Fab as always dave, well done :D I despise Jason
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Fab as always dave, well done :D I despise Jason
that last one made me laugh :p
Scene 3- Nightlife Nightclub- Morning
(Jason is down in the nightclub picking up empty glasses and bottles after the opening night that took place the night before. Nicola comes down into the nightclub, her bruise clearly visible. Jason starts talking to Nicola in a nice manner, as if nothing happened the night before)
Jason: Oh Nic...your up early..:)
(Nicola is speaking uncomfortably)
Nicola: Yeah..well..
Jason: Well it's not like you! I know you usually like your lie-ins...go on get back into bed..i'll make you breakfast in bed!
Nicola: No it's ok..i'm not hungry, i just thought i'd come down here and help you tidy up after last night!
Jason: There really is no need love! And anyway, you look absolutely terrible! Look at that bruise on your face...
(Nicola turns away from Jason, clearly uncomfortable. Jason edges closer to Nicola and grabs her chin)
Jason: Now we wouldn't want anyone questioning how you got that bruise on your face now would we?!
(Nicola is tearful and replies nervously)
Nicola: No..
Jason: So i think it's best that you stay upstairs while you recover from that bruise...don't you?! After all, we don't want any paranoid folk to ask questions..
Nicola: Yeah ok...i'll stay upstairs...until i recover...
Jason: Good girl! And remember, don't come back down until that bruise has dissapeared...understand?
Nicola: I understand...
(Nicola heads back upstairs. She goes back into her bedroom and crumples to the floor in tears)
not only is Jason a bit of a serial Cheater he HIT his wife !!. this is great stuff Dave, just got up to speed. I think its realy good.
That Jason is getting worse.
Great stuff dave
Scene 4- Libby's Flat- Morning
(Brad wakes up in Libby's double bed after sleeping with her the night before. He hears crackling noises from Libby's back garden and is horrified to look out of the window and see all his clothes on fire. He is completely naked and realises he has no other clothes to wear. Brad shouts out from the bedroom window)
Brad: Lib! What the hell do you think your doing?! Those are my clothes burning!
(Libby laughs at Brad)
Libby: Oh dear Brad! It seems you'll have to walk back to Nightlife in the nude! :D
Brad: (horrified) Libby, why are you doing this?! What have i done to you?!
Libby: I'll tell you what you've done...you've made me endure the worst experience in bed ever!
Brad: So your punishing me by burning my clothes?!
Libby: Yep...that sums it up basically...plus your a gullible prat...did you actually think that i fancied you!? Your the most ugliest man that i've ever met!
(Brad has an angry but upset look on his face)
Brad: Right that's it!
(Brad runs downstairs and into Libby's back garden naked. He shouts at Libby)
Brad: Your gonna get my clothes back now!
Libby: Sorry hun! It looks like they've gone up in smoke...no can do! :D
(Libby goes back into the house as Brad stares at his clothes burning in the fire in shock. Libby is inside and locks the doors and windows. Brad turns to try and go back inside but is unable to get in, realising Libby has locked the doors)
Brad: Libby! Open this door...
(Libby laughs at Brad from inside)
Brad: Libby! Open this door! I'm completely naked here...it's humiliating!
(Brad rushes to Libby's front door and bangs the door, hoping for Libby to let him in)
Brad: Please Libby! Let me back in...i need to put some clothes back on! I'm going to freeze out here!
(Libby laughs from the front window inside her flat. She picks up the phone and dials in a number)
Libby: Hello...police please....i would like to report a scene of indecency..:D
O dear.
Lol that made be laugh, harsh but funny
Scene 5- Outside Nightlife Nightclub- Evening
(Russell and Terry make their way to Nightlife for another night of standing on the door as bouncers)
Russell: Terry..i can't face it..
Terry: We have to do it Russ...
(Terry and Russell look down the alleyway where Russell viciously beat up Kev Peters. To their amazement, Kev has dissapeared from the alleyway..all there is left is a pool of blood...)
Russell: Oh ****! He's gone! :eek:
(Russell and Terry both look at each other, paniced looks on their faces)
Wheres Kev gone, and Libby you go girl, i like her style !!!
Keep it up Dave.
Where's Kev gone, actually ive onyl just realised that they left him there!