Loving Leo

Loving Leo is my new Demi and Leo script,which is my version of the story of how they fell in Love.Most of its written in Demi's side of the story.

Here's a preview of part one:

"Because"Said Jo,"Rachel's got a better offer."
"A better offer?But we're her best friends,why would she ditch us?"
"Well you know what Rachel's like,she thinks she's in love with Leo Taylor,like every other girl in the school."
"So,"Demi was fuming,"She chose that...that...Leo over us!"



Let me now what you think and I'll post Part 1 soon.

That looks really good, im really looking forward to reading that script

Looks great.

Yeah,I've got most of it planned out in my head,I'm looking forward to writing it,but I'm too tired tonight.

:) yer sounds good and ill also be looking forward to reading your script :)

that sounds cool ... can't wait to read the rest :)

Don't worry,its on its way right now! :D

Part One

"Right Mum,gotta go now."Said Mickey.

"Where?"Asked Darren wondering where was so important that his brother,would want to miss out on his favourite food.

"But what 'bout your breakfast?"Asked Rosie.

Mickey was already making his way to the front door,"I'm goin' to Walford,Darren,to see a mate of mine."

"Since when have you had mates?"Demi joked.

Mickey grinned,"Shut it you!I'm gonna see a good mate called Spencer Moon,he's trying to make it in the sellin' buisness.Oh,and Mum,you give my sausages to Genghis,he'll like 'em."He walked out the door and Headed to Walford.

"Mum,"Said Darren,looking cofused,"Has he always been such a nutter?"

Rosie chose to ignore this and instead turned to Demi,"Eat your breakfast love."

Demi stood up,"But Mum,I'm not really that hungry.Besides I'm meetin' Jo and Rach to go the cinema later,I've been lookin' forward to it for ages!"

Rosie sighed,"Oh alright,I suppose you better go get ready then."

"Fanks Mum."Said Demi rushing off to her room.

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Keith was reading a newspaper,called the Walford Gazette,Mickey had brought it back from the day before.Obviously,he wasn't really reading it,just looking at the pictures,he needed to keep up the act,so the kids wouldn't suss out his reading problems.

" 'Ere dad,"Darren had finished his breakfast and came into talk watch TV,"Tell me if there's anyfing in that 'bout Spencer Moon."

"Will do,"Replied Keith,hoping against hope that there wasn't.

Once Keith had finished reading the newspaper,he sat it on the table,Where Darren soon picked it up.

"Hey Dad....Why didn't you tell me that Spencer was in 'ere?"

"Oh,I..uh...I must 'ave missed it."

"How could you miss it Dad,Its a whole article on Page 7,'Moon is in the Buisness.'?"

"Ohh,right...Sorry 'bout that,I had flicked past page 7 and couldn't 'ave seen it."

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Demi was in the Bathroom,brushing her teeth,when she heard her Mum call her name from the Kitchen.

"What is it Mum?"Demi still had the toothbrush in her mouth,so it sounded more like:'Whasitum?'

"The Phone."

"Oh,right,"Demi grabbed the phone.

"Hello Dems."Came Joanne,one of Demi's closest friends,from the other end of the line

"Alrigh' Jo.We still on for this afternoon?"

"Yeah,'Course,I am,but its gonna just be me an' you."

Demi spat a large amount of toothpaste down the sink,"Well,Why aint Rach comin'?"

"Because"Said Jo,"Rachel's got a better offer."

"A better offer?But we're her best friends,why would she ditch us?"

"Well you know what Rachel's like,she thinks she's in love with Leo Taylor,like every other girl in the school."

"So,"Demi was fuming,"She chose that...that...Leo over us!"

"Like I said,Every girl in the whole school would jump at the chance to go out with 'Lovely' Leo,(thats if he really asked her out,which I doubt)Except me and You,because of your families."

Demi Sighed,She didn't know the real reason behind the Miller/Taylor feud,but eversince she was a little kid there had been big arguments and fights between her family and Ray,his wife Trisha,and their son,Leo.Ray was a cruel and heartless man,Demi saw the bruises that Trisha got,he obviously bet his wife up,and occaisionaly Leo would get it too,He once came to school with a huge bruise on his arm and TWO black eyes.The whole Family where terrible and Demi had no sympathy for Leo,because he would break girls hearts almost every week,and him and Darren where always arguing over something or other.

"Demi?Are you still there?"

"Wha..oh yeah,I'm here.Anyway,so why don't you fancy him?"

"Because....Hey,I think its horrible of Rachel to ditch us like that,Don't you think?"

"Yeah,Totally a traitor thing to do.Bye Joanne."

"See ya later Dems."

After she put the phone down,Demi gazed into the bathroom Mirror for a moment,thinking about what a stupid,annoying idiot Leo Taylor was and wondering why in the world anyone would love him?!


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Well,that was the first part.Sorry it took so long,but I had to feed Sam.

Please tell me what you think and I'll continue. :)

that was really good and i really cant wait for the next part your really good at writing btw :cheer:

Thats really good, cant wait to hear the next one :)