gangsters paradise - phil & sam (the bill)

[Pixie]

I liked it too. Great characterisation, cant wait for more!

[billbabe04]

I loved it well dun, write sum more soon! wots the betting that the case sam and jo were going on is that steve has been beaten up?... just guessing! lol

[amijainey]

oooooh never thought of that, lol, seriously, new idea, thanks. lol. xxxxx

[hunterz_girl]

Loving the fic! its really good, your a good writer, the storylines intersting. update soon!

[baby oranges]

really love this story. please carry it on

stacy
xxx

[Footie_Chick]

ahhh, wow, i'm loving it!!!
Loving you theory too billbabe, but wouldn't Sam had said something to Phil!

[billbabe04]

she may not know, coz her and jo were only just going out on the case then? xx

[Footie_Chick]

Good thinking billbabe, didn't think of that lol!!!

[amijainey]

[B]hiya sorry i havnt updated, ive bin busy,lol, ive wrote most of the next part, just need to finish it, lol, so ive wrote a little bit of whats to come in the next to keep you all happy, hope you all like it, and i will update as soon as possible. thanks for reading it as well by the way. love from me, xxxxxxxx
He walked out of the interview room and was shocked to see his dad, he was shouting at the receptionist, asking to see DS Hunter, he was covered in bruises.
‘dad, what the hell are you doing here’

hope you like that little part, sorry to be a tease, lol. xxxx

[hunterz_girl]

Ooooooo its good! lol even tho i think ive read this bit i cant remember lol! anyway update soon!!!

maz xxx