley: Yeah Caz, tell Jonesy I want be in Art today, got somewhere I need to be :D...
INT. PAIGNTON POLICE STATION - NIGHT
Kash is in the interview room, being interegated by the police.
DI: What connections do you have to Natasha Jones Mr Singh?
Kash: No comment
DI: What is your motive for assaulting her?
Kash: No comment
DI: Is it true that you entered her flat earlier on this evening?
Kash: (Tedious) No comment
DI: You have every right to say "no comment" Mr Singh, but it only makes you look more guilty, and when we do get the evidence to convict you, which we will, this wont look good against you in court...
Kash folds his arms and rolls his eyes. The scene cuts to James who is outside the interview room, pacing the coridoor. A policeman is standing guard at the door.
James: Just, let me go in there!
Policeman: I can't James sorry, you know I can't...
James: But that scumbag raped my daughter!
Policeman: And what good's you going in there eh? Getting done on an ABH charge, he's not worth it mate...
James: But I can't let him get away with doing that to my little girl! :angry:
Policeman: Just let them do what they have to, leave it in the police's hands...
James is clearly annoyed, the fate of Kash resting on police evidence.
James is clearly annoyed, the fate of Craig resting on police evidence.[/QUOTE]
should that say the fate of kash!!
James is clearly annoyed, the fate of Craig resting on police evidence.
should that say the fate of kash!![/quote]
It was just a typo.. I know Devon Seas sounds like it was written by the gods but Bry and Abi are only human :D
i know siobhan, i only meant it as a joke.
i know siobhan, i only meant it as a joke.
me too... It is clear that Bry is not a god :rotfl::rotfl:
i know siobhan, i only meant it as a joke.
me too... It is clear that Bry is not a god :rotfl::rotfl:
no but could we turn him into a saint for writing this and giving us something exciting to read every day.
DaVeyWaVey
15-02-2007, 18:06
:eek: Kash is the rapist! I never saw that one coming! I can't believe Natasha was actually thinking of manipulating Emma into getting justice in a different way besides the police! :eek:
Hayley is so devious, i love her character! :D
INT: TORBAY SPECIALIST ABORTION CLINC- Day
Hayley is sitting in the waiting room..
Hayley: (To the receptionist) Is this going to take much longer?
Receptionist: Sorry about the delay, the Doctor will be will you shortly :)
Hayley rolls her eyes, and turns away. She picks up a magazine, and flicks through it. It stops at a page about the bonds between Mother and Child. She throws it to the side...
She looks up, and catchs the eye of another woman..
Hayley: What are you looking at?
Woman: Nothing..
Hayley sees her eye her stomach, and turns away..
Nurse: Hayley? Could you come through now Hayley, the Doctor is ready for you
INT: PAIGNTON POLICE STATION - DAY
Andonis is pacing backwards and forwards in the waiting room. He goes back over to the desk..
Andonis: Is there anyway i can see my father quicker, please? He's been locked up all night!
Officer: Sorry, but procedure is procedure..
Andonis rolls his eyes, and mutters under his breath. A door opens, and Kash walks out. Andonis is clearly surprised, and confused..
Andonis: Dad! What... Why are you... But...
Kash: They let me out
Andonis: How come?!
Kash: Because they realised the truth. They dont have anything on me, but the lies of Natasha...
Andonis: But, i thought there was DNA and stuff?
Kash: They can't tell anything. Apparently the source has been tampered with, so it means they can't tell if its mine or not.
Andonis smiles, and they walk out. Kash with an evil smile on his face...
Oh my god.. It is not Kash.. It is Andonis.. I would bet on that!! sick if it is true.. he raped his mother and she is pregnant :sick::sick::sick:
great work as usual. have me on the edge of my seat. have no clue who done it now.
The source has been tampered with?! What does that mean? :confused:
So is it Kash, seeing as he is walking out of there with an evil smile on his face - wouldn't surprise me if it was still him, you know.....:hmm:
Is Hayley definitely going through with it then! :eek:
The source has been tampered with?! What does that mean? :confused:
So is it Kash, seeing as he is walking out of there with an evil smile on his face - wouldn't surprise me if it was still him, you know.....:hmm:
Is Hayley definitely going through with it then! :eek:
I dont' know what is going on.. tampered samples.. evil smiles.. Hayley at the clinic... come on Bry/abi.. we need more information
INT. IQBAL AND MARCUS' FLAT - DAY
Sanjita is sitting down, looking rather edgy, Iqbal hands her a cup of tea and sits down besides her.
Sanjita: I don't want one...
Iqbal: You need something to drink, you haven't had anything for days...
Sanjita: Is it any wonder!?
Iqbal: Look it's just as bad for me you know...
Sanjita: How can it be eh!? Were you raped!? Eh!?
Iqbal: No but I've found out it's my brother that's been doing the raping! How do you think It makes me feel!? I just can't believe it...
Sanjita: Well you better had, becuase that scumbag's raped me...and poor Emma...and he almost killed Tasha! I hope he gets sent down for life, for what he's done to us all!
Iqbal: The police have him now, everything's over now...
Sanjita: No Iqbal, it isn't (looks towards stomach) You realise that he is the father of my baby!?
Iqbal: Yeah but you were going to keep it regardless of the father, you said it shouldn't suffer becuase of what he did to you...
Sanjita: That was before I knew it was Kash... and before Kash realised everyone knew... I've tried so long to get away from him, and now...this just gives me another tie to him, another excuse for him to keep himself in my life...
Iqbal: If you don't want him to see the baby then it shouldn't matter...
Sanjita: (Emotional) But it does matter Iqbal! This changes everything...
INT: TORBAY SPECIALIST ABORTION CLINIC- DAY
Hayley is lying down on a bed, the doctor is sat on a chair, a clipboard in her hands.
Doctor: I can assure you Miss O Brian that this is a very simple procedure, and the risks of any lasting damage are extremely minimal...
Hayley: Look I hate to rush you doctor, but could we get on with it?
Doctor: The routine will be done under anasthetic, so you want feel a thing. Now...before I start are you sure this is what you want?
Hayley: Yes...
Doctor: No doubts? Becuase once I start...
Hayley: If I had doutbs I wouldn't be sat here now, the sooner you get it out of me, the better...
she is going to go through with it.. selfish cow :angry:
I had a feeling that she would go through with it actually.
DaVeyWaVey
16-02-2007, 17:44
I still think Kash is the rapist...i am thinking Adonis smiling is just a red herring, trying to make us think that it is him....:hmm:
I still think Kash is the rapist...i am thinking Adonis smiling is just a red herring, trying to make us think that it is him....:hmm:
In all honesty Andonis smiling is just a releif that his father is freed, theres nothing sinister in it. Honestly - all you lot with your theories lol!
EXT: NATASHA'S FLAT- Day
Natasha and Ruby are leaving the flat..
Ruby: I just can't beleive he could do that, to so many people. He's just not the type...
Natasha: I dont think any of us will understand it..
They look over to the shop, and see a commotion going on outside..
Ruby: What the hells going on over there?
They look at each other, confused, and walk over..
INT: COMMUNITY COLLEGE- Day
Hayley walks into the classroom, late, and sits at a desk...
Teacher: Hayley, you are late once again...
Hayley: (breathless) Sorry miss, i had a... an appointment..
The teacher notices she is pale, and breathless...
Teacher: Are you feeling ok, Hayley?
Hayley: I just feel... a bit... dizzy...
Her friends get up, and rally around her. The teacher walks over...
Teacher: Come on, up you get. Someone get her a glass of water, and would someone walk her to the common room? Sit down and take it easy in there, ok love?
Hayley gets up megrely...
Hayley: Dont worry about me... You all stay put... I'll take myself along there now :)
Hayley leaves the classroom, and smiles. She walks off to the Common Room, perfectly fine.
Ohhh you know what - I think Hayley is going to say that she miscarried rather than had an abortion - that way, they would feel so bad about her "losing" the baby that they won't ask for the £30k back.....:hmm: Devious little girl that one...
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - DAY
There is a knock at the front door. Val answers the door to Andonis, who is looking slightly nervous.
Andonis: Hi Val, is it okay if I speak to Emma?
Val: Not really, she's still shook up, thanks to you dad...
Andonis: I only come to see how she was, I worried about her...
Val: Yeah well you can take your worries and bugger off
Andonis: Pardon!?
Val: You heard me, dya think you family hasn't done enough damage to her as it it!? That girl has been trough hell in the past few months...
Andonis: I'm sorry...
Val: The sooner your father goes to jail, the better...
Andonis: He isn't going to Jail...
Val: Come again?
Andonis: The police have let him go, he's a free man.
Val eyes buldge out in suprise, her face turns to one of anger...
INT. SINGH & SON'S CONVINIANCE STORE - DAY
Kash is stacking some of the shelves, Natasha marches into the store, she Kash and stares at him in disbelief.
Natasha: What the hell are you doing here!?
Kash: This is my shop, where else would you expect me to be?
Natasha: In Jail! Where you belong you rapist *******!
Kash: Now wait a minute! The police have let me go...
Natasha: No...no way! They must have made a mistake...
Kash: No, I'm innocent...
Natasha: You tried to kill me earlier this week!
Kash: Can you prove it? Like you could prove the rapes?
Natasha slaps him around the face, infuriated.
Natasha: This is exactly why I didn't want to get the law involved! The only way to get justice is to do it my bloody self! You'd better watch you're back Kash! Because you're gonna pay for what you've done! You mark my words!
Natasha storms out of the shop. Kash is petrified...
INT. LESUIRE CENTRE - WINEBARHOLIDAY - Day
Tanya walks into the new winebar in the Lesuire Centre. She walks over to the Bar, and sees Michelle and Callumn getting to grips with the place..
Tanya: Great to see you guys getting sorted in this place!
Michelle: I know... I totally didn't expect any of this.
Callumn: Its a great oppotunity for the both of us to make a go of it.
Michelle: Working together as well, its perfect :)
Callumn: All day everyday :D
Callumn kisses her on the cheak. Tanya coughs quietly.
Tanya: As they say, the future is bright. Not just for Dad, but for all of us.
EXT: SINGH & SON'S CONVINIANCE STORE - DAY
Natasha walks out of the shop, fuming. Val runs over...
Val: Is it true!?
Natasha nods...
Val: But... How could they!? You saw him!
Natasha: I know, i know. We need to get everyone to rally around us..
Val: And drive him out of here? Hell bleedin' yeah!
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
The is packed with many of the local residents, who are making plackard and banners for their protest. Patrick walks in and sees the chaos that is going on.
Patrick: What the...?
Amy: Val's gathered everyone up, we're making banners for our protest...
Patrick looks around like everyone's lost the plot.
Patrick: Protest for what?
Amy: To make Kash pay...ha ha, pay, cash, that's a pun...
Amy nervously laughs, trying to amuse Patrick who is clearly angered at everyone hogging up his pub.
VaL: Come on everyone, get working on these, every minute we're not out on the street is another minute that rapist is breathing the same air as us!
Tom: Don't you think this a bit...extreme Val?
Val: No way! He raped my Emma, and poor Sanjita..
Natasha: And put me in a ruddy coma!
Romeo: Yeah but the police did let him go...
Natasha: I know what I saw, he did it, and as good as admitted it ealirier!
Chris: Yeah but innocent until...
Claire: Shut it Chris!
Val: Listen up everyone, we have to stand united here! We can't let that...monster get away with with he's done, it could just have easily been your wives...daughters..sisters...moms... if he's already raped people, what's stopping him doing it again!?
Some look guilty at questioning Val's motives.
Val: By the end of today we want this scumbag out of Baymoore!
Everyone cheers, as they grab their banners/plackards and head out onto the street.
DaVeyWaVey
18-02-2007, 14:28
Good stuff, this protest is definetly going to send Kash over the edge!
EXT. DEVON ROADS - DAY
James is driving home in his car. He sees two police cars speed past him, heading into the village. James is intrigued, yet worried what is going on.
INTERCUT:
EXT. SINGH & SON'S CONVINIANCE STORE - DAY
The scene cuts to the outside of Kash's shop where the protest is in full swing. Everyone is waving their banners and plackards in the air chanting phrases at a loud volume.
Crowd: Rapist Out! Rapist Out! Rapist Out!
Eggs are being thrown at the windows of the shop. The police cars pull up, and the police get out, trying to break up the crowds.
Moments later James car pulls up, he looks on at horror at the choas infront of him and casts Val a disproving look...
EXT: SINGH AND SON CONVINEANCE STORE- Day
James gets out of the car, and walks over to Val..
James: Val, you really can't do this?
Val: He's a bloody rapist!
James: Let the courts do their job...
Val: Screw the courts! They're the one which is letting him get away with this!
James: I can't let you do this though...
Val: Go on then, arrest me!
James: You can't make me do that Val!
They pair argue in the centre of the crowd. Sanjita comes out after hearing the commotion, and looks into the shop window. She sees Kash sitting on the floor of the shop, holding Mohammed back..
Sanjita: Mohammed! Someone, do something!
James walks over..
James: What?!
Sanjita: In there, Kash... He's got Mohammed...
EXT: SINGH AND SON CONVINEANCE STORE- Day
Sanjita bangs on the door in dispair...
Sanjita: Mohammed!! Let him go Kash!!
Iqbal: Dont do this, Sanjita. Leave it to James and the police...
Sanjita: I have to. He's my Son...
Mohammed struggles out of the way of Kash, and punchs him in the face. He runs to the door, and unbolts it. Kash runs forward, grabs Sanjita and drags her in, and slams the door behind her. The 3 of them stand, in silence.
Val: (From Outside) Let them out! You hear me Kash, we've got the police here, you better let them out right now!
Iqbal: (From outside)Sanjita!!
Kash snarls, and smiles at Sanjita..
Sanjita: I know this is hard for you Kash... No body would want to get caught... But you have to face up to what you've done...
Kash: Oh, do i?
Sanjita: You're only making this worse for yourself. Just let us go.
Kash: We're not going anywhere...
Mohammed: Listen to her!! You're going to go down for years and years!
Kash: No i'm not... But i tell you what... We are going somewhere...
Sanjita: Excuse me?
Kash: The only place left for us to go... To be together as a family... We've got to welcome it... Cause the only place we're going now is heaven...
Sanjita looks at Mohammed. They are both clearly terrified...
DaVeyWaVey
18-02-2007, 22:58
Oh dear, Kash has completely lost it! They have to get Mohammed and Sanjita out now!
My god.. kash really has lost the plot here... what is he going to do with them???
and Em, I agree with you.. Hayley is going to make this look like a miscarriage so she doesn't have to pay the money back
EXT: SINGH AND SON CONVINEANCE STORE- DAY
Kash: The only place left for us to go... To be together as a family... We've got to welcome it... Cause the only place we're going now is heaven...
Sanjita looks at Mohammed. They are both clearly terrified...
Sanjita: (Scared) I...I don't understand why? Why do this?
Kash: I'm saving my family... togetheer we shall go to a better place, free of these inhumane people and their sins!
Sanjita: What about you eh!? Rape is a sin!
Kash: So is adultery (tugs at Mohammed's Nike top) and so is materialism! Can't you see Sanjita!? How weh have become corrupted by this world!?
Sanjita: You're talking nonsence, let us go Kash...
Kash: No...I can't do that, I must take us all to a better place...to redeem ourselves...
Sanjita: And how do you propose to do that then eh!?
Sanjita sniffs the smell of petrol, she looks around and sees the floor and shelves covered in petrol.
Sanjita: Oh my god...
:eek::eek::eek: kash, you are mad!!! poor mohammed and Sanjita
INT. SINGH & SON'S CONVINIANCE STORE - DAY
Sanjita sniffs the smell of petrol, she looks around and sees the floor and shelves covered in petrol.
Sanjita: Oh my god...
Kash: It's the only way...
Sanjita: Please Kash I'm begging you...don't do this to us!
Sanjita is clearly distressed, Mohammed begins to cry, she holds him tightly. Kash has a mad look in his eyes.
Kash fumbles in his pocket and pulls out a box of matches. He lights a match.
Sanjita: No, Kash, don't you dare!
Sanjita lurches towards him and tackles him for it. They tussel, but Kash pushes Sanjita onto the floor.She tries to get up, but slips on the petrol. Kash throws the match into the distance.
The shop immeditaley goes up in flames. Sanjita grabs Mohammed, and the pair rush towards the shop window, they begin banging hard.
Kash: There's no escaping now Sanjita, it's inevitable...
Outside Val, Iqbal and the rest turn around when they hear the banging. They see Sanjita and Mohammed looking petrified, then see the flames behind them.
Val: Oh my god! There's a fire!
Iqbal: Quick, someone call the fire brigade! Now!
DaVeyWaVey
19-02-2007, 17:41
Oh my goodness! Kash has completely lost his marbles! Iqbal and Val have to get Sanjita and Mohammed out of there now...please post more soon, i need to know their fate!
INT: SINGH AND SON CONVINENCE STORE- Day
The flames spread across the shop, leaving the 3 coughing and spluttering for breath. Sanjita breaks away from Kash, and bangs on the windows in desperation. Kash holds onto Mohammed, tightly...
Mohammed: Mum!! Help!!
Sanjita: Let us out of here!! Someone, help us!!
She turns back to Kash...
Sanjita: Let go of him!!
Kash looks the other way, and closes his eyes, calmly. Mohammed looks at him, terrified. He whacks him in the face, and breaks free. He runs towards the door, and bangs on it. Sanjita and Mohammed are seperated by the flames..
Sanjita: Get out of here!
Mohammed: I can't... Its locked..
Sanjita cries into her hands. Mohammed braces himself, and smashes the glass on the door with his hands. He turns back to Sanjita:
Sanjita: Save yourself, Mohammed. Get out of here now!
Mohammed: I can't leave you here...
Mohammed battles with the flames, fighting against the pain. He briefly looks at Kash, who appears to be going in and out of conciousness... He runs through the flames, and grabs Sanjita. They fight back to the door..
Mohammed: Get out of here!!
Sanjita pushs him towards the door, and thrusts him out of the window. He turns around to help Sanjita.
She is being held at knife point by Kash, who is bringing her closer and closer to the flames...
DaVeyWaVey
19-02-2007, 22:52
Oh my goodness! This just gets better and better! What's going to happen to Sanjita now?! This is nail biting stuff..
INT: SINGH AND SON CONVINENCE SHOP- Day
Sanjita struggles away from Kash, with her arms and legs getting scornched by the flames. Iqbal runs to the window, and tries to reach in...
Iqbal: Let her go, Kash!
Kash: Heaven is the only place left for us...
Iqbal: So why have you put her through so much hell then?!
Kash is silent. His arms begin to peel, and redden in the flames. He doesn't flinch.
Iqbal: Shes not your wife anymore. She's not even part of your family. Just do the right thing, and let her go before you kill her!!
Kash is calm, not listening. Sanjita struggles, and looks at Iqbal, terrified.
Iqbal looses sight of the pair, through the flames. He pushes the door, trying to break it free. He hears murmurs inside the shop, of an unfamiliar voice. Val runs around the building...
Val: Its the Fire Brigade! They're getting in the backway...
Iqbal breaths a sigh of releif, and begins to walk away from the door, and around to the back. The camera pans inside, to see the flames reach the front wall, and to the hairsprays. Suddenly, there is a massive explosion. Iqbal is thrown away from the building, lying hard on his side.
But what about Kash and Sanjita?
DaVeyWaVey
19-02-2007, 23:05
:eek: Did the firemen get Sanjita out?! I hope they did! She has to survive!
:eek::eek::eek: what is going to happen?? I agree Davey.. nail biting stuff.. come on Sanjita escape... Kash is a nut job
fab work Bry and Abi.. but I need to know what has happened (and please beg EE for a job)
:eek:
What a nail biting few parts!! Blimey guys, what are you trying to do to us!!!!
More more more!!!
:eek:
What a nail biting few parts!! Blimey guys, what are you trying to do to us!!!!
More more more!!!
i'm still on the edge of my seat. had 4 days to catch up on. excellent as usual and i agree with siobhan about begging EE for a job.
INT: SINGH AND SON CONVINENCE SHOP- Day
Suddenly, there is a massive explosion. Iqbal is thrown away from the building, lying hard on his side.
The fire fighters are thrown back with the impact of the blaze, they grab Kash.
Kash: Get off me! I have to go! Don't touch me, my time has come!
Despite his protests, the firemen drag him out the back entrance. Sanjita is lying on the floor, severly injured. Iqbal gets up from the floor outside, and reaches in for Sanjita.
Iqbal: Sanjita! Come on! You've got to get out of here
Sanjita raisly her head slightly, clearly disorientated.
Iqbal: Here grab my hand...
Sanjita grabs hold of Iqbal's hand as he pulls her out trough the windowframe. Iqbal carries her trough the crowds, who make way. He lays her down on the floor.
Iqbal: It's alright, you're safe now... you're safe babe...
Sanjita closes her eyes.
Iqbal: Sanjita?... Sanjita!?
Sanjita shakes her, and slaps her cheaks. She is clearly unconcious. The ambulance finally arrives at the scene.
Iqbal: Quick! Over here! She's unconcious!
The parademics rush over with a stretcher.
Parademic: What's her name?
Iqbal: Sanjita?
Parademic 2: Hi Sanjita, can you hear me?
Iqbal: She's unconcious, of course she can't bloody hear you!
The parademics get her onto a strecther and wheel her into the ambulance, Iqbal follows nervously.
Iqbal: You have to save her, she's pregnant, hurry...there's no time to waste!
The parademics close the doors to the ambulance and speed off.
INT. BAYMOORE LESUIRE CENTRE - DAY
Val returns to the salon at the new lesuire centre, flustered due to the events at the shop. Tanya is sat down waiting for her.
Tanya: Late, and it's only the first day, you don't want to be making a habit of this Val...
Val: Sanjita Singh has just been taken to hospital, so shoot me :rolleyes:
Tanya: Oh, no, I'm sorry, is she okay?
Val: How should I know, I've had to come to work... what with it being the first day and all...
Tanya: Look Val, you clearly have some sort of problem with me, so spill, what is it?
Val: It's just...well there was a time when I was the boss of you, and now it's the other way round, I don't want you looking over my shoulder every five seconds...it's bad enough that you burnt down my old buisness....
Tanya: That was an accident Val...and I'm always going to be sorry for it...
Val rolls her eyes, clearly not intrested.
Tanya: Look Val I just want us to get on, and put all that behind us, we used to be good friends, so why all this eh?
Val shrugs her shoulders.
Tanya: If this is going to work we all have to work as a team, you're a good woman Val, don't spoil this oppurtunity for the sake of stuborness...what do you say?
Val: I suppose I can forgive and forget...
Tanya: That's brilliant! :D Look I'll pop the kettle on, make us a cuppa, and then...you can do my nails... after all tonights the big night :D
DaVeyWaVey
20-02-2007, 18:33
Oh my goodness! :eek: I really hope Sanjita pulls through, she just has too! This is fantastic stuff! :clap:
OOooohhh I get the feeling theres going to be heart break in store for Iqbal. Whats going to happen to Kash now?!
Great stuff Bry
INT; BAYMOORE LEISURE CENTRE- Day
Richard is in the main entrance, in front of all of the staff...
Richard: Its taken a long battle to get to where we are today..
Val: You can say!
Richard: But it will make or break Baymoore. Out with the old, and in with the new. I want everything to be perfect tonight, for the Great Opening..
Val suddenly looks slightly saddened, Tanya smiles at her gently..
Richard: We all know whats happened in the main village, with the Singhs... But we need to put on a smile, and make tonight a success.
He holds up his glass of Champagne.
Richard: To Baymoore!
They all toast the Leisure Centre, smiling.
EXT: SINGH AND SON CONVINEANCE STORE- Day
Ruby and Marcus are trying to calm Mohammed down, and keep him sitting down quietly...
Ruby: The Docs are going to want to check you out, you can't go anywhere just yet!
Mohammed: But what about Mum!
Ruby: She'll be ok... She has to be...
A paramedic comes over, and checks out his arms..
Paramedic: Some nasty cuts you've got there. We're going to have to take you to the hospital for Smoke Inhalation, and to get some stiches on those...
They walk to the ambulance, slowly. Kash is taken through the crowds on a trolley, towards the other ambulance. His eyes are open, and ablaze. The crowd are shouting at him.
Iqbal walks over to the trolley, and leans over it, as the Paramedics prepare the Ambulance..
Iqbal: If something happens to her..
Kash: (Distant) We'll all be safe soon..
Iqbal: Are you listening to me?! If something happens to her... I swear, i'll ****ing kill you!
DaVeyWaVey
20-02-2007, 23:19
Oh my! Iqbal is getting very angry! Kash better watch out!
Oh my god.. I hope Sanjita is going to be safe.. Kash is still clearly mad.. I need more Bry/Abi.. I need more!!!!
INT. KYLE'S FLAT - DAY
Ruby and Kyle are lying in bed. Ruby seems in a word of her own.
Kyle: How about a repeat performance? :D
Ruby: No Kyle...It wouldn't seem right, what with mom and all that...
Kyle: Look babe, I'm sure she's going to be alright now...there's no point in threating over it, she's in the doctors' capable hands...
Ruby sighs, Kyle wraps his arms around her.
Kyle: I'm so glad you weren't in that fire...
Ruby: Would you have missed me?
Kyle: Yeah I suppose so...funyn aint it? Two fires in the space of a month....and how says life in Devon is peaceful?
Ruby: And both being Singh buisnesses, the insurance company will start suspecting something...
Kyle: What's going to happen to the club now?
Ruby: It's up for sale...
Kyle: Hmmm...Intresting....
Ruby: (Unsure) You're not thinking of buying it...are you?
Kyle: Never say never Rubes, sounds like an intresting buisness oppurtunity....
:rotfl::rotfl::rotfl: kyle is going to buy the club!! talk about a small fish in a big pond.. Craig will use him as bait for the prahanas
INT. BAYMOORE LESUIRE CENTRE - NIGHT
The opening night of the new Lesuire Centre. The centre is decorated out for the ocassion, with everyone dressed smartly. Richard, Hilary, Nick & Tanya greets guests as they arrive.
Jared and Lauren walk into the centre, smiles on their faces.
Tanya: What the hell are they doing here?
Richard: God knows, but they wont be stopping for long.
Richard walks over to the pair, who are exchanging pleasantries some mutal aquaitances.
Richard: I don't recall your names on the guest list
Jared: How observant of you Richard, they aren't...
Richard: Look, I don't know what you think you're doing here, but I wont have you all ruining our big opening night...
Jared: Oh come on Richard, it's only fair that as your main competitor I see what's on offer to MY customers... all in the sake of friendly rivalry of course...
There is clearly resentment between the pair.
Richard: (Smug) Well I suppose you can stay, see first hand the buisness that is going to run your shoddy little empire into the ground...
Jared: Oh Hardly...
Richard: I would say enjoy your evening, but I wouldn't mean it...oh and lay off the champagne, it's wasted on the likes of you Ashworths...
Richard walks off feeling he has won. Lauren sees Tanya laughing and joking with some guests.
Lauren: God look at that tart, acting all happy...just weeks after splitting with Will...god these ruddy Taylors make my blood boil...
Jared: Don't worry, we haven't come here tonight to stay quiet and take this ****...it's about time we dealt some of it out...
Jared has a sinister look on his face. This man means buisness
DaVeyWaVey
21-02-2007, 17:48
I wonder what Jared is going to do....:hmm:
INT: TORBAY COMMUNITY HOSPITAL- Day
Iqbal is sitting at Sanjitas bedside. She is concious, but weary and tired. The Doctor walks in..
Doctor: Sorry to disturb you, Sanjita..
Sanjita: Thats ok...
Doctor: I've got some bad news
Iqbal: What?!
Doctor: I'm afraid that the ultrasound has confirmed that you have miscarriaged. I'm sorry to tell you, but your baby has died...
Sanjita turns her head, and lies down, facing away from Iqbal. Iqbal doesn't know how to react to the news...
DaVeyWaVey
21-02-2007, 22:24
Oh no! Poor Sanjita! That's awful..:(
INT: BAYMOORE LEISURE CENTRE- Day
Richard is standing at the reception area, on the specially set up stage area. The guests and staff are standing in front of him..
Richard: Thank you for listening to my brief introduction to, what i'm sure you'll agree, the biggest asset this town has seen in many a year. Can i now hand over to Tanya Taylor, Manger of the Leisure Centre.
The crowd applause accordingly, and Richard leaves the stage. Tanya moves forward to the mic. She sees Lauren at the side of the crowd, but rolls her eyes, and ignores her.
Tanya: Thank you everyone. This project has taken a lot of work and effort to bring to you today, however i'm sure you'll agree that this has been worthwhile. What you now have is a classy centre, to suit everyones need. From the gym, to the bars, they'll be something that everyone in this community can enjoy. As well as this, it is sure to attract more tourism to the area. I'm sure that just from looking around you, the benefits are more than apparent
She flashes a text-book smile..
Tanya: Are there any questions?
Lauren puts her hand up. Tanya reluctantly erges her to talk..
Lauren: Yeah, i have a question... Are you going to be sleeping with some more women in the future?
Everyone gasps, and looks at Tanya in shock..
Tanya: Well... I... Dont know... I think you've...erm...
Richard walks back onto the stage..
Richard: I dont know who the hell you think you are, but i can assure you that you are more than mistaken. I think this is the perfect time to demonstrate to the crowd the excellent Security we have here..
Lauren interupts..
Lauren: Mistaken, am i? Oh, i think you'll find that its you who is mistaken. Thinking Tanya was straight.... Thinking she loved her husband... She slept with me, didn't she tell you? She cheated on her boyfriend, my brother, with me, cause shes a desperate slag
Richard: I.. I think you..
Tanya: (interupts) Yeah, i must have been desperate to go with you...
Everyone looks at Tanya, shocked, as she obviously confirms what lauren says. She goes red, as she realises her admition
Go on Tanya - act like its no big deal and who cares - makes no difference to who you are and you know the Ashworths are just trying to get one over on you! Lauren was the one who came on to you - ruined your relationship with Will - don't let them beat you!
So sad that Sanjita miscarried - is she totally out of the woods now? Will this affect her relationship with Iqbal seeing as they were unsure whether the baby was his or the rapists (now known to be Kash of course)
Great stuff guys
Poor Sanjita..at least she is alive.. for her own piece of mind, I hope she does a DNA test on the fetus to show it was Kash's and not Iqbal.
INT. TORBAY COMMUNITY HOSPITAL - DAY
The doctor leaves. Sanjita stares into space, Iqbal tries to hug her but she shakes him off.
Sanjita: Don't touch me!
Iqbal: I'm so sorry...
Sanjta: Why? I'm not...
Iqbal: Sanjita!
Sanjita: It was a rapists baby Iqbal! I never wanted it... this is a blessing....
Iqbal: Don't say that!
Sanjita: Well it's true! I couldn't bring up a child that could have been...his...
Iqbal: I can't believe you're being so...cold...it was a human life San'!
Sanjita: It was a ruddy embryo Iqbal! Give it a rest!
Iqbal: I'm gonna blame this on the shock... I think I'd best leave you to think about what you've just said!
Iqbal begins to leave, in a mood. Mohammed enters, bruises and cuts on his face. Iqbal and Sanjita both look at him, concerned.
INT. BAYMOORE LESUIRE CENTRE - NIGHT
Tanya: (interupts) Yeah, i must have been desperate to go with you...
Everyone looks at Tanya, shocked, as she obviously confirms what lauren says. She goes red, as she realises her admition.
Tanya: I mean...I mean...
Lauren: Don't bother denying it now Tanya, you've as good as admitted it..they now know what a roaring dyke you really are...
Tanya: I am not! (To Everyone) It was a mistake! I swear! A foolish mistake!
The crowd begins to mutter between themselves. Tanya starts to panic.
Lauren: Not so smug now are you Tanya?
Tanya: How could you do this!?
Lauren: Quiet easily... you Taylors are scum. and the sooner this pathetic little community realise it the better...
Callumn comes over and grabs hold of her, trying to force her to leave.
Callumn: I think you'd better go...
Lauren eyes up Callumn's body and gives him a saucy look.
Lauren: You can man handle me anytime gorgeous :p
Richard: Get the hell out of here! The both of you!
Jared: Come on Lauren, we've done what we came to do...
The pair leave, with smug smiles on their faces. Richard is left fuming, Tanya is shaking nervously as everyone stares at her. From the other end of the room Hilary is lapping up every second of it...
DaVeyWaVey
22-02-2007, 19:03
A great scene! I wonder how the whole of Baymoore will react by the news that Tanya slept with Lauren!
INT: TORBAY COMMUNITY HOSPITAL
Mohammed is sitting in the hospital room with Sanjita and Kash. Sanjita is sitting up, but still looks weary.
Sanjita: I’m just so pleased that you are ok. I just think about what could have happened and..
Mohammed: Look at me, I’m fine. Don’t worry about me, Mum, think about yourself :)
Iqbal: For a change!
They laugh. Kash hobbles into the room, dressed and clinging onto his crutches…
Iqbal: What the…
Kash: I’ve been…
Iqbal: I don’t want to hear a ****ing word you have to say! You deserve to be locked up for what you’ve done! No… Worse… Much worse than that…
Kash: I’ve been discharged now… I just wanted to apologise for what I did the other day..
Sanjita: Too late Kash. Too bloody late!
Kash: I knew you wouldn’t listen to me… So I’ll take Mohammed and go..
Mohammed: What?!
Sanjita: Over my dead body!
Kash: Well… We all know it very nearly was!
Kash snarls at them, and leaves the room.
EXT: BAYMOORE LEISURE CENTRE- Day
Richard follows Jared outside…
Richard: I don’t know how you have the bottle to show your face around here..
Jared: Some of us have bravery and pride. Others don’t. Obviously you fall into the later :rolleyes:
Richard: You need to learn to keep your filthy nose out of my family and its business!
Jared: Richard, Richard Richard…
Jared moves forward. They are facing, head on…
Jared: You know what this is? Calm before the storm..
Richard: Excuse me?
Jared: When you least expect it, when everything looks nice and rosey, you are your pitiful empire will be crippled.
Richard: Pitiful empire? Have you seen this place?!
Jared: Cheap load of tack, that’s all this place is. I’ll never forget what you’ve done to my family, Richard. And sooner or later, the Taylors will pay the price.
come on.. who cares who tanya slept with.. it is nobodies business. Wonder how Will reacts when he finds that his sister has told everyone why he and tan split up?
the cheek of Kash.. acting like nothing happened and going to take Mohammed :angry:
These are from Bry, who is currently sitting in a field somewhere :p
INT. BAYMOORE LESUIRE CENTRE – NIGHT
Tanya is a nervous wreck. Nick approaches her, sits her down and hands her a drink.
Nick: Get this down you…shake off the nerves…
Tanya: I’m not a lesbian Nick, please…you’ve got to believe me…
Nick: It doesn’t matter Tan, we’ll all love you no matter what….
Tanya: No Nick! Listen…I’m not! I swear to you!
Tanya looks around and sees everyone staring at her, and talking about her.
Tanya: What!? Got a problem or something!? If so, talk to me about it instead of doing it behind my back!
The people start looking away from her, feeling slightly guilty.#
Tanya: Have known of you ever made a mistake when you’re drunk before!? Oh no…I’m sure you lot are a right bunch of angels…
Nick: Tanya…
Tanya: I’m no more lesbian that Val Andrews is a mute…
Val: Oh I say!
Amy: (To Val) At least being a chatterbox is normal…
Tanya: Dya know what!? Stuff the whole lot of you!
Tanya runs out of the club in tears, Nick follows after her. The crowd begin to feel ashamed of themselves….
INT. TORBAY COMMUNITY HOSPITAL – DAY
Sanjita: If you think I’m going to let you see him again you’ve got another thing coming!
Kash: Don’t be so unreasonable Sanjita! I have my rights!
Sanjita: Rights? How dare you! You gave up them rights the day you raped 3 innocent women!
Kash: Moments of madness! Doesn’t mean I can’t see my own son!
Sanjita: You tried to burn him to death! You’re never gonna see him again!
Kash: You bitch! How dare you cause a rift between me and my son!
Sanjita: No Kash, you’ve done that all by yourself. You’re tapped! And this is the last you’re ever gonna see of you’re kids!
In the background too men in white coats come up behind him.
Kash: No way! I’m an innocent man in the eyes of the law! I will fight you in the courts!
Sanjita: You might not be a criminal but you’re gonna be a sectioned nutter!
Kash looks confused, the man grab hold of him, he turns to face them, as they drag him away.
Kash: No! You can’t do this to me!
Sanjita: Just you watch us….
The men drag Kash out of the room, he struggles, but can not get free. He has an evil glare in his eyes.
Kash: I wont forget this! Dya hear me!? I’m not gonna let you win this easily!
The door closes as Kash is lead away to a mental institute. Sanjita and Iqbal brief a sigh of relief. The nightmare finally over.
INT. JENKINS MANOR – NIGHT
Tanya and Nick enter Jenkins Manor. Tanya has stopped crying. They walk into the living room where Richard is standing by the fireplace, a drink in his hand and an angry look on his face.
Nick: (To Tanya) I’ll just go put the kettle on for you Tan’…
Nick scurries off into the kitchen.
Richard: My daughter…a “lesbian”…
Tanya: Oh for god sake dad, not you aswell, I’ve had enough of it from the locals!
Richard: Oh forgive me for having an opinion on my daughter’s sudden change in sexuality!
Tanya: Oh don’t be so ridiculous dad, it’s not like that at all…
Richard: Well was she lying!?
Tanya: No…but it was a drunken mistake dad…
Richard: You sleep with a woman for heavens sake!
Tanya: So bloody what! It’s the 21st century dad, this kind of things happens all the time!
Richard: Not in my family it doesn’t!
Tanya: Oh listen to you, you old bigot!
Richard: How dare you!
Tanya: No how dare you! Going crazy over such trivial things! I can assure you that I’m not a “lesbian”, so I wont be bringing shame to you and the family…
Richard: It doesn’t change the fact that the whole family have been made a fool of tonight by the bloody Ashworths…because of you and your “experimenting”…
Tanya: Oh do you know what, I couldn’t care less about the bloody Ashworths! Who needs enemies when your own family are against ya! I’m going to bed!
Tanya storms out of the room, distraught at her father’s cruel words.
DaVeyWaVey
23-02-2007, 21:50
So Kash has been put into a mental institute..the best place for him...i wonder if he'll ever come back though? :hmm:
Richard is being so cruel to Tanya! He should forget about his rift with the Ashworths because he is pushing Tanya further away...
INT. BAYMOORE LESUIRE CENTRE (SALON) – DAY
Val and Amy are in the salon. Amy is sat down reading OK magazine, whilst Val is cutting her hair.
Val: So what’s the latest in the glossies then?
Amy: Ah nothing much, baldielocks Britney, Caprice in rehab…
Val: Boring! They should start reporting on the goings on around here…what about Tanya Taylor eh!? Never thought she’d be one to eat a furburger…
Tanya walks into the salon having heard all of it.
Tanya: You’d best remember who you work for Val, unless you fancy the sack…
Val: Erm…Tanya…
Tanya: Look Val, I know you’re one for a bit of gossip, but please… I’d rather not have my private life discussed at the dinner tables of Baymoore.
Val: Come on Tanya you can’t do…that…and expect it to pass without a few comments…
Tanya: It was a mistake Val…I was at a low because I missed Gary…
Val: You can’t have been that upset if you launched yourself onto that Lauren Ashworth…
Tanya: It was the other way around, she brought up the whole Gary thing and she offered a shoulder to cry on…
Amy: Amongst other things…
Tanya: Oh for heavens sake, what ever happened to hearing people out? I wish people who stop judging me for one stupid mistake! (Pause) I’m sick of having to justify what I did to everyone, you’ve clearly made up your mind that I’m some raving homosexual, so bog off the pair of you!
Tanya storms out of the salon in a huff. Val and Amy look at each other, amused.
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE – DAY
Natasha walks into the pub, Vicky is behind the bar.
Natasha: The usual please…
Vicky: Coming up, how are you…you know after all that’s been going on…
Natasha: I feel 100 times better know I know that phycho is in the nuthouse…
Vicky: At least now you can all move on…
Natasha: I don’t think I’ll ever be able to fully, you know…
Vicky: No..I suppose not, erm I noticed you’re back in Baymoore?
Natasha: Yeah well me and Kyle have split up…didn’t want a vegetable for a girlfriend…
Vicky: Yeah well that’s Kyle for you, shallow as a paddling pool… He’ll be on to the next tart by now…
Natasha: No, he’s not like that…
Vicky: You wanna bet, I thought you’d have got to know the real Kyle by now, he’s all charm on the outside, but deep down he’s a right *******…
Natasha: I’d like to think I meant more to him than that…Infact I’m gonna call around and try and make another go of it
Vicky: I don’t think that’s wise Tash…you’re setting yourself up for a fall…
Natasha: I doubt it…
Vicky: Fine, but on your head be it.
INT. KYLE’S FLAT – DAY
Ruby is sitting down, coming to terms with the news about Kash. Kyle hands her a drink and sits down beside her.
Ruby: I just can’t believe it… I mean all this…and now for him to be sent to the nuthouse…
Kyle: It’s the best place for him Rubes…
Ruby: Yeah I know…but more mom, and Mohammed, they’ve been trough so much…
Kyle: The main thing is you’re all safe now, I’m just glad he never did anything to you…
Ruby: Yeah well why would he, I’m not his “blood” daughter…
Kyle: I don’t know what I’d have done if you were killed…
Ruby: Don’t worry, I’m not going anywhere…
Kyle: Good
Ruby and Kyle kiss as he lowers her onto the sofa.
INT. JENKINS MANOR – NIGHT
Tanya returns to Jenkins Manor, worn out from the constant arguing. Richard comes to speak to her.
Richard: Tanya…
Tanya: Look, I’ve had enough of it all for one day, so if you want an argument you’re going to have to wait…
Richard: Actually I wanted to apologise…for what I said yesterday…
Tanya: The damage is done dad…
Richard: Yes, but I’ve had time to think about things, and well… I may have overreacted a bit …
Tanya: More than a bit…
Richard: If you say you’re not lesbian then I believe you…besides we can’t let the Ashworth’s tear this family apart…come here…
The pair hug and unite.
Richard: Oh by the way, you have a visitor…
Tanya: Who?
Tanya walks into the living room. A girl in her late teens is sat on the sofa a fag in her hand an alcopop in the other. A heap of pink suitcases piled up on the floor.
Charlie: Hi Auntie Tan! Long Time No See! :D
DaVeyWaVey
25-02-2007, 14:22
Natasha, don't try and get back with Kyle, he's not worth it! Vicky's right, she is setting herself up for a fall!
I'm glad Richard apologised to Tanya, and i can't wait to see the storylines in store for newcomer Charlie!
These lot are from me again now...
INT: KYLES FLAT- Day
Natasha walks up the stairs to Kyles flat. She stands in front of the door, and contemplates knocking. She knocks, and doesn't get an answer. She frowns, and knocks again. She shurgs, bends down, and picks up a key from underneath the doormat...
Natasha: Typical Kyle... Some people never change..
Natasha lets herself in, and walks blindly into the living room. She swears, as she sees Kyle and Ruby all over each other on the sofa...
INT: JENKINS MANOR- Day
Charlie downs her drink and stands up, and goes to give Tanya a hug. She stands back from her...
Tanya: What are you doing here?
Charlie: I needed somewhere to stay. And like, you've got this uber-huge house, so there must be room for one more, right?
Richard turns to Tanya
Richard: Who is this:
Tanya: My neice Gary's brothers daughter. I've barely ever met them...
Charlie: But we made a good impression when we did meet, didn't we? :D
Tanya: Last time i saw you, you were having your stomach pumped...
Charlie smiles..
Charlie: (Mutters) Good times, good times...
Tanya: Why are you here, anyway? Dont your parents want to know where you are?
Charlie: That would be a bit hard...
Tanya: You've not gone and runaway or something, have you?!
Charlie: Dont be stupid, i'm not a child. She's dead. My Mum- shes died.
INT: KYLES FLAT- Day
Natasha: What the ****..
Ruby: Tasha!
Ruby jumps up, just wearing her tights and bra. Kyle is topless, an grining. They walk over to her..
Ruby: Natasha, i...
Natasha slaps Kyle around the face
Natasha: How could you!?
Ruby: We..
Natasha: I'm not talking to you! Come on then, Kyle- how do you sleep at night?!
Kyle: Well, thanks to Ruby, not too much at all...:cool:
Natasha: How could you do this to me?!
Kyle: Lighten up, love!
Natasha: After everything thats happened, how could you?!
Natasha leaves the flat in tears, slamming the door behind her..
INT: JENKINS MANOR- Day
Tanya hugs Charlie tightly this time...
Tanya: I'm so sorry, Charlie, no one told me..
Charlie: It was a shock, but these things happen..
Tanya: No, come on, you dont have to be like that. What about your father?
Charlie: I haven't got on with him for ages. He acts like he doesn't give a damn about me anymore, so i dont give a damn about him either..
Tanya urges her to sit down..
Charlie: I just need time...
Tanya smiles at her, and nods..
Charlie: So is it ok if i stay?
Tanya: Of course it is :)
Tanya hugs her again. Charlie has a devious smile on her face...
mmmm I wonder what Charlie is up too.. she is not as innocent as she is making out!!!
Glad Tasha caught Kyle out. proves that Vicky was right about him all along
INT. IQBAL AND MARCUS' FLAT - NIGHT
Marcus and Ruby are sat down on the sofa watching TV. Iqbal walks into the flat on the phone.
Iqbal: Alright...yeah....well it's not ideal...I'll have to get back to you, okay...
Iqbal sits down beside them, clearly annoyed.
Marcus: Who was that dad?
Iqbal: The estate agents...our "gangster friend" is bidding 120 for the club...
Marcus: You what!? But it's worth much more than that!
Iqbal: It was...but now it's burnt no one wants to touch it...
Marcus: I'm sorry dad but if we are gonna sell it, it has to be for more than that and not to him....
Iqbal: Hey I never said it was ideal, but beggars cant be choosers...if no other offers turn up then we'll have to settle for that...
Marcus looks at his father, clearly unimpressed.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - Evening
Richard is watching News Night on TV. Hilary is reading the Property News and sees the Marbal nightclub up for sale.
Hilary: Richard...darling...how much do you love me?
Richard: Unconditionally...why?
Hilary: Would you buy me the club?
Richard: What club!?
Hilary: The Marbal Nightclub, it's on sale...
Richard: Don't be so dilly...
Hilary: Why not? It'd give me my own stability...
Richard: All the monies tied up in the lesuire centre at the moment darling...we just can't do it...
Hilary: (Determined) I'm sure there's a way...
INT: JENKINS MANOR- Day
Tanya is on the phone to Charlies Father...
Tanya: Dont worry, shes here, safe and well. She can stay for as long as she needs, thats no problems... Ok, speak soon!
Tanya hangs up the phone, contemplating the conversation. Charlie walks in...
Tanya: How could you not tell him?!
Charlie: What..?
Tanya: Your Dad. You've not even told him your here.
Charlie: I hate that man- why does he deserve the time of day?!
Tanya: He's your father, thats why!
Charlie: Its him that brought Mum to an early grave- i dont give a damn about him anymore!
Charlie storms out, annoyed.
mmmm what is Hilary up to wanting the club?? :searchme::searchme:
INT. HARVEY'S HOUSE - NIGHT
Craig is pacing the living room, on the phone to the agency. Leah enters the house mid conversation.
Craig: Yeah well I'm afriad that's not good enough! You assured me it would be satisfactory! Yeah well...thanks for nothing!
Craig slams the phone down as Leah walks into the room. He falls back in the chair, iritated.
Leah: What's up babe?
Craig: I've lost out!
Leah: What?
Craig: Ruddy Marbal! Someone has offered higher than me, and them idiots have excepted!
Leah: Oh well, there's always other ventures...
Craig: But I wanted that club! Honestly, I need some front for my territory...
Leah: Yeah well that's what you get for setting fire to people's buisness, your tricks have backfired on you...
Craig gets out and storms out of the house annoyed, slamming the front door behind him.
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
Charlie walks into the Red Rum, dressed in a low cut top and short skirt. She sits down on one of stools by the bar and gets out her purse.
Charlie: A vodka and coke please darlin'.
Amy turns around and gives Charlie a funny look, questioning her age.
Amy: When's your date of birth?
Charlie: What's it got to do with you?
Amy: You look underage to me...
Charlie: Oh get over yourself you sad act! I'm only asking for a Vodka and Coke, not friggin spirits!
Amy: I wont be spoken to like that in my own pub, now get out until you can bring some form of ID!
Charlie: Like I'm bovered... didn't wanna drink in this poxy pub anyways...
Amy laughs in disbelief at the brass on Charlie. Charlie begins to leave.
Hayley: I'll get you one...
Charlie: Sorry?
Hayley: A drink...
Charlie: Oh...erm thanks...but why?
Hayley: Anyone who speaks to that old cow like that deserves a drink on the house...
Charlie: Yeah well she was giving me beef... the name's Charlie...
Hayley: Hiya Charlie, I'm Hayle, You take a seat and I'll bring your drink over to you :D ...
Hayley goes off off to get Charlie a drink, a friendship in the making?
Natasha returns to Baymoore in tears, Patrick sees this and talks to her, the pair end up in a passionate embrace.
EXT: BAYMOORE STREETS- Day
Natasha is walking through the streets, in tears, after seeing Ruby and Kyle together in his flat. Patrick sees her and walks over..
Patrick: Natasha..?
Natasha turns away, not wanting to talk...
Patrick: Hey, come on, whats wrong?
Natasha cries into her hands. Patrick hugs her tightly..
Natasha: Its... Its Kyle..
Patrick: Why?! Whats he done to you?!
Natasha: Not to me.... To frickin' Ruby Singh! I saw them... You know... Together...
Natasha sobs into his shoulder...
Patrick: Come on, you can do much better than him, anyway..
Natasha looks up at him..
Patrick: Anyone who has you is a lucky man, take it from me.
Natasha smiles at him. She looks deeply into his eyes, and moves in for a kiss. Patrick is shocked, but the pair end up in a passionate embrace in the middle of the street, in the pouring rain...
EXT: BAYMOORE STREETS- Day
Natasha pulls away from Patrick, and wipes her mouth in disgust of herself..
Natasha: I can't do this...
Patrick: But you... You were the one that...
Natasha: I dont know what i was thinking... My minds all over the place...
Patrick: But there must be something there, for you to do it in the first place?!
Natasha: If we did this, then i'd be taking an even further step backwards...
Natasha runs off. She turns back to Patrick, and shouts...
Natasha: Go back to your wife, Patrick... I'm sorry...
Natasha is all over the place and charlie/hayley friendship I can see trouble ahead!!!
INT. NATASHA'S FLAT - DAY
Natasha unlocks the front door and runs into her bedroom, leaving the front door open. She begins to breath heavily, clearly upset. She opens her drawyers and begins throwing all her clothes on her bed.
Patrick: 'Tasha?
Patrick notices the front door is open, and cautiously walks into the house concerned. He goes into her bedroom, where she is stuffing clothes into a suitcase.
Patrick: 'Tasha, what you doing?
Natasha: Go away Patrick!
Patrick: Look, I'm sorry for what just happened...
Natasha: Not as sorry as I am! God! How could I be so bloody foolish!?
Patrick: Oh thanks...
Natasha: I mean after all that's happened, for me to kiss you... it's like my life has gone full circle...
Patrick: What on earth you on about?
Natasha: Don't you see Patrick!? I have no purpose here! No one likes me... the only friend I had was shagging my ex behind my back! I've been battered mentally and physically by that pyscho and everyone thinks I'm a marraige wrecking slut!
Patrick: Oh come on 'Tash...
Natasah: No Patrick, I've got nothing to stick around here for, I might aswell go back to my sister in Manchester...I'm packing my bags, and leaving...tonight...
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
Hayley and Charlie are sat in one of the booths, drinking Vodka shots. They are laughing and giggling, clearly drunk.
Hayley: So you gonna be coming to Torbay college?
Charlie: I dunno, I haven't really thought about it...
Hayley: Oh come on it'd be a laugh...
Charlie: I didn't really picture myself learning, just sponging off Aunty Tan...
Hayley: Typical Taylor...
Charlie: (Stern) Donagoon...
Hayley: Same thing...Right then, another round?
Charlie: Erm...I dunno..Aunty Tan would go mad...
Hayley: Oh come on! One more wont do any harm!
Charlie: Oh go on then! :D
Hayley goes off to get the drinks. Tanya walks into the pub looking flustered. She looks around and sees Charlie.
Tanya: Charlie!
Charlie: Aunty Tan...
Tanya: What the hell are you doing in here!?
Charlie: What does it look like I'm doing? Painting my bloody numbers? :rolleyes:
Tanya: Don't you get cheaky with me young lady!
Charlie: I am nearly 18! I'm not young!
Tanya: No but by the looks of it you're roaring drunk! Come on, get yourself back home! Now!
Charlie gets up, but falls back onto the table, dropping some glasses. She begins to giggle. Tanya grabs hold of her and drags her out of the pub. Charlie waves Hayley a childish goodbye, as if she was a naughty school child about to get punished. Hayley gestures for her to call her. Charlie knods.
INT: NATASHA'S FLAT- Day
Natasha carries on packing up her things into suitcases, whilst talking to Patrick..
Patrick: Tonight? Why so soon?
Natasha: What have i got to stick around for? I'm got no family, no friends... Since i came here, everything has become one huge mess..
Patrick: It can't have been all that bad?
Natasha: I came here to live by the sea, and get peace and quiet. Live the dream i had since i was a little girl. But fact is, the dream sucks. Its ruined my life, i can't just carry on pretending anymore.
Patrick: What next then? You're just shooting off into the sun?
Natasha: Manchester. Seems as good a place as any. My sister is up there, so thats more people then around here.
Patrick: Seems strange... After everything thats happened..
Natasha: Its in the past now. Everything moves on.
Patrick: Take care of yourself, right? Live life to the full- but take care of it!
Natasha: Dont worry, i will. Bye Patrick.
Patrick smiles, and leaves the flat. Natasha stares at the closed door for a moment, then shrugs her shoulders, and finishes packing
INT: JENKINS MANOR- Day
Tanya and Charlie walk back into the Manor, argueing in the hall..
Tanya: I just can't beleive you could do something like this! Underage drinking AND bringe drinking?!
Charlie: As if you didn't do it!
Tanya: We're not talking about me, are we?! You can't do this Charlie, not while you're around here.
Charlie: I cant do whatever i want!
Tanya: My house, my rules!
Charlie: Pity its not your house then, isn't it? :cool:
Tanya: I'm sorry Charlie, but this really isn't on. I know you've been through a lot recently, but you can't use our mothers death as a way to get what you want!
Charlie slaps her around the face
Tanya: If thats how you're going to be about it, then your grounded!
Charlie: Excuse me?! Since when have i been 8 years old?! You can't do this, Tan!
Tanya: You just watch me, girl!
I feel Tanya is taking on a lot more than she can handle.. Charlie seems like a right hand full!!!
DaVeyWaVey
01-03-2007, 18:53
Just caught up..seems like Natasha is leaving for good then! I love the new Hayley/Charlie friendship...i'm sure they're both going to make a great double act and get up to lots of mischief!
EXT. MARBAL NIGHTCLUB - DAY
Iqbal looks at the boarded up club, and takes a reluctant sigh, as he sees the sold sign being put up. Craig walks up behind Iqbal.
Craig: What d'ya think you're playing at!? Eh!?
Iqbal turns around to face Craig.
Iqbal: What you on about Craig?
Craig: Selling this place behind me bloody back! So come on then, who brought it!?
Iqbal: That doesn't concern you, you'll have to wait and see like everyone else...
Craig: Don't get smug with me!
Iqbal: Oh get overyourself, someone pipped you to the post, so bloody what?
Craig: This isn't over Singh, not by a long shot...
Iqbal: Yes it is Craig. You have nothing to do with us now...
Craig: You're gonna pay for this?
Iqbal: Oh change the record Craig, it's getting tiresome... you come by me or my family again and I'll call the police...
Craig is annoyed, he goes to swing for Iqbal but restrains himself and reluctantly walks off, clearly annoyed.
INT. JENKINS MANOR – NIGHT
Charlie is lying in her room, music blasting out loud. Tanya shouts up the stairs.
Tanya: Turn that ruddy music down!
Charlie: Bog off!
Just to spite Tanya, Charlie turns up the volume. Her mobile phone rings, she answers it.
Charlie: Hiya Hayley, whats up?
Hayley: Not much, fancy going out for a drink laters?
Charlie: I would but erm…well Aunty Tan has grounded me…
Hayley: Can’t you find a way to get out?
Charlie: Yeah, don’t you worry, I always find a way of getting what I want…
Hayley: Great, about 8 do you?
Charlie: Sure, see you then :D
Charlie puts the phone down, a smug grin on her face.
EXT: RED RUM PUB- Day
Amy and Patrick are outside of the pub. Amy is pointing up at the sign..
Amy: Look! See, its grubby as hell! This is a pub we're running here, first impressions are everything. As with that swanky new bar in the Leisure Centre, we need to look as good as we can to keep the regulars!
Patrick is away with it. Amy realises he isn't listening, and nudges him..
Amy: Patrick!
Patrick: Oh, yeah. Dont worry about it, i'll get someone to clean it up..
Amy carries on talking, but trails off into a world of her own. Patrick looks down the street, and sees Natasha loading up the back of a Taxi. He gives her a sneaky smile. Natasha does the same, and waves. She takes a final look around, and gets in the cab. Patrick grabs Amy and swings her around..
Amy: Patriiiiick! Whats that for?!
Patrick: Nothing... Nothing at all...
As Patrick is hugging Amy, he looks back down the street to see Natashas cab pull away and leave.
INT: JENKINS MANOR
Richard and Tanya are arguing about Charlie...
Richard: Do you think this is the right way to handle her though, love? Cooping her up, it might just make her worse...
Tanya: I really dont know. I mean, just look at her. Shes ungratefull no matter what anyone does. She doesn't give a damn about what others think, and other people..
Tanya sighs..
Tanya: She needs to learn a lesson, Dad. She can't stick around here if she can't. She needs some respect.
Richard: And grounding her will do that?
Tanya: I haven't got much of a choice, have i? What else could i do?
Richard doesn't reply. Charlie sneaks down the stairs in the background, and listens to the pair..
Tanya: Shes been like this since she was a kid. Her mother was always saying what a handfull she was. If she couldn't cope with her, how the hell am i meant to?!
Charlie gives her a look of disgust, and sneaks out of the house. Tanya sighs again, and sits down, deflated.
INT. BACHELOR BOYS' HOUSE - NIGHT
Romeo, Roxy, Emma and Tom are sat around the TV. The house phone rings. Roxy picks it up.
Roxy: Hello?...
Roxy's face turns to one of annoyance. Romeo looks at her, concerned.
Romeo: Who is it babe?
Roxy moodily hands Romeo the phone.
Roxy: Someone from "The Jeremy Kyle Show" wanting to confirm you're appearance...
Romeo picks it up and talks to the woman on the other end of the phone.
Romeo: Hiya...
Woman: Hello, Romeo, just checking to see if you're still okay for appearing on the show next week?
Roxy folds her arms and stares at the tv, clearly in a mood, Romeo detects this.
Romeo: Hmmm, well actually I've been having doubts...
Woman: Well we need to know either way now, so we can get someone else in...
Emma gives him a kick and gives him a look as if to suggest "dont you dare".
Romeo: (Reluctant) Oh okay then...whatever it takes to sort this bloody mess out...
Woman: Ok! That's great! Thanks Romeo, we'll see you later on in the week! :D
Romeo puts the phone down. Roxy gives Romeo a completley dissaproving look.
Roxy: I can't believe that you're seriosuly going trough with this...
Romeo: Look babe...
Roxy: Don't "babe" me...
Roxy gets up and goes into the kitchen. Romeo can't help feeling that he's making a big mistake.
INT. BAYMOORE LESUIRE CENTRE - WINEBAR - DAY
Lauren walks into the winebar, dressed in a skimpy, yet elegant dress. Callumn is leaning behind the bar, checking her out. Lauren notices this.
Lauren: Like what you see? :p
Callumn: I've seen worse...
Lauren laughs at Callumn's cockiness.
Lauren: Full of it aren't you?
Callumn: So I've been told...
Callumn casually looks down below his trouser belt. Lauren raises an eyebrow and sits down on one of the stools.
Callumn: What can I get you?
Lauren: I'll have a glass of...well whatever's on offers...
Callumn: You know, I'd be taking a huge risk serving you after your little outburst the offer night...
Lauren: Oh come on, I'm sure you've taken a few risks in your time...
Callumn: Well I suppose just the one wont hurt...
Callumn grabs a bottle of wine and pours some out into a glass, the pair give each other flirtatious looks...
INT: IQBAL'S FLAT
Sanjita goes into Iqbals flat, having just returned from hospital. Iqbal urges her to sit on the sofa..
Iqbal: Can i get you a pillow or something?
Sanjita: No, i'm fine...
Iqbal: Or maybe a drink?
Sanjita: Really, i'm fine
Iqbal: Or the remote?
Sanjta: Iqbal! I'm bloody fine, ok!?
Sanjita realises she is snapping at him..
Sanjita: I'm sorry.. Its just everything is getting to me...
Iqbal: He's gone, Sanj. He can't harm you anymore. He can't touch you.
Sanjita: Oh, can't he? He's still up here (Points to head). And you know what, thats worse then anything. Having it replay in my head time after time... Do you know what that feels like?
Sanjita sighs..
Sanjita: Just having him in my memories is bad enough...
INT. BAYMOORE LESUIRE CENTRE - WINEBAR - DAY
Callumn pours Lauren another drink..
Callumn: So, i heard about you and Tanya... :cool:
Lauren: Oh did you now?!
Callumn: I just wondered... You know... Whats it like, sleeping with another woman?
Lauren: Does the naughty boy not get enough porn? :cool: Its nothing special. I dont make a habit of it, mind! I prefer a strong, dominent man anytime :D
Callumn raises an eyebrow
Lauren: Why do you ask? Some kind of... Fantasy?
Callumn: Isn't it everyman's?
Lauren smiles..
Lauren: Well, i'l have to see if i can arrange it for you sometime :D
Lauren sips at her wine, seductively
INT. BAYMOORE LESUIR CENTRE - WINEBAR - DAY
Lauren and Callumn are perched at either sides of the bar.
Lauren: And then there's always the good old drinking games...get the juices flowing a bit if you know what I mean...
Callumn laughs at this joke, as Lauren seductivley sips at her wine. Michelle walks into the bar, shocked at seeing Lauren here. She pulls Callumn to one side.
Michelle: What do you think you're playing at babe?
Callumn: Just having a social drink with this nice lady...
Michelle: You do realise who that is?
Callumn: Yes I do, but this Ashworth feud has nothing to do with me...
Michelle: Yeah well it has with me...if Tanya saw her here she'd flip...
Lauren: What's up Cal, employee got a problem with the manager?
Michelle: I'm co manager actually...
Lauren: Oh...my mistake :p
Michelle: And you want to watch who you're flirting with missey...because that's my husband...
Lauren: Don't get your knickers in a twist, I was only window shopping :p
Lauren finishes her wine and leaves. Michelle has a look of total annoyance at Lauen's ordasity.
INT. SINGHS' HOUSE - NIGHT
Music is blasting out loud. Andonis is now home alone since Kash has been sectioned. He dances his way to the kitchen and grabs a large packet of dorittos and a couple of beers from the fridge.
He goes into the living room and dives onto the sofa, gets into a comfortable posotition and switches on the TV. All of a sudden there is a knock at the door, he raises the volume on the TV, but the knocking continues.
Reluctanty he gets up and opens the door to Sanjita, Iqbal, Mohammed, Ruby and Marcus.
Andonis: What the....!?
Sanjita: We're all moving back in! :D
Sanjita grabs Andonis and gives him a look as the group walk in carrying their bags. Andonis gives a look of despair.
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Who Should Be The Father Of Claire's Baby - Romeo or Chris?
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:rotfl: Well, that peed on Adonis' chips didn't it :rotfl:
Nice one Sanjita! But will they be able to live there in peace with the past...
INT: BAYMOORE LEISURE CENTRE- Wine Bar
Michelle is standing with Callumn at the Bar...
Michelle: Nothing had better happeb between you and that Ashwoth Tart. Not so much as 5 words!
Callumn: Stop being so bloody paranoid! Why would it?!
Michelle: I saw you two earlier.... Laughing and Drinking...
Callumn: Oh, so its a crime to be sociable now, is it?
Michelle: Sociable, no. Flirting with other women, to right it bloody well is!
Callumn: Look at me, Babe. You've not got anything to worry about, ok?
Michelle ponders for a minute...
Michelle: Ok, i beleive you
Callumn smiles, and Michelle walks off, back to her business. Callumn grabs his bottle of beer. He bites the cap off, and spits it onto the bar, swigging away at it angrily.
INT. SINGHS' HOUSE - NIGHT
Sanjita: We're all moving back in!
Sanjita grabs Andonis and gives him a look as the group walk in carrying their bags. Andonis gives a look of despair.
Andonis: But...but...you can't!
Sanjita: Don't be so silly...
Andonis: Why?
Sanjita: Oh come on Andonis, we can't have you living on your own, you're only 17. How you gonna pay the bills eh!?
Andonis: I'd have managed...
Iqbal: We need somewhere to live, what with us selling the clib, so this just seems like the most logical solution...
Anondis: But!... This is Dad's house!... It'd be wrong!
Sanjita: I still own half of it... like it or not we're all moving back in...
INT. TORQUAY NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
Bustling nightclub. "Standing In The Way Of Control" by the Gossip is playing. Charlie and Hayley make they way trough the crowds of youngsters who are dancing to the music.
Hayley: Don't seem too bad here...
Charlie: A bit loud isn't it?
Hayley: The louder the better! What you having?
Charlie: Erm...whatever?
Hayley heads over to the bar to get them both drinks. Charlie looks around to see if she can spot anyone. She bumps into Chris.
Charlie: Watch where you're goi... oh hi Chris!
Chris: Charlie...a bit too young to be in here aren't you?
Charlie: I won't tell if you won't :p
Chris: I suppose I could be quiet for a kiss...
Charlie laughs at Chris' cavalier attitude.
Charlie: (Suggestive) Maybe later...
Chris: Oh you're not like your auntie Tanya are you?
Charlie: How dya mean?
Chris: A lesbian... proper girl on girl action with that Lauren Ashworth...
Charlie: :eek: No way! You've gotta be joking me right?
Chris: Nah, I'm serious...
Hayley comes over with the drinks, she hands Hayley an alcopop.
Charlie: Jesus, who'd have thought it, aunty Tan a roaring dyke...but in answer to you're question, I don't bat that way... :p
Chris: Good to hear :p Erm, do you fancy a dance?
Charlie: Sure why not :D
Charlie hands her drink to Hayley. Her and chris head off to the dancefloor, flirtatious looks on their faces...
DaVeyWaVey
04-03-2007, 14:02
Looks like Andonis's plans for having a quiet house were scuppered. :D
:hmm: Chris better watch what he's getting himself into hanging about with Charlie.
INT. SINGHS' HOUSE - NIGHT
Andonis is sitting down on the sofa watching TV. The rest of the family are in their rooms busy unpacking. Sanjita comes into the room and sits down beside Andonis.
Sanjita: Well I think that's everything unpacked, just need to bring over the furniture tomorrow morning...
Andonis doesn't respond to this, and continues to stare at the TV, moodily.
Sanjita: Will you help your unc... help Iqbal with the carrying tomorrow?
Andonis: (Moodily) I've got college...
Sanjita puts her hand on his arm, trying to reason with him.
Sanjita: Look...I'm sorry I haven't been around the past few months...
Andonis: A bit too late for apologises now isn't it?
Sanjita: I'm here for you know tough, that's the main thing...
Andonis turns away from her, moving his arm away from her hand.
Sanjita: Please... let me make it up to you...
Anondis: It's becuase of you that Dad did the things he did!
Sanjita: Now come on, that's not fair... you're father was mentally ill.. look Andonis, can't we all just live under the same roof and get on as one big family again...please...
Andonis turns to face his mom, clearly emotional.
Sanjita: I'm not asking you to approve of everything that's happened and make us the Brady Bunch overnight, I'm just asking you to give it a try, okay?
Andonis: I suppose...
Sanjita: Come here
Sanjita hugs Andonis, and stays hold of him tightly. She is relieved, but Andonis is clealry not impressed.
mmm.. Charlie and Chris.. explosive combination.. Callum behind a bar!! what was Richard thinking!!! and you would think Adonis would be happy to have his mother back!!
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - MORNING
The pub is closed, there is a loud and constant knocking on the front doors. Amy coms downstairs, dressed in her dressing gown, she unbolts the door. Tanya marches in, clearly in a bad mood.
Amy: Tanya?
Tanya: Where is she!?
Amy: Do you know what time it is?
Tanya: I don't care what time it is! My Charlie is missing, and I bet you ten quid that Hayley has something to do with it!
Amy: I don't know what you...
Hayley comes into the room, having just been woken up by the argument.
Hayley: What's all the noise about?
Tanya: Charlie! Where the hell is she!?
Hayley: How the hell should I know?
Tanya: Oh don't pull the other one! You two have been thick as theives since she first come here!
Hayley: I swear I don't know, the last I saw of her she had her tongue down Chris' throat...
Tanya: Chris!? Chris Langden!?
Hayley: Look Tanya, don't go overboard...
Tanya: He's over ten years older than her! My god! How could he!?
Amy: Stay calm Tanya...
Tanya: Calm!? How can you expect me to stay Calm...:angry:
Tanya storms out of the pub, heading towards The Bachelor Boys house in a rage.
INT: SINGH'S HOUSE- Day
Andonis is in his bedroom, on the phone...
Andonis: Mum and Iqbal have moved back in... Just barged through the door, bags packed and everything..
Andonis pauses, listening to the reponse...
Andonis: Yeah, i know. Didn't give me so much as a phonecall! Let alone think about you..
The camera flicks to Kash, in a secure unit...
Kash: Son, i want you to come and visit me. Some time away from them will do you good.
Andonis: Erm... I'm not sure, things are kind of hectic...
Kash: Too hectic for me?
Andonis pauses, thinking. He replies, reluctantly..
Andonis: Ok... Yeah, ok i will... I'll ring the reception and sort out a time...
EXT: BACHELORS HOUSE- Day
Tanya bashes on the door to the house, shouting Charlie's name. There is no reply. She bends down, picks up a key from under the mat, and opens the door. She hears muttering upstairs, and storms up there. She walks into Chris's room, and finds them together in his bed..
Tanya: Charlie! Get out of that bed right now!
Charlie: Tanya!
Tanya: NOW!!
Charlie looks at Chris, wanting him to say something. He doesn't say anything. Tanya grabs Charlie by the hair, and drags her out of the bed. She quickly covers herself up, and gets dressed...
Charlie: Tanya, stop it!
Tanya: You cheap slag! Dont "Tanya!" me!
Tanya turns to Chris..
Tanya: What the HELL did you think you were doing, Chris!?
Chris: Tanya, i just... It just...
Tanya: Just happened? Things tend to happen like that around you, dont they?!
Chris: Excuse me?!
Tanya: She's 17 years old Chris! Use your head!
Charlie walks back into the room. Tanya grabs her arm tightly, and drags her out of the house..
Tanya: How could you do this, Charlie?!
Charlie: This? This?! Trust me, i can do a hell of a lot worse :cool:
Charlie is just a big a cow as Hayley.. no wonder they get on
Thanks for everyone who voted on the Interactive Vote storyline. The votes have now been counted up, and the thread deleted. Stay tuned this week, for the result...
Thanks for everyone who voted on the Interactive Vote storyline. The votes have now been counted up, and the thread deleted. Stay tuned this week, for the result...
ah damn, no seek preview but I am sure Jeremy kyle will reveal all.. can't wait for that episode.. thanks Bry
EXT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - MORNING
Tanya drags Lauren out into the street by her arm. Charlie is trying to resist, but Tanya continues to drag her away with force.
Charlie: Get the hell of me!
Tanya: I'm not letting you out of my sight from now on.
Charlie bites Tanya's arm. Tanya lets go in pain. Charlie starts screaming at her.
Tanya: You little bitch!
Charlie: Who the hell do you think you are!? Telling me what I can and can't do!
Tanya: Maybe if you behaved yourself more I wouldn't have to... your father would be ashamed of yourself! Sleeping around willy nilly! Are you even aware of the possible consequences you stupid! Stupid! Little Girl!
Charlie: Yes! Well at least I stick to sleeping with men!
Tanya: You little...
Tanya charges towards Charlie in rage. The pair engadge in a furious bitchfight, as they tug on each others hair, scratching and biting. They end up rolling around on the lawn of The Bachelor Boys' house.
Chris is standing on the pavement in shock, Romeo and Roxy come down in their nightclothes. They look shocked at the scene infront of them.
Romeo: What the hell is going on here!?
Chris: I dunno...they just started...fighting...
Roxy: Well do something then!
Chris goes over to them, he pulls Tanya away from Charlie, trying to intervene.
Chris: Clam down Tanya...
Tanya gives Chris a menacing look and headbutts him. He staggers backwards holding his head in pain. Romeo and Roxy are unsure whether to laugh or react.
Charlie: Jesus! Aunty Tan!
Tanya: Get it in the car! Now!
Tanya opens the door and pushes Charlie in. She gets into the car and speeds off. Chris staggers back towards Romeo and Roxy.
Roxy: Oh my god Chris, are you okay?
Chris: Yeah, i'm great, I tell you something there's nothing more hornier than seeing two women having a bitch fight, especially when one of them is a lesbian :D
Roxy and Romeo laugh in disbelief at Chris' sexist, yet funny, statement.
INT. BAYMOORE LESUIRE CENTRE - WINEBAR - DAY
Callumn is bending down, unloading the crates of wine. His backside in clear view. The sound of high heels clicking against the floor can be heard as Lauren walks in.
Lauren: Well that's certainly a site if I ever I saw one :p
Callumn gets up and turns around, a flirtatious grin on his face.
Callumn: You're gonna get me into trouble one of these days...
Lauren: Bad boys like you love it...
Callumn: Oh do we? :p
Lauren: Yeah...you get a thrill off it...(undoes a button on her blouse) The Forbiddon Fuirt...it's the age old turn on...
Callumn eyes her up and down. She approcahes him, grabs his head and breifly snogs him. Callumn clealry isn't resisting. Lauren pulls away, licking her lips. Callumn gestures for her to continue.
Lauren: No... all comes to he who waits...
Lauren walks out of the bar. Callumn admiring the view as she goes, a big grin on his face...
INT: VALENTINO'S RESTAURANT- Evening
Emma and Tom are out for a meal. They are laughing and joking across the table...
Tom: (Laughing) Thank you, Emma..
Emma: For what?
Tom: For cheering me up these past couple of months, by just being yourself.
Emma: I've hardly been a bundle of joy, have i?
Tom: Just being around you, cheers me up. Much more so than Luqina ever did.
Emma: But i'm not even half as good looking!
Emma laughs..
Tom: I'm going to have to disagree on that :cool:
Tom leans across the table, and gives her a kiss.
Tom: Shall i get the bill? We can go back for coffee..?
Emma smiles, and nods.
INT: JENKINS MANOR- Evening
Tanya storms into the house, and talks with Charlie in the hallway...
Tanya: One step out of line, just one, and i'm packing you off back to your fathers, is that clear?
Charlie: But, i..
Tanya: Is that clear, Charlie? Its been barely 6 months since Gary died. I can't tolerate any more stress, especially from you..
Charlie: Why "especiallly" from me?!
Tanya: Well after today, i think thats pretty bleedin' obvious!
Charlie storms up the stairs. She mutters under her breath, just loud enough for Tanya to hear..
Charlie: I hate you, Tanya..
hehe.. love the fight seen and Chris' comment.. :rotfl::rotfl:
How ingrateful is Charlie? tanya is putting her up in the house and she is taking the piss
INT. JEREMY KYLE SHOW STUDIOS - DAY
Val and Emma are leading the group as an assistant brings them onto the empity stage. Claire, Chris and Romeo follow behind them, all clearly as un-enthusiastic as one another.
Assistant: So yeah, this is the stage and...
Jeremy Kyle walks out onto the stage to meet them. Val acts as if she's just gone to heaven.
Val: Oh my good god! It's Jermey! Jeremy Kyle!
Val runs over to Jeremy.
Jeremy: Hi, Val I take it?
Val: Yeah, pleased to meet you, I'm your biggest fan!
It is clear that Jeremy is kind of freaked out by Val's obssesive nature.
Jeremy: Ah right, that's good to hear...
Val: I've got all your episodes taped, back to about 05! You are just so amazing!
Val gets her autograph book.
Val: Can I have you're autograph :D ... Emma! Get the camera out, I need a picture with the legendary Jeremy! My Idol! :D
Jeremy signs the autograph, but looks eager to escape this hellish situation.
Jeremy: If I could just meet the others...
Val: Oh come on, it'll only take a second :D
Val grabs Jeremy and hugs him, with a big grin on her face. Jeremy looks petrified. Emma takes a picture.
Val: You're show is amazing... Trisha, Springer, Ricki Lake... aint a patch on you...
Emma: That's not what you said when he replaced Trisha, what was it you called him now?
Val: (Embarassed, To Jermey) Don't listen to her, she's a bit of a problem child, was going to get her on this show recently, but my conscience got the better of me...
Emma: Ah that's right "a talentless egocentric nobody, who isn't fit to lick Trisha Goddard's boots" :p
Jeremy looks at Val funny, Val gives out a nervous laugh to hide her embarassment. Jeremy turns to face Claire, Chris and Romeo.
Jeremy: Right guys, the audience will be in in a bit, you all ready?
Claire: Ready as we're ever gonna be...
Claire takes a nervous gulp, Chris and Romeo look at each other, silent cursing themselves for getting into this situation...
INT. BAYMOORE LESUIRE CENTRE - WINEBAR - DAY
Michelle and Callumn have just opened up the winebar for the day. Michelle picks up the post and hands it to Callumn to open.
Michelle: Hannah was on the phone last night, telling me her ruddy nightmare about Steve's hendo, she's sure that they're going to tie him to a lamppost, it's a shame we can't go up for it really...
Michelle continues to talk woman drizze as Callumn opens the post, paying no attention to what she is saying. He opens a padded envelope, that is adressed to him. He puts his hand in site and pulls out a skimpy sexy thong. He looks at it in disbelief, before quickly putting them back in the envelope before Michelle notices.
Michelle: Look I'm going to have to sort out the problem with the suppliers, can't have them leaving crates on the doorstep for the world and his wife to go away with, you gonna be okay on your own babe?
Callumn: (Flustered) Erm, yeah sure...
Michelle gives him a kiss before leaving. Once gone, Callumn pulls out the thong, staring at them for a moment. A grin appears on his face as he shakes his head in disbelif.
Callumn: (To Self) Dirty Bitch...
The buisness phone rings. Callumn puts the thong away and picks up the phone.
Callumn: Hello, Baymoore Winebar?
Lauren: Like my suprise? :p
Callumn: Very nice :cool:
Lauren: You should try what's under them...
Callumn raises an eyebrow at this suggestion.
Lauren: No ones home, just me...and a bubbling jacuzi...
Callumn: Give me ten minutes and I'll be there :D
Callumn puts down the phone, a big grin on his face.
Val grabs Jeremy and hugs him, with a big grin on her face. Jeremy looks petrified. Emma takes a picture.
Val: You're show is amazing... Trisha, Springer, Ricki Lake... aint a patch on you...
Emma: That's not what you said when he replaced Trisha, what was it you called him now?
Val: (Embarassed, To Jermey) Don't listen to her, she's a bit of a problem child, was going to get her on this show recently, but my conscience got the better of me...
Emma: Ah that's right "a talentless egocentric nobody, who isn't fit to lick Trisha Goddard's boots" :p
I love this.. a real Val moment :rotfl::rotfl::rotfl:
INT: JEREMY KYLE STUDIOS- Day
Emma, Val, Claire, Romeo and Chris are sitting on the stage. The Floor Manager counts down from 10 to 1, and the audience applause as filming rolls...
Jeremy: Welcome back to the show. Next we have Claire. After a long term relationship with Romeo, Claire fell pregnant. But is it his, or Chris, the otherside in this story? Claire, can you sum up for me your point of view?
Claire: I just... I dont know what i was thinking... Me and Romeo were happy, but things were dificult sometimes...
Jeremy: So you thought that sleeping with Chris would heal your relationship?
Claire: No, course not!
Chris: It wasn't like we planned this...
Jeremy: Well why not? Didn't you think about what you were doing?!
Claire: Yeah, but... We just..
Jeremy: But you didn't care about how it would affect your family?
Claire's eyes well up with tears. Val jumps to the defence..
Val: Jeremy! Take it easy on her!
Jeremy: So you think that sleeping with another man becaseur relationship is failing, is the right thing to do?
Val: Of course not, but..
Romeo: It wasn't bloody failing!
Claire: It was hardly happy, was it..
Romeo: Stop acting like i was bloody abusive to you or something! I did nothing to harm you- i did nothing to make you cheat on me!
Chris: Well, she obviously felt the need...
Romeo: Like she felt the need for a manicure everyweek?! What does that make you, eh?
Claire sits in silence. Jeremy picks up on this..
Jeremy: Who do you want to be the father of your child, Claire?
Emma: You can't ask her that!
Jeremy: Why not? She had unprotected sex with both of them, she obviously wanted the gamble, so what way do you want the coin to land then...
Val: Oi! You might be a sex-god, but you can't get away with that!
Romeo: Its obvious its mine anyway..
Chris: Oh it is, is it?!
They all argue on the stage. Jeremy interupts
Jeremy: Seems to me that the Paternity Test is the only way to solve this. We'll get you back on a later show with the results, and see if we can get this all sorted. Thats the end of todays show, next up is This Morning, Bye.
EXT: BELLEMY HOUSE- Day
Callumn's car pulls up on the driveway at Bellamy house, he confidently walks up to the front door, and rings the bell. Lauren answers the door in a skimpy nightgown, and runs the belt of it through her fingers...
Lauren: Well, well, well..
Callumn checks her out, looking her up and down...
Callumn: I could say the same :cool:
Lauren adjusts the top, showing more and more flesh..
Callumn: You do realise i'm a married man? :p
Lauren: Thats what makes it so much more fun :D
Lauren grabs him by the tie, and drags him into the house more. She kisses him passionatly, closing the door behind him...
INT. ASHWORTH CASINO - DAY
Tom is working at Jared Ashworth's casino. He is working on one of the tables, where people are placing their bets.
Emma walks into the casino, dressed casually, looking like a fish out of water. She looks around for Tom, he catches her eye and she walks over to him.
Tom: Emma? What are you doing here?
Emma: Just thought I'd pop in and see you...
Tom: Oh right, you'd best make it quick, shouldn't really be chatting whilst on the job...
Emma looks around the casino, a look of approval on her face.
Emma: This place is mint ennit? Proper classy like...
Tom: Well what did you expect?
Emma: I dunno, cheesy Las Vegas slot machines and stuff...
Tom: Hell no! This place is really high class, only the rich and famous come here...
Emma: Oooo get you!
Tom: People can loose their fortunes here Emma, it's a scary place...
Emma: (Worried) Yeah, well make sure you don't get involved in all that...
Tom: Don't be so silly, of course I wont...
Behind his back, Tom is holding a handful of expensive Poker chips. A reserved look on his face.
INT. BACHELOR BOYS' HOUSE - NIGHT
Romeo returns to the house, looking knackerd and worn out from the days events. Roxy is sat down infront of the TV.
Romeo: Hiya babe, good day?
Roxy: Oh marvellous, my boyfriend's only gone on national TV and made a total prat of himself..and me!
Romeo: Look, Rox...
Roxy: No Romeo! I knew you were stupid, but I never actually thought you'd go through with this!
Romeo: I had no say in the matter, Val and Claire wouldn't let this lye until we got answers, and seen as they were'nt willing to do it maturely...
Roxy: Oh for god sake! Have you heard yourself!? "I had no say in the matter"! Of course you bloody had a say in it, are you a man or a sheep!?
Romeo: Excuse me!?
Roxy: You...following Claire around, doing what she says... since she's been back our relationship hasn't been the same...
Romeo: What are you saying?
Roxy: We're only just starting out Romeo, and already we're facing your past, and your potential child...
Romeo: Well where do we stand then?
Roxy: I don't know Romeo, I really don't know...
Roxy gets up and heads out of the room, clearly upset. Romeo is left alone, worrying for the safety of their relationship.
INT: TORBAY HOSPITAL- Secure Unit
Andonis walks into a room in the hospital. Kash is sitting on the floor, swaying backwards and forwards..
Andonis: Dad? Dad, its me..
Kash looks up, and smiles. He stands up..
Andonis: How are you feeling..?
Kash: I'm fine.. Fine i tell ya!
Andonis: Is everyone... nice?
Kash: Course they're being nice, they think i'm a bloody phycho!
Andonis: Cant you remember what happened? You tried to kill Mum and Mohammed!
Kash: They deserved it...
Andonis: Excuse me!?
Kash: Didn't you hear me?! Has Sanjita got that far into your head?!
Andonis: I can't even bare to look at you..
Kash: I... I'm sorry, Andonis.. Its this place... It gets inside you and sends you..
Andonis: Mad? Thats exactly what you are...
Kash: You need to forgive me, Son..
Andonis: Why should i?!
Kash: Because your the man of the family now. You've got to look after the shop, and do me proud with it.
Andonis looks at him uneasy. He nods, and leaves, uncertain.
EXT: BAYMOORE STREETS- Day
Romeo is standing on a street corner. Chris walks over..
Chris: What do you want?
Romeo looks down the street, and sees Claire walking towards them.
Claire: Romeo, get this over with quickly. I haven’t got a babysitter for long…
Romeo: You two don’t know what you’ve done to me..
Claire: Get a grip!
Romeo: All this faffing around… Bloody Jeremy Kyle!...
Claire: You’re the one that agreed to it as well!
Romeo: I’ve lost Roxy over all of this. Because of you two. This baby had better be mine, or what else have I got left?
Chris mumbles under his breath..
Claire: What?
Chris: It will be his..
Romeo: Phycic now, are we?
Chris: It has to be yours… I… I just… It was a…
Claire: What are you saying Chris?
Chris: A few years ago, I decided I didn’t want kids..
Claire: And? That doesn’t mean you’re not gonna get them!
[b]Chris[/b[: Yes, it does…. I had the snip, Claire…
Chris looks down, worried and scared about what they are going to say, after bottling it up for so long. Claire looks at him, fuming
:eek: Chris has kept quiet about that!! He's definitely firing blanks then (so to speak? :D )
Will Adonis start going a bit easier on Sanjita now then?
Great stuff as always guys
I don't believe him!! why did he say this ages ago!!!
Andonis is finally seen what his dad is like.. Kash is a loon
INT. SINGH'S HOUSE - NIGHT
Andonis walks trough the door, Sanjita and Iqbal practically pounce on him.
Sanjita: Andonis! Where have you been!?
Andonis: Out...
Iqbal: Out? Is that all you're going to tell us. Me and your mother have been sick with worry...
Andonis: I went to see dad...
Sanjita: You what!?
Andonis: Look don't flip...
Sanjita: How can you expect me not too! After what's he's done to me! To all of us!
Iqbal: What the hell were you thinking?
Andonis: I just wanted answers, for what he's done like...
Sanjita: Nothing can justify what he's done Andonis!
Andonis: I know that now!
Iqbal notices the keys in Andonis hand.
Iqbal: What are they?
Andonis: It's the keys for the shop...Dad wants me to re-open the shop for him...
Sanjita and Iqbal look at each other, unsure of how to take this news.
INT. ANDREWS' HOUSE - NIGHT
Claire, Chris and Romeo walk trough the house and towards the kitchen where Val is jirating around the room to Mambo Number 5.
Val: A little bit of Monica in my life; A little bit of Erica by my side;
A little bit of Rita....oh hi love
Claire: Can you clear out the way mom, us three need to talk...
Val: But I've gotta get the spag bol on the go...
Claire: The spag bol can bloody wait! This is important!
Val: Ok then, take it easy...
Val leaves them in peice. Chris takes a seat at the kitchen table.
Romep: So you had the snip... when exactly were you planning on telling us this?
Chris: Please, don't get angry...
Claire: Angry!? If you'd bothered to tell us this ages ago then we could have saved ourselves a whole lot of hassle!
Chris: Look, it's not my fault...
Romeo: Yes Chris, it is! Why on earth didn't you tell us sooner? It'd have saved us the humiliation of going on national tv! We could have sorted this out, without Roxy getting hurt in the process!
Claire: Roxy! Roxy! It's always about bloody Roxy! What about me eh!? I'm the one that spent months agonising who the father was! Worrying I'd lost you because of some stupid one night stand...
Chris: Please Claire! Don't call it that!
Claire: Why not!? Becuase that is what it was! So come on, why did you keep this to your self all this time eh!?
Chris: I was too scared to tell you... becuase... well... I love you...
Claire is taken aback by this unexpected revealation.
:hmm:
If Chris loved Claire so much, how come he was more than happy to have a lot of fun with Charlie?! Thats not the way to show someone how you feel about them Chris is it mate!
:rotfl: *picturing Val dancing to Mambo #5*
INT: SINGHS HOUSE- Night
Sanjita and Iqbal are sitting on the sofa, watching the TV whilst talking...
Sanjita: It just wouldn't feel right opening the shop. It was always Kash's..
Iqbal: It was the Family business. Singh and Sons.
Sanjita: I spent so many years as his slave. Standing behind that bloody till, stacking shelves, ordering things.. Whatever he wanted, i had to do.
Iqbal: Its not going to be like that anymore, beleive me. We could run it together, as a couple.
Iqbal runs is fingers through her hair..
Iqbal: A fresh start for us :)
Sanjita: (slightly unsure) Ok... (More certain). Yeah, ok!
INT: ANDREW'S HOUSE- Night
Chris: I was too scared to tell you... becuase... well... I love you...
Claire is taken aback by this unexpected revealation.
Claire: You WHAT?!
Chris: Dont make me say it again...
Claire: Oh dont worry, i dont want you to! Chris, i've ever loved you. And i never will!
Chris: But what about what we had?!
Claire: A cheap one night stand? Yeah, thats really the love of my life, isn't it? :rolleyes:
Chris: But..
Claire: You're the one thats put me into this situation. Not knowing who the father of my baby is for weeks on end! And loosing the man of my dreams over it..
Romeo looks up at Claire automatically..
Claire: How could i ever love someone who could do that to me?
Claire looks down, slightly angry and unsure.
Romeo: I'll be there for the baby. I'll give it whatever it needs... But, nothing else, Claire.
Claire nods, slowly..
Romeo: Its just... Roxy. How do i even start to tell Roxy about this..?
DaVeyWaVey
09-03-2007, 22:17
Just caught up! Lauren and Callumn are going to be playing a very dangerous game, will it just be a one-off fling or something more permanent? :hmm:
Love this Jeremy Kyle stuff! Val really cracks me up! :rotfl:
INT. BACHELOR BOYS' HOUSE - NIGHT
Romeo enters the house, looking uncomfortable. Roxy walks into the living room from the kitchen, a discloth in her hand.
Roxy: Where have you been, tea is practically ruined...
Romeo: The tea doesn't matter...
Roxy: I've been cooking it for two hours, so yes Romeo, it does...
Romeo: I've got something to tell you Rox'...
Roxy: What?
Romeo: Sit down...it's not gonna be easy...
Roxy sits down, looking worried. Romeo grabs her hands and looks her in the face.
Romeo: I've just been talking to Claire and Chris, he's had the snip...which means...
Roxy lets go of Romeo and turns away from him, emotional.
Roxy: Oh god no...
Romeo: I'm sorry babe...
Roxy bursts into tears.
Roxy: I can't take anymore of this!
Romeo: Anymore of what?
Roxy: You! Claire! This bloody baby! I don't want to be the other woman!
Romeo: You aren't...you are the only woman babe...
Roxy: You know aswell as I do, that aint the case... you have a tie to Claire that will never go away... and I can't stay around to see it...
Romeo: Please Rox', we can sort something out...
Roxy: No Romeo, we can't...you have a kid...who am I to keep you from his mother...
Romeo: Don't be so daft, me and Claire are over...
Roxy: She'll be there for the next 18 years, every weekend, or whenever she, or Nathan, needs something... we will never be able to escape your past!
Romeo: Please don't do this Rox'...
Roxy: I'm sorry, but it's too late...this isn't going to work, I'm leaving Baymoore...
Romeo is devastated by this news.
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