I could get quite worried about you hun - with all this torment you love giving the females lolQuote:
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I could get quite worried about you hun - with all this torment you love giving the females lolQuote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - NIGHT
Patrick: Niamh...but it cant be...she never said..
Hayley: Why would she? You'd buggered off to England before she even knew...
Amy throws the picture on the coffe table and sighs in disbelif
Patrick: Amy babes...what can i say...i never knew...
Amy: Talk about a cruel blow eh Patrick... of all the flings that you get a child from it had to be that one!
Hayley: Oh, do this often then does he?
Patrick: (To Amy) I...i...just...i...
Amy: My best friend Patrick!
Amy slaps Patrick across the face. Hayley laughs in atonishment at the scene infront of her.
Amy: My best friend!
Amy starts to head out of the room.
Patick: Amy!
Amy: Save it Patrick!
Amy slams the living room door shut. Patrick eyes up Hayley, trying to sus her out.
Patrick: I dont know who you are, or why youve come here...but you can piss right off!
Hayley: Oh come on Patrick...now the pycotic wife is out of the room, its a bout time we had some daddy-daughter time...dont you think?
Patrick pulls a face in disaproval and sits down.
NO!!! how much can you give to Tayna.. Craig is a nasty piece of work.. kills her husband cause she attacked him in the pub??? she was grieving over her kids for christ sake!! :angry::angry:
Amy you are an idiot for taken him back in the first place.. Wasn't too shocked about Hayley, her pic is on the character page..
This Hayley is gonna be a right madam and a little B**ch in the making, Amy should not have even gone up to visit him in the first place,, grrrrrrrr..
Craig is gonna get his :mad: :angry:
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - NIGHT
Patrick asks Hayley how her mother is, and about her life. Hayley says she wants to get to know her dad. He says its going to take him time but he’ll give it a try.
Patrick pours Hayley a coke and hands it to her.
Hayley: You might aswell add some vodka to that..
Patrick: Your under 18...
Hayley: So?
Patrick: So i wont have you drinking underaged under my house...
Hayley: Bit late to start the parental rules isnt it...mom would have let me...
Patrick: Yes we'll I'm not your mother
Patrick sits down next to Hayley
Hayley: (Mutters) Damn right...
Patrick: So then...how is Niamh these days?
Hayley: Not too good...
Patrick: Oh...
Hayley: Well you try bringing up a kid on your own with minimum wage...it isnt easy...
Patrick: Look if youve travelled over here just to make me feel guilty...its not going to work...im a selfish git...always have been, always will be...you wont get me feeling sympathy for her...or you..
Hayley: How kind of you... :rolleyes:
Patrick: (Serious) So then... sarcasm aside...what have you come for...eh?...Money?...Revenge?
Hayley: We're not all like that you know...believe it or not i come to get to know my dad...but now i'm wishing i hadnt bothered...
Patrick: Why, you dont even know me...
Hayley: I want to tough...its a missing chapter in my life that i need to read before i start another one... it'll always niggle me inside if i hadnt come to see you...who are you? what are you like? what went on between you...and mom...
Patrick: If your looking for a father...i'm just not the paternal kind...
Hayley: All i'm asking is for you is it give it a chance...
Patrick: I'll give it a go...
Hayley gives a faint smile. Patrick finds it hard to come to terms with the latest shock in his life...
INT. TORBAY HOSPITAL - NIGHT
The family room. Nick is holding Tanya tightly as she weeps out of control. Richard is pacing the room, tears running down his face. The doctor walks into the room.
Richard: Oh doctor...about time...
Doctor: Mr Taylor...Ms Donagoon...as im sure you are no doutb aware... our attempts to save Gary's life failed...i am so sorry...we did the best we can...but he's dead.
This makes Tanya cry even more. :crying:
Doctor: I pass my deepest sympathies to the entire family...it must be so hard...3 deaths in as many weeks.
Richard: Thanks
Doctor: Erm...Mr Taylor...could i have a word please?
The doctor takes Richard to one side. And starts to speak in a whisper.
Doctor: When we got to the room...Gary's life support machine had been unplugged...
Richard: You what!? How!?
Doctor: We are unsure as of yet, but the nurse on duty assures us that the machine was on when she left the room...
Richard: Wait a minute...your telling me somebody did this on purpose!? Somebody murdered Gary...
Doctor: Your guess is as good as mine Mr Taylor...but we're bringing in the police...it may be best if you dont tell Ms Donagoon at this stage...
Richard: Thank you doctor
Richard has a stunned look on his face. He looks over to Tanya crying and shakes his head in disbeleif.
EXT. TORBAY HOSPITAL MEDICAL FLATS - NIGHT
Anna, the nurse who was looking after Gary, is walking into the medical flat complex with one of her doctor friends.
Oliver: So then...fancy joining us all for a couple of pints down the Stag tonight?
Anna: Yeah sure...i'm just gonna doll myself up...get rid of the smell of blood and urine...
Oliver: (Laughs) Pleasant...
Oliver heads off in an opposite direction. Anna walks towards her flat. A black mercedes pulls up beside her. Craig gets out of the car.
Craig: Alright nurse....
Anna: Oh my Donagoon...im ever so sorry to hear about your brother...
Craig: Get in the car!
Anna: I beg your pardon?
Craig: Get in!
Craig grabs her and pushes her into the car, where some of his thugs are sitting there. She begins to scream, but they cover her mouth. All that can be heard are faint muffling. Craig gets into the passenger seat and the car drives off.
A muffled gunshot can be heard from the back of the car...
Oh my god Craig that damn well evil s.o.b. but loving it
:eek: Craig is one nasty piece of work :angry: really oh my god poor tanya :crying:
he killed the nurse??? No Way!!! he is an animal