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Originally Posted by bondboffin
Glad you're enjoying it.
But remember, the only copy Tanya had was at Bellamy house, Jared found it and burnt it, hence why Hilary was so smug, no evidence, no conviction.One copy !!!! Nooooooo!!!! Why didn't she have a back up copy?! Silly girl!!! Her only evidence against her and its gone!
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INT. VALENTINO'S RESTAURAUNT - DAY
Mandy walks into Valentinos, looking a bit uneasy, Jon catches her eye, she walks towards him and sits down. Jon grabs her hand and kisses it.
Jon: I'm really glad you could make it, I felt as tough I'd blown my chances with you Mandy...
Mandy: Yeah, well seen as you'd made the effort to book a table...
Jon: Don't be so coy, you wouldn't have come if you didn't want to give us another go..
Mandy: Look Jon, I've been hurt too many times before, by people like you and Craig...
Jon: Please, don't compare me to him...
Mandy: Well you're both gangster apparantly...
Jon: Yes, but unlike Craig I have respect for people I like... and believe me Mandy I have no intentions of hurting you...
Mandy: Craig said the same thing... at the end of the day it's just words...I need you to promise me, that if we become an item, you will treat me well...
Jon holds Mandy's hand and says each word, with emotion.
Jon: I promise you.
Jon pours Mandy a glass of wine.
Jon: I was married to my wife for many years, before she died...I loved her with all my heart, and never saw any harm come to her. I sheltered her from my... lifestyle... I drew a clear line between that and my private life...
Mandy: That's nice to hear, I'm sorry to hear about her death...
Jon: It came as a blow, as I'm sure you can imagine, to love someone and have them taken away from you so cruely...I never thought I'd get a second chance at love, and then you came along...
Mandy: Easy now, we're only just getting to know each other
Jon: Oh I know, but I have a feeling this is the start of a long lasting, and very promising relationship.
The pair toast their glasses, and smile at each other.
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INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - DAY
James rushes towards the house. The front door is wide open. James hurries into the house, breathing heavily.
James: Val!? Claire!? Emma!?
No response. He walks into the living room, which is totally ransacked. The TV and mirror smashed, sofa and chairs sliced open, curtains torn, dvds and ornaments thrown all over the floor.
James: Jesus...
James phone rings. Lorraine is calling him. A disturbed James picks up the phone immeditaley.
James: What the hell have you done with them!? Where are my girls!?
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INT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - DAY
A dark and depressing warehouse. Val, Claire and Emma are sat on wooden chairs, tied up with rope and gagged. Lorraine is dressed in black leather, pacing around the three in a predator/prey fashion, on the phone to James.
Lorraine: They are in safe hands...as long as you exactly what I say..and if you don't...I'll kill them all...
Lorraine cocks her gun and points it at the girls heads, muffled screaming can be heard trough the phone as the scene cuts back to James. He stands on the spot, petrified, awaiting Lorraine's instructions...
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EXT. DEVON ROADS - DAY
James is in his car, speeding down the empty Devon Road, on the phone to Lorraine. Sweat is pouring from his face, as he exceeds the speed limit.
James: Why the hell have you done this eh!?
Lorraine: You know why....
James: You twisted bitch!
Lorraine: Time's ticking James...
James: You tell me where the are! You tell me where the hell they are, now!
Lorraine: Do as I say and you all will become clear...
James: Damn you Lorraine!
Lorraine: Oh by the way, have you found my little present yet?
James: Present?...What present?
James looks around, confused. He chacthes a black box on the back seat in the corner of his eye. With one hand remaining on the wheel, the other reaches out to open the box, half focusing his attentions on what's inside the box.
James: Jesus Christ!
In the box is a bomb with a count down timer on it. 10 seconds, 9 seconds, 8 seconds...
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don't leave it like this. please please please!
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a bit of good news.. Abi is posting 2 more later so we might get something from her
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a bit of good news.. Abi is posting 2 more later so we might get something from her
brilliant, will we be punished and not got any tomorrow though?
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INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - DAY
Tanya bangs on the front door of Bellamy House, looking worse for wear. Hair ruffled, make up worn off Tanya is a physical/emotional wreck.
Lauren opens the door, a smug smile on her face.
Lorraine: Well if it isn't little miss sexuality crisis...
Tanya screams as she lashes out at Lauren. The pair engadge in a vicious bithcight as they grab hold of each each other, throwing themselves around the room.
Tanya: You bloody bitch! Ruining me and Will's relationship!
Lauren: You're the one that ruined it, by hopping into bed with his sister!
Tanya: And whose fault is that!? You and your twisted mind games!
Tanya flings Lauren into a side table, Lauren falls backwards, collapasing onto a table, knocking an expensive vase over. Will rushes down the stairs, having heard a commotion.
Will: Tanya!? Lauren!? What the hell is going on!?
Tanya: Will...
Lauren: She just flung me into this table, she's phycotic aswell as lesbian!
Will: Shut up Lauren! (To Tanya) What do you want?
Tanya: To talk...
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EXT. DEVON ROADS - DAY
10 seconds, 9 seconds, 8 seconds...
James hastily breaks in the middle of the road. He hurries to unbuckle his seatbelt and open the door, scared for his life.
James staggers out of the car, and tries to run away from the car as fast as he can. Within a matter of seconds a loud explosion can be heard as the car goes up in flames and is flung into the air.
James is thrown back by the impact of the explosion. Close up of James lying unconcious, bleeding....
WILL JAMES SURVIVE?
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