Lauren taped what Olivia was saying! :eek: Brilliant! Lauren was definetly one step ahead, i am so glad she stopped Jared making the biggest mistake of his life!
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Lauren taped what Olivia was saying! :eek: Brilliant! Lauren was definetly one step ahead, i am so glad she stopped Jared making the biggest mistake of his life!
EXT. OLDWAY MANSION - (2002)
Will is sitting in his car, rock music on at full blast. Olivia steps outside and walks towards his car. She bangs on the window but he refuses to answer. She continues to bang until he winds the window down, a look of frustration on his face.
Will: What!?
Olivia: He's ended it...
Will: Good
Olivia: Me and your father, over...
Will: Couldn't have happened to a nicer pair.
Olivia: Ok Will I'm sorry for what I said... you know I didn't mean it...
Will: Oh you meant it alright... "I wouldn't even go as far to say I liked you"... you said it less than five minutes ago!
Olivia: I've been confused Will, I never knew what I wanted... your father proposed...it seemed the right thing at the time, but it's been tearing my heart ever since...to go with him or you... I didn't want to hurt Jared...after all he's been so good to him... but it's you I love you Will...
Will doesnt respond to this.
Olivia: I said I love you Will...
Will: If you loved me you wouldnt have dumped me for my father...if you loved me you wouldn't have said the things you said...you don't know the meaning of the word..
Olivia: I do Will, you have to believe me baby... I was blinded by Jared's money..I'd never had that much in my life... but then I realised that money can't buy you what's most important...it can't buy you love...
Will: Do you know what Olivia? I don't care anymore...
Olivia's heart sinks as Will begins to reject her.
Will: I've taken about as much **** as I can from you... you're a liar and a cheat... not just to me but to my whole family...
Olivia: But Will...you love me...you said as much... and I love you!
Will: My father rejected me in there... said I'm no son of his... and that's all becuase of you... yeah Olivia I have feelings for you... but they dont even compare to that what I have for my family...you see Olivia, with me family will always come first...now please...just go away...
Olivia: (Quietly) But I love you...
As rain starts to beat down on Olivia, Winds winds the window up, she cries out.
Olivia: Will! Will! Please dont do this to me! Please!!!
Will raises the volume of his music, and cries to himself. As Olivia walks away he wipes his eyes and looks at Jared standing at the entrance to Oldway Mansion, gesturing for his son to come to him...
I am so glad Will has rejected Olivia...will she be out of the Ashworths lives for good though?! Will Will manage to forgive Jared?! I can't wait to find out how this turns out!
INT. OLDWAY MANSION - (2002)
Will walks into Oldway Mansion, dripping wet from the rain outside. Jared takes off his jacket and wraps Will in it. Lauren hugs her brother who cries in her arms.
Lauren: Don't worry Will, it's all over now.. we haven't got to see her ever again...
Will: I loved her Lauren...I loved her so much...
Lauren: She didn't deserve it Will, there's much better woman for you out there....
Will: It feels like my heart has been torn apart... I hate her for what she's done to me!
Jared: To us...don't forget she's cheated us both...today was meant to be my wedding day....
Lauren: Yeah well, thanks to us we managed to convince you...
Jared: I'm sorry I didn't listend to you sooner, she pulled the wool right over my eyes...
Lauren: It's a bit too late dad...I wont forget this in a hurry...
Jared: Look Lauren...we are strong and together becuase we are a family...there is no point arguing between ourselves...
Lauren: Never a truer word spoken dad...
Jared walks up to Will and touches him on the shoulder.
Jared: Come on son, I don't want us to fall out over this... she's in the past now, we need to concentrate on the future..okay?
Will dries away his tears and hugs his father. The camera zooms out, and the cuts to Olivia outside in the pouring rain. A black cab has just pulled up.
Driver: Miss Zitec?
Olivia: Yeah...
She stares at Will and Jared hugging each other, and whipes away her tears. She strokes her stomach.
Oliva: Looks like it's just you and me now bump...
Olivia steps into the cab, and closes the door behind her.
Driver: Where you off to darlin'?
Olivia: Anywhere... anywhere far from here...
As the Cab pulls off Olivia looks once more at the Jared and Will, the two potential fathers of her child...
END OF PART 5
Duh duh daaaaa
Glad she didn't marry Jared, but shes gonna be back for sure if the child she is carrying is one of theirs.
Brilliant stuff Bry
Olivia is bound to return if she's pregnant with Jared or Will's child...i wonder who the father is though?! Great stuff, please reveal who the father is soon. :D
OMG :eek::eek: that had everything!!! I am so glad Jared saw her for what she is.. Who is the daddy??? Will? Jared? or just another man she had hidden away??
Excellent stuff bry!!! :clap::clap:
As promised just read all of this (dont want Bry to hate me do i lol) Good writting Bry some of that was very funny, made me happier anyway
Part 6: A Bitter Revenge...
EXT. INT/ PRIVATE MENTAL INSTITUTE - DAY (2004)
Jared's luxury sports car pulls up at the entrance to what appears to be a large mansion. A well maintained house and gardens, it is actually a private mental institute for those with mental health problems and those who have been sectioned.
Jared walks trough the entrance hall and into a communal room, a mad man is being dragged into his room to be given his daily medications, Jared looks on, a sick feeling in his stomach.
A couple of residents are sitting playing a game of chess, others are sitting, talking or carlessy wondering about. In the corner an old and frail woman called Gillian (Anette Crosby) is sitting by the window, motionless and silent, staring into space, not even blinking her eyelids.
Jared stands on the spot, looking at the woman from a distance, a concerned look on his face. A nurse comes up to Jared, obviously knowing him well.
Nurse: Mr Ashworth, it's been a while since we saw you come here...
Jared: I'm a very busy man... and it's a long way to travel...
Nurse: Indeed it is...I can assure you we are looking after her well here, its the best place she can be...
Jared: How is she coping? You know on a long term scale...
Nurse: (Sighs) We've had Gillian here for what...must be about 30 years now...
Jared: (Sad) 33...
Nurse: There hasn't been many signs of improvement since... it's a sad fact to deal with Mr Ashworth... but I think she will be like this forever...
Jared: Thanks...
Jared leaves the nurse and heads towards Gillian. He takes a seat beside her and holds her hand.
Jared: Hello mom...it's me... Jared
Gillian does not respond or aknowldge Jared's prescence, she continues to stare into space. Jared is disheartened as his smile fades.
INT. UNIDENTIFIED HOSPITAL - (2003)
Olivia is in a delivery room giving birth to her baby, she is alone, bar the mid wife. Olivia is breathign heavily and pushing with all her energy.
Midwife: Come on, just one more push...
Olivia: I can't do it!!!
Midwife: You can!!! Now push!!!
She screams loudly as she exerts the final push.
INTERCUT
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - (2004)
The scene cuts to a woman orgasming at the end of sex. The woman is blonde and good looking. She has been sleeping with Will.
Will moves away from her, as they take seperate sides of the bed. The woman is happy and excited, whereas Will has no emotions on his face. She wraps herself around him, hoping for some affection.
Blonde: That was absoultely amazing...
Will closes his eyes and frowns as she touches him, he grabs her hand and moves it away from her.
Will: Get off me...
Blonde: You okay Will?
Will: I'm sorry...
Blonde: Sorry?... Sorry for what?
Will: I shouldn't have done this...
Blonde: Don't have any regrets... I sure dont...:p
Will gets up and puts on his boxer shorts.
Will: Look you're not my type...it didn't mean anything... I'm really sorry... we shouldn't have done this...
Blonde: Excuse me!?
Will: Look you have to believe me, I didn't mean to hurt you...or use you...it's just...
Blonde: You dont know what you want....
Will: Exactly...
The Blonde, offeneded gets up and puts on her underwear.
Blonde: You make me sick...think that's all us women are good for... pig!
The blonde slips on her dress, and holds her high hells in her hands, she gives Will a look of disgust and leaves the room.
Will sits down on the bed, and looks at himself trough the mirror, he looks at himself disgusted and then lowers his head in shame. He rubs his hand trough his hair in stress, and closes his eyes to avoid tears.
The sound of high hells can be heard as Lauren walks into the room, she stands beside Will, who is looking worse for wear.
Lauren: Hey bro... what's up? You look like ****...
Will: I feel like it...
Lauren: Are you okay?
Will: No... no I'm not..
Will suddenly bursts into tears. Lauren sits down beside her brother and holds him as he cries in her arms.