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    Woah!!!! Can't believe Noel got Marie beaten up and my god, Rachel is in trouble now.. Fantastic work bry and I hope when you say next week, you mean monday!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Siobhan View Post
    Woah!!!! Can't believe Noel got Marie beaten up and my god, Rachel is in trouble now.. Fantastic work bry and I hope when you say next week, you mean monday!!
    The Monday after Siobhan, I'm away for a week on Scout Jamboree in Essex!

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    A weeek Whaaaat? I need to know what happened to that woman, has Rachel killed her? And will Marie speak up about her attack??

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    Episode 4

    Scene 1

    EXT. COUNTRY ROAD - MORNING

    Rachel's car is down in a ditch. Her head is against the wheel, she stirs, holding her head in pain from her hangover.

    She looks over at the empty vodka bottle on the passenger seat and groans.

    She looks at herself in the mirror, and groans once more, displeased at her less than glamarous image.

    She turns on the radio, where a newsreader is reading the news.

    Newsreader: And in other news, local police are on the hunt for a hit and run driver, after a 25 year old woman was killed in the early hours of the morning...reports suggest that a female driver in a red ferrari was repsonsible for the incident...

    Rachel's face suddenly turns to one of horror, as the events of the evening before flood back to her.

    Rachel: ****...

    She gets a cloth and whipes her fingerprints off the sterring wheel, gear stick and door handle, she picks up the bottle of Vodka and stumbles out of the car.

    She climbs up the ditch and looks down at the wreck of her car. She runs her hair through her hands in despair before running off down the road.
    Last edited by Bryan; 07-08-2007 at 15:31.

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    Scene 2

    INT. SEAN'S HOUSE - MORNING

    Sean is lying in bed, he stirs at the sound of someone entering the room. Charley walks in, dressed in one of his shirts. She walks over with a plate of burnt toast

    Charley: I tried breakfast in bed, but I had issues with the toaster...

    Sean rubs her eyes, to make sure he isn't dreaming, it's evident he regrets bringing Charley back.

    Sean: It's not rocket science...

    Charley: Stuff the breakfast, im up for seconds

    Charley jumps on to the bed, and launches herself at Sean, horrified he pulls himself away, and gets out of bed, wrapping a towel around his waist.

    Sean: Look last night was good...

    Charley: Good? It was amazing! Oh my god, who'd have thought it, me a WAG!

    Sean: Let's not get carried away here...

    Charley: What you saying I'm not your girlfriend or something?

    Sean: We've only just meet...

    Charley: It best not be a one night stand, becuase I'm not being funny or anything but if it is, I'm straight on the phone to the papers..

    Sean: Let's just...see how it goes yeah?

    Charley: (Confused) So you're not dumping me then?

    Sean: I suppose not...

    Charley flings herself at him and spins him around.

    Charley: That's like so cool! I knew you wouldn't love and leave me, your a proper decent fella like, not like the scally tramps off my estate. Oh my god I so have to call Sharesse and tell her everything!

    Charley runs off out of the room, Sean looks horrified, feeling he's got himself into an impossible situation.

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    Scene 3

    INT. ASTONS' HOUSE - MORNING


    Micheal and Jenny are sat at the breakfast table. Jenny has a pack of ice against her face, following her fight with Rachel last night.

    Jenny: This kills...when I see her next...

    Micheal: You'll aplogise and be nice to her, the last thing we want is some "feud" put in the gossip mags...

    Jenny: She launched at me...for nothing!

    Micheal: If there's something I've learnt in my years of marraige to you Jenny it's that there's no smoke without fire...

    Jenny: So much for you trusting me...

    Jenny makes a sound of pain as she moves her ice pack.

    Micheal: Oh stop overdramatising woman, you're such a hipocondriac...

    Jenny: Talking of trust...you were late getting home last night, what's to make me think you aren't the one cheating eh?

    Micheal: Becuase unlike you I've always stuck to my marraige vows...

    Jenny: Oh I'm sick of this, I thought we were going to draw a line over the past when we moved here!

    Micheal: We have, I was just saying...

    Jenny: Yeah well dont, I can only say I'm sorry so many times before it looses any meaning...besides dont change the subject, what were you doing last night eh? Not so much as a message from you!

    Micheal: If you really want to know, I'll let you all know at lunch, okay? Now drop it...

    Micheal slams his paper down and heads out of the room.

    Jenny: Where are you going?

    Micheal: Work!

    Jenny: Of a Sunday!?

    Micheal: Whatever it takes to get away from your nagging woman!

    Micheal slams the door on his way out. Jenny rolls her eyes in annoyance.

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    so Rachel did kill that woman and is now hiding the evidence tsk tsk Rach!!
    Charley is already annoying me..
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    Charley urgh. And is Rachel going to get found out??

    More more more Call it a birthday present x

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    Scene 4

    INT. NOEL'S HOTEL BEDROOM - MORNING

    Noel is getting dressed, flustered by the events of the night before. Jess, who is lying in bed, stirs, noticing Noel isn't in bed with her.

    Jess: Training of a Sunday?

    Noel: Yeah part of Charlie's new regime, no breaks...

    Jess: That's a bit wrong isn't it?

    Noel: On the wages we get paid we can't complain...

    Jess: Everyone's entitled to a break...besides I wanted you to come to dinner today...

    Noel: At your place!?

    Jess: Yeah...

    Noel: Are you crazy!? You're dad would find out!

    Jess: Well that's the general idea yeah...

    Noel paces the room in disbelief.

    Jess: Or are you telling me you don't want to get with me now!?

    Noel: No...

    Jess: Then what's the problem then!?

    Noel: I just wish you hadn't thrown this on me!

    Jess: Is it too much to go official!? Are you ashamed of me or something!?

    Noel: No of course not!

    Jess: Then cancel training, becuase you're coming to mine for dinner and I'm not taking no for an answer...

    Jess is determined, Noel is left feeling uneasy.
    Last edited by Bryan; 08-08-2007 at 12:48.

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    Scene 5

    INT. MODELLING AGENCY - DAY

    Danielle walks into the studio at the modelling agency, the photographer walks over to her, very welcoming.

    Photographer: Danielle?

    Danielle: (Nervous) Yes...erm Hi..

    Photographer: Rachel's told me a lot about you...

    Danielle: All good I hope

    Photographer: Of course......have you done any modelling before?

    Danielle: Not really, but I've always wanted to...

    Photographer Don't be nervous, we'll just take it slow and see where it takes us...

    Danielle steps infront of the camera. Me have a montage of Danielle being photographed in various poses and outfits, George Micheal's [ame="http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=Gl-oh-ecvBc"]Flawless[/ame] is played over the top of it.

    Photographer: In one word that was...fabulous!

    Danielle: Really!?

    Photographer: You're a natural to the camera Danielle...a match made in heaven...

    Danielle: Oh my god, I'm glad you think so, what's next then?

    Photographer: Well I'll put these into a portfolio for you...and I'll have a word with my boss, but I'm pretty sure that you'll be put on our books.

    Danielle is beaming at this piece of news.

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