Devon Seas 2006

Oooo go Natasha - but will she stick to her word....:hmm: whats Patrick going to do now....

I knew that was going to happen because Patrick just can't face up to things that he ruined his marriage with Amy because he had a fling With Natasha!

INT: RED RUM PUB
Annie and Eddie are walking by the pub, talking. Tanya, Nick, Hilary and Richard are standing outside the pub...

Richard: Come on Tanya, just a little drink together as a family, thats all i wanted.

Tanya: I can't go out and have a drink, while my kids are missing!

Hilary: (mutters) Like thats stopped you...

Richard gives Hilary a "shut up" look. Annie and Eddie walk past the family. Tanya overhears their conversaion...

Eddie: Well i thought that old warehouse was empty, but i could have sworn i saw some people around there earlier. Strange, really. You used to know everyones going's on around here, but things have changed haven't they!

Tanya follows them...

Tanya: What was that?!

Eddie and Annie stop, Nick, Richard and Hilary catch up with them...

Eddie: I was just saying how things have changed around here, recently...

Tanya: Not about that. About a warehouse...?

Annie: Apparently theres been some people around that old warehouse on the beach front...

Eddie: I heard then last night. Making an awfull racket they were. So i had a look this morning... theres definetly something going on. You dont normally get those types around this area..

Richard: (suspicously) What type..?

Eddie: A man, grown up, but he certainly hadn't had a shave in a while. Hardly respectable, if you ask me. There was a some children as well... 2 maybe? They didn't look very happy to be going down their with him, in my opinion. Pushing them down their like that- hardly the sort of behaviour you get from an adult! And a car... smart, but a bit torn up. Like it had gone down a rough road...

Tanya: :eek: my god.. the children!

Nick: The car... what colour was it?

Eddie: Dark. Mind you, i was a fair distance away...

Annie: And his eye sight certainly isn't what it used to be, isn't that right, Eddie?

Eddie nods slightly...

Eddie: Why is this all important?

Nick: Gregg... That must be Greggs car...

Tanya: That means... omg, he's taken my babies!

Tanyas eyes well up with tears, she turns to run down to the beach, Richard grabs her, and hugs her, while she cries into his chest..

Richard: Now, now... we need to sort this rationally...

Tanya: I don't care about rationally, i just want to find my children!

Tanya and Richard rush off towards hte beach. Nick closely follows, shaking his head with shock. Hilary pauses for a moment, then looks back up at Richard and Tanya, with a look of shock on her face. She thanks Eddie and Annie, and slowly follows, in shock...

I'm confused - why is Hilary suddenly looking shocked?? I thought she wanted bad things to happen to Tanya.....

Great stuff though - is it the twins??!!

INT. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT

The dark and dingy warehouse, a few beams of natural light shine trough the broken windows. Melissa and Jacob are tied on chairs, their backs together. They look weak and malnurished. Dirty rags are tied around their mouths. They are crying and whining.

Gregg is siting in a chair facing them. He has let himself go, wearing a dirty tracksuit and an overgrown beard. He is playing with his hands in a sinsterly addictive way. He is rocking himself and singing lulabyes to the children.

Gregg: Rockabye Baby, on the treetops. When the wind blows, the cradle will rock. When the bough breaks, the cradle will fall. And Down will come baby, cradle and all!

There is the sound of high heels across the concrete floor. Gregg instantly turns around.

Gregg: Who's that!?

Out of the shadows appears Hilary.

Gregg: The game's up Gregg... they've found you out... the cops are on the way... you've had it...

Gregg has a nervous look on his face. Hilary genuinally appears to be on the Taylors side.

Gregg: But... but...

Hilary walks up to him and strokes his face. She hands him a breifcase filled with money.

Hilary: Theres a quater of a mil in there... job well done.

Hilary has a smug look on her face.

:eek: Hilary!!! You complete ..... :angry: Now shes hand over money what are they going to do with the twins though.....

INT. ABANDONDED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT

Hilary hands over the money to Gregg. As she does this police sirens can be heard, and blue lights illuminate the warehouse.

Hilary: ****!

Hilary grabs the money back from Gregg. She starts to run out of the warehouse.

Hilary: (To Gregg) Come on you imbaceal! Do you want to get yourself arrested!?

Gregg: But the children...

Hilary: Leave them! They will be found in a minute...

Gregg: No...i cant leave the children...

Hilary: Sod you then! But if you mention my name to the police than so god help you!

Hilary runs out of the back entrance of the warehouse. She runs across the wooden platform and finds herself an alcove to hide in behind some crates of fish. She breaths heavily.

The camera pans over the rooftop of the warehouse, where we see an aerial view of the police cars speeding down the wooden plaform to the fornt entrance. Police rush out of the cars, and Tanya, Gary, Richard, Nick and Vicky all stand by.

IS GREGG'S GAME UP?

WILL HILARY GET CAUGHT?

WILL JESSICA AND JACOB SURVIVE?

Ohhh my god this is so exciting i dont want Hilary to get caught but Gregg he can go straight to hell lol

I want both of them caught, and it will put Richard in his place and it will give Tanya a bit more credibility.. she was right all along about Gregg and Hilary both.. Of course Hilary will probably come up trumps, and claim she found the KIDS AND SUSSED out Gregg and got the money back,, etc.. I want HILARY caught only cause she is a nasty piece of work and Greg deserves to burn in Hell for going along with it ( he gets a tiny brownie point cos he was a bit concerned about the kids.. note: I said "a bit " ):angry: :angry:

Great script BB! It's all getting exciting :)