here here.. and to rub their faces in it even further.. get Jon to give the Club to MandyOriginally Posted by JoJo
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here here.. and to rub their faces in it even further.. get Jon to give the Club to Mandy
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Now that would be pure genius!!!! *gets on bended knees hoping Bry and Abi are reading*here here.. and to rub their faces in it even further.. get Jon to give the Club to Mandy
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INT. IQBAL & MARCUS FLAT - DAY
The front door opens as Sanjita and Iqbal come in followed by Marcus who has just been discharged from hospital. Iqbal helps his son towards the sofa.
Sanjita: You take it easy now...it's a miracle you're still here...
Marcus: I'm sorry, you know, for the fire...
Iqbal: You've got nothing to be sorry about, if anyone's apologising it should be Craig bloody Harvey!
Marcus: He shouldn't be able to do this...
Iqbal: Well he has and we can't turn the clocks back...we have a burnt down club...
Marcus: Yeah but the insurance will cover surely?
Iqbal: Some of it, but we haven't got enough to do it back up just him Harvey to go doing it again...that man wants our club and he doesnt care what he has to do to get it...
Sanjita: What are you saying babe?
Iqbal: I can do without the stress, what with the baby and all... I'm selling up...
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INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
Val enters the pub and sits down beside Leah who is already seated, having a drink. It's clear they don't really approve of each other.
Leah: Val
Val: Leah
Val sits down. Leah looks down at her, as if it say "why am i sitting with you?" Nick enters the pub with a pile of folders and a breifcase under his arm, looking flustered.
Nick: Hi ladies, can I get you both a drink?
Leah: Cut to the chase Nick, what's this all about?
Nick sits down opposite them in the booth, putting his folders down.
Nick: Well as you know dad's got this new lesuire complex in the pipeline...
Val: Don't we just know it
Nick: Dad's given me the responsibility of assigning jobs, we want locals working there, and well you're names have come up...
Leah: Work? I don't work...
Nick: Not even as the main fintess instructor at the gym? I thought that was your thing, and well I thought you'd want something to do with your time...
Leah: Hmm, I suppose I could be persauded...
Val: And what about me?
Nick: Well after all your years at the salon...and the fact that you lost your job at the bingo hall... we want you to run the salon and beauty salon, if that's okay?
Val: Really!? You joking me!?
Nick: No, you're the best hair cutter this side of Devon...
Val: Wow! I'm dead chuffed! I'll get drinks to seal the deal!
Val runs off towards the bar, an excited look on her face.
Nick: So then, what am I going to have to do to persaude you?
Leah: Dya know what? Stuff the persuasion's I'll take it, need my own independance...
Nick: Great! One problem though..Craig...
Leah: What about him?
Nick: Well it's no secret he doesn't like us Taylors, will he be ok you working for us?
Leah: He'll have to be ok, becuase I want to... so then when do I start?
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mmm wonder what Craig will say.. I know Leah is saying she is independant but I think he has a lot more hold on her than she realises
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Craig isn't going to be a happy bunny is he! I can foresee trouble ahead.
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glad they all got out the fire ok.
It was really sweet the scene between Val and the girls.
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INT: RED RUM PUB UPSTAIRS FLAT- Day
Hayley is sitting in the sofa, waiting for her money. She sits, patting her stomach smugly. Amy and Patrick walk in..
Patrick: This is immoral..
Hayley: I'm just taking the money which is on offer. Nothing wrong with that.
Patrick: Well, you haven't said no!
Hayley: And neither would you have!
Patrick: Well... I've never been pregnant!
Hayley: Thank the lord for that...
Amy walks over to Hayley, and gives her the money. She flicks through the buddle of notes..
Hayley: Hmm... Thats great..
Hayley pats her stomach again, trying to annoy Amy..
Hayley: Its like all my Christmases have come at once...
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INT: HARVEY/KAGE HOUSE- Day
Leah goes gome, and talks to Craig in the kitchen...
Leah: I've got myself a new job, Craig!
Craig: Oh right... Where abouts?
Leah: With the Taylors, at their new complex...
Craig: Oh no you dont..
Leah: Excuse me?!
Craig: You can't work for them!
Leah: And why not?!
Craig: They're the enemy! Taking all the tourists, and the money..
Leah: They're what made this village. They put it on the map. I wanted a job, and i've got one, and like hell i'm turning it down!
Leah stands tall and confident.
Leah: I need to get out there and meet people. Have a chat with people i've never seen before... I need to have a life. I can't stay around here like some boring housewife like Mandy did. I refuse, point blank! I'm not your slave, and i wont be treated like one.
Leah kicks her heel, and begins to walk away..
Leah: So come on, get your gladrags on, we're celebrating!
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INT. IQBAL & MARCUS' FLAT - DAY
Iqbal: I can do without the stress, what with the baby and all... I'm selling up...
Marcus: No way dad! You can't!
Iqbal: I'm sorry Marcus, but I don't want it anymore, it was a mad idea all along, I've never known the first thing about running a nightclub...
Marcus: Yeh and what about me!? I have half shares in the place!
Iqbal: Yesterday you were all too ken to hand it over to Craig...
Marcus: Yeah well it's a matter of prinicipal, he can't just set fire to people's livelyhoods and expect them to sell up!
Iqbal: Yes! Yes he can! That man is dangerous, and I for one don't want to get in the way of him!
Marcus: Coward!
Iqbal: And so what if I am!? The safety of me and my family come before some silly nightlcub...just sell up Marcus and enjoy the money...
Marcus: This is just wrong...
Iqbal: Yes, it is, but there's nothing we can do now... Craig has won...
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