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Originally Posted by Siobhan
Bry are u taking notes here LOL Siobham ain't that the damn truth :rotfl: :rotfl:
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Originally Posted by Siobhan
Bry are u taking notes here LOL Siobham ain't that the damn truth :rotfl: :rotfl:
hope so... I am sure Bry has lots of things coming up with these guys... can't waitQuote:
Originally Posted by JustJodi
awww nick and vicky yay :) hehe
when you said bacardi and coke i thought of little britain haha sorry :p
more soooon hehe
this is brilliant. pity we couldn't see it on telly. it'd make a nice change for us.
lol, same here!!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by crazylea
Man those Bacholear boys are great lol
was trying to think of a female drink, but shes too young for the G&T etcQuote:
Originally Posted by crazylea
next part up in a few minutes!
Jenkins Manor - Night
Richard is sitting alone in the study, tears run down his face as he looks at the picture of his children. He rubs his finger over Ed's face...
Richard: Goodbye my son...daddy will miss you...
he lays the picture down flat, unable to stare at it. Tanya walks in.
Richard: Tanya...i thought...?
Tanya I couldnt sit around my house any longer...i just kept thinking...and it was upseeting me...we neeed to be together at a time like this...wheres Nick?
Richard: Hes down the pub with Vicky Mansfeild...
Tanya: Her again!? Hes spent more time with her in the last 24 hours than...
Richard: Its his way of dealing with it...besides theyve been friends for years...i suppose she's consoling him...
Tanya sits down and there is a silence for a while....
Richard: So...ya know...how are you coping?
Tanya: Coping?....I'm not coping....you and nick might be able to blot it out...but lets face it...neither of you were close to him like i was....you always hated him...and Nick only came back a few years ago....ive always been close to Ed....i brought him up...we were one...seperate we were nothing..(starts to cry) every second since you said yes on the beach i have been crying on the inside...one big dark raincloud has overshadowed by life...and i cant see it clearing...i dont know how im going to live without him dad...i really dont...
Gary rushes in fast hearing Tanya's raised voice
Gary: Tanya babe...oh come here...
He rushes over to her and holds her as she cries in his arms...
Tanya: I swear to god dad...im not going to let this lie! Craig Harvey is going to regret the moment he ever brought Ed down to his sad little level...im going to tell the police everything!
Richard: (Panicky) No...no you cant!
Tanya: Dad...that man was responsible for your son's death! You know it! I know it...and im sure as hell that the whole of Baymoore know it! He will go down...he will pay for what he has doen to this family...
Richard: We are paying for what Ed did to him! Dont you undestand that! And if we go to the police it will be more than a fag end that he uses on us...it will be the end of a gun!
Gary: You what!? A fag end.....! Your telling me that Craig Harvey set fire to Val's!?.....He put Tanya's life in danger!?
Richard: Yes! And it was a warning...a warning for us to keep shut about everything to do with Ed! So no Tanya we will not be going to the police!
The doorbell rings and Gary goes to answer it.
Tanya: You might not want to, but i do! How can we let this lie! Ed's dead...theres no changing that, but we need to have some conclusion to this chapter in our lives! And if it means Craig going to jail for his crimes then so be it! Im not afraid of him...that ******* will pay for what he did to Ed!
Richard looks ghost white, Tanya turns around, standing beside Gary is Craig, dressed in a long black coat, holding a gun.
Craig: Is that right Tanya? Well we'll see about that...
oooo cant leave it like that!!! more!!
darn it Bry don't leave me hanging like that,,, :crying: Good stuff very upbeat and makes u wanna turn to the next page to see what happens next,., u go my friend !!!!:cheer: