come on Leah kick some butt get revenge and for god sake Bry and Abi let those kids go lol
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come on Leah kick some butt get revenge and for god sake Bry and Abi let those kids go lol
Tanya is alone on the beach, Craig mentions some words like I told you’d pay for your crimes…she hit him and she tries to drown him in the water, Nick intervenes and stops her from doing so. Craig tells her that’s the last mistake she’ll ever make.
EXT. BAYMOORE BEACH - NIGHT
Tanya is sitting alone on the beach, running sand trough her hands, drinking a bottle of Vodka. She looks out to sea, trying to find comfort for her pain. Behind her Craig appears.
Craig: Look at you... a drunken old slag...lying on the beach...
Tanya looks around and sees Craig standing beside her...
Tanya: My kids have been adbucted! I think i have every right dont you!?
Craig: Abducted? Oh yes that's right...(laughs to self) I always told you you'd pay...
Tanya gets up and stares Craig in the face menicingly.
Tanya: What did you just say!?
Craig: Stir people up the wrong way...and well...sooner or later they're gonna fight back...
Tanya lashes out at Craig, she grabs his tie and starts to strangle him.
Tanya: You *******! What have you done to my kids!? What the hell have you done to them!?
Craig pushes Tanya to the floor. She mascare running down her face, her hair ruffled...
Craig: The state of you... the rich and glamrous Tanya Donagoon...reduced to a snizzling wreck!
Tanya: How could you Craig!? I knew you were evil! But to bring my kids into this!?
Craig: I havent Tanya... I havent even touched them... i dont stoop that low...I'm just saying what goes around...comes around... someone like you is asking for trouble!
Tanya: (In Despair) Why!? What have i done!? To anyone!? To you!?
Craig: I told you... not to mention a word to anyone... about Ed...and all that stuff you know about me and him... but oh no... you've gone and blabbed it to the sister in law! Last mistake Tanya...
Tanya: Stop it Craig! Stop threatning me! Stop torturing me! I cant take any more of it!
Craig laughs at her and starts to walk off. She grabs his legs and pulls him down, he falls to the floor with a loud thud. The pair roll and grapple each other on the beach. Tanya drags him towards the sea, and dunks his head in.
Whenever she brings his head up he gasps for breath in despair
Tanya: I know its you! You hate me! Well i hate you!
Tanya keeps his head under the water this time, despite his obvious struggle. Nick sees this horid site from a distance.
Nick: Tanya!?
Nick runs over to the beach and sees the scene in more detail.
Nick: Tanya! Stop it! Your going to kill him!
Nick slaps some sense into Tanya and releases Craig. Craig falls to the floor gasping for breath, drenched.
Nick: What were you thinking of Tanya!?
A drenched Craig gets up, shaking the water from his suit. He spits onto the beach.
Craig: I swear to god Tanya... that's the last mistake you or your kids are ever going to make...
Craig walks off. Tanya and Nick look at each other with comeplete looks of horror on their faces.
Ohh man Devon seas can it ever not stop being so brilliant lol
Oh Craig you *******.. if you have those kids give them back.. they did nothing to you at all :angry:
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - DAY
The lights are off, except for some lamps that are on. The room is decorated with ballons and a happy 18th banner for Emma's birthday. The room is filled with teenagers and music is playing loud.
Claire walks down the stares holding her head. Val walks up to her.
Val: Feeling any better love?
Claire: (Snapping) I would be if it wasnt for this music blaring so loud!
Val: Oh Claire leave off...it's your sisters 18th...let her have a good time...
Claire: Okay...but im warning you...im in a mood to let off some steam.
The doorbell rings and Emma answers it in walks Chris, Tom, and Luqina.
Emma: Hiya guys...come on in...grab yourself a drink...
Claire sees Chris and the others enter the room.
Claire: God what the hell has she invited them for!? She hates Luqina...
Val: Claire! Just stop it will you! Dont spoil the night!
Claire holds her arm in annoyance. Emma is laughing and joking with Tom and stroking him effectionally on the sly. Andondis is sitting alone at the other end of the room. Claire marches over to Emma.
Claire: Oi you! Grow up will you!
Claire grabs Emma away from Tom. The crowded room look on at the scene.
Emma: Claire...what you playing at!?
Claire: Your meant to be 18 not 8! Stop pineing over Tom will you! He dont want you!
Emma: I was just having a friendly chat with him Claire!?
Claire: I saw what you were doing! Your boyfriends only over there! For christs sake Emma you can be a stupid cow at times!
Tom: (Quietly) I think we'd better go...
Emma: No...dont go...ignore this stupid bitch...
Claire: What did you call me!?
Emma: A stupid bitch...
The pair begin a bitch fight in front of the crowd. Val and James run towards them and split them up!
Val: Pack it in! The pair of you!
Claire: Did you see what she was doing!?
James: Get to your room Claire!?
Chris laughs into his drink at this.
Claire: I beg your pardon!? Did you just...!?
James: Just get up there and shut up!
Claire storms past the gawping crowd in tears. The room is in silence. Val puts on the YMCA.
Val: Oh my favourite! Come on folks dance with me! You know you want to!
Val starts to sing and dance, people laugh at her, Emma covers her face in embarassment.
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Gary is emptying the living room bin. There are 3 empty bottles of Vokda.
Gary: Erm...Tan...
Tanya: What?
Gary: I think we need to have a chat about these...dont you?
Tanya: What about them?
Gary: 4 in as many days?
Tanya: Gary...i think i have an excuse...
Gary: Well...
All of a sudden there is a loud smash as a brick is thrown trough the living room window. Tanya screams as the brick narrowly misses her.
Gary: Christ! ... Tanya are you ok!?
Tanya: (Panicking) Yeah... what was that!?
Gary picks up the brick, it has a note wrapped around it in cut newspaper letters.
YoUR KiDs tImE HaS RAn OuT!
Gary looks at the note in horror.
Tanya: What....what is it Gary?
Gary doesent answer. Tanya walks up to him and looks at the note. She bursts into tears.
Tanya: Oh my god...no... what are we going to do!?
INT: ANDREW'S HOUSE- night
Val is still dancing along to YMCA. She walks up the stairs, while doing it, and tries to subtly go upstairs. She disappears, and the room roars with laughter, and carries on drinking and dancing. Val rolls her eyes, walks into Claires room, and slams the door behind her. Claire is lying on the bed, staring into space
Val: Well?
Claire: Well what?
Val: What was all that back there? Its her 18th girl- let her have a laugh for god's sake!
Claire: Just leave it. I can't handle all this... not now... not now that i'm...
Claire rolls over, and faces the other direction, and covers her face...
Val: Come on, tell me whats up? You can't just snap at your sister like that without a good reason. Or at least i'd hope not, or your gonna have some serious questions coming your way!
Claire: I thought everything was going to be ok... i really did. I mean, i knew it could happen but.... but things like this dont happen to me... not me...not now...
Val: Things like what?
Claire says nothing...
Val: Claire?
Claire: I'm pregnant... did a test earlier, after being sick and all that. What the do i do....? What the hell do i do...?
Claires eyes well up with tears, Val sits next to her, Claire sits up and cries into Vals shoulder...
Val: Come on... dont cry...
Val runs her fingers through Claires hairs, bites her lip, and lets Claire carry on crying, without saying a word...
OMG - the brick - the kids - whats going to happen?? And whos the daddy?! Whats Claire going to do!!
:clap: great stuff still guys - keep it coming!
nnnnnnnnnoooooooooo!!!! the time can't be up.. give her kids back you *******s :angry::angry::angry::angry:
Oh my god, :eek: No the kids need to be alive oh god?! Craig is evil, she shouldn of drowned him.