Devon Seas Season 2

[Bryan]

Can i point out that i've been written Devon Seas for exactly 1 year now

Theres been points when i didn't think we'd make it, but we're here and still going strong, so yeah... Party time!

I'm glad you've remember Abs, as I wouldn't have

But honestly, jokes aside I wouldn't have been able to do this without you. You write amazing scripts and are as bid a part of ds as the characters and the fans. You're a great mate and thanks for the help you've given and any you give in the future!

[Chloe O'brien]

My word 1 year old ready, time does fly by. Well done you both and keep up the good work.

[Katy]

over a year, blimey, it last longer than EE at this rate. Cant ait to see Lorraines reaction to that.

[DaVeyWaVey]

I love a psycho and Lorraine beats Cathy Bradford hands down! I wonder what she'll do next?!

[Abi]

INT: MARBAL NIGHTCLUB- Day

Marcus and Iqbal are argueing in the nightclub..

Marcus: You know what Craig is capable of, you dont want to get on the wrong side of him. For your sake, and mine!

Iqbal: Thats never going to happen! We can't get everywhere in life by bullying people, and forcing them to get trodden on.

Marcus: You can't put pride over your life!

Iqbal: You think i'd let him kill me?!

Marcus: Would you seriously have a choice with a person like Craig?!

They pause, and he continues

Marcus: You're going to regret what you said to him... You really will, i can tell...

[Abi]

INT: ABANDONED WAREHOUSE- Day

Lorraine stands, facing James, shocked. She talks in a more hushed voice..

Lorraine: Cancer?!

James: Yes... I'm sorry, but i couldn't carry on seeing you, when my wife might have been dying!

Lorraine snarls, looking angry. She shouts at James...

Lorraine: You're WIFE?! You didn't ****ing care about her all those times we were having sex! She didn't so much as cross you're ****ing mind!

James: It was a mistake, Lorraine! I know that now... I love Val more than anything, and if i have to die because of that, then so be it!

Lorraine holds the gun up at him, circling him. James tenses up..

James: Look at them..

Lorraine maintains her eye contact with James..

James: Just ****ing look at them! What you've done to them! Shes got cancer, and you put her through this?! Shes suffered enough, she doesn't need your sick mind games anymore. None of them do!

Lorraine looks at the 3 women, struggling in the centre of the warehouse....

Lorraine: All i wanted was you, James. You and me.. None of these kids, no wife...

She moves back towards James, still holding the gun at him

Lorraine: You wanted some cheap, tacky woman over me.... Over my dead body, James. Over my dead body..

She trails off, not making sense. She turns away, and holds the gun at her head..

Lorraine: All i wanted was for us to be happy...

James launches forward at Lorraine. He falls just in front of her..

James: Lorraine!

Lorraine pulls the trigger, and collapses to the floor next to James, her lifeless arm lying over his body.

The camera pans out... The 3 women staring, shocked and terrified in the middle of the room... With Lorraine's dead body lying over James. James looks shocked... Lorraine finally rested where she had fought to be for so long

[Siobhan]

Oh my god.. this is fantastic.. Lorraine did the only good thing in the end killing herself

I just want to add. Bry starting writing this way before christmas 2005 and I was hooked from first time I read it.. Bry said he might have to give up cause he couldn't write it all by himself which I didn't want to happen so I want to say another thank you to abi for taken this on with him.. With both of you working on this, I can get my daily dose of a soap I would love to see on tV.. Thank you guys, I am still hooked over a year on and I want more of this!!!

[Skits]

great stuff as usual guys. i see craig back to his bullying ways.

well done on the fab writing and like i said in season 1 it's a pity this wasn't a soap on televison.

[Jojo]

Well, blooming heck!!! Lorraine took herself out and no one else! Thought she might shoot one of the others before herself so total

Will they sell to Craig... It would be even better if they sold to Jon under Craig's feet lol

Great stuff guys and thanks Abs for coming on board to allow DS to carry on to where it is today. And thanks Bry for bring DS to Soapboards in the first place

[Bryan]

INT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - DAY

Lorraine falls to the floor dead. Val, James, Claire and Emma breath a sigh of relief, but look on at the scene in absolute horror.

The doors to the warehouse burst open and the police storm in, followed by Patrick, Romeo, Chris and Tom.

Tom: Oh thank god!

The police untie the girls. Tom runs towards Emma, they hug and kiss.

Tom: I thought I was going to loose you...

Romeo and Chris are unsure what to do, Claire gestures for them to give her a hug, they both hug her. The events of the past few weeks appearing insignficant.

Claire: No matter what, we all can't fall out, life's too short.

Val is untied. James walks over to her and gives her a hug.

James: I'm so glad you're safe.

Val, naturally, isn't eager to kiss and make up. James gestures for Emma and Claire to come towards them. He hugs them all in turn.

James: I'm so sorry for all this, it's all been my fault...but don't worry, it's over, it's all over now...

The 4 hug each other. As the camera pans out to show the scene of devastation and a family united.