:eek: That was fab honey!
See i caught up aren't you proud of me? :p That was fab, poor Amy
More soon please x
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:eek: That was fab honey!
See i caught up aren't you proud of me? :p That was fab, poor Amy
More soon please x
at last!!! go val heh... pattie and nattie have had it coming. great writing bry, loving it :cheer:
that harassing on msn paid off then!Quote:
Originally Posted by *Fanatic*Loves Dennis*
read each day and it wont be so big a deal!!! :p
glad your enjoyed it! keep reading as this is the start of some good stuff!
Thanks JADA, its been a long time coming but worth it...now we can see the aftermath and the effects of the affair! Bring it on! :cheer:Quote:
Originally Posted by Jada-GDR
yay! :cheer: looking forward to it great writing bry and abiQuote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
I will keep up i promise, if not just carry on harrassing me! :pQuote:
Originally Posted by bondboffin
INT. RED RUM - NIGHT
Amy bursts into tears and runs into the hallway, in floods of tears. The pub stares at Patrick and Natasha.
Val: How the hell can you live with yourself!?
Patrick: Oh shut up Val!!
James: I suppose its all one big joke to you ent it Paddy!? Theres a woman in that coridoor in tears! Her life destroyed!!!
Patrick: (Emotional) Dont you think i know that!
Patrick feels the prescence of everyone staring at him.
Patrick: Get out! All of you! Go on! Your all barred!
The punters start to get up, showing their disatisfaction to being asked to leave.
Patrick: Come on out...
Val: Dont worry we're going...
One by one the punters leave the pub. Natasha and Patrick are alone in the pub, the distant sounds of Amy crying.
Natasha: What a mess eh!?
Patrick: Oh dont even bother...
Natasha: What!?
Patrick ignores Natasha and heads towards the flat, where Amy is crying on the staircase.
Patrick: Amy... im so sorry babes...
Amy: Sorry!? Sorry for what!? That you got caught!!!
Patrick: No that i did it...
Amy: Dont lie to me Patrick!!! If you were so sorry you wouldnt have done it in the first place!
Natasha shyly walks into the hallway. Amy laughs to herself in disbeleif.
Amy: Oh great, the third member of the love triangle...
Natasha approaches Amy.
Natasha: Amy...im sorry it got out of hand..it was just meant to be a bit of fun...
Amy: Shut the hell up you marriage wrecking slut!
Amy slaps Natasha around the face so hard that Natasha falls backwards with the impact. Patrick grabs old of her. Natasha rubs her face in pain.
Amy: Dont ever think of speaking to me again, or I'll bloody kill you!
Amy is shaking with anger. Patrick notices this and faces Natasha.
Patrick: I think you'd better leave...
Natasha: Patrick?
Patrick: You've done enough damage...just go...
Natasha: Oh i see, affair over...now i can be thrown out with the trash?
Patrick: Tash...just go now...
Natasha: (laughs in disbelfi) What did i ever see in you?
Natasha swings her handbag over her shoulder and heads out of the pub. Silence falls on the Red Rum. Amy looks up at Patrick.
Patrick: It's just you and me now...let's talk...
its taken me months to read it bry but im glad i finally have, loved the affair being revealed t the pub loved it!!!
willl read from now on i promise! the nagging has paid off!
INT. RED RUM FLAT - NIGHT
Patrick and Amy walk into the flat slwoly.
Patrick: Is there anything i can get you?
Amy: Its a bit late to be playing the dutiful husband now isnt it Patrick? Just pack you bags and get out...
Patrick sicks down next to Amy.
Patrick: Im so sorry babes...
Amy: Sorry!? No your not...youve used that word too many times..its lost its effect...you dont know the meaning of it...
Patrick: She meant nothing to me...
Amy: Then why did you do this Patrick! Why did you ruin our marriage!
Patrick: Becuase i got bored!
Amy slaps Patrick hard around the face.
Patrick: I deserved that...
Amy: Too damn right you did! If you dont leave right now I'll do more than slap you!
Patrick: Amy let me explain...
Amy: I dont want explanations! I just want a conculsuion... an end to you and me!!! I want a divorce!!!
Patrick: (Emotional) No..Amy you dont mean it...
Amy: You'd better believe it Paddy.. becuase i want you out of my life for good... and i want the pub...
Patrick: Amy...you cant leave me...please I'm begging you...
Patrick is on his knees crying, he grabs hold of Amy's legs. She tries to shake him off.
Patrick: I might have my affairs... but they mean nothing, your the one babes! The one and only! Your my rock... your what keeps up going!!! The only one I've ever loved...I need you!!
Amy tries to hold back the tears and stay strong.
Amy: Well i dont need you... so please Patrick...just get out...
Patrick gets up, he stares at Amy for a while, she turns his back on him and heads to the window.
Patrick: (Quietly) I love you Amy...
Patrick walks out of the flat, Leaving Amy alone, looking out of the rainy window.
NATASHAS FLAT- night
Patrick knocks at the door, Natasha opens it, then goes to shut it in his face. Patrick forces his way in...
Patrick: What i said back there.... i didn't mean it.... i just didnt want Amy getting all histerical again, you know what she's like...
Natasha: Oh yeah?! And how can i beleive you?!
Patrick: Because i wouldn't be here if you didn't mean anything to me! I'd be sitting at the flat with bloody Amy trying to stop her drinking herself to death or something!
Natasha: I think i know what you think of me now, Patrick, i heard it all back there. So stop the sob story. Just cause you've lost your wife, it doesn't mean you can come running back to me, and expect...
Patrick: Expect what?
Natasha: And expect me to still be standing here waiting...
Patrick: Well it doesn't look like theres anyone else around..!
Natasha: Is that what you think of me, Patrick?! That i'm that much of a whore that i've already got another fella on the go?!
Patrick: No, i dont think your a whore. I think your a dirty slut- and thats exactly how i like you :p
Patrick winks at Natasha, she looks away in digust...
Patrick: Come on, we've got something good going on here. Dont throw it away cause of that wreck of a woman at the pub!
Natasha: How do i know your not gonna run back to her, first chance you get?
Patrick: Cause i wouldn't be standing here if i was...
Natasha looks at Patrick, trying to suss him out. Patrick pushes the door open more, and kisses Natasha passionatly. he gradually starts un-doing her shirt....
INTERCUT:
Amy is alone at the pub. She pours a large Vodka, finishing off a bottle...
Amy: This ones for you, Patrick, my ****ing ******* of a husband!
She downs the vodka, and looks at the empty bottle. She picks it up, and throws it at a picture of Patrick standing behind the bar, smashing the glass everywhere. She leans against the wall next to the glass, and falls to the floor. Amy picks up pieces of glass with her fingers, and throws them across the bar, cutting her fingers as she does so, and downs another vodka...