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    How can I forgive you Leo?

    Hey everybody! This is another sequel to
    The Demi Heart
    Without Demi
    When Demi Met Leo

    In this this script, it will be about Demi forgiving Leo for him dealing drugs. Can she do it or will tragedy get in the way?

    So here is the first part, hope you enjoy and sorry it took me so long to post but I thought I'd be evil and keep the tension there.

    Part 1: Everything will work out great

    Leo tried to run after Demi, but she was running too fast.
    ‘DEM-EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!’ he yelled. ‘I’M SO SORRRRRRRRRRRY!’
    He was hoping she’d come back and forgive him, but she didn’t.
    He went back to the shed and saw the tape and rope his Dad had been using.
    Leo remembered what Demi had said: ‘I hate him. All he is ever does is let me down, why do I always stay with him?’
    Demi had every right to say that. He did always let her down. He had a violent Dad who had kidnapped her, he had never ran after her when she went to Walford, he had gotten involved in drugs, he could have endangered Aleesha. He was a bad boyfriend, and a bad dad. He was as many people had said – a waste of space. He didn’t deserved to be forgived time and time again by Demi. He didn’t deserve to live. Leo remembered one time when he was going to stab himself, but he got a call saying Demi was having the baby. He wished he had ended his life then, so Demi wouldn’t have been put through more traumas.
    ‘I’ll die now. I’ll die here; no one ever goes here. I’ll call Gavin and get some drugs. I’ll never be found, and Demi will live her life happily without me. 'Everything will work out great.’ thought Leo.
    Last edited by feelingyellow; 15-11-2005 at 19:37.

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    No Leo don't do it! He can't! I hope they work it out,great start more soon please

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    No! Leo dont do it!!!!! I thought he might hang him self when you said he saw the rope. lol, i was thinking Noooo! please dont let him die!

    Great start again. more asap!!! (Or how about now!lol)
    ~*~ Thanks to Collé For Banner ~*~

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    Ohh Leo.When will he ever learn?
    Good Soaps-
    Eastenders
    Coronation Street(its a bit boring but it can be funny,sometimes)
    Emmerdale (Theres no good storylines on at the moment)
    Hollyoaks
    Home and Away



    ~~~~My Demi and Leo Script,Runnig Away

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    Thanks for all the comments people, glad you liked the first part

    Part 2: Will she go back?

    ‘Demi! Demz, love – slow down!’ said Keith, who was being dragged along by Demi.
    Demi stopped and burst into tears.
    ‘Awww Demz!’ said Keith, hugging Demi. ‘Hey, here’s a bench, let’s sit here.’
    They sat on the bench and Demi used Keith’s shoulder to cry on.
    ‘I never thought he’d get mixed in that stuff, Dad. I thought he loved Aleesha and me and wouldn’t let us come to any danger. I never thought he was Mr Goodie Two Shoes, but I thought he was a hell lot better then THAT!’
    ‘Well, sometimes, love, people make mistakes – they don’t realise it’s bad until after they’ve done it.’ said Keith, handing Demi a tissue.
    ‘He earned 2000 quid from it, he must have been doing it for some while!’
    ‘He was doing it for you love, he said he was going to use it to buy a flat when you were older.’
    ‘Oh.’ said Demi. ‘But drugs aren’t the answer. He knew I wouldn’t approve, and he never even told me! How many other things could he be keeping from me?’
    Keith couldn’t think of any defence for Leo and just shrugged.
    ‘He has hurt me, Dad, so bad. I just wanna let me know how I feel.’
    ‘You could always go back.’
    They sat in silence for half an hour, whilst Demi wondered whether she should or not.
    ‘Yeah!’ said Demi, standing up. ‘I’ll go and show him how he has LET ME DOWN!’
    Demi ran off with Keith running after her.
    She found the shed and burst into it saying ‘LEO, I’VE GOT SOME – oh my god…’
    She saw Leo lying on the floor unconscious and saw the drugs next to him.
    ‘Leo!’ she said, shaking him. ‘LE-OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!’

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    Noooooooo! Leo can't die! I hope hes alright,please update soon

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    no please dont let him die!!!!! he cant die!!!!

    more soon please asap!its well good! (Dont kill him!)lol
    ~*~ Thanks to Collé For Banner ~*~

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    Can't wait to find out whats next!
    Good Soaps-
    Eastenders
    Coronation Street(its a bit boring but it can be funny,sometimes)
    Emmerdale (Theres no good storylines on at the moment)
    Hollyoaks
    Home and Away



    ~~~~My Demi and Leo Script,Runnig Away

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    glad you all liked part two, here's the next part - hope you like

    Part 3: Off to Hospital

    Keith came into the shed once he heard Demi screaming. He saw her taking Leo’s pulse.
    ‘Dad, call an ambulance!’ she said once she saw him.
    Keith called the ambulance and they came 15 minutes lately.
    They went in the ambulance with Leo, and Demi said (through tears and hiccups) ‘It’s gonna be alright, Leo. You keep in there.’
    Leo was taken into the emergency room whilst Demi and Keith waited outside.
    ‘He’s gonna die, ain’t he dad?’ said Demi.
    ‘Not necessarily, love, he could live. Leo’s a fighter!’
    ‘He ain’t, Dad. He’s gonna die. I ain’t ever gonna see him again, and it’s all my fault – I should have talked to him, instead of being a baby and running off!’
    ‘Demz!’ Keith said, hugging her. ‘It ain’t your fault, Leo choose to take the drug overdose – not you. You weren’t a baby, you were just hurt – and you have rights to be. Now, here’s what’s going to happen – Leo will live, and maybe you too will work things out.’
    ‘Yeah, maybe!’ said Demi, feeling better. But her happiness turned to sadness when she saw the doctor coming towards her.
    ‘Miss Miller? I have some news to tell you about Mr Taylor.’

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    More soon please! I can't wait?

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