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    Wake up my darling

    hey everyone this is my first time at writing a script so please be gentle!! lol
    its about when zoe faked the pregnancy and carries on but with plot twists and stuff.
    please tell me what you think be deadly honest.

    wake up my darling


    part1

    (Upstairs in the queen vic over dinner)

    sharon- me and dennis have an announcement to make. (holds dennis hand lovingly)

    zoe- whats she going on about dennis? Get offa her hand (she screams and grabs for his hand)

    dennis- zoe im sorry i love sharon we are gonna be together

    dirtyden- over my dead body you are, zoe sit back down!!!

    zoe- how could you do this to me (she cries as she runs out of the vic, den follows her)

    dirtyden- calm down if youre clever and careful you can sort this out.

    zoe- wotcha mean den, sort this out? whats there to sort hes left me for her!!

    dirtyden- stop crying and listen theres a way round this

    zoe- im listening

    dirtyden- you walk back in that pub and you tell him youre pregnant!

    zoe- im not how can i say that to him den

    dirtyden- do you wanna keep him or not

    zoe- of course i do but im gonna be lying

    dirtyden- he dont know that though does he?!

    dirtyden- my princess cant have kids and heres poor zoe up the duff, come on zoe think for once!!

    zoe- but your sure it will work

    dirtyden- of course it will work now get in there

    (zoe storms tearfully back into the vic and heads into the kitchen where she hears sharon and dennis)



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    kewl... are you posting more???
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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    wicked!more plz xx

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    yeh im gonna post next part now

    xxx
    amelia



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    Wake up my darling


    part2

    sharon-dennis im so happy, we are finally gonna be together(pullin dennis close)

    zoe-GET YOUR STINKIN FILTHY HANDZ OFFA MY MAN YOU COW!!

    sharon-he loves me now zoe, not you,we are gonna be together no matter what nothing can get in the way to spoil things can they dennis?

    dennis- no babe we are meant together me and you

    zoe- you sure bout that , not even the fact that im PREGNANT!?

    *tears start to form in sharons eyes

    dennis- sharon it dont change a thing between me and you darlin

    sharon- it changes everythin dennis

    dennis- zoe i love sharon i dont love you ok but i will stay here for the baby.

    zoe- told you hed stay with me you filthy cow

    dennis- zoe leave it out

    sharon- i hate you dennis, i hate you all! (she runs off out of the vic in tears)

    dennis- (shouts after her) SHARON!!!

    PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AS I HAVE MORE PARTS ALREADY WRITTEN.

    XX AMELIA
    Last edited by ameliauk1; 07-06-2005 at 18:51.



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    Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.. . he can't stay with her... he can't... he loves SHARON... this is great please post more... more more more...
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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    thanks ill post some more in a sec



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    PART 3

    *BLEEP BLEEP

    *sharons phone bleeped as a text message came through from dennis, in tears again she threw her phone onto the floor closed her eyes and started to wish she wasnt in this family.

    *still no reply dennis thought to himself as he started to drift in and out of sleep on the sofa in the lounge in zoe and his new flat.

    *zoe reached out for dennis as she rolled over in their new master bed, and realized dennis wasnt there she knew what she was doing was wrong but she couldnt help it she wanted dennis to be hers and no one elses.

    *eventually curiosity got the better of sharon she got up to read the message on the phone screen. why must he keep doing this to me doesnt he realise what he is putting me through everytime i see him in our old flat with her. he says he loves me but we cant be together after this sharon thought as she read the text over and over again.

    IT READ:

    SHARON PLEASE UNDERSTAND I LOVE YOU SO MUCH DARLING BUT I HAVE TO DO WHAT IS RIGHT AND STAND BY ZOE JUST FOR THE BABYS SAKE. PLEASE PLEASE FORGIVE ME SHARON I COULDNT BEAR IT IF YOU EVER STOPPED LOVING ME. ALWAYS AND FOREVER LOVING YOU XXXXX DENNIS

    please tell me what you thought xxxxx amelia



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    This is good, more soon
    Layne
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    awwwwwwwwwwwww... that's so sweet... please let them get together... please... this is really great... please post more... more more more
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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