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EXT: RED RUM PUB
Gary is running around outside the pub, asking random people frantically if they've seen the kids. Patrick and Natasha walk past- Natashas clinging onto his arm...
Gary: Patrick. Natasha... Dont ask questions, but have you seen my kids?!
Patrick: Your kids? (shakes head) Nope, dont think i have... have you Natasha..?
Natasha: I dont really look for them in all honesty...
Before Natasha finishes her sentence, Gary runs off, to ask other people...
INTERCUT
Tanya is banging on people's doors, also looking for the kids....
Tanya: (shouting) Melissa?! Jacob?! You in there?! (welling up with tears) Come on darlings, where are you?!
She continues down the street, banging on doors, and shouting for the kids. She goes past the Singh's house. Kash leans out the window...
Kash: For gods sake, woman. Some on us have work to do. We dont need all you faffing around out there!!
He slams the window shut. Tanya looks up at the shut window, and shouts towards it...
Tanya: Get a heart, Kash!!
She stands in the centre of the road, alone, with no one around her. She mumbles her kids names under her breath, and collapses onto her knees. She cries into her hands, mumbling...
Tanya: Melissa....Jacob...
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Where are they??? They've got to find them!! Don't keep us in suspense....post...post...post!!!! (Please :D )
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INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
Hilary is sweeping up the glass with a dustpan and brush, Richard is home and in a panic.
Richard: Well where on earth are they? They cant have just...gone...
Hilary: I have no idea...despite what Tanya might think
Hilary rubs her neck in pain.
Richard: She had no right to firghten you like...in your own home aswell..
Hilary: She's going trough a tough time though Richard...
Richard: Even so, there's still no excuse.
The door slams shut as Gary walks in, holding Tanya tight.
Richard: Oh my god Tanya are you okay!?
Richard runs over to Tanya and hugs her.
Hilary: (To Gary) Any luck?
Gary: No...we've looked everywhere...i just...just...cant believe it...who'd be so evil as to steal our kids!?
Hilary walks over to Tanya and gives her the cordless phone...
Hilary: Tanya sweetie...it's about time you handed it over to the police...you've done all you can...
Tanya glares at Hilary and snatches the phone off her. She dials 999
Tanya: Police please... yes...i would like to....(starts sobbing)...to...er...report two misisng persons...my little babies.... please...just help me...
Tanya bursts into floods of tears, Gary grabs the phone to continue the conversation. Hilary pours herself a shot of Vodka from the bar and necks it in one, rubbing her neck in pain, but with a sinister grin on her face.
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Hilary!! Shes got to have something to do with their disappearance - what a bitch!!! And Richard, defending her!! *shakes head*
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MARBAL NIGHTCLUB
Marcus is behind the bar, making a cocktail for a girl, whilst looking flirtciously into each others eyes. He passes it to her, and she leans over and kisses his check, before leaning on the bar suductivly. Ruby is the other end of the bar- she watches them, obivously annoyed. Chris comes up behind her..
Chris: Hey you!.... You dont look too happy there! Green eyed monster?! (He winks)
Ruby: Me? Jealous of.... her? Nah...
Chris: (laughs) Ok, Course you're not :cool:
Ruby: So whats a guy like you doing here alone? I'd have thought you'd have girls lining up around the Bay to come with you!
Chris: (laughs) Hardly! No, i just fancied i quick drink. You know, see who turns up...
Ruby looks around
Ruby: Looks like you're stuck with little old me then!
Ruby looks down, then looks up flirtaciously at him...
Chris: Dont put yourself down, Ruby! Your a fab girl...!
Ruby: Aww, bless ya!
Ruby hugs Chris sudectivly, and sips her drink. The camera zooms out, as they carry on flirting...
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INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Tanya and Gary are sitting next to each other on the sofa. Tanya is whiping tears from her eyes with an overused tissue. Gary is holding her hand. The police are in the room asking them questions.
PO: So then when was the last time you saw your children Miss Donagoon?
Tanya: First thing this morning... i ...err...dropped them off at the pre-school as usual... walked them to the gate, kissed them goodbye... and then...well...
PO: Yes?
Tanya: I havent seen them again (bursts into tears)
PO: I can understand how distressing this is for you Mrs Dongaoon...but me need to ask you these questions if there's any hope in finding you children...
Gary: Shouldnt you be out there!? Looking for them!? Instead of asking us questions!?
PO: Mr Donagoon...we have numerous men out on the streets looking for your children...but the questioning could speed up the search...
Gary: Yeah...im sorry...its just...ya know...its just so hard...
PO: We can understand... so Tanya...did you notice anything susciious when you picked them up?
Tanya: What apart from the fact they wasnt there!? :rolleyes: ... erm no...it was just so crowded..with cars and parents...as it usually is... no one saw anything...they just presumed i'd already took them...
PO: Could someone have taken them that knows them... a relative or friend...who has them safe and is unaware..?
Tanya: No...we've asked everyone we know...its got to be someone who hates us!
PO: And have you got any enemies Mrs Donagoon...anyone who'd want to do this to you both...or the children?
Tanya: God yeah... Craig Harvey...
The Police Officer starts to scribble down notes...
Tanya: Hilary Blackstock...
Gary: Oh god Tanya now your being ridiculous!
Tanya: Gary i just know shes got something to do with it! She hates my guts!
Gary: She doesnt! She's a good person...
Tanya: Yeah right...(to police) anyways can you just get out there and do something please!? We're just desperate...we want them back!!!
Yet Again Tanya begins to cry, Gary comforts her.
PO: I promise you Mr and Mrs Donagoon...we'll do the best we can to find your children...
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Ok.. have caught up after weekend. What bitch Hilary is.. if she has the kids please say something. poor tanya is worried out of her mind.. Ruby bit of a slut but then again so is Chris who is supposely in love with Claire.. excellent work again guys :cheer::cheer:
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Have just caught up poor tanya and gary :( Who has there kids and where are they!?
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what a cruel thing to do to tanya. hilary is definitely behind it.
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Hilary has got to be behind the missing kids, and another thing is she is really messing with poor Tanya's mind and I am sure that horrible boogey man is also behind it as well, Hilary and the boogeyman should both be put behind bars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
