Oh wonder what Jared plan it and what is Craig up to.. Can't believe Kyle can be so callous!!! the woman was attacked and he doesn't give a damn
Excellent writting again Guys.. loving this
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Oh wonder what Jared plan it and what is Craig up to.. Can't believe Kyle can be so callous!!! the woman was attacked and he doesn't give a damn
Excellent writting again Guys.. loving this
i'd love to give that kyle a good slapping. he's so horrible, and craig up to his usual tricks again.
thanks guys for keeping me entertained.
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - DAY
Michelle, Callumn and Kate are sitting down, eating a meal. There is a clear anamosity between Callumn and Kate, with Kate casting daggered looks at Callumn.
Callumn: This tastes delicious babe, I'm lucky to have you...
Kate: (Scoffs) Like she has a choice in the matter...
Michelle: Mom!
Kate: I'm sorry it had to be said!
Michelle: No! No it didn't! Look I know me and Callumn haven't had the most stable and loving of relationships...
Kate: You can say that again...
Michelle: But we've decided that's all change, we're giving our marriage one more go...and you have to support this...
Kate: How can I!? After what he's done to you Shell!?
Michelle: Just except that we love each other mom! Despite what he's done, Callumn is a good man!
Kate: Good man! I don't call someone you beats you a good man!
Callumn eats his dinner, enjoying the argument between the pair.
Kate: Oh look at him... he's enjoying every minute of this!
Michelle: Oh I've had enough of this mom! If you're going to be like this you might aswell get the hell out of our house!
Kate is taken aback by Michelle's words, Callumn smiles to himself with satisfaction.
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INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - NIGHT
James returns from work, deflated from his argument with Lorraine. He throws his jacket onto the rail of the staircase and walks into the living room.
Val: Where have you been?
James: Oh just down the station, had to have a meeting about the rapist...
Val: Oh well you're here now... I'd had THE most brilliant idea come to me!
James: Oh yeah, what's that?
Val: Well I was watching Trisha earlier and they showed this woman who was going trough Cancer...
James: You know that show is all staged don't you?
Val: Course it isn't! Anyways this woman did herself one of those video diaries! You know...like a day by day account of her battle with cancer...
James: And?
Val: Well I'm gonna do the same! I'm finally gonna use that camera you got me and start one!
James: Oh right...brilliant :rolleyes:
James seats down and cloes his eyes.
Val: Is everything okay?
James: Yeah I'm just tired that's all.
Val: Ok, well I'll get the tea on then.
Val leaves the room. James opens his eyes, leans up and rubs his hands trough the hair with stress. He sees his and Val's wedding photo on the side table and takes a deep sigh, worrying what Lorraine will do.
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INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Michelle is sat on the sofa watching TV, looking agitated. Kate enters the room, wearing her coat, carrying her suitcase.
Kate: I'm going then...
Michelle turns her head away from Kate and does not say goodbye.
Kate: Fine, if that's how you want it...
Kate enters the hallway and walks towards the front door. Callumn follows her out.
Callumn: I guess we'll be seeing you then...
Kate: Don't speak to me you smug *******, she'll soon see what you're like...
Callumn grabs Kate's arm and twists it, she screams at the pain of it, Callumn smoothers her mouth.
Callumn: And when she does, you wont be around, so bugger off out of Baymoore, Michelle dont want you...and I certainly dont want you...
Callumn let's go of Kate, she holds her arm in pain, whilst casting him an evil look.
Kate: I wont let you hurt my daughter this time Callumn!
Callumn: Come here again and I will kill you!
Kate grabs her back and leaves. Callumn shuts the door behind her, a smug look on his face. The camera cuts to Kate who looks terrifed, she looks at Michele trough the window, worried for her daughter's safety.
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callumn is one nasty piece of work.. Poor shell.. she is going to go through hell and she kicked her mother out
EXT/INT ABANDONED WAREHOUSE - NIGHT
Midnight. Craig's BMW pulls up outside the warehouse. He steps out of the car, along with two thugs.
The trio enter the warehouse, where a group of dealers, dressed in smart suits are standing around a few crates.
Dealer: Craig, I was starting to think you wouldn't show...
Craig: I wouldn't dare not show, this is too good an oppurtunity to turn down.
Craig casts a quick look at one of his thugs. We then see a close up of the thug reaching for a gun from his back pocket. It's clear Craig and his thugs are here to steal the drugs without paying.
Craig sees one of the dealers is looking nervous, and edgy.
Craig: What's with the kid here? Looks like he's about to **** his undies...
All of a sudden the distant sound of Police sirens can be heard.
Dealer: ****! It's the cops!
Craig: This little *******'s squealed! (To Thugs) Get the *******!
The young dealer tries to run off, but Craig's thugs grab him and drag him out of the warehouse. The dealers and thugs run out of the warehouse and disperse into various cars. Craig's BMW speeds off out of the back entrance to the warehouse site. Moments later the police pull up...
A close up of Craig looking reliefed. His phone rings. He picks it up
Craig: That was a bloody close shave! Get that little runt to the safe house! He's gonna pay the price for ruining this for us!
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Uh oh.. poor little guy. he went in way way over his head
i wouldn't like to be that guy on the wrong side of craig.
Just caught up with everything! Love this Michelle/Callum storyline...Michelle better get herself out of Callum's life before she gets really hurt! Kate seems to be the only one who can stand up to him.
I would hate to be the guy on the wrong side of Craig...poor guy..he didn't know how much hot water he would get himself in!
James was certainly overreacting over the Claire's baby situation!