this is really good carry on soon
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this is really good carry on soon
wow this is fab more asap hun
amazing clap clap. more more more
yay you did some more!!!!!
its well good!
Sorry for the wait and thanks for the replies
Louise- your making a huge mistake
Kerrie- no you made the huge mistake when you screwed with my life
Louise- I loved him I can’t help that
Kerrie- love him..he was a creep who got what he deserved I’m not sorry he’s dead
Louise- yes you are I know you are death wasn’t what you wanted for him, you wanted him to suffer when he killed himself that made you hate him even more he’d taken the cowards way out hadn’t he
Kerrie stood back reeling
Louise- hit a nerve sweetie
Kerrie raised the gun and pointed it at her rival’s head
Kerrie- don’t push it
Louise- shoot me go on I dare you you’ve already taken away everything from me why not my life
Kerrie- oh please let me get out the violins
Louise- like I said Kerrie just get on with it
Kerrie wiped the tears from her eyes and dropped the gun to the floor and ran out, she felt sick, she couldn’t do it, she couldn’t kill her
Running back home Kerrie rushed to the bathroom and threw up
Meanwhile over at Louise’s flat she smiled menaceingly
Louise- oh Kerrie you just haven’t got the stomach for murder have you but if you can’t I will
Picking up the gun she tossed it over into nearby bin she was gonna make it slow and painful after all it was the least she deserved
Kerrie composed herself and made her way across the Square to the party
Noah noticed her the minute she walked in and his first thoughts of anger changed to worry he’d seen that look on her face before and he knew something wasn’t right
Noah pushed through the crowd and took his wife’s hands they were freezing cold
Noah- Hun are you ok
She looked at him and nodded
Noah- let’s go home come on
Taking his pregnant wife more firmly this time he led her out of the pub and home
Noah- what happened
Kerrie- nothing everything is fine now
Three Months past with a blur as Kerrie tried to put Louise and that night firmly behind her
Now as she lay in hospital cradling her newborn daughter she knew she’d made the right decision
Kerrie didn’t want to bring up her baby with a murder hanging over her
Noah- you did brilliantly sweetheart
Kerrie- thanks she’s beautiful isn’t she
Noah- she sure is Evie Grace King has a nice ring to it
Kerrie- I know it does I chose it remember
Noah- and here was me thinking it was a joint decision
Kerrie- no I came up with the names honey and you just agreed
Noah- so I helped make the decision
Kerrie- I hardly call saying yes to a name making a decision
Noah- do we have to argue now it’s suppose to be the happiest day of our lives
Kerrie- whose arguing
Noah sighed and kissed his wife’s forehead
Noah- I love you despite everything
Kerrie- you mean me being right all he time
Noah- something like that
Kerrie smiled
Jake- hey baby just had a call from Noah a healthy baby girl
Chrissie- whoopee do for her I wish I had gone into labour by now but no I still have to lug this weight around
Jake kissed Chrissie
Jake- you look radiant
Chrissie threw the teatowel she was holding at him
Chrissie- radiant I look radiant well thanks a bunch next you’ll be saying I’m glowing or blossoming or just a great big fat whale
Jake tried not to smile as Chrissie stormed off hormonal really wasn’t the word
:lol: at chrissie and jake!
This is fab as always more sooon
Layne
xxx
wow thats fab hun more soon x.x.x.x
I'm back and thanks for reading :bow:
Chrissie- I was thinking babes we could have a huge sort of marque in the Square
Jake- yeah I guess we could are you sure you want all this fuss I mean the twins haven’t even arrived yet and your planning our commitment ceremony
Chrissie- I have to plan now before I’m swamped in nappies, talcum powder and formula milk
Jake- ok Miss Smarty Pants and don’t forget our daughter’s first birthday in two weeks times
Chrissie- oh please not more parties can’t we just have a few people over and be done with it
Jake- course we can my angel in fact I’ll sort that out and you carry on with our ceremony plans
Chrissie- you’re an angel…oh and go and see Noah find out what he wants for Evie and Kerrie’s welcome home party
Jake- what now
Chrissie- yes now before you forget
Jake- yes captain right away captain
Chrissie- I hope you haven’t forgotten that we still have a spare room if you fancy sleeping there tonight
Jake- I’m off before I really put my foot in it
Chrissie- good idea
Jake left and Chrissie sat down to make some phone calls
Chrissie- ouch
These two were certainly kicking a lot today
Chrissie- pack it in the pair of you I have a million things to do today
Sharon- exciting isn’t it a new baby on the square
Dennis- it sure is
They were sitting in a hospital corridor
Sharon- I’m nervous
Dennis- it will be fine trust me
Sharon- and what if it’s not
Dennis- baby listen everything will be fine
Sharon- I hope so I don’t know how much more of this I can take
Dennis kissed his wife’s delicate hand and squeezed it tight
Dennis- we’re a team me and you we get through everything together
Sharon- I know
Kerrie- look I’ve been in this place a week now I feel fine I look dreadful and the food’s crap
Nurse- you can go home tomorrow you and baby
Kerrie- I should hope so by the time I get out of this place no doubt I’ll have picked up some deadly disease and be back in here before I know it
Nurse- can you keep your voice down Mrs King your scaring the other patients
Kerrie- whoppee doo
Nurse- if you can’t keep a civil tongue
Noah- my wife not causing you grief is she
Nurse- she’s frightening the other mums
Noah- I’m sure she is looking like that
Kerrie- oh charming
Noah- well pumpkin the no make up look and the hospital nightie look really isn’t you
Kerrie- if you open your mouth one more time I will personally see that you never ever re-produce again
Noah- is that a promise
Nurse- Mr and Mrs King if you don’t mind
Kerrie- I can leave tomorrow thank goodness
Noah- what tomorrow are you sure
Nurse- very sure believe me
Noah- that’s a pity I had a card game planned
Kerrie- don’t even joke about that Noah King or I will……
Noah- what
He bent down and kissed her firmly
Kerrie wrapped her arms around him
Noah- what will you do Mrs King
Kerrie- now that would be telling
She pulled him closer and kissed him again
Louise entered the hospital and soon found the maternity ward
Louise caught a nurse
Louise- could you give these to Mrs King please
Nurse- wouldn’t you like to give them to her yourself
Louise- I can’t stop…just say an old friend dropped by with my deepest sympathies
Nurse nodded not quite understanding the strange message
She took the flowers over to where Noah, Kerrie and little baby Evie were
Nurse- lilies for you Mrs King
Kerrie- lilies
Noah- lilies are a funeral flower
Nurse- I thought they were a strange chioce as well, they don’t just signify death though they are also a symbol of bad luck
Noah- that’s just as bad who sent them
Nurse- a woman she said she was an old friend and she said something about sending her deepest sympathies
Kerrie- give them here
Kerrie took the flowers and picked out the card and read it
The colour drained from her face
Noah- what is it
He took the card and read the message aloud
Noah- Tick Tock Kerrie your time is up
Kerrie- it’s just someone’s idea of a joke
Noah- no this is serious who sent it
Kerrie- Louise I put money on it
wow thats fab hun i love this script
post more soon bree x.x.x
Grrrr louise!
But :lol: hehe jake and chrissie and Noah and Kerrie!
More soon honey! :wub: