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    brill! loving this script! horrid mo for making kaci cry! but i liked the way stacey hugged her, that was sweet! please post more soon, cant wait to find out what happens next
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    Part3
    Stacey took Kaci into her room, it was messy like it always was but then again she hadn't planned to have a guest sharing her room.

    Kaci turned around and pulled her wig off


    Stacey: why are you wearing a wig?
    Kaci: so my foster family didn't know it was me
    Stacey: oh.....right

    Kaci had hair just like Stacey herself except she had streaks of hot pink going though her hair it looked well................cool
    Kaci: yeah i know a little wild but then again i'm not as innocent has people think
    Stacey: this is going to be fun
    Kaci: what is?
    Stacey: you bein' around
    Kaci: well i ain't gonna go mad at first i'll be good for a little while then well i'll be normal
    Stacey:why not be yourself right now
    Kaci: well i don't want to not be trusted from the word go do i? and any way it might work to your benifit.
    Stacey: yeah alright, i've got to introduce you to Ruby tomorrow
    Kaci: cool
    Charlie came into the room and was a little shocked to see Kaci's hair had changed but what could he do

    Charlie:here's some money get yourself some clothes.
    Kaci: £50 Oh My God are you shure about giving me that amount of money?
    Charlie:yeah just dont' tell Mo ok?
    Kaci: Ok

    Charlie left the girls alone, he'd heard about what happened to Kaci he just wondered if she knew, he hoped she didn't knowing that sort of thing would scar a child for life.
    *Roxy*

    I've seen Friends Become Enemys right before my eyes!

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    fabbi! wonder what happened to kaci? and her hair sounds cool! cant wait for the next part, hope its soon
    ~x~Tizzy~x~
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    thanks to vicky for making the banna!

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    Part 4
    The next day Stacey and Kaci walked through the door of the cafe, it was packed, there was only one table left.

    Stacey:you go get that what do you want and i'll buy it
    Kaci: oh just a bacon butty
    Stacey: good ol' bacon butty! i think i'll get one myself as well

    Kaci laughed and went and sat at the table, when some one came over to her and looked at her

    Jake: i wouldn't hang around with her if i were you
    Kaci: what? huh?
    Jake: Stacey Slater = trouble
    Stacey:Oi Jake leave my sister alone would ya!
    Jake: sister?!?!

    Kaci looked from Jake to Stacey, she was so confussed why did this guy suddenly warn her not to hang around with her. then a second figure stood behind Jake

    Danny: stop talking to strangers Jake
    Jake: did you hear this little one is Staceys sister
    Danny: oh dear that's not good
    Kaci: Stacey i'm confussed, help!

    Stacey walked over to the table put the bacon buttys down and looked at Kaci

    Stacey: ignore it
    stacey sat down giving Jake and Danny a look of "get lost"

    Jake: i think we've out stayed are welcome come on Danny
    Danny turns to Kaci
    Danny: see you around, errrrrrrr ehat your name?
    Kaci: My names' Kaci
    Danny: alright
    Jake: stop chatting up 16 year olds Danny talk ot people your own age!

    jake and Danny walk out the Cafe Danny gave Kaci a little nod

    Kaci: why is everything so confussing?
    Stacey: don't worry you'll get used to everyone, now eat your bacon butty before it goes cold.

    After they'd had there lunch Stacey and Kaci went shopping, Stacey had seen Ruby and introduced Kaci to her. Ruby seemed nice, Kaci thought she would be a good friend and she need all the friends she could get right now.


    Ruby: so Kaci were did you used to live
    Kaci: in Wales
    Ruby: wow
    Kaci: it's not all it's cracked up to be Ruby
    Ruby how about you 2 come back to mine Dad's not going to be home for ages.
    Stacey: yeah cool come on Kaci

    Before Kaci knew it she was in Rubys house, she'd never seen such a beautiful house in here life. at 6 Stacey a Kaci went home ans shoed uncle Charlie what they had brought

    Charlie: every nice girls but keep the upstairs for now so Mo doesn't see them.
    Kaci: ok
    Kaci didn't understand why people were treating her weird just becuse she was Stacey's sister, sure Stacey wasn't anangel but then again not many other 16 year olds were. she sighed she was going ened up like Stacey and she knew it becuse she was already like that butfor some reason people beiong like this to her was upsetting. she didn't understand why
    *Roxy*

    I've seen Friends Become Enemys right before my eyes!

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    Keep it coming, looking good!

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    great! loving it! hope the next parts soon, cant wait
    ~x~Tizzy~x~
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    thanks to vicky for making the banna!

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    Part 5

    Kaci walked down the stairs to breckfast she was nevous it was herfirst time at the dinner table with everyone the other day Stcaye brought Kaci her breckfast inot the bedroom.Kaci's heart was thudding as she enterd the kitche. she got the same dirty look from Mo which didn't surprise Kaci which was odd.

    Mo:you gonna sit down or what?!?!?!
    Kaci:yes...ok

    Kaci sat silently at the end of the table wishing Stacey would hurry up and come down and sit next to her.
    Charlie walked in with his normal big smile

    Charlie: how you girls doing?
    Mo:fine, but this younge lady is sitting like a statue not speak or talking which i find rather rude!
    Kaci: sorry
    Mo: i should hope you are

    Kaci looked down to her lap she was trying hard not to cry

    Kaci: i'm not hungry any more i'm going for a walk
    Charlie:what when yuo've just got up?
    Kaci:yeah

    Kaci grabed her shoes and coat and ran out inot the square it was raining which was just her luck.she didn't really like it here but it was better than were she was in the first place. she walked past Scarlet, she stopped and looked Ruby's dad owned the place and from what Stcaye had told her he wasn't very nice.
    Jake:OI!

    Kaci looked to the club doorway to see Jake looking at her

    Jake: what you doing out in the rain and with out your sister?
    Kaci: she isn't up yet

    why was he talking to her?

    Jake: come inside your oing to get soaked

    Kaci did as she was told, he was stranger to her but she's been brought up to do as adults tell you to do. as she walked in she feel the warmth of the club. Jake guestured her to sit on a chair.
    Jake: why are you out so early
    Kaci:well......
    Jake:tell me i'm not going to blab around the whole square what you've said i'm just being nice to you
    Kaci: you know Mo?
    Jake:yeah
    Kaci: she has this thing against me and i don't know why
    Jake: it's because of Stacey and what she's like
    Kaci: what's everyone's issue with her? she nice to me
    Jake: because your her sister, and because of that people expect you to act the same
    Kaci: but we don't
    Jake: i can see that why eles did you think i told you to come in here if it had been Stacey i would have left her.
    Kaci:i'm so hungry Mo was being mean so i didn't eat anything
    Jake: here's a sandwich you have it
    Kaci:what will you eat though
    Jake: i'll nick somthing off Danny
    Kaci: is Danny your brother
    Jake: yes i hate to admit it
    Kaci: you like taking digs at eachother don't you?
    Jake: he's the one who starts it and speak of the devil

    Dannys walked through the door with water dripping of his coat

    Danny:it's raining
    Jake: you don't say
    Danny: what's she doing here?

    Danny points at Kaci then smiles


    Jake: she was out in the rain so i told her to come in here until it finished
    Danny: really were is Stacey?
    Kaci: still alseep
    Jake: teens these days
    Kaci:that's what old people say
    Danny: she got you there Jake
    Jake: yeah ok

    ..........
    *Roxy*

    I've seen Friends Become Enemys right before my eyes!

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    ahhhhhhhhhhhh that's really sweet, we love Jake and Danny
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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    great! jake and danny are so sweet! more soon please, cant wait
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    thanks to vicky for making the banna!

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    Part 6

    the rain finaly stopped which Kaci was thankful for becuse she didn't really want her pink high lights running all over her clothes. she's been talking to Danny since Jake left to get on with his work other wise Jonny would flip.

    Danny: so you really like Stacey?
    Kaci: what do you mean?
    Danny: well do you act alike?
    Kaci: not really i havn't really seen her we were split up when we were about 3 years old so i don't remeber much
    Danny: oh right so did you know your mum and dad?
    Kaci:Not really
    Danny: oh sorry
    Kaci: hey no worries


    Kaci walked out side and was about to head off home

    Danny: hey if you get any more hell off Mo come and see me and i'll sort her out for ya ok?
    Kaci: ok *laughs*


    Stacey:was standing at the door it was clear Stacye had been watching her

    Stacey: were did you go?
    Kaci: out
    Stacey:what to see Danny?
    Kaci: no i went out to get away from Mo
    Stacey: yeah well she ain't in right now so come on and hurry up i want to go out to the cinema
    Kaci: ok good idea
    Stacey: Ruby's comin as well
    Kaci: great!

    Stacey ran upstairs quickly and tried to find somthing nice to wear in the end she put an old T-shirt on and threw a hoodie over the top of it.

    Stacey:right let's go

    ..................
    Last edited by *Roxy*; 14-05-2005 at 10:11.
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