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INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - EVENING
The residents pile into the Red Rum, where the wake is. Claire and Vicky move from behind the bar and take off the cling film from the plates of food on the buffet.
Vicky: Tanya babes...im sorry I couldnt make the funeral..i had to help Claire get the food ready and everything
Tanya ignores Vicky and walks to one of the tables in a daze. Richard talks to Vicky on Tanya's behalf
Richard: Sorry about that Vicky...she's not with it today...thanks for doing up the buffet
Richard walks over to Tanya, and Vicky walks over to Nick and hugs him. Claire goes behind the bar and starts to serve residents. Craig walks trough the doors and the pub goes silent.
Craig: Well if i knew walking into a pub would shut you all up I'd do it more often...
Richard walks past Hilary and towards Craig.
Richard: Not today Craig...it's not the time for confrontations... Tanya's just buried her kids...she could do without this...
Craig lights a cigar and barges past Richard.
Craig: Nothing and no one stops me from drinker in my local boozer...not even a wealthy Taylor...
Craig leans on the bar. And blows smoke into Claire's face.
Craig: (To Claire) Scotch on the rocks when your ready.
Claire serves Craig, the residents start to mumble between themselves. Claire gives Craig his drink. He places a rolled up five pound note into Claire's cleavage.
Craig: (With a grin) Keep the change...and get a boob job...
Claire fumes up and is about to argue back but he heads towards Tanya, the room goes quiet. Richard and Nick are on the defensive. Tanya looks up at Craig but doesnt say a word.
Craig: Tanya...i know we dont see eye to eye...but I would like to offer my...deepest..condulences... to the family
Tanya: You can save it Craig...because we all know you couldnt give a damn...
Craig: Oh Tanya dont get me wrong...as much as i like to see you Taylors suffer...two kiddiess dying...that is bang out of order...even in my books...
Tanya: I said save it Craig!
Tanya gets up from her seat.
Tanya: You've just admitted you hate us Taylors...i wouldnt be suprised if you had something to do with Gregg's masterplan!
Craig: Oh now your just talking rot you daft old mare!
Tanya: (Making sense in her mind) Yes...infact...that would work out just right...a day after i nearly drown you...i get the final mesage about my kids...It was you wasnt it! It was you!
Tanya charges at Craig and pins him against the bar. The pub goes silent as everyone watches on. Nick goes to grab Tanya but before he can do it Craig slaps Tanya hard around the face, the impact sends her flying onto the pub floor.
Claire: Right that's it! Get out! Your barred!
Craig: You cant just bare me!
Claire: You just watch me!
Richard: You should be locked up you animal!
Craig: (Sarcastic) Rawwwrrr
Nick grabs Craig and throws him out of the pub.
Nick: Enough is enough Craig...you leave us all alone!
Craig straightens his suit and walks off with an angry look on his face.
WHAT WILL CRAIG DO NEXT!?
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ohh what is criag going to do i wonder
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my god poor tanya :( the funeral...........
I don't think amy and patrick will last long, i can't believe she toook him back and :eek: Craig, what is he gonna do next?
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EXT. DEVON ROADS - DAY
Bon Jov's "living on a prayer" is blasting out of a 1960's voltswagen camper van. The van speeds down the devon roads.
18 year old Hayley is headbanging to the music, with a hippy in his mid twenties. She is smoking a spliff and singing to the Bon Jovi.
Hayley: She says: We've got to hold on to what we've got
'Cause it doesn't make a difference if we make it or not!
We've got each other and that's a lot for love -
We'll give it a shot!
We're half way there - Livin' on a prayer
Take my hand and we'll make it
I swear - livin' on a prayer!
The Van pulls up outside Valentinos restaraunt.
Hippy: Here you go...Baymoore...like you asked for...
Hayley: Awsome...cheers for this Steve i owe you one...
Hippy: Next time your visint the Emerald Isle you can buy me a pint
Hayley laughs and gets out of the van, carrying one rucksack on her back. She closes the door, it speeds off beeping its horn.
Hayley looks around at the local shops and houses and takes in a breath of fresh Devon air. Emma is walking past walking the dog. She smiles at Hayley.
Hayley: Erm excuse me...you dont happen to know where the Red Rum is do you?
Emma: Yeah i do...it's just around the corner, up the hill there...
Hayley: Thanks...
Emma: I havent seen you around here before...you on your holidays?
Hayley: No...im kinda staying here permantly now...
Emma: Oh right...I'll see you around some time maybe....
Emma and Andonis walk off. Hayley takes a deep breath and heads to the Red Rum.
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Oooo, whats Hayleys connection to the pub then??? Or is she connected to either Amy or Patrick??? Or just wants to find the pub for a drink? :D
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INT. TORBAY HOSPITAL - NIGHT
A nurse is plumping Gary's pillow. Gary is unconcious, with a machine hooked up to him. Craig walks into the room calmy.
Nurse: Erm..excuse me sir...visiting is restricted to family only...
Craig: I'm his brother...
Nurse: Oh okay...sorry sir...
The nurse siwtches the lights on and closes the blinds.
Craig: How's he doing?
Nurse: I cant really say...the doctors seem to be positive...I recon he'll make it...given any hope...
Craig: Awww...thats great news...
Nurse: Yes...yes it is...anyways I'll leave you to spend some time with your brother...
The nurse picks up her clipboard and leaves the room.
Craig walks up to Gary and sits down.
Craig: Gary...your a good man...diamond geezer...(sighs) you dont get many of them these days...thats for sure...i admire you for it... genuine guy...down to earth...works hard for his family...enjoys life... (sighs) why oh why did you have to get involved with the Taylors?
Craig gets up and paces the room, talking to Gary.
Craig: All this stuff...this... it could have been avoided if you never knew the Taylors... you just dont deserve this...but i cant make accpetions here...its a point of principle now... i cant let Tanya get away with making a mug of me...
Craig walks up to the life support machine.
Craig: This ent nothing personal mate...
Craig pulls out cables to the life support machine. The room goes silent.
Craig: Rest in peace...
Craig picks up a grape on his way out, chews it and grins as he leaves the room in satisfaction.
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:eek: OMG!!!! Why?? He cant get away with it!!! Someone must have noticed something - get the fingerprinting team down there!!
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EXT. BAYMOORE STREETS - NIGHT
Patrick and Amy are wallking down the street. Patrick has a big grin off his face.
Amy: You can take that grin off you face...
Patrick: Yeah well, they always say sex is much better after an argument...
Amy: (Laughs slightly) Seriously Patrick we have a lot to tackle in our realtionship yet...
Patrick: Like what?
Amy: You had an affair...again :rolleyes: ... i cant get over that kind of betrayal over night...
Patrick: I promise you Amy babes...this was the last time...
Amy: It'd better be Patrick...because I cant take any more of it...i dont need the stress and heartache...
Patrick: Its only when you loose things that you appreciate their value...when I thought i didnt havent you anymore...
Amy: Oh Patrick...carry on talking like that and I'll end up thinking you've actually got feelings :p
Patrick laughs sarcastically as they enter the Red Rum.
INT. RED RUM PUB - NIGHT
Vicky: God Amy where have you been..we've been rushed off our feet.... Patrick!?
Patrick: The one and only Vicky babes...im back for good now...
Vicky gives Amy a confused look but Amy smiles and shakes it off.
Vicky: Hey, who am i to judge?... You've got a visitor upstairs...
Patrick and Amy look curiously at each other and head off upstairs.
INTERCUT:
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - NIGHT
Hayley is sitting on the sofa reading one of Amy's glossy magazines. Patrick and Amy walk into the longue.
Hayley: Finally...I was begning to think you werent coming...
Patrick: Who the bleeding hell are you!?
Hayley: Hayley O Brian... your daughter!
Patrick has a look of total confusion and shock on his face :eek: . Amy grits her teeth and stares evily at Patrick....
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:eek: Patricks daughter!!!! OMG!!! Whats Amy going to do now?!
