what you on about tom and caroline? :searchme: :lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by Siobhan
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what you on about tom and caroline? :searchme: :lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by Siobhan
sorry, I meant claire, I was just talking to someone called caroline at work before I posted :rotfl::rotfl::rotfl:Quote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
there I go again, saying Tom instead of chris.. I all a muddle today.. opps
dont you mean chris rather than tom :lol: yam getting all your names muddled up bab!Quote:
Originally Posted by Siobhan
Please no tom, don't forgive her. she is using you and :rotfl::rotfl: Chris comment on recognising her
Absolute classic line :rotfl: Fantastic stuff bry - god Tom, dont forgive her, now you know the truth, shes just using you!Quote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
I nearly fell off my chair,,,whoaaaaaaaa...Kai was good to his word and said he would telllllllll,, sooooooooooo La is in troubbbblllleeeeeee :rotfl: and gawd I hope Tom throws her out on her smack head butt !!!!!!!! I am ready for what happens next:cheer: Good one Bry :bow:
INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - NIGHT
Claire and Chris are in the kitchen, leaving Tom and Luqina alone to talk things trough.
Luqina: Well say something...anything...(grabs Tom) slap me! kiss me! scream at me! hug me!... do something or say something please...!
Tom: How could you...not tell me all that?
Luqina: I didn't see that it was necessary...
Tom: Of course it was necessary...
Luqina: I wnated to move on from all that...when i advertised for a date...i wnated to forget about all that had happened...
Tom: Or to find another mug to take for a ride...
Luqina: No Tom it wasn't like that at all... i'd had enough of men mistreeting me...thinking all i was good for was sex... do you think i wnated to live a life as a pornstar...drugged up to the eyeballs...no...i knew i had to get out of there...
Tom: Oh come off it, if Kal hadnt chucked you out you'd still be in that sitaution...
Luqina: Yeah but he did...and it made me realise that things had to change...since I've been with you...all that seems like a distant memory... you have been my rock...the one good thing in my life...i was hoping it could be a fresh start for me...a chance to show what i good person i really am... (cries) but i guess I've blown all that...
Tom: Look...as far as i see it, the past is the past, all the time ive known you youve been fine...you've stayed clean, youve given up that carerr...your no longer using sex...(embarassed) well other than the obvious... all that i cant forgive you for is that you never told me...you should have been able to trust me...
Luqina: Its not the thing you tell on a first date... hey im luqina and i got "my tits out for the lads"...avaible to buy on video and dvd from your local smutty newsagents... if id told you that...and about all my past...then id have lost you (cries)... but whats that matter now eh?...i have lost you...
Tom: No...you haven't lost me...i want to help you...we'll find you an agent...you can beocme a model... a proper one... youve got the looks...and the figure...you'll be the next Kate Moss...
Luqina: ...minus the drugs...
Tom: Yeah minus the drugs, if you stick with me i'll get you sorted...i love you...and nothing...and no one will change that...
He hugs Luqina, she grins at Claire who is staring at her from the kitchen.
nnnnnnnnnooooooooooo!!! Tom you are an idiot! she is taking you for the biggest ride of your life
Nooooooo, Tom you idiot - get her out of there.
:rotfl: Snap Siobhan!! How stupid is he!!! Hes letting his heart rule his head, hes gonna get hurt
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I am gonna kill that slaggy b--ch.. omg,,tom is a total MUG,, snap out of it man, a woman like that doesn't change,, Claire was right about this coke wh--e.....arrrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhhhh:angry: :angry: :angry:
Hurt!!! that is not the word for it. She is not only going to break his heart but I reckon she is going to break his bank too. Silly Tom, just because he was alone for so long
BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - NIGHT
Claire and Chris are in the kitchen
Claire: I dont believe...how can he fall for her lies?
Chris: Maybe he's willing to give her a second chance...
Claire: She doesent deserve one...she's venomous, why cant he see she's using him for a house and his money!?
Chris: Why you so concerned?
Claire: Because hes a good man...and Romeo's mate...and yours...you should be a bit more concerned for his best intrests...
Chris: He'll learn the hard way...until then i have a nice bird to stare at everyday...
Claire: Oh typical...
Luqina drags Tom out of the living room and up the stares, in which time she manages to give Claire an evil stare...
Chris: Ten guesses what theyre gonna do...
Claire: Dirty little slapper...
Chris: Jealous are you?
Claire: Of her!?
Chris: With Romeo away, its only natural that you feel certain urges... and well im here to satisfy them if you so need...
Claire turns around and faces Chris.
Claire: For christ sake...have you got any morals!? Im your best friends girlfriend...plus i dont find you remotley attratcive!
Chris: You know...and i know...that thats not true...now ill be patient...ive got other offers...but as soon as your ready just say...
Claire: I dont believe you!
Claire gets up grabs her coat and storms out of the house. Chris smiles thinking it is all harmless fun.
Oooo Chris, naughty!! Will Claire fall for it though, whilst Romeo is away?!
I hope not. anyway what is Chris playing at, she is his best mate's girlfriend and from my opinion strickly a :nono:
A definite :nono: Siobhan - the guy obviously has no moralsQuote:
Originally Posted by Siobhan
Lets hope that Clarie remains TRUE to her guy and contiunes shunning Chris's manipulation..Gawd I wanna pull out LA's hair and light bamboo under her nails, she is EVIL,,:angry:
INT.JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Richard comes trough the front door, looking tired. Tanya runs towards her father and hugs him.
Richard: (Laughs) What a nice welcome home, you ok?
Tanya: Yeah fine...where have you been all this time?
Richard: With an old school friend...discussing a few potential deals...why..is everything ok?
Tanya: No..not really...you never guess what i caught Hilary doing...
Richard: Oh not this again Tanya...
Tanya: No listen dad, for once im talking the truth...ive nailed her...
Richard: (Unintrested) Really?
Tanya shows him his credit card...
Richard: Where...where did you get this?
Tanya: Hilarys had it...been going on a virtual spending spree with it..
The front door opens and in walks Hilary, with a smile on her face. This soon goes away when she sees Richard and Tanya together.
Tanya: Oh look who it isnt...
Hilary: Nice to see you too Tanya...oh Richard...i suppose you want to talk to me about the credit card...im so sorry but i had to use it...
Tanya: Im sure you could live without a designer handbag...
Hilary: I was just borrowing some money until my credit card came trough...living back in the uk and all...
Richard: Look you dont have to worry about paying me back...thing of it as my treat...you deserve a bit of spoiler, think of it as me making it up to you...
Hilary: Well thank you Richard, that is very genrous of you...much appreciatred...
Richard: No worries, now can i leave you two ladies to go and get a drink, whilst i sort a few things out in the study...
Hilary: Of course Richard darling, I'll pour you one at the same time...
Richard heads off to the study, Hilary and Tanya walk towards the lounge.
Hilary: I didnt seriosuly think youd go trough with it...
Tanya: I told you i would, and i always stick to my word...
Hilary: I didnt think you'd be that stupid...because now Tanya...youve made our battle personal...i wasnt really going to hurt you...why would i? i had no real reason to...but now...i will enjoy seeing you suffer...so then fancy a drink?
Hilary smiles evily.
:eek: Whats Hillary going to do!!! :eek: Can't wait for the next installment
Hillary is really playing the woman scorned big time and to the HILT .. whoaaaaaaa.....Bring on the next page Bry I am all EYES:)
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - MORNING
Claire and Emma are in the bathroom. Emma is getting ready for college.
Emma: It's nice having you around the place again...was starting to miss you...
Claire: Yeah well I cant stand it a second longer around that place, that Luqina....Tom is being such an idiot...oh and Chris is coming onto me every 2 seconds...
Emma: No way!?
Claire: Yeah he's desperate for it...
Emma: And are you?.... Desperate for it...
Claire: No...im with Romeo...
Emma: Stuff Romeoe...he buggered off to Italy without you...
Claire: For this brother's funeral!
Emma: Yeah but he could have taken you with him...teach him a lesson...have a bit of fun with Chris...
Claire: That is SO not going to happen Ems...anyways what's the latest in your love life...got over Tom yet?
Emma: Totally!...As it happens ive got a boyfriend...
Claire: Whos the lucky lad...do I know him?
Emma: You might do...its erm...Andonis Singh.
Claire: Oh christ Ems...you sure...?
Emma: Oh not you aswell Claire, dad's pulling his nose up at me dating an asian...
Claire: No its not that...but have you seen his parents!? His dad Kash...hes a blooming control freak! Ruby, his daughter, she's always telling me how much he lets it get to his head...
Emma: Yeah Andonis has been telling me all about him...god Claire I'm dreading meeting them...they sound a nightmare!
Claire: You shoulda thought of that before you got envolved with him...
Emma: But im dating him...not his family...
Claire: To Asian's family are the msot important thing Ems, and if your not good enough for their son they'll do the best to stop it...
Emmas face turns to disapointment.
What is with the men in Devon seas, they are swallowing all the **** the women are giving them. Tom and Richard should take courses in how to grow balls
INT. MANSFEILDS HOUSE - MORNING
Nick and Vicky are having fun in bed. All of a sudden the front door bell rings and they are interupted.
Nick: Oh god, who's that?
Vicky: Just ignore them...
The doorbell rings again
Vicky: They arent going to go away are they?
Nick gets out of bed and wraps a towel around his waste, he looks out of the windows and sees who is at the door.
Nick: Christ! (runs away from window) Its your mom!
Vicky: What's she doiing back!?
Nick: I dont know...but you need to hide me...
Vicky: Why?
Nick: Becuase we agreed, no one finds out about us until the time is right...
Vicky gets out of bed, and puts on a silk dressing gown, she heads out of the room.
Vicky: Stay in here and shut up...
Vicky runs down the stairs and opens the door to Rebecca.
Vicky: Mom!? Didnt think you were due back till next Wednesday...
Rebecca: I'd have been back earlier but there was a delay at the airport..Oh i couldnt stand a minute longer with the in laws...
Vicky: That bad?
Rebecca: They all still blame me for taking Gisepi away from Italy... you know what Italians are like for baring grudges...
Vicky: Romeo isnt with you?
Rebecca: No, he decided to stay on a bit longer...help out with the family buisness...
Vicky: Claire's going to be pleased about that...
Rebecca: She'll live...come on dont just stand there, bring in my cases and get the kettle on...
Vicky: (Sarcastic) Yes mam!
Rebecca: Dont be so sarcastic Victoria, it doesnt suit you...so anything happened since ive been gone...found yourself a peice of hapiness yet?
Vicky: (Heistant) No...not yet...
Rebecca: We'll youd better get your act together...or youll die a sad old spinster like me...so then wheres this cup of tea?
Vicky laughs to herself and heads to the kitchen.
wow well after missing weeks of this, i've just caught up. i feel so sorry for amy, shes so silly for trusting patrick!!!
hilary is great, im loving her! wonder how long it is till richard see's through her!
claire and chris are soo gunna get it on arent they, haha gosh.
well very good bry and abi!!!!! cant wait for more!!
Andonis family is not going to accept a "white" girl in the family, but sounds like emma is setting herself up for another HEARTBREAK...
I am also willing to bet like Lea says that Clarie and Chris might end up doing the horizonal mambo..And ol'Romeo is gonna catch em ??? Ok ok I am jumping ahead of MYSELF lol
INT. HARVEY'S MOTORS - NIGHT
Craig is looking over the books at the garage. Chris comes in with a petrol station punch of flowers and a cheap tacky card.
Chris: Right boss...managed to get what you wanted...thats 2 29 then...
Craig: I'll add it to your wages..
Chris: (Laughs) Dont bother, can i go?
Craig: Yeah sure...and if Mandy asks...i brought them from a florists in Darmouth for a fortune...alright?
Chris: Sure boss
Chris leaves. Craig starts to write his valentines card whilst on the phone.
Craig: Yeah Cal...Craig...tell him i'll buy it...whatever the price...cant miss out on a top class brothel like that... yeah tell the girls ill come and "break them in" later on in the week... oh yeah and as far as your concerned...give them some drugs...get them hocked...and take the money out their wages...(laughs) yeah...well sereves them right for working for me... (laughs) yeah alright then mate...see you soon.
Craig has an evil grin on his face. He selas the enevlope, picks up the flowers and heads home.
ooooh I do not like Mr Craig, hes a really evil person,,you would think he would want to keep his wife sweet by splurging on real good flowers, and something really nice, rather than getting gas station flowers and an el cheapo card:angry: Hope he comes down with some pecker rot or something from his brothel workers !!!!!!!!
nasty nasty nasty man!! I am not like him :angry: Mandy will go mental when she finds out what he is up to and I hope she does
I guess I am a bit worried about what that evil man would do to Mandy, he loves knocking people around.And has no problem doing it, hes a big old bully and I hate his guts :angry:
I really do not like Craig who knows what he is going to do???
Red Rum Pub Upstairs Flat
Amy and Val come into the flat, carrying bags. Amy puts her bag down just inside the doorway, Val does the same and sits on the sofa.
Amy: We’re back!…..Patrick? Patrick, are you about?
Val: Guess he’s not in.
Amy: Maybe… I’ll go check the rooms.
She goes into the bathroom, and finds nothing but empty bottles and packets. She goes back into the living room
Amy: He’s not in the shower…. Ah well, he must be out.
Val: The question is; where, and with who?
Amy: Val, he’s not like that any more. Trust me. He wouldn’t go behind my back again…
Val: Well…
Amy: Just gonna go and put my bags in the bedroom, then. You just….stay there!
Val: I’m not going anywhere. I’ll try and preserve that calmness from the spa, shall I?!
They both laugh. Amy picks up her bag, and takes it into the bedroom. She struggles to lift it onto the bed, and when she does, she collapses onto her bed in relief.
Amy: (mumbles to herself) honestly, I put all new sheets on, and he still manages to mess them up….
Amy looks around the room. It looks suspiciously tidy, compared to the rest of the flat. She shakes her head, in dismissal of it. Then lies on the bed..
Amy: (mumbles) If only I could be back at that spa….the sheets smelt as nice as these, that for sure…. Hang on, how can this bed be soo messy, but smell so nice??
She sniffs into the pillow…
Amy: that’s not conditioner… that’s perfume… (she takes another sniff)….and its not mine, that’s for sure…
wow patrick, you are going to get caught out but know him he will have some stupid lame excuse like "eh I got a sample and thought if you like it, i would get a big bottle for you"
OOOOHHHHHHHH I wanna do the Lorena bobbitt on this dude, hes gonna get caught.. but lemme think,, I honestly wonder why he is STILL married if he wants to play around :searchme: I just do not get it :searchme:Quote:
Originally Posted by Siobhan
INT: Jenkins Manor
Hilary is in the living room, flicking through shop magazines. She’s humming “money, money, money”. Tanya stands at the doorway, watching her in disgust.
Tanya: (from the doorway) You think you’ve got it all sorted, don’t you.
Hilary: Darling, didn’t see you there. Honestly, some of the things you come up with, they’re so abstract.
Tanya: Stop acting all innocent. I know what you’re up to, and you aint gonna get away with it!
Hilary: Tanya, what makes you think that anything I do with my life is your business?
Tanya: Your in my house, cause it’s my business.
Hilary: (stands up) I’m in Richards house. Because he asked me to. So you might as well stop all this, I told you before, if you want a battle, I’ll give you one. But you’re not going to win. I wont be pushed out, and that’s the end of it.
Tanya: Your not going to get anything, so why don’t you just leave?!
Hilary: Because I’m my own woman, and I can do what the hell I like with my life, because its my business.
Hilary leaves the room. Tanya goes over the phonebook, and flicks through it. She obviously angry, until she finds a number. She rings it, with a grin on her face….
Tanya: Private investagator, please. The best you have, cost doesn't matter...I want to know everything about hilary Blackstock. What she does, where she goes, you know, the usual stuff……yes that Hilary Blackstock…Tanya Donagoon…when you’ve got the stuff, ring me on my mobile….07792035769…thanks. (hangs up the phone, with a smirk on her face) she’s gonna get what’s coming to her…
Ohh a private eye .. love it,, hope she takes over photos of hilary and all sorts of info so the private eye can dig up some gooood dirt on her !!!Let the battle commence :cheer:
What is the bet Hilary will find out, sleep with the private investigator and bribe him to give false information to Tanya
I abet she does, and makes him an offer he can not refuse:p I hope she keeps it from Tanya that she knows, then throws it in her face.Should be verrrrrrry interesting :hmm:
Red Rum Upstairs Flat (night)
Amy is watching the TV, she looks uptight, and glances at the clock every few seconds. She hears a key go in the lock, and automatically jumps up, in fury.
Patrick: (walks through the door) Hi babe, how was the spa?
He goes to kiss her, but she pulls away straight away
Patrick: Hey, what’s up?
Amy: You really think I’m stupid don’t you.
Patrick: What d’ya mean?
Amy: Your meeting went on a bit long, didn’t it?!
Patrick: Well, yeah. We had a lot to discuss…. You know how it is
Amy: (tuts) I don’t know how I could be so gullible…
Patrick puts his arms on her waist, she steps backwards…
Amy: Don’t touch me, Patrick. Just….don’t.
Patrick: What’s all this about?! Why are you being like this to me?
Amy: I know you had someone here.
Patrick: what?
Amy: There’s perfume on the sheets. And its not mine.
Patrick: (sighs) not this again…
Amy: And I don’t know how I could be so stupid! Of course you didn’t have a meeting…
Patrick: Amy, I’ve done nothing. I’ve had a long meeting, I can’t be doing with this! You’ve imagining that perfume. Either that, or its yours. But no one else has been here.
Amy: Stop lying! I’m not imagining it…. Well, I can’t be….. I don’t…
Patrick: You’re confused. That’s understandable. But you need to get over this obsession that I must be having an affair. If you don’t love me, if you don’t trust me, then get a divorce. But I know as well as you do, that you can’t live without me.
He walks out, slamming the door behind him, leaving Amy confused.
Our Amy is a bit thick , Patrick knows just how to push her buttons, and get her so confused she doesn't know if she is coming or going. Why does he need her ?? does she have a poop load of money?? some one enlighten me on this one please..:hmm:
Tom , Amy and Richard should form the "gullible people of baymoor society" they fell for all that stuff