Guess Who's Back?!?!?!?!?

[Jade]

This story is a bit stupid considering we know Janine doesn't have a sister called Beth, she has two sisters but neither of them are called Beth. And since Pat was their step-mother and raised them when their mom died I think she would recognise her!!!

Rain

Constructive comments only please!

"This story is a bit stupid" is not constructive.

As Rain said its the Fantsey Script section.

Thanks

[Rain_]

lol...sorry guys...that may have been a little harsh but it made my blood boil

[*Roxy*]

lol...sorry guys...that may have been a little harsh but it made my blood boil

hey thanks for sticking up for me

[Rain_]

Girl you are more than welcome. I hate it when people make comments like that without any need. If i had half the talent of you or the other script writers on here i would be as happy as a nymphomaniac in ann summers. Mt first language isn't english so i couldn't even begin to write as well as you guys. And no it's not just my language that stops me. It's my complete lack of imagination. I have every admiration for all of you who have the brass tennis balls to post your scripts on here. Keep it up!!!!!!!!

[*Roxy*]

Part 3
It was about 11am when Beth was finally ready, she was starving, she put on her denikm skirt and matching denim jacket and went down stairs she was swinging her little black bag as she walked.
Unfortunatly beth was swinging it too much and it went flying our of her hand and hitting Patrick in the face.

Patrick:OUCH!
Beth:OMG i'm so sorry
Patrick: it's alright child it's nothing just a scratch.
Beth: i'm really sorry

Yolande:don't be..

Yolande appeared in the kitchen door way

Yolande:...at least it means he's awake for once

Beth had to give a little giggle

Yolande:you up late my dear i'd get over the Cafe as quickly as you can to get some food.
Beth: ok see you later
Yolande: good bye child

Beth walked on to the square it was quite nice weather, Beth couldn't help but smile today she was in such a good mood. little did she know her good mood was about to disappear

Jake:OI!

Beth turned she saw some bloke looked rather annoyed at her, what had she done now she's only been on the squrae this morning for about 1 minute.

Beth:what?
Jake: you talk to chrissie like you did yesterday and you'll be sorry.
Beth: chrissie who?
Jake: are you thick?

Beth's good mood disappeard and she felt like punching this guys lights out right about now.

Beth: no i'm not but you are for having a go at me about someone who i don't know.

people in the square were stopping and watching most of them people who Beth couldn't remeber.

Jake:Chrissie was in the queen Vic you were in there yesterday
Beth: yeah i was in there but i didn't mouth off to her i just said thanks for the nice welcome which wasn't nice at all.
Jake: you have a right cheak you know that
Beth: yeah i get it from my sister you might get a visit from her today she doesn't like people being mean to me.
Jake:really...who's your sister?
Beth: you'll find out soon enough.

Beth walked past Jake and into the Cafe it was clear everyone inside had been watching, becuse everyone just looked at her in a shocked way.beth just shruged it off and went to get some food.

Beth:Hi
Jane:Hi what can i get you
Beth:hot chocolate and a bacon sandwich please
Jane: ok that's coming right up, er..you ok?
Beth: yes i'm fine why shouldn't i be?
Jane: well i saw jake was having a bit of a go at you
Beth: well he's stuiped so i don't care
Jane: your new here aren't you?
Beth: yeah i am
Jane: you make enemys quickly don't you?
Beth: i didn't mean to i didn't say anything bad to chrissie i just got this 'oh i don't want to be nice to you so i won't thing off her'
Jane: i'll talk to her if you want
Beth: thanks but i don't think it'll make much diffrence
Jane: one more thing
Beth:yeah
Jane: Welcome to Walford

Beth laughed, her good mood was coming back although she was still annoyed about being called thick. just then she got a text message off Janine

Just got on da train be there in a 1 hour + 1/2 luv Janine

beth smiled today was gonna be a very good day

[.:Kitz:.]

This is great *Roxy*, its really intertesting.

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[di marco]

brill! jake shouldnt have had a go at her! cant wait to janine arrives! more soon please, cant wait

[di marco]

Mt first language isn't english

what is your first language?

[Rain_]

Ukranian

[Rain_]

This is fantastic roxy.....more please !!!!!!!!!!