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    Jake & Chrissie - Part Three - Bondboffin

    Bridge Street - Night

    The side door to the Vic opens, Chrissie and Jake stumbled out, Sam slumped between the middle of them.

    Chrissie: How are we gonna pull this off?

    Jake: I donno, pretend she's drunk

    Chrissie: (sarcastic) good plan

    Jake: Christ Chrissie the trouble i go to for you eh?

    Chrissie: Yeah well I'm worth it

    Jake: I know you are, why dyou think i came back?

    Chrissie: (teasaing) ah...how sweet, has little jakey got a crush?

    Jake: I'm not a little kid Chrissie, it's more than a crush

    Chrissie: Besotted then?

    Jake: Don't flatter yourself

    They pass a couple of clubbers leaving Scarlet.

    Chrissie: God Sam eh? Remind me not to let you loose with a bottle of gin in the future.

    Jake: Will be a bit hard wont it, considering...

    The pair walk along silently for a few seconds

    Chrissie: (flattered) so i am really worth it Jake?

    Jake: worth what?

    Chrissie: coming back for, sticking up for... and well you know...

    Jake: youre more than a shag chrissie, unlike danny i know how to treat a lady...

    Chrissie: i shoud hope so, cus this is one lady that isnt woed easily

    Jake: it will be fun trying tough... (he smiles)

    Millers House - Night

    Keith puts down his ABC's for Toodlers book book and talks to Rosie.

    Keith: Hey rose...

    Rosie: What love?

    Keith: What are we on the planet for eh?

    Rosie: to pay taxes, have babies and die, thats what my mom used to say

    Keith: The Millers, how boring are we eh? Imagine someone doing a tv show about us, it would be so boring...

    Rosie: Um...

    Sam's Flat - Night

    Chrissie and Jake have entered Chrissie's flat, Jake is tied up some rope, and Chrissie is writing a letter.

    Jake: You sure they'll fool this Chrissie?

    Chrissie: Peggy? She can hardly tell what time of day it is, never long whether her daughter had suicidal tendecies or not.

    Jake: Well if you're sure.

    Chrissie seals the envelope and places it on the coffe table.

    Jake: Common then, help me get her up..

    The pair pick up sam, and insert her head in a noose, they tigthen it and make it look like she hanged herself.

    Chrissie: Perfect no-one will ever no, (effectiionatly) thanks Jake.

    Jake stares at her, he moves towards her and begins to kiss her tenderly, but Chrissie pulls back.

    Chrissie: I told you Jake, i wont be woed easily,

    Jake: Who knows what the future holds?

    Chrissie: We'll see.

    Chrissie and Jake leave the room, and switch of the light, they leave the house, the door slams shut.

    Close-up of Sam's hanging body

    (To Be Comntinued)

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    someone please tell me what u think... been waiting for about ten minutes lol

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    Fab babes. so sam comitted 'suicide' more more more
    xxx
    Hiro: ...but you flying man! WHOOOOSSSHHH!
    Nathan: Would you keep it down?
    Hiro: ...whooooosh.

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    for all those aware:

    i am writing a soap opera of my own and anypone who would be interested in helping me: i.e giving me critical feedback or ideas, email me on the adress given on my profile

    many thanks bondboffin

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    i luv it!!
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    Really good, more soon
    Luv ya
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    Post more soon or else i'll hang myself!
    Thanks for the AMAZING banner Layneykins!

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    brill! wonder when anyone will find sam? loved the bitchy comment about peggy! lol! more soon please, cant wait
    (ps. cant wait for your new soap either, can tell its gonna be good!)
    ~x~Tizzy~x~
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    thanks to vicky for making the banna!

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    More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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