View Full Version : Sequel To Deception - Moving On
chrissie always has the best advice!! :cheer:
more soon please!!! :thumbsup: :bow: :clap:
Kerrie and Noah shouldn't split, they are good together as long as she doesn't try and kill him! Great as always. more
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Sorry for the dealy guys here I am again I really need to write a lot more to keep up but I still have an outstanding piece of coursework so apologies :confused: But thanks for the replies I'm just glad your still reading it he he :bow:
Danny stared at his ex as she nodded her head
Danny- leave Walford
Katelyn- what’s keeping you here?
Danny- Jake
Katelyn- he can come and visit look even if you don’t think there is a chance for me and you then at least think about Izzy she needs a dad please Danny
Danny- I can’t
Katelyn- why not give me one good reason
Danny- my brother
Katelyn- like I said he can visit when we were together you always wanted to go off do your own thing well now’s your chance
Danny looked at the little girl running across the flat
Katelyn- she has your eyes
Danny- and your smile
Katelyn- please I can get you a fl….
Katelyn wrapped her arms around Danny as he kissed her pulling her closer
Katelyn- wow
Danny- when do we go
Katelyn- two days time I know short notice but once we’re gone that’s it we can always visit are you sure
Danny- very sure
Katelyn- really…
Danny- yes now come on I’ll buy you a drink you can meet Jake’s girlfriend and my niece
Katelyn- Jake has a kid I’m impressed
Danny kissed her again
Katelyn- Izzy come on let’s go
She scooped up her daughter and the three left the flat
danny don't go!!!!!!!!!
This is great babes! more soon
Lu vya
Layne
x x x x
EastendersRox
18-06-2005, 07:18
Danny's leaving???
Danny's leaving? Now both Jake and Danny have kids! Hope you manage to do ur coursework. More when you can
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WattsRulee
18-06-2005, 17:17
as i said before BYE DANNY!!! GO AWAY YOU IDIOT!! lol! by the way are chrissie and jake in deception?
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Helloooo everyone thanks for the replies and patience for the delay writing as much as poss
WattsRulee yes Jake and Chrissie were a main fixture in Deception thanks for reading your all brill
Dennis and Sharon wandered around the Square talking about their engagement
Sharon- let’s keep it between you and me just for now not the best time anyway I want to enjoy it first before everyone takes over
Dennis- come on we can chose a ring that we can do
Sharon- do you mind
Dennis- about what not telling anyone it’s cool
Sharon- I know I mean about me asking
Dennis- well saved me the job didn’t it what with that bending down on one knee could give way I’m getting on a bit
Sharon- course you are you old git
Dennis grinned and kissed her
Sharon- so where are we going for rings?
Dennis- the only place around Hatton Gardens
Sharon- you spoil me
Dennis- yeah well you deserve it
Sharon- come on before you change your mind
Dennis- me never
Sharon- ha that comes from the voice of the undecided
Dennis grinned
Oh, Sharon and Dennis off to get the engagement ring! more please
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Angeldelight
19-06-2005, 16:26
wow... ahhhh Danny's a daddy.... don't go Danny... don't go... aren't sharon and Dennis sweet... awwwwwwwwwww... more more more
Here I am again with more thanks for the replies just glad your all still enjoying it he he
Danny and Katelyn entered the pub with Izabelle just as Jake was arriving back from his lunch
Danny- bottle and an orange juice please Chrissie
Jake- Danny your late Johnny will do his nut when he gets back…Katelyn
Katelyn- hello Jake it’s been a while
Jake- what are you doing here
Katelyn- come to see Danny
Danny-tell Johnny when he gets back I quit
Jake- you can’t quit what will you live on
Katelyn- he’s erm…
Danny- I’m leaving Walford
Jake- you what
Chrissie- leaving
Danny- me and Katelyn are leaving
Katelyn- I got pregnant
Jake and Chrissie noticed the young girl sitting in her pushchair she was a spitting image of her dad
Jake- she’s yours
Danny- yeah
Katelyn- he didn’t know I didn’t tell him
Jake- so where are you going…anywhere nice Eastbourne maybe
Chrissie- Jake
Danny- Australia
Jake- you’re joking
Katelyn- I’ve got a job out there it’s a fresh start
Danny- so drinks are on me
Jake stared at his brother he knew he should be pleased so why wasn’t he
Now Jake doesn't want Danny to leave, sweet. Why isn't Jake happy? More
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Why isn't jake happy, post more soon babes, brill
luv ya
Layne
x x x
Thanks for the replies all will be revealed I promise :thumbsup:
Kerrie sat in the club staring at her dad her eyes wild with anger
Kerrie- I want a divorce
Johnny- give it a chance Kerrie you always were too rash at making decisions
Kerrie- how many chances does he get, he’s already a good few and I aint wasting anymore of my time on him if he carries on behaving like a complete control freak, I had one of those the first time round I don’t want a repeat of that thanks all the same
Johnny- Kerrie he loves you
Kerrie- yeah well now I know what people mean when they say love isn’t always enough
Johnny- it’s your life Kerrie don’t screw it up because of your not sure married life’s for you
Kerrie- always my fault isn’t it thanks very much dad for your love and support
She grabbed her bag and stormed out
Johnny- Kerrie
Noah entered the smart modernly decorated offices a young brunette approached him smiling
Tamzin- Noah it’s been too long
Noah- how have you been
Tamzin- I got divorced again you
Noah- married again
Tamzin- wow who’s the lucky lady
Noah- Kerrie…
Tamzin- Kerrie you mean your brother’s wife
Noah- half brother and he’s dead and she was never really his wife
Tamzin- wow you married Johnny Allen’s daughter I’ve heard she’s a bit of an ice maiden
Noah- she’s still my wife
Tamzin- I was once your wife too remember
Noah- how could I forget
Tamzin- we split up around the same time Kerrie got with Will funny that
Noah- don’t Tamzin please
Tamzin- so I am right, you said there was no one else
Noah- there wasn’t
Tamzin- liar at least you’re still together, at least you didn’t waste our marriage on a fling you must love her
Noah- yeah I love her
Tamzin- we better do business come through
Noah followed Tamzin to a large spacious office
Fabulous! Post more soon! I'm loving this!
What is Noah up too, Kerrie you can't get a divorce!
post more soon luv it
Layne
x x x
Everyone is up to no good he he HINT ta very much for the replies and Enjoy this part
Jake- it’s all a bit sudden isn’t it
Danny- I need to get away you have your life bout time I got one myself
Jake- what if it doesn’t work out
Danny- I don’t know what if you and Chrissie don’t work out life is a big IF Jake
Jake- very philosophical
Danny- if buts and maybes that’s all it is I’m fed up with Walford time to move on
Jake- so you’re off to the other side of the world for what
Danny- for me with additions of a gorgeous girl and a beautiful daughter
Jake- but if Katelyn hadn’t come along would you still be leaving
Danny- maybe not now but sooner than you think Jake
Jake- why didn’t you tell me
Danny- you’ve had your own things to deal with anyway my problem I’ll sort it out
Jake- very grown up
Danny- thanks thought it was about time I made something with my life and here’s my chance I aint gonna blow it
Jake- you better not
Danny grinned
Don't laev danny, fab babes post more soon
luv ya
Layne
x x x
Danny shouldn't leave. please stay Danny.
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Don't leave Danny!
Post more soon!
Cheers for all the replies all will be revealed about Jake and Noah soon I promise he he
Chrissie sat on the bed upstairs she needed a few minutes she’d become light headed again it was happening a lot she guessed that maybe she should start eating breakfast
She sat on the bed the last few days were playing on her mind
Jake pushed the door open
Jake- what’s up Tracey said you felt unwell?
Chrissie- just tired babes you ok with Danny’s announcement
Jake- can’t make him stay can I
Chrissie- no you can’t it’s his choice
Jake- he has to go
Chrissie- yeah maybe he does but it’s not you it's to do with, it’s about him and his new family
Jake kissed her
Jake- are you sure your ok
Chrissie- fine nothing a good night’s sleep won’t cure
Jake- you rest here I’ll cover the bar
Chrissie- what about work
Jake- I’ll sort it now sleep
Chrissie- yes captain
He kissed her once again before heading back downstairs
hehehehehe, yes captain! Cant wait to find out what is going on with Jake and Noah. More its brilliant as always
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Hope Chrissie is better soon
This sis fab, post more soon
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
Ta very much for the replies now as a warning and a big promise you won't kill me all couples will be facing trouble in paradise there may be cheating pregnancys weddings lies disappearences and other twists :thumbsup:
Sharon- it’s perfect
Dennis- glad you like it
Sharon held out her hand and let the deep red stone sparkle under the sunlight
Dennis- come on gorgeous let’s go home and celebrate in secret
Sharon- I like that idea
Dennis- I bet you do you saucy minx
Sharon wrapped her arm around Dennis’s waist
They walked back onto Albert Square
Sharon- I want a summer wedding
Dennis- you want a what
Sharon- a wedding this summer
Dennis- it’s June already
Sharon- so
Dennis- when exactly did you have in mind babes
Sharon- August
Dennis- August…
Sharon- is it a problem
Dennis- no if you don’t mind planning a wedding in what six maybe eight weeks at a push
Sharon- I’ll be doing the planning so you have nothing to worry about
Dennis- if you say so baby
Sharon- Dennis Rickman are you taking a tone with me
Dennis- wouldn’t dare my little cupcake
Sharon- you do realise we have a sofa
Dennis- is that a threat
Sharon- as you well know I don’t do threats
Dennis- a promise then
Sharon- yep
Dennis- last time you put me on the sofa it took you twenty minutes to come and find me to tell me your feet were cold and I had to come back to bed to keep them warm
Sharon- I didn’t want to get cramps
Dennis snorted but his eyes twinkled
Sharon- please baby I want us to get married show everyone were meant to be
Dennis- all right August it is
Sharon grinned and flung her arms around him
Dennis pulled her closer and smiled
Yah their getting married in august, i hope! What are the lies, pregnancies etc. More this is so good.
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Angeldelight
21-06-2005, 10:30
awwwwwwwwwww.... Sharon and Dennis are getting married... Danny's leaving to be a family... Noah's up to no good (more fool him when Kerrie finds out)... Jake and Chrissie are getting better... plus there's something yours not telling us about them... i can feel it... and i missed all this cus i haven't been on for a couple of days... more more more... please post more... SOON... NOW...
More please NOW!!
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
hi guys sorry for the delay finished work late then had to watch EE so here I am again thanks for reading your all brilliant :cheer:
As the meeting ended and the others had left Noah found himself watching Tamzin she was controlled, organised and highly intelligent, now he knew why he married her she had the most beautiful smile
Tamzin- it’s rude to stare
Noah- force of habit sorry
Tamzin- so how long have you been married?
Noah- three days
Tamzin- wow
Noah- can I take for lunch?
Tamzin- won’t your wife have something to say about that
Noah- not really it’s only lunch
Tamzin- let me get my coat
Noah- I’ll wait outside
As he stepped out of the offices he dialled a number on his mobile and waited for a reply from his wife but he got none the question was would he still be going if he had spoken to Kerrie that he didn’t know
More soon lease! Dont' just stop, naughty Noah!
layne
x x x
PROMISE you won't kill me please there is a reason I promise it'll all come out later but it's ok I promise sorry....thanks for replying Layne this one's for you but be nice pleaseeeeee
Jake made his way downstairs leaving Chrissie to rest he needed some time to get his head around it all
He saw Danny leaving the pub with Izzy and that left Katelyn alone making his way over he tapped her gently on her shoulder
Katelyn swung round to face him
Katelyn- I thought we needed to talk Danny won’t be long
Jake- she’s Danny’s are you sure
Katelyn- she’s a spitting image of him Jake I don’t need science to tell me Danny’s her dad
Jake- and what about me
Katelyn- what about you a drunken fumble Jake nothing special certainly not something I’m proud of
Jake- not exactly a high point in my life either bedding my brother’s girlfriend
Katelyn- I loved him I still do I left because I felt guilty
Jake- and you think I didn’t
Katelyn- Izzy is not yours
Jake- I know but seeing you again
Katelyn- I know
Jake- I love Chrissie
Katelyn- I can tell, time to move on Jake both of us need to start again
Tracey- Jake do you mind changing the barrel please
Jake nodded and headed into the back of the bar to change a barrel in the cellar
Katelyn took a deep breath and followed him into the cellar
Jake- like you said Katelyn we were nothing more than a quick fumble
Katelyn swallowed hard as she stepped towards him neither could help it or stop it
Their lips touched briefly and as they pulled away slightly both wondering what the other was thinking
Katelyn leant towards Jake again and the second kiss took them by surprise as their passion and torrid passion was let loose
what. but. no.........chrissie.........jake....katelyn....... ..hang...on..............no.................please ..need... jake.........and.....chrissie
More soon
OMG!!!!!
Layne
x x x
Angeldelight
22-06-2005, 10:57
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo... you can't do that... how dare you do that... i hope Chrissie chops him up in to little bits and bury's him with Den... well actually i don't mean that... but Nooooooooooooo... oh Jake your guna be in trouble when Chrissie and Danny find out... poor Chrissie and Danny... what do they think they're doing... HOW DARE THEY... sorry... but i'm well peeved now and as for Noah... they're all bloody well at it... and if you write that either Dennis or Sharon cheat in the next part... i'll have no choice but to kill you and write the script myself... hehe... sorry but RACHEL THAT'S SO MEAN... Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...
Joel beckett lover, your reasoning for this had better come clear soon. You cant do this to jake and chrissie! More plz, i need to know
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Jake you idiot! Chrissie it's time you reached for the doorstop..only to knock Jake back to his senses for obvious reasons! Post more soon so that I can find out what the hell Jake was doing!
:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: but but but what about chrissie... danny!!!!! noooo
more soon please!!!!!
Sorry for the upset but it was far too happy in paradise we'll find out why soon enough but don't panic it's not over yet Sorry once again and thanks for replying
Kerrie stood in the cold graveyard she hadn’t been here in months too many bad memories of that near fatal night, the night she nearly died replayed through her mind
She thought she’s die and that would be that but now over a year later she was facing her biggest challenge yet and even she wasn’t sure if she was prepared but she didn’t have a choice not any more
Running her fingers over the moss covered grave she realised if she didn’t move fast she’d lose him and she didn’t bare think about that
Getting up Kerrie walked away
Noah sat in the expensive restaurant with a gorgeous girl laughing in a way he hadn’t done in a long time
Tamzin- you haven’t changed
Noah- neither have you
Tamzin- did Kerrie know we were married?
Noah- she knew I was married but not who too
Tamzin- she never liked me anyway her husband tried to screw over my businesses a couple of years ago found out it was her doing
Noah- she hates pretty women
Tamzin- why she’s gorgeous
Noah- paranoia is one of many Kerrie’s qualities
His voice was laced with sarcasm
Tamzin- things not good
Noah- they never were really our whole relationship is based on rows and lies and deceit
Tamzin- a relationship has to be based on trust
Noah- I know that’s where we went wrong spent so much time in other people’s beds we don’t when the truth’s the truth and a lie’s a lie
Tamzin- so it’s not going well
Noah- understatement of the century
Tamzin reached out and touched Noah’s hand a smile playing on her lips
Big part as an apology :bow:
Angeldelight
23-06-2005, 10:41
noooooooo... don't let him be an idiot... please let Kerrie and Noah sort things out... but what about Jake... what is he and Katelyn up to... i hate it when you do this i need to know more... more more more... please post more soon... NOW...
Let Kerrie and Noah get it sorted out, please. More I have to know what happens.
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Let Kerrie and Noah sort things out and make Jake feel guilty about what happened between him and Katelyn so he can be really, really nice to Chrissie. Post more soon
This is great post more soon, please
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
SORRY for the delay again working hard thanks for the replies all I can say is things will change for everyone luv ya all
As they pulled apart the guilt set in as the enormity of what they’d done hit them at full speed
Katelyn- I better…
Jake- yeah
Katelyn- you won’t tell Danny will you
Jake- no I don’t have a death wish
Katelyn straightened her clothes and headed out whilst Jake carried on changing the barrel how would he ever look Chrissie in the eye again
Chrissie walked into the cellar
Chrissie- babes
Jake jumped out of his skin
Chrissie- sorry
Jake- what’s up
Chrissie- nothing I just wanted to see you
Jake- couldn’t it have waited
Chrissie frowned- obviously it can now
Chrissie turned and stormed off
Jake- Chrissie…
He sighed, stupid idiot what was he thinking well he wasn’t thinking for a start
Well obviously he wasnt thinking! Poor old Chrissie she hasn't done anything wrong, but rgiht now every man she picks is a wrong 'un. Jake better stop being one! More though as I am glad Jake feels guilty.
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wasnt thinking!!! understatement!!! :thumbsdow
more soon please!!!! :cheer: :thumbsup: :bow:
Jake you should feel guilty!!!
Post more soon babes
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
EastendersRox
25-06-2005, 07:43
Poor Chrissie, shame on you Jake! It's you Chrissie you want, not some dumpy old flame.
Just a small part for now working on some new ideas for the story enjoy :cheer: and thanks for the replies
Katelyn stood in the bar she needed to get away from this place as quickly as possible
Danny walked in
Danny- you ready
Katelyn- for what
Danny- I’ll drive you home we both need to get ready
Katelyn smiled
Katelyn- yeah we guess we do
Danny- are you ok you seem a bit upset
Katelyn- no I’m fine just be glad when we’ve gone that’s all
Danny- couple of days and we’ll be in sunny Australia
Katelyn- I can’t wait
The three of them left the pub while Jake looked on
Looking forward to your new story. Will Katelyn manage tog et away or will her and Jake's kiss come out? I wonder. More please
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Angeldelight
25-06-2005, 18:33
oh Jake your such a prat... what were you thinking... get up those stairs and beg Chrissie to forgive you and give your big stupid head another chance... why are men such idiots most of the time?
Thanks for the replies glad your enjoying it (sort of) lots more action to come and guess what happy bits soon I promise :thumbsup:
Noah drove Tamzin home and headed back to Walford tempting as Tamzin was he loved Kerrie and he could never cheat on her
Noah thought back on the years he spent waiting for Kerrie both biding their time for their revenge on Will
He loved her yes he wanted her yes but at times he loathed the person she was, the hard shell, her screwed up ways, she always had to have things her own way and she had to be right yet he loved her and her flaws so why was Tamzin coming back into his life causing so many problems
Then it hit him he loved Kerrie but he didn’t know her they’d spent years apart yet together and up until a year ago they hadn’t even been a couple. They’d been an overseas partnership and instead of spending the last year together they had spent it recovering from Kerrie’s ordeal the counselling, the drug programmes, the sleepless nights, the constant highs and lows she was still all over the place
He pulled up outside the house not sure of his wife’s reaction he slowly turned the key Kerrie ran down the stairs and straight into her husband’s arms
Kerrie- I missed you baby
Noah kissed her hard on her lips
Noah- I missed you too the real you
Kerrie- what do you mean
Noah- I mean the one who only comes out every now and again the you I love, cherish and adore
Kerrie grinned- what are you on about you daft git
She kissed him again
Kerrie- I cooked
Noah- really
Kerrie- yep
Noah- great…erm can’t wait sweetheart
Kerrie- love me love my cooking
Noah- better call the paramedics just to be safe
Kerrie- carry on like this you’ll need more than a paramedic
She giggled and Noah wrapped his arms around her kissing her lightly on her neck
Ah, love Kerrie and Noah. Hope she wont start to get suspicious over nothing. more more more.
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awwwwwwwww :wub: :wub:
more soon please!!!! :bow: :cheer: :thumbsup:
Thanks for the replies I won't be on till later or tomorrow so I thought I'd post this now luv ya all :bow:
Jake sat in the bedroom he shared with the woman of his dreams, the love of his life yet he’d kissed another woman someone he didn’t even like that much he’d let her down
He looked at the pictures all around the room together, happy some with Lia some not
Why had he been so stupid
The door opened and Chrissie walked in
Chrissie- feeling any better
Jake- I’m sorry about earlier
Chrissie- what’s up
Jake- nothing
Chrissie- is it me, is it what I told you
Jake- no never we sorted that out
Chrissie- did we
Jake- what are you on about?
Chrissie- since the wedding you won’t talk to me properly we both have secrets Jake I’m sorry I killed him but I can’t undo it
Jake- I know that I promise it’s fine
Chrissie- fine how can you say that you witnessed a murder I committed one what’s fine about that
Jake- I didn’t mean it like that
Chrissie- we say we’re fine but really we’re walking on eggshells not knowing what to say or do
Jake- I love you so much and I can’t bear the thought of not waking up next to you ever
Chrissie smiled and slowly breathed a sigh of relief, he still loved her despite what she’d seen
Jake- I’ve been so selfish bottling it up don’t help no-one
Chrissie- I’ve been just as bad baby
She lent towards him and kissed him lightly on the lips
Jake- I’m sorry
Chrissie- what for
Jake- everything
Chrissie lent her head on his shoulders there was no way she was letting him go not over some no good little bitch like Katelyn
Oh, she saw them then! What will Chrissie do now? Jake is very sweet though. More please I love this script
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:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:she knows!!!!!!
more soon please!!!! :cheer: :bow: :thumbsup:
Does Chrissie know?
Post more soon please babes, for me!!!!
I love this script!!!!
Layne
x x x
Angeldelight
26-06-2005, 21:23
awwwww Noah really loves Kerrie... :wub: uh-oh Katelyn's in trouble... i hope Chrissie makes Jake pay before she forgives him fully...
squillyfer
26-06-2005, 21:29
we need more now i think im dying from story deprivation
EastendersRox
27-06-2005, 16:19
Chrissie knows?????????
Hope she gets to batter Katelyn before she goes.
:eek: Chrissie knows?!? Jake you've got alot of making up for what you did.
More soon :)
Hello again guys thanks for the replies and enjoy don't worry Chrissie has plans for Katelyn..... :mad:
Dennis and Sharon lay on the sofa in the flat, her head resting on his rising chest
She turned her ring around her finger repeatedly
Dennis- a quiet wedding
Sharon- definitely just a few close friends and family
Dennis- like who exactly
Sharon- the usual
Dennis- you mean half the Square
Sharon- something like that
Dennis- so have we picked a date in August yet m’lady
Sharon giggled
Sharon- you chose
Dennis- no I’ve got a better idea
He got out his mobile and dialled a number
Dennis- Danny no shut up for a minute pick a number between one and thirty one ok cheers see you later
He hung up
Sharon- well
Dennis- the twenty third of August let’s hope we can book it at such short notice
Sharon grinned
Dennis- I can’t wait to make you Mrs Rickman
Sharon giggled
Dennis- what
Sharon- I went all tingly when you said that
Dennis- awww easily pleased aren’t you
Sharon- watch it this rings under a year’s warranty
Dennis- yeah could get my money back
Sharon- money or me now there’s a choice
Dennis- money hands down of course
He stroked her blonde hair
Dennis- or maybe not
Sharon- good answer babes
He kissed the top of her head
Angeldelight
27-06-2005, 22:06
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... they're so sweet together... SHaron and Dennos together FOREVER n EVER n EVER... more more more... please post more...
aaawwwwwwwwww. They are so lovely more please. What is Chrissie's revenge?
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EastendersRox
28-06-2005, 16:16
Shannis rox!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait for Chrissie's revenge on Katelyn. Bet it's sweet turning to bitter like it was with Kate. I love it when she makes people sweat by saying things yet pretending not to know the truth.
Fab! Sharon and Dennis are great as usual! More soon :)
Fab, shannis awww 23rd!!!
Post more soon
Please
Layne
x x x
Thanks for the replies glad your liking it Chrissie's revenge is coming up I promise now for some GOOD news he he ENJOY :bow:
Kerrie sat on the kitchen table reading her magazine it was half eleven at night and she couldn’t sleep again not exactly unusual for her
She heard footsteps heading down the stairs
Noah entered the kitchen
Noah- can’t sleep
Kerrie shook her head
Noah- babes you’ve got to try you’ll end up making yourself ill
Kerrie- I don’t need sleep
Noah- everyone needs sleep
Kerrie- well not me I like it like this
Noah- the only reason you won’t sleep is because you’re scared
Kerrie- that’s right just get straight to the point
Noah- we’ve been here before though haven’t we this last year we’ve been through hell and back yet still things aren’t right
Kerrie- it will never stop Noah I will live forever knowing what I did but he won’t will he he’s dead and I’m living the nightmare not him it’s the wrong way round
Noah- you didn’t do anything wrong the b*****d deserved all he got
Kerrie- he was my husband
Noah- who drove your mother to kill herself you did nothing wrong
Kerrie- and then there was Scarlet and mum I lost another mum the fire was hot the burning the smell of petrol choked me
Noah- you couldn’t have saved them you weren’t to blame some sicko started that fire not you
Kerrie- doesn’t stop though does it that fire was aimed for me you know it I know it everyone knew I was meant to be there that night with my dad while mum and Scarlet and Ruby were at me Nan’s only Nan had to cancel cos of bingo
Noah- it wasn’t aimed at just you though was it your dad was there too
Kerrie- please don’t tell dad I said nothing
Noah- I don’t have a death wish baby it’s good your talking about this stuff you know you shouldn’t keep it bottled up
Kerrie- you sound like my shrink
Noah- come on sleeping beauty time for bed
Kerrie- on one condition
Noah- what’s that
Kerrie- you promise never to leave me
Noah- I promise what’s brought this on
Kerrie- I found out something today something important
Noah- like what
He slowly began to panic had Kerrie found out he and Tamzin were in business together he’d leave this house in a wooden box if she had
Kerrie- I’m pregnant
Noah fell back against the door
Kerrie- is that a happy face or a where’s the suitcase face
Noah wrapped his arms around her and kissed his wife hard on the lips
Noah- I thought you hated kids
Kerrie- I do but accidents happen
AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! Kerrie and Noah having a baby. She better not find out about Tamzin as she will get v.annoyed. All the men have secrets right now. Please post more a.s.a.p I want to know Chrissie's revenge
xxx
Whewre is Angeldelight! A bebe, a ickle bebe!!!!
Wow this is fab, please post more, Chrissie and her revenge!!
layne
x x x
Angeldelight
28-06-2005, 19:29
awwwwwwwwwww... a tiny ickle bebe... :eek: a tiny ickle bebe... they're having a TINY ICKLE BEBE RACH... yey yey yey... it can be MArc with a C... a tiny ickle bebe... soory i'm done now... hehe... more more more... please post more... SOON... NOW...
WattsRulee
28-06-2005, 20:57
please post sum more asap!!!
EastendersRox
29-06-2005, 16:24
Great, a baby!
I want to know Chrissie's revenge!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awww! They're having a baby together :wub:! More soon!
Sorry for the delay please don't shout it's chaos but thanks for the replies and I hope your still enjoying the story luv ya all
Chrissie turned over and stared at her boyfriend sleeping she could forgive him anything even kissing another woman she loved him
Leaning over she kissed his soft cheek although Katelyn needed dealing with once and for all
Jake opened his eyes
Chrissie- sorry did I wake you
Jake- it’s fine
Chrissie- do you remember our first proper date
Jake laughed- I had to bring Danny along
Chrissie- he ended up with a slap
Jake grinned
Chrissie sat up as she heard the cry of her daughter from the foot of their bed
Jake- I’ll go
Chrissie- thanks
She lay back down whilst Jake climbed out of bed and picked up his tearful daughter
Jake sat down with her next to Chrissie
Chrissie- here I’ll take her
She lifted her daughter out of her daddy’s arms and Jake kissed the top of her head
Chrissie- what was that for?
Jake- I don't know
Chrissie- what's up
Jake- I was thinking
Chrissie- about what
Jake- having another one
He smiled at Lia
Chrissie- another baby
Jake- it’d be nice for Lia to have a little brother or sister
Chrissie- and what about me I’ll end up like a whale
She smiled to him
Jake- you won’t
Chrissie- we’ll talk in the morning when I’ve had caffeine
Jake- it’s just a thought
Chrissie- we’ll see I know about you and your thoughts
Jake- I am sorry though for not talking about what’s been said
Chrissie- stop apologising it’s not your fault we all know who’s to blame
Jake kissed her
Chrissie smiled sweetly, she was going to throw Danny a leaving party to remember
Oh yes, Chrissie's revenge. I think something's going to happen at that leaving party Glad to have you back. Ws worth the wait to have Jakissie. More please
xxx
This is fab! Will chrissie get her revenge?!?!?!?
Another baby go on please!!!!!!!
Post more soon
Luv ya
layne
x x x
Katelyn needed dealing with once and for all
Too right! Jakissie forever and ever and ever! More soon please!
EastendersRox
02-07-2005, 07:01
Chrissie's revenge! Plz post more, I wanna know Chrissie's revenge!
WattsRulee
02-07-2005, 17:40
no no no no no!! chrissie can do revenge but dont make her and jake split up!!!!
Angeldelight
02-07-2005, 21:31
uh-oh Katelyn's in trouble... Katelyn's in trouble... ha ha ha... GO Chrissie GO... GO Chrissie GO... not sure she's keen on another bebe... awwwww... Jake can talk her round... annother bebe... a tiny ickel bebe... awwwwww... more more more... pleas epsot more soon or i will have to kill you... SOON... NOW... more more more...
chrissie and revenge go together like fish n chips!! :rolleyes: but jkae n chrissie better not split up!! :nono:
more soon please!!!! :cheer: :wub: :thumbsup: :bow:
Thanks for the replies and don't worry it's all gonna be revealed soon I promise :wub:
The two days flew by to Danny’s leaving party and all three couples were carrying their secrets well, Dennis and Sharon’s engagement, Kerrie and Noah’s baby news and Jake’s kiss with Katelyn was causing tension in the Watts/Moon household
Jake- Chrissie have you finished in the bathroom yet the party starts in half an hour and I haven’t shaved
Chrissie- you shaved this morning sweetie anyway I’ve finished now
She opened the door and Jake caught his breath she wore a show stopping red dress
Jake- you look amazing
Chrissie- you think
She smiled to him but her eyes told a different story
Chrissie- you better go and shave we don’t want to miss all the fun do we
Jake shook his head and smiled, she was in such a good mood he wondered what could have brought it on
Chrissie pulled on her new red shoes and made her way down the stairs
Please post more what is she gonna do?????
Layne
x x x
Angeldelight
03-07-2005, 16:12
uh-oh... i can't wait for the next bit... yeye Chrissie's going all evil again... yey yey yey... more more more... post more... SOON... NOW... more more more
Please post more soon. I want to see Chrissie's revenge. More please. You have to come back and post more
xxx
di marco
03-07-2005, 16:46
fabbi! :D wow ive just caught up. its so good, absolutely amazing! i really enjoyed reading it all, really loving it! yay sharon and dennis are getting married and kerrie and noah are having a baby and jake wants him and chrissie to have another baby! cant wait to see what chrissies revenge is, jake shouldnt have been so stupid! :) more very very very very very soon please, cant wait
uh oh whats she gonna do??!! :searchme:
more soon please!!!! :cheer: :wub: :bow: :thumbsup:
WattsRulee
03-07-2005, 21:42
more soon pleeez
xx
Ta very much for the replies glad you like it and thanks for reading apologies for any delay in posting :cheer:
Sharon- please
Dennis- alright but we’ll tell everyone after Danny and Katelyn’s party’s over
Sharon- fine I just hate lying to everyone
Dennis- it’s hardly lying is it
Sharon- but they’re our friends Dennis
Dennis- and you think they don’t have their little secrets
Sharon- I guess they do but this isn’t a secret is it we’re getting married
Dennis- we’ll tell them later now quit worrying
Sharon stared at the glistening rock on her finger and smiled after much heartache and pain she was finally where she wanted to be with the man she loved and getting married
Dennis wrapped his arms around her waist
Dennis- come on or we’ll be late
Sharon- I would be finished if you stopped distracting me
Dennis- you look gorgeous as usual
Sharon- go and wait in the other room while I finish my make-up please
Dennis grinned- all right you win
Sharon- I always do
Kerrie- black dress or blue dress
Noah sat on the stairs waiting for his wife to finish getting ready in the bedroom
Noah- blue
Kerrie- are you sure
Noah- blue
Kerrie- ok but if it looks rotten tell me
Noah- I always do
Kerrie- I better get some wear out of these dresses before I turn into a sumo wrestler I bet you’ll stop fancying me when I’m fat
Noah- you won’t be fat you’ll be beautiful and pregnant
Kerrie- smooth talker
Noah- it’s true I love you and everything about you and this baby well I reckon it will be the making of us as a couple
Kerrie- I hope so but I’ll tell you something Noah King I will not be getting up in the middle of the night that’s your job
Noah smiled- are you ready yet
She stepped out of the bedroom
Noah- gorgeous
Kerrie- better have a good look at me like this whilst you can
Noah- don’t start
Kerrie- who’s starting?
Noah got up and kissed her, his hand gently resting on her tummy
Kerrie- come on then Mr King we don’t want to be late
Noah- we certainly don’t Mrs King
Hee hee. Kerrie all fat and pregnant. She'll hate it. You are putting off Chrissie's revenge, but I want to see it. More please it's great. Dont mind delays if they aren't too long.
xxx
FaB AS USUAL DARLIN'
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POST MORE SOON PLEASE
NEED TO KNOW CHRISSIE'S REVENGE!!!
LAYNE
X X X
Sorry for caps!
WattsRulee
04-07-2005, 21:21
more pleeeeeeez just PLEASE DONT BREAK CHRISSIE AND JAKE UP!!!
EastendersRox
05-07-2005, 16:40
I'm waiting 4 the revenge!!!!!!!!!
awwww thanks guys for the replies more delay on the revenge I'm afraid but it will be soon I promise luv ya all
Chrissie- Jake Lia’s awake I’ll go and see to her but you’ll need to change the barrel ok
Jake- yes m’lady
Chrissie- don’t be cheeky
She kissed him lightly before heading to her young daughter
Jake changed the barrel and Little Mo arrived to start work
Chrissie came downstairs a few minutes later with Lia
Jake- is she all right
Chrissie- she’s fine you better open up again let the guests in now we’re ready
Jake un-bolted the doors and the pub began to fill up with people ready to wave Danny off into the sunset
Danny and Katelyn stood outside the pub their hands entwined together
Katelyn- why a party I thought you wanted to go quietly
Danny- I did Jake said it was Chrissie’s idea and you don’t really say no to Chrissie well not if you value your life
Katelyn smiled
Katelyn- she seems nice
Danny- she is Jake adores her in fact he worships her he loves her
Katelyn- I know he does I can see it in his eyes
Danny- I never known him so happy in my whole life
Katelyn- let’s hope we’re just as happy hey
Danny kissed her and took her hand leading her into the crowded pub
WattsRulee
05-07-2005, 18:34
ha ha!! more but again i WILL stress DONT BREAK JC UP PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEz!!
You had better show us this revenge soon, please. Love this though. Why don't I think Danny and Katelyn are going to be that happy. More more more
xxx
Angeldelight
05-07-2005, 19:23
uho-oh... i know i keep saying it but... opps... can't wait for Chirissie's revenege... poor Danny... why is Katelyn such a bitch... trying to split Jakissie up like that... haha no happyending for you... hehe... more more more... you know i love this babes... post more especially Chrissie's revenege... yey yey yey... i'm so excited... more more more...
I do not like Katelyn at all :angry:! Fab anyways, post more soon :)
EastendersRox
06-07-2005, 16:49
Can't wait 4 the next part!
More soon please! This sis fab, what is chrissies revenge?
layne
x x x
thanks for the replies I'm building up to the revenge now Sorry for the delay works a bit hectic at the moment but I'm glad your liking it
Chrissie spread the smile across her face as Danny and Katelyn walked in
Danny- thanks for this Chrissie
Chrissie- do you know what Danny it’s my pleasure
Danny- really why’s that
Chrissie- your Jake’s brother that’s why and Katelyn needs a send off she’ll never forget and of course so do you
Danny- I’m looking forward to getting away from here starting again too much has gone on
Chrissie- yeah it has hasn’t it?
Danny- so what do you think of Katelyn
Chrissie turned and stared at her as she chatted to Sharon and Dennis who had just arrived
Chrissie- she seems really nice, really sweet and really honest
Danny- I knew you two would get on the same taste in stuff that’s all
Chrissie- yeah don’t we just
She watched carefully as Katelyn and Jake avoided each other
Katelyn made her way over
Katelyn- what are you two gossiping about
Chrissie- we were just saying how similar we seem to be same tastes in things…men
Katelyn’s eyes shot up as Chrissie innocently smiled
Chrissie- after all we are dating brothers aren’t we?
Katelyn nodded nervously
For TAO and JAKISSIE fans reading :crying:
Angeldelight
07-07-2005, 21:39
yey yey yey... go Chrissie go... GO Chrissie Go... yey yey yey... more mor more... please post more soon... more more more...
WattsRulee
08-07-2005, 09:20
pleeez post more!!
xxx
Go Chrissie. this going to be interesting. More please
xxx
P.S So sad about TAO
EastendersRox
08-07-2005, 16:34
Go, Chrissie, go!!!!!!!!!!
This is just like her, playing slowly, sweetly and innocently.
Ooooh! Go Chrissie! More soon :)
Fabi honey!!! More soon, chrissie is playing games! yey!
Layne
x x x
Thanks for the replies and once again apologies for the delay all replies and feedback appriciated as always so enjoy
Noah and Kerrie chatted to Jake when Noah's mobile began to ring
Kerrie- you better ignore it
Noah- I’ll be five minutes babes I promise
Kerrie- any longer and you’ll know what’s hit you…my fist
She watched as Noah left answering the call
Noah- Tamzin what can I do for you…no I’m not ignoring your calls I’m with my wife so just stay away I was mad to even consider getting involved with you again…no nothing happened nor will it ever happen Tamzin so stay out of my life and Kerrie’s
He hung up and headed back into the pub
Kerrie- who was it?
Noah- nobody important
Kerrie- good come on buy me a soft drink
Chrissie- so how did you two meet
Danny- in a club
Chrissie- how romantic
Katelyn- I’m just going to the toilet
She rushed off
Chrissie- excuse me I just need to check on Lia
She walked away following Katelyn into the bathroom
Katelyn was rinsing her face trying to clam herself down when the doors opened and Chrissie strolled in
Chrissie- feeling ok
Katelyn nodded
Chrissie- good
She walked over to the sink and rinsed her hand under the cold tap
Katelyn- I better get back
Chrissie- Danny may be wondering where you’ve got to
Katelyn- exactly
Chrissie- you seem on edge
Katelyn- just nervous
Chrissie- what about…flying
Katelyn- yeah I guess
Chrissie- or Danny
Katelyn- nothing to be nervous about there
Chrissie- I’m sure well enjoy the party I know I will
She turned and walked out of the toilets leaving a guilty Katelyn sure Chrissie knows her and Jake’s secret but what she couldn’t work out was why had Jake told her he had too much to lose
Please tell what the revenge is, I cant wait for it. Jake didn't tell her thats the point. Noah should stay away from Tamzin. More more more, great as ever
xxx
more please like NOW!!!!!!!!!!!
Angeldelight
09-07-2005, 17:36
naohs going to be in trouble if Kerrie finds out what he's been doing... oh Katelyn please don't say anything... at least not till Chrissie had her revenge... i can't wait... bring it on... more more more... please post more... SOON... NOW... more more more...
Thanks for the replies and thanks for reading glad your enjoying it still apologies for the delay on the revenge I've got two ideas for it and I'm deciding which one to use :searchme:
Ta very much again and Enjoy
The party was soon in full swing and Chrissie was getting into the swing of things with Katelyn
Sharon- are you all right
Chrissie- never better
Sharon- have you and Jake fallen out
Chrissie- no of course not things are just a bit tense that’s all
Sharon- why
Chrissie- because he wants another baby
Sharon- and that’s a problem because
Chrissie- I don’t feel ready Lia’s only six months I need at least another year before I even consider going through it all again
Sharon- have you told him that
Chrissie- no
Sharon- don’t you think you should
Chrissie- I guess
Sharon- go on no time like the presence
Chrissie looked over to where Jake stood talking to Danny, Jake caught her eye and made his way over
Jake- you ok
Chrissie nodded
She heard the distance cries of her baby daughter and broke away from Jake to see to her
Dennis placed his arms around Sharon’s waist and whispered gently into her ear
Sharon giggled
Dennis- I’ve been watching you
Sharon- pervert
Dennis grinned
Dennis- I love you
Sharon- and I should hope so too
Dennis- what can I say I’m a sucker for blondes
Sharon- are you really Mr Rickman
Dennis- well one in particular
Sharon twirled the ring around her finger unaware that she’d been spotted
Kerrie rushed over
Kerrie- oh my god your engaged
Sharon- erm…well yeah
Kerrie- that’s brilliant
The whole pub turned to face Dennis and Sharon
Jake- congratulations mate
Dennis grinned- thanks we were trying to keep it quiet but thanks to gobby
Kerrie- no-one told me it was a secret
Sharon- it doesn’t matter we were going to tell everyone later anyway
Kerrie- good see
Noah- come on before you cause any more damage
He wrapped his arms around his wife and kissed her
Kerrie- you’re in a good mood
Noah- and why not hey I have a beautiful wife and a baby on the way it’s all perfect
Kerrie- shhhh I don’t want everyone knowing yet
Noah kissed her again
Sharon- so everyone knows now
Dennis- who cares I’m marrying you not them
Sharon giggled and he kissed her lightly on her forehead
Dennis- what
Sharon- nothing I’m just happy that’s all
Looking forward to the revnge. I will have to wait till next Sunday to read it :( Fabby though, everyone knows Sharons engaged. More please
xxx
aw wow so everyone knows about sharon and dennis getting married!!!
Please post more asap i need to know what chrissie's revenge will be
Fab script i'm loving it
Layne
x x x
awww soo cute!! :wub: cant wait for chrissies revenge!!! :thumbsup: :cheer:
Angeldelight
10-07-2005, 16:27
yey yey yey... everythings going to be good... Kerrie and Noah are happy and having a bebe... a tiny ickle bebe... and everyone knows Sharon and Dennis are getting married... and Chrissie's going to have her revenge and try and talk Jake out of having another bebe... it's all good... more more more... please post more soon... MORE MORE MORE...
Glad your enjoying it nearly there now so thanks for the replies
Katelyn made her way towards Jake
Katelyn- we need to talk now
Jake- are you crazy
Katelyn- Chrissie knows
Jake- knows what
Katelyn- about the kiss
Jake- of course she doesn’t know
Katelyn- she does you haven’t heard all evening sniping away
Jake- believe me if she knew neither of us would be walking let alone talking
Katelyn- for god sake Jake wake up she’s cool and calm and I don’t know what she’s got planned
Jake- your paranoid get off my case Katelyn
He turned and walked away
Katelyn turned and made her way through the back and up the stairs she’d just have to ask Chrissie out right there was no other way
Chrissie heard footsteps approaching the top of the stairs and she gently rested her sleeping daughter back into her cot
She left the bedroom and saw Katelyn standing in the hallway, she didn’t look happy
Chrissie- got lost did you
Katelyn- I thought we could talk
Chrissie- no me and you have nothing to say to each other at all
Katelyn- oh I think we do
Chrissie- what about you, me or you and Jake
Katelyn- so you do know
Chrissie- I saw you I could have killed him there and then
Katelyn- he thinks you don’t know what exactly were planning to do
Chrissie- do you know what I hadn’t quite decided but you’re here I’m here so come on then let’s here it I want to know exactly what you thought you were doing with your hands on my boyfriend
Katelyn- it was a mistake
Chrissie- oh you’ve got that right the biggest mistake you have ever made
EastendersRox
11-07-2005, 06:02
Go, Chrissie, go! I know she's got something else planned...
Angeldelight
12-07-2005, 15:01
uh-oh... Katelyn's in trouble now... i can't wait for her revenge... yey yey yey... more more more... please post more... SOON... NOW... more more more...
WattsRulee
12-07-2005, 16:00
more..now..yay!!
Honey i love this script you no i do!
Wow, go chrissie, please post more soon
post it for me please?!?
layne
x x x
ooo go chrissie!!! :cheer:
more soon please!!! :thumbsup: :bow:
Oooh go Chrissie! This is fabbi! More soon :)
Thanks for the replies and keep reading :cheer:
The doors to the Queen Vic opened and Tamzin walked in
Tamzin spotted Noah and Kerrie talking and laughing together and made her way over
Tamzin- you really make a lovely couple
Kerrie- what the hell are you doing here
Tamzin- I’m here to talk business with Noah
Kerrie- what
Noah- I can explain
Kerrie- really then explain why your doing business with her
Noah- it’s just business
Kerrie- I bet it is
Tamzin- I don’t see what the problem is he’s your husband now not mine
Kerrie- I want to go home
Noah- come on
Tamzin- why do you think he’s been late home all last week hmmm just working late
Noah- shut up Tamzin
Kerrie looked at Noah he looked guilty and as for that smug bitch
Noah- Kerrie
Kerrie stared at Tamzin before turning to walk out
Tamzin- you destroyed my marriage
Kerrie stopped
Kerrie- not on my own I didn’t
Tamzin- you offered yourself on a plate
A silence befell the entire pub
Kerrie- I offered nothing
Tamzin- your nothing more than a cheap little whore whose first husband topped himself to get away from you
Kerrie turned to Tamzin and punched her hard in the face
Kerrie- at least mine didn’t leave me alone, desperate and pathetic
She pulled the doors to the pub open and stormed out
Wow, go Kerrie!! hehe i never liked that tamzin anyway!!!
Post more soon please honey
Luv ya
Lanye
x x x
EastendersRox
13-07-2005, 16:00
Go Kerrie! I always hated Tamzin.
But what's Chrissie gonna do??????????
woo go kerrie!!! :cheer: :thumbsup:
Angeldelight
13-07-2005, 19:16
Go kerrie Go... EVIL Tasmin... maybe Kerrie could borrow Pauline's dootrstop... hehe... more more more... please post more... more more more...
Sorry for the delay and good news too I'm working on a new onne parter so look out for it soon and thanks for the replies and Enjoy :bow:
Katelyn- he loves you he worships the ground you walk on Chrissie
Chrissie- and I love him but you, nothing can excuse you, me and Jake were having a few problems he weren’t thinking but you certainly were
Katelyn- it takes two Chrissie
Chrissie- don’t worry Jake paid for what he did without me having to even mention it
Katelyn- so black and white to you isn’t it
Chrissie- I just call things how I see them
Katelyn- he was in wrong and so was I, Chrissie I’m holding my hands up but your letting him get off scot-free, why because of love
Chrissie- yeah I love him
Katelyn- love excuses a lot doesn’t it?
Chrissie- why did you come here to ruin my relationship or was it an accident
Katelyn stepped towards Chrissie
Katelyn- your blinded Chrissie, Danny told me about your husband Den wasn’t it
Chrissie- he has nothing to do with this
Katelyn- wake up Chrissie if he can kiss me and still be with you why can’t he do it again, your husband did
Chrissie didn’t realise she’d hit Katelyn until she fell to the floor
Katelyn wiped the blood from her mouth
Katelyn- truth hurts Chrissie doesn’t it
Katelyn stood up and faced her rival as Chrissie turned away from her
Katelyn- he needs to know otherwise you’ll be stuck in a vicious cycle
Chrissie- what are you my shrink?
Katelyn- I live with the guilt can you live with Jake knowing he cheated
Chrissie- can you live with Danny
Katelyn- we’ll find out
Chrissie- you better start listening if your gonna dish out advice make sure your bloody well take it yourself I’m not being dictated to by a little miss cheating know it all
Katelyn- I just want to help
Chrissie- then get the hell out of my pub or I’ll throw you out
Katelyn- what in front of all those people
Chrissie stepped towards her
Chrissie- try me
She grabbed Katelyn and slammed her hard against the wall
Chrissie- you really need taking down a peg or two because I’ll tell you something you’ve under-estimated me
Katelyn tried to pull away but Chrissie kept a good grip
Katelyn- what are you gonna do
Chrissie- explain a few things to you
Grabbing Katelyn’s hair she yanked her into the living room and threw her to the floor
Chrissie- starting with a little bit of revenge
Go Chrissie! Loved Kerrie in the last part. The last three parts have been brilliant. More please
xxx
P.s I'm back
Wow! go chrissie kick katelyn's bum!! hehe!
Wow babes this is amazing! Wonder what chrissie will do noe, post more soon
please
Layne
x x x
wahoo!! go chrissie!!! :cheer: :cheer:
more soon please!!! :thumbsup:
Angeldelight
16-07-2005, 17:13
Go Chrissie Go... Go Chrissie \Go... yey yey yey... we've been waiting for this for so long... more more... please post more... SOON... NOW... MORE more MORE...
Hi guys thanks for the replies and enjoy
Kerrie opened the door to her house with Noah quickly on her tail
Kerrie- get lost
Noah managed to get inside before Kerrie slammed the door shut
Noah- baby nothing happened
Kerrie- why didn’t you tell me then
Noah- I knew you would fly off the handle
Kerrie- so I have to hear it from that little bitch instead do I
Noah- I’m sorry I really am I was gonna tell you the night you told me you were pregnant but I didn’t want to ruin it
Kerrie- well you still managed that
Noah- are you really going to listen to her she’s twisting things I love you not her I always have done?
Kerrie- if I find out…
Noah kissed her
Noah- never
He kissed her again
Noah- you and the baby are all that matter to me
Kerrie- come on let’s go back to the party I’m not running from anyone
Noah- that’s my girl
He linked his fingers into hers as they left the house
Katelyn- what you gonna do beat me up, it’s not me your angry at your just using me as an excuse I can see right through you
Chrissie- you really should shut up you know
Katelyn- I’m not scared of you
Chrissie- really
Katelyn stood up
Katelyn- no I’m not
Chrissie couldn’t stop herself whether it was the way Katelyn smiled or the smug look across her face but she punched her hard in the face and watched as Katelyn fell back hitting her head on the corner of the coffee table
Katelyn clutched her head
Katelyn- you psycho bitch
Chrissie- still not scared
Katelyn- I don’t get it I don’t get you
Chrissie- I’m fed up with little bitches like you ruining my relationships
Katelyn- you can’t blame me for Den you can’t blame Jake for your husband’s mistakes
Chrissie- your right I can’t Jake made the mistake and your right he really should pay the price
She bent down to where Katelyn was on the living room floor
Chrissie- get the hell out of my pub and take Jake with you
Katelyn- what
Chrissie- either you go downstairs and tell Danny or I will got it
Katelyn- no, no you wouldn’t
Chrissie- really I wouldn’t be so sure you’ve got thirty seconds
Katelyn got up and looked Chrissie in the eye
Katelyn- I can’t do that to him I just can’t
Chrissie- time’s up I’m afraid looks like a job for me
She walked out of the living room and went and picked up her daughter
Katelyn- you’ll destroy them Chrissie
Chrissie- and what about me what about my daughter
Katelyn- and what about mine she needs her daddy I need her daddy I gave him once please don’t take him away from me
Chrissie swallowed hard
Chrissie- tell Jake it’s over I can’t…
Katelyn- but…
Chrissie- you and Danny have a nice life together I can’t be with a man who could destroy me the way my husband did
Katelyn- he loves you
Chrissie- love doesn’t change anything it doesn’t change what you two did it doesn’t change what I did
She made her way down the stairs and quietly opened the back door and she slipped out with her daughter sleeping in her arms
Katelyn stood at the top of the stairs unsure how she was going to explain her cuts and bruises or Chrissie’s sudden disappearance
Don't worry all is not lost it's not over just yet
Check out my latest one parter You're Beautiful
All had better not be lost. Jakissie keep having problems (none as major as the real one but). Why did Katelyn have to come and muck everything up? I cant wait for more.
xxxx
sarahwelford
17-07-2005, 13:29
dont keep us in suspense
Angeldelight
17-07-2005, 14:16
EVIL Katelyn EVIL... why can't she just go away and not come back... i hate her... i hate her... I HATE HER... she's made Chrissie leave now... what about Poor Jake... what's he guna do with out Chrissie... and poor Danny what will he do when he finds out... EVIL Katelyn EVIL... why oh why did she have to arrive??? please post more... like TODAY... you can't keep me in suspense like this it's just cruel.... :sobbing on keyboard: i want Jake and Chrissie be together...
sarahwelford
17-07-2005, 14:28
this story is brilliant you should become a story writtter for the eastenders
OMG! What i don't like that katelyn! She spilt Jake and Chrissie up,
Good on Chrissie for everything, but chrissie and jake need to get bacvk together!
more more more now please
layne
x x x
omg chrissie cant leave!! :eek:
fabby more soon please!! :cheer:
di marco
18-07-2005, 09:22
fab! :D just caught up, omg it was brill! katelyns so evil i hate her, splitting up chrissie and jake, but go chrissie in beating her up! :) more very very very soon please, cant wait
EastendersRox
18-07-2005, 16:40
Go Chrissie!
Oi you! Get Chrissie & Jake back together or I'll break your neck!.. Ok that's a bit too extreme but if you don't get them together I will be unhappy for days on end :crying:
More soon :)
Massive apologies and thanks for the replies
This one's for Layne for making my brill banna ENJOY
It didn’t take Jake long to realise Chrissie wasn’t about and he made his way up the stairs but was faced only with a frantic Katelyn trying to cover up the evidence of the fight
Jake- where’s Chrissie
Katelyn- I tried to stop her Jake I did warn you that she knew
Jake- where has she gone
Katelyn- she just left with Lia
Jake- she couldn’t
Katelyn- why not
Jake- shut up
Katelyn- I’m not the one whose partner just left them all right so stop having a go
Jake- get out before I throw you out
Katelyn- fine but remember I’m not the one who’s going to have to explain Chrissie’s sudden departure
Jake grabbed her arms and pulled her into the hallway
Jake- hitting women ain’t really my style but you never know I might start reinventing myself now get out
Katelyn ran down the stairs and unable to face Danny fled the same way Chrissie had fifteen minutes before
Jake sat down on the top step staring at the wall in front he couldn’t lose her not now not over this
Kerrie and Noah walked in determined to prove to entire pub their relationship was stronger than ever but Tamzin had stuck around to add salt to wounds
Tamzin- you should be more careful Kerrie next time I’ll have you done for assault
Kerrie- yeah try it
She walked up to the bar
Kerrie- orange juice please Tracy, is Chrissie about I have some good news to tell her
Tamzin- your not emigrating are you
Kerrie- no sorry to disappoint you and your pathetic excuse for a life
Noah- leave her she isn’t worth it
Tamzin- you didn’t say that last week or through our three years of marriage
Noah- doesn’t the fact I’m not married to you anymore mean anything
Tamzin- not really you made it clear we had a future till this marriage wreaking little bitch put her boot in
Noah- no she didn’t I chased her I wanted her I still do she’s all I want because she is all I need Tamzin you need to understand Kerrie is my whole life she’s the love of my life
Tamzin- we’ll see
Kerrie sipped her orange juice and gazed around the quiet pub, she stood up
Dennis caught Kerrie’s arm
Kerrie- don’t panic I ain’t gonna hit her I just want to make an announcement
Tamzin- don’t tell me you’ve found someone else’s husband to steal
Dennis- shut up Tamzin
Tamzin- you’re a fine one to talk Dennis the number of other people’s wives you slept with
Dennis- it’s the past and you really need to let it go
Tamzin- why should I, I’m having a ball
Kerrie- well so am I you screwed up bitch cos me and Noah are expecting a baby
Tamzin- you’re what
Noah walked over to Kerrie and wrapped his arms around her
Noah- you heard her Tamzin she’s pregnant
That shut Tamzin up (I Hope). i hope Jake can find Chrissie, and he should not reinvent himself into a woman beater. More please.
xxx
P.S Thanks for matching with me
Ha in your face tamzin!!!!!
Chrissie come back please!
Thanks for that honey, aw it was for me, thanks! xxx
I'm glad ya like your banner!!!
Post more soon
layne
x x x
Awww brill. More asap please.
Angeldelight
24-07-2005, 14:38
yey yey yey... that wiped the smug look off her face... yey yey yey... Go Kerrie Go... Go Jake Go... all we now is Chrissie back... more more more... please post more soon... NOW... more more more...
Sorry for the delay here I am again thanks for reading and the replies :cheer:
Chrissie sat in the taxi with her young daughter in her arms, she had no clothes and none of Lia’s things all she had was her daughter and the few bits in her handbag just enough to live on
Chrissie knew she loved him so why was she running away, he wasn’t Den she knew he would never hurt or destroy her the way Den had
Maybe he got too close to her but even that didn’t explain it, she liked him being close knowing her inside out, loving her for being her
If she couldn’t explain it to herself how the hell would anyone else understand she wasn’t even sure if it was even about the kiss
She pulled up outside a smart looking block of flats, she had nowhere else to go
After paying the cab driver Chrissie rang the bell and a voice spoke
Chrissie- it’s Chrissie can I come up
The buzzer was pressed and Chrissie made her way inside
Amanda opened her door to see a tearful Chrissie staring back at her, pulling her inside she wrapped her friend into a hug
Amanda- what’s going on
Chrissie- I left him
Amanda- why what happened
Chrissie- I don’t know it had changed we had changed
Amanda- did you have a row
Chrissie- no
Amanda- then what
Chrissie- can I stay
Amanda- you know you can as long as you want
Amanda lifted Lia from her mother’s arms and Chrissie slumped onto the sofa trying not to think about Jake and what she had left behind
Chrissie- will you look after Lia for an hour while I go and get her some bits
Amanda- sure are you sure you and Jake can’t work this out
Chrissie- not at the moment no
She grabbed her bag and left
Jake had soon got rid of his guests he made an excuse for Chrissie something about a sick relative and now he sat silently in the empty pub
Without Chrissie he had nothing
He tidied up the empty glasses and made his way slowly upstairs and into the bedroom
Siting down on their bed, the bed they had shared together since he’s moved in well over a year ago
He’d given up ringing her all he got was her answer machine he had lost count of the number of messages he had left begging her, apologising but nothing he had no idea where she was or if she was ever coming back
Oh no, Jake, Chrissie *bumps heads together* You go back no get back together you love each other!!
Amanda yey! i like her *ducks from flying objects*
Post more soon please honey this is an amzing script and i love it!
Layne
x x x
Angeldelight
24-07-2005, 18:39
she'll come to her senses eventually.. i mean who wouldn't... this is Jake Moon he's irrestible... just like Dennis... come on Chrissie... think about it... think about what you're doing... YOU LOVE HIM... GO BACK... GO BACk... fab as usual... don't even think about not posting more tomorrow.. hehe...
Chrissie needs to wake up. Glad she went to Amanda, I think she's a great character. Poor Jake know he's feeling like Chrissie did in real eastenders (I was about to say real life but eastenders isn't real life!) before the phonecall. This is great, more please. Please let her come back
xxx
Apologies once again and thanks for reading please keep reading please
Kerrie- I just think it’s a bit odd that’s all
Noah- it’s not your problem Jake and Chrissie will sort it out if there is something wrong
Kerrie- if you say so
Noah- now come on bed
Kerrie- do you think Tamzin will disappear
Noah- I doubt it but she will eventually
Kerrie- always was one to put up a fight
Noah- she’ll go trust me
Kerrie climbed into bed
Noah- right get some sleep I’m going to do a bit of work down stairs
Kerrie- ok
She kissed her husband and lay back onto the pillows
Noah headed own the stairs and grabbed his coat before leaving his sleeping wife alone
Out in the dark he climbed into his flash BMW and set off
Noah pulled up outside a house and knocked on the door
Tamzin opened the door
Tamzin- this is a nice surprise Noah, come in
Dennis- I’m just worried that’s all Chrissie going off to look after a sick relative isn’t very Chrissie
Sharon- I know but if it’s something else they’ve got to deal with it as a couple we can’t go around butting our noses in when we feel like it
Dennis- she was there for me when all that stuff with Den and Zoë came out I’d hate for her to think she was on her own if something had happened
Sharon- if she needs us she can ring now come on bed before you decide to do something stupid
Danny arrived at Katelyn’s flat to find her sitting silently on the sofa nursing her cuts and bruises and a large brandy
Danny- what the hell happened
Katelyn burst into tears as Danny wrapped her into a hug
Katelyn- I felt sick so I went to get some fresh air when someone attacked me
Danny- who
Katelyn- I don’t know it was dark
Danny- I’m calling the cops
Katelyn- no it’s just a couple of bruises no biggie anyway we’re leaving tomorrow morning it doesn’t matter
Danny- it matters to me
Katelyn kissed him- please don’t make a fuss for me
Lying little, well at least katelyn ain't dragging Chrissie into it!!!
Wha the hell is noah doing with Tamzin???
post mroe soon honey
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
Jessie Wallace
26-07-2005, 23:46
Wow, this is fantastic.
Dennis is so sweet wanting to look out for Chrissie. Why has Noah gone to find Tamzin? Please let Katelyn go away. More please
xxx
Angeldelight
27-07-2005, 18:25
lying... conviving little... TELL HIM THE TRUTH katelyn... awww Noah and Kerrie... he's not doing something stupid is he... i can feel it... awwww bless Dennis wanting to be there for Chrissie... please post more... SOON... NOW... more more more...
Hi guys apologies for the delay in posting but here I am with another part so Enjoy and thanks for reading
Noah- Tamzin
Tamzin went over to the drinks cabinet and poured him a large whiskey
Noah took the drink and downed it in one
Tamzin- what can I do for you
Noah stepped forward and gently put a hand under her chin
Noah- you know what I want
Tamzin smiled- yeah I do…I knew it
Noah smiled to her sweetly as he tightened his grip
Tamzin- ow Noah your hurting me
Noah- you stay away from me and my wife do you understand
Tamzin fell backwards against the wall as Noah pushed her hard, his hands tightened around her, his eyes full of hatred and hers full of fear
Chrissie awoke early the next morning despite having been kept up by a restless Lia missing her daddy
Amanda was making some coffee as she entered the kitchen
Chrissie- morning
Amanda- how are you feeling
Chrissie- I’ve felt better Lia’s asleep at last I hope she didn’t disturb you
Amanda smiled- not at all
Chrissie didn’t want to cry but she her strength was gone it felt like it had been ripped out of her
Amanda watched horrified as her once strong friend seemed to fall apart in front of her, Amanda wrapped her into a scented hug as Chrissie let the last few weeks of emotion spill out of her
Danny and Katelyn had said their goodbyes and were heading off to start their new life away from the mess and Albert Square
After they had gone Jake was once again overcome with a sense of loneliness and a constant ache for Chrissie, he missed her and everything about her
He had opened up the pub but unable to face all the questions and so he’d left everyone to it and decided to do some work at Scarlet’s, Johnny was due back any day from his honeymoon and he had a pile of paperwork to catch up on
As Jake crossed the Square, Noah climbed out of the car he hadn’t slept all night and with a pure white handkerchief he wiped the blood from his knuckles trying to hide the evidence from his wife and prying eyes
Angeldelight
30-07-2005, 18:18
Ooooohhhhhhh what's Noah been upto... i hope he's killed her... hit her over the head with a frying pan... Poor Jake and Chrissie... why does he have to be such a man... more more more... please psot more soon... Rach take that banner off it's creepy...
I hope Noah hurt Tamzin. she's evil! Jake and Chrissie need to be loacked in a room and not let out till they've talked! More please
xxx
Hello apologies for leaving it so long but here is the next part and thanks for da replies
Kerrie- where have you been
Noah- I had a load of work to do but now it’s done I can spend the day with my gorgeous wife
Kerrie- where have you been
Noah- working
He kissed her lightly
Kerrie- and drinking by the stench of your breath
Noah- it was a long night
Kerrie- go and sleep it off then I’ll cook lunch
Noah- no I’ll grab a shower then me and you are going out for lunch
Kerrie- why
Noah- to talk
Kerrie- about what
Noah- us, the baby everything
Kerrie- that’s a bit grown up for us we usually just fight it out
Noah- well we can’t have that now can we not in your condition gives me an unfair advantage
Kerrie- true so where are we going
Noah- new Thai place on the High Street
Kerrie- yummee my favourite
Noah- you better get changed
As he took in her jogging bottoms and t-shirt, he’d never seen her so casual
Kerrie- yes sir and you better shower quick you stink
Noah- charming
Kerrie- I won’t be seen out with a smelly husband
Noah- well I won’t be seen out with a scruffy wife
Kerrie- if I’m so scruffy angel why did you marry me
Noah- because you’re the only good thing that ever happened to me
Kerrie- don’t go all sentimental on me please
She kissed him lightly on the lips before heading upstairs to change
Hey. I like Kerrie and Noah they are good together.
Kerrie- that’s a bit grown up for us we usually just fight it out
lol, I like that. What happened with Noah and Tamzin?
Fabby, more please
xxx
Angeldelight
02-08-2005, 21:16
Oooh what's going on... what's he done to Tamzin? something fishy going on their i can smell it.. hehe... post more soon... more more more...
Hi apologies for the delay and thanks Jake Moon Rox and Angeldelight your both brill
Dennis- I’ve called her mobile it’s switched off
Sharon- maybe she’s busy looking after her relative
Dennis- she isn’t looking after any relative so I’m gonna go and have a little chat with Jake because if her relative was that sick she wouldn’t take her seven month old daughter with her
He grabbed his coat and turned to storm out but Sharon grabbed his arm
Sharon- Dennis your overreacting
Dennis- am I
Sharon looked down at the floor, she knew Dennis was right but she didn’t want him flying off the handle and making things ten times worse
Sharon- ok I know something isn’t right but you can’t just go over and have your ‘little chat’ because I know exactly what that means
Dennis- I just want to know that’s all and I promise I won’t lay a finger on him
With that he walked away and out of the door
Kerrie pulled on her jeans and watched as her husband headed into the shower she laughed to herself everything was going so well
Kerrie scooped up her husband’s discarded clothes singing along to the radio when she stopped dead in her tracks as a familiar smell hit her
Kerrie felt herself go icy cold and the blood in her veins felt like treacle as her head slowly began to pound, the haunting flashbacks filled her tearful eyes but all she could see and feel were the flames and yet all she could smell was the petrol
Pulling herself out of her thoughts she glanced down at her husband’s pale blue shirt the smell of petrol overwhelmed her, the one smell she feared after the fire she started well over a year ago the fire that led to her husband’s subsequent arrest and later his suicide
Why did Noah’s shirt smell of petrol? A thousand questions with no answers were running through her head but she knew her husband and she knew no matter what he needed protecting
She headed downstairs and shoved the clothes into the washing machine, Kerrie made her way to the front door and grabbed the shoes Noah had been wearing that morning and pushed them also into the machine before switching it on
Kerrie rushed to the sink and threw up it was like she was back to that night she had destroyed Will’s offices
She couldn’t get the image out of her head of his body as it lay on the cold mortuary slab, his neck bruised from the noose, his eyes wide open and his body so cold and so blue
Picking up the phone she dialled a number
Kerrie- hi it’s Kerrie can you come and sort Noah’s car out it needs a good clean inside and out and I mean a through clean ok cheers babes bye
Why does Noah's shirt smell of petrol? :hmm:
Dennis don't hurt Jake! Please! Brilliant as usual! More soon :)
What did Noah do? This is very supicious. Dennis had better not hurt Jake, will Jake tell him? Can't wait for more
xxx
Angeldelight
05-08-2005, 15:37
uh-oh... what's going on... what's Noah done to Tamzin? Kerrie's going to protect him... awwwww that's so sweet... Dennis going all manly *begins to drool* i can just imagine it... more more more... please post more soon... more more more...
P.S. I know i'm brill and pumping up my ego always helps... hehe... hehe...
Enjoy and ta for the replies
Dennis entered the club as Jake sat trying to do some work yet his mind was wandering back to Chrissie and where she could be he had phoned her parents, her brothers, her sister and nothing
Jake looked up as the footsteps approached him he already knew who it was
Dennis- Jake
Jake- what can I do for you
Dennis- heard from Chrissie
Jake- not yet have you
Dennis- no and I doubt you will she’s left you hasn’t she
Jake- no she’s….
Dennis- save it I aint buying it
Jake got up and faced Chrissie’s stepson
Jake- my business not yours
With that Jake turned and walked out leaving Dennis standing in the club alone
Chrissie sat in the empty flat, Amanda was at work and it left her with hours to think too many hours
Lia slept most of the day leaving her with just Jake to think about she missed him in more ways than she could ever describe, the little things he use to do and the way he made her laugh even on the most miserable of days
Standing in the kitchen she looked at the clock it was only half twelve the kettle clicked and Chrissie poured the steaming water into a mug this was the one thing she needed right now a large mug of coffee
Chrissie suddenly felt light-headed, her head began to spin clinging onto the kitchen counter Chrissie managed to sit herself down, what the hell was wrong with her
Maybe it was the stress or maybe she just missed Jake but whatever it was it had to stop
Chrissie reached for the phone and dialled a number
Chrissie- hello yeah I’d like to make an emergency appointment…no I’m not a patient I’m visiting a friend yeah Chrissie Watts thanks a lot bye
Hiya honey, i've just caught up because i've been on holiday, oh my god, wow, well wonder what noah has done,???
Jake and Chrissie *bangs there heads together again!* What is wrong with Chrissie, i love amanda she is great! Shannis :wub:
Please please post more soon honey please for me, because it was my birthday yesterday!!!
Layne
x x x
Why is Chrissie making an appointment? I can think of one way to cure Chrissie of missing Jake, send her back to him! Dennis will learn the truth eventually. More please
xxx
Angeldelight
08-08-2005, 17:31
more more more... awww Dennis being all protective... i hope Chrissie's ok... her and Jake need to be locked in a room together to sort this out... hehe... brill babes... keep it coming... more more more
Very sorry for the wait and ta for the replies please keep reading thanks
Kerrie watched as Noah stepped into the lounge ready for their date
Noah- what
Kerrie- …nothing come on or we’ll be late
Noah- where are my clothes I had on earlier
Kerrie- I put them in the wash sweetheart I don’t want a pile of laundry building up
Noah- what the hell are you on about we have a cleaner who does the washing you never touch that machine
Kerrie- well I can start can’t I
Noah- careful you’ll be using the hoover next
Kerrie- ha your funny anyway you didn’t tell me why you’ve been out so late not got a fancy woman on the sly have you
Noah- I was drawing up a business plan for my bank manager so I can expand the clubs
Kerrie grabbed her jacket and the pair headed to the front door
Kerrie- sounds like a plan if I ever heard one
She knew he was lying but she didn’t challenge maybe subconsciously she knew she didn’t have too he was her husband she knew him better than anyone
Chrissie felt so isolated as she sat in the creamy coloured waiting room the smell was enough to put anyone off coming to the doctors she looked around at the different people wishing she could get this over and done with and the hell out of here
Her name was eventually called and carrying Lia she entered the small office type room and a young woman sat behind the desk
Chrissie took to the seat she was offered and the doctor introduced herself
Paula- I’m Paula you said it was an emergency Mrs Watts
Chrissie nodded and told the doctor exactly how she felt
Jake sat in the upstairs flat of the Vic nursing a broken heart and downing a large bottle of scotch
He wanted her back but how could he get her back when he didn’t know where to get her back from
Suddenly the door opened and a young woman entered
Jake- Amanda
Amanda- hello Jake well I’m certainly glad your looking as rough as Chrissie now I think it’s about time you and her had a little chat
Jake- she’s staying with you
Amanda- she’s at my flat with Lia and driving herself insane over you
Jake- I hurt her
Amanda- if you love her you can make it right instead of sitting here wallowing in your own self pity now which is it gonna be sit her and drink yourself to death or tell Chrissie your sorry and you love her
Jake- I’ll get my coat
Welcome back Layne and a belated Happy Birthday hope to catch up with you soon
Happy Birthday 4 Saturday Angeldelight (your getting old like me babes)
Welcome back Layne and a belated Happy Birthday hope to catch up with you soon
Happy Birthday 4 Saturday Angeldelight (your getting old like me babes)
Thanks honey!!!!
And happy birthday AngelDelight for tomorrow!!!!
Fab script honey more soon, what is wrong with chrissie?
And i'm glad amanda went to see Jake
More soon
Layne
x x x
What is wrong with Crissie? Jake and Chrissie had better make up. I wonder what Noah actually did. I hope there's loads to read when I get back.
xxx
P.S Angeldelight happy birthday as I won't be here to say it tomorrow
Angeldelight
12-08-2005, 16:13
thanks a lot guys... i am NOT going to old like you... i'm going to be 19...
Angeldelight
12-08-2005, 16:17
thanks a lot guys... i am NOT going to old like you... i'm going to be 19... you're really old... hehe hehe hehe
this is brill... Jakey needs to be running to Chrissie NOW... how much does Kerrie know about naoh's done? more more more... please post more soon...
Ta for the replies
Chrissie stared at the doctor
Chrissie- what do you mean…you want to do some tests…why do you think there is something seriously wrong?
Paula- not at all it’s just routine and won’t take long at all
Chrissie- can you find out today
Paula- the test I’m going to do won’t take longer than a few minutes
Chrissie- a few minutes and that’s it you’ll know what is wrong with me
Paula- hopefully it will only tell me what I already know
Chrissie- like what
Paula- just relax Mrs Watts
Chrissie sighed
Dennis opened the door to the flat
Sharon- how did it go
Dennis- he stormed off but at least I know one thing
Sharon- and what’s that
Dennis- there is no relative Chrissie’s left him
Sharon- are you sure
Dennis- positive
Sharon- but she loves him and I know Jake worships her
Dennis- well something made her leave
Sharon- promise me you’ll let this one drop now
Dennis- I can’t
Sharon- well at least take five minutes and help me plan this wedding
She threw a magazine at him
Dennis picked it up and pulled a face
Dennis- I am not wearing anything like that it’s all ruffles
Sharon- well find one you do like then
Dennis walked over to Sharon
Dennis- I’m much more interested in what you’re wearing
Sharon- really well Mr Rickman your gonna have a long wait finding that one out
She kissed him
Dennis- not long at all really the weddings only six weeks away August is creeping up on us fast
Sharon- tell me about it and I’ve still got a million things to do
Dennis kissed her and smiled
Dennis- surely they could wait for half an hour
Sharon- I suppose I could
She wrapped her arms around his waist slowly un-buckling his belt
Chrissie- well what’s wrong am I going to die
Paula- Mrs Watts your test results show……
Angeldelight
14-08-2005, 17:18
SHANNIS WEDDING IN 6 WEEKS...
show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what? show what?
Well come on tell us is Chrissie going to die, what is wrong with her come on please please tell us!!!
Shannis wedding yey!!
Post more soon need to know please
layne
x x x
sarahwelford
14-08-2005, 17:57
this is brilliant can we have more soon
Chrissie- well what’s wrong am I going to die
Paula- Mrs Watts your test results show……
What's wrong?? Please tell me! I will die of shock if you don't and to be honest, I don't want that to happen! More soon please!
Very very sorry for the delay, thanks for the replies and please enjoy.................
This one's for you Layne thnaks for the banna it's gorgeous
Chrissie- there must be some mistake
Paula- no mistake Mrs Watts your pregnant and from you’ve told me you’re probably between sixteen and twenty-two weeks
Chrissie- I can’t be I just can’t
Paula- this must be a shock for you
Chrissie- a shock you think this is a shock this is like my worst nightmare times by a hundred
Paula- I’m sending you for a scan just to make sure everything is going well with the pregnancy and they will be able to talk to you about the many options available to you
Chrissie sat staring at her numb, she couldn’t even think clearly
Chrissie- the test it has to be wrong
Paula- I did it twice Mrs Watts you are pregnant I know it wasn’t what you were expecting
Chrissie- not really no a virus maybe but not this no
She got up still holding a sleeping Lia
Chrissie- I have a seven-month-old daughter to look after how will I cope on my own with another child
Paula- what about the father
Chrissie- what about him
Paula- I’ll call the hospital and arrange an appointment for you
Amanda- she must have popped out with Lia
Jake- is she ok
Amanda- top of the world what do you think
Jake- I love her
Amanda- I know you do and for her sins she loves you
Jake- I want her back I’d do anything for her she’s my world
Amanda- then fight for her but not literally please
Jake- I better get back Johnny returns tomorrow I’ll come over later talk to her
Amanda- ok let me drop you back and I’ll pick up a few bits for Lia while I’m there
Jake nodded and smiled
Kerrie watched her husband over lunch
She noticed the cuts on his knuckles yet she couldn’t work out what he was thinking or feeling he was acting so normal
Noah- babes with you being pregnant maybe you should take it easy you know give up work
Kerrie- no I enjoy working I don’t want to be stuck at home with a packet of biscuits and daytime TV I’ll be become fat and bored
Noah- I just think…
Kerrie- I did warn you didn’t thinking never helped anyone now for once listen to me I will work until I decide to give it up ok
Noah- ok but…
Kerrie- no more buts…what happened to your knuckles
Noah stared down at them
Noah- a young lad got lairy in the club I booted him out
Kerrie- I thought you had bouncers to do that
Noah- the hands on touch works too sometimes
Kerrie- really
She smiled and finished her glass of water
Chrissie left the doctors in a daze pregnant with Jake’s baby she thought back on the last few months when she had been light-headed and dizzy and she put weight on, her periods stopped but she never gave it a thought
She placed a hand on her tummy why hadn’t she seen it before she was having a baby
Holding her appointment slip she flagged down a taxi to the hospital
Jake and Amanda arrived back at the pub he watched as Amanda collected some clothes and belongings for Chrissie and Lia
Jake- Amanda
Amanda- yeah
Jake- tell her I love her and it was never about her or us it was about me…can you give her something please
Amanda- sure
He handed her a familiar navy blue box
Jake- tell her I will never stop loving her or Lia give her that she’ll understand
Amanda nodded and took the box
Awww babes for me thanks!!
Aww Chrissie pregnant, yey, and what is in the blue box?????
Post more soon honey and thanks! xxx
Layne
xxx
Angeldelight
22-08-2005, 12:27
SHE'S PREGNANT... uh-oh Jake... i'd watch out if i were you!... Noah just lied to Kerrie... Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... bless him... Jake's just so lovely... he really loves Chrissie... More more more... this still won't make me forgive you for killing off that person i know you're go to...
WattsRulee
24-08-2005, 20:12
OMG!! just caught up (took an hour!) coz ive been in hospital for the last 3 weeks:'(. soooooo gd!!!! whats happened in ee? can someone email me and tell me breifly if they have time
[email protected]
thanx amy xxxxxxxxxxx
OMG!! just caught up (took an hour!) coz ive been in hospital for the last 3 weeks:'(. soooooo gd!!!! whats happened in ee? can someone email me and tell me breifly if they have time
[email protected]
thanx amy xxxxxxxxxxx
awwww you've been in hopital, awww well i hope your better now! xxx
and why don't you check out the EE website, that way you can watch the clips aswell! x
Potato1992
24-08-2005, 20:20
its very good
WattsRulee
24-08-2005, 20:32
thanks! something to do with my heart! i dunno my mum and dad sorted it all out!!
This one's for Amy good to have you back and hope your feeling better
Thanks for the replies and Enjoy
Chrissie sat in the corridor of the hospital, the midwife had given her a cup of tea but it resembled canal water spotting a nearby plant she chucked the contents inside and threw the plastic cup in a bin
Sitting back down she gazed down at her seven month old daughter babbling away
Chrissie kissed the top of her head
Chrissie- mummy loves you so much and so does daddy you have to know that sweetheart
She wiped away the falling tears
Chrissie knew that being angry at Jake wasn’t the problem because she wasn’t angry at him, she wasn’t even angry at Katelyn she was angry at herself for Den, for everything, for that night, for letting herself love Jake, for letting him love her
She’d spent so long hiding the darkest of secrets and now it was out in open she was terrified and scared of losing everything, the more people who knew the more she seemed to have to lose
She protectively stroked her tummy this was another chance for her to make right the wrongs that she’d done and it was another chance for her and Jake
Even though another baby scared her, scared her more than anything, more than that fateful night in February, like Lia this little person would rely on her for everything she needed to be a good person to love her children
But was she a good person how can you be a good person and get on with your life when you live in the place were you murdered your husband and buried his body and you now lived with your lover
A young midwife called her name and Chrissie rose to her feet
Kerrie and Noah arrived back home to find Noah’s car very clean
Noah- I was gonna get that done tomorrow
Kerrie- well I got it done today
Noah- what’s going on
Kerrie- nothing I could ask you the same question now shall we go to the pub I could do with a drink
They entered the Queen Vic, Noah was worried about his wife’s strange behaviour
Kerrie- Mo any sign of Chrissie
Little Mo shook her head- no and Jake’s disappeared
Kerrie- men hey never there when you need them come on then pumpkin get the drinks in
Little Mo got the couple their drinks and as she did Kerrie caught the tail end of the radio report
She didn’t know why but the words the reporter spoke sent shivers through her she now knew the answer to all her questions
Grabbing her bag off the bar Kerrie fled the pub
Noah- Kerrie
He shook his head she’d been behaving strangely all day
Kerrie opened the front door she felt the tears escape her tired eyes
She switched on the TV, the local news report flashed up a body of a young woman had been found in nearby forests, she’d been strangled, badly beaten and her body set fire too
Kerrie turned and ran to the toilet and threw up, she knew it was him she didn’t know how she just did
Chrissie lay on the bed, another midwife had taken Lia off her for a few minutes
Chrissie- that’s cold
The midwife squeezed the cool gel onto her slightly swelling stomach
Midwife- sorry just relax Mrs Watts
She rubbed the ultrasound over her tummy and her eyes glanced up to the fuzzy picture that was her baby, she remembered a year ago she was staring at her daughter on a screen and now look at her
Midwife- well judging by the size of the foetus you’re about 22 weeks
Chrissie- 22 weeks that’s five and a half months how did I not know
Midwife- sometimes these things just aren’t picked up maybe you’ve had a tough time put your symptoms down to something else…now if you could just give me a minute Mrs Watts I need to check something with a colleague
Chrissie’s eyes shot up filled with panic and fear
Chrissie- is there something wrong
Midwife- I would just like to clarify something but please Mrs Watts relax
A few moments later a suited man entered the room with the midwife
He greeted Chrissie and once again he ran the ultrasound over her tummy
Chrissie- is there something wrong with my baby
The man nodded at the midwife who spoke gently to Chrissie
Midwife- Mrs Watts we have detected two heartbeats from the scan you’re expecting twins congratulations
Chrissie- what
Midwife- you’re having twins
Chrissie- I can’t be can I
Midwife- I can see this has been a shock for you
Chrissie- a shock it was a shock to find out I was pregnant, this no this is scary I can’t do it on my own
She took the tissue from the midwife and wiped the gel off her tummy
Getting up she took her daughter and was about to walk out when the midwife caught her
Midwife- here
She handed Chrissie a scan picture
Chrissie- thankyou
She needs to tell Jake whats going on. Did Noah really do that Tara? More please
xxx
Angeldelight
28-08-2005, 15:29
uh-oh seems to fits that part well... ANOTHER JAKISSIE bebe... a tiny ickle bebe... and kerrie knows what Noah did... it's all high drama at the mo...
WOW TWINS!!!!!!!1 Chrissie needs to go and talk to Jake, and what has Noah gone and done now? Was it really him?
Post more soon please, i love this!!
layne
x x x
diamond1
28-08-2005, 23:28
wow twins in a few months she will feel like wayne rooney has kicked her stomach and she will look like vanessa felts with blonde curls but in seriusness this is wicked
Sorry for the delay and thanks for reading
The door opened and Kerrie looked up she was blinded by the tears and so blinded by love
Noah- I was worried
Kerrie- don’t bother worrying about me what about you you’re the one who needs to be worried right
Noah- Kerrie have I done something wrong
Kerrie wiped her eyes
Kerrie- I did so many bad things but this is so different it’s changed everything
Noah- what are you talking about?
Kerrie- haven’t you seen the news, you know it took me all of five seconds to piece it together a young woman found this morning murdered and only last night you seemed so cold towards her you were angry I know what your like when your angry but this, you’ve gone too far
Noah- how did you know
Kerrie- you left last night I didn’t believe the bull about having to work and then this morning you were edgy and something wasn’t right you weren’t right, the petrol on your shirt, the cuts, the blood I’m not stupid
Noah- I lost my temper
Kerrie- you murdered her you beat her and strangled her
Noah- she was gonna ruin everything
Kerrie- no not if we were strong together but this you killed her in cold blood, you left this house knowing she wouldn’t be leaving hers alive I thought I knew you
Noah- please don’t do this, the baby
Kerrie- the baby, the baby what about me, what about us, it’s all gone
Pushing past Noah Kerrie fled upstairs
Dennis- morning
Sharon- is it already
Dennis- yep come on sleepy head we’ve got a wedding to plan
Sharon- don’t I had terrible nightmares last night about it all going wrong
Dennis- don’t tell me you forgot to get dressed
Sharon- dirty beggar can’t you think of nothing else
Dennis- not really no
Sharon giggled
Dennis got up
Sharon- I was thinking of going to see Jake later make sure he’s ok
Dennis- it’s Chrissie we should be worrying about
Sharon- maybe but still no harm in it is there
Dennis- I suppose not
Amanda- where did you get to yesterday
Chrissie- walking, thinking
Amanda- about Jake
Chrissie- mainly yeah
Amanda- I saw him yesterday I know you said leave it but I had to do something he came to see you
Chrissie- he’s not here now so what does it matter
Amanda- he’s in pieces
Chrissie- he is eating ok isn’t he
Amanda smiled- yeah I’m sure he is if you define having a liquid lunch as eating
Chrissie- turning to drink how helpful of him
Amanda- he asked me to give you something
Chrissie- what
Amanda handed her the velvet box
Amanda- he said he’ll always love you, both of you
Chrissie opened the box and burst into tears
Chrissie- he gave this to me at Johnny and Tina’s wedding he wanted us to get married I wanted to but Den
Amanda- he proposed
Chrissie nodded
Chrissie- I wish I could say yes
Amanda- find Den divorce him
Chrissie- I can’t risk it I can’t risk him in my life again
Amanda- what about Jake he loves you so much
Chrissie- I forgive him I did a long time ago but it’s different there’s things to consider Lia, me
Amanda- Lia needs her daddy and you need her daddy too
Chrissie- more than ever he’s got me into a mess I think he’s needs to sweat a bit can you drive me over
Amanda- I picked up Lia’s car seat whilst I was over there
Chrissie- I’ll go and pack
Poor Kerrie, I didn't think Noah would have killed her. Dennis and his dirty mind! Lets hope Chrissie is actually going to go home and back to Jake now. Fabby as usal. Can't wait for more
xxx
Wow! This is fabbity!!! Yey chrissie is going back to Jakey!!! Oh so noah did kill her, what is kerriw gonna do, yey shannis wedding!
post more soon honey
Layne
x x x
Angeldelight
31-08-2005, 12:27
fabarooney... totally amazing as usual... poor Kerrie, can she forgive him? awww can't wait for a big happy Jakissie family again... more more more... post more soon...
sarahwelford
31-08-2005, 18:18
loving this story more please
squillyfer
31-08-2005, 18:20
cant wait for more this is great !!!!
Awwww! Just caught up. Jakey's so sweet. Yay! Chrissie's going back to Jake, where she belongs :wub:! More soon!
Thanks for the replies and thanks for reading your all brill
The silence echoed around her everything was ruined it had all gone so wrong
Kerrie ran her shaking hand over her tummy, inside was her baby, their baby, inside was her hope and future
She watched as the door opened and her husband stood staring at her
Kerrie- what gonna have a pop at me now
Noah- I’m sorry
Kerrie- what for what exactly are you sorry for killing her don’t be sorry about that how about lying to me
Noah- what
Kerrie- look I’m not saying I agree or I’m happy about it but I’m not going mourn her she deserved all she got
Noah knelt down in front of her
Kerrie- I love you we’re having a baby but you can’t keep something like that from me what if the police turned up how can I give you an alibi if I don’t know I meant to give you one
Noah half smiled that was certainly his wife speaking
Noah- it won’t happen again
Kerrie- don’t make a habit of it or I’ll be the one needing an alibi
She kissed him softly and smiled, she could forgive him anything even this because after all he had forgiven so much of her more than she could ever repay
The car pulled up outside the Queen Vic
Chrissie- can you take Lia for a walk I need to see him alone
Amanda nodded- I’ll take her to the park
Chrissie climbed out of the car and walked towards the pub, she quietly pushed the doors open
A soft silence descended onto the usually bustling pub as the landlady entered
Chrissie- Mo is Jake upstairs
Little Mo- yeah but…
Chrissie- good
Pushing the side door open she made up the stairs
Chrissie opened the door to the lounge where Jake sat trying to sort through the paperwork for the club
Jake- Mo I told you I didn’t want to be disturbed
He didn’t look up
Chrissie- I better go then
Jake turned his head to see Chrissie standing in the doorway
Jake- I thought…I…is everything ok…Lia
Chrissie smiled- we need to talk
Jake nodded
Chrissie- shall I start or do you want too
Jake- I’m sorry more sorry than you’ll ever know
Chrissie- don’t be it was the best thing that could have ever happened really it made me realise a few things it made me realise what I wanted
Jake- and what’s that
Chrissie- about you and me
Jake- so you’re not leaving
Chrissie- not yet no
Jake- I love you
Chrissie- I know and I love you and Lia needs her daddy
Jake- of course I mean you came back for Lia right
Chrissie- well now you mention it there might have been another reason
Jake got up and made his way to her
Jake- and what might that have been
Chrissie- it’s my pub
Jake smiled and gently kissed her
Chrissie pulled away slightly and smiled
Chrissie- and that too I guess
Jake wrapped his arms around her
Chrissie stepped away and slapped him hard in the face
Jake- what was that for?
Chrissie- everything you can’t expect not to get a slap
Jake placed his hands on her hips
Chrissie- Jake there is something I need to tell you
Jake kissed her nose
Jake- what’s that?
Chrissie- maybe you should sit down
hee hee. Liked Chrissie slapping Jake. Glad she's back, but he's in for a shock. Also Kerrie and Noah seem to have made up. Please tell me its not too good to be true. More please
xxx
This is fabalous!! Chrissie and Jake Yey!!! :wub: Now what will jake say about the twins!!!
I'm glad kerrie forgave noah, post more soon honey
Layne
x x x
Angeldelight
02-09-2005, 11:05
fabaroonye... glad Kerrie forgave Noah... he didn't mean it really... hehe... yey she's back... oh think he definatley needs to sit down... yey a Jakissie family... they're having two tiny ickle bebe's... yey yey yeye
Yay! Fabulous! More now please *flutters eyelashes* :)
I've just read the whole thing! It took me ages but it was worth it! Write more soon please!
Please post more :) Tis fab!
Many apologies for the delay had a really rough couple of weeks with work and personal problems but I hope your all enjoying it and reading it and thanks for all the replies it's good to be back
Jake- pregnant
He swallowed hard he hadn’t been prepared for this bombshell
Chrissie- don’t look too bloody excited then
Jake- it’s a shock that’s all
Chrissie- well I wasn’t exactly jumping for joy when I found out
Jake- are you sure
Chrissie- positive I’ve even had a scan
Jake sat back down
Chrissie- fine have it your way
Chrissie grabbed her bag and went to leave but Jake caught her arm and pulled her back
Jake- I’m sorry sweetheart I just needed a minute to think
He kissed her
Jake- we’re having a baby
He wrapped his arms around her waist
Chrissie- well erm actually we’re having two I’m expecting twins
Jake- two babies
Chrissie nodded
Jake- wow that’s…scary
Chrissie grinned- you can say that again
He kissed her
Sharon- back here already
Little Mo nodded
Little Mo- they’ve been up there all afternoon
Sharon- good or bad
Little Mo- there hasn’t been any shouting yet so I take that as a good sign
Sharon- yeah I guess so
Little Mo- how are things with you and Dennis wedding plans going ok
Sharon- I’m getting there slowly I’ll come back later give me a shout if you need me
Little Mo nodded
As Jake and Chrissie let their news sink in
A newly loved up Kerrie and Noah entered the Queen Vic
Kerrie- my round I think
Noah- no mine as a sort of apology I have also been shopping and bought you this
Kerrie took the oblong box from her husband and with a trembling hand undid the clasp
Kerrie gasped
Kerrie- it’s beautiful
Noah- I love you and I don’t deserve you this is my way of showing you how much I need you and love you
Kerrie pulled out the huge diamond heart shaped necklace and let Noah place it around her neck
She could feel all eyes on her as the necklace hung around her neck
Kerrie- I love you
She pulled him closer and wrapped her arms around him a voice stopped both of them and they pulled apart
DS Harris- Mr King your under arrest on suspicion of murdering Tamzin Simpson you do not have to say anything but it may harm your defence if you do not mention when questioned something you may later rely on in court anything you do say will used in evidence
Kerrie- what murder Tamzin you’ve got it wrong?
DS Harris- we’ll see Mrs King
Kerrie- Noah isn’t a killer Tamzin can’t be dead I saw her here the other day
DS Harris- you’ll need to make a statement if you would like to come to the station this afternoon we can sort it out
Kerrie- sod later I’m coming now and I aint leaving without my husband
DS Harris- suit yourself
Noah- leave it Kerrie let them do their jobs it won’t take them long to realise I have nothing to do with this
Kerrie- I know it won’t
Kerrie could only watch on as her husband was lead out of the pub in handcuffs
Jake- when can we start telling people
Chrissie- soon I’m already 22 weeks soon we’re gonna have two more babies
Jake- it’ll be fine we’ll cope
Chrissie- will we how you work nights I work all day I have an eight month old daughter to look after where am I gonna find the time to actually have a life Jake
Jake- we’ll make time trust me I love you I love Lia I’m gonna love these two we’re gonna be a perfect family
Chrissie- if you say so but I’ll tell you something Jake Moon this is it no more kids
Jake- we’ll be careful
Chrissie- no we’ll be more than careful your gonna have the snip I’ve already booked you an appointment
Jake- you did WHAT
He stood up furious
Chrissie- don’t look so surprised Jake if you think your getting within 10 yards of me if you don’t have this operation then you’ve got another thing coming either have the snip or you become a weekend dad I’m not joking I can’t afford to have any more kids I feel trapped Jake I don’t want that I just want to enjoy you and me and the kids please
Jake looked at her he couldn’t refuse her anything bending down in front of her, Jake took her face in his hands
Jake- ok, ok I’ll do it
His hands slipped from her face and rested onto her tummy
Jake- our future
Chrissie smiled and nodded, tears glistening in her eyes as he kissed her
squillyfer
17-09-2005, 19:29
yay more soon
Awwwwwwwww wow, jake and chrissie together again!!! Awww honey i hope everythingis ok, and just more more when youi can this is fab and i love it even more now than i did before *if that is possible!*
Luv ya
layne
x x x
That was so sweet. 3 moon children! Great to see you back.
xxx
Hello people thanks for the replies and here I am again so Enjoy
Kerrie paced the reception of the police station
Kerrie- do I look like I have all bloody day you muppets
The desk sergeant looked at her witheringly
Kerrie- when is my husband to be released hmmm I’m pregnant and stress is not good in my condition
The desk sergeant picked up the phone and a few minutes later a man approached her
Kerrie- who the hell are you
DS Harris- I’m DS Harris I arrested your husband
Kerrie- I don’t give a damn when are you releasing him
DS Harris- not yet we need a statement
Kerrie- from me…get real you leave me out here waiting for hours and now cos it suits you, you’ll see me well you can go to hell cos I aint saying nothing until I see my husband
DS Harris- I can’t…
Kerrie- can’t really didn’t your mother ever tell you there’s no such thing as can’t
Suddenly the police doors opened and Johnny Allen walked in fresh from his honeymoon
Kerrie- thank god dad did you get my message
Johnny nodded and hugged his daughter
DS Harris- Johnny Allen
Johnny- you heard my daughter she wants to see her husband a reasonable request is it not
DS Harris- all right five minutes but don’t think you’ll be alone
Kerrie- oh shut up and get on with it
Jake and Chrissie wandered around the square hand in hand talking about the babies, their future, everything
Chrissie placed her free hand into her pocket when her fingers wrapped around a small box and with a smile she pulled it out
Chrissie- you wanted to marry me
Jake- I still do
Chrissie- why don’t you then I mean not properly but a commitment ceremony
Jake- yeah why not
Chrissie- good but not yet I don’t wanna look like a whale on the pictures
Jake- come on it’s getting cold and Amanda probably has a lot of other things to do so maybe we should relieve her of babysitting duties
Chrissie- I’ll give her a ring and tell her the good news
Kerrie looked at her husband he looked as handsome ever if not a little tired but his eyes twinkled a smile to her as she sat in front of him
Kerrie took his hands in hers and squeezed them
Kerrie- are you ok
Noah nodded
Kerrie- I’m gonna give a statement in a bit my dad’s here he’ll sort it out I promise just trust me yeah
Noah- you know I do
Kerrie- I’ll do whatever it takes to get you out of here I mean it whatever it takes
She turned her head slightly and glanced at the female PC standing by the door
Noah leant forward and kissed her as he did he gently whispered into her ear and Kerrie nodded she understood perfectly
Getting up to leave Kerrie smiled to him before turning towards the door
awwwwwww Jake and chrissie!!!
What did noah tell kerrie??? post more soon honey
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
sarahwelford
24-09-2005, 16:00
more soon this is brilliant
awwww! jakissie!!
more asap!
Angeldelight
24-09-2005, 19:02
awwwwww... 'Tis amazing... post more soon...
sarahwelford
25-09-2005, 02:27
a.s.a.p please
That's really good. What did Noah say? More soon please
xxx
Wow! Aww Jake and Chrissie were sweet :wub: More soon :)
A zillion million apologies for all the readers I haven't posted for nearly a month I'm really sorry and hope you'll carry on reading and thanks for the replies
An hour later Noah King left Walford Police station a free man and his wife stood outside waiting for him
Noah- you did good
Kerrie grinned- I know
He kissed her
Kerrie- dad’s headed home I don’t think he’s best pleased
Noah- we better start grovelling then
Kerrie snuggled into her husband’s arms as they made their way home
Chrissie placed her daughter down to sleep in her cot she seemed just as pleased to be home as her mother as she watched her little girl drift off
Jake watched them from the doorway pleased he’d finally got her back
Chrissie felt him watching her and turned to face him
Chrissie- she’s asleep
Jake- good
She walked over to him and he wrapped his arms around her
Chrissie smiled, she was happier than she’d been in a long time and nothing was going to ruin it
Sharon- we’re going to be late Dennis and it’s the first appointment I want to make a good impression
Dennis- all right I’m ready but is this suit really necessary
Sharon- yes first impressions are everything
Dennis- ok you win let’s go
Sharon- and remember not a word to anyone not even Dot
Dennis- cross my heart
He kissed Sharon and they left the flat
Kerrie and Noah knocked on the door to number five and Tina opened the door looking tanned
Tina- come in your dad said you’d pop over is everything sorted
Kerrie- yes thanks is he mad with me
Johnny- yes but it will pass
Kerrie ran into her dad’s arms and hugged him
Kerrie- have you seen Ruby
Johnny- we’re on our way over now, how did it go
Noah- all charges dropped
Johnny- good I say that calls for a drink in the Vic we’ll pick up Ruby on the way over
The four of them left the house and headed over to the Slater’s and as they did a familiar face watched them from shadows
squillyfer
16-10-2005, 14:39
Yay i love this script do more like NOW!!!
Great to see you posting. Who's watching them? Please post more a.s.a.p and don't leave it so long next time please. Can't wait for more
xxx
Yeh who is watching and where are dennis and sharon going?
I love this script and of course i'll keep readin post more asap! xxx
lil baby tash
16-10-2005, 15:20
wow do more awww jakissie!!!!!!
Angeldelight
18-10-2005, 11:28
more more more... more more more... more more more...
lil baby tash
18-10-2005, 16:39
Dnt Make Me Wait Im So Bored And I Have Nothing To Read Ppl Don't Update There Fics Often Enough
Thanks for the replies just a short part for now but I will be posting more later so enjoy and SORRY again I'm struggling to find the time to come on the net alot cos I'm working hideous hours at work so sorry again
Ruby was ecstatic to see her dad back and the family headed to their local with the Slater’s
Kerrie turned her head to the Square as they entered the pub she had a feeling of being watched and she didn’t like it
Johnny bought the drinks whilst Tina filled in the gossips about her honeymoon
Jake and Chrissie were behind the bar as if the last few days hadn’t even happened
Johnny- Jake
Jake- welcome back boss I was just about to head down to the club
Johnny- I think I’ll join you come on and you can fill me in on the last couple of weeks
Jake- Chrissie I’m off to Scarlet’s I’ll be back later
Chrissie nodded and smiled as Jake kissed her gently
Jake- and take things easy
Chrissie- I will I promise
Jake and Johnny left
Kerrie- Rubes do you want a drink
Ruby- why are you buying
Kerrie- well I’m offering so I guess I’m buying
Ruby- I’ll have a vodka and coke
Kerrie smiled- all right but don’t you dare tell dad he’ll kill me
Ruby- I promise
Kerrie- I mean it
Ruby- I swear I won’t tell him
Kerrie- Chrissie two vodka and cokes, an orange juice and a shot of whiskey
Chrissie- coming up
Ruby- who’s the other one for?
Kerrie- Stacey if you keep it quiet
Ruby grinned and took the drinks over to Stacey
Dennis- well
Sharon- it went ok I think I hope but it’s gonna cost a hell of a lot
Dennis- I don’t care
Sharon grinned- can you believe it
Dennis wrapped his arms around her as they entered the crowded pub
Dennis- yes I can
He kissed the top of her head and they made their way to the bar
The doors behind the couple opened and a young woman walked in
Kerrie wrapped her arms around Noah and kissed him as he swung her around in his arms and as she glanced over her husband’s shoulder her blood ran cold as she caught sight of the familiar face
Pulling away from Noah their eyes locked and Kerrie stepped towards her
Louise- hello Kerrie it’s been a while hasn’t it
Angeldelight
29-10-2005, 13:45
uh-oh uh-oh uh-oh... isn't louise the one will was sleeping with and Kerrie paid a doc to say she was basically a wacko??????
more more more... more more more... more more more...
WHAT??? Oh post more please you have to well post more asap please
layne
xxx
Sorry for the delay again I've not been well
Layne I'm off to see Guys and Dolls too with Angeldelight I can't wait
Thanks for the replies and enjoy
Kerrie couldn’t believe it, she was out she was free
Louise- lost for words that’s not like you
Kerrie- how
Louise- they soon realised I wasn’t that barking I was released yesterday
Kerrie- and what was the idea, come here have a go
Louise- have a go you ruined my life
Kerrie- I’ll get the violins out shall I you ruined it yourself when you fell into bed with my husband you scheming little bitch
Louise- scheming me oh that is a beauty coming from you
Noah- babes let’s go come on
The punters in the pub stood staring at the two women the venom between them was pouring out fascinating them all
Louise- found yourself some poor fool to live your deluded life with you have ya
Kerrie- Louise meet my husband Noah King
Her voice laced with sarcasm
Louise- Noah, Will’s brother God you sick…oh I get it he knew you and his brother planned it together you really are evil aren’t you
Kerrie- Louise remember what I said no-one tries to take me for a mug not you not Will no-one I’d get the hell out of here before I do you some real damage
Louise- you don’t scare me
Kerrie- really
A smile played on her lips
Kerrie- then how come your eyes are filled with fear your swimming in it Louise your drowning in it
Louise shut her eyes and opened them again her eyes locked with Kerrie’s
Louise- you can’t run from what you did forever Kerrie the truth will out eventually
Kerrie couldn’t hold her anger in anymore and she hit Louise sending her flying into a nearby table
Noah grabbed Kerrie and Louise wiped the blood from her mouth
Noah- home now
Dragging his wife from the pub Louise smiled and ordered herself a large drink
Noah- what the hell was that all about?
Kerrie- work it out that’s Louise Phelps the two bit tart who had an affair with Will
Noah- the one you had sectioned
Kerrie nodded
Noah- Jesus Kerrie
Kerrie- I know I know it isn’t good but she can’t prove anything
Noah- prove anything what the hell could she prove
Kerrie- she knows about me setting up Will
Noah- what I thought you dealt with it not told some little bitch that you framed Will for arson which led to him committing suicide
Kerrie- like I needed reminding of the fact
Noah- I’m sorry
Kerrie- well you should be I live with the guilt not you and now I’m going to her spitting her witches poison around the Square I want her gone I want her away from me I don’t care how
Chrissie made her way up the stairs wearily a couple of hours on her feet and she was whacked out pregnancy definitely had an ill effect on her bodily functions, slumping onto the sofa she slowly closed her eyes thankful of five minutes piece and quiet but it wasn’t to last long when the piercing screams of her young daughter brought her abruptly from her thoughts
Chrissie made her way to her daughter and picked her up it was hard enough with one baby how was she going to cope with three
Chrissie smiled, looks like Jake was going be up a lot in the night because one thing was for sure this landlady needed her beauty sleep
squillyfer
31-10-2005, 21:30
Aww poor chrissie I'm sure they'll cope. Great drama from Kerrie as always
Louise is back then! There's going to be trouble. Poor Chrissie, 3 kids. More please
xxx
lil baby tash
31-10-2005, 22:46
poor chrissie she needs her sleep JAKE!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry for the delay again I've not been well
Layne I'm off to see Guys and Dolls too with Angeldelight I can't wait
Really, cool when ya going???
Fab stuff honey more soon xxxxxxxxxxxx Hope your better soon x
this is great please do more
Potato1992
03-11-2005, 19:46
its wicked
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