Merseysiders 2006.

[bakedbean]

I think Tommys proposal will be for Susan to run the pub with him

[baileya]

Heres the next part.
Scene 1
Outside the Pub. Tommy is looking at the pub licence sign smiling. Tommy enters the pub. Ste approaches Tommy.
Ste: Tommy...its about the game of poker.
Tommy: What Ive given you fake notes?
Ste: You know what I mean Tommy, the pub.
Tommy: Oh yes the pub. The pub which I won off you.
Ste: Tommy can we forget about it?
Tommy: (Thinking) This is hard...NO!
Ste: Well what am I going to do?
Tommy: Ill tell you what you are going to do. Your going to pack your bags because Im giving you one day to get out!
Ste: What am I going to tell Maria?
Tommy: You tell Maria to pack her bags quickly and get out of my pub!
(Ste heads off upstairs with Tommy smiling)

Scene 2
The hound. Upstairs Maria is sat having a cup of tea when Ste enters panicky.
Maria: Whats up with you? It looks like your going to have a heart attack.
Ste: Ive got something to tell you.
Maria: Whatve you lost?
Ste: The pub!
Maria: You what?
Ste: I lost the pub in poker to Tommy.
Maria: (Crying) D...dont...tell me hes...kicking us out.
Ste: Yes, weve got a day to get out!
Maria: Brilliant! Where we going to live?
Ste: I dont know.
Maria: Im going for a walk.
(Maria walks off)

Scene 3
The bookies. Tommy walks in with Paul,Barry and Ian talking.
Barry: So...why have you gathered us all in here then?
Tommy: Ive got the pub. Im taking over tomorrow and Im moving in upstairs Im asking Susan does she want to come with me.
Barry: Good for you.
Tommy: Look Ive got to go to Susans weve got a date.

Scene 4
Maria is crying walking through the market when Audrey sees her and approaches.
Audrey: Maria...what is it love?
Maria: Me and Ste have been kicked out of the pub by Tommy Gallagher...Ste lost in a game of poker...weve got nowhere to live.
Audrey: That Gallagher! Look love you can move in with us.
(Audrey gives Maria a hug)

Scene 5
The Jones. Tommy and Susan are talking.
Susan: Are you ready then?
Tommy: Not yet. Ive got something to ask you and tell you.
Susan: Go on then.
Tommy: Ive got the pub!
Susan: You what?
Tommy: I won the pub in a game of poker and I want you to move in with me also the kids of course.
Susan: Of course I will. I cant believe it Ive always wanted to be a landlady! Can we go now?
Tommy: Not just yet (Tommy pulls out a ring and gets on one knee) Susan Jones...will you marry me?
Susan: (Smiling with a tear in her eye) Marry you? Marry you? Of course I will Tommy Gallagher!!!!!!!!!!!!

So Tommy and Susan are engaged.
Next part tomorrow.

[bakedbean]

Oh no dont do it Susan i hope there is a twist in the wedding, i really hope she does not go through with this

[baileya]

Heres the next part.
Scene 1
Outside the pub. Tommy has his cases. He enters the pub to see Maria and Ste sitting at a table with their cases.
Tommy: Well...your 5 minutes early. Wheres the keys?
(Ste hands Tommy a set of keys)
Maria: You tried to leave us homeless!
Tommy: Its not my fault I had the better hand in poker is it? I played by the rules and I am taking what is rightfully mine. Now, get out of my pub! Were not open yet.
(Ste and Maria leave. They are heading over to Audreys)
Ste: Love dont worry we will soon be back on our feet. We will be at Audreys for a week if that. Ill go and look for a flat tomorrow.
Maria: Its going to be hard ste, we need money.

Scene 2
The Hound. Tommy is stood behind the bar drinking a glass of whisky. He drinks it and heads out onto the street and off to Susans when he is stopped by David.
David: Gallagher!
(Tommy ignores him)
David: I said GALLAGHER! LOOK AT ME WHEN IM SPEAKING TO YOU.
(Tommy angrily turns around)
Tommy: Excuse me! Ask me politely.
David: Why should I ask you politely eh? Your nothing special, you think Im scared off you Gallagher youve got another thing coming.
Tommy: Now youve put a foot over the line scum bag. You put one more over it and I will seriously hurt you. Ill kneecap you!
David: Do it!
(Tommy grabs David by the scruff of the neck)
Tommy: Ill do it alright, Ill bide my time but I will do it.
David: I know something which could seriously hurt you Gallagher and I mean seriously.

Scene 3
The shop. Barry is behind the counter when Tommy enters.
Tommy: Do me a favour?
Barry: What?
Tommy: Give that David guy a beeting.
Barry: Certainly.
Tommy: Ive got to get back to the pub.

Scene 4
The pub. Tommy enters, the whole pub are questioning where Ste and Maria are. As only Pat is behind the bar.
Tommy: (Grabbing everyones attention) I think you may all be wondering where Ste and Maria are tonight and I know that. The hound pub is under new ownership from today and that owner will be me. You may think why would Ste sell up and I have an answer because I won the pub off him.
(The whole pub is silent)

Scene 5
David is walking down an alley when Barry sneaks up behind him. Barry taps him on the shoulder.
Barry: Good day David.
(Barry punches David and continues to punch him on the floor)

So Barry has beaten up David. What will Davids reaction be. Is Tommy getting nastier?
Next part tomorrow.

[bakedbean]

Oh my gosh Barry beats up David??? I hope Tommy gets nastier i really do!!!

[baileya]

Heres the next part
Scene 1
A girl is walking down the street with cases when she spots the pub. She tries to open the door but it is locked. She rings the intercom.
Tommy: Hello. Whoose there?
Girl: Its Beth your daughter.
Tommy: My daughter? Ive not got a daughter?
Beth: Your Ste arent you?
Tommy: No hes the previous owner hes now living at 31 Liverpool Street.
(Beth walks off towards Audreys)

Scene 2
The street. A badly wounded David is walking down the street with a bad expression on his face. He heads towards the pub.

Scene 3
Audreys flat. Audrey,Ste and Maria are talking when there is a knock at the door. Audrey answers.
Audrey: Hello who are you?
Beth: Im Beth is Ste in?
Audrey: Yes come through. Ste someone is here to see you.
(Beth follows Audrey through to the living room)
Ste: Whoose this?
Beth: You dont know me then?
Ste: No. Who are you?
Beth: Your daughter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Maria: You what? Ive not had any kids with you. You know I cant have kids Ste. That means she must of been with someone else.
Ste: My daughter? You must be mistaken love.
Beth: No Im not. Remember about 15 years ago? You slept with a prostitute?
(Ste is speechless)
Maria: You slept with a prostitute!!!!!
Ste: We were having rows
Maria: YOU SLEPT WITH A PROSTITUTE AND YOU HAVE A DAUGHTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! STE THIS IS SERIOUS.
Ste: No, I dont believe it.
Beth: Its true.
Ste: Well what you doing here?
Beth: Ive come to see my daddy

Scene 4
The pub. Tommy is on the phone when David enters behind him and taps Tommy on the shoulder.
Tommy: (Turning around) Ill have to go I have a visitor (Tommy puts the phone down) Whats happened to you then?
David: You know damn well whats happened to me Gallagher!
Tommy: (Laughing) I know I do. Hes done a good job hasnt he?
David: I warned you Gallagher I know something which is going to be the downfall of the great Tommy Gallagher.
Tommy: (Ignoring what David has just said) Mmmmm I think I told Barry break both your arms not just one.
David: You should listen to me Gallagher.
Tommy: Why David? Whats going to be the downfall of me?
David: I know.
Tommy: You know what? What day it is? Well done.
David: I know I was in Liverpool Street one night before you know Tommy.
Tommy: Oh wow. Good for you.
David: It was the night of some fire at your shop. I saw you coming out of there. You killed Damien Jones!!!! Now the balls in my court. You cross me youll be going down for a long time Gallagher!

So who would of thought it David knows about Tommy killing Damien! And whats next for Stephan and Maria now that Stes daughter is here?
Next part tomorrow.

[bakedbean]

Ohhhh david knows man this is going to get intresting will Tommy get rid of David???

[baileya]

Heres the next part. And as you may see I have changed the format slightly.
1. Audreys flat. We see Maria sat at the table with her head in her hands. Audrey enters.
Audrey: You alright love?
Maria: No. I cant believe it Audrey why did he do this too me.
Audrey: Maria it would of been a one off. Think about it, this happened over 15 years ago. You were only young then. You tell me a person who didnt do something stupid when they were young.
Maria: Its not that Audrey its the fact that he kept it from me Ive always wanted kids, always. Thats my dream to have a family with Ste but I cant now, not around here, not with all these painful memories.

2. The Bookies. Tommy enters to see Paul,Tim and Barry happily chatting away.
Tommy: Erm excuse me...dont you have work Barry? Dont you run the shop these days?
Barry: Yeh but im on my coffee break. Whats up bruv? Your not usually like this when I take a break?
Tommy: Nothing,nothing. Im just worried.
Barry: Tommy Gallagher worried? Why whats happened?
Tommy: David.
Barry: What about him aint is arm fully broke yet?
Tommy: He knows.
Barry: Knows what?
Tommy: About the killing. He knows about us killing Damien. Hes threatened to hand my name into the police!

3. Audreys flat. Ste enters the living room to see Audrey hugging Maria.
Ste: Ill go. Ill be back later.
Maria: No...sit down, we have to talk.
(Ste sits down)
Maria: We cant go on like this Ste. Im issuing you with a choice Im leaving one way or the other but if its with you, you decide. I cant stay here with you. So we move away...or get divorced!!!!!!!
Ste: Im not leaving you. When shall we go?
Maria: In a hour. Im just ringing the taxi.

4. The bookies.
Tim: So what are you going to do?
Tommy: Ive cracked it! Were going to rob the factory on the highstreet, but the catch is we will set up David!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

5. Audreys flat. Ste and Maria have their cases when a taxi beeps they head out onto the front and get into the taxi. Maria winds the window down.
Maria: Bye Audrey.
Audrey: Bye love.
(The taxi speeds off with Audrey waving at Maria and Ste)

So its the end of Maria and Ste. Will the factory robbery work?
Next part tomorrow.

[baileya]

Heres the next part. And its the factory robbery.
1. Tommy is walking down the street with his usual beeming smile on his face when he sees David.
David: Why are you so happy?
Tommy: I have a proposition for you but I cant say anything about it here. Be over the pub in about half an hour and Ill tell you more.
David: Ill be there.

2. The Bookies. Tommy enters with Barry,Paul and Tim stood around.
Tim: So what did you want?
Tommy: Its on I think tonight is the night we put David away forever.
Tim: Right we will go and get changed ready.
Tommy: Ill be back with more details.
(Tommy leaves and heads over to the pub where David is waiting outside)
Tommy: Right come in
(They enter the pub)
David: Come on then whats the big proposition?
Tommy: Instead of you blackmailing me, I have a way in which both of us can make some big money.
David: Really? How?
Tommy: Tonight there will be a factory robbery with me involved. I have sources that there is £500,000 in the safe. The option for you is do you want to join forces and have £250,000 each? Its your choice but I need to know because we have to get going.
David: Ill be there.
Tommy: Ok then be over at my bookies in about 15 minutes.

3. The bookies. Tommy, Barry, Paul and Tim are all sat waiting when Tommy gets a call from David.
Tommy: Its him...Hello, right your on your way over? We will be on the front in the red car.
(They head out onto the front and get into the car. David comes and gets in the back.)
David: Lets go!

4. The factory. They are in the office with the safe in.
Paul: Put the code in quick!
(Tim puts the code in and opens the safe. He takes the money out)
David: Get in there. Right lets go.
Tommy: David youve just dropped the keys pick them up.
(David bends over to pick the keys up and Tommy punches him in the jaw. Barry starts kicking David and puts the gun on his chest)
Tommy: (Pulling about £1,000 out of the bag and putting it on David) David tuttut. You should of thought youve been set up boy. Here have a bit of money...it might get you bail!
Tim: Come on lads lets go home.
(Barry,Tommy,Paul and Tim walk out leaving David unconsious on the floor)

Well then Davids been set up and Tommy now has £500,000!

Next part tomorrow.

[bakedbean]

Ohhh a bit of a Den Watts and phil Mitchell here man im loving Tommy he is such a great charecter i wonder what he will do with that money???