Absolutely brilliant (as ever) well done :D
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Absolutely brilliant (as ever) well done :D
great yet again :cheer: keep up the good work
More great writing :) I'm loving this!! Well done x
Scene 16
INT. STRINGFELLOWS NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
Famous nightclub owned by Peter Stringfellow, Timbaland's Give It To Me is playing in the background. The squad are out to celebrate Jamie's promotion to the main squad.
Luke: (Jokes) So then, the baby gets to play with the big boys :p
Jamie: I'm no baby...
Luke: That's what you've got to prove...you best be able to handle your drink...
Jamie: I dunno, I haven't really drank in ages...
Noel: You've got to get used to it when you're around us!
Luke: Come on, what you all having? First rounds on me...
The squad liven up at Luke's offer of drinks. Jamie sees Danielle from the other side of the club, he sees her checking him out, finally showing at intrest in him. He laughs at her sudden change of opinion, and ignores her, trying to act cool.
Noel: Oh look, Carter's come...
Sean comes into the club, and gets looks from a lot of the clubbers. Colin isn't pleased to see him.
Colin: Who invited that prick?
Micheal follows Sean into the club, to Colin's suprise.
Micheal: I did...got a problem with that?
Colin: (Through gritted teeth) No boss...
Micheal: Good, becuase I want you two to get along, depsite this problem you have with him...
Colin: It's not that easy boss...
Micheal: Well I suggest it is, unless you want me to rethink your place on the squad!
Micheal walks off, leaving Colin fuming at being told what to do.
Scene 17
INT. STRINGFELLOWS NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
Jamie is at the bar having a laugh with some of the team, Danielle comes over to him, a confident look on her face.
Danielle: Hiya, Jamie isn't it?
Jamie: Oh I thought you only chatted to "real" footballers...
Danielle: Yeah about that, not the greatest starts is it, can we forget I said that?
Jamie: I suppose so, seen as I'm in a good mood...
Danielle: Yeah dad told me the good news, well done you, bet your girlfriend's pleased isn't she?
Jamie: I haven't got one...but I think you knew that didnt you?
Danielle takes a seductive sip of her alcopop, giving Jamie a mischevious look.
Danielle: Maybe :cool:
Jamie: And what about you?
Danielle: Are you asking me out on a date?
Jamie: Well erm...
Danielle leans in and snogs Jamie. He is taken aback by the sudden move, but enjoys it all the same.
Danielle: Hows that for an answer? You can take me out tomorrow night, but it better be good :p
Jamie raises an eyebrow, a smile appearing on his face.
Scene 18
INT. STRINGFELLOWS NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
With Jamie chatting to Danielle, Noel checks out the women around the club. He notices a blonde (Kellie Shirley) walking out of the mens toilets, followed shortly after by a man in a suit, he slyly hands her some money before walking away. Noel walks over towards her.
Marie: Yeah, what do you want?
Noel: Can I get you a drink?
Marie: Vodka and red bull...
Noel: Please?
Marie: Well you either wanna get me one or you don't.
Noel shakes his head, unable to believe her cockiness, without questioning it he asks for the drinks.
Noel: Noel Roberts...I'm the...
Marie: Goalkeeper at The Lions, yeah I know...Marie...
Noel: So Marie, what you doing alone in a place like this?
Marie: Work here dont I...
Noel: Barmaid?
Marie: No, let's just say I charge for...services...
Noel's phone rings, it's Jess calling, he cancels the call and returns to talking to Marie.
Marie: Girlfriend?
Noel: Nah, it's no-one...so if I was to give you some money, reckon you could come back to my hotel and...service me?
Marie: As long as you've got the money, sure...
Noel: Come on darling, does it look like I haven't got money? (To barman) Forget the drinks mate, I'm heading off.
A confident grin on his face, he leads Marie out of the club and back to his hotel room.
EXT. STRINGFELLOWS NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
Jamie walks down the stairs of Stringfellows and out onto the street, a phone in his hands trying to get reception. He smiles politely at a group of fans who recognise him.
He dials a number and paces the street until he gets a response.
Jamie: Yeah, I'm in...I'm gonna make sure Aston pays...you mark my words...
Jamie has a look of venom and determination on his face.
END OF EPISODE ONE
Wow, just caught up! I wonder what Jamie is up to?!
OMG what is he up to :eek: good stuff again :cheer:
Oooh er i wasn't expecting that! What is Jamie up to???
More more more :angel: please x