Good on you Sanjita - you tell him - have a good time and enjoy yourself!
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Good on you Sanjita - you tell him - have a good time and enjoy yourself!
YOu go sanjita... don't let him rule you.. :cheer::cheer:
i couldn't have put it better myself :)Quote:
Originally Posted by jojomum
EXT. TORQUEY HIGHSTREET - DAY
Tanya walks out of Debenhams carry a lot of shopping bags. She answers her phone.
Tanya: (Into Phone) Yes...hi Gary...erm... yeah ive just done some shopping, I'll head back in a bit...ok byes babes...
In the distance we see Gregg following her. Tanya continues walking but catches someone dressed in a hoody in the corner of her eye. She starts to walk a bit faster, but then begins to run. Gregg continuyes to follow her.
Tanya breaths heavily in fright. She runs out into the road just as car is driving towards her....
WILL TANYA SURVIVE?
INT. GREASY GARY'S - DAY
Claire is sitting down in the cafe, staring into her cup of cofee. She is confussed by recent events. Natasha comes in, and sits down next to Claire.
Natasha: Hiya babes, hows it going?
Claire: Oh Hi Tash...
Natasha: What's up with you? You look right down...
Claire: Just man trouble...
Natasha: You!? Your dating the sexy Italian Stalion! What you got to worry about eh!?
Claire: Erm.. well... he ent in the country...and i just dont know how i feel about him anymore.
Natasha: Let me guess someone else has come along?
Claire: In a way... but i dont know what to do...if i went with him, I'd feel like i was cheating on Romeo...
Natasha dosent say anything: after all she is having an affair! :D
Claire: I just never knew i felt this way about him... and now Romeo's gone...i'm just not sure what to do... i mean for all i know Romeo could turn up at any moment....
Natasha: And so what if he does!? He's the one thats messed you around... at the end of the day Claire babes you have to live for the moment...take every chance you get... becuase you leave this world on your own...so how cares who you hurt?
Claire: That's a bit harsh isnt it?
Natasha: Yeah well sometimes people need that... love is complicated...just have fun...your young...you can settle down when your older...anyways I'd best order me cuppa and get going before Mrs C starts having a go at me...bye babes
Natsha goes to the counter. Tanya finishes her cofee and stares at the moment of her mug, seeing her reflection.
WHAT WILL CLAIRE DO NEXT!?
EXT. TORQUEY HIGHSTREET - DAY
Vicky: Tanya!
Tanya turns around to see the car driving directly towards her. Tanya screams and drops her shopping bags. The car's breaks allow it stop directly infront of her. They bib their horn.
Vicky runs over to a shacken Tanya and picks up her bags.
Vicky: Oh my god Tanya, are you ok?
Tanya: I...I...I...
Vicky: It's okay...you've had a nasty shock... I think it's best we get you back home dont you?
Vicky leads Tanya away, as the car drives off, Tanya looks over her shoulder but by now Greg has disapeared.
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INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Tanya is curled up in a ball on the sofa, the televison on. Vicky walks in with a cup of tea.
Vicky: Come on, get this down you...got some whiskey in it...will settle your nerves...
Tanya: Thanks....
Vicky: I dont know what's got into you honestly... i mean its not like you to walk into a road when a car's coming...
Tanya: I'm being stalked Vicky...
Vicky: Stalked!?
Tanya: Your the only one that knows this...so dont tell anyone...especially Gary....he'll do his nut...
Vicky: Well...erm...do you know who's doing this?
Tanya: No...i have no idea... but im just so scared...
Vicky sits down next to Tanya.
Vicky: Christ Tanya...have you told the police!?
Tanya: I can't...they wouldnt believe me...and besides im a Taylor...i should be able to fight this...
Vicky: Stuff being a "Taylor", this almost cost you your life earlier, you need to do something about this Tanya!
Tanya: Get out!
Vicky: What!?
Tanya: I dont need you hassling me! Just get out!
Vicky leaves relucantly, Tanya slams the door on her and starts crying. Tanya runs into the living room turns off the lights, draws the curtains and switches off the tv. She curls up into a ball once more and starts crying to herself.
Tanya: (screams) I hope your happy!
EXT. MARBAL - NIGHT
The residents are queing up for the opening Night of the Marbal Nightclub. The music is blasting out, and the bouncers are slowly letting in everyone.
Claire, Vicky, Natasha, Chris, Tom, Luqina, Ruby, Val and Sanjita are standing in the crowd.
Val: Oh come on lads we're freezing our legs off out here!
Chris: Thought you were gonna say someat else for a second then :p
Val: Oi you cheaky!
Kash is locking up the shop and he sees Sanjita in the crowd.
Kash: Sanjita!?
Sanjita: (To Val) Oh god, here we go...
Val: Just ignore him darl'....stick with us and enjoy your night...
The group head on inside. Kash brages trough the crowds to get to Sanjita.
Kash: Sanjita dont ignore me!!!
Hazey The Bouncer: Oi mate! There's a que get to the back!!!
Kash: I have to see my wife immeditaley!
Kash squeezes trough. The nightlcub is dark, loud and busy. Everyone is having fun and dancing. Val and Sanjita head to the bar.
Val: Hey darling 2 barcadis and cokes when your ready!!
Sanjita: I hope Kash doesnt cause a stir...
Val: Just let him... im in the mood for a good old barny!
Kash storms over and grabs hold of Sanjita.
Kash: Come on out of here now...
Ruby: Get off her dad! Honestly who do you think you are!?
Kash: Her husband! I will not have her behave like this!
Sanjita slaps Kash
Sanjita: How dare you control me! And humilate me infront of my freinds! Just get out of my way kash and let me enjoy my evening.
Kash: I forbid it!
Hazey: I think you'd better come out here...
Val: Your a ruddy control freak Kash!
Kash: And your a cheat little tart... i will not let you bring Sanjita down to your low level!
Claire: Eh watch your lip! That's my mom your talkin' about!
Kash: Like mother like daughter...dressed like a tarlot with your short skirt and your "boobtube"....
Val: Right that's it!
A brawl starts between Claire, Val, Ruby, Sanjita and Kash. Hazey the bouncer talks into her walkie talkie.
Out of the managers office step Iqbal and Marcus, dressed in smart suits.
Iqbal: Break it up! Now!
Hazey and another body guard restrain Val and Kash. Iqbal walks into the centre of the group.
Iqbal: How dare you brawl in my club like this!
Kash: Iqbal!? Marcus!?
Iqbal and Marcus are relatives of Kash's. The singh family are reunited.
hey, just finsihed catching up with all your episodes i really wnt to say wow some of the stuff ive read of yours on here is so talented with this and sbbb i really dunno what else to say other than wow :thumbsup:
thanks for your commentsQuote:
Originally Posted by diamond1
its hard work doing the two, but the end results are worth while.
So the singh family are reunited sounds intresting