Interesting Scenario (Re-try)

[Tamzi]

Part 1

I close the front door and head out across the square. It's cold so I wrap my blazer tighter around me and pull my scarf. Snow is starting to fall and I can feel the flakes falling on my hair. The rooves are covered in a light covering. As I head into the gardens I see two figures on the bench. One looks like Chrissie, but I can't really see the other one. I walk over to her, but I stop in my tracks when I see who is on the bench with her. Who she is kissing.
"Danny?"
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[Layne]

Shock horror! lol! no honet this is fab, please post more soon, for me Please *puppy dog eyes*

[Tamzi]

I am going to bring in a new character to this. So if anyone has any cool ideas for a character. Names, personality, history. Anything. They must be female though. I don't like making characters so tell me what you want her to be like.
Thanks
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[feelingyellow]

wow, fab first part! can't wait for the next!

hmm, female character suppose you could a psycho or just a really evil character

[Chloe-Elise]

Great can't wait for the next one

[Amber]

DANNY! He ruins everything!.. Sorry about that! I just had to shout about Danny because I hadn't done in a long time

More soon please

[lil baby tash]

DANNY!!!!!!!!! more more more

[BlackKat]

Great start!

[Tamzi]

Chrissie pulls away from Danny and stands up so she's facing me. I notice that a couple of her blouse buttons are undone. Traces of lipstick are around Danny's lips and Chrissie has lipstick smudges all over har mouth. Her hair is ruffled andcoming out of the scrunchie. Both her and Danny lips are raw from the cold and kissing. How could they do this? I turn around and walk away, back to the house. Leaving them there, pure shock on their face as they realise I know. I've caught them. Uncovered their dirty little secret.
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[lil baby tash]

OMG poor jakey.BOOOOOOOO danny you evil git!!!