Sequel To Deception - Moving On

[WattsRulee]

post more plz

[Skits]

this is fantastic. please post more when you get a chance.

[Rach33]

Sorry AGAIN for the delay I'm useless I know

Layne I'm going on January the 11th (My birthday) what about you

Here I am again with my story thanks for the replies

When Kerrie opened her eyes the next morning reality hit her Louise was back in town and she meant business
Turning over she noticed Noah had already gone they’d argued furiously last night
Kerrie pulled herself out of bed and made her way to the window as she looked out onto the Square she noticed her watching the house
Despite fuming to herself Kerrie knew she needed to keep a lid on her anger she’d got rid of Louise Phelps once she’d certainly do it again

Jake- I hear I missed quite a show last night
Chrissie- you certainly did Kerrie went mental at the poor woman
Jake- well if I know Kerrie they’ll be more to come
He grinned and kissed Chrissie before turning to walk out
Jake- I shouldn’t be too long I just need to go over the books with Johnny
Chrissie- ok remember hospital appointment at three so you can’t be late
Jake- wouldn’t miss it for the world
Chrissie snorted and buttered herself some more toast

Dennis stared at his fiancé as she desperately tried to finalise their plans for the wedding, the pressures were definitely getting to her and with the added worry of the results if this failed he wasn’t sure how she’d take it but he knew that they’d try again
Sharon- that was the registry office
Dennis- what did they want
Sharon- they’ve had a cancellation and they knew we wanted the wedding to be sooner well I agreed
Dennis- agreed when for
Sharon- an hour
Dennis- an hour you are joking
Sharon- I’m fed up with all the plans Blah! Blah! Blah! Let’s get wed baby
He grinned and wrapped his arms around her waist
Dennis- all right you’re on
Sharon- well you better get dressed I’m not marrying you in nothing but a pair of boxers
Dennis- yes ma’am
He saluted her and strolled off to the bathroom for a quick shower

Kerrie left the house and made her way across the Square she stopped at where Louise sat on Arthur’s bench
Kerrie- comfy
Louise- very
Kerrie- trust me it won’t last I’ll personally see to it that your as uncomfortable as possible
She walked away with one plan in mind extinction
Kerrie dialled a number on her phone
Kerrie- hi it’s me I have a little problem that I want you to sort out for good…….

[Layne]

What is Kerrie gonna do!
Post more as soon as you can honey!

I was going the 7th January but nige said he weren't doing that one so we rearranged and i'm going 25th February now!
layne
xxx

[Angeldelight]

yay yay yay you posted... more more more... more more more...

[lil baby tash]

yay u posted more woot woot woot

[Skits]

brill u posted more. can we have more soon please!!!

[Rach33]

A big thanks and a big sorry for all the readers my new years resolution (A little late I know) will post story more often you can all have a go if I fail to keep my promise

Story is a bit up and down since both Chrissie and Dennis have disappeared off screen but I hope you enjoy anyway

That night as people gathered in the pub and giggly and secretive Dennis and Sharon decided to reveal their little secret
Dennis- me and Sharon have some news...
There was a pause
Jake- come on then don’t keep us waiting
Sharon- today we got married
There was a stunned gasp then everyone cheered and soon a party was starting

Kerrie watched from her window and people stayed at the pub partying she couldn’t have asked for a better way to keep everyone out of the Square
Noah had gone over ages ago they still hadn’t spoken properly since their argument last night he was stubborn ass when he wanted to be
Reaching for the gun resting on her bed side table she made her way down the stairs and out in the Square she’d had Louise tracked all day and knew exactly where she’d be

Chrissie and Jake smiled as they watched the happy couple
Chrissie- I wish we could marry
Jake- one day angel one day I promise
He kissed her lightly on her forehead and carried on serving the many punters

Kerrie knocked on the door to a dingy looking flat and Louise opened the surprise on her face was soon replaced with fear when she saw what Kerrie was holding

[Layne]

Jake- one day angel one day I promise

:wub: awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats soooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!
Fab as always honey! Post more when you can!
God i have missed you and this script :p *hugs*
luv ya
Layne
xxx

[squillyfer]

ooooh go kerrie

[shannisrules]

this is really good carry on soon

[sheilamarie]

wow this is fab more asap hun

[Angeldelight]

amazing clap clap. more more more

[hayley]

yay you did some more!!!!!
its well good!

[Rach33]

Sorry for the wait and thanks for the replies

Louise- your making a huge mistake
Kerrie- no you made the huge mistake when you screwed with my life
Louise- I loved him I can’t help that
Kerrie- love him..he was a creep who got what he deserved I’m not sorry he’s dead
Louise- yes you are I know you are death wasn’t what you wanted for him, you wanted him to suffer when he killed himself that made you hate him even more he’d taken the cowards way out hadn’t he
Kerrie stood back reeling
Louise- hit a nerve sweetie
Kerrie raised the gun and pointed it at her rival’s head
Kerrie- don’t push it
Louise- shoot me go on I dare you you’ve already taken away everything from me why not my life
Kerrie- oh please let me get out the violins
Louise- like I said Kerrie just get on with it
Kerrie wiped the tears from her eyes and dropped the gun to the floor and ran out, she felt sick, she couldn’t do it, she couldn’t kill her
Running back home Kerrie rushed to the bathroom and threw up
Meanwhile over at Louise’s flat she smiled menaceingly
Louise- oh Kerrie you just haven’t got the stomach for murder have you but if you can’t I will
Picking up the gun she tossed it over into nearby bin she was gonna make it slow and painful after all it was the least she deserved

Kerrie composed herself and made her way across the Square to the party
Noah noticed her the minute she walked in and his first thoughts of anger changed to worry he’d seen that look on her face before and he knew something wasn’t right
Noah pushed through the crowd and took his wife’s hands they were freezing cold
Noah- Hun are you ok
She looked at him and nodded
Noah- let’s go home come on
Taking his pregnant wife more firmly this time he led her out of the pub and home
Noah- what happened
Kerrie- nothing everything is fine now

Three Months past with a blur as Kerrie tried to put Louise and that night firmly behind her
Now as she lay in hospital cradling her newborn daughter she knew she’d made the right decision
Kerrie didn’t want to bring up her baby with a murder hanging over her
Noah- you did brilliantly sweetheart
Kerrie- thanks she’s beautiful isn’t she
Noah- she sure is Evie Grace King has a nice ring to it
Kerrie- I know it does I chose it remember
Noah- and here was me thinking it was a joint decision
Kerrie- no I came up with the names honey and you just agreed
Noah- so I helped make the decision
Kerrie- I hardly call saying yes to a name making a decision
Noah- do we have to argue now it’s suppose to be the happiest day of our lives
Kerrie- whose arguing
Noah sighed and kissed his wife’s forehead
Noah- I love you despite everything
Kerrie- you mean me being right all he time
Noah- something like that
Kerrie smiled

Jake- hey baby just had a call from Noah a healthy baby girl
Chrissie- whoopee do for her I wish I had gone into labour by now but no I still have to lug this weight around
Jake kissed Chrissie
Jake- you look radiant
Chrissie threw the teatowel she was holding at him
Chrissie- radiant I look radiant well thanks a bunch next you’ll be saying I’m glowing or blossoming or just a great big fat whale
Jake tried not to smile as Chrissie stormed off hormonal really wasn’t the word

[Layne]

:lol: at chrissie and jake!
This is fab as always more sooon
Layne
xxx

[Bree]

wow thats fab hun more soon x.x.x.x

[Rach33]

I'm back and thanks for reading :bow:

Chrissie- I was thinking babes we could have a huge sort of marque in the Square
Jake- yeah I guess we could are you sure you want all this fuss I mean the twins haven’t even arrived yet and your planning our commitment ceremony
Chrissie- I have to plan now before I’m swamped in nappies, talcum powder and formula milk
Jake- ok Miss Smarty Pants and don’t forget our daughter’s first birthday in two weeks times
Chrissie- oh please not more parties can’t we just have a few people over and be done with it
Jake- course we can my angel in fact I’ll sort that out and you carry on with our ceremony plans
Chrissie- you’re an angel…oh and go and see Noah find out what he wants for Evie and Kerrie’s welcome home party
Jake- what now
Chrissie- yes now before you forget
Jake- yes captain right away captain
Chrissie- I hope you haven’t forgotten that we still have a spare room if you fancy sleeping there tonight
Jake- I’m off before I really put my foot in it
Chrissie- good idea
Jake left and Chrissie sat down to make some phone calls
Chrissie- ouch
These two were certainly kicking a lot today
Chrissie- pack it in the pair of you I have a million things to do today

Sharon- exciting isn’t it a new baby on the square
Dennis- it sure is
They were sitting in a hospital corridor
Sharon- I’m nervous
Dennis- it will be fine trust me
Sharon- and what if it’s not
Dennis- baby listen everything will be fine
Sharon- I hope so I don’t know how much more of this I can take
Dennis kissed his wife’s delicate hand and squeezed it tight
Dennis- we’re a team me and you we get through everything together
Sharon- I know

Kerrie- look I’ve been in this place a week now I feel fine I look dreadful and the food’s crap
Nurse- you can go home tomorrow you and baby
Kerrie- I should hope so by the time I get out of this place no doubt I’ll have picked up some deadly disease and be back in here before I know it
Nurse- can you keep your voice down Mrs King your scaring the other patients
Kerrie- whoppee doo
Nurse- if you can’t keep a civil tongue
Noah- my wife not causing you grief is she
Nurse- she’s frightening the other mums
Noah- I’m sure she is looking like that
Kerrie- oh charming
Noah- well pumpkin the no make up look and the hospital nightie look really isn’t you
Kerrie- if you open your mouth one more time I will personally see that you never ever re-produce again
Noah- is that a promise
Nurse- Mr and Mrs King if you don’t mind
Kerrie- I can leave tomorrow thank goodness
Noah- what tomorrow are you sure
Nurse- very sure believe me
Noah- that’s a pity I had a card game planned
Kerrie- don’t even joke about that Noah King or I will……
Noah- what
He bent down and kissed her firmly
Kerrie wrapped her arms around him
Noah- what will you do Mrs King
Kerrie- now that would be telling
She pulled him closer and kissed him again

Louise entered the hospital and soon found the maternity ward
Louise caught a nurse
Louise- could you give these to Mrs King please
Nurse- wouldn’t you like to give them to her yourself
Louise- I can’t stop…just say an old friend dropped by with my deepest sympathies
Nurse nodded not quite understanding the strange message
She took the flowers over to where Noah, Kerrie and little baby Evie were
Nurse- lilies for you Mrs King
Kerrie- lilies
Noah- lilies are a funeral flower
Nurse- I thought they were a strange chioce as well, they don’t just signify death though they are also a symbol of bad luck
Noah- that’s just as bad who sent them
Nurse- a woman she said she was an old friend and she said something about sending her deepest sympathies
Kerrie- give them here
Kerrie took the flowers and picked out the card and read it
The colour drained from her face
Noah- what is it
He took the card and read the message aloud
Noah- Tick Tock Kerrie your time is up
Kerrie- it’s just someone’s idea of a joke
Noah- no this is serious who sent it
Kerrie- Louise I put money on it

[Bree]

wow thats fab hun i love this script
post more soon bree x.x.x

[Layne]

Grrrr louise!

But :lol: hehe jake and chrissie and Noah and Kerrie!
More soon honey! :wub:

[Rach33]

I have been neglecting this script and I am very sorry i'm a very bad person i know

Well here I am anther part to my story enjoy and very sowwie to all my readers I am building up to the finale and I promise you it's got a lot of twists and turns Thank you again

Special thanks to Layne your a star and always reply so this ones for you :bow:

Kerrie climbed out the car with Noah carrying their newborn daughter, she was exhausted and slightly concerned, Louise was out to get her at all costs, no matter who got hurt
Noah- you ok gorgeous
Kerrie flashed him one of her smiles but he saw through it very quickly
Noah- just relax I’ll protect angel I promise she can’t hurt us anymore we’re a family
Kerrie- I know it’ll be fine
Kerrie knew deep down this was one fight Louise was not giving up on, she was coming after her and there was nothing she could do about it, except wait

Chrissie- no I said I wanted… oh never mind
She slammed the phone down, bloody florists
Jake- problem
Chrissie- nope where’s our daughter
Jake- being smothered by Pat downstairs
Chrissie- well she can keep her for now because I have to go through these with you
Jake- what
Chrissie- commitment vows dumb ass
Jake- who you calling a dumb ass, dumb ass’s girlfriend
Chrissie grinned, he could always put a smile on her face
Chrssie- well what do you want to say
Jake- dunno what do you want me to say
Chrissie- how commited you are Blah! Blah! And all that
Jake- I am commited
Chrissie- ohhhhhhh just go away I’ll write it go on your useless
Jake- but you still love me even though I’m useless
Chrissie- I’ll think about it
Jake kissed her gently on her nose before walking out

Sharon and Dennis stood outside the hospital unable to let the news sink in properly
Sharon- can you believe it
Dennis shook his head unable to speak
He took Sharon’s face in his hands and kissed her, both had tears streaming down their faces
Sharon- I love you
Dennis- I know god I love you too
He kissed her again clinging to her, not wanting to let her go
Sharon- what she we tell everyone
Dennis- whatever you want to tell them
Sharon- nothing for now this is our secret, it’s our time to celebrate
Dennis- I bloody love you Mrs Rickman
Sharon took his hands in hers and squeezed them tight before they set off back to Albert Square

Kerrie- no I’m staying here
Noah- come on baby just for half an hour people want to meet Evie
Kerrie- half an hour
Noah- yep then you can come back here I promise
Kerrie- all right but I need to put my face on first so give me ten minutes
Noah smiled- ten minutes try twenty
Kerrie glared at her husband
Noah- I was joking
Kerrie- funny ha ha
Half an hour later they left the flat and headed over to the Vic
As they crossed the Square a familiar face was watching from the shadows

[Layne]

I have been neglecting this script and I am very sorry i'm a very bad person i know

Well here I am anther part to my story enjoy and very sowwie to all my readers I am building up to the finale and I promise you it's got a lot of twists and turns Thank you again

Special thanks to Layne your a star and always reply so this ones for you :bow:



1. yes you are a very bad person!
2. Yay another part but what a finale :crying: No you can't end it it must go on forever i love this fic, (but yey twists and turns)
and
3. Aww thanks honey :wub: I do love this fic!!!

Evil louise Grrrrrrrr, but how cute are jake and chrissie :wub: And what news have sharon and dennis got prae thee tell?

[Angeldelight]

yay yay yay you posted more. Ooooooh it'a all happening i'm so glad we're having a ******* ****!!! hehe she'll probably kill me if i actually wirte it down. post more soon, pretty pwease