Again fantastic stuff Bry and Abi.. I am totally gripped. Way Way better than eastenders and I love my EE
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Again fantastic stuff Bry and Abi.. I am totally gripped. Way Way better than eastenders and I love my EE
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Amy and Val are standing in the kitchen drinking coffe...Amy is loading the washing machine, including Patrick's coat from yesterday.
Amy: Things are finally looking up for change Val, its weird, i feel like a little girl again...
Val: Thats good to hear babes...
Val feels guilty of not telling her friend about Patrick's affair. Amy finishes loading the washine machine, she switches it on and it begins to wash the clothes.
Amy: Its like...ever since we come back from that holiday hes been a different bloke...its like we were kids again.. im lovin it Val!
Val: Once a cheat always a cheat thats what I say...
Amy: Oh no Val...im sure he has changed this time... i think hes realised hes getting too old for bed hopping with girls half his age... he knows that me and him are forever...
Val: Yeah okay babes...but he'll hurt you again... im sure of it...
Amy: (Jokes) Why? Know something i dont do you?
Val finds it uneasy lying to her friend.
Val: Of course not babes...im just saying...you know what hes capable off.
Amy: Yeah and if he ever cheats again I'll chop his knackers off! :D
The pair laugh. The washing machine makes a funny rattling noise and stops working. The pair look on at the machine in bafflement...
Will Amy Find Natasha's Earing?
Amy is starting to drive me nuts.. and how big is this earring to make so much racket in the washer :rotfl: Surely it isn't larger than Pat Evans ear bobs :p Val should fess up, but again if she does will she fess up for blackmailing old Patrick ???
INT. NICKY'S FLAT - DAY
Patrick is lying on the bed in his underpants.
Patrick: God how much longer do you expect me to wait for this suprise...
Natasha: Just a seocnd longer babes...
Natasha walks in dressed in a tight superwoman swimming costume. Patrick wolf whistles to her.
Natasha: You ready for take off Superman!? :p
Patrick pulls Natasha onto the bed, the pair start to wrestle around the bed giggling and having fun.
Natasha: God this feels so right... i cant wait for us to be an item...
Patrick: I told you babes...you'll never be mroe to me than the other woman...
Natasha: We'll see about that....
Patrick: What?
Natasha: Did Amy find my earing yet?
Patrick gets up off the bed in shock.
Patrick: You what!?
Natasha: My earing... i accidently lost it in your coat pocket :p
Patrick: What!? Are you mad!?
Natasha: I'm mad for you... and I'll do anything to get you...
Patrick rushes to put his clothes on...
Patrick: How could you be so stupid!? I swear if Amy find out...
Patricks rushes out of the flat. Natasha likes her lips in triumph.
Natasha: Superwoman saves the day :lol:
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - NIGHT
Tanya is alone in the cottage. She is watching the Paul O Grady Show, the phone rings. She jumps out of her skin but answers it.
She doesnt speak, but hears heavy breathing...
Tanya: Will you stop this! Whoever it is...please just leave me alone!
Tanya puts down the phone and curls up in a ball, she starts to shake nervously. Tanya sees a figure cut across the living room window, and then the sound of a milk bottle being knocked over outside.
Tanya jumps out of her skin again. She runs to the front door and opens it. She picks up the milk bottle and looks around.
Tanya: Just go away!
Tanya runs inside a nervous wreck. The camera zooms out to Gregg, who is waiting around the corner with a sinister look on his face.
Tanya gets a phone call when shes home alone, she shouts down the phone, hears a noise outside. She goes outside and screams. In the distance Gregg stares at her and smiles.
ooh scary stuff! and i cant wait for natasha and patrick's affair to be exposed - hopefully it will anyway
Brilliant stuff yet again!! I so wish this was on my tv, but in other ways, its even better imagining this happening......
Damnnnnnn I am scared.. I am afraid to take the dog out for a walk now, Gregg is a real bad boy,, Bry you do real well with the sinister stuff,, u go baby !!!!!!!!:cheer:
INT: HARVEY'S HOUSE
Mandy is struggling to drag a bag across the living room, to the sofa. Craig walks up behind her, picks it up, and takes it for her...
Mandy: Thanks for that...
Craig: Look, i'll give ya a hand...
Craig tries to put his arm around her waist, and help her to the sofa. She screams in pain
Mandy: ****ing hell Craig! What you trying to do?!
Craig: well a thanks wouldn't go amiss!
Mandy: Thanks for nearly breaking my other ribs you mean?!
Craig shakes his head, and sits on the armchair opposite her. She struggles down, and eases herself into the sofa. Mandy looks over into the kitchen...
Craig: What d'ya want? A drink...? coffee yeah? Am i right...?
Mandy: Craig look..
Craig: Its tea aint it. Right, ok...
Craig walks over to the kitchen. Mandy calls him back...
Mandy: Stop all this. It aint suiting you, ya know.
Craig: What..?
Mandy: Trying to be all supportive all of a sudden. Its not you, so stop pretending it is! If i want a drink, then i'd do what i've always done, and get it myself- broken ribs or no broken ribs.
INT. RED RUM UPSTAIRS FLAT - DAY
Patrick runs up the stairs and into the kitchen, where Amy is making herself a sandwich. Patrick stares at her...wondering if she has coottoned on...
Amy: Afternoon babes... fancying a sandwich?
Patrick: Erm..Amy...
Amy: What do you want on it... maybe...Earing!?
Amy throws the earing at Patrick.
Patrick: Look Amy let me explain...
Amy: I always knew you were stupid but to leave clues so ruddy obvious as that around!!!! I just cant believe you Patrick!!! Just when i thought that you and me were on the up... you have to bed some cheap little slapper!
Patrick: I havent worn this jacket in ages...it isnt recent...
Amy: And that makes it all the better does it!?
Patrick: Look babes...you know im a changed man now...and i dont want anythign to change that...
Amy: Earlier on...id have believed all that bollocks...but now... this earing... it might not be recent...but its reminded me what your really like... i cant control you... because you are just a lying cheating scumbag.
Amy lowers the breadknife down to trouserline. He has a look of horro on his face
Amy: I dont ever wanna be messed with again!! You understand me Patrick!? Becuase if you do... ill be having a sasauge sarnie instead of ham salad you get me!?
Patrick nervously nods...
Amy: Now i know your a cheat... and i know your probably having it off with some floozy at the moment...but it stops now... im sick of being the ruddy mug Patrick! And if you carry on... then i swear thats the end to you and me... i'll divorce you..