awww Poor amy :( I have decided i don't like paddy no more, he is mean and yeh!
This is fab well done guys x
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awww Poor amy :( I have decided i don't like paddy no more, he is mean and yeh!
This is fab well done guys x
oh no! poor amy, pattie's a meanie. i dont like him any more. well, i never liked him in the first place, but hey... i like him even less now! :D
Wow!!! well done Abi and Bry, brilliant piece of writing. How nasty is Patrick, gets kicked out on his wife for cheating and goes back to the mistress saying he loved her all along.. horrible horrible man :angry:
EXT: RED RUM PUB- morning
Vicky bangs on the front doors to the pub. She shouts through the doors...
Vicky: Amy? You in there?!
She bangs again on the doors, she hears a faint moan from inside...
Vicky: Amy? Look, the doors are open... I'm coming in...
Vicky opens the doors, and walks into the pub. She walks around the bar looking for Amy. She spots her sitting on the floor next to the glass, shaking. She bends down next to her, and puts her hand on her shoulder...
Vicky: Amy... You dont deserve any of this... Come on, lets get you cleaned up...
Vicky goes to help Amy up- Amy pulls her arm away from Vicky, and rocks backwards and forwards on the floor...
Vicky: Amy?! Amy- your scaring me! Come on, dont let Patrick do this to you! Dont let him win!
Amy: Dont let him win?! you think its that easy....?
Vicky: No, i just-....
Amy:I can't handle this... all alone, no one to turn to.... no one to trust...
Vicky: You've got me, Amy. I'm here for you, i can help you...
Amy: Thats what Patrick said...
A tear rolls down Amys face, Vicky gives her a tissue..
Vicky: You can get through this, just let me help...
Vicky tries to help her up again, Amy pulls away, and rests her head on her knees while shaking....
Amy: just leave me alone...
Vicky tentavly walks out, even though she obviously wants to help. As she walks out the doors, she turns to see Amy in floods of tears...
BAYMOORE BEACH- day
Vicky is sitting on a bench, gazing out to sea, thinking about Amy earlier. Val struts down the promedade behind her, and spots her sitting alone on the bench. She walks over...
Val: Hey darl, whats a pretty girl like you out in the cold on a day like this!?
Vicky: Val. Might have known i'd see you here. Just fancied a think, thats all. Bit of peace and quiet, you now how it is sometimes...
Val: We're in Devon, doll, its hardly LA!
Val laughs, Vicky rolls her eyes...
Vicky: Well sometimes people make it seem like that, dont they Val?!
Val: Three guesses what you're tryin' to say. Amy, right? Hows she doing? Poor thing was in an awfull state when i saw 'er...
Vicky: No thanks to you! How could you do that, Val? How could you have the nerve to put money before Amy?!
Val: Girls gotta do, what a girlls gotta -
Vicky: (interupts) Bull****. You were just looking out for number one as usual. Selfish ****ing number one.
Val vaguely shrugs her shoulders...
Vicky: How do oyu live with yourself, Val? Have you seen what you've put Amy through?!
Val: What Patrick and Natasha put her through, dont you mean!
Vicky: Your as much to blame! You could have put a stop to this. Told Amy as soon as you saw 'er, stopped it carrying on any further. But did ya?!
Val goes to explain, but Vicky doesn't stop talking...
Vicky: you know what you are? Your disgusting. A disgusting slut. Amy is destroyed because of you and your silly money games. You've reduced a grown woman to.... to... to nothing. Hope you can live with yourself.
Vicky storms off down the promenade, living Val reeling on the bench.
INT. SINGH HOUSE - NIGHT
Kash is reading the newspaper on the sofa. Sanjita is rushing around laying the table.
Kash: Come on Sanjita...Iqbal and Marcus will be around soon... dont wont them thinking your not a good hostess do we?
Sanjita: (Hesitant) No...
Kash: Come on then...hurry hurry...
Sanjita leaves the room and heads for the kitchen. The house phone rings. Kash answers it...
Kash: Hello... yes speaking.... yes...i see... i beg your pardon!?... yes thank you...
Kash gets up in fury.
Kash: I do not believe it!
Sanjita runs into the room.
Sanjita: What is it Kash!?
Kash: Andonis' college has just phoned... he is underachieving...in all subjects, and are debating whether to permanatly exclude him...
Sanjita: Oh dear...
Kash: Oh dear!? I am outraged! And ashamed!!! I have told him too many times not to put that Andrews tart above his education! But will he listen to me? No!
Sanjita: Kash, maybe you should...
Kash looks trough the net curtains and sees Andonis kissing Emma goodbye outside.
Kash: Right that's it...im having no more of this nonscence, if he doesnt end it with her then ill make sure they dont see each other ever again!
Right, what happen with Val? I know she was a curtain twitcher but she is now a complete bitch with no feelings for her friend. Kash, leave your son alone, it has nothing to do with Emma if he is underachieving
Kash just leave your son alone! Fab guys hope amy is okay ....
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
Emma walks through the front door, and into the living room.
Emma: Back! What times tea mom!?
Val walks into the room. James is sitting down watching the 6 o clock news.
Val: Oh just be a cupple more minutes...
Theres a violent bang at the door.
James: Who the ruddy hell's that!?
Val: I'll go get it...
James: No you wont...could be a maniac for all you know...
James gets up and answers the door, in marches Kash.
James: Kash, what the hell you playing at!?
Kash: Is Emma in!?
James: Yes erm...why?
Kash walks into the living room. Emma and Val are on edge.
Emma: Kash?
James: Now listen up! And listen clear!...Becuase I'm not saying this again! You will not see Andonis again! Do you understand!!!
Emma is too upset to speak.
Val: Look what's all this about Kash!?
Kash: She is affecting his education! Sending him down the road to ruin...he can do much better than this!
Kash gestures at Emma with disgust. James takes offence and walks towards Kash.
James: And what the hell is wrong with my daughter!?
Kash: Parading around like a slapper at 16 years of age! With her short skirts and her low cut tops! I do not want my son dating a sex mad whore!
James lashes out at Kash, the pair begin to fight. Emma is screaming.
Emma: Mom stop them! Stop it!
Val tries to split up the fight.
Val: Oi you two! Stop it!
James lets go, still giving Kash angry looks.
Val: (To Kash) Now you, get the hell out of our house! And if I hear you bad mouth my daughter again I'll have you done for slandor....
Kash points at Emma in warning, and then leaves. Emma sits down in tears on the sofa.
Aww bless poor emma, its not her fault *shakes head* Kash was out of order *nods head* See look i am regularly reading now :p x