can't wait to read it again i was beggining to wonder what happned to Devon Seas i'm considering writing my own soap again but i don't know anyway please post soon :thumbsup:
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can't wait to read it again i was beggining to wonder what happned to Devon Seas i'm considering writing my own soap again but i don't know anyway please post soon :thumbsup:
excellent the originals are coming back baby good luck
*Keither Sutherland Style Voice Over :rotfl: * Previosuly On Devon Seas...
Edward Taylor was in trouble with local crime boss Craig Harvey, before leaving Baymoore he said what he flet to his father and was disowned infront of everyone. Craig then forced Ed to do an illegal job for him or risk death.
Belinda Andrews died leaving the Andrews family in shock.
Amy and Patrick's marriage is on the rocks, Patrick is havign a secret affair and Amy wants a baby to salvage their marraige.
Mandy is suspicous of Craig's part in the robbery and starts to seriosuly suspect that her husband is the criminal that every makes him out to be...
Craig got a phone call regarding Ed, he was furious, the police called at the Taylor household with news on Ed....
New Episode Coming Tomorrow!
INT. Jenkins Manor - Night
The police are in the living room. Richard and Tanya are talking to them.
Richard: Well officers, we havent heard anything from him since he left... Tanya tried to make a phone call....
P.O: Any luck?
Tanya: No its on answerphone....
Richard: I heard her tough, she said he may be in trouble with Craig Harvey...
P.O: The local mechanic?
Richard: One of this respectable titles yes, but try pimp, drug dealer, extortner....the list is endless...im suprised you lot havent been able to nail him before that....
P.O: It isnt as easy as that Mr Taylor, people like Harvey cover their tracks well...
Tanya: Anyways enough about Craig, i presume youve found something to do with Ed?
P.O: Yes we have, some of the officers down Dover have found Edward's car desrted near the docks...
Richard: What? He's left the country!
P.O: No we found his passport in the car... along with this
The police officer holds up a bag of cocaine. Richard is shocked beyond belief.
EXT. DEVON SAFEHOUSE - MORNING
Craig parks his car down an avergae street. He is on the phone to Mandy
Craig: Yes Love...ive just had to go for a spot of buisness....car auction for a mate... yeah i'll be back later i supose.... okay....bye love
Craig bangs on the door of a house, Nigel opens the door.
Nigel: Craig...
Craig storms trough the house.
Craig: Where the ******* hell is he Nigel!? How hard is it to keep a lad locked up in a house!?
Nigel: He must have crept out when i was...
Craig: When you was what? Stoned out of your head? You pillock! Did he take anything with him?
Nigel: Um....
Craig: Dont mess with me Nigel! Tell it to me straight!
Nigel: He's raided the safe....took a grand in cash...and the smack...
Craig: What all of it?
Nigel: Yeah
Craig: You Fing Tard! Thats over a million on the streets! You dozy plank!
Nigel: Im sorry Craig...
Craig: Not half as sorry as Ed's gonna be when i find him...
Thats great BB. Loving Craig's charcter. Am i the only one that finds him histerical already?!
this is great bb. keep up the good work.
That's well good.
Yey you started writing again!
thsi is fab honey! Do more soon, hope ed is alrite
He is isn;t he?????
So who does everyone think Patrick is seeing????
that woiuld be telling :p ed's fate will be learnt come christmas folks!Quote:
Originally Posted by *Fanatic*Loves Dennis*