Doctor Who !!!!

[crumpet]

hi! i totaly love doctor who and last nights episode was SCARY!
pretend that this is the first episode and . wel,, i will just see how it goes shant i!(i didn't watch the first episode of doctor who)

rose is at school and there is 5 mins left till the end of school

rose: I'M bored

teacher:ROSE!

rose: what?

teacher: no talking

rose: ok!

rose mutters

rose: stupid teacher telling me off, i wish i could go traveling or i wish i could go back in time and see how harold got killed at the battle of hastings and not get stuck here listening to how she thinks harold got killed

teacher: ROSE! NO MUTTERING EITHER!

the bell rings

everyone goes out of school

rose goes to a park and sits on a benchc smiling happily,
and said sarcasticly
rose: great! nothing to do! throughout 9 weeks! yipee! i am so excited that i have nothing exciting to lok forward to!

then a man comes and sits next to her

rose: who the hell are you?

man: that's nice isn't it! "who the hell are you"

rose: sorry, but who are you?

man: ah, that's fore me to know and you not to find out

rose: come on, please tell me!

man: i'll tell ya if you come with me!

rose: were? 'ere you're one of them dodgy people aren't you! you attack girls!

man: oi! i aint one of them!

rose: were are we going then?

man: a police box

rose: you arn't a policeman are you?

man: follow me and you'll see!

rose: fine what eva!

man:good now when you're inside, you can't tell anyone ABOUT ME!

rose: why? are you a celebrity?

man: o, you just cant

rose: ok ok, keep ya 'air on!

she follows the man and they go down a dark ally

rose: I AM STOPPING RIGHT HERE!

man: what's the matter with you?

rose: you are one of them dodgy people!

man: look, just stand over by that police box down there ok?

rose: ok but if you are a dodgy man then i can scream pretty loud

man: look, if you stop syaing i'm one of those horrible men then i'll tell you who i am!

rose: ok then!

man: i'm the doctor

(i know that's rubbish but there's a great part coming up afyter this 1 )

[di marco]

great! i love dr who too! more soon, cant wait

[crumpet]

rose: that' aint a reAL name!

doctor: well i don't give out my name so doctor it'll be

rose: fine! what am i supposed to be looking in?

doctor: go in!

rose: what, in a tiny thing like that? and you're coming in too? you'll get squished!

doctor: trust me just go in!

she goes in and it is a massive machine, inside and it seems impossible to fit inside a tiny police box

rose: wow!

doctor: like i said, don't tell ANYONE about me

rose: i wont!

doctor: good

rose: what does it do?

doctor: you're getting into the secrets now!

rose: tell me!

doctor: nope

rose: i'll be off then!

doctor: wait!, come with me!

rose:were?

doctor: anywere!

rose:is that a trick question?

doctor: no just come with me to places you've only dreamt of and you can see who really killed harold at the battle of hastings!

rose: that aint possible!

doctor: aint it?

rose: fine i'll come with you!

doctor: great! you have something to do in the holidays now!

rose:what about my mum?

doctor: she'll be ok, when you get back it'll be like 10 seconds have passed since we travelled time! oops! shouldnt 've told you that!

rose: ok, were we going first?

doctor: how about dinosaur time!

rose: ok!

doctor: when they became extinct!

rose: so what you're saying is that i can see things my mates can never see like in the past?

doctor:yeah!

rose: when can we go then?

doctor: now

rose: now? really?

doctor: yes now and yes really!

they went to the last 2 weeks of dinosuars living before they became extinct

rose: wow! this is amazing!

doctor: i've done this before you go out first

rose: what and be eaten first? no thanks!

doctork, i'll go

he walks out and rose follows him

rose looks up and a huge t-rex is above her

doctor: rose! come here!

rose starts to run but gets taken away by 1 of those flying bird - dinosaurs

rose: HELP!

and the t-rex chases the doctor

[crumpet]

(to be continued)

[di marco]

great! wow dinosaurs! more soon, cant wait

[crumpet]

the doctor ran all the way to were the flying bird-dino was

doctor: rose? were are you?

rose: you don't wanna know!

doctor:tell me!

rose: hiding in dinosaurs poo

doctor: thanks for the details

rose:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHH!!

doctor: ROSE? WHAT HAPPENED?
(to be continued)

[di marco]

great! yuck dino poo! more soon, cant wait

[crumpet]

doctor: ROSE? ANSWER ME!

rose came out all clean and smelt like aple pie, the doctor ran to rose
doctor: you said....

rose: i know! i used something called perfume!

doctor: fine but why did you scream?

rose:i broke a nail!

doctor: lets go

rose: were are we going?

doctor:dunno

he looked at rose

doctor: rose, do you want to go home?

rose: why?

doctor: cos if you want to, i'll take you back home

rose: no why?

doctor: just checking cos i aint making you do anything you don't wanna do

rose: you aint now come on, i wanna go and see some dinosaurs! and just out of interest, are you an alien?

doctor looked at rose carefully and

doctor: yes now don't laugh!

rose: i aint, then how come you sound up northern?

doctor: do you think that i'llfit in with other people if i talked in the accent i come from?

rose: o. ok were are ya from then?

doctor: not telling

rose: please?

doctor: no!

rose: why?

doctor: I SAID NO!

rose looks terified and ran away and starts crying

doctor dont no that though

rose screams but doctor doesn't turn around, he just says

doctor: she's broken a nail again

a big lizard is dragging rose back to were the doctor is by cooincidence and it has made a deep cut and starts to try and eat rose and doctor gets irritated by the sound of suttling cos the lizard is scuttling around rose

the doctor turns round and sees rose and collapses down to her

doctor: i'm so sorry

rose isn't breathing and then suddenly, she grows wings and becomes like a farie and her wings are purple and she transforms into dinosaur but in the form of a beautiful schoolgirl with wings and designer clothes on

doctor: o no, that lzad has poweres to make human beings into dinosaurs but human dinosaurs and stay like that unill......

(to be continued)

[di marco]

great! oh no! more soon, cant wait

[crumpet]

doctor:....... untill the person she's with has feelings for her or if she wants to change to her normal self

rose is so pretty now that the lizard walked away and all the other dinos can't hurt her
the wound that the lizard made had gone

doctor: um, rose?

rose: uh, what happened?

doctor: i'm so sorry, i didn't mean to make you into a farie dinosaur

rose: i'm a farie?

doctor: yes

rose: hey, i look quite nice in designer stuff

doctor: yeah sure but come on, we've gotta get outa here now!

rose: why?

doctor: cso i said so!

rose: fine, be like that then, i can manage on my own!

she flies off

doctor: ROSE! DON'T GO!

she flies back

rosE: and i shouldn't leave you because?????

doctor: um,

rose: ok, resaons why i should! here we go,
: you yelled at me,

doctor: look i'm sorry please, dont leave me here

rose: havn't you got your TARDIS?

doctor: yeah but i cant find it!

rose flies down to the doctor

rose: ok, i'll help you but dont shout at me anymore!

doctor: i wont i promise!

rose clipped something onto the doctor and clicked it round the back so he was literally attached to rose through a string

rose: ok, if you fall, it aint my fault!

doctor: ok

rose flew up and the doctor got dragged up too

rose: how ya feeling?

doctor: fine thanks

he wriggled so he could see the land and the rope snapped he was heading into the volcano

(to be continued)