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this is fantastic. please post more when you get a chance.
Sorry AGAIN for the delay I'm useless I know
Layne I'm going on January the 11th (My birthday) what about you
Here I am again with my story thanks for the replies
When Kerrie opened her eyes the next morning reality hit her Louise was back in town and she meant business
Turning over she noticed Noah had already gone they’d argued furiously last night
Kerrie pulled herself out of bed and made her way to the window as she looked out onto the Square she noticed her watching the house
Despite fuming to herself Kerrie knew she needed to keep a lid on her anger she’d got rid of Louise Phelps once she’d certainly do it again
Jake- I hear I missed quite a show last night
Chrissie- you certainly did Kerrie went mental at the poor woman
Jake- well if I know Kerrie they’ll be more to come
He grinned and kissed Chrissie before turning to walk out
Jake- I shouldn’t be too long I just need to go over the books with Johnny
Chrissie- ok remember hospital appointment at three so you can’t be late
Jake- wouldn’t miss it for the world
Chrissie snorted and buttered herself some more toast
Dennis stared at his fiancé as she desperately tried to finalise their plans for the wedding, the pressures were definitely getting to her and with the added worry of the results if this failed he wasn’t sure how she’d take it but he knew that they’d try again
Sharon- that was the registry office
Dennis- what did they want
Sharon- they’ve had a cancellation and they knew we wanted the wedding to be sooner well I agreed
Dennis- agreed when for
Sharon- an hour
Dennis- an hour you are joking
Sharon- I’m fed up with all the plans Blah! Blah! Blah! Let’s get wed baby
He grinned and wrapped his arms around her waist
Dennis- all right you’re on
Sharon- well you better get dressed I’m not marrying you in nothing but a pair of boxers
Dennis- yes ma’am
He saluted her and strolled off to the bathroom for a quick shower
Kerrie left the house and made her way across the Square she stopped at where Louise sat on Arthur’s bench
Kerrie- comfy
Louise- very
Kerrie- trust me it won’t last I’ll personally see to it that your as uncomfortable as possible
She walked away with one plan in mind extinction
Kerrie dialled a number on her phone
Kerrie- hi it’s me I have a little problem that I want you to sort out for good…….
What is Kerrie gonna do!
Post more as soon as you can honey!
I was going the 7th January but nige said he weren't doing that one so we rearranged and i'm going 25th February now!
layne
xxx
yay yay yay you posted... more more more... more more more...
yay u posted more woot woot woot
brill u posted more. can we have more soon please!!!
A big thanks and a big sorry for all the readers my new years resolution (A little late I know) will post story more often you can all have a go if I fail to keep my promise
Story is a bit up and down since both Chrissie and Dennis have disappeared off screen but I hope you enjoy anyway
That night as people gathered in the pub and giggly and secretive Dennis and Sharon decided to reveal their little secret
Dennis- me and Sharon have some news...
There was a pause
Jake- come on then don’t keep us waiting
Sharon- today we got married
There was a stunned gasp then everyone cheered and soon a party was starting
Kerrie watched from her window and people stayed at the pub partying she couldn’t have asked for a better way to keep everyone out of the Square
Noah had gone over ages ago they still hadn’t spoken properly since their argument last night he was stubborn ass when he wanted to be
Reaching for the gun resting on her bed side table she made her way down the stairs and out in the Square she’d had Louise tracked all day and knew exactly where she’d be
Chrissie and Jake smiled as they watched the happy couple
Chrissie- I wish we could marry
Jake- one day angel one day I promise
He kissed her lightly on her forehead and carried on serving the many punters
Kerrie knocked on the door to a dingy looking flat and Louise opened the surprise on her face was soon replaced with fear when she saw what Kerrie was holding
:wub: awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats soooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by Joel_Beckett_Lover
Fab as always honey! Post more when you can!
God i have missed you and this script :p *hugs*
luv ya
Layne
xxx
ooooh go kerrie