Love Circle

[Tamzi]

Welcome to my other script. Hope you like it.
Jake and Chrissie are togther but they haven't moved in together or anything.
Chrissie is becoming attracted to Johnny
Tina dates Johnny but fancies Dennis
Dennis dates Zara(new girl on the square)
Zara fancies Danny
Danny is dating a girl who he really loves Selena.
Selena once slept with Jake, and wants it to continue.


Part 1
Johnny sits at the kitchen table with Ruby. Ruby is trying to talk to Johnny, Johnny is going over the takings.
Ruby: Dad, do you want to take me out for some lunch or something? We haven't done anything together for ages.
Johnny: Look Ruby, I am too busy. I promise next weekend.
Ruby: You said that last weekend and the weekend before that. You would have done it if it had been Scarlett.
Johnny: Just shut up Ruby. Look here's £50 go get yourself something nice.
Ruby: Wow. Must be a record dad. You lasted 30minutes before giving me cash.
Johnny: Look Ruby.
Ruby: See you later dad.
Ruby leaves. Johnny's phone rings.
Tina: Hey Mr lovehandles.
Johnny: Tina
Tina: How did you guess? Look you feel like lunch later?
Johnny: Sure. Meet you outside your flat about 12.
Tina: See you then.
Johnny hangs up. Tina wanders out of the flat and spots Dennis.
Tina: Hey Dennis, I wondered if you could do me a favour?
Dennis: Sure, what?
Tina: Well you see my electrics are all weird. Everything loses power and then comes back on the goes again. So I was wondering if you could take a look.
Dennis: I could try. When do you want me to come over?
Tina: About 6.
Dennis: Ok see you then.
Tina wanders off to buy some new lingerie for a certain young man. Dennis heads off to the Vic to start his shift but spots his girlfriend hanging around outisde Johnny Allen's club.
Dennis: Hey Zara. Didn't spot you. What you doing around here?
Zara: Nothing. She quickly kisses Dennis. Look you fancy going for dinner later?
Dennis: Can't sorry. I'm goig to sort out Tina's electrics. How about tomorrow though?
Zara: Sure. Hadn't you better be at work?
Dennis: Oh yeah. I'll see you in the vic later.
Dennis heads off. Suddenly Danny wanders out.
Zara: Danny.
Danny: Hiya Sara
Zara: It's Zara actually.
Danny: Oh sorry. I better be getting it on with you, I mean I better be getting it on, I mean I better be getting on.
Zara: Laughing. Alright. Look, um, my water's not working and I was wondering if you could come look at it for me tonight. I would be so grateful.
Danny: Ok. I dont know much about water, but I'll try.
Zara: Great. Come round mine about 6.
Danny: Whatever.
Zara heads in the direction of the high street to get a new outfit.
Danny goes inside and is surprised to see Selena sitting there. Jake looks slightly embarrassed and runs into the office wiping lipstick from his mouth but Danny doesn't notice.
Danny: Hey Selena. What are you doing here?
Selena: Nothing. Look you feel like a curry tonight my treat?
Danny: Sorry I can't I'm going to sort out Zara's water system. It ain't working. But how about tomorrow?
Selena: Ok. Hey didn't you have that package to pick up for Johnny?
Danny: Oh f**k I totally forgot. Can you tell Jake where I've gone.
Selena: Sure. Danny runs out.
Selena: He's gone.
Jake walks out.
Jake: What just happened cannot happen again. That kiss was a mistake.
Selena: What about the time we slept together?
Jake: Forget it. All a mistake. I am only interested in one woman.
Selena; Chrissie. Dont make me laugh. You wont last. I know it, you know it and she knows it.
Jake: Just shut up Selena. I'm going out.
Selena: Wait. Jake look can you come sort out a problem for me. My heating has gone bust and I wondered if you would take a look.
Jake: Fine. I'll be there at 6. Just don't try and of your tricks.
Selena: Fine. Dont flatter yourself.
Jake storms off and goes to find Chrissie.
Chrissie: Hey Jake. You Ok?
Jake: Fine.
Chrissie: Look how about we go out to Fargo's tonight? we haven't been out for a while.
Jake: I'd love to but I can't. I promised I'd sort out Selena's heating. How about tomorrow though?
Chrissie: Fine.
Johnny: Jake, aren't you meant to be at work?
Jake: Sorry Johnny. See you later Chrissie.
Jake leaves.
Chrissie: Hi Johnny. What can I get you?
Johnny: A new life.
Chrissie: Sorry we're out of stock of those. How about a scotch?
Johnny: Sure.
Chrissie: Johnny I was wondering if I could ask you a massive favour?
Johnny: Go ahead.
Chrissie: I bought a new bed and Jake was going to help me put it together but he is busy tonight, so I wondering if you could maybe help me.
Johnny: Sure. Say about 6.
Chrissie: Great. Tracey I'm taking my break. See you later Johnny.
Chrissie heads upstairs and roots around for something sexy to wear.
TO BE CONTINUED..............
Which woman will be getting lucky and who will be left alone?
Only one place to be found out- the next episode of love circle

[di marco]

that was great, really funny! i was a bit confused at first, but it was quite cleverly thought out, the way everyone fancied someone else! hope theres more very very soon, cant wait to find out what happens

[Rach33]

OH MY GOD this is so funny but brilliant please post more

[Layne]

Yeh that was great, sorry it took me so long to reply!
Thats funny aswell, we need a bit of that!!
More soon
Luv ya
Layne
x x x

[Debs]

hiya Jakemoonrox!

That was fab and funny!! looking forward to the next part. when will it be??

[.:Kitz:.]

Come on, don't leave us in suspence any longer!! That was great, funny and made sense!

Keep it coming!!

[Rain_]

i can only imagine where this is leading but i'm sure it's going to be funny. Is your other scipt ended altogether now?

[Lisa321]

Brilliant, pls write more!
xXx

[*Roxy*]

cool

[Amber]

Lol!
That was so good!
I love the way all of the women are getting the man they fancy to come round to fix something!
Chrissie and Johnny?!?! That made me laugh!!