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Baymoore Pre-School - Day
Tanya walks runs past the crowds of mother and toddlers in a rush, she is late picking up the kids.
Tanya gets to the gates. Melissa and Jacob are nowhere in sight, Tanya looks around frantically for them.
Tanya: Melissa!? Jacob!? Melissa!?
One of the pre school teachers approaches Tanya.
Miss Laurence: Hello...can i help you?
Tanya: Melissa and Jacob Donagoon!? Where are they!?
Miss Laurence: Erm...i dont know I presume their mother had picked them up...
Tanya: I am their mother!!!
Miss Laurence: Oh well...erm...oh my gosh...
Tanya: Did you see anyone take them!?
Tanya starts to get worried, breathing heavily and looking all around her on edge.
Miss Laurence: No...as well when everyone is being picked up its hard to keep track...
Tanya: You sure you didnt see anyone!? What about a woman... old...red hair!?..Hilary her name is...
Miss Laurence: No i cant remember seeing anyone like that...
Tanya: I swear to god if i dont find them, i'm holding this ruddy nursery responsible!
Tanya runs off in a panic towards her car, everything spinning around her.
Miss Laurence: Mrs Donagoon!? Mrs Donagoon!?
Tanya speeds up the car, as she drives menacingly to face Hilary.
Who Has Taken The Twins? What Will Tanya Do Next?
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Oh i wonder who has taken the twins another twist in Tanyas life im loving this hope the twins are okay
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Who has got the kids :eek: Quick next part i need to know!
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Who has the kids? hilary? the stalker? quick post the next bit, I hope they are safe
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:eek: The children - who has them?? who's watching? So many questions.....next part required.....now!!
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oh no! where's tanya's kids??? is it hilary? is it not? dun dun dun!
i think stupid old pattie should end up with NO ONE.
i'll read the rest just now :D
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INT. JENKINS MANOR - EVENING
Hilary is making herself a cocktail at the bar. Classical music is playing, all is calm. Hilary sips a mouthful of her drink.
Tanya slams the door and charges in a rage.
Hilary: Tanya, what are you doing here?
Tanya: What the hell have you done with my kids!!! :angry:
Hilary: I dont know what your on about...
Tanya pushes Hilary into the bar in force, Hilary smashes into the glasses of spirits in the cabinet, shards of glass all over the floor. Tanya smashes Hilary's cocktail glass and points the jagged edge near Hilary's throat. Hilary gasps for breath in Panic.
Tanya: Dont you dare mess me about Hilary! Theyve gone missing! And i know you have something to do with it!!!
Hilary: (scared) I swear to you...i havent... please Tanya you've got to believe me...
Tanya: You've taken this too far you evil bitch! It was between you and me...never the kids! You'd better tell me what you've done with them! :angry:
Hilary: Tanya...i promise...i havent done anything to them...why would I? They are near enough my grandkids...i love them to peices...you've got to believe me...
Tanya: Believe you!? Your full of lies! How can i trust you!?
Hilary: Maybe you cant...but i swear...hand on heart... that I dont know where they are Tanya... come on you need to focus on finding them...
Tanya: Yeah...yeah i do..but i swear to god...i swear...if i find out you've got anything to do with this....It'll be more than a sharp glass in your throat! I'll make you suffer like hell!
Tanya removes the glass from Hilary's throat. Hilary gasps for breath in relief.
Hilary: (Venamous) You'll regret that bitch!
Gary walks into the room, oblivious of everything.
Gary: Tanya, what the hell's going on?
How Will Gary React To The Bad News? Has Tanya Over Stepped The Line With Hilary?
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Oh what has happened with the kids? Has hilary planned this? More now i need to know ...
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INT: JENKINS MANOR
Tanya is standing, still bitterly glaring at hilary. She hears Gary's voice behind her. She drops the glass onto the floor, narrowly missing Hilarys foot, yet still making her jump in shock. Tanya turns and stares at Gary, her eyes wellling up with tears...
Gary: Well? What the hells going on here?! Tanya?!
Tanya stares at Gary, in shock.
Gary: Well come on then! Whats so bad that you've got to.... well, do all this!!
Tanya: (megerly) They're.... they're gone...
Gary: (laughs slightly) Aprils fools day was last week, Tanya!! Come on, whose gone then?
Tanya: The kids...
Gary: To a party? Didn't realise they had a party today. Was i meant to buy a pressie for them to take...? ****, totally forgot..... come on Tanya, whats this got to do with hil-
Tanya: (interupts) For gods sake Gary, Listen! The kids have gone. They've... they've been taken...
Gary is silent for a moment...
Gary: Our... our kids?! Oh my god, Tanya, what.... what we gonna do??!!
Gary holds Tanya as she cries into him. He's eyes well up with tears, as Hilary sheepishly leaves the room, to leave them alone...
