brilliant first epside, danielles a bit forward isn't she.
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brilliant first epside, danielles a bit forward isn't she.
Loving Colin's moods there is going to be fireworks between him and Carter.
Scene 1
INT. FIVE STAR HOTEL BEDROOM - MORNING
Noel is asleep, in bed with Marie the hooker. She rolls over, putting her arms on him, he wakes up and jumps out of his skin, getting out of bed.
Marie stirs, a smile on her face, her make up has faded and her hair is a mess.
Noel holds his hands behind his head in disbelief.
Noel: Christ, what was I thinking!?
Marie: Oh thanks :rolleyes:
Noel: You're a hooker, you're not paid for an opinion or feelings...
Marie: You *******!
Noel: Come on, get out of my room you grubby little whore!
Marie: If I'm grubby, what does that make you for getting with me... god you make me sick.
Noel: Piss off out of my room you slag! What is it? Money you want! Here have this!
Noel throws a few notes on the bed, totally degrading her.
Noel: No get the hell out of here...
Marie: You pig...
Noel: Are you gonna go, or d'ya want me to throw you out!?
Marie gets up, puts on her dress and picks up the notes, humiliated. She casts Noel a look of contempt as she leaves the room...
Scene 2
INT. JAMIE'S FLAT - MORNING
Jamie's flat - a luxury open planned flat, looking out onto the River Thames. Jamie is walking around the room, in his boxers, on the phone to someone.
Jamie: Look don't rush me, I need to build up some confidence with him don't I? I'm just the new bot, it's gonna take a while before I get in his good books...
In the background he can hear the noise of someone walking into the room.
Jamie: (Huriedly) Look I've gotta go...
Jamie hangs up the call, just as Danielle walks into the room, wraped in only a towel - she obviously stayed the night.
Danielle: Who you on the phone to this early?
Jamie: No one...
Danielle: It must be someone important at 7 in the morning...
Jamie: (Snappy) It's nothing okay!?
Danielle: Fine...no need to snap...
Jamie walks over to Danielle and wraps his arms around her.
Jamie: Sorry, it's just a bit stressful, knowing I've got to prove myself to everyone....
Danielle: Well you certainly don't have to where I'm concerned, last night was amazing :p
Jamie: Really?
Danielle: Yeah, you're quite good for a skinny little runt :p
Jamie: Quite?
Danielle: Okay...very :D
Jamie leans in for a kiss, as he drops her towel and lowers her onto the sofa...
Scene 3
INT. MICHEAL'S OFFICE - DAY
Micheal is sat in his office, reading the sports section of the newspaper, there's a knock on the door.
Micheal: Yeah, come in...
Sean walks into the room, looking a bit concerned.
Micheal: Sean, what an unexpected pleasure...
Sean: Alright boss...just wanted a word if it's okay...
Micheal: Of course it is, I've always got time for you. Take a seat.
Sean sits down, looking uneasy.
Micheal: What's on your mind then?
Sean: It's Colin...
Micheal: What about him?
Sean: I don't want to be stepping on anyone's toes boss...
Micheal: Nonsense, you're not...
Sean: If me being here is going to cause conflict for the group, then maybe it's best if I...
Micheal: I didn't sign you to this club, for you to be watching your step all the time...
Sean: I just can't help feeling that Colin hates me...
Micheal: You leave him to me, he's just paranoid that you're gonna take over as skipper...
Sean: That's not my intention at all boss, I've just come here to play football...
Micheal: And he'll get that into his head eventually. As far as I see it I've got big plans for this club, and signing you is my main way of getting there...now get out on the pitch and work your magic :D
Fab Bry i'm not sure what Jamie is up to but i don't like the sound of it
I hope Marie does a kiss and tell on Noel :rolleyes:
More soon x
INT. MICHEAL'S OFFICE - DAY
Jenny walks into Micheal's office, carrying many shopping bags. Micheal's eyes buldge at the number of bags she has.
Micheal: Hard day shopping!?
Jenny: Yeah, Oxford Street don't know what's hit it...
Micheal: Well you're only 40 once...
Jenny: Oh god don't remind me...
Micheal: It's nothing to be ashamed of.
Jenny: It is! I'll be getting crowds feet, sagging, everything!
Micheal: Nothing that money and a trip to a cosmetic surgeoun wont cure :D
Jenny faces widens at this. She walks behind Micheal and begins to massage his shoulders.
Micheal: Oh god, I swear I wasn't this much of a handful when I was a player...
Jenny: The boys playing you up?
Micheal: It's all this Colin and Carter buisness, Colin feels threatened by him...Sean doesn't want to step on his toes...they need sorting out!
Jenny: You should have expected that when you signed Carter...
Micheal: They best both show up tonight!
Jenny: Why? What's happening tonight?
Micheal: I've arranged a party for you...
Jenny: Oh god no...you haven't told them how old I am have you!?
Micheal: Of course I did, what's the big issue?
Jenny: Micheal!
Micheal: So what if you're 40!? You're the sexiest 40 year old I've ever laid my hands on...
Jenny smiles as Micheal leans in for a kiss and begins to undo her blouse...
Good stuff Bry :cheer: Looking foward to the next part :D
INT. NOEL'S CAR - DAY
Noel is in his sports car, driving to the training ground. His phone rings, he answers it, with just one hand on the wheel.
Noel: Yeah?
Jess: It's me...
Noel: What do you want!?
Jess: Hello to you too... can we meet up?
Noel: I dunno, it was fun, but...
Jess: Are you ditching me!?
Noel: No I just think we should cool it a bit...we don't want your dad finding out...
Jess: You let me worry about dad...
Noel: No Jess, it's too risky man...
Jess: You seem like the kind of guy who likes to take a risk...
Noel: Look, just sod off yeah!?
Noel hangs up the phone on Jess. He throws his phone onto the passenger seat, and speeds off down the road.