What a brownie point for Gregg no he should not have done this in the first place
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What a brownie point for Gregg no he should not have done this in the first place
Scratch the brownie pt. hope he is nabbed and hung, shot, gassed, and burnt :DQuote:
Originally Posted by bakedbean
EXT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
Hoards of police officers get out of the cars and runs towards the warehouse. A senior Police officer speaks trough a megaphone.
PO: Gregg Bryant! This is Torbay police... we have you surrounded! Come out with your hands up! I repeat come out with your hands up.
Tanya is crying to herself. Richard is holding her. Nick holds Vicky tightly. Hilary works her way round from the back entrance to the family.
Hilary: Oh my god! What's happening!?
Richard: They're just about to storm the warehouse, what took you so long?
Hilary: I had to go and find a callbox for the police...
Richard: What about your mobile?
Hilary: Battery's flat... what about the children? Are they in there?
Richard: They must be...
PO: This is your last chance Gregg! Come out with your hands up or we'll come in to get you!
INT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
Gregg is walking around the warehouse, muttering a lulabye. He is throwing petrol all around the warehouse, inclduing on the children. They are screaming.
Gregg: Hush little baby, don't say a word, Momma's going to buy you a mockingbird
Gregg covers his eyes from the blue sirens. He starts muttering louder to bloke out the Police Officer's calls.
Gregg: Dont worry Kids...not long now...we're going to a better place...up above...
All of a sudden the doors are kicked open and sworms of police officers charge into the warehouse. Gregg smirks at the officers.
Gregg: Bye bye...
Gregg lights a match and throws it down onto the petral. The warehouse instantly goes up in flames, the police officers and unable to get to Gregg or the children.
POs: ****! Get out of here! Come on quick!
EXT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
The police run out of the warehosue fast.
POs: Fire! Quick call the fire brigade!
Tanya looks at Gary in horror.
Tanya: (Devastated) Oh my god...my babies!
Pos: He's covered them in petrol!
Tanya: Omg NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Gary steps away from the family and throws off his jacket.
Nick: Gary...wha...wha what are you doing!?
Gary: I've got to save my kids...i've just got to....
Richard: Dont be a fool Gary! You'll die!
Gary: I've got to Richard!
Gary runs off towards the burning building.
Tanya: (screams) NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! GARY!!!! NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
Richard and Nick have to restrain Tanya from running towards the buildining. Vicky and Hilary clutch each other in fear. Hilary has a worried and shocked look on her face, it is clear that things have gotten more serious than she had intedned.
Tanya: Come back! Gary Please!!!!!!!!!!
Gary: I Love you Tanya!!
Gary runs into the building...
Who will die? Who will survive?
Holy *******.... Bry U got me by the edge of my seat,,, please let the kids live,, :crying: And Gary too !!!!!!!!!!!
Oh My Godddddd!!!!
You better post the next bit bry or abbey - and pretty darn quick!!! :rotfl: I need to know whats happening....NOW!!!!
(Please :D )
arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhh Bry and Abi,, give me a fix quick on whats gonna happen next,, arrrrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhhh I gotta know I hafta know gotta gotta hafta hafta !!!!!!!!!:rotfl:
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE:p
I think they are all going to die dont ask me why i just have this feeling. Hilary what have you done!!!
:eek: What?????? Just caught up! And Oh mu god, i hope its hilary and gregg that die meanies!
You must post more i need to know what happens please x
EXT. ABANDONDED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
The fire engines pass the gates to the warehouse. A sign is fixed to the gates:
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Tanya: Please! You've got to save my husband! And my kids! Please! Im begging you..!
PO: The firemen will do the best that they can..
INT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
Gary runs into the warehouse, his body natural falls back with the heat of the fire. He starts to cough as he breaths in the smoke. In the distance he can see Gregg running up a metal staircase to the rooftop.
Gary: You *******! Why did you do this!?
Gregg: All I ever did was love her...and she threw it all back in my face!
The cops storm in from the roof entrance and grabs Gregg. He shouts loudly in frustration.
Gregg: See you in hell Gary!
The police lead Gregg up onto the roof and into a police helicopter. Gary continues to cough, he charges into the flames toward his kids who are screaming.
Gary: Dont worry kids...daddy's coming to save you...
As Gary gets towards his kids, he sees flamable gas signs, he looks around in a panic and sees the room is filled with gas cansiters...
Gary: ****!
He begins to untie the children from the chairs. We get constant cuts to the flames approaching the gas canisters. The firemen enter the warehouse but it is too late...
BOOM!
EXT. ABDANODNED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
The entire warehouse explodes, parts of the building are flung into the air and land in the nearby water. The police, firemen and the Taylors are forced back by the impact of the explosion.
EXT. RED RUM - NIGHT
The punters rush outside as they hear an explosion.
James: What the hell was that!?
Val: Oh my god! Look! (Points) Over there!
In the distance the burning wrekage or the warehouse can be seen.
EXT. ABANDONDED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
The police are rushing from the warehouse, pushing the Taylors as far away from the building as possible.
Tanya: Nooooo!!!!!!!! GARY!!!!!!
Hilary wanders off from the others, she starts to panick and breath heavily, she throws up into the water. Firemen frantcily run around shouting commands and getting the hoses out from the engines. As they run into the warehouse...
BOOM!
A second smaller explsosion rocks the warehouse. Tanya screams frantically.
Tanya: NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow! :eek: This is brilliant! Definetly keeping me on the edge of my seat!