Richard should belive tanya hilary is evil :angry:
And what is tanya going to do .....
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Richard should belive tanya hilary is evil :angry:
And what is tanya going to do .....
INT. HARVEY'S MOTORS - NIGHT
In a fragile state of mind Tanya rushes into Harveys Motors.
Craig: (Bored) Tanya?...Back for more?
Tanya: YOU MURDERING *******!
Tanya gathers all her strength and turns Craig's office table on its top, paperwork and nick nacks scattering his office.
Craig: Jesus christ! You're off your bloody rocker!
Tanya: How dare you!
Craig: How dare I what? Ya mad cow...
Tanya: You murdered Gary you son of a bitch!
Craig: I'll have you know my mom was a wonderful woman...:p
Tanya's angers builds up to a boiling point. She screams and pins Craig against the wall. A spanner in her hands. Craig starts to breath heavily in panic.
Craig: Think this trough very carefully Tanya... you do anything and I'll have you in a pine box before you can say funeral directors.
Tanya: Not if i get to you first....
Craig: (Sinister) You wouldnt dare...
Tanya waves the spanner close to Craig's head.
Tanya: Wanna bet!?
Craig: What's with the mad pycho act Tanya eh!?
Tanya: Gary! Why did you do it eh!? Why did you kill him!? What did he ever do to you!
Craig: He did nothing...
Tanya shakes Craig violently and screams at the top of her voice.
Tanya: Then why did you do this to him!?
Craig: (Satisifed) Becuase there's only a number of times that you can piss me off...
Tanya: You *******!!!
Tanya looses control and smashes the spanner into Craig's skull. Gashes of blood splurt from his head. He pushes her to the ground, and holds his head in pain.
Craig: You have crossed the line, you bitch!
Craig grabs a gun from his back pocket and points it directly at Tanya...
INT. HARVEY'S MOTORS - NIGHT
Craig grabs a gun from his backpocket and points it directly at Tanya's head. She starts to breath heavily.
Tanya: (Scared) You wouldnt dare Craig... you just wouldnt!
Craig: You really wanna take that chance eh!? One pull of the trigger and your brain will me be mashed up that brick wall there!
Tanya: Two murders in one week!? Even you wouldnt stoop that low...
Craig: Three...
Tanya looks at Craig in horror.
Tanya: (Devastated) Who!?
Craig: The Nurse who saw me at the hospital... well i couldnt have her gassing off now could I? No one knows about what happened to Gary...except you and me...
Tanya is sobbing on the floor infront of Craig.
Craig: Now Tanya... you listen up... you've messed me around one too many times... i want you out of Baymoore by the end of the night... and if you dont...you're a dead woman!
INT. IQBAL AND MARCUS'S FLAT - NIGHT
Iqbal has lighted candles around the room and is playing James Blunts albumn. There is a knock at the door. Iqbal answers it, its Sanjita.
Iqbal: Hey there sexy, you look stunning...
Sanjita walks in flirtaously and closes the door.
Sanjita: How dont look half bad yourself :p
Sanjita walks up to Iqbal and starts to unbutton his shirt.
Iqbal: I was beginning to think you wasnt gonna show...
Sanjita: And mess out on a chance like this?... I dont think so..
Iqbal rams Sanjita up a wall as the pair begin to kiss passionatley. Sanjtita's arm rubs aginsyt the wall and shes knocks down a Singh family photo. Iqbal kicks it across the floor as the pair kiss.
Sanjita sees a photo of Kash.
Sanjita: God talk about staring you in the face...
Iqbal looks at the picture and tosses it over at the sofa.
Iqbal: Come on... let's go to bed...
Iqbal walks into the bedroom. Sanjita looks at her wedding wrong, and feels slightly guilty.
Iqbal: Come On San'...I'm waiting...
Sanjita removes the ring from her fingure and places it on the bookself. She blows out the candles and walks into Iqbal's bedroom.
[/B]INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Oasis - "Half The Way Away" Plays over the scene.
I would like to leave this city
This old town don’t smell too pretty and
I can feel the warning signs running around my mind
And when I leave this island I’ll book myself into a soul asylum
Cos I can feel the warning signs running around my mind
Tanya is sitting in one of the guest bedrooms. Her bags are packed, she is applying make up at the vanity mirror. She has a brave look on her face.
She looks at a photo of Gary and the kids are picks it up. She stares at it and kisses it Gently. She looks into the mirror and smiles condifently.
INTERCUT:
EXT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
So here I go, I’m still scratching around the same old hole
My body feels young but my mind is very old
So what do you say?
You can give me the dreams that are mine anyway
You’re half the world away
Half the world away
Half the world away
Tanya walks down the long pathway at the back of Jenkins Manor. Nick and Richard follow dragginging her luggage. Hilary follows them slowly. At the bottom of the garden is a helicopter that is ready to take off.
The 4 of them reach the helicopter and prepare to say their goodbyes.
Tanya: I guess it's goodbye now then...
Richard: For ever?
Tanya: (Hesitant) For now... I'll be back...when the time's right...
Richard: You sure this isn't to do with Craig?
Tanya: No...it's to do with me...I need to grief alone...get over what's happened...
Kiss walks towards Richard and gives him a hug.
Richard: You look after yourself, do you hear me?
Tanya: Dont worry I will.
Tanya kisses both of Richard's cheeks. Nick takes her to one side and hugs her.
Nick: (Whispers) Between you and me...is it Craig? Is he making you do this?
Tanya: Dont get involved with him Nick...you keep Vicky safe... you promise me that?
Nick: Yeah I promise.
The pair hug and kiss. Nick walks back towards Richard. Hilary sheepisly walks towards Tanya.
Hilary: (Smug) I suppose I'd better say goodbye too...
Tanya: You havent got away with it yet you know... you might have fooled dad...but not me...I know what a twisted bitch you really are...I dont know how yet...but when I come back...I'm gonna make you pay...
I’ve been lost, I’ve been found but I don’t feel down.
And when I leave this planet
You know I’d stay but I just can’t stand it and
I can feel the warning signs running around my mind
And if I could leave this spirit I’d find me a hole and I’ll live in it ’cos
I can feel the warning signs running around my mind
So here I go still scratching around in the same old hole
My body feels young but my mind if very old
Hilary has a look of devastation on her face. Tanya gives her a confident smile and steps onto the helicopter. She waves at her family and closes the door. The helicopter takes off and flies out of Jenkins Manor.
So what do you say?
You can give me the dreams that are mine anyway
You’re half the world away
Half the world away
Half the world away
I’ve been lost, I’ve been found but I don’t feel down
No I don’t feel down
No I don’t feel down
I don’t feel down
I don’t feel down
I don’t feel down
I don’t feel down
Tanya looks over at the aerial view of Baymoore from a distance and smiles to herself...
Oh god for a moment then i thought Tanya might kill craig then i thought craig might kill Tanya, and now she is gone :( I hope she does get revenge though!
And Sanjita better remember she took her ring off *whistles*
Fantastically written by the way :) x
:clap::clap::clap::clap: excellent stuff.. has me totally gripped.. really thought Craig was going to kill tanya.. Now she knows everything I hope she comes back and gets her revenge on them all
Craig must have a soft spot for Tanya other wise he would have splattered her brains all over that wall in the garage.. If it had been ME i would have slugged Hilarys smug face !!!!!!!!!!!! Way to go Bry & Abi,,,
I would have kicked hilary in the face on my way into the helicopter, "ooops I really didn't kick you, just like you didn't kill my kids
INT. ANDREW'S HOUSE - MORNING
Val is sitting on the sofa, fiddling with her camcroder. She is watching the Trisha Godddard Show.
Trisha: So...he'd hurt you, so what did you do to get back at him?
Woman: I slept with this dad.
:eek: Val stares at the tv screen.
Val: (To Woman) You dirty cow!!!
Val returns to messing with her camcorder. Claire walks in, looking rough.
Val: Morning love, you alright?
Claire: Cant you tell from how I look!?
Val: What...morning sickness is it...
Claire collapses onto the sofa next to Val.
Claire: Oh god...i dunno mom...this pregnancy stuff...it's just so hard...its draining all my energy...
Val: Now you know how I felt when I had you and Emma, more trouble than it was blooming worth!
Claire: Ta mom...
Val: Oh you know I'm only kidding...you must be having that...erm...what do they call it... Pre Natal depression!
Claire: Does that even exist?
Val: I dont know, but it sounds good dont it? (Val gets up) What you need to do is carry on with your life... dont dwell on it...whats done is done...your up the duff and theres no changing that!
Val walks out of the room. Claire looks watches the televison for a second.
Trisha: So he got you pregnant, what did you do then?
Woman: Got rid of it dent i?
Trisha: What you had an abortion!?
Woman: Well it was the only option...
This line repeats in Claire's head. "the only option", "the only option".
Claire grabs the yellow pages from under the phone table, and flicks trough the contents. She turns to the abortions page and runs her finger over a clinic. She stares at it in contemplation.