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[baileya]

Hi this is my first script please tell me what to think. I have a whole storyline and many more to come planned out.

Everyone is rushing around in the millers preparing for the welcome home party for demi.
Rosieshouting) Keith! Keith! Are you ready? Its time to go and get Demi.
Keith:Ye. One minute Rose I'm just putting up these banners.
Darren Enters
Darren: Mum why dont you take Aleesha with you. I think Demi would love to see her.
Rosiehappily) Ye. Great idea Darren. Come here
Rosie hugs darren just as Keith enters.
Keithputting his coat on) Ready. I think we better get going.
Keith Rosie and Aleesha leave to pick up Demi. About half an hour later Darren and Mickey are finishing off the decorations when there is a knock at the door.
Mickey: Daz answer that
Darren answers the door
Darren: Oh come in they aint back yet.
The guests including Pauline,The Beales,Gus and The Brannings enter
Paulinesurprised) Oh wow. What an effort youve put in here.
Darrengloating) Oh well we do try.
About 5 minutes had passed until Rosies voice was heard
Rosie: Were back!
Keith,Rosie,Demi and Aleesha enter the room.
Everyone: Surprise! Welcome home Demi.
Demi didnt smile she just set of at a pace upstairs and you could here her sobbing.
Rosie and Keith exchanged looks
Keith: Right everyone enjoy themselves. Ill go upstairs and speak to Demi.

Next episode: Keith and Demi have a heart to heart.

[samantha nixon]

this is really good and id lovve to read the other parts

[Gadders]

i would love to hear what keith is going to say to demi keep up the good work

[baileya]

Hi again this is my second script so then here it is:

Keith heads upstairs
Keith: Demi,sweetheart are you ok?
Demi: Dad I want to be left alone.
Keithsitting down next to Demi) Come on darling whats wrong?
Demi: Ive been thinking whilst I've been in hospital about things.
Keith: What like?
Demi: Like was it my fault Leo died
Keithin a low voice) aye you shouldnt even be thinking that. Why is it your fault?
Demi: Because he thaught I was dead thats why he took the drugs.
Keith: The person whoose fault this is is the person who gave the drugs to Leo!
Demi: Thats not all Ive been thinking. Ive also bin thinking about Aleesha. What am I going to tell her when shes older?
Keith: You tell her that her dad died full of love for you and Aleesha.
Demiheartbroken) My baby cant grow up without a dad!
Keith: Demi you are a beautiful girl. You are going to grow up and meet a boy who you will love and he will love you and Aleesha. He can be her dad.
Demi: But it wont be the same! He wont be Aleeshas real dad. I...I...really miss him dad.
Keith: I know you do sweetheart. Your going to have to try for yours and Aleeshas health. If you ever need a cry come to me.
Demi jumps into Keiths arms.

NEXT EPISODE: DEMI COMES DOWN STAIRS AND THERE IS A SURPRISE VISITOR AT THE MILLERS.

reply away.

[baileya]

please reply

[eastenderfan_91]

this is great can you please do some more

[baileya]

ill post the next part later on tonight.

[baileya]

Here is part three in the last part Demi and Keith had a heart to heart:-

Keith: (still hugging Demi) Why dont you come downstairs?
Demi: I dont really feel like it dad. I shouldnt be celebrating as Leo should be alive aswel.
Keith: I know he should Dems but you cant change whats happened. I mean come on this downstairs is for you. Why dont you just show your face?
Demi: (wiping her eyes) Alright. Ill come down for you.
Keith: Good girl.
Keith and Demi head downstairs and into the front room.
Pauline: Welcome home Demi. Weve missed you.
Demi: (upset) You didnt need to do this
Rosie: You deserve it.
Demi: I dont! My boyfriend would be alive if I didnt take the Heroin.
At that moment there was a knock at the door
Rosie: (surprised) Trisha! What do you want?
Trisha: Can I come in? I want to talk to Demi.
Rosie: Errrrrrm yes.
Trisha: Thanks Rosie I really appreciate how youve been with me.
Demi comes into the hall.
Trisha: Demi can I have a word?
Demi: Yes of course you can. Shall we go into the kitchen?
Trisha: Ye.Ye. That would be great.
Trisha and Demi go into the Kitchen and Rosie goes into the living room.
Rosie: Keith. Trisha has just come and shes talking to Demi in the Kitchen.
Keith: (putting down his cake.) Lets leave them to it. Maybe she can calm her down.
In the Kitchen Trisha and Demi are sitting at the table.
Demi: What do you want?
Trisha: Demi is it ok if we talk about Leo?
Demi: (eyes welling again) Erm yes.
Trisha: Who was it who gave him the drugs?
Demi: Someone called Gavin. When I took the Heroin he told me Id go to a place where nothing matters.
Trisha: Ok dont get upset you know Leo used to tell me all the time that he loved you.
Demi: I miss him so much Trisha.
Trisha: I know you do Demi so do I. I want you to know Demi that I dont blame you. I blame Gavin for giving him the drugs people like that will get what comes to them so dont blame yourself!
Both Trisha and Demi start to cry.

Next episode: Demi comes ill!!!!!

hope you liked this part Ill post more soon please reply with your comments.

[Jade]

Great stuff

[samantha nixon]

this is really good