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INT: ASHWORTH MANOR
Hilary walks up to the house, and knocks on the door. Lauren answers it, and leans against the doorframe...
Hilary: Hi, is your father there?
Lauren: You must be Hilary, right? Dad's latest squeeze. You know, i imagined you to have less greys, bigger boobs... thats his normal type...
Hilary: Excuse me?!
Lauren: I've heard a lot about you, theres no need to deny anything to me, love.
Hilary: I really dont think that this is any of your buisness. Is he here or not?!
Lauren: Women have got to him in the past. Tried to get close, and take him for everything he's got. You just make sure you dont go the same, you hear me?
Hilary: I'm hardly going to listen to a pathetic little girl like you, am i?!
Lauren goes to slap Hilary, but hears footsteps behind her. Jared grabs her wrist, in mid air.
Jared: Come on girls, whats all this!
INT: KYLE'S FLAT- Morning
Kyle is watching the morning TV, Natasha walks in with a cup of tea, and thrusts it at him, causing some of it to spill over him...
Kyle: Whats that for?!
Natasha: You really weren't going to tell me, were you?!
Kyle: About what...?
Natasha: You and that Vicky! She told me about your one night stand last night!
Kyle: Oh....
Natasha: Yes "Oh" exactly!
Kyle: You didn't need to know, so why bother telling you?
Natasha: Because i had the right to know! I'm the person thats seeing you!
Kyle: Well that can all change, can't it! :rolleyes:
Natasha: Excuse me?!
Kyle: Shut it, or you wont be the person "seeing me" will ya!
Natasha sits on the opposite sofa, obviously annoyed. After a few seconds in silence, she talks again, Kyle rolls his eyes...
Natasha: You know what? This is that Vickys fault... she can't decide what she wants, so she wants anything on legs...
Kyle: Come on Nat, leave this!
Natasha: How can i, when that slut thinks shes the queen bee? No... i'm gonna give her a piece of my mind...
She grabs her coat, and storms out the apartment
EXT: ASHWORTH MANOR- Day
Jared lets go of Lauren's wrist..
Jared: Let me talk to Hilary, Lauren.
Lauren: But did you hear..
Jared: (Interupts) Come on, give us a few minutes alone!
Lauren storms off, annoyed.
Hilary: Will... he's got the tape...
Jared: The confession tape?
Hilary: Of course the bleedin' confession tape! He's threatening to play it to Richard, as proof of the Kids murder...
Jared: Oh right..
Hilary: Well you need to get hold of it, or we can kiss goodbye to me being in Richards life, can't we!
Jared: Naturally...
Jared walks to the stairs, and calls up..
Jared: Will!
Will comes down...
Will: Dad... Hilary...
Jared: I think we need to talk..
INT: TORBAY HOSPITAL- Day
Val is sitting up in bed, looking tired. James is sitting next to her. The Doctor walks in...
Doctor: How are you feeling today, Val?
Val: Just a bit tired...
Doctor: Thats probably a side effect of the painkillers you've been taking. The dosage will be reduced soon enough, so that shouldn't last too long.
James: Thats good news, then!
Doctor: Certainly is! I've had the test results back, and it looks like the operation has been a success. The lump has been removed, meaning that you're odds are looking very good.
Val's eyes well up with happiness...
James: Thank you Doc, so much..
Val: Thank you... i can't beleive i'm beating this...
Doctor: Unfortunatly..
James and Vals faces drop at this...
Doctor: You will have to go through a course of Cheomotherepy, and possibly Radiothereopy, to make sure the cancerous cells are completly gone.
Ok.. just caught up. What is Will hiding and will he hand the tape over to his father?
Richard, just support Tanya in her choice.. it maybe hard to accept but just be there when it all falls apart.
So happy that the operation was a success!!
Kyle, you are using a child here, it is not good to play on other people emotions like that.. What has Natasha got a bee in her bonnet about???
If Will hands over the tape to Hilary :wall: :wall: <<< that will be me :(
Its about time Hilary got her comeuppance for what happened with the twins.
Natasha is being pathetic - its about time she saw Kyle for what he really is, not decide to go over and give Vicky what for. Hasn't she heard of the saying it takes two to tango :angry:
If Will hands over the tape to Hilary :wall: :wall: <<< that will be me :(
Its about time Hilary got her comeuppance for what happened with the twins.
I want to see her pay for this.. but also Craig... they may not have actually killed them but they plotted and paid for it all. :angry::angry:
I want to see her pay for this.. but also Craig... they may not have actually killed them but they plotted and paid for it all. :angry::angry: Exactly Siobhan and for the pair of them to get away with it - I will be an unhappy avid viewer thats for sure!
I wonder if Jared is aware of Hilarys part in what happened with the twins :hmm: Although they seem to know about the tape, but do they know what is actually on it...:hmm:
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - Day
Will comes down the stairs as Hilary enters the house. Richard closes the door behind her, as they walk into the living room.
Will: What is this all about?
Jared: You have a tape...about Hilary...
Will: Oh god no, please don't tell me you knew about this!?
Jared: That's none of your buisness Will, just hand over the tape...
Will: You had something to do with their murder didn't you!? To hell with you if you think I'm gonna give either of you the tape!
Hilary: I think you will hand over the tape...
Will: Really and why's that?
Hilary: You seem...besotted with Tanya...
Will: I love her...
Hilary: Well that will soon change when she finds out who you really are... an Ashworth... The Taylors hate the Ashworths after all, you seriously expect Richard to condone this relationship!?
Will: We're grown ups we don't give a damn about some pafetic feud between our parents!
Hilary: Even so, her "rock" has been lying to her for the past six months...when she finds out the truth...
Will: If you think I'm going to let you get away with murder Hilary then you have serioulsy misjudged me! Tell her for all I care! She will understand! But there is no way on god's green earth that I will hand that tape to either of you!
Will storms out of the room. Hilary and Jared look at each other: panicked.
Good on you Will - what ever you do, do not let them get hold of the tape!
INT: RED RUM PUB- Evening
Chris is handing out flyers in the pub. He walks over to Romeo and Roxy and gives them one each...
Chris: Having a Christmas "gathering" tonight, if you two want to come!
Romeo: Oh right, Could be a laugh, i guess.
Chris: Might give you two the chance to finally get it on, aint that right! :cool: :rotfl:
Roxy: Excuse me?!
Chris: Come on, do i need to draw a diagram? :lol:
Roxy grabs Romeo's arm, and pulls him to the other side of the bar...
Roxy: You told him that we haven't... you know.... done anything yet?! How could you?!
Romeo: I didn't tell him exactly..
Roxy: You just didn't put the effort in to cover the blanks, right? Well thanks a bleedin' lot!
Romeo: I'm sorry, but you know what he's like when he gets going...
Roxy: Thats it, you go and blame him. Never going to be your fault, isn't that right!
Romeo: It is, i'm sorry...
Roxy: Pfft, i'm not stupid Romeo. Keep you're empty apologises to yourself.
Roxy storms off
INT: RED RUM PUB- Night
Romeo is standing at the bar, and downs a drink, obviously slightly annoyed. At one of the tables, Vicky is drinking a glass of Orange, when Natasha storms over...
Natasha: You just can't move on, can you? You can't leave the past in the past?
Vicky: If you're on about Kyle, then...
Natasha: (Interupts) Course i'm on about Kyle, i'm hardly chatting about the bleedin' Prime Minister!
Vicky: If you'd actually let me get a word in edgeways! I let him go the morning after we slept together. It was a stupid mistake, that meant nothing to me. If anyones doing the clinging on, its Kyle!
Amy walks out of the back of the pub, and listens from the Bar, concerned...
Natasha: Like he would lower himself down to you, again! You probably got him drunk, didn't you? Slipped something in his drink, and offer to help him home? Sound familiar?
Vicky: And thats why he tried it on with me again, on my own Hen Right, right?!
Natasha: You munipulative bitch! You're only doing this to break me and Kyle up, and wreck our relationship!
Amy coughs loudly. Natasha turns to her...
Natasha: Got something to say to me?!
Amy: Well, you'd know all about Wrecking Relationships, wouldn't you!
Natasha looks fuming at this comment. She looks back at Vicky, who has a look of disgust. She looks around the pub, and sees them staring at her. Her eyes well up with tears at the lack of support, and she runs out of the pub.
:clap: Nice one Amy - Natasha isn't exactly one who can go round preaching to people after what she got up to!
hehehe.. good girl amy.. you tell her what's what?
So Romeo/Roxy relationship is over then.. ah well that was fleeting
DaVeyWaVey
19-12-2006, 17:34
Just caught up with everything...i am glad Richard is approving of Tanya's relationship with Will...it will end in tears though once Tanya finds out he's an Ashworth.
I am glad Will isn't handing over the tape over to Hilary and Jared...i hope he doesn't get persauded into handing the tape over, it's about time Hilary and Craig got found out for the twins murder.
Good that Val's operation went well! I hope Romeo and Roxy haven't split up for good, they were a fun couple...seemed a bit harsh of Roxy just to walk off...
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - DAY
Emma is dancing to music in the living room, the doorbell rings. She answers the door to Amy.
Emma: Amy?
Amy: I just popped roiund to give you a caserole, what with your mom being away and all...
Emma: Oh thanks Amy that's really thoughtful of you... trust mom to run off on one of those bargain holidays just before Christmas...
Amy feels guilty for keeping Emma in the dark.
Emma: Want a cuppa whilst you're here?
Amy: Oh go on then, Patrick can run the bar by himself for a bit...
The pair walk into the kitchen, Amy puts down the caserole and takes a seat at the kitchen table.
Amy: It's good to see you in a better mood now...after the... it's nice to see a smile on your face...
Emma: Well I have reason to smile...
Amy: Hmmm, let me guess, a man?
Emma: (Beaming) Yeah! Tom!
Amy: Tom? Tom Adams?...Don't you think he's a bit too old for you...
Emma: Not at all, there's only a ten year gap...plus we're great frends, have a good connection...you know?
Amy: Sounds like you have it bad Emma...
Emma: Oh I do!
Amy: I know if your mom was here, she'd be saying that if you like him that much then you need to tell him...
Emma: And what would you say?
Amy: Get yourself dolled up and go to the party and get your man! :D
Emma beams with hapiness.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Tanya and Will walk into Jenkins Manor, loved up looks on their faces. They enter the living room where Hilary is standing by the fireplace, a drink in her hand.
Hilary: Why look who it isn't... the lovebirds...
Tanya: You're just jealous I have someone to love...
Hilary: I love your father...
Tanya: Yeah right, more like you love his bank balance...
Hilary: You really are the most obnoxious little daddies girl I've ever met...
Tanya: I just look out for my father...
Hilary: He doesn't need looking out for...
Tanya: He does when you're around...
Hilary: Whatever Tanya....
Hilary walks towards the drinks cabinet.
Hilary: Can I get either of you a drink... Tanya?...(Pause)...Will? :p
Will takes a nervous gulp then casts Hilary an evil look. Tanya looks at Hilary confused.
Tanya: Joe... his name's Joe...
Hilary: No Tanya, Will... you see before you come here with your arrogance and self confidence you should learn a few things...princeply something about your so called fiance... he's not "Joe Flecther" at all, he's actually the son of your father's worst enemy...
Tanya turns around to face Joe.
Hilary: His name is Will Ashworth...
Tanya glares at Will, he takes a nervous breath, Hilary smirks at the pair and the evident argument.
INT: BACHELOR'S HOUSE- Night
Emma walks into the House, nervous. The music is turned up almost unbareably loud, and the drink is flowing. She walks into the kitchen, and pours a drink to ease her nerves. Tom walks in...
Tom: Hi, Emma! Didn't know you were coming!
Tom looks at Emma up and down, and wolf whistles as he pours himself a drink. She nerviously giggles..
Emma: Well i wasn't, and then i was...
Emma realises how nervous and childish she is sounding, and downs her drink..
Tom: Take it easy there! And can i say, you are lookin mighty fine tonight! :cool:
Emma smilies..
Emma: Thank you!
Tom: So...
Theres a nervious pause between the pair
Emma: I just... I only wanted to.. The reason i came is because..
Tom: Whats wrong? You seem nervous?
Emma: I just... i think a lot of you Tom. And i mean a lot..
Tom: Are you telling me that you....and me....?
Emma nods faintly, and looks at him hopefully, willing him to say that he wants the same thing. This time, its him that nervously laughs..
Tom: Well, i... I'm flattered, but you know... theres a huge age gap between us, and we're into different things and well... i dont think it would work...
Emma tries to say something, but Tom stops her from interuptting..
Tom: You've helped me through some tough times. I think we've helped each other, really. But i really dont think...
Emma: (Interupts) Its a no, isn't it...
Tom: Sorry, hun..
Emma pours another drink, and downs it. She looks up at the same time, and sees some mistletoe above them. She laughs..
Emma: Bloomin' typical!
Tom: Well... tradition and all that....
Tom leans in, and kisses her gently, under the mistletoe
Now what would be great - would be for Tanya not to care that "Joe" is Will and to just turn around and say, well, I still love him so whatever Hilary. Taken my kids, but it stops now. Come on Tanya - be strong and give the cow what for!!
Right Bry and Abi.. you can't keep doing this to me... I want to know how Tanya is going to react!!! I hope like you Em, she tell Hilary she doesn't give a damn
do you think when Tom kisses Emma under the misteltoe that he realises he does have feelings for her???
INT: JENKINS MANOR- Day
Tanya: What?!
Hilary: He's an Ashworth, Tanya. He's been lying to you since he met you.
Tanya: Is this true!?
Will: I'm sorry...
Tanya: But... why?! How could you do this to me?!
Will: I just wanted you to get to know the real me. Without the money, and the family. If you knew who i was before now, you wouldn't have wanted anything to do with me, would you?
Tanya: But..
Will: I love you Tanya, i just wanted you to get to know who i really am, before judging me..
Tanya: Would you have ever told me, though?
Will: Of course i would have done. I'm sorry...
Tanya looks at Hilary in disgust, and then turns back to Will. She kisses him...
INT: BACHELOR'S HOUSE- Evening
Roxy knocks at the door, Romeo opens it and lets her in..
Roxy: Hi...
Romeo doesn't say anything..
Roxy: I'm sorry for reacting the way i did to all that. I just... i'm not a slut, Romeo. I dont sleep with people i've only just met, and i thought you would understand that. When the times right, we will. Just not straight away..
Romeo: I know..
Roxy: Ijust dont want us getting ahead of ourselves, you know? We're good together, but i just think we need to take things slow. Otherwise we'll lose what we've got... our spark...
Romeo: I understand, and i agree.
Roxy kisses him...
Romeo: Want to have a look at the lights?
Roxy: Sure
Romeo and Roxy leave the house, snuggled into each other. Chris walks in from the kitchen with a bottle of wine, and sits down and drinks it alone..
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - MORNING
James and Val enter the house, Val lookign weak, James carries her bag of clothes and helps her into the living room.
The room is decorated for Christmas, Val sees the tree and decorations.
Val: Oh the deccies are up!
James: Yeah, I wanted to suprise you for when you got back...
Val: Well you certainly have...
James: I wanted to make a real family Christmas, boost your spirits a bit...
Val: How can it be? Claire isn't here... besides I've got a long battle ahead yet, what with the after treatment and all that...
James sits down beside Val and holds her hand.
James: I'm here for you every step of the way Val, we are gonna get trough this, and you will be here next Christmas, the Christmas after that and the one after that... you're young...you're beautiful and I'm gonna make sure you're here for another 50 years!
James kisses Val tenderly and holds her in his arms as she gives a weak smile...
go on Tanya.. show Hilary you don't give a damn :cheer::cheer::cheer:
INT. LORRAINE'S APARTMENT - NIGHT
Val walks into her apartment and slams the door shut behind her. Her apartment is stylish and minamilisitc. She is on the phone to a police detective.
Lorraine: Honestly!? What the hell are you paid for! Well thanks to you a considerable amount of Charlie will be on the streets this Christmas! And when the doped up kids are ODing in A & E, have that on your bloody conscience!
Lorraine hangs up the phone and throws it against the wall in rage. She throws her coat and bag on the sofa and susicpiously shuts the blinds.
She unlocks a door and walks into a room. She closes the door behind her and switches on the lights.
Dim red lights light up the room, with polarioids of James all over the walls. Objects such as ties, socks, and wallet are layed out on a table. Lorraine stares at the photos on the wall, a look of rage on her face.
Lorraine: We might be over...but not for long darling... we will be together for ever!
Lorraine rips off her blouse and begins to passionatley kiss one of the polariods on the wall, she begins to make crazy sex noises. She then pulls away from the wall panting heavily, a crazy sinister look on her face.
:eek::eek: Lorraine is a mad possessed stalker!!!!!
Uh oh James!! Be very afraid!!!
Get on Tanya!! :cheer: I hope Will is telling the truth about his reasons for hiding his identity - I think he probably is. If you found out that you were going out with your fathers arch enemy's son, things would probably be different, so lets hope hes honourable. So far he hasn't given up the tape though, so it looks good to me
INT: HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE- Day
Michelle is on the phone, to an old friend...
Michelle: I know, its been a long time, hasn't it!? We should meet up again, at some point...
Michelle walks over to the sofa, and sits down...
Michelle: Maybe go for a drink or something?
The doorbell rings, she begins to stand up...
Michelle: Sorry hun, but i've got to go, someones at the door.... ok, speak soon, bye!
Michelle hangs up, and puts the phone on the table. She walks over to the door, and opens it, tentively...
Michelle: Hello?
No one is there, she closes the door, and breaths a sigh of releif. She walks away from the door, when it rings again. She turns around quickly, and stares at the door. Eventually, she opens it again. Once again, no one is there. The window smashes, making Michelle jump. She walks nervously into the livng room, when she is grabbed from behind. Someone puts their hand over her mouth, from the shadows. She struggles...
Callum: Surprise, Surprise! I'm back, babe! :cool:
INT: BELLAMY HOUSE- Day
Jared is in Will room. He opens his cupboard, and sieves through some boxes. He suddenly smiles...
Jared: Gotcha..
Jared stands up, holding a tape. He puts it in the machine, and plays it. It clearly shows Hilary's revelation. Jared turns it off, and picks up the phone..
Jared: Hilary? Guess what i've just found in a certain son's cupboard! :p
The shot flicks between Bellamy House, and Jenkins Manor..
Hilary: You havent!?
Jared: I sure have. I've got it, so theres no need to worry about that little problem any more! I'll destroy it in a moment...
INTERCUT:
INT: JENKINS MANOR- Day
The shot stays on Hilary. She smiles..
Hilary: Thanks Jared. That means a lot.
Will and Tanya walk into the room..
Hilary: Jared, i'm going to have to go. Thanks again, bye.
Hilary hangs up, and looks at Will and Tanya..
Hilary: Well, this is very confrontational! Anyone would think i'd done something wrong....
Tanya: Of course youve done something blooming wrong! Its in your make up, isn't it? Worked into your mind... like you can't function like any other human being...
Hilary: Oh now, come on. Give me some credit!
Will: The irony is, that it hasn't worked, has it? You tried to split us up, and it didn't work. You try and find that tape, and it hasn't worked. Isn't life just the pits, sometimes!
Tanya: And now theres two of us fighting this war. Two of us to prove what a murderous bitch you are! You're not going to get away with this, you mark my words.
Hilary: Thats right, is it?
Tanya: Of course it is. You need to face that fact, hunny, because nothing is going to stop me. You have no control over me (Looks at Will) Over either of us.
Hilary: Thing is... you've got a little problem in your plans...
Will: Oh yeah? Trying to bluff your way out of this, like you do out of everything else?!
Hilary: But theres no need to bluff out of this one, is there? Fact it, that precious tape of yours.... isn't anymore! Your evidence has been found, and Jared is burning it as we speak! So thing is... how can you prove what i've done now?!
Tanya looks at Will in disbelief
Hilary: Face it, kids. You can't prove anything. So give up, because i've already won!
EXT. BAYMOORE ALLEYWAY - NIGHT
Natasha is walking home alone, crying after the argument in the Red Rum. She whipes the wet mascara from her face and continues walking down the alleyway.
A dark figure, dressed in black suddenly appears down the alleway. He advances towards Natasha, who is totally oblivious of anyone behind her.
Natasha suddenly looks behind her, she sees the figure and begins to scream. He covers her mouth and drags her away kicking and screaming.
She does a karate move on him, he falls to the floor, as she runs off he grabs her leg and pulls her down to the ground. The pair tussle in the alleway, Natasha panting heavily, trying to escape. She pulls off the man's baliclava.
The camera cuts to see Natahsa's reaction at who the rapist is...
Natasha: Oh my god! It's you!...
INT. EXETER AIRPORT - NIGHT
A choir of carol singers are singing Silent Night. The aiprort is busy, with passengers waiting to depart.
Silent night, holy night
All is calm, all is bright
A woman walks trough the busy crowds of passengers. We see her from the back, at a distance. She is struggling with her luggage.
Round yon Virgin Mother and Child
Holy Infant so tender and mild
Closer up, the camera pans from her suitcase on wheels up her body, we see a blonde woman dressed in casual clothes.
Sleep in heavenly peace
Sleep in heavenly peace
The woman walks out of the airport and towards the taxi rank. The snow is falling, she pulls up her hood. The camera cuts to show Claire Andrews, her suitcase in one hand, and her baby boy in the other.
Claire: Come On Nathan, It's time for you to go and see your dadda...
What will Callumn do to Michelle?
What will pycho Lorraine do to get James back?
They've lost the battle but will Tanya and Will loose the war?
Claire's back...but whose the daddy?
Who is the Baymoore rapist?
Devon Seas Will Return In 2007...
Thank you to everyone who has read Devon Seas this year, I hope you've enjoyed it. Devon Seas will be back on January 1st for another year of shocks/suprises and sensational storylines!
Surely they have a copy!! I will not be happy if Hilary gets away with it again!! There has to be a copy!
OMG Who's the rapist?!?! You can't leave it like that!!! Noooo!!!! :crying:
Claires back!! Whos the daddy?!
All this exciting stuff - you can't leave it like this!! Please?! Some spoilers maybe, just for lil' ol' me...go onnnnn, you know you want to?! :D :D
NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!! you can't leave it like that Bry...
Oh my god, Tanya you better have a copy.. Who is the daddy? and my god who is the rapist!!!! I need to know now!!!!
Em, they are so mean to us loyal readers, won't even give us a hint of anything :crying::crying::crying:
NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!! you can't leave it like that Bry...
Oh my god, Tanya you better have a copy.. Who is the daddy? and my god who is the rapist!!!! I need to know now!!!!
Em, they are so mean to us loyal readers, won't even give us a hint of anything :crying::crying::crying: You should have seen me pleading and begging on MSN last night Siobhan :rotfl: Desperate times called for desperate measures and he told me.............
Nothing!!!! Absolutely diddly squat! Well, apart from a bit of a crossword type clue and I think I may have figured out what it means which is pretty exciting, but even so....how long to wait till we find all this out!! So unfair!!!
DaVeyWaVey
22-12-2006, 15:25
Wow! Just caught up...so many great cliffhangers! I hope Michelle will escape Callum's clutches without getting hurt. I wonder who the rapist is too! I can't believe you left it like that! :eek:
I can't believe Hilary has got away with it again! She needs to get her commeupance and soon!
I can't wait until DS returns in 2007! :cheer:
bakedbean
26-12-2006, 19:36
What a way to end the year, so many questions need to be answered. Who is the rapist???? When will DS be back???
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE – NIGHT
Christmas Eve. Val and Emma are sat on the sofa watching Deal Or No Deal. James walks into the room, an apron on him, looking flustered.
James: Front or back passage?
Val: I beg your pardon?
James: For the turkey stuffing, the neck or the backside…
Val: Oh I usually stick it up the bum :p
Val and Emma go into hysterics. James rubs his hands trough his hair in stress and returns to the kitchen.
Emma: How did you manage to make him do that?
Val: Do what hun?
Emma: Cooking the Christmas Dinner…He’s never cooked a meal in his life…well not for as long as I can remember
Val: I just think he wants to pull his weight, make it a Christmas to remember… but hey if it means I can sit on the sofa Christmas eve with a cup of tea and Noel Edmonds then you wont see me complaining.
Emma smiles and returns focusing her attentions at the TV. Val looks at her, feeling guilty for not telling her the truth about her cancer. Keys can be heard opening the front door. James walks in from the kitchen, the three of them look confused.
James: Who on earth…?
Val: Claire!? Claire is that you!?
Claire enters the room with a confident smile on her face.
Claire: Hiya! Merry Christmas!
James hugs her, Emma and Val face her, and everyone’s pleased to see her back.
Val: I can’t believe it! You’re back!
James: Why didn’t you say you were coming!?
Claire: I wanted to surprise you…
All of a sudden the sound of Nathan crying in the hallway can be heard. Val, James and Emma look at Claire in confusion.
Claire: And it looks like that’s exactly what I’m gonna do…
DaVeyWaVey
01-01-2007, 13:21
Yay Devon Seas is back! I wonder how Val, James and Emma will react to Claire's baby!
EXT. BAYMOORE ALLEYWAY - NIGHT
Natasha is walking home alone, crying after the argument in the Red Rum. She whipes the wet mascara from her face and continues walking down the alleyway.
A dark figure, dressed in black suddenly appears down the alleyway. He advances towards Natasha, who is totally oblivious of anyone behind her.
Natasha suddenly looks behind her, she sees the figure and begins to scream. He covers her mouth and drags her away kicking and screaming.
She does a karate move on him, he falls to the floor, as she runs off he grabs her leg and pulls her down to the ground. The pair tussle in the alleyway, Natasha panting heavily, trying to escape. She pulls off the man's balaclava.
The camera cuts to see Natasha’s reaction at who the rapist is...
Natasha: Oh my god! It's you!...
The attacker punches her in the face, she is knock out, her head falling to the floor. He violently thumps her head two more times. As he gets up his heavy breathing can be heard. He deals one final kick to her head before running off. Leaving her alone, fighting her for life…
OOooooo :cheer:
Glad Claire's back, but we still don't know who the attacker is!!! Come on Bry, tell us!!!!! *gets on bended knee*
Edit: I hope she's ok!! Has our rapist turned into a murderer??!!
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
James: What on Earth!?
Claire re-enters the room, having removed Nathan from his baby carrier. James and Emma look totally shocked.
Claire: Mom...Dad...meet your grandson...Nathan...
James: I do not believe this!
Emma: A baby!? I never even knew you were pregnant!
James: Nor did any of us! What the hell did you think you were playing at Claire telling none of us about this!?
Val remains quiet, fully aware of the baby.
Claire: I needed to get my head around the pregnancy myself!
James: And do you know whose baby it is!?
Claire: Of course I do!... It's Romeo's...
The look on Claire's face seems to show some uncertainty.
James: Of all the days to spring this on us! Christmas Eve!
Claire: I'm sorry! I thought you might have wanted your daughter and grandson back for Christmas!
James turns away from Claire, to restrain himself. He seems Val looking awkward. He puts two and two together.
James: You knew about this didn't you!?
Claire: Dad...
James: Did she know about this!? About you...and the baby!?
Val: YES! Yes I did!
James: And you didn't see fit to tell me!?
Val: It wasn't my place to say!
James: I'm her father! I had a right to know!
Claire: Look! All that matters is I'm here...with Nathan... nothing can change that... so get used to it...you're now a grandad...
James bites his lip, clealry annoyed at his daughter's deceit.
Emma: So much for "a Christmas to remember" :rolleyes:
EXT. BAYMOORE ALLEYWAY - NIGHT
Ruby and Sanjita are walking back from the Red Rum.
Ruby: I can't believe Natasha made a fool of herself like that...
Sanjita: She might be your friend but she deserved it...
Ruby: For christ sake mom it was one mistake with Patrick! We've all made mistakes, me dont deserve to be vilifed for it...
Sanjita: Well she's doing herself no favours, acting the way she is...
As the pair enter the alleyway they see someone lying on the floor.
Ruby: Oh god! Who is it!?
Ruby runs towards Natasha. Sanjita stands on the spot, horiffied - as if reliving the nightmare.
Sanjita: No...no...not again...
Ruby gets down on her knees and turns Natahsa's had over, she sees who it is and screams in shock, blood gushing from her head.
Ruby: Mom! It's Natasha!
Sanjita is stood on the spot, shaking with nerves, unable to move.
Ruby: Mom! Help!
Marcus runs over towards the scene, and sees Sanjita standing on the spot, and Ruby screaming.
Marcus: What's going on!?
Ruby: it's Nastasha, she's been attacked! She's bleeding...call an ambulance! Now!
Ruby holds Natasha in her arms, worried that she wont pull trough...
Why can't James be happy Claire has come back. He's got a grandson, be happy instead of angry! Perhaps your reaction being this is exactly the reason she didn't tell you in the first place?!
I hope Natasha is ok!
Welcome back Devon Seas!!! :cheer:
DaVeyWaVey
02-01-2007, 12:50
Oh no, poor Natasha! :( I hope she pulls through, so she can reveal who the Baymoore rapist is! But with head injuries like that, if she did pull through...would she remember anything?!
INT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Christmas Day. Traditional Christmas carols are playing on the radio. Hilary, Tanya and Nick are sat at the dinner table eating a large Christmas feast. Richard returns to the table, having been on the phone.
Hilary: Any luck?
Richard: No.. she isn't reply... I hope everything's ok...
Nick: I'm sure Michelle will be up in a bit, just sit down and enjoy your meal...
Richard takes a seat. The family begin eating their Christmas meal. There is an evident hatred between Tanya and Hilary as they cast each other evil looks and cut away at their meat in fury.
Richard: Ok what's the deal with you two?
Tanya: As if you didn't know...:rolleyes:
Hilary: I have no idea Richard... but it's really starting to bug me...
Richard: Look! the pair of you! Can't you just bury the hatchet!?
Tanya: No way!
Richard: It's a time for forgiving... please... make it up...for me?
Hilary puts down her cutlery, unable to eat her meal, she pushes the plate away.
Nick: Mom?
Hilary: I'm sorry but I can't eat...not with her giving me daggered looks...Richard you need to know the truth...
Richard: The truth?
Hilary: About Tanya, and her new gentleman friend... she's been lying to you...
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Callum: Surprise, Surprise! I'm back, babe!
Michelle starts to scream.
Michelle: Help! Help!
Callumn puts his hand over her mouth, muffling out her cries for help.
Callumn: There's no point screaming 'Shell, there's no body about, I've checked...
Michelle begins to sob, realising she is trapped.
Callumn: Whether you like it or not, I'm back in your life...
Callumn gives Michelle a sinister look, Michelle is terrified.
http://www.worldrecordgolftour.co.uk/images/craigfairbrass.jpg
Callumn Howard played by Craig Fairbrass
Michelle's violent ex husband who has appeared in Baymoore hoping to savlage their troubled marraige. Callumn is a passionate man who often lets his emotions get the better of him. When fuelled with alchol Criag can be a jealous and extremley agressive man, having terrorised Michelle and her mom Kate for years.
So now Hilary is going to drive that wedge between Tanya and Richard by telling him about her going out with Will Ashworth, and revealing his true identity! What a cow!
Poor Michelle - tries to escape from her violent past and he catches up with her! Can any of the Baymoore residents help her this time maybe?!
DaVeyWaVey
02-01-2007, 16:04
Uh-oh! Hilary's gonna reveal all, and over Christmas dinner as well!! :eek: She could have left it for a better time...
Someone better get to Michelle in time before she gets hurt! I'm not liking this Callum character..
ooohh!!! Welcome back DS.. What a start to the new year!!!! I hope James doesn't stay to mad at Claire and Val.. he is a granddad now!!
Hope natasha is going to be ok. Great job again Bry and Abi !!!
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - DAY
Jared and Will are sat in the living room, having a sherry after finishing their Christmas meal.
Will: The queen's speech should be on it a bit dad...
Jared: I couldn't care in the slighest...
Will: But it's family tradition
Jared: Stuff with tradition!
Will: Look what's up dad, you've been off with me all week...
Jared: One word...Tanya...
Will: Oh for heavens sake dad, not you aswell! It's bad another Richard putting his veto on our relationship, I never for one second thought you'd be so narrow minded to condemn us!
Jared: I've always supported the decisons you made... treated you like an adult, but a Taylor!? Honestly William, how could you be so bloody stupid!
Will: It's only a name!
Jared: Her father ruined this family Will!
Will: She's nothing like Richard or the rest of the Taylors!
Jared: When it comes to the crunch, children follow after their parents more than you would imagine...
Will: Look dad I really don't care about you and Richard's age old feud... she is the woman I love and regardless of what you say or do, I will remain engadged to her!
Jared: More fool you!
Will: I don't have to put up with this!
Will storms out of the room, barging past Lauren who has just entered the room. Lauren asses the scene and looks concerned for her brother...
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - DAY
Michelle is now seated on the sofa, shaking with nerves. Callumn paces the room, clearly intimidating her.
Michelle: (Weakly) How did you find out where I was?
Callumn: Kate told me...
Michelle: Mom!? What have you done to her!?
Callumn: I haven't done anything to her... I wouldn't harm her...or you...not anymore... I can assure you I'm no longer a violent man...
Michelle: Oh yeah, and smashing windows and pinning me against walls is your idea of peace and harmony then!?
Callumn: That was just!.... Emotions!.... I thought I'd lost you 'Shell! When you left me I was heartbroken! I felt like my heart had been torn out... I'm sorry for everything I've done to you... I love you...and I need you 'Shell!
Callumn sits down beside her, grabs her arms and stares into her eyes.
Callumn: I want us to give our marriage a serious go... that's why I've come to Devon...
Oh Callumn sounds like a very very nasty piece of work (as an aside, excellent charater choice BB...)
INT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Hilary: About Tanya, and her new gentleman friend... she's been lying to you...
Richard: What do you mean (confused) Tanya?
Tanya: (To Hilary) You wouldn't dare tell him...
Hilary: (Smugly) "Joe" is actually called Will... Will Ashworth...
Tanya: I don't believe you! You had no right!
Hilary: He'd have found out eventually, besides he has a right to know when his daughter is dating the son of his enemy!
Richard: Will the pair of you shut up!
Hilary: But...
Richard: Shut up! Enough of this petty bickering between you both!
Tanya whipes her mouth with a napkin, casting Hilary a smug grin from across the dinner table, thinking she has won. Richard turns to face her, and explodes with rage.
Richard: And you... you stupid little girl! What the hell do you think you're doing getting with the son of Jared Ashworth!
Tanya: (Sarcastic) Oh he's your buisness rival, heaven forbid, it hardly makes him and his family demonic...
Richard: It runs a lot deeper than that! Jared has some petty vendetta going on and I don't want you caught up in the cross fire!
Tanya: Whatever you too are at war about, it doesn't involve me or Will... you can fight all you want but I'll be damned if it ruins our relationship!
Tanya gets up and storms out of the dining room. Hilary has a smug grin on her face.
Hilary: More Turkey anyone? :D
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - MORNING
Val and Claire are sitting at the kitchen table. The stuffed turkey is on the side, ready to go into the oven.
Claire: Not quite the Christmas you and dad were expecting then? :rolleyes:
Val: There's nothing I wanted more than you back here at Christmas babe...
Claire: I don't think dad shares you degree of hapines...
Val: Oh he's just shocked hun... he wasn't expecting you come back with a baby...
Claire: I really should have told him...
Val: Don't go tearing yourself up over it Claire...at the time you didn't know what you were going to do...whether you were going to keep it... or who the father was...'
Claire: It's a big enough mess as it is, I could have done with his support...
Val: And he will give it to you, just give him time...you're back now, with your family, that's the right decision.
Claire takes a sip of her cup of tea, and rubs her hand trough her hair with stress.
Claire: But now I'm back, I've got to face the music, I can't hide the fact that I've got a baby from Chris and Romeo for long...what am I going to do mom!?
Val: All I can tell you hun is that you have to follow your heart...make the decison that will make you and Nathan happy...
Val holds Claire's hand tightly and gives her a supportive smile.
INT: HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE- Day
Michelle stands up quickly, and backs away from Callumn. He follows her, menacingly..
Callumn: I've kicked the booze. It was screwing my mind up, i didn't know what i was doing...
Michelle: You can't blame the booze for the violence, that was all you...
Callumn: I didn't know what i was doing. You mean the world to me, Mich;
Michelle is backed against the wall. Callumn stands over her, and runs his fingers through her hair,
Callumn: Without you, i'm nothing. I think we should have a fresh start, give our marriage another go... What do you think?
INT: BACHELORS HOUSE- Day
Claire walks up to the House, and knocks on the door. Chris opens the door, with a shocked look on his face...
Chris: Its you!!
Claire: Sure looks like it, doesn't it!
Chris: Are you... ok?
Claire: Yep. Thats it with the formalities i hope?
Chris nods and looks down
Claire: Whats wrong? I thought you'd be pleased to see me, not so distant like this...
Chris: Its just...
Claire: I mean, come on, you've not even invited me in! You were up for it last time i was here, whats different now?!
Claire pushed past him, and walks into the house
Claire: So come on, some answers would be good!
Chris: Its just... things have changed, Claire. They're developed, and moved on...
Claire: Things? What things?
Romeo walks down the stairs, and is shocked to see Claire
uh oh!! she doesn't know about Roxy yet and is the baby really his???
bakedbean
03-01-2007, 19:37
I like Callum what a great new charecter and what a way to start 2007.
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - DAY
Will lies on his bed, stressed from his argument with his father. Lauren pokes her head around the door, knocking to get his permission.
Lauren: Mind if I come in?
Will: Sure....
Lauren perches herself on the edge of Will's bed.
Lauren: Dad isn't gonna be happy if you carry on seeing that Tanya...
Will: I couldn't give a damn!
Lauren: I must admit I feel the same way Will...We're not doing it to hurt you, we're doing it because I care for you...
Will: I'm my own man, I can make my own decisions...I know that Tanya is the one...
Lauren: Oh like Olivia was!? And Melissa before that!?
Will: What are you getting at!?
Lauren: You're a fool for love, always have been... you get blinded by their love and loose any sense of reality of what they are really like!
Will: Oh don't be so stupid...
Lauren: She is a Taylor Will! How many years has dad been going on about them!? You're hurting him by doing this you know... it's the worst thing you could do to him!
Will: I dont care about the feud, It hasn't affected me personally so I don't care...
Lauren: Listen Will as your sister I'm begging you to end it... she's not right for you... I can't condone it...
Will: You're just as bad as dad! The sooner the pair of you get into your heads that me and Tanya are for keeps the better! Now get out of my room!
Lauren bites her lip and leaves the room, slamming the door behind her, a clear look of annoyance on her face.
Why can't they leave Tanya and Will alone - ok so there has been a family feud which has gone on for many years, but like Will said, Tanya has never done anything to him - if its real, they'll stay together no matter what, if its not meant to be, it will soon fizzle out. The more the families try and tear them apart, the more they will be determined to stay together (at least, thats what I'm like anyway lol)
INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - DAY
Romeo walks down the stairs, and is shocked to see Claire.
Claire: (Shocked) Romeo...
Romeo: Claire... wow! You're back!
Claire: Yeah last night...
Romeo: How are you doing? Look I'm sorry about the way things turned out...
Claire: Look, I've got to go...
Without saying her goodbyes Claire rushes out of the house in a panic. Romeo gives Chris a look of concern. Chris leaves the house and follows after Claire.
INTERCUT:
EXT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE
Chris: Claire! Claire!
Claire stops and turns to face Chris as he runs towards her.
Chris: What's up?
Claire: It doesn't matter Chris...
Chris: Of course it matters, is everything okay?
Claire: No Chris! Everything isn't okay! There's a baby over the road! You're baby!
Chris is shocked...
:eek: Is it really Chris' baby then?! I thought she wasn't sure...does she know for definite or is it wishful thinking or.....
Ooooo keep going!! And how is Natasha doing?! Is she ok??
DaVeyWaVey
04-01-2007, 20:21
Just caught up! Will, don't listen to Jared or Lauren, stay with Tanya if that makes you feel happy!
Does Claire know that Chris is the baby's father? And what is Michelle going to do? Whatever she does, she shouldn't take Callum back!
INT: TORBAY HOSPITAL- Day
Sanjita walks into Natashas Hospital room, holding some flowers. Ruby is sitting by her, looking at her unconcious body..
Sanjita: I thought i'd come see how she is...
Ruby: You barely know her properly, why would you care?
Sanjita: I know what shes been through.
Sanjita sits on the opposite side of Natasha, and puts her flowers on the side of the bed.
Sanjita: I was attacked too, remember...
Ruby: I know.. I'll go get us some teas...
Ruby walks to the door.
Ruby: And i'd find a vase for those flowers if i were you.
Sanjita forces a smile, and turns back to Natasha as Ruby leaves.
Sanjita: Oh god Nat. This shouldn't have happened again... Not 3 times... Why can't they stop this? All these people.. all this pain..
Sanjita looks at Natashas face. Her mouth twitches..
Sanjita: Natasha!? Natasha, can you hear me? Nat, its Sanjita.. Nat?
Natashas eyes flicker open...
Was Natasha actually raped aswell then or was she just beaten?? I'm slightly confused now, but fantastic thats shes opened her eyes - though will she remember anything....
EXT: BACHELORS BOYS HOUSE
Chris: What!?
Claire: You heard me. You've got a son, Chris; Nathan.
Chris: You MUST be joking me! I dont have a son! Dont be so ridiculous, you would have told me before now!
Claire: Would i? Would i really?
Chris: But... how do you know if i'm even the father?! You better not be trying to get maintainence out of me for someone elses kid!
Claire: Dont be so stupid, i'm not that pathetic. Of course you're the father, i'm not some slut you know!
Chris: Oh really? What about Romeo then?!
Claire: What about him?
Chris: He could be the father as much as what i could! You were sleeping with him too, remember?!
Claire: Well... you should have thought about that before you slept him me..
Chris: Oh no way! Dont you have any guilt for that at all? Sorry Claire, but i dont want anything to do with your kid. Its probably not even mine, for Gods sake! And what am i on about... i'm not sorry about it. Its a fact, not an apology. Its your child, not mine.
Chris storms off, leaving Claire alone in the street.
Why can't they leave Tanya and Will alone - ok so there has been a family feud which has gone on for many years, but like Will said, Tanya has never done anything to him - if its real, they'll stay together no matter what, if its not meant to be, it will soon fizzle out. The more the families try and tear them apart, the more they will be determined to stay together (at least, thats what I'm like anyway lol)
Ditto Em.. I would be the same..
I am confused too.. was Natasha raped too? Is she going to be able to remember who she saw?
DaVeyWaVey
05-01-2007, 10:04
Was Natasha actually raped aswell then or was she just beaten?? I'm slightly confused now, but fantastic thats shes opened her eyes - though will she remember anything....
No the rapist tried to attack Natasha but she forced a struggle and ended up removing his balaclava and she found out who the rapist was. Then the rapist just beat her up and fled.
INT TORBAY HOSPITAL- Day
Sanjita: Natasha? Can you hear me?
Natasha mumbles under her breath..
Natasha: Sanjita?
Sanjita: Yeah, its me hun. How you feeling?
Natasha: I... I... What... Whats happened?
Sanjita: You're in hospital... You've been unconcious for a while, but you're going to be ok.
Natasha: Hospital?! Why?!
Sanjita: You were attacked... Dont you remember anything?
Natasha: I... No... I can't remember a thing...
Sanjita: So you dont know who it was?
Natasha: No..
Sanjita holds her hand, looking concerned..
INT: ANDREW'S HOUSE- Morning
Val walks down the stairs in her dressing gown. She picks up some letters from the door, and throws them onto the table. She walks into the Kitchen. James walks downstairs..
James: Where did you put the post, hun?
Val: On the table. I can't even focus on those things untill i've got a coffee in me!
James smiles at this, and picks up the post. He flicks through them, and sees one with the hospital stamp on it..
James: Val... Its the hospital..
Val walks in and opens the letter
Val: Its the chemo. They're confirming the first appointment for it...
James: Oh Val... I'm sorry..
Val: Dont be...It just... It just seems so real now. Like this is really happening...
Oh no!! Tasha can't remember who the person was. Poor Val.. I hope she gets through this ok but she has to tell her daughters
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - DAY
Michelle is backed against the wall. Callumn stands over her, and runs his fingers through her hair,
Callumn: Without you, i'm nothing. I think we should have a fresh start, give our marriage another go... What do you think?
Michelle: I dont know Callumn...
Callumn realises he is surrounding her, he steps back and puts his hands in his pockets.
Callumn: Please Shell, when you left...
Michelle: Yeah and have you ever asked yourself why I left?
Callumn: I know how you feel...
Michelle: No Callumn! No you dont! You try living every day on the edge, expecting to get beaten for no apparant reason! Made to feel this small (indicates). You made my life hell!
Callumn: I loved you!
Michelle: You scared me!
Callumn: I know! And I'm sorry! It was becuase of the drink and I've got rid of it now!
Michelle: Like that's going to stay that way, once a drunk alwasy a drunk!
Callumn: Shell, all you're so important to me...
Callumn sits down beside Michele, close to tears.
Callumn: Just one more chance...
Michelle tries to turn her head away but he repeats it to empthaise how he means in.
Callumn: One more chance Shell... and if I blow it then I will willingly leave you alone...
Callumn puts his hands on her head and turns it to face him.
Michelle: (Nervously) Ok...
A joyful Callumn hugs her and keeps her in his arms, Michelle remains scared.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Hilary is pacing the room, on her mobile phone to Jared, a smug smile on her face.
Hilary: Hows things you're end... trouble in paradise?...
Jared: Of course...
Hilary: Excellent :D
Jared: I have to see you soon, I still haven't given you your christmas present...
Hilary: Oh yeah, and what is it? :p
Jared: A sexy set of underwear...and I cannot wait to see you in them...
The front door opens at Jenkins Manor.
Hilary: Look someone's home...got to go...bye.
Hilary puts the phone down just as Tanya enters the room.
Hilary is on the phone to Jared “Trouble in paradise?” “excellent” they flirt about knickers he got her for Christmas, she puts the phone down as Tanya walks in.
Hilary:Tanya :rolleyes:
Tanya walks towards Hilary, a look of utter contempt on her face.
Tanya:Do you know what...I truely hate you...
Hilary: The feeling is mutual...
Tanya: You might be smiling now...but sooner or later you will slip up...and when you do I will make sure everyone realises what an evil peice of work you actually are...
Tanya leaves the room. Hilary is alone, she takes a nervous gulp, the smile knocked off her face.
DaVeyWaVey
05-01-2007, 22:08
Oh no Michelle! Why did you take Callum back!? This shows how much Michelle is really scared of him...she is agreeing to what she knows will make him happy!
And Natasha can't remember anything! I hope her memory comes back to her and she can remember who she unmasked as the Baymoore rapist.
INT. TORBAY HOSPITAL - DAY
Sanjita is sat outside Natasha's hopsital room, she can see James interviewing her trough the window. James leaves the room, Sanjita gets up to speak to him.
Sanjita: Any luck?
James: Not really I'm afraid. She can't remember anything...
Sanjita: There's a chance she will regain her memory tough...
James: Yeah, but untill she does we're stumped
Sanjita: Well surely you aren't just relying on her? What about forensics? Evidence at the scene...?
James: They found nothing. Without Natasha's information we aren't any nearer finding the ******* that's done this...
Sanjita: You need to keep trying James, you HAVE to find this man before he hurts anymore women!
Sanjita is clearly distressed that her attacker is still on the loose.
why couldnt she rememeber anything, thats so frustrating. I hope her memory comes back soon.
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Tanya is sitting at her dressing table, in her bedroom, dressed in an expensive dress, she is brushing her hair. Richard walks into the room.
Richard: May is serving up dinner in a few minutes Tanya....
Tanya: Oh tell her not to do any for me, I'm going out for dinner
Richard: With the Ashworth I suppose? :rolleyes:
Tanya: With Will.... Look dad I don't want you to be like this with me all the time...
Richard: Like what?
Tanya: Frosty, disaproving...
Richard: You're going to get hurt again Tanya...
Tanya: I have been all my life, one thing after another, I'm used to it dad and can deal with it...
Richard: Why deal with it when you can prevent it?
Tanya: Because unlike you I have confidence in Will, I truely believe he's the right man for me dad...
Richard: Gary is barely dead Tanya!
Tanya: Yeah be he is tough dad! He's gone now! And being with Will is my way of getting over him, I will never stop loving Gary dad, but I need to move on....
Richard looks uncomfortable with this. Tanya gets up, and begins to leave the room, passing Richard on her way.
Tanya: You sooner you realise that Dad, the better, becuase I can't take much more...
why couldnt she rememeber anything, thats so frustrating. I hope her memory comes back soon.
because she's been punched and kicked in the head repeatedly by her attacker
plus it's soapland, it wouldn't be fun if she blurted it all straight away would it? :lol:
I'm wondering aswell, if the rapist will go to the hospital, as its one of the regulars, wanting to see if Natasha is "ok" (although, more so to see if she remembers that its him) and then, when she sees him, she'll remember who it was, but not let on to the attacker that she has remembered this.
Great stuff though - good on you Tanya, you do what makes you feel happy, think of Number 1!
INT: HARVEY'S MOTORS- Day
Craig is sitting out the back, with his feet up on the table. His phone rings, he reluctantly picks it up...
Craig: Hello?.... What did i say about you ringing my mobile? They can trace these things you know!... Face-to-Face only, i told you...
Craig rolls his eyes, and paces around the room on his mobile..
Craig: So come on, whats so desperate that you've got to ring me on here?
Craig smiles at the reply he gets, and sits on the edge of his desk..
Craig: That will get me a lot of money... I dont care how illegal those drugs are, if they get me profit, then i'll get them. As much as possible.
Craig sits back at his desk, and puts his feet back on the desk, still on the phone
Craig: Yep, give it the go ahead.
Craig hangs up, smiling
INT: ANDREW'S HOUSE- Day
Val sits next to Claire on the sofa..
Val: I thought we could go into town today, for some sale shopping? Your Dad will look after the baby, i'm sure
Claire: Yeah, whatever...
Val: We could go out for a meal as well, if you wanted. Theres a new Cavery opened up in town, its meant to be very classy
Claire: Ok, i dont mind...
Val stops talking, and looks at Claire
Val: Whats wrong, hun?
Claire: I told Chris about Nathan, and that he's the father...
Val: And?
Claire: He doesn't want anything to do with it. He would barely give me the time of bloody day! Its his son, Mum... Why wont he even come and see his own son?!
James enters the room, having heard everything
So is Claire definite that it is Chris' baby then, when it could quite as easily be Romeo's??
I wonder what James' reaction to this is going to be though - why do I get the feeling it won't be a pretty sight :hmm:
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - DAY
Kate knocks on the front door. Michelle answers the door. Kate looks flusterd and worried.
Kate: Michelle, oh thank god, I was so worried!
Michelle: Why?
Kate: Are you okay?
Michelle: I'm fine mom...
Kate detects that something isn't right. Callumn walks to the front door and wraps his arms around Michelle and begins to kiss her neck.
Kate: Callumn...
Callumn: Kate...well don't look so suprised, you told me where she was...I wasn't just going to ignore it was I?
Kate: (Concerened) Are you sure you're okay Shell?
Callumn: Of course she's okay, why wouldn't she be?
Michelle: I'm okay mom..
Callumn: She's with me now, everything's going to be alright...
Callumn hugs Michelle, she gives a slightly nervous look. Kate is clearly worried for her daughter's safety, knowing Callumn all too well.
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - DAY
James enters the room, having heard everything, Claire closes her eyes aware of the inevitable argument.
Val: Look James...
James: I can't believe what I'm hearing Claire, how could you be so bloody irresponsible!?
Claire: Dad please, I could do without you having a go...
James: Chris!? You told me it was Romeo's.
Claire: Chris! Romeo! What does it matter!?
James: It matters, when it concerns your son in there!
Claire: I'm best off without eitehr of them...
James: And what the hell do you think you were doing going with that Chris fellow? You've well and truely ballsed up your relationship with Romeo now haven't you!?
Claire: We had split up anyway dad!
James: That's no excuse to go sleeping around without protection! And with his best mate! You've blown any chance of getting back with him now!
Claire: Do you think I don't know that dad!? Why do you think I'm in such a state about it!?
James: Chris Langden! He's a bloody loser! The most irresponsible father that Nathan could have!
Claire: Yeah well you shouldn't worry about it dad, becuase he doesn't want anything to do with him!
James: You what!?
Val: Look James, don't get involved! It's up to Claire and him to sort out!
James: If he thinks he's gonna get my daughter up the duff and not support her, he's got another thing coming!
James storms out of the kitchen, both Val and Claire concerned about what he will do...
Oh calm down James for gawds sake!!! Flies off the handle far too quickly, and hes really one to talk isn't he! :hmm: Am I remembering correctly that James had the affair with Lorraine?! And HE was the one who was going to leave Val, but only didn't because of the cancer!
Get a grip mate - you really aren't going to do yourself or your daughters any favours by behaving in this manner!!!!
bakedbean
07-01-2007, 17:13
Wonder what Craigs up to i really hope he gets whats coming to him.
DaVeyWaVey
07-01-2007, 19:18
Uh-oh, there is going to be trouble ahead for Chris...
INT: HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE
Michelle is in the Kitchen making a cup of tea. She daydreams whilst stirring the cup. Kate comes in behind her, and makes her jump. She talks with a hushed voice..
Kate: Whats going on then?!
Michelle: I dont know what you mean...
Kate: Why are you letting him back into your life again, after everything he did to you?!
Michelle: He's changed... He seems so different this time..
Kate: Leapards and Spots, hun! You're a fool for letting him back in your life.
Michelle: Thats my decision to make
Kate: You're going to get hurt again and again, Mich. I can't step back and watch him do this to you again.
Michelle: And i told you, he's changed. He wont do that to me. Not again.
Kate: Unless you let go of him now, he wont change. People like him never do. And he'll carry on, untill he leads you to an early grave, you mark my words.
Kate walks out the backdoor, into the frosty garden. Callumn stands at the door, having listened to everything.
INT BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE- Night
Romeo, Roxy and Chris are sitting down eating their meal...
Romeo: This is great, Roxy. You're really talented... in more ways than one :p
Roxy: Watch it you!
They laugh, and look over at Chris. He looks distant.
Romeo: Whats wrong, Chris?
Chris: Nothing... i'm just not hungry, thats all..
Theres a knock at the door. Chris goes to answer it, but Roxy stands up.
Roxy: I'll get it, you sit back down :)
She answers the door, James storms in past him..
James: Where is he? Where the **** is he?!
Chris looks nervous. James grabs his collar, and drags him out of his seat.
Chris: I'm sorry! I didn't mean this to happen!
James: Cut out the pathetic "Sorrys". Empty words, thats all they are! Only a heartless ****** like you would forget your ****ing responsibilities!
James punches him in the face, sending him flying into the table. Roxy runs over, to help. Romeo stands up..
Romeo: What the hell is this all about?!
Chris and James look at each other, Chris willing him not to say anything...
Romeo: Well?!
James: So you haven't told him!?
Chris: Please... James...
James looks at Romeo.
James: This so called "Mate" of you got Claire pregnant! His son is over the road there now!
Romeo looks at Chris, furious
:eek:
Uh oh!!!
Whats going to happen now!!?! James is going to end up losing his job the way he's carrying on though - he can't go round hitting people like that!
Have we had 4 episodes already today?! Please can you sneak in another one Abs - i'm sure Bry won't mind :D
:eek:
Uh oh!!!
Whats going to happen now!!?! James is going to end up losing his job the way he's carrying on though - he can't go round hitting people like that!
Have we had 4 episodes already today?! Please can you sneak in another one Abs - i'm sure Bry won't mind :D
Let me think about this... :hmm: ...
Nah! Patience, me dear!
Let me think about this... :hmm: ...
Nah! Patience, me dear!
Awww - gooooooo on!!! Purlease!!!
Ahh, ok - I understand....*sob*
Roll on tomorrow!!! :cheer:
What the hell is James up to?? Can't he leave things alone?
Poor Michelle, it doesn't look good for her.. he is not going to change
INT. BAYMOORE HEALTH SPA - DAY
Richard, Hilary and Nick walk around the site of the spa, hard hats on their heads. They walk past builders as they work on the interior of the spa. Richard is explaining to her about the site.
Richard: So this will be the restaraunt, looking over the swimming pool...
Hilary: This is looking very promising...
Richard: When this is completed...It was will be the biggest project to date...
Nick: Restaurant, Spa, Pool, Gym, Beauty Salon...the works...if this doesn't draw in the punters I dont know what will...
Richard: All being well we will be racking it in come the summer.
Hilary is clearly excited at the prospect of more money.
Hilary: Amazing, much better than that old bingo hall...
Richard: If only the locals would see it like that...
Hilary: Surely you can see where they are coming from?
Richard: Not at all, the bingo hall contributed nothing to this community, the spa on the other hand will be to making of Baymoore... I tell you know Hilary, this is a sign of good things to come for the Taylors...
Richard beams with enthuiasm.
INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - DAY
James: This so called "Mate" of you got Claire pregnant! His son is over the road there now!
Romeo looks at Chris, furious. Claire enters the house, realising that James has told them all.
Romeo: You've got to be joking me!?
James: Why would I?
Romeo: (Furious to Claire) Is this true!?
Claire nods nervously.
Romeo: How the hell can you have his baby!? It's not been nine months since we split!
James: Isn't it obvious? This scumbag has been knocking up my daughter behind your back, and mine!
Claire: Dad, it's got nothing to do with tou!
James: It has when people make a fool out of my daughter and grandson!
Romeo: You slept with Chris!? Serious!? This isn't some kind of sick wind up!?
Claire: (Emotional) Yes! How many more times!?
Roxy is holding a bag of peas in a dish cloth to Chris' face. Romeo charges towards Chris outraged.
Romeo: I'm gonna bloody kill you!
Shouting from all. Roxy grabs hold of Chris, the pair of them looking scared of what Romeo will do. Tom grabs Romeo, holding him back from attacking Chris.
Roxy: Romeo! What the hell are you doing!?
Romeo: Sleeping with my girl!? Getting her pregnant!? I'm gonna ****ing kill you!
Claire: Romeo! Please! Leave him alone!
Romeo: That's right! Stick up for lover boy! Just blattantly disregard the years we spent together!
Claire: I didn't mean it like that!
Tom: I think you and James had better go! You Andrews have done enough damage already!
Claire: But....
James grabs Claire and begins to lead her out of the room.
James: Come on hun, let's go...
James faces back at the pair.
James: This isn't over...not by a long shot...
James and Claire leave the room. Romeo and Chris exchange looks of hatred for one another....
Romeo is going to kill Chris!!! Romeo was away at the time and now he is with Roxy so what is the big deal???
I don't think Roxy is going to react well to Romeo calling Claire "his girl"!
James should have left well alone and let Claire deal with it - this is just going to cause problems for everyone, including his grandson. He's big on the old - you slept with her whilst she was with Romeo bit, but hes conveniently forgetting his own infidelity!
ARGH!!!
diamond1
08-01-2007, 19:17
have not read this in ages so it has been a very enjoyable time catching up I love this chris/claire/romeo storyline as big a fan of chris's I am I do see things from romeos point of view and think he has a right to give chris a good whack however I do hope chris starts to take everything more serious regarding Nathan.
INT: HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE- Day
Michelle is huddled up on the sofa, holding a cup of tea. Callumn walks over, and sits next to her. He looks distant, Michelle moves forward slightly..
Michelle: Whats wrong?
Callumn: Kate doesn't like me, does she? She doesn't think i've changed...
Michelle: Does that really surprise you?
Callumn gives Michelle an evil look, Michelle tries to cover up her words..
Michelle: I mean... shes just trying to look out for me..
Callumn: She doesn't need to. I'll look after you, you know i will. She just needs to support us, thats all.
Michelle: Shes my Mum... she'll always worry about me...
Callumn hands Michelle a small box. She opens it up, to see a necklace saying "Forever and Always". Calumn takes it out, and puts it on her, gently kissing her neck after...
Callumn: I mean it. You and me will be together forever.
Oh hes far too controlling!! Michelle is going to regret letting him back in and someone is going to have to come to her rescue one night I think.
Why do I get the feeling that hes going to push it a little too far soon.
INT: BACHELORS HOUSE- Day
Romeo: What the hell did you think you were doing?!
Chris: I dont know... It just happened...
Romeo: You just happened to fall into bed with the girl i had just split up with!? Did you laugh about it...? Did you lie in her bed, talking about what a MUG i am?!
Chris: Of course not...
Romeo: Me and her were together for years! Did you plan this or something?!
Chris: Dont be so stupid..
Romeo: Like hell you said that! So come on... when was it?
Chris: Does it matter...?
Romeo: When the ****ing hell was it?!
Chris: When you two split...
Romeo looks at him, disgusted..
Romeo: We split, and you jumped straight into her ****ing bed?! You *******!
Chris: Does it matter when it happened?! You're with Roxie now!
Roxie is sitting mergrely in the corner, thinking...
Romeo: I dont care! You stabbed me in the back "mate". I'm not going to forget that.
Romeo storms out of the house, slamming the door.
:hmm:
Looks like Romeo has more feelings for Claire than he wishes to let everyone think. Roxy isn't going to be a happy bunny.
How spooky was Callum's words: I mean it. You and me will be together forever. I reckon he will kill her rather than let her go
Yeah Em, I do think that Romeo still has a lot of unresolved issues with Claire and there is still feelings running around there
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - DAY
Claire is sitting at the kitchen table, looking over emotional. James is pacing the room, trying to calm himself down.
Claire: Why do you always have to think with your fists eh!?
James: I have to stand up for my family!
Claire: We can sort out our own problems dad...and we dont have to always resort to violence like you do..
James: I'm sorry Claire but I'm not going to stand by and see that idiot getting away with treating you and Nathan like that!
Claire: Dad I didn't want all this confronation and drama when I returned...
James: You turn up unexpected, with a child from your sordid one night stand... how could expect anything but confrontation and drama!?
Claire: I came back to face the music, in my own way...you're just adding to the drama...
James: You, lady, have well and truely ballssed up your life! You're tied to that moron for the next 18 years becuase you couldn't be bothered to use protection!
Claire: (Emotional) Yeah, thanks dad...like I didn't know that already, just let me deal with it MY way!
James: Fine! But don't you go crying to me when it gets too much for you to handle!
James storms out of the room. Claire sits alone, crying to herself.
INT. KYLE'S APARTMENT - NIGHT
Kyle is walking around his apartment, wrapped in only a towel, he is on the phone to some random women.
Kyle: I hope we can meet up again soon, last night was fun :p
There is a knock at the front door.
Kyle: Look I've got to go, I'll call you later...ok...bye...
Kyle puts his phone down and goes to answer the door. He opens the door to see Ruby standing there, she looks him up and down and then walks into the room.
Kyle: Ruby?
Ruby: I don't know how to tell you this, but it's Natasha...
Kyle: What about the stupid old cow... where is she actually!? Haven't seen her for a few days...she's not answering my calls... have I done something to piss her off?
Ruby: Look Kyle...
Kyle: I know what you women are like, the slighest of things you can make a whole issue about and decide to end a relationship...
Ruby: Kyle!... She's in hospital...
Kyle is silenced, unsure of what to say next.
Ruby: Well? What are you going to say about it?
Kyle: There's not much I can say...or do...
Ruby: Do you even care!? She's meant to be your girlfriend!
Kyle: We're not like that...it's just a bit of fun...
Ruby: Well whatever! The poor girl has lost her memory, she atleast deserves some sympathy Kyle!
Kyle: If she's lost her memory, she wont remember me...nor us being together, so why should I give a toss?
Ruby: How can you be so heartless!?
Kyle: Look I don't tie myself to no-one, casual is how I play it, I move on and forget about people...
Ruby: So your ditching her!? When she's lying in a hospital bed!?
Kyle walks up to Ruby.
Kyle: You know, you're really sexy when you're angry...
Kyle moves in for a kiss, Ruby responds for a women, she pulls away.
Kyle: Oh come on, what's the problem?
Ruby: How could you think of cheating on Natasha at a time like this?
Kyle: I know you wanted to just as much as I did...
Ruby leaves the flat in a fluster. Kyle likes his lips, a smarmy look on his face.
INT. LORRAINE'S OFFICE - DAY
James and Lorraine are in her office at the police station. Lorraine is assesing the rape case.
Lorraine: So this Natasha... she doesn't remember nothing... anything at all to help us with the case?
James: No...
Lorraine: Brilliant! So the rapist is on the large, two women raped, one attacked... and no leads, bloody brilliant! Honestly what am I paying you for!?
James: It's hardly my fault that she can't remember anything!
Lorraine: Maybe if you'd been doing your job effectivly in the first place you, these women wouldn't have been attacked!
James: And why is that I wonder? Oh yeah, I was in bed with you!
Lorraine: Don't you dare use our "fling" as an excuse for you not doing your job properly!
James: Look, you're obviously bitter about how things ended...
Lorraine: Bitter!? How dare you! Frankly I'm quite glad it ended! You were crap in bed anyway! The only reason I'm having a go is becuase I want results on this rape case! So job your job before I demote you! Or even worse tell Val exactly what me and you have been up to for the past six months!
Lorraine casts James an evil look, showing him she means what she says.
INT: HARVEY'S GARAGE- Day
Craig looks around to check no one is around, and talks on the phone. Its obivous he's been on it for a while...
Craig: So thats sorted?
He pauses
Craig: Everything done to the last detail, like i want it?... Of course this will work! Its going to get me a healthy profit, this will!
Craig hangs up the phone, with an evil smile on his face
INT: BELLEMY HOUSE- Day
Hilary and jared are in bed...
Hilary: Richard hates their relationship, if you so much as mention one positive he flips!
Jared: Well i'm not exactly happy about it!
Hilary: And Richard knows that... i suppose... i suppose if you acted like you supported it, then that would really get to him... that would make hi furious!
Jared: I cant let a Taylor in the family though!
Hilary pauses...
Hilary: We need to get them out of each others lives then...
Jared: And i might have just the plan...
Oh wonder what Jared plan it and what is Craig up to.. Can't believe Kyle can be so callous!!! the woman was attacked and he doesn't give a damn
Excellent writting again Guys.. loving this
i'd love to give that kyle a good slapping. he's so horrible, and craig up to his usual tricks again.
thanks guys for keeping me entertained.
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - DAY
Michelle, Callumn and Kate are sitting down, eating a meal. There is a clear anamosity between Callumn and Kate, with Kate casting daggered looks at Callumn.
Callumn: This tastes delicious babe, I'm lucky to have you...
Kate: (Scoffs) Like she has a choice in the matter...
Michelle: Mom!
Kate: I'm sorry it had to be said!
Michelle: No! No it didn't! Look I know me and Callumn haven't had the most stable and loving of relationships...
Kate: You can say that again...
Michelle: But we've decided that's all change, we're giving our marriage one more go...and you have to support this...
Kate: How can I!? After what he's done to you Shell!?
Michelle: Just except that we love each other mom! Despite what he's done, Callumn is a good man!
Kate: Good man! I don't call someone you beats you a good man!
Callumn eats his dinner, enjoying the argument between the pair.
Kate: Oh look at him... he's enjoying every minute of this!
Michelle: Oh I've had enough of this mom! If you're going to be like this you might aswell get the hell out of our house!
Kate is taken aback by Michelle's words, Callumn smiles to himself with satisfaction.
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INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
James returns from work, deflated from his argument with Lorraine. He throws his jacket onto the rail of the staircase and walks into the living room.
Val: Where have you been?
James: Oh just down the station, had to have a meeting about the rapist...
Val: Oh well you're here now... I'd had THE most brilliant idea come to me!
James: Oh yeah, what's that?
Val: Well I was watching Trisha earlier and they showed this woman who was going trough Cancer...
James: You know that show is all staged don't you?
Val: Course it isn't! Anyways this woman did herself one of those video diaries! You know...like a day by day account of her battle with cancer...
James: And?
Val: Well I'm gonna do the same! I'm finally gonna use that camera you got me and start one!
James: Oh right...brilliant :rolleyes:
James seats down and cloes his eyes.
Val: Is everything okay?
James: Yeah I'm just tired that's all.
Val: Ok, well I'll get the tea on then.
Val leaves the room. James opens his eyes, leans up and rubs his hands trough the hair with stress. He sees his and Val's wedding photo on the side table and takes a deep sigh, worrying what Lorraine will do.
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INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Michelle is sat on the sofa watching TV, looking agitated. Kate enters the room, wearing her coat, carrying her suitcase.
Kate: I'm going then...
Michelle turns her head away from Kate and does not say goodbye.
Kate: Fine, if that's how you want it...
Kate enters the hallway and walks towards the front door. Callumn follows her out.
Callumn: I guess we'll be seeing you then...
Kate: Don't speak to me you smug *******, she'll soon see what you're like...
Callumn grabs Kate's arm and twists it, she screams at the pain of it, Callumn smoothers her mouth.
Callumn: And when she does, you wont be around, so bugger off out of Baymoore, Michelle dont want you...and I certainly dont want you...
Callumn let's go of Kate, she holds her arm in pain, whilst casting him an evil look.
Kate: I wont let you hurt my daughter this time Callumn!
Callumn: Come here again and I will kill you!
Kate grabs her back and leaves. Callumn shuts the door behind her, a smug look on his face. The camera cuts to Kate who looks terrifed, she looks at Michele trough the window, worried for her daughter's safety.
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callumn is one nasty piece of work.. Poor shell.. she is going to go through hell and she kicked her mother out
EXT/INT ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
Midnight. Craig's BMW pulls up outside the warehouse. He steps out of the car, along with two thugs.
The trio enter the warehouse, where a group of dealers, dressed in smart suits are standing around a few crates.
Dealer: Craig, I was starting to think you wouldn't show...
Craig: I wouldn't dare not show, this is too good an oppurtunity to turn down.
Craig casts a quick look at one of his thugs. We then see a close up of the thug reaching for a gun from his back pocket. It's clear Craig and his thugs are here to steal the drugs without paying.
Craig sees one of the dealers is looking nervous, and edgy.
Craig: What's with the kid here? Looks like he's about to **** his undies...
All of a sudden the distant sound of Police sirens can be heard.
Dealer: ****! It's the cops!
Craig: This little *******'s squealed! (To Thugs) Get the *******!
The young dealer tries to run off, but Craig's thugs grab him and drag him out of the warehouse. The dealers and thugs run out of the warehouse and disperse into various cars. Craig's BMW speeds off out of the back entrance to the warehouse site. Moments later the police pull up...
A close up of Craig looking reliefed. His phone rings. He picks it up
Craig: That was a bloody close shave! Get that little runt to the safe house! He's gonna pay the price for ruining this for us!
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Uh oh.. poor little guy. he went in way way over his head
i wouldn't like to be that guy on the wrong side of craig.
DaVeyWaVey
10-01-2007, 19:46
Just caught up with everything! Love this Michelle/Callum storyline...Michelle better get herself out of Callum's life before she gets really hurt! Kate seems to be the only one who can stand up to him.
I would hate to be the guy on the wrong side of Craig...poor guy..he didn't know how much hot water he would get himself in!
James was certainly overreacting over the Claire's baby situation!
Wow - great stuff guys! That young dealer isn't going to be in best shape when Craig's finished with him.
James is way overreacting and I think Lorraine is going to become a bit of a problem in his life if he isn't careful.
Callum is very concerning - and Kate is almost helpless now Michelle has thrown him out.
And will Hilary and Jared's plan to split Tanya and Will work - I hope not. I hope they are stronger than that.
(P.S. You had any probs with people copying your work Bry? Wondering about the copyright notice thats all.....)
EXT: BAYMOORE BEACH- Day
Kate is sitting in the car, staring out to sea. Richard sees her as he drives past, and pulls over. He winds his window down, and indicates her to do the same..
Richard: Are you ok? Its a bit cold to be out here, at this time of year!
Kate points to the dashboard
Kate: Heating. Its a godsend.
Richard laughs, but sees that Kate doesn't look happy..
Richard: I heard you were leaving..
Kate: From who?!
Richard: You know what its like, in a village like ours. Hope you dont think i'm being nosey... but why?
Kate: I just... I can't stand and watch while he does it again...
Richard: I dont follow?
Kate: Callumn... Mich's Ex. Well, i thought he was. He... he treated her badly. Really badly. I thought we had got him out of our lives, coming to Baymoore. Like a fresh start, you know?
Richard nods, sympathetically...
Kate: But he's back... And gods knows what hes going to do to her. How can someone that vile change? He can't... I know he can't... So why can't Michelle?!
Richard: Sometimes you dont want to see whats right in front of your face...
Kate: So thats why i need to leave..
Richard: You can't leave without a proper goodbye. Come back to mine, at least.
Kate forces a smile, and nods..
Richard: You follow behind me, right?
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INT: ANDREW'S HOUSE- Day
Val is repeating what she is going to say over and over, for her Video Diary. She sits down, and starts talking into the camera, as James walks down the stairs..
Val: This is something that i wanted to start so i could..... (James walks down the stairs) Oh, James! You've put me off now!
James: Well it would help if you would put the blooming thing on!
Val looks at the camera, confused...
Val: I thought it just sort of... recorded...
James: It does. But its not bloody phycic, you need to press the record button!
Val rolls her eyes, and pushes the button. James walks into the kitchen..
Val: Hi. This is something that i wanted to...
She stops, as the camera makes a whirring noise...
Val: James... James! The Cameras all wierd, thanks to your button thing!
James walks in, annoyed, and picks up the camera.
James: You needed to rewind it, thats all. Look..
James opens up the viewfinder, and stands next to Val. When it stops, he presses PLAY. It plays the clip from back in 2006, of Val and Claire..
Claire: Well I've learnt something new about you today...
Val: What?
Claire: That you had an abortion
Val: Yeah well Claire...maybe its best we dont mention that again...especially to your dad
Claire: I just cant believe it...
Val: Yeah well it isnt one of my finer points in life...but at the time..I had no other options...
James looks at Val, shocked
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INT. JENKINS MANOR – NIGHT
Hilary is pacing the dining room, waiting for Richard to show. The front door opens, Hilary heads towards the hallway.
Hilary: Where have you been eh? Your dinner has been on the table for over ten minutes!
Richard: I’m sorry I got distracted.
Kate follows Richard into the hallway.
Hilary: (Surprised) Kate?
Kate: Hi Hilary, sorry to be a nuisance, it’s just Michelle…
Hilary: (Worried) What about her? Is she alright!?
Kate: Not really…
Hilary: Why!? What’s happened!?
Richard: Apparantly her ex is back on the scene…
Hilary: Ex? I never even knew she had one…
Kate: Yeah, his name’s Callumn…and well let’s just say we hoped he wouldn’t show his face ever again
Hilary: Why?
Kate: Well he used to beat Michelle up, once she was rushed into hospital after he pushed her down the stairs…
Hilary: Oh my good god! And he’s back you say!? (Concerned) Richard, I think we need to go and see what this is all about…
Kate: You’ll only regret it, you see he’s managed to worm his way back into her affections, she wont have a bad word said about him, she’s refusing to speak to me now because I wouldn’t accept them together…
Richard: Well I’m sorry but I wont let my daughter live with some violent drunk! I’m going to have a word…
Richard rushes out of the house, a sense of urgency about him. Hilary follows after him, concerned for what he will say/do.
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Uh oh....whats James reaction going to be to the revelation about the abortion....
Is Richard going to find himself in too deep where Callum is concerned...
Great stuff
EXT. HARVEY’S HOUSE – NIGHT
Craig steps out of his car, he whipes his brow, nervous from the close shave from the police. Craig dials a number on his phone, contacting one of his thugs.
INTERCUT:
INT. SECRET SAFEHOUSE - NIGHT
The scene cuts between Craig on the phone and the safe house. The house is in darkness, apart from the moonlight shining trough the gap in the back curtains.
Craig: Barry…
Barry: Yes boss…
Craig: You at the safe house yet?
Barry: Yeah, got there about ten minutes ago…
Craig: I’ll keep it short, you never know who can be tracing these calls… make that little squeal pay…at any price…
Craig hangs up. Barry has a huge smile on his face; he turns around to face the young man who squealed. He is tied up to a chair, rope attached to his arms and feet, a gag around his mouth, he is moaning with pain.
Barry: Oh boy, you are gonna pay big time….
In the kitchen one of Craig’s thugs boils a kettle. The young man looks at the kettle in horror, realising what torture lies ahead….
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uh oh!!!
I really wouldn't want to be in his shoes now!!!
I dont want to look!!!
What does Richard hope to accomplish? I can see him been humilated and sent packing..
How is James going to react to Val's secret.. and like you Em.. I don't want to look at what they are going to do to that guy
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Michelle and Callumn are lying in bed, having just had sex. Michelle is smiling, her head rested on Callumn's chest.
Michelle: I could lye here all night...
Callumn: That's what humans generally do at bedtime...
Michelle: You know what I mean...
Callumn runs his hand trough Michelle's hair affectionaly.
Callumn: I love you, I hope you know that...
Michelle: Yeah of course I do, I used to have my doubts... but this time...I can just tell you mean it...
Callumn: I want us to forget what happened in the past Shell.... things have changed, all I want is you...and a baby...
Michelle: A baby!? :D
Callumn: Yeah, why not? I want us to start a family!
The pair beam with hapiness, and kiss tenderly. There is a sudden knock on the door.
Michelle: Who on earth!?
Callumn: Just ignore it...
The knocking continues. Michelle takes a sigh of annoyqance, gets up, and fastenes the belt on her silk dressing gown. She goes to answer the door.
Callumn lights a cigarette, a smug grin on his face. Michelle returns, an awkard look on her face.
Callumn: Who was it?
Richard and Hilary enter the room behind her.
Richard: We're Michelle's parents...and we want a word with you...now...
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INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
James looks at Val, shocked at what what he has just heard on the camcorder.
James: You had an abortion!?
Val: James...
James: You had an abortion!? :angry:
Val: That's what the recorder says isn't it!?
James: I just wanted to hear it from your murdering mouth!
Val: I'm not a murder!
James: Yes you are...you murdered your baby...my baby... our child!
Val: James, it was when we had just started dating...
James: So!? What does it matter!? 1 week, 1 once, 1 year down the line...it was my child! I had a right to know!
Val: I wasn't sure if it was yours or Larrys... we'd only been going out a few weeks!
James: It could have been mine tough! And you killed it! Without a second's thought!
Val: Don't you dare say that! It was the hardest decison I've ever had to make! If I knew then that we'd still be together now I'd have never aborted the baby! It's the biggest mistake of my life...
James: Too damn right it is Val! You've pulled your fare share of stunts in our twenty years of marraige, but this has to be the worst! I've put up with your white lies, your foul behaviour and everything else...but this...oh no... I wont forgive you for this!
Val: (Emotional) James...please...
James: Don't bother speaking to me Val! I want nothing to do with you!
James pushes past Val and storms out of the house in a furious rage.
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Oh James can really talk about lying can't he!!!! :angry: Bloody men!!! :angry:
INT: HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE- night
Callumn quickly puts a backrobe on, and looks at Richard...
Callumn: You're her Dad?!
Richard: Why are you so surprised? Thought you could windle your way into her life without me turning up and messing it up, did you?
Callumn: Messing what up?!
Richard: Dont act the innocent with me, you pathetic man! How the hell can someone like you have the guts to even look me in the eye?
Callumn: Because i've done nothing wrong!... Not this time..
Richard: And that really makes up for all the pain you caused, does it?!
Michelle: Stop this! This is my decision...
Richard: Not if he's beating you up, it isn't!
Callumn raises his voice..
Callumn: I'm not beating her up!!
Callumn realises what he's done, looks at the disapproving looks on the families faces. Michelle looks shocked. He coughs, and looks Richard in the eyes..
Callumn: I've changed. Michelle can see that, and its the truth. The past is in the past, and theres nothing we can change about that now. So get out, and leave us alone!
INT: SECRET SAFEHOUSE- Night
Barry circles the young man, menacingly..
Barry: I have a message for you. And its going to take a VERY long time for this message to get into that thick skull of yours. I hope you're ready!
The young man's eyes are filled with terror. Barry snaps his fingers to the Thugs, and point at the Young Man. They walks over, and rip the Mans top and trousers off. He sits shivering with fright. Barry walks over to the kettle, and holds it over the Young Man..
Barry: Thing is.. People dont cross Craig. Thats a fact. And you know what happens to those who do?
The young man looks at Barry, terrified..
Barry: I SAID... Do you know what happens to those who do?!
The young man shakes his head, resigned and terrified. Berry pours the hotwater over his crotch slowly, and young man doubling up in pain..
Barry: And i'm sure you understand the severity of the situation!
Barry pours the boiling water along his legs, and over his head, his skin redening and blistering...
Barry smiles, satisfied, and walks to the door. He opens it, and Craig walks in..
Craig: Now, Now, Now! Who do we have here..
He looks at the young man, tears dripping down his red-raw face...
Craig: The person who thought they could out-do me, am i right? The thoughtless, mindless, pathetic excuse for a man that thought that they could out wit me, right? Look at me.
The youngman sits with his head between his legs, breathing deeply through the gag, trying to get through the pain..
Craig: (Shouting) I said LOOK AT ME! :angry:
He looks up, pathetically at Craig.
Craig: No one passes me. No one.
He turns to Barry, and the group begin to walk out of the safehouse...
Craig: Let them on him. He deserves everything he gets.
Barry smiles, and the group leave the building, leaving the youngman alone in the Safehouse. He breathes quietly, then attempts to struggle out of the gag and chains. He hears a bang, and stops suddenly. He looks towards the doors, as they fly open, and 5 dogs race at him. He lets out a pathetic scream as they rip at his raw flesh...
:eek: OMG!! Thats just horrendous!!! Crikey, I'm dumbfounded!!
INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - DAY
Romeo is sat on the sofa, he opens a shoe box, that is filled with letters, photos and keepsakes of him and Claire. He picks up a photo of the pair together and rubs his finger over her face. He stares into the mirror, deep in thought. Roxy walks into the room, and sees the picture of Claire.
Roxy: What's with the photos and stuff?
Romeo: I was just thinking...
Roxy: Looks like more than that from where I'm standing...
Romeo: Oh don't worry...it's just... she was a big part of my life for so long....
Roxy: You loved her didn't you?
Romeo: (Edgy) I was with her for six years, of course I did..
Roxy: Ok, no need to snap...
Romeo: I don't see why you're worrying, it's not like I'm just gonna run to her now she's back...she's betrayed me...
Roxy: Meaning you might have if she hadn't!? :mad:
Romeo: Roxy...:rolleyes:
Roxy: No Romeo! Don't "Roxy" me... I want to know if we're still ok...
Romeo closes the shoebox. He gets up and puts on his jacket.
Roxy: Romeo!? Where are you going!?
Romeo: To see Claire...I need to speak to her...
Roxy: Romeo! You haven't answered my question!
Romeo ignores Roxy and leaves the house in a daze.
Roxy: Romeo!
The door slams shut. Roxy is left alone, feeling frustrated and insecure.
Romeo definitely has feelings for Claire still, although they were together for so long, its not a huge surprise. I'm still wondering if the baby could be his though....:hmm: There can't have been a paternity test done yet could there as they haven't had sample dna/blood from the poss fathers...:hmm:
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE- DAY
Ruby is sitting at the bar, having returned form a shopping spree. Kyle enters the pub, Amy hands Ruby her drink. Ruby is about to pay her.
Kyle: I'll get that Amy...and a whiskey for me please...
Amy goes to pour Kyle's drink.
Ruby: I can pay for my own drink thanks...:rolleyes:
Kyle sits down beside Ruby.
Kyle: No, allow me, as a way of an aplogy for the way I acted the other day...
Ruby: No, I should be aplogising, I did overact, it's just you know...emotions and all...
Kyle: It's fine, Natasha is a nice girl and all, but I'm not one for serious comiment, it's just the way I am...
Ruby: Well you must have been doing something right, Tash gave you a glowing reference...
Kyle: What can I say, I'm god's gift, wrapped up with a bow :D
Ruby gives a faint smile to Kyle's joke. Amy hands Kyle his drink.
Amy: That's £4.25 please Kyle...
Kyle gets out his heavy wallet and takes out a twenty pound note to pay for the drinks. Ruby eyes up his wallet and raises her eyebrow.
Kyle: Me and you got off to the wrong start, the way I acted...it was unforgiveable...but you are an attractive girl...and I'd like to think that I haven't totally blown my chances with you...
Ruby: Well I'm not one to hold grudges...
Kyle: How about a fancy restaraunt?
Ruby: I'm not one for big meals...
Kyle: Well how about my place, for coffee
Ruby: Only if it's..."instant" :p
Kyle: It can be as "instant" as you want it...
The pair give each other flirtatious looks. Kyle downs his drink in one, as the pair leave the pub.
:eek:
Blimey Ruby - thats fast work isnt it?! :hmm: Shes not got her eye on Kyles cash though has she?? As she was looking at it before....:hmm:
DaVeyWaVey
13-01-2007, 16:21
:eek: Oh my god! That poor young man! Craig has just reached up to a new level of evilness!! :eek: Very shocking!
I think Ruby may have her eye on Kyle's cash....:hmm:
INT: ANDREW'S HOUSE- Day
Emma is sitting on the sofa with the Baby Nathan, fussing over him. She flieds a toy plane around..
Emma: Wheres it gone? Can you see it? Wheres it gone?
She laughs, and carries on playing with him. Claire walks down the stairs..
Claire: You fuss over him too much! :lol:
Emma: Theres no such thing as "too much" with him!
Emma looks over at Claire, and smiles..
Emma: Its great to have you back, you know... after everything..
Claire sits down with Emma and Nathan
Claire: If you need someone to chat to about anything, then i'm here for you..
Emma: Its just... so many people have said that after the rape.. but no ones the same around me..
Claire: Thats not true!
Emma: The side glances, comments behind my back, dirty looks...
Claire: They dont mean it, honestly. They just find it hard to find the words, you know..
Theres a knock at the door, Claire walks over to answer it..
Claire: Perfect timing, or what? :rolleyes:
Romeo: I want a word...
INT: RED RUM PUB- Evening
James is sitting at the bar, staring into space. A 30 year old, sophisticated woman walks in, and stands close next to him.
Woman: Hi, sorry to interupt your... whatever you're doing!
James: No problem :cool: Can i help you with anything?
Woman: Its just... I'm just passing through, and i wondered if i could have the pleasure of a decent mans company. Interested?
James: You can have whatever "pleasures" you, as far as i'm concerned!
Woman: So forward, aren't you?! :D
James: Well... When a woman like yourself is standing 20cm away from me.. how can i bloke resist?
The woman moves forward, their lips nearly touching..
Woman: Do we serve ourselves in this pub? Theres no one serving..
James: I'd serve you anyday!
James goes in for a kiss, when Amy walks in. She walks around the bar, and pulls James away by the back of his jacket, just as their lips touch
Amy: And this is...?
James: Sorry, i didnt catch your name..
The woman goes to speak, but Amy interupts..
Amy: You were about to cheat on your wife, without knowing the sluts name!
Woman: Excuse me? Have you looked in the mirror recently? You have the liberty to call ME a slut?!
Amy slaps the woman hard around the face, and pushes her out of the door
Amy: What the hell did you think you were doing?!
Amy pulls him around to the back of the pub...
James: I dont know.. I just... Got tempted..
Amy: Best you can do, right? Your wife is about to have chemo tomorrow, James!
James: I know..
Amy: How could you even think about cheating on her the night before that?! You need to have a serious think about what the hell you are doing, James!
DaVeyWaVey
14-01-2007, 11:52
What is James doing?! :nono: He should be supporting Val, not trying to cheat on her!
James needs to sort himself out, before all of Baymoore knows what hes been up to.
Ooo whats Romeo going to say?!
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - DAY
Callumn storms into the living room, clealry annoyed. Michelle follows him, dressed in her dressing gown.
Callumn: For god sake Shell just leave me alone!
Michelle: What's wrong?
Callumn: What do you think!? You're "parents" showing up like that! What the hell is that all about!? I thought Kate was your mom!?
Michelle: I only found out recently!
Callumn: And you didn't think to tell me about it!?
Michelle: It slipped my mind...look you've only been back a day, I thought sorting out our relationship would be more important than my family problems...
Callumn: Yeah, and I thought we had sorted our relationship! Obviously not when you hide things like this from me!
Michelle: Stop over reacting Callumn!
Callumn: Over-reacting!? Over-reacting!?
Callumn is about to raise his fist to Michelle, she looks petrified. He pulls away, realising he was almost going to hit her.
Callumn: I'm going out for a drink!
Callumn barges past Michelle and leaves the house. Michelle takes a deep breath, worried that he's the same old Callumn.
EXT. BAYMOORE BEACH - DAY
Claire and Romeo are walking across the beach, Claire is pushing Natahn in his pram. Nathan is smiling and laughing, Romeo looks at him, there's a clear awakdness between the pair.
Claire: We don't have to argue you know...
Romeo: I don't want to...it was just a shock, I know I'm in the wrong...I left you alone for months, so I can't really start an argument...
Claire: Things happen, there's no point bringing it back up...
Romeo: What I'm trying to tell you is... I loved you... so don't think I left and didnt come back becuase I didn't care for you... you meant everything to me...
Claire: And you still do to me... I love you Romeo..., I haven't stopped...
Romeo: Yeah, well, it's not that simple... I'm with Roxy now...
Claire: But you've only been with her for five minutes... Romeo... can't you give us one more chance?
Romeo: I can't split with Roxy because you've just come back on the scene...I like her a lot...
Claire: But you could be the father of my baby!
Romeo: So could Chris!
Claire's optisim fades, as the smile is lost on her face. There is an uncomfortable silence.
Romeo: If the baby is mine, I will stand by it, support it and eveything... but as for us, you'll have to forget it Claire, I'm with Roxy now, simple as...
Romeo walks off. Leaving Claire alone. She begins to cry to herself, heartbroken.
INT. PRIVATE MENTAL INSTITUTE. DAY
Gillian is sitting in her chair, staring out of the window, seemingly into space. Jared and Lauren timidly approach her, Lauren is nervous, Jared is supporting her.
Jared: Hello mom... it's Jared.
Gillian looks at him, but does not respond.
Jared: And this is Lauren...
Lauren gives a nervous smile.
Gillian: Lauren?
Jared: That's right...Lauren... your grandaughter....
Gillian: Oh...
Lauren: (Emotional) Hi nan
Gillian: I don't have a grandaughter...
Jared: Don't be so daft! Of course you do! Don't you remember! When she was born!? You're little baby grandaughter!?
Gillian shakes her had. Lauren starts to cry.
Jared: Please mom! Try and remember! You have to remember!
Lauren: Dad...don't do this please...
Lauren runs off in tears. Jared looks at his mother, lost for words. He touches her arm affectionatly and leaves, following after Lauren.
Lauren: (Emotional) That was awful! I don't know why you asked me to come!
Jared: Because I wont you to see why I hate the Taylors so much...
Lauren: I think we've gathered that by your constant rants against them for the past twenty years!
Jared: I don't think you realise how much! I wanted you to get things to perspective! Richard conned your granfather out of a lot of money...drove him to an early grave...and your nan into this place! Now you see why I hate him as much as I do!?
Lauren: And what good is showing me all this!?
Jared: I need you to help me...
Lauren: You know I will always do what's best for the family...
Jared: I want...I need Will to split with that Taylor trash... and I need you're help...
Lauren whipes the tears from her highs and gives a devious smile.
Lauren: Sure...it will be a honour to break up the golden couple...
INT: JENKINS MANOR- Day
The doorbell rings, and Richard answers it. Michelle storms in..
Michelle: Come on, explain!
Richard: I am concerned about you, i want to make sure you're safe
Michelle: What buisness is it of you?!
Hilary walks into the hallway, and stands with Richard..
Richard: We're your parents, we want to protect you!
Michelle: What, like you have the rest of my life?!
Richard: Michelle..
Michelle: You dont know me. You know nothing about me. So stop trying to act like the dutifull parents all of a sudden!
Hilary: We're trying to make up for all that, now!
Michelle: Its too much. Way too much, way too soon. Let me make my own decisions, and my own mistakes, if that happens!
Michelle leaves the house, leaving Hilary and Richard brewing over what she said.
INT: ANDREWS HOUSE- Evening
James walks into the house, and sits next to Val. He puts his arm around her..
James: I'm sorry, about reacting like i did. I was shocked about the abortion, and what with everything either Emma and Claire & the Baby... It just all gt overwelming
Val: Thats no excuse, we've all been through it, recently..
James: I know... I hope you can forgive me.
Val looks into his eyes..
Val: Of course i can. You and me and solid, even after these things happen. Its in the past, and theres nothing we can do about it now :)
Val kisses James. Theres a knock at the door. She stands up and answers it. Lorraine is standing at the door.
Lorraine: Is James Andrews in?
Val: Erm... yes... You're from work, right?
Lorraine: You could say that!
Lorraine walks into the house, followed by 2 officers. She stands over James, he stands up.
Lorraine: Can you confirm you are James Andrews?
James: Of course i am! Whats this about?!
She grabs his wrists, and handcuffs them..
Lorraine: I am arresting you for suspected Sexual Assult on a Female on the 13th January 2006.
James and Val look at each other, in shock..
James: You... What?!
Lorraine: You do not have to say anything but it may harm your defence if you fail to mention when questioned something which you intend to rely on in court. Anything you say may be given in evidence
James: But i haven't... What!? Val, beleive me!
The two officers cart James out of the house... He talks to Lorraine..
James: You know i havent done anything, Lorraine!
Lorraine smiles..
Lorraine: Save it for the station :cool:
:eek::eek: there is so much I had to catch up on.. James been arrested for the attack on Natasha!! which makes him the rapist!! I don't believe that for one moment.. he wouldn't rape his own daughter!!! Lorraine is just been nasty.
Ruby, you are a heartless cow and deserve Kyle.. you were going on about how tasha was in hospital and 2 days later you are with her boyfriend... cow!!
What they did to that guy.. that was just horrific!!!
excellent, edge of my seat stuff, Guys.. loving this
Lorraine is up to no good!!! No way is it James responsible for the attacks....whats she up to....:hmm:
:hmm: Romeo - why bother leaving Roxy in tears to run after Claire just to say, he is with Roxy now....sorry but that does not make sense - if he was with Roxy, he'd have stayed, hugged her, anything but most definitely not have run off to Claire.
deadlyvampiress
15-01-2007, 15:40
So did Lorraine hire that woman at the bar and now they are making up stories????:confused:
INT. PAIGNTON POLICE STATION - NIGHT
James is sat in the police cell with his solictor, awaiting his interview. He looks worse for wear, sleeves rolled up, hands in his hair with stress.
The door opens, James looks up with relief. Lorraine enters the room, his optimism immediatley fades.
Lorraine: I'll keep it breif... we've had a report of indecent assault, by a Miss Caroline Adams...
Lorraine hands James a photo of Caroline, the woman he meet at the pub earlier.
James: No, you've got it all wrong...
Lorraine: She's written a statement, claiming that you sexually assaulted her...needless to say if this is true there will be serious charges against you... and we will be investigating you possible connection in the ongoing rape investigation...
James: Oh for god sake Lorraine! This is rubbish and you know it!
Lorraine passes James a cope of Caroline's statement.
Lorraine: It's all there in black and white...what you did to her...
James: She's lying...
Lorraine: That's what we're hear to investigate, when the semen samples from her underwear come back we will know for sure...and if it turns out your responsible Mr Andrews, you will have the book thrown at you...
Lorraine: (To Officer) Take him to the cells...
Two police officers enter the room, and drag James kicking and screaming to his cell. Lorraine gives a breif smirk, as he passes her.
NO WAY!! surely Amy will back him up!! Oh wait.. Lorraine would have his sperm somewhere.. she is going to nail a lot on him..
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Tanya is in her room, dressed in an expensive black cocktail dress. She is applying her make up when Richard enters the room.
Richard: Oh you look nice, off anywhere special?
Tanya: Yes as a matter of a fact, I'm going to Bellamy House...
Richard: You what!?
Tanya: Jared has kindly invited me for a meal...and I have accepted...
Richard: I can't believe what I am hearing!
Tanya: Jared has seen sense...he cares for the feelings of his children... and his son's hapiness goes above this feud you both had going...
Richard is about to speak, but Tanya interupts him.
Tanya: A pity the same can't be said for you, eh dad?
Tanya gets up, puts her lipstick in her bag and leaves the room, snubbing Richard as she goes. Richard has a look of iritation on his face.
:hmm: Is Jared really offering an olive branch or is there another ploy.....
Lorraine is so going to pin the assault on James, I wonder if he will manage to get away with it though....Amy knows what happened....:hmm:
INT: BACHELORS HOUSE- Day
Romeo comes downstairs, and is in the kitchen with Roxy. They are in silence, the tension obvious..
Roxy: Oh for gods sake, we need to talk!
Romeo: Go on then!
Roxy: Her pregnancy is nothing to do with us, so why are you making a big deal about her?! Untill a couple of weeks ago, you had nothing to do with her. For Gods sake, you never even mentioned her! I wont play second best to her, Romeo. I refuse to, right here and now.
Romeo: I've never messed with a woman! Its not like i'm doing this on purpose, i have to see her! In case..
Roxy: In case your sons over there?
Romeo: Yeah! If i wanted rid of you, i would have told you anyway!
Roxy looks at him..
Roxy: You have such a nice way of putting things. Really makes a woman feel wanted! I forgot to say it a couple of weeks back, after all your comotions with her over the road, but Merry ****ing Christmas!
Roxy storms out of the house.
INT: BELLEMY HOUSE- Day
Tanya is greeted by Lauren and Jared in the dining room. He passes her a glass of Champagne..
Tanya: I've got to say, you're house is fantastic!
Jared: Well, we do try to keep it that way!
Lauren: Well, we say we... The hired help does play a part! :D
Tanya: Naturally!
Jared: I wanted to apologise for everything that i have done. I have overeacted, but now i can accept that you are part of Wills life, and well... I think we should toast that!
Lauren: To the future!
They toast, and sip from their glasses. Richard storms into the room..
Lauren: What the...?
Tanya: Dad! How did you get in here?!
Richard: The Hired Help played a part! :cool:
They look at each other, suspiciously..
Richard: Jared, i want a word...
Oh for crying out loud Richard.. leave it alone!!! does he have to bulldoze into everyone's life???
Oh wait.. Lorraine would have his sperm somewhere..
i know what you're getting at here siobhan but it's a funny statement when you read through it quickly.
INT: TORBAY SPECIIST HOSPITAL- Day
Amy pulls up outside the hospital, with Val.
Val: Thanks for this..
Amy: Dont worry about it.. I couldn't let you go on your own...
Val: But really, you didn't have to, at such last notice and everything. And after everything with James...
Amy: Try to forget about all of that... Concentrate on this. Chemo's a big thing...
Val: I'm worried about him though..
Amy: Of course you are! But now its all about you... We're going to go get you better, aren't we?!
Val smiles, forced..
Val: Yep. Yep, we are..
INT: RED RUM PUB- Day
Roxy is sitting at the bar. Romeo walks in..
Romeo: I'm sorry about yesterday..
Roxy: I dont want to hear it..
Romeo: But really. The way i spoke to you was way out of line. I'm just thinking about myself, selfishly... Please, give me another chance..
Claire walks into the pub, and sits at a table, listening to their conversation
Roxy: How could you be like that to me though? Treat me like a bloody dog!
Romeo: Thats not me... its just everything which has happened has just got to be recently. Please, i'm so sorry...
Roxy: I dont know if thats going to be enough this time, i really dont.
Romeo: But i..
Roxy waits for him to finish..
Romeo: I think i'm falling in love with you... Please give me another chance to prove it to you..
Roxy: You're what??!
Romeo looks around, slightly embarressed..
Romeo: I love you, Rox :heart:
They smile at each other. Claires eyes well up with tears, she leaves the pub devastated
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - NIGHT
Jared pulls Richard into another room.
Jared: How dare you barge into my house and demand to speak to me in such a manner, infront of my guests!
Richard: Oh cut the crap Jared, I know you're just doing this to wind me up!
Jared: Doing what!?
Richard: This! Happy faces! Dinner parties! Condoning their relationship when you hate it just as much as I do!
Jared: That's not true...
Richard: It is! You're doing all this to turn my own daughter against me and to make me look like an idiot!
Jared: No Richard... you've done that all by yourself... I've learnt my children's hapiness is the most important thing...
Richard: If you honestly expect me to believe this bull****!...
Jared: I dont let my ego or my power overcome what makes my children happy... without family you're nothing Richard...carry on like this and you will loose Tanya...and you need all the family you can get...what with loosing 4 family members within a year...
Richard is about to explode in a furious rage.
Jared: You're on the road to ruin Richard, and as far as I'm concerned it's no more than you deserve...now get out of my house...
Jared leaves Richard alone, to return to his guests. Richard is left with egg on his face, having lost the argument.
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
Claire is sat on the sofa, crying to herself.
Val: (o.s) Oh my god Claire! You will not believe what bargain I got in the sales today!
Val enters the room, a shopping bag in her hand. She sees Claire in tears. She drops her bag imeddiatley and runs over to Claire, worried.
Val: Claire! Oh sweetie, what's wrong!?
Claire continues crying, barely able to get out her words.
Claire: Everything! I'm just fed up!
Val: What's happened?
Claire: I saw Romeo, he said we will never get back together... god I wish Nathan had never been born!
Val: No come on Claire! You don't mean that!
Claire: Yes I do! He's done nothing but cause problems! Neither Romeo or Chris want anything to do with him, and I can't bring him up on my own!
Val: You've got me...and Emma...and you dad...
Claire: It's not the same is it!? Why can't I just have a baby and bring it up with the man I love, like I always wanted to...
Val: Life sometimes turns out how we least expected it, but we have to deal with it and get on with it...and we become stronger for it...
Claire: I've lost Romeo! Forever! For the sake of some stupid night of drunkeness! It's just one big mess!
Claire collapses into Val's arms. She holds Claire in her arms, rubbing her back, trying to console her daughter. Val has a concerned look on her face
What 4 members of richard's family did he lose? I know about Ed but who esle?
his grandkids and his son in law.
his grandkids and his son in law.
doh!! how could i forget about that.. brain is no working this morning
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
Mandy walks into the pub and sits down on one of the stools.
Amy: Hiya Mand', how you doing?
Mandy: I'm exhuasted!
Amy: Late night?
Mandy: I wish... I was up at 7 cooking the breakfasts, making the beds...
Amy: It's hard running a B&B...
Mandy: I wouldn't mind but it's not my B&B, I seem to be doing all their work...
Amy: Well you have a well earnt rest this afternoon, keep me company, what can I get you?
Mandy: I'll have a G&T cheers Am'...
Amy goes off to pour the drink. The doors swing open and a tall, dark and handsome stranger walks in, dressed in a smart black suit, well groomed. He is Jon Thomas (Steven Hartley).
Jon: And there was me thinking all Devonshire ladies were inbred farm folk... how wrong I was...
Mandy: Should I be taking that as an compliment...
Jon: Oh definatley, I don't give out many...
Mandy: Thanks, I'll cherish it forever :p
Amy hands Mandy her drink, she looks at Jon.
Amy: Well you're a new face, not from around here are you?
Jon: Sadly not...(looks at Mandy) but I could easily be persauded...
Mandy blushes.
Jon: Craig Harvey...
Mandy: (Abrupt) What about him?
Jon: I need to talk to him, it's important... do you know where I can find him?
Mandy: I knew it was too good to be true! See you Amy...
Mandy downs her drink in one, hands Amy the money and storms out, casting Jon an evil look as she goes.
Jon: What ratteled her cage?
Amy: That's Craig's ex wife...
Jon: Oh right, he certainly has a habit of making enemies... so where can I find him?
Amy: Try the garage over the road...
Jon: Thanks...
Jon leaves the pub, Amy stares at him, wondering what he wants with Craig.
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Michelle is pacing the room, a nervous wreck. The front door is slammed open as Callumn staggers into the room, drunk from his afternoon at the pub.
He walks into the wall, then manages to stagger into the living room.
Callumn: I'm baaack!
Michelle: So I see :rolleyes: ...
Callumn: What's ruffled your feathers you moody bitch!?
Michelle: Look at you! Roaring drunk!
Callumn: So!?
Michelle: So!? Well according to you, you'd packed in the drinK!
Callumn: It was a one off!
Michelle: Oh it always is with you! Just the one, then it turns into two...then three!
Callumn: I will drink as much as I bloody well want to!
Michelle: Fine! Go ahead! Break your promises before you've had chance to keep to them!
Callumn: I was mad! We both agreed to have no secrets...no lies, yet you didn't tell me about your secret mom and dad!
Michelle: I've already said I'm sorry...
Callumn: (Angry) Yeah well I'm sorry for the drink too! :angry:
Michelle: Why do you always do this eh!? Turn it around and make me feel the guilty one!?
Michelle sits down and holds her head in her hands. Craig staggers over to her.
Callumn: Hey! Don't you go crying on me! This is meant to be us being happy! Not arguing and crying!
Michelle: Yeah well...
Callumn: Yeah well nothing...
Callumn grabs Michelle's face, she turns away from him but he pulls her toward him. He leans in for a kiss, she tries to resist, but he forces his lips on her.
Michelle: No, Callumn!
Callumn: You don't mean that...
Callumn grabs hold of Michelle and pins her to the sofa, as he kisses her and starts to undress her.
Callumn: We fight, we make up, that's what we're all about...
Michelle: Get off me Callumn!
Callumn: I know it's what you want, this act turns you on, so shut up...and enjoy it...
The camera pans away, as Michelle can be heard resisting, to no effect...
INT: RED RUM PUB- Day
Craig waits at the bar to be served. Amy walks over..
Craig: Pint of beer wouldn't go amiss..
Amy: Sure... Someone was in here looking for you earlier..
Craig: Oh yeah? Tall, Blonde and Single? :p
Amy: Not quite!! Professional-type... You know what i mean..
Craig: Oh right... Any ideas what he wanted?
Amy: Dunno... Sent him over to the garage..
Craig: ok.. Cancel the pint..
Craig leaves the bar, and walks over to the pub..
INTERCUT:
INT: HARVEY'S MOTORS- Day
Jon picks up tools, and throws them onto the worktops, Craig walks in...
Jon: Craig Harvey?
Craig: One and only! And you are...?
Jon: (Ignoring the question) I've been waiting for you...
INT: JENKINS MANOR- Day
Richard is in Tanyas room, frantically packing her bags. She walks in..
Tanya: What... Dad, what are you doing?!
Richard: What the hell does it look like?!
Tanya: But i... Dad, please!
Richard looks up at her for a second, and carries on packing. Hilary follows into the room, and sees what he's doing, with a slight smile...
Tanya: Tell me!
Richard: You've made you're ****ing decision! You've choosen Will over us, so whats the ****ing point in kidding ourselves that you give a damn!
Tanya: Since when did i make "A decision"?! I love him, you're the one making me choose!
Richard: And it looks like you've bloody well done that!
Richard slams the case shut, and throws it in front of Tanya..
Richard: So i dont want you in my bloody house any longer! You hear me!
Tanya: Where the hell am i meant to go then?! You can't just kick me out!
Richard: Jareds got a huge bloody house- go find a room there with loverboy and you're best mate jared!
Tanya looks gobsmacked at his out burst..
Richards react OTT...
What does Jon want with Craig :searchme::searchme: but I can't wait to find out..
Richards react OTT...
What does Jon want with Craig :searchme::searchme: but I can't wait to find out..
yes that john guy is very suss and craig's reaction when he heard there was someone looking for him.
DaVeyWaVey
18-01-2007, 17:37
I just caught up with everything! This Jon person is very intriguing...i wonder what he wants from Craig...:hmm:
Richard is really overreacting! He should just accept Will and Tanya's relationship or he is just going to push Tanya away more and more...until she has nothing to do with him no more!
Oh dear...poor James! Lorraine has had to have set him up...i think she is the jealous type!
EXT: BELLEMY HOUSE- Day
Tanya pulls up outside in her car, her eyes streaming. She gets out, and knocks on the door, wiping away her tears.
INTERCUT:
INT: BELLEMY HOUSE- Day
Lauren hears the knock at the door. She opens it, and sees Tanya..
Lauren: Tanya?! Whats wrong?!
Tanya: I can't beleive he.. he..
Lauren rolls her eyes, as Tanyas eyes are covered by her hands. She puts on a false smile, and holds her arm..
Lauren: Come on into the Lounge, tell me all about it.
Lauren guides her into the Lounge and sits her down..
Tanya: I need to speak to Jared..
Lauren: Sorry hun, but he's out. Him and Will went to the Golf Club a few hours ago.. and you know what they're like when they get started!
Tanya: I just... its Dad...
Lauren puts her arm around her,
Lauren: Take you're time, dont over-do it..
Lauren stands up, and pours her a drink. Tanyas got her head in her knees, sobbing. Lauren gives her a look of disguist.
From Bryyy... Abi was naughty and didn't post hers in time :p
INT. FORENSICS LAB - DAY
The forensics lab is in total darkness, Lorraine enters the room. She looks around to check no one is around then sneakes into the room and switches on the lights.
Lorraine puts on some latex gloves and rumoages trough a pile of zip up plastic bags with evidence inside each. She finds the one with the knickers in it and removes them.
Out of her handbag she grabs an identical pair of knickers, she holds them up to the light to check they contain semen. She siwtches the knickers and puts the original pair in her bag.
She leaves the room, a devious smile on her face.
INTERCUT:
EXT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT (FLASBACK)
We get a flashback to the night of the arrest. Lorraine is standing outside the Red Rum,James can be seen from the window outside. The woman who flirted with James approaches Lorraine.
Lorraine: About time...
Blonde: I got here as fast as I could, he still in there?
Lorraine: Yeah, I owe you one for this...
Blonde: Just give me the money...
Lorraine reluctantly hands the blonde an envelope filled with money. The blonde smiles and heads into the pub.
Blonde: Wish me luck...
Lorraine: Good luck
:rolleyes:
Its not Tanya's fault!! Its Richards!!
This war is between Richard and Jared!!! Grrrrr
Again, from brryyyyyy
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - NIGHT
Tanya and Lauren are longued on the sofa, laughing and joking clearly drunk.
Lauren: So here was Will, sunburnt from head to toe, and dad had no idea how to cure it, so he made him take a cold shower, thinking that would solve matters!
The pair are in hysterics. Tanya takes a sip of her champagne.
Tanya: I misjudged you Lauren, I didn't think you liked me...
Lauren: Don't be daft, you're great!
Tanya: It's just you seemed so...hostile...
Lauren: Oh that's just the way I am with strangers, until I know who I can trust...
Tanya turns around, turning her back to Lauren, trying to find another bottle of champagne. Lauren pulls Tanya towards her and turns her head. Tanya looks at Lauren confused.
Lauren leans forward and snogs Tanya. Tanya immediatley pulls away.
Tanya: What the hell do you think you're doing!?
Lauren: I'm sorry...I didn't mean...
Tanya: Get away from me you dyke!
A stunned Tanya gets up and hobbles backwards, starting at Lauren with confusion.
Lauren:(Emotional) I'm sorry Tanya! I'm sorry!'
Lauren runs out of the room in tears. Once out of sight from Tanya she whipes her lips, then acts disgusted at kissing her. She smiles to herself with satisfaction, as she walks confidently to her room.
Lauren: Stage one completed...
Lauren lauren lauren.. what are you playing at??? they really are just going to break her totally!!
I can see Tanya ending up having a breakdown if this is the way they are going to try and split them....
Lauren has set her seeds ready, Richard has basically disowned her, when sis tells Will that she tried it on with her, he'll not want to know her either - its Tanya thats going to suffer at the end of this - hasn't she been through enough already!!! :angry:
INT. HARVEY'S MOTORS - NIGHT
Jon walks around the gargae as if he owns the place, Craig is sat down, feeling slightly uneasy around him.
Jon: Remind me Craig, who deals the drugs in this part of the country?
Criag: Erm I dunno...you?
Jon: Damn right Craig! The south west is my patch...all the drugs go trough me and my men... and I don't remember hearing your now from my accosiates...
Craig: Yeah about that...
Jon: What you do in your little area is not my buisness, but drugs are my buisness... you're stepping on territory that doesn't concern you...
Craig: Look, Jon I'm sorry about that...
Jon: Now out of respect, between fellow gangsters, I'm prepared to see let this go...but we warned Craig, you try the same stunt on me again and I wont be so tolerant, do you understand?
Craig gives a nervous shake of the head. Jon lights up a cigar.
Jon: Good, I'm glad we got that one sorted... I'll see you around...
Jon leaves the gargage, Craig looks slighlty reliefed, but remains worried.
INT. PAIGNTON POLICE STATION - DAY
James is sat alone in his cell, looking worse for wear. The door opens and Claire enters the room, a police officer, closes the door behind her.
James: Claire hun, how did you...?
Claire: Bob let me, felt he owed you one...I'll have to be quick...
James: You have to believe me Claire! I'm innocent!
Claire: Of course you are dad, I didn't doubt it for a second...but I don't get why they arrested you...
James: (Desperate) It's Lorraine, she set me up... she's got it in for me...
Claire: I don't understand...she's the boss here...why would she do that?
James: (Reluctant) We...erm...had an affair...
Claire: You what!?
James: It ended before Christmas! I realised your mom if the woman for me...
Claire: How could you be so bloody stupid!?
James: Look it can't be helped now...what's done is done, but Lorraine, she's dillusional...some kind of crazed stalker...she's set me up for this...and she's determined to fit me to the other rapes too!
Claire: This is madness...
James: Claire, hun, please don't tell your mother about this... I need you to help me...
Before Claire speaks the door bangs open as Lorraine barges in, following by the police officer that let Claire in.
Lorraine: What the hell is she doing in here!? Get her out!
The officer takes his orders and begins to escort Claire out.
James: Lorraine?
Lorraine: The tests are back...
James: I knew this was all one big misunderstanding...
Lorraine: James Andrews I am charging you with the rape of...
The remainder of the charges cannot be heard for Claire's screaming as she is dragged out of the room, as she seems her father's distraught face.
Claire: Dad! Dad! Dad!
INT: BELLEMY HOUSE- Day
Tanya is sitting in a side room, with Will watching the TV. She isn't concentrating, her mind is elsewhere, and Will picks up on this, and turns the TV off..
Will: Whats wrong?
Tanya: I just... I just wondered if Lauren was in a relationship?
Will: Course not, this is Lauren we're talking about! She has flings, but nothing serious. Thats her personality, i guess. Why dya ask? I'm not going on a double date with her, if thats what you're thinking!
Tanya: Dont be so stupid! :p Are any of those flings... with women?
Will: You what?!
Tanya: Its just some signs i picked up on..
Will: No, she hasn't. Shes flirty when shes had a drink, but all of us are. Harmless.
Tanya: Yeah, i guess so..
Tanya looks at the empty bottle of wine in front of them..
Tanya: I'll go get another..
Tanya walks out of the room, and past the stairs into the kitchen. As she walks past the stairs, she sees Lauren walk down in a tight bikini, on her way to the inside swimming pool. She winks at Tanya, and walks off. Tanya storms into the kitchen, annoyed and distressed.
INT: ANDREWS HOUSE- Day
Claire returns home, and closes the front door. She sobs into her hands, with her back to the door.
Val: Claire... Claire, whats happened?
Claire: Oh Mum!
Claire clings onto Val, sobbing into her shoulder. Val guides her to sit down. Emma walks in the room..
Val: Come on hun, whats happened?
Claire: Its Dad..
Emma: What? Whats happened?!
Vals face drops, the blood running out of it..
Claire: He's been... He's been... Charged with the rape of that woman!
Claire sobs into Vals shoulder. Vals face is lifeless, shocked at what has happened. Emmas eyes well up with tears through realisation.
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
Callumn is proped up against the bar, he finishes his pint of beer and pushes the pint glass towards Patrick.
Callumn: Another one in there when you've got a minute mate...
Richard walks into the pub and walks up to Callumn.
Richard: Once a drunk, always a drunk, that's what I usually say...
Callumn: Richard...
Richard: There's no point trying to cover it up Callumn, you told Michelle that you wouldn't drink anymore, yet here you, sat in the pub before miday having you second, third pint?
Callumn: Look Richard, I think we got off to a bad start, I don't want this kind of tension between us, it's not healthy...
Richard: I'm just looking out of Michelle's best intrests...
Callumn: So am I, I think you've got me all wrong Richard... can I at least get you a drink?
Richard: I suppose one drink wont harm anyone...
Callumn: Patrick! Richard's usual whilst you're at it..
Richard: Could do with a drink to take my mind of the Tanya situation, if it's not one kid it's the other, but hey isn't that what being a parents all about? :rolleyes:
Callumn's face shows he clearly isnt intrested in what Richard is saying, but is just being polite for the sake of it, in order to get him on side.
INT/EXT. ANDREWS HOUSE - DAY
Val and Emma rush around the house in a panic, trying to find their coats and hangbags.
Claire: I don't think this is the best thing to do, us all charging down there like a herd of rhinos...
Val: Claire, we can't just sit here and see you dad go to jail for something he hasn't done!
Emma: I just dont understand... why would they think dad's responsible for all this?
The three of them leave the house, Val looks the door, the three rush down the street towards the car.
Val: Exactly, you're dad's a good man! No way is he a rapist!
As they say this, they pass Iqbal who is on his way to Marbal, he wonders if he has heard them correctly, but continues on walking.
Claire: It's Lorraine, she's set him up! Look mom, please...don't go causing a scene
Val: If what your saying is true, I'll be damned if I let that bitch send James to jail for something he hasn't done!
Emma: Mom, maybe Claire's right, shouting and screaming isn't going to solve anything!
Val: Shut up, and get in the car... now!
EXT: RED RUM PUB
Richard stumbles out of the pub, half clinging onto Callumn..
Richard: And then i said.... i said... i said... what did i say?!
Callumn: Its your story!!
Richard: Yes but you are a very clever man!
Callumn: Are you drunk, Rich?
Richard: Just a bit tipsy!!
Callumn: Come on, i'll help you get home..
They walk down the road a little bit. Richard stops and looks at Callumn
Richard: You aint half bad actually, you are!
He carries on walking. Callumn smiles with satisfacation.
INT: PAIGNTON POLICE STATION
Val storms into the police station, straight to the front desk. She is faced with Lorraine.
Val: I want to see my husband now!
Lorraine: James is in the cells, Val. Shame about that..
Val: But.. How do you know my name?!
Lorraine looks down..
Val: Listen up woman! I dont care what bloody qualifications you have to stand in this ruddy place, but if you dont get my husband out here now, then you'll feel my fist!
Lorraine laughs in her face..
Lorraine: I always thought he'd go for someone better than you... You're just a fat slapper!
Val: Excuse me?! How bloody dare ya!
Lorraine: He has class... dignity.. you have a fake guchi handbag!
Val: I dont think it really concerns you about me and my husband!
Lorraine: Oh, i think it does.
Val lifts her eyebrow up, suspicous..
Lorraine: Me and James have been... close..
Val: How close?!
Lorraine: Oh, i dont think we need the details, do we?! :cool:
Val: You mean that he... and you...?
Vals eyes well up with tears..
Lorraine: Oh yes, all the way and back again! And thats why he's here now. The stupid bugger would rather watch you get pumped with chemicals every week, then be with me!
Val: You've set James up?! Because he dumped you for the real thing?!
Lorraine: Real thing my ****! But naturally, i can't let him do this! And how could i resist... a pretty blonde, some evidence... i knew i could get the police all over him, with some gentle persuasion. Too easy!
Claire walks into the room, with another policewoman. Claires eyes are red and sore through crying. They've both heard everything.
INT. PAIGNTON POLICE STATION - DAY
Lorraine is in the office being shouted at by her superior.
Chief Superitendant: What the hell do you think you've been doing!? Why!?... Honestly Lorraine! I hope you realise that this is the end of your career!
The camera cuts to Claire, and Emma in the coridoor, Lorraine and the Cheif Superintendant can be seen arguing trough the window. Val is sat down, her heads in her hands, mascara running down her face.
Val: I can't believe it... how could he have cheated on me?
Claire: He regrets it mom...
Val: You mean you knew about this!? You knew, and you didn't think to tell me!?
Claire: He only told me today mom... and I thought it best to keep it a secret, it's over, he choose you...
Val: That doesn't make it any better, he still betrayed me...
Claire: He loves you tough mom, now can you see why I didn't want you running over here... causing a scene...
The door to Lorraine's office opens. Lorraine was an angry look on her face. The Cheif Superintendant walks past them all and leaves them too it.
Lorraine: Well you've got what you want... James free, and me sacked... I hope you're happy...
Val gets up, angered by what Lorraine has just said.
Val: Happy!? How do you expect me to be happy...after finding out my husband has been sleeping with some third rate little tart like you!
Lorraine: I'm no better than you sweetheart... if you were so perfect he wouldn't have been comign to me every night after work!
Val deals Lorraine a heavy slap across the face, Lorraine holds her face in pain, but keeps the smug look on her face.
Lorraine: You can't blame me for your failing marraige, there were cracks before he came to me, it's just a matter of time before you kick him out and he comes back to me...
Val: (Points finger at Lorraine) You keep your thilthy little hands off my husband! Come by James again and I will kill you! Do you understand me!?
Lorraine: You're welcome to him... aging hasbeens, you belong together...
Lorraine gives Val a look of disgust, and walks off, past Claire and Emma, an evil look on her face...
INT. IQBAL & MARCUS' FLAT - DAY
Sanjita is sat at the dining table, doing the books for Marbal. The front door opens and Iqbal walks in.
Sanjita: Hiya babe, unloaded the delivery?
Iqbal: Yeah, look I've got to go out in a bit, but I thought I'd pop in to tell you what I've just heard...
Sanjita: Oh right?
Iqbal: (Hesitant) I don't know how to put this...
Sanjita: Well don't keep me in suspense...
Iqbal: It's James...
Sanjita: What about him?
Iqbal: Well I heard Val and the girls talking about him, he's been arrested...
Sanjita: Arrest? Arrested for what!?
Iqbal: ...for rape...
Sanjita: Rape!? James!? No way!
Iqbal: I don't know if it's connected to you and the others, but...
Sanjita: No Iqbal, I can't believe it, not the rape of anyone, it's totally out of character... besides he wouldn't rape his own daughter!
Iqbal: Who knows tough babe, until you know who raped you and Emma, then everyone's a suspect...
Oooo Lorraine has been sacked!!! Although can't see Lorraine letting James and Val getting off scott free - she doesn't seem the sort of person to just walk away and she did have the shrine in her room didn't she - shes not going to let this rest...I can feel it in me waters!!! lol
I agree, i dont think she will leave without a fight.
DaVeyWaVey
21-01-2007, 17:21
Lorraine has been sacked! :cheer: That's what she deserves, though i have a feeling she won't let this lie! Watch out Val and James!
I'm surprised by Lauren's tactic with Tanya to try and split her and Will up..Lauren really is making Tanya feel uncomfortable...wonderful stuff! :)
INT: HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE- Day
Michelle is sitting on the sofa, on the phone to Kate. It jumps between the 2 of them..
Kate: I'm only looking out for you, Mich!
Michelle: This is beyond a joke now..
Kate: Can't you see how worried i am about you?!
Michelle: I'm fine, we're both fine, so stop trying to get at every little thing we both do!
Michelle hangs up, annoyed. Callumn walks into the house..
Callumn: Come on, go slip on a dress and some lippy, we're going out!
Michelle: Where?!
Callumn: Up to Jenkins Manor, we've been invited round for a meal...
Michelle: Do we have to?!
Callumn: I thought you'd be pleased! Give you a chance to dress up a bit, get some good grub, that kind of thing..
Michelle: They're just going to pick at everything we do.. Is it really worth the effort? To spend the night being judged constantly..
Callumn: The least we can do is give them a chance. Go on, go get ready hun :)
Michelle nods, and goes upstairs to get ready.
INT: BELLEMY HOUSE- Day
Tanya is sitting by a window, reading a book. Lauren walks up behind her, and passes her a glass of white wine..
Lauren: Cheers!
Tanya: Whats this for...?
Lauren: Oh you know.. Any excuse!
Lauren sips at her drink, looking at Tanya constantly...
Lauren: You know what? You have the most gorgeous colour hair...
Lauren runs her fingers through Tanyas hair while shes talking..
Lauren: Really looked after. Tell you what, i'm jealous!
Tanya moves her head away uncomfortably..
Lauren: Oh wait, you have something on your cheek..
Lauren wipes her face, seductively. Tanya stands up..
Tanya: Stop this, already!
Lauren: Stop what..?
Tanya: Being all.. flirty... with me! Its making me uncomfortable... i dont think that way, ok?!
Lauren: Are you calling me some kind of dyke?! I'm just looking out for you! How dare you accuse me of things like that!
Tanya: After you've been the past few days?! Not having serious relationships... how could you not be?!
Lauren slaps her hard around the face, and leaves the room
Lorraine is not going to let this go.. she is going to keep at Val until she kicks james out..
Lauren is really playing Tanya.. been flirty and then denying it.. bad girl!!!
i can't believe john let craig off so easily.
what will psycho lorraine do to james and val?
INT. TORBAY HOSPITAL - DAY
Natasha is out of bed, packing the last few things into her bag. The nurse picks up her medical notes.
Nurse: Rightio Natasha, I'll just go get the signing out forms and you'll be free to go...
Natasha: Thanks :)
Natasha walks out into the coridoor, towards the pay phone, she gets a peice of note paper with Ruby's phone number out and dials it into the phone.
She waits impatiently for Ruby to answer...
INTERCUT:
INT. KYLE'S APARTMENT - DAY
Ruby and Kyle are lying in bed, kissing. Ruby's mobile rings, the pair ignore it. But it continues ringing.
Ruby: Oh god, who is it? :rolleyes:
Kyle: Just leave it...
Ruby: But what if it's important?
Kyle: What could me more important than me? :p
Kyle kisses Ruby's kneck, she giggles, the camera pans over to the phone, that continues to ring, but doesnt get answered...
INT. JENKINS MANOR - AFTERNOON
Richard, Hilary, Nick, Vicky, Michelle and Callumn are all seated at the dining table, having finished their meal. They are laughing and joking, clealry a bit tipsy.
Callumn: So Michelle and Kate were stuck in customs, with a large bag of these Indian spices...and security thought it was some kind of drug or whatever...you should have seen the look on their faces!
The group laugh as Callumn tells the joke.
Richard: Oh Callumn, you never fail to make me laugh with your tales...
Callumn: What can I say, I'm a man of the world, got many stories to tell :D
Michelle: Look..Richard, it's been great, but we have to go now...
Callumn: Oh what already?
We can tell that Callumn is just saying this to impress the Taylors.
Michelle: I wanted to get back... have an early night, got a bit of a headache...
Callumn: Oh right, sure...
Callumn and Michelle get up.
Callumn: Thanks for the meal Richard, Hilary, I've really enjoyed myself tonight...
Richard: So have I, we'll have to do this again soon.
Callumn: That would be great (To Michelle) wouldn't it babe?
Everyone says their goodbyes, Callumn and Michelle leave the dining room and head out of the house.
Michelle: Well than went well, they all love you...
Callumn: (Smug) Of course they do, everyone loves me :D
Callumn walks off with a devious grin of satisfaction on his face. With the Taylors onside, nothing can stop him...
EXT: BAYMOORE BEACH- Day
Natasha is sitting on a bench by the beach, her eyes watering in the wind and splashed by the waves and the storms. She is shaking, though doesn't seem to be bothered. Ruby walks over, and sits next to her..
Natasha: Thank God you're here... I've been trying to get ahold of you all day..
Ruby: Oh... Yeah, i'm sorry about that..
Natasha: I just... Wanted to talk..
Ruby: About what happened?
Natasha: Yeah... I just... The hospital were inconclusive... wouldn't tell me anything, not that they seemed to know anything themselves :rolleyes:
Ruby: And you want to know what happened?
Natasha: Of course! They did tests on me... But they can't be sure on anything...
Ruby: You mean... About the rapist?
Natasha nods, her eyes welling up with tears..
Ruby: You were unconcious... And i guess if the hospital tests were inconclusive then..
Natasha realises what Ruby is getting at..
Ruby: I'm sorry.. I'm here for you though, You know that, dont you?
Natasha: (Weakly) Thanks..
INT: RED RUM PUB- Evening
Mandy is sitting at a table, alone. Jon walks in and sits at the table with her..
Mandy: What are you doing?!
Jon: Sitting at a table, with a stunning woman!
Mandy walks away, unimpressed.
Jon: Can i get you a drink?
Mandy: I'm fine thanks...
Jon clicks his fingers in the air, and calls to the bar..
Jon: Bottle of champers over here, please!
Mandy: Trying to flash the cash are we?
Jon: Naturally :cool:
Mandy stands up, and puts her coat on..
Jon: Can i help you there?!
Mandy: I'm more than capable of putting my own coat on, thank you very much! And no, i dont want your champagne either!
Jon passes her a buisness card..
Jon: Just in case you change your mind :D
Mandy rolls her eyes, and leaves.
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
Natasha walks into the pub, looking weak, clinging onto Ruby. The pair walk up to the bar, where Claire is working.
Claire: Hiya Tash, good to see you up and about, how are you feeling?
Natasha: Don't speak to me...
Claire: Excuse me!?
Natasha: I've heard the rumours... about your dad...
Ruby: Tash...
Claire: No... what about my dad!?
Natasha: That's he's the rapist...he's the pig that did this to me!
Claire: You had better shut your mouth!
Natasha: Well he's raped one woman, so why not the others?
Claire: That was an outright lie! It's been proven he didn't do it...
Natasha: Well there's no smoke without fire...
Claire: For god sake, I can't believe what I'm hearing here... do you seriously think that he would rape his own daughter!?
Natasha: Who knows...
Claire: Get the hell out before I slap ya 'round the face!
The pub doors swing open, the pub falls to silence, as James walks into the pub.
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - NIGHT
Tanya walks trough the front door, carrying some designer shopping bags. Lauren is standing in the doorway arms folded.
Lauren: Dad and Will are out, it's just me and you...
Tanya: I dont want another argument like we had the other day, I've got much more on my plate than petty things like that....
Lauren: Look Tanya I want to apologise for what I said and did, I've just been feeling really weird recently...
Tanya: Yeah, well whatever it is you shouldn't keep it held up inside, you have to tell someone...
Lauren: It's not the thing you want to make public...:rolleyes:
Tanya: Go on you can tell me...
Lauren: I think I may be lesbian...
Tanya doesn't know where to look, uncomfortable with Lauren's announcement.
Uh oh....Lauren is setting Tanya up for a big fall...
What a thing to say!! Saying that James would rape his own daughter!!! She deserves a slap for that no matter what ordeal shes been through :angry:
INT: RED RUM PUB- Night
James looks around, aware of the silence..
James: Shocked, are you?
He walks into the pub further..
James: Isnt anyone going to say anything?! I'm innocent, and thats been proved. I'm not some ****ing rapist, and the fact that any of you could even THINK that... Friends, eh?
Ruby: You can't blame us..
James: Excuse me?!
Ruby: You get arrested for rape, what are we meant to think?!
James: Innocent untill proven guilty isn't just a saying you hear on the Bill, ya know!
Claire stands by James. There is muttering in the pub, and everyone begins to talk again..
Sanjita: I guess thats a good thing... in a way..
Natasha: Hardly..
Sanjita: Well, at least they'll catch whoever it was, and not get someone whose not guilty..
Natasha: But he's still out there! The rapist is still out there, and i can't remember anything about them... how is that a good thing?
INT: BELLEMY HOUSE- Night
Tanya is shocked at Lauren..
Tanya: Wow... Bit too much information there..
Lauren: I'm sorry... I shouldn't have said anything.... I just... Oh, never mind.
Tanya: No, come on...
Lauren: I know i shouldn't feel this way;
Tanya: (Interupts) Theres nothing wrong with it. Its the 21st century, not the Dark Ages!
Lauren: But you know... Its not "normal", is it? You're meant to grow up, have your heartbroken a few times, settle down with the man of your dreams and have a family. Not..
Tanya urges her to continue..
Lauren: Not have feelings for another woman... Its tearing me apart, Tanya.
Tanya looks away, unsure what to say. Lauren moves closer, and puts her hand in Tanyas hand.
Lauren: I can't help the way i feel..
Tanya is shocked, and leaves the house, running out of the drive, confused...
Poor James.. how can they think he raped his own daughter??? Claire should have slapped natasha harder for that comment
Lauren is really getting to Tanya.. what a cow!!??
INT. BAYMOORE B&B - DAY
Mandy is sat on the sofa, looking at the peice of paper with John's number on it. Annie walks over to her, casually looking at what is in her hand.
Annie: So then, you going to call him?
Mandy: Call who?
Annie: You can't fool me Mandy... you've starred at that same bit of paper all morning, it can only be a phone number...so then, who is he?
Mandy: Oh, no-one special...
Annie: Still, it's someone... you should ring him, what's the worst that could happen?
Mandy: I'm not sure...
Annie: Come on Mandy, it's about time you move on from Craig...
Mandy: Yeah, dya know what? You're right!
With a confident smile on her face Mandy picks up her mobile and dials the number.
Mandy: (Into Phone) Hiya... Jon?... It's Mandy Har... Mandy... yeah i was just phoning to arrange a drink or something?.... Yes.... Saturday would be great..ok... see you then... bye
Mandy puts down the phone, a beaming smile on her face.
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
James walks up to the bar, where Patrick is serving. Natasha is sat at the otherside of the room, giving him daggered looks.
Patrick: James, good to see you back... I didn't believe you were guilty for a second...
James: Cheers mate, it's nice to know that someone's on my side at least...
Patrick: We all are, what can I get you, it's on the house?
James: Oh thanks Paddy, erm a pint of the usual please
Patrick begins to pour James drink. The pub doors swing open and Val marches into the pub.
James: (Happy) Val, babe!
Without speaking to him, she deals him a huge slap around the face.
James: What the hell was that for!?
Val: Sleeping with Lorraine behind my back!?
Patrick puts James drink down on the bar, the pub is in silence, everyone watching the domestic that is unfolding.
James: I don't know what you're on about...
Val: Don't you dare deny it! Claire told me everything, and so did your little tart!
James: It didn't mean anything, honest!
Val grabs the pint from the bar and throws it all over him.
Val: Save it! I don't care! Our marriage is over!
Val storms out of the pub, leaving James humiliated at the bar, beer dripping down his body.
INT: BELLEMY HOUSE- Day
Tanya is flicking through the TV channels. Lauren walks in, and stands over her. They don’t say anything to each other.
Lauren: Theres a great show on BBC1 right now..
Lauren leans over Tanya, and takes the control from her hand, holding her from the back in the process. Tanya wriggles away..
Tanya: Lauren, please.
Lauren: What?!
Tanya: You can’t keep doing things like this! All the remarks, all the… touching…
Lauren: I’ve done nothing wrong!
Tanya: Like hell you have! And if you keep this up, I’ll tell Will. I swear it, I will!
Lauren: You wouldn’t…
Tanya: You know I would. And you know full well what your family would think of you being a Lesbian. Come on, be serious here, would they accept that in their family?
Lauren says nothing.
Tanya: Exactly. They’ll disown you.
Lauren: I can’t help what I am! And I can’t help my feelings!
Tanya: But you can at least be quiet about it!
Lauren: But I can’t! You don’t know what this is like for me…. I told you in confidence, you can’t go telling people, you just can’t!
Tanya: Why not?!
Lauren: Because I trusted you…
Tanya looks at Lauren, suspicious. She nods..
Tanya: Ok, I wont. But keep all your… feelings.. to yourself, ok?
EXT: RED RUM PUB- Day
James follows Val outside..
James: Val, wait!
Val: Leave it, James. I could be doing without all this!
James: Please, let me explain..
Val: I don’t want your ruddy explanations! I’m having chemo, don’t you get that? I need to concentrate on that, and not have suspicions about if you are going to be faithful or not. I’ve got enough on my mind right now.
James: But i..
Val: “But I” nothing! Don’t you understand how I feel right now? I’m sick from the chemo. My body is drained. I’m terrified that my hair is going to fall out, and I’m dreading the next time I have to go to that ruddy place! Now I find you that you were cheating on me for weeks?!
James: I called it off as soon as I knew about the cancer!
Val: Like that makes a ruddy difference! You cheated on me. After everything that’s happened to us and our family, and you wrecked everything we ever had together. You broke our wedding vows the moment you even thought about that woman. As far as I’m concerned, our marriage is over.
Val walks off. A tear rolls down her face, as she tries to look strong.
Val, don't let Lorraine win.. Ok, he cheated and was going to leave you but just to get that woman back, pretend to be happy with him... you can yell at him all you like behind closed doors.. don't let her win!!!!
DaVeyWaVey
25-01-2007, 17:58
Great stuff! Lauren is setting Tanya up for a fall and it looks like James has blown his marriage with Val!
INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - DAY
Chris, Romeo and Roxy are in the kitchen. Chris and Romeo refuse to speak to one another.
Roxy: Honestly, you guys, this is just ridiculous...
Romeo: I'm sorry babe, but I have my principles
Roxy: Surely after all your years of freinship you can both forgive and forget?
Chris: I'm not forgiving until he aplogises for punching me and totally over reacting...
Roxy: Oh I give up with the pair of you...
Roxy leaves the kitchen, in disbelief. There is a knock on the front door. Roxy opens the door to Val who barges in.
Roxy: Val?
Val walks into the kitchen, an angry look on her face.
Chris: Hiya Val, what's up?
Val: What's up!? I'm sick of seeing my daughter in a constant mood because of you two!
Romeo: Now hang about!...
Val pulls out two chairs from under the dinining table and urges them to sit down.
Val: You two need to sort out your differences, if not for you're own sake than for Claire and Nathans!
Val has a serious look on their face. Romeo and Chris give each other scornful looks, reluctantly sitting down.
INT. KYLE'S FLAT - DAY
Kyle opens the front door to Ruby.
Kyle: Why this is a nice suprise, I didn't expect you around until later...
Ruby: Look Kyle I didn't come for...
Kyle: You could have fooled me
Kyle gestures towards her low cut top and short skirt, she wraps herself up in her coat, feeling violated for him looking at her.
Ruby: I came to tell you it's over Kyle...
Kyle: You don't mean that...
Ruby: It doesnt feel right doing this to Natasha, not at the moment...
Kyle: Like she doesnt deserve it, she did the exact same thing to Amy...
Ruby: She's my mate Kyle, it's just wrong...
Kyle: The world is full of selfsih people Rube... just be one, do what's right for you...you want... I want it...don't deny your feelings...
Ruby: But I promised myself I would end this today...
Kyle: Promises are made to me broken... I promised to be a good catholic boy, now look at me :D
Kyle and Ruby passionaltey kiss. She takes off her coat, as they head to the bedroom.
INT: BACHELORS HOUSE- Day
Val sits down in between Romeo and Chris on the chairs...
Val: So come on! You two can't go on like this!
Romeo: Shes screwed both of us around Val, what do you expect?!
Val: I expect one of you to take responsibility for your child!
Chris: Well if its not mine, then i'm having nothing to do with it! Claire cant expect to drain me clean for a kid thats not mine!
Romeo: Exactly! I wont provide for a child thats not mine...
Val: One of you needs to take responsibility for your son!
Chris: And how will we know who that is exactly?! Come on?!
Val looks away, annoyed. She looks at the TV, Jeremy Kyle is on..
Jeremy Kyle: Got a family problem you need sorting? Want to sort out tha family fued thats divided you for years? Call our team on...
Val stops listening, and smiles...
INT: BELLEMY HOUSE- Day
Tanya is in the kitchen, preparing some food. Lauren goes to walk in there, but is pulled into a seperate room by Jared. They talk quietly..
Jared: I dont see any results, Lauren!
Lauren: Its not easy you know!
Jared: Nothings "easy"!
Lauren: Oh, so you've turned a straight woman lesbien before, have you?
Jared: There isn't time for this... The more time Tanya and Will are together, and stronger they are getting. And now living together, thats getting worse!
Lauren: Its not like i can force it, is it? Its working, beleive me.... Shes got those doubts... give it time, it'll work!
Jared: You need to appeal to her weaknesses... Get to what will turn her.. those little weak spots of doubt..
Lauren: And those are?
Jared: Gary and the kids, what else? Come on, you're my girl, i know you can do this!
Lauren smiles, evilly at Jared.
Lauren: Of course :D
:rotfl::rotfl: can't believe Val is thinking of Jeremy Kyle, that is so funny!!!
Jared and Lauren are just evil
Why is it Tanya is getting the brunt of everything....after losing Gary and the twins this could finish her off :( :(
INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - DAY
Romeo and Chris are now seated on the sofa. Tom, Roxy and Emma and standing around, as Val excitedly paces the room.
Val: This has got to be the best bloomin idea ever!
Romeo: There's no way you're getting me onto the Jermely bloody Kyle show!
Chris: Me neither!
Tom, Emma and Roxy are creasing.
Val: If anyone can sort out our problems it's our Jermey :wub:
Romeo: Have you gone mad Val!? You seriously want your daughter's lovelife broadcast to half the nation!?
Val: Well it's evident you lot can't sort out your problems... so I'm not taking no for an answer.
Val dials the number that she has scribbled down.
Val: Hi... this is Val Andrews... yes I'd like to get my daughter and her two lovers on the show :D
Romeo and Chris look at each other trough gritted teeth, casting daggered looks at one another, then at Val.
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - NIGHT
Tanya walks into the house, and throws her keys into the ceramic plate by the front door.
Tanya: Hello!? Will!?
Lauren enters the hallway. Dressed in a elegant dress.
Lauren: He's still at work...
Tanya: What again!? :angry:
Lauren: Yeah he's drafting up some legal documents with dad for this new hotel complex...
Tanya: He promised me he would be home early tonight!
Lauren: Get used to it Tan, he's a busy lawyer who always put his career before his women... that's probably what ended his marraige with Melissa...
Tanya: Me and will are fine thank you very much... and he hasn't even called? We are supposed to be going out to dinner in ten minutes...
Lauren: Well Leslie has cooked a meal for me and dad, I'm sure he wont mind if you have his meal...
Tanya: I don't know, I have this table booked as I say...
Lauren: Yes but you dont want to be going on your own, at this rate it could be hours before they get back... come on, eat with me, you can keep me company...
Tanya: Ok, I suppose it wont do any harm...
Lauren: Brilliant! :D
Tanya heads off towards the dining room. Lauren applies some more lipstick, licks her lips seductivley and walks off confidently towards the dining room, vengance in mind...
INT: RED RUM PUB- Day
Hayley is out the back, and picks up some heavy crates. Amy rushes down the stairs to stop her..
Amy: You need to take it easy!
Hayley: I'm fine... Really, i am.
Amy: Think of the Baby, Haylz. You can't lift these things when you're pregnant, you know that!!
Hayley: I'm not changing my life because of this baby. I just wont.
Amy: You dont have much of a choice. You're having this baby for me... Its what you're getting paid for after all... And maybe i haven't helped you as much as i should have done with this pregnancy, but you know what its like around here..
Hayley: I dont need any help. I just need my money.
Amy: Sorry?!
Hayley: My 30 Grand. I want it.
INT: BELLEMY HOUSE- Night
Tanya and Lauren are eating in the Dining Room. Lauren is sitting close to Tanya...
Lauren: So..
Tanya doesn't say anything, and continues eating..
Lauren: I always meant to ask you... Was there ever anyone special in your life, before Will?
Tanya: Well... Yes...
Lauren: Really? Well, i thought there must have been someone, i suppose. Come on, spill the goss!! Messy divorce?
Tanya: No... Gary died..
Lauren: I'm so sorry, i should think before i say things like that!
Tanya: Dont worry. I dont mind talking about him... and what happened... He was a part of my life for so long. We had kids together and -
Lauren: Kids?!
Tanya: Yeah... They died too, just before i met Will. Everyone tries to avoid the subject now, but you know, getting things out in the open helps me.. I wont forget him...
Lauren opens a bottle of wine..
Lauren: Come on, i wont avoid the subject. You can tell me all about you two :)
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
Mandy and Jon are sat at a table, having a drink, clearly getting on well. Craig and Leah walk into the pub, and see the pair.
Leah: Oh look babe, Mandy's got herself a new fella...
Craig: What the hell does she think she's playing at!?
Craig charges over towards Mandy, he can only see the back of the man, he pulls on the man's jacket until he turns around. As soon as he sees it is Jon, he is taken aback.
Jon: Yes!?
Craig: I...erm...was
Jon: ...Pulling on my jacket, what is you're problem Craig!?
Craig: Yeah well maybe I wouldn't have to to if you didn't give me just cause to...
Jon: What exactly is your problem!?
Craig: You, being the I am, sitting in my pub...chatting up my wife!
Jon: The wife you cheated on Craig! The wife you are divorcing! You gave up any rights you had to this woman the day you slept with her sister!
The pub is in silence listening to the pair arguing. Mandy and Leah both look uncomfortable and concerned as the argument devlops.
Craig: Where do you get off interfering with my life, telling me what I can and can't do...touching things that don't belong to you...(To Mandy) I suppose you think the sun shines out of his backside, with his smart suits and charming words... but he's no better than I am, infact he's worse...
Mandy: What are you on about Craig!?
Craig: Jon Kerrigan, the biggest gangster in the south west...
Jon looks ashamed as Craig says this.
Mandy: (To Jon) Is this true!?
Jon: Look...Mandy...
Mandy: Save it!
Mandy grabs her handbag and storms out of the pub. The entire pub are staring at Jon. Craig has a smug grin on his face.
Craig: Not so cocky and confidant now are you? :cool:
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - NIGHT
Tanya: When I left Gregg I thought I wanted to travel the world, do things...but I just realised I was with the wrong man, when I got with Gary... everything just seemed so right...
Lauren: You're soul mate?
Tanya: Yeah, we just loved each other so much, and when we had the kids...
Tanya begins to cry. She gets out a tissue and whipes her eyes, but continues to cry.
Tanya: I'm sorry it's just...
Lauren: Don't apoligise, you have nothing to be sorry about, I shouldn't have mentioned him...
Tanya: No I like talking about him...it's just...I miss him so much...
Tanya begins to cry even more, the mascara running down her face. Lauren rubs her hands over Tanya's face to whipe away the tears, but then realises she shouldn't be touching Tanya.
Lauren: Oh...I'm sorry...
Tanya sniffs away her tears, still emotional. She gestures for Lauren to keep her hands on her face. The pair stare into each others eyes for a moment, Lauren leans in, and the pair kiss tenderly...
Sorry but I ain't buying that! In fact :angry:
EXT: Red Rum Pub- Evening
Mandy storms out of the pub, annoyed. Jon follows after her, playing it cool..
Mandy: Leave it Jon, i dont want to know.
Jon: Come on, hear it out!
Mandy turns on the spot, and faces him
Mandy: Go on then. Speak.
Jon: 30 years i was with my wife, and no harm ever came to her. My personal and professional lives are polar opposites.
Mandy: Professional?! Is that what you call it?!
Jon: I would have told you about my buisness...
Mandy: Its hardly a buisness! Everything you do is bloody illegal!
Jon: Its not the kind of thing you tell someone on a first date, is it?!
Mandy turns and walks away. She calls over her shoulder.
Mandy: Just leave me alone. I dont want to know.
INT: BELLAMY HOUSE- Night
Lauren and Tanya kiss, tenderly. Lauren slips her hand under Tanyas bra strap, then moves away when she realises what she is doing..
Lauren: Are you... Sure about this?
Tanya nods, and leans in and kisses her again. She whisper in her ear..
Tanya: Not here..
Tanya smiles, and leaves the room, and walks upstairs. Lauren sees her go into the bedroom, and beems. She picks up her phone..
Lauren: Will? Hi... Sorry to catch ya while your working, but me and Tanya have been doing some stuff which we would like to show you... Never mind about that untill you get here! So could you come round right away? Thanks!
Lauren snaps her phone shut, and laughs to herself, satsified at everything working out perfectly. She walks upstairs, and follows Tanya into the bedroom.
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - NIGHT
Will enters the house, having rushed home becuase of Lauren's call.
Will: Hello?...Tanya?....Lauren?
Will puts his coat and suitcase on the floor and walks around the house looking for them. He works his way up the staircase.
Will opens the door to his and Tanya's bedroom. Lauren and Tanya are in bed having sex, they immediatley stop and cover themselves up, looking shocked.
Will stares at them, shocked and annoyed...:eek:
INT. BAYMOORE B&B - MORNING
James is sat at the one of the tables having his breakfast, having been forced to move into the B&B. Annie looks over at James, concerned, she walks towards him.
Annie: Is eveything okay?
James: Yeah, nice breakfast, thank Eddie for me...
Annie: I wasn't on about the breakfast...
James: Oh?
Annie: Is everything okay between you and Val?
James: Does it look like it is!?
Annie: Okay, no need to stop, was just asking...
James: I'm sorry Annie, it's just...we're going trough a rough patch, everything should sort itself out in time...
Annie: I sure it will :) I'll leave you in peace
Annie walks towards the kitchen, but then returns.
Annie: Erm James you have a visitor...
Lorraine walks in, with a bunch of flowers and a smile on her face.
Lorraine: Hi, I heard about you and Val, thought you could do with cheering up :D
EXT. SINGH & SON'S CONVIENANCE STORE - DAY
Claire is heading towards the beach, Nathan in his pram. She passes the store as Chris comes out with a newspaper and a bottle of milk.
Claire: Chris...
Chirs: Claire... how are you, and Nathan?
Claire: Don't pretend you care...
Chris: Look, about all this...can you get your mom to stop this stupid Jeremy Kyle idea... me and Romeo's friendship is on the rocks as it is, and this will just tip it over the edge...
Claire: I'm sorry Chris...
Claire: But Claire!
Claire: Look I dont give a toss about your macho alpha male crisis, I want a father for my baby, and this is the only way...
Chris: Just hear me out, please!
Claire begins to push the pram along, ignoring Chris' pleas.
Chris: Claire!
Claire: I'll see you at the studio...
DaVeyWaVey
28-01-2007, 19:46
:rotfl: Val cracks me up! Her Jeremy Kyle idea sounds great!
Looks like Lauren's plan worked, can't believe Tanya gave into her charms so easily and even worse, Will caught them! :eek: What's he gonna do now?!
And uh-oh Lorraine's back on the scene, to cause more trouble i suspect. :cool:
EXT: ANDREWS HOUSE- Day
Lorraine walks past the Andrew's House, as James walks out..
Lorraine: I hear you and Val are over..
James: None of your ****ing buisness!
Lorraine: Well, you know... We could make a go of it now, can't we? No one is going to stand in our way now..
James: Excuse me?!
Lorraine: Come on, dont make me spell it out to you!
James: After everything you've done, you seriously think i'd get back together with you?! I wouldn't touch you with a bloody bargepipe!
James storms off, leaving Lorraine alone in the street.
INT BELLAMY HOUSE- Night
Will storms down the stairs, shocked about what he's seen. Tanya rushes after him, covered in the bedsheets..
Tanya: Will! Wait, listen!
Will: I dont want to ****ing hear it!
They run past Jared, who is standing on the stairs. Lauren walks down the stairs in a dressing robe, with a satisfied smile on her face..
Jared: All done?
Lauren: To prefection, as planned!
Jared: Thats my girl, well done :cool:
They smile at each other, as Will and Tanya fight outside..
Val and her plans :rotfl::rotfl: I can't wait to read that one
Lauren final got what she wanted.. Tanya in bed, will to find out and her Dad to be proud of her.. mind you, in a way I can understand why this happened.. Tanya needs to talk about Gary and nobody listened, except Lauren and then she immediately linked the love Tan had for Gary to her by seducing her at that point.. i don't think Tanya would have slept with her if Lauren had left it for a while
EXT. BELLAMY HOUSE - NIGHT
Will hurries out of the house and onto the gravelled driveway towards his car. Tanya follows him, wrapped only in a bed sheet. She staggers across the jagged gravel in bare foot.
Tanya: Come on Will, at least hear me out!
Will: Why should I!?
Tanya: Becuase you owe it to our relationship!
Will: Relationship!? You gave up on that the moment... just look at you...wrapped in bedsheets like a whore...
Tanya: Will, you have to believe me, it wasn't my doing! Lauren has been coming onto me for weeks...
Will: I don't want to know...I can't believe the pair of you!
Tanya: Will, I didn't even want to, she was just so persistant and she got to me! Playing her sick mind games!
Will: You could have said no!
Tanya: She brought up Gary and the kids... I was emotional... vulnerable...
Will: So you decide to turn lesbian and jump into bed with my sister!?
Tanya: I didn't mean to cheat on you!
Will: Yeah well it's too late, becuase you have...
Tanya: Please Will, forgive me!
Tanya gets onto her knees and grabs hold of Will's leg. Will kicks her off.
Will: It was with my sister...how can I possibly forgive that!?
Will gets into his car, despite Tanya's pleas. He speeds off, leaving Tanya alone on the driveway...
EXT. CRAIG'S CAFE - MORNING
Amy is walking back from the shops with a bottle of milk in her hands. Val is just leaving the cafe, the pair bump into each other.
Amy: Heya Val...
Val: Hi Am', how are you babe?
Amy: Same old, Hayley's being a bit of a pain but what's new... how about you?
'
Val: I've been better...could really do without all this at the moment...
Amy: Seperation is never easy, I should know... but I'm sure you too will be able to sort out your differences...
Val: So do I Am', but it's not as easy as that, he cheated on me...
Amy: Sometimes you just have to forgive and forget... if you don't hurry up you might be too late...
Val: What do you mean by that?
Amy: Well I just saw Lorraine head into the B&B, isn't that where James is staying?
Val has a look of annoyance on her face, she storms towards the B&B in a huff.
INT: BELLAMY HOUSE- Day
Tanya enters the house, tears streaming down her face. She runs up to Lauren..
Tanya: You planned this, didn't you? You ****ing planned this!
Lauren: Now, would i ever do a thing like that...?
Tanya slaps Lauren hard around the face. Lauren retaliates immediately, by slaping Tanya hard around the face too.
Tanya: You're a bloody dyke, you know that? Acting all the innocent, when your some kind of closet gay!
Lauren: I'm 100% straight. 110% actually. You... On the other hand..
Tanya: Excuse me?!
Lauren: I mention your dead husband, and you're all over me! Sounds like someones begging for it, if ya ask me!
Tanya: You ****ing..
Tanya launches at Lauren. Jared grabs her from behind, and pulls her away, with a smug smile that Tanya cannot see...
EXT: BAYMOORE ROADS- Day
Lorraine follows James down the street..
James: Didn't you hear me?! I told ya to eff off!
Lorraine: Oh now, come on!
James stops, and walks over to Lorraine.
James: You've wrecked my life... I dont want anything more to do with you!
Lorraine: Me?! Wrecked it?! You brought it on yourself, love! And we wouldn't want more of the same to happen, would we?
James: You can't touch me now. You try and do one more thing, and i'll get you locked up in a nut house like you deserve! Theres no point even trying now, Lorraine. Face it- you lost!
Lorraine moves closer to James, and holds him tight..
Lorraine: I'm sure we can come to some kind of arrangement..
Val walks around the corner, and sees Lorraine with her arms around James. She storms over. James pushes her off him immediately..
James: This is not what it looks like, beleive me..
Val: I dont care what it ****ing looks like!
Val slaps him around the face
Val: The beds not even cold, and you're having it off with her again!
James: But i..
Val turns away, disgusted. She faces Lorraine..
Val: And as for you..
Lorraine: Going to try and slap me down to size, like you did your ex?! You cant face the fact that i've got what you haven't, can you? I'm a woman. A proper woman, with no bits cut off, and not full of chemicals. And thats what James wants, isn't it? A real woman, not some butchered immitation like you!
Val punches her around the face forcefully. Lorraine launches at her, and they bitch fight in the empty street. Lorraine punches Val hard in the breast, sending her doubling over in pain. Lorraine walks off, smug at her agony..
Lorraine and Lauren should get together and become a new homewreaking team
INT. BAYMOORE B&B - DAY
James lays Val down on the sofa, she comes too.
James: You okay now?
Val: I was...until I saw that....
James: Look I'm sorry, Lorraine just wont get the hint...
Val: Believe it or not I have more important things to worry about than Lorraine causing trouble...
James: If there's anything I can do...
Val: I think you've done enough James, it's becuase of you and your infedelity that we have this problem with Lorraine in the first place...and why you're here as oppose to at home...
James: I made a mistake, I'm sorry...
Val: I don't want your aplogises, as if my life isn't bad enough as it is...
James tries to touch her affectionatly but she pulls away.
Val: I think I'd best leave you too it... I shouldn't have come around in the first place.
Val gives James an icy look, as she gets up and leaves him alone at the B&B.
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - NIGHT
Tanya comes down the staircase, dragging her suitcase behind her, she is wearing her coat, looking worn out from crying. Jared and Lauren are standing in the hallway.
Jared: Off then?
Tanya: Please...Jared...let me stay, let me make it up to Will...
Jared: (Scoffs) Typical Taylor, ruining this family once again...still it couldn't have happened to a slutier whore...
Tanya gives Jared a suspicious look, then it clicks...
Tanya: God...you're in this aswell aren't you!? You and her have had this plotted all along!?
Jared: I'll do anything to protect my family, now take your suitcase and your cheap personality and get the hell out of my house!
Tanya: You Ashworths really are as bad as dad makes out... I'm going to make sure you all get what's coming to you...
Lauren: (Smug) Bring it on, bitch!
Tanya casts Jared and Lauren evil looks before walking past them and leaving Bellamy House. The pair look at each other, smug devious smiles on their faces.
INT: BAYMOORE B&B- Day
Amy is talking to Mandy at the B&B...
Mandy: I should have known it was never going to work, anyway... Me and men, as if i should even have hoped..
Amy: Come on, dont be so hard on yourself! The right person will come along one day soon, you just wait...
Theres a knock at the door. Mandy opens it, and walks back in with a large bunch of flowers. She reads the card out loud..
Mandy: I'm sorry... Give me another chance? 8PM Red Rum?
She smiles to herself
INT: JENKINS MANOR- Day
Tanya walks into the hall, slowly, looking around. Richard walks down the stairs and sees her. .
Tanya: Its over... Me and Will are over..
Tanya bursts into tears, obviously distressed. Richard rushes down the stairs, and hugs her tightly..
Richard: Come on, let it all out..
Tanya: I just... I thought me and him would... I got it so wrong..
Richard: I knew this would happen. I'm here for you, Tan.
Hilary walks down the stairs, and rolls her eyes.
Tanya: After everything i did?!
Richard: Even after all that. I'm your Dad, i'll stand by you now. You'll be ok :)
They hug each other again. Hilary walks up the stairs again, and rings Jared.
INTERCUT:
INT: BELLAMY HOUSE- Day
Jared answers the phone, and sits at his desk with his feet on the table..
Jared: Nothing to worry about now. The deed is done, our little problem is sorted :D
He hangs up, and smiles to himself.
Cant believe Lauren and Jared can be so cruel. wonder how Hilary is going to take Tanya been back in the house.. Hey.. where has Nick gone??
Wow!!! Just caught up and ...... !!!
I hope Lauren and Jared get whats coming to them.....Tanya had done nothing to them...I hope she's got that cassette (or at least another copy of it hidden somewhere) as I can't see Will giving it to her anymore....
Lorraine is totally obsessed!!! Shes Cathy Bradford in disguise!!!
Can't wait for the Jeremy Kyle Show!! Its getting great!!!
INT. JENKINS MANOR - MORNING
Richard, Hilary and Tanya are in the living room. Richard is hugging Tanya, trying to cheer her up. Hilary is standing, a drink in her hands.
Richard: I just knew he'd let you down...
Tanya: He just walked trough the door and said it's over...said he didn't think it was working out, what with you and Jared not getting on...
Richard: I'm sorry to hear it hun... you're too bloody good for an Ashworth anyway Tanya...
Tanya: Even so...I loved him dad...
Hilary: Bless...it's such a crying shame when couples split...
Tanya: Oh don't you try and act as tough you care!
Hilary: Sorry?
Tanya: I bet you're enjoying this...seeing me in tears, you've tried to split me and Will up from day one...
Hilary: Tanya, that simply isn't the case...
Hilary acts the innocent infront of Richard.
Richard: Tanya...
Tanya gets up in a huff.
Tanya: Silly me for thinking you'd ever take my side in this! I'm going out!
Richard: Out? Where?
Tanya: To see Will!
Tanya storms out of the house, slamming the door behind her. Hilary gives Richard a look of confusion...
Wow!!! Just caught up and ...... !!!
I hope Lauren and Jared get whats coming to them.....Tanya had done nothing to them...I hope she's got that cassette (or at least another copy of it hidden somewhere) as I can't see Will giving it to her anymore....
Glad you're enjoying it.
But remember, the only copy Tanya had was at Bellamy house, Jared found it and burnt it, hence why Hilary was so smug, no evidence, no conviction.
INT. BAYMOORE B&B - DAY
James is sitting in the lounge, reading a newspaper. Eddie walks in, a serious look on his face.
Eddie: James...
James: Oh hiya Eddie, how are you?
Eddie: I'm ok thanks, look Annie and I have been talking and...
James: Oh sounds serious, everything okay?
Eddie: It's just, if you want to stay under our roof then you need to promise us there wont be anymore drama like there was yesterday...
James: Yeah about that...I'm sorry, it wont happen again...you have my word....
Annie walks into the room, pale as a ghost. Eddie and James look at her, concerned.
Eddie: Annie?
Annie: I just found this...pushed trough the letter box...
Eddie: What is it?
Annie: It's Val...and the girls...
Instantly James jumps up and grabs the peice of paper from her. He looks at it, a disturbed look on his face.
SaY GoOdByE 2 tHeM jAmEs
James rushes off towards the Andrews house.
INT: BELLAMY HOUSE- Day
Will is sitting in the kitchen, contemplating what happened. Lauren walks in, he stands up and gets ready to leave the room..
Lauren: You can't go on ignoring me forever, Will. What happened wasn't my fault.
Will: Excuse me?! You didn't have to do what you did- no one forced you!
Lauren: It was Tanya.. One minute she was crying, the next she was all over me..
Will: Bull****. I know what you are like, with your evil little plans. Anyone you dont like, and you get rid of them, dont ya.
Lauren looks down, and mutters.
Lauren: I did it for you.
Will: Splitting me up from the woman i love- Yep, thats really helping me, isn't it!
Lauren: The Ashworths and the Taylors... It would never work..
Will: That pathetic feud is nothing to do with me! Too many hearts have been broken over that before- i didn't want mine adding to it. Surely its time to bridge the gap now?! You didn't "need" to do what you did. You wanted to. Because you're a vindictive, munipulative bitch.
Lauren: Its whats best for you, you know that really. I'm doing whats best for you..
Will: Well you got a bloody funny way of showing it!
Wow!!! Just caught up and ...... !!!
I hope Lauren and Jared get whats coming to them.....Tanya had done nothing to them...I hope she's got that cassette (or at least another copy of it hidden somewhere) as I can't see Will giving it to her anymore....
Glad you're enjoying it.
But remember, the only copy Tanya had was at Bellamy house, Jared found it and burnt it, hence why Hilary was so smug, no evidence, no conviction.
why would Tanya be so stupid to only have one copy.. silly silly girl
Agree with you Em.. she is a kathy bradford and now she is going after Val and the girls.. she is a cow
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