I am finally getting caught up with this *cheers* This is fab well done, can't wait to read more :p xx
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I am finally getting caught up with this *cheers* This is fab well done, can't wait to read more :p xx
INT: MARBAL NIGHTCLUB- day
Iqbal is cleaning tables in the nightclub. He's humming to himself, when Kash coems up behind him. Iqbal jumps...
Iqbal: Bloody hell, Kash!! You trying to kill me or something?
Kash: That depends, i suppose... (sniggers)
Iqbal: On what....?! Come on Kash, dont be so stupid...
Kash: What are you doing here then?!
Iqbal: You're gonna have to make more sense than that...
Kash: Why you back from India?! I thought everything was going great there.... and why the hell did you buy this hell hole?!
Iqbal: Excuse me. This "hole hole" is my buisness.
Kash: Gawd knows why!!
Iqbal: Is it so bad that i might want to make something of myself?
Kash: Become a doctor then!
Iqbal: Come on, Kash. Stop sounding like Dad. i can do what the hell i like...
Kash: (mockingly) stop sounding like Dad.... honestly. anypne would think you've had a bloody personality transplant. Being a doctor is acceptable, its good. This place is just...
Iqbal: Is just what?!
Kash: You know what i mean, Iqbal
Iqbal: This is the 21st century Kash. We dont all have to become doctors now, or didn't anyone tell you? I can do what i want, when i want, and nothings gonna stop me. Not you, not religon.... not anything. So if you dont like, then you can just go piss off, can't ya.
INT: MARBAL NIGHTCLUB
Ruby is sitting flirtaciously at the bar. Marcus is making her a drink, she leans over the bar to talk to him....
Marcus: wo wo wo! You trying to make me see too much?!
Ruby sits back up, and adjusts her top
Ruby: Well that depends...
Marcus gives her a drink, and sits down close to her
Marcus: And whats that then?
Ruby: Nothing.....
Ruby smiles flirtaciously at Marcus, and sips her drink. He smiles back...
Marcus: So you seeing anyone tonight?
Ruby: Not sure...
Marcus: Oh really?!
Ruby: Well you know... if some gorgeous hunk comes my way, then i might get busy...
Marcus: :eek: I'm offended!!
They both laugh, and look into each others eyes for a moment longer than normal. Iqbal walks in, holding some letters...
Iqbal: Oi, oi! Whats going on here then?!
Marcus and Ruby both jump, and move away from each other, grinning...
Iqbal: No need to stop on my behalf....:D
Marcus: Dont be stupid!! We were just....
Iqbal: I could see what you were doing!! Honestly, shes your cousin! People of today, eh?! Either trying to shoot each other, or get off with each other...
Iqbal walks out, laughing to himself. Marcus and Ruby look back to each other, and smile...
Claire has an argument with Romeo over the phone, she is In tears, Chris wipes away her tears and comforts her, she ends up kissing him passionately.
INT. MARBAL - NIGHT
Tom and Luqina are snogging. Chris and Claire feel like gooseberrys. Claire's phone rings, Romoe is calling her.
Claire: Hiya babes... hows you?.... yeah i'm fine i suppose... any chance that you'll be coming home soon.... oh.... well no... im not happy with that.... im starting to think that you dont give a damn about us!!!!.... you what!? well if you feel that way then we might as well just forget it... no youve said what you really felt... oh just get lost!
Claire cancels the call and runs off towards the toilet in tears.
Vicky: Claire!?
Vicky starts to get up to comfort Claire, but Chris gets up before her.
Chris: Dont worry...I'll go...
Chris walks past the crowds and goes over to Claire.
Chris: Claire, whats up?
Claire: Its Romeo...the selfish pig! He has no intentions on coming back has he!?
Chris: I donno Claire...
Claire: He's treating me like an idiot! I just dont know if i love him anymore
The mascara runs down her face. Chris lightly strokes her face, whipping away her tears. Claire goes in for a kiss and Chris responds. The pair end up kissing passionatley.
cant belive chris would do that to romeo ....
another thing the mile high forum? please excuse me for being a bit dumb but i have been looking for ages for the after hours episodes way back when you first posted about them but i still cant find it can you give me help of where to find it please?
cheers
its in the chat section of the mile high forum...Quote:
Originally Posted by diamond1
you can acess the mile high forum once youve got 1000 posts, i cant post some episodes in hear as they are unsuitable for a younger audience
Bryan this is really good both you and Abi are superb Writer's! I try not to miss an episode just like i am with eastenders:p But if i do i go back to where i last read and i read from there.
INT. BACHELOR BOYS HOUSE - MORNING
Claire wakes up with the noise of Tom and Luqina having sex in the next room. Claire lefts herself up and looks at Chris who is lying naked, asleep.
Claire closes her eyes wishing it was a dream, she quietly gets out of the bed and put her clothes on. Chris starts to stir put goes back to sleep.
Claire rushes down the stairs and ends up sitting on the staircase in tears, regretting the actions of the previous night.
EXT. BAYMOORE BEACH - MORNING
Ruby is walking towards home after staying out clubbing all night. She looks plastrerd from last night. She rubs her head in pain.
Natasha is about to go into Valentinos restauraunt to go to work. She bumps into Ruby.
Natasha: Christ Rub babe, you look as rough as sand paper!
Ruby: Cheers....
Natasha: I take it you contiunued the party after we went home...
Ruby: Yeah went into Brixham and got slozzled!
Natasha: And know your seeing the side effects...
Ruby: Hey it's all part of the fun...
The girls laugh.
Ruby: So then did you get lucky last night?
Natasha: Nah i'm still set on getting back with my married man...
Ruby: Dodgy buisness...
Natasha: Yeah well he's good where it coutns... anyways you pull last night?
Ruby: Erm not exactly but I have got my eyes on someone...
Ruby looks over the road and sees Marcus bending down to pick up some crates for the nightlcub. She smiles and licks her lips.
Claire:wall: :wall: what have you done :confused: I have a feeling you are gonna regret it even more when Romeo does turn up !!!!!!!!!!!!! You dumb cow.. letting your hormones rage !!!!!
Ruby ruby tsk tsk, what are we gonna do with you ...Nat,, leave that horrible horrible married man alone, if he can cheat on his wife with you, what makes you think he won't do it to you IF IF IF he ever leaves amy for you...... dream on my girl you are NOT SPECIAL .. you were just a tumble in bed !!!!