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INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
The pub is busy, with the usual Saturday Night rush. Natasha walks into the pub, and the mood instantly turns dull. She walks to the bar, where Patrick is acting funny with her.
Patrick: Erm...Tasha...didn't expect you up and about so soon...
Natasha looks round, many people are staring at her, there is an awkard atmosphere in the pub. She turns around and adresses the pub.
Natasha: What's your problem eh!? Don't know how to act around a rape victim!?
Patrick looks down at the floor, unable to make eye contact with her...
Natasha: It's nothing to be ashamed of you know! If anyone should be ashamed of themselves it should be the monster that did this to me...and the others!
Kash and Andonis look uncomfortable at this, unsure where to look...
Natasha: I tell you all now, whoever is responsible for this is going to pay! Sooner or later I'm going to remember who did this...
Kevin Mitchell and his yobby friends, who are sat around the corner, secretly drinking a bottle of Vodka from the shops, look at each other uncomfortably.
Natasha: And when I do, I'll make sure they go down for life!
The Bachelor Boys look into their pints, unsure of what to do or say...
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EXT. BAYMOORE STREETS - NIGHT
Craig is walking home from the garage. He sees the "for sale" sign being put up. He laughs smugly, picking up his phone he dials the number on the sign.
Craig: Hello, yeah i'm intrested in making an offer on the Marbal Nightclub, yeah I'll hold...
Craig has a smug smile on his face as he continues walking home.
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EXT. NATASHA'S FLAT - NIGHT
Natasha is walking home, outraged by the audacity of the punters at the Red Rum. A dark figure begins to follow her, wearing a hoody, swinging a cricket bat in their hand.
INT. NATASHA'S FLAT - NIGHT
The scene cuts to Natasha closing her front door, she throws her coat onto the sofa in a rage, switches on the kettle and then the television.
There is a knock at the door. Natasha sits down and ignores it. They knock again, this time more violently. Natasha gets up, slightly worried.
Natasha puts the chain on the door before opening it. The hooded man smashes the chain in half with the baseball bat.
Natasha immediatley tries to slam the door shut, but he pushes it open, flinging Natasha onto the floor, she breaths heavily, scared for her life...
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:eek:
OMG !!
Is this the rapist again, after Natasha, wanting to silence her forever?! Oh gawd, I hope shes ok.
And I hope Craig doesn't get his hands on the club - let someone else have it (Jon as a gift for Mandy or something equally evillll)
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INT. TORBAY SHOPS - DAY
A montage of Hayley walking around shops, trying on and buying clothes. As she leaves each shop, she is carrying more and more bags.
INTERCUT:
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - NIGHT
Hayley struggles up the stairs, with about 30 shopping bags in her hands. Patrick walks out onto the landing to see what the noise is about.
Patrick: What on earth?
Hayley: Help me with some of these bags before my arms drop off!
Patrick takes some of the bags and has a nose inside of them.
Patrick: What's in all these bags?
Hayley: Just the essentials, you know clothes, shoes...
Patrick: 30 Bags!?
The pair walk into the living room, where Amy is sitting on the sofa.
Amy: Where have you been?
Hayley: Shopping of course!
Amy looks at the amount of shopping bags with horror.
Amy: How much you have bloody spent?
Hayley: About 7 grand of it...
Amy: Oh, Jesus Christ!
Hayley: What!?
Patrick: That money was supposed to go towards the future..
Hayley: The money goes where I see fit best... besides clothes are the future :D
Hayley grabs the bags off Patrick and walks confidently towards her room. Amy and Patrick look at each other, clearly unimpressed.
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Thats a sounds like a woman speaking. I bet she had a good shop. Hope ANtashas going to be OK.
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INT. NATASHA'S FLAT - NIGHT
Natasha puts the chain on the door before opening it. The hooded man smashes the chain in half with the baseball bat.
Natasha immediatley tries to slam the door shut, but he pushes it open, flinging Natasha onto the floor, she breaths heavily, scared for her life...
Natasha crawls backwards, nervously. The man lurches towards her. She puts her hand behind her, trying to grab whatever she can to throw at him.
The man grabs her arm away from the table, the pair tussle and fight on the floor.
Natasha: Get off me you *******!
The man tries to swing the bat towards her, but she bites his arm. He grunts in pain, but smashes her head against the corner of the table.
Natasha becomes dizzy, but the knock on the head triggers flashbacks of the night of her rape. Blurry images of the rapist, but she can't make who it is...
The man begins to throttle her. She sniffs, smells his aftershave, and recognises it.
She kicks him in the groin and pulls off his balaclava.
Natasha: Oh god! It's you!
Natasha gets up, nervously, the man is still rolling around on the floor in pain. She holds her hands against her mouth in shock and nervously runs out of the flat...
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:eek: OMG Who is it!!! I need to know who it is?!
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thats a heck of a cliffhanger, who is it, at least she realised it was the same man !!!.
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Wow! What a cliffhanger!! :eek: I need to know who the rapist is now! Atleast Natasha knows who it is now...it looks like the rapist's time could be up.
I hope Craig doesn't get his hands on Marbal nightclub!
