Awwwww poor cleo, she must be really missing him
yet again great job Dave
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Awwwww poor cleo, she must be really missing him
yet again great job Dave
Scene 1- A Local Hospital- Early Morning
(Vicky is lying in a hospital bed. She is in a critical condition. Gemma is keeping a bedside vigil. Tim enters, it's clear he has been crying)
Tim: (tearful) Is she gonna be ok?
Gemma: I don't know...the doctors are still carrying out some tests...they think she might have taken something down the club...Vicky wouldn't have been that stupid would she?!
Tim: Well who knows...
Gemma: Oh for goodness sake Tim! This is Vicky we're talking about here! She didn't believe in sticking needles into her body!
(Gemma turns to Tim and sees that he's been crying)
Gemma: Tim....what's wrong? Are you ok?!
Tim: Yeah...it's just the shock that's all...i watched it happen! We watched it happen! We watched Vicky being knocked down by a car! We saw her on the ground lying motionless...it's just got too me! The whole thing's got too me! :crying:
(Gemma stands up and gives Tim a comforting hug)
Gemma: I know Tim...it was awful..but we have to stay positive! Vicky's a fighter, she'll get through this....
Tim: I really hope she does...because if she don't, i'll never forgive myself! :(
Gemma: What do you mean? Never forgive yourself?!
Tim: Oh nothing!
Gemma: Tim....
Tim: Oh ****...i'm sorry Gemma...i'm so sorry!
(Gemma pushes Tim against the wall, an angry look on her face)
Gemma: Tell me what happened! :angry:
Ooooo looks like its getting too much for Tim and gemma is onto him
Scene 2- Nightlife Nightclub- Morning
(Jason is in Nightlife Nightclub making a drink from the bar after cleaning up the flooding from the toilets. Suddenly a young elegant woman steps into the nightclub, with high heels and a fur coat. Jason stares at her, impressed by her looks)
Lydia: Hi, I'm Lydia Barnes, professional pole dancer, i understand that you hired me? :cool:
(A smile is seen on Jason's face)
Jason: Yes that's right...fancy getting your kit off and doing a rehearsal now?
Lydia: In your dreams darlin'...i'm here to entertain the clubbers not the boss!
Jason: Fine...have it your way...fancy a drink?
Lydia: I thought you'd never ask! :D
That Jason just gets worse and worse
Scene 3- Brad and Duncan's Flat- Morning
(Brad returns to his and his brother, Duncan's flat after spending the night in a prison cell. Duncan opens the door as Brad is about to knock on it)
Duncan: Where the bloody hell have you been?!
Brad: It's a long story Duncan...i really don't want to talk about it! All i want is a stiff drink...
(Brad goes into the kitchen and pours himself a drink. Duncan follows him)
Duncan: Well you'll have to talk about it to the boss!
Brad: Oh ****! I forgot all about the club..trust me, i have a good excuse for not turning up for work last night!
Duncan: Well come on! Out with it!
Brad: Well like i said it's a long story but the bottom line is, i was locked in a prison cell for the night for something i didn't do!
Duncan: Oh my god! Your not being accused of anything serious are you?!
Brad: I was accused for displaying a scene of indecency...nothing serious at all but the police thought they would waste my time on me when they should be out there searching for the culprits of more serious crimes!
Duncan: Well...what led them to believe you were displaying a scene of indecency?
Brad: I was standing outside naked..
Duncan: What?! Why Brad?! :eek:
Brad: It wasn't my fault though...i'm innocent!
Duncan: How does that work?!
Brad: I picked up a woman from the club...we slept together...the next morning she burnt all my clothes and locked me outside...basically that's what happened to cut a long story short...
Duncan: Jesus Brad! Are the police gonna take it any further?!
Brad: Luckily not...they thought a night in a prison cell would make me learn my lesson! The boss will be believe me though won't he?! Don't you think that's a good enough excuse for not turning up for work?!
Duncan: Sorry Brad...but you know what Jason's like...he's not willing to hear the full story and he doesn't like lateness from staff...
Brad: Well what can I do?! I love DJing for Nightlife! I can't lose my job!
Duncan: I think it's too late Brad...he's already sacked you!
Brad: What?!
Duncan: You were late for work Brad, he doesn't want to hear any excuses over why you were...he just wants to get rid of you, being late for work was a good enough reason for him to sack you in his book!
Brad: I don't believe this! I'm pouring myself another drink!
Awwwww poor Brad, not surprised Jason wont hear him out
Scene 4- Local Hospital- Morning
(Gemma is confronting Tim)
Gemma: Tell me what happened! :angry:
Tim: I'm so sorry...i'm so sorry...
Gemma: Just spit it out! What have you done Tim?!
Tim: I spiked Vicky's drink!
Gemma: You what?! :eek:
Tim: I'm sorry! I just wanted her to have a good time!
Gemma: You *******!! If she dies, i'll never forgive you! Never! :angry:
Tim: And i'll never forgive myself! I'm sorry Gem..
Gemma: I thought you were mine and Vicky's friend Tim! But your just like all the other men in the world aren't you?! God damn pricks!
(Gemma is about to leave..but Tim grabs her by the arm)
Tim: Gemma! Wait!
(Gemma turns around and punches Tim in the face. Tim falls back onto the floor, with a bleeding nose)
Gemma: Don't think your gonna get away with this...
(Gemma storms off. Tim wipes his bleeding nose, feeling more guilty than ever)
Awww I really dont like Tim for what he has done yet I feel bad for him cos at least he feels guilty and has admitted it
Go Gemma!!! A gal after my own heart! Though I wouldnt have just punched him in the face...:sick: lol
I like Lydia alot already. I dont think (I hope not) she will take any crap from that evil little slimeball Jason...:angry:
Fab stuff, Mave, erm...I mean Dave! :D