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where is it? please post more... i NEED to know what happens... i NEED to know...
SORRY loads of apologies not been on since sunday loads of coursework to finish before I start my new job on the 14th June in a nursery can't wait so thanks for all the replies and once again very sorry more on sunday promise
The stunned wedding guests looked from one to the other as the enormity of what had been said sunk in
Jake followed Chrissie determined to find out the truth
Chrissie sat hugging a sobbing Zoë when Jake approached her
Zoë- I’m gonna go home Chrissie I need to think
Chrissie- just remember to call me if you need anything
Zoë nodded and left
Chrissie looked up at Jake his face told her all she needed to know
Chrissie- I should have told you
Jake- all this time all the lies and I swallowed them all
Chrissie- I couldn’t there was too much at stake
Jake- yeah there was, our relationship included and you my darling just blew it
Chrissie- you’re finishing with me
Jake- our whole relationship is built on lies I asked you to marry me
Chrissie- I know
Jake- well at least you’ll get your divorce now Dennis is looking for Den
Chrissie- he can’t look for Den
Jake- why not Chrissie
Chrissie- he just can’t
Jake- more secrets hey well have a nice life
Jake turned and walked away
Chrissie felt the tears sting her eyes she already knew she couldn’t accept Jake’s proposal and now she couldn’t stay around for them to discover the truth she had a little girl to think about
Getting up she found Alfie and Danny cooing over her daughter
Chrissie- I’m taking her home
Alfie- well here you go you all right
Chrissie- never better
She took her daughter before turning and walking out
no, they can't split up. more more more. She should tell him, then he can hate her for a while before sorting it out. its fab. great to see you back. enjoy your job
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huh? theyre splitiing up! thats not supposed to happen!
more soon pleasee!! :thumbsup:
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo... she can't go... she can't leave... Jake stop her SHE'S LEAVING!!! :shouting at the top of my lungs: SHE'S LEAVING Jake STOP HER... don't go Chrissie... :eek: :crying: :angry: :crying:
I agree! DON'T SPLIT UP! COME ON KISS AND MAKE UP! PLEASE? :crying:Quote:
Originally Posted by Angeldelight
NO!!!!!!!!!!!! They CANNOT split!
This is great, but they can't spilt up they are mean to be together!!!! Noooooooo :angry: :nono: :mad: Jake what are you doing
More soon
Luv ya
Layne
x x x
Opps sorry JC is no more for now just keep reading guys and thnks for the wonderful replies your all brill
Kerrie and Noah stepped out into the garden the silence was deadly
Kerrie- looks like a bloody wake not a wedding
Johnny- where the hell have you been
Noah- we just went for a walk
Kerrie- yeah down the road left at the crossroads and there it was
She staggered against Noah clutching a bottle of champagne
Noah- drinking all that is hardly helping matters is it
Kerrie glared at him
Kerrie- what have we missed Rubes did I miss some fight or something
Ruby- not exactly
Stacey- Dennis only told everyone Zoë faked her pregnancy and slept with Den Watts to get pregnant wouldn’t go near her now can you imagine the things you could catch
Kerrie- so he finally told the truth did he
Stacey- what you knew
Kerrie- he told me so did he hit her I would have done if I’d been here
Stacey- no but apparently Chrissie took Zoë for an abortion so she must have known all along
Kerrie- whoops I bet Jake weren’t happy
Stacey- Pauline Fowler just claimed she heard them rowing so sounds like it
Kerrie giggled
She grabbed Noah- let’s tell dad
Noah- what now
Kerrie nodded
Kerrie- daddy
Johnny and Tina were chatting to Dot and Jim
Kerrie staggered over
Kerrie- daddy me and Noah have got an announcement to make to you about our relationship
Stacey- he aint knocked you up has he
Kerrie- no it aint that bad
Johnny- what is it Kerrie it better be important?
Kerrie- it is cos we just got married
The guests were once again stunned by the latest admission
Johnny- married
Kerrie- great innit I didn’t even have to change my surname what with being married to his dead brother an all that so I’m still Kerrie King with a different husband
She laughed and Johnny raised and eyebrow at his drunk daughter and offered his sympathies to Noah
This is great babes, even though JC is no more :crying:
Post more soon
luv ya
Layne
x x x
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Right, so she's just got married! Can't believe JC is no more. Its fab babe. more more more.
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poor Noah... does nothing go to plan... hehe... this is brill babes... as usual... please please please get Chrissie and Jake back together... they're meant to be... if you don't i'm going to have to hurt you... please post more... more more more
haha!! :rotfl:Quote:
She laughed and Johnny raised and eyebrow at his drunk daughter and offered his sympathies to Noah
this is great more soon please!!!! :thumbsup:
That is so sad!
brill once again! :D oh no no more jc! and kerrie and noah are married! :) more very soon please, cant wait
apologies for the wait but here is the next part JC is still in with a chance but put it this way there's alot to talk about he he thanks for reading you wonderful people
Dennis and Sharon had decided it was best to head back to the Square their home truths session had caused enough problems without them sticking around and making things worse
Dennis had seen Jake drowning his sorrows at the bar and he hoped he and Chrissie would work things out he needed her just as much as she needed him by the looks of things
Sharon- what are you thinking
They sat in the black cab her head resting on his tense shoulder she knew he felt bad about what he did to Zoë no matter what she had done to them and Sharon couldn’t help pitying her the lengths she went to hold on to something was scary
Dennis- I don’t know
Sharon- things will be fine I promise
Dennis- I’m not sure about that
Sharon- as long as we have each other that’s all that matters
Dennis smiled and nodded
Dennis- I hope Chrissie and Jake will be ok
Sharon- course they will they’ve got a baby to think about
Dennis- come on I’ll run you a bath
Sharon- sounds like a plan if I ever heard one
They climbed out of the cab as it pulled up in front of the flat
Chrissie stared at her sleeping daughter in her carry cot her soft pink cheeks, her long luxurious eyelashes and her tiny fingers so perfect
Looking down to the small box in the palm of her hand she loved him more than she could even describe so why was she running deep down she knew why she was scared, scared of what they’ll find out, scared of losing Lia but most of all scared of Jake thinking badly of her
Folding some more of Lia’s clothes into a bag a single solitary tear escaped a tear for fear, a tear for guilt, a tear for love, a tear for Jake
She got out her mobile and dialled a number
Chrissie waited for a reply but got none
Jake stared down at his phone Chrissie was calling him but he didn’t want to know not now maybe later when he’d had time to think things over and got his head around what had happened
He looked across at Kerrie and Noah the happy couple and knew that it would never be him and Chrissie making vows but then again Jake never really believed in marriage in the first place so why was it so important now
PICK UP THE PHONE JAKE!
More soon I hope :)
Come on Jake, pick up the phone! Fab. more more more soon
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Jjke you idiot pick up the phone... it's ringing... PICK IT UP... Rachel if you don't get back here right now i'll have to hurt you and neither of us want that... post more SOON... NOW... more more more...
awwwwww so sad!! :crying:Quote:
Originally Posted by Joel_Beckett_Lover
more soon please!!! :thumbsup:
*Wipes away tears* This is excellante!
More soonn please
Jake forgive her you idiot!
layne
x x x
hello-ha everyone here is another bit don't worry Jake might come to his senses you never know he he thanks for the replies glad your still enjoying it
Kerrie- all right gorgeous
Noah smiled at her so glad he had finally made her his wife
Kerrie- so how long had you been planning it that’s what I want to know?
Noah- about two weeks maybe a bit longer
Kerrie- why didn’t you tell me
Noah- it was a surprise if I told you it wouldn’t be one now would it
Kerrie wrapped her arms around him and kissed him hard on the lips
Chrissie was nearly all packed and ready to go but she knew she couldn’t just go without saying goodbye she owed him that much at least dialling another number on her mobile and this time Chrissie got a reply
Chrissie- have you got a minute please Dennis I’ll meet you outside the Vic thanks
As she stood outside with Lia snuggled into her arms Dennis made his way over
Dennis- what’s up
Chrissie- can you tell Jake I’m sorry
Dennis- you can tell that to him yourself when he’s had time to calm down
Chrissie- I won’t be here my cabs booked in half an hour I’m out of here
Dennis- you’re running away
Chrissie- I’m not I can’t tell you why but I can’t stay too much has happened not just about me lying to him there’s more than that
Dennis- you should tell him your going
Chrissie- he won’t take my calls
She hugged Dennis
Chrissie- thanks for everything take care of Sharon
She turned and walked back into the pub
great! :D dont run away chrissie! :) more very soon please, cant wait
This is excellant! More soon please babesLuv ya
Layne
x x x
what are you doing... Chrissie walk STRAIGHT BACK into the Vic... right now... Go and find JAKE... don't leave he didn't mean it... tell her Rach... he DIDN'T MEAN IT :screaming at the bloody computer: HE DIDN'T MEAN IT... STAY... please post more or i will hurt you... thanks... sorry but i will... more more more...
To stop Helen killing me I'll post more he he thanks guys your all brill
As Dennis turned away from the pub he watched another person climb into a waiting cab Dennis quickly jogged over
Zoë looked at him out of the open window
Dennis- you off
Zoë- I can’t face them a new start maybe I’ll call them I phoned Kelly she’s getting me a job out in Ibiza
Dennis- I shouldn’t have said what I said back there
Zoë- yes you should and you know it
Dennis- well you take care
Zoë- yeah and you
The cab pulled away and Zoë made her way from Walford forever
Dennis dialled a number on his mobile
Dennis- Jake it’s Dennis you better get back here quick it’s Chrissie she’s all packed and ready to leave…do I sound like I’m making this up she and Lia are going and you have twenty minutes to get back here and stop her
He hung up and headed back to the flat
Chrissie watched from the window as the taxi pulled away, so Zoë had gone that made things easier but it couldn’t stop her plans Den was still in the Vic and her world could still come crashing down on her even without Zoë around
Jake stared at the phone before getting up and sprinting out of the hotel and flagging down a passing car the driver agreed to give him a lift back to Walford
As Jake pulled up outside the Queen Vic he thanked the driver and watched as Chrissie was loading her bags into the waiting cab she stopped when she saw him
Jake- where are you going
Chrissie- I don’t know
Jake- why
Chrissie- you said it was over
Jake- I said it in the heat of the moment
Chrissie- I didn’t know that and other things are going on for me right now
Jake- like what why won’t you tell me
Chrissie- because you won’t understand and I don’t want to hurt you
Jake- let me be the judge of that, come inside and we’ll talk
Chrissie- what about the cab
Jake- you can always call another one
Chrissie nodded- you won’t like what you’ll hear
Jake- maybe I won’t but I still love you and I know you still love me
Chrissie- of course I do
Jake had a word with the cabbie, paid him for his troubles before carrying the bags back into the pub
Chrissie- where shall I start
Jake- the beginning
Chrissie- the beginning of what
Jake- honestly I don’t know
Chrissie- neither do I but I can think of a good place to start
She took his hand and led him to the cellar
Chrissie- this is where it all begins and ends really
Jake- what are you talking about?
Chrissie- Den he didn’t leave me or the Vic
yey yey yey... Zoe's GONE... yey yey yey... Ooohhhhhhhh... what's he guna do??? PLEASE DON'T LEAVE HER JAKE... she LOVES you and you LOVE her... please don't split them up.... post more soon... like right now... NOW... more more more...
Oh she's gonna tell him! He better not go again. Yes, Zoe's gone. Fab, fab fab. Cant wait for more. need to see how jake will react. more more more
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hello thought I would post another part tonight before I go to bed so here we are
Kerrie glared at her husband as she watched him dancing and flirting with one of Tina’s friends
Noah caught his wife’s eye and smiled
Kerrie turned to the barman
Kerrie- stick another in there will you I have a feeling I’ll need it
She downed the ice-cold vodka shot in one mouthful
She felt a presence next to her expecting her husband she was surprised to see a very good looking man ordering himself a drink he caught Kerrie staring at him and he introduced himself
Nathan- I’m Nathan and you must be one of the lovely bridesmaids
Kerrie- Kerrie
Nathan- pleasure to meet you Kerrie can I get you a drink
Kerrie- a glass of white wine please
Nathan- one white wine coming up
Kerrie- so who do you know at the wedding
Nathan- my sister is a mate of Tina’s she dragged me along I believe Holly is sinking her talons into the bloke on the dancefloor in the grey suit
Kerrie- I noticed he’s my husband not that you’d guess
Nathan- you’re married
Kerrie- hardly
Nathan- I don’t usually…
Kerrie- what buy a married woman a drink if it’s that much of a problem you can have it back?
She turned and threw the drink in his face
Stacey giggled
Kerrie- bloody b*****d men
She stormed over to Noah
Kerrie- I want to go home
The woman on his arm glared at her- and you are
Kerrie- I’m his bitch of a wife
She grabbed her by the hair and dragged her away from Noah
Kerrie let her go
The woman- you stupid psycho
Kerrie swung round and head-butted her
Noah- Kerrie
Kerrie- you keep out of this she called me a psycho
Johnny and Tina came through the doors from the garden to find Kerrie beating up one of the guests
The barman walked over to the phone and dialled a number
Barman- police please
Kerrie stood up and realised everyone was staring at her
Noah- look what you’ve done
Kerrie- what can I say my anger management course obviously isn’t working
She grabbed her bag and went to walk out when uniformed police officers walked in
Nathan helped his sister up
PC Jenkins- we’ve had a call of a fight are you all right love
Holly nodded as Nathan held her up
Nathan- try that nutter over there
He pointed to Kerrie
Kerrie- he called me a nutter
Noah- don’t start
PC Jenkins- I might have guessed come on Kerrie
Kerrie grinned- long time no see Leon how’s things
She walked over
Kerrie held out her arms- I suppose you better arrest me officer
Noah- please do I could do with a quiet night in
Kerrie allowed the officers to lead her away whilst they took statements
Noah- sorry Johnny you know what she’s like
Johnny- I know
fab! :D oh dear kerries been arrested! and jake dont hate chrissie when she tells you the truth! :) more very soon please, cant wait
Oh my god she's been arrested! Please come and post the next part :)
Jake please pick up the phone :bow:
Kerie's been arrested oh dear. she does need an anger mangement course! fab. more more more
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Here I am again he he thanks for the replies your all amazing more JC awwww bless
Jake- what do you mean Den didn’t leave you
Chrissie- it was an accident we never meant to go that far
Chrissie looked at her sleeping daughter in her dad’s arms
Jake- who’s we?
Chrissie- me, Sam and Zoë
Jake- I don’t understand
Chrissie- he destroyed us all we only wanted to pay him back he took Sam’s businesses off her and you know what he did to Zoë and to me well he lied, cheated, betrayed and destroyed me we just wanted him to leave the Square a broken man
Jake- what happened
Chrissie sat down on the barrel and stared at the concrete
Chrissie- it was Scarlet’s opening night
Jake’s blood ran cold the night Johnny had killed Andy
Chrissie- we confronted him he wouldn’t even pretend to be sorry I set Sharon up to listen to what he’d done knowing she was the one thing he loved his weakness I felt bad but I couldn’t think of anything else
Jake- then what happened
Chrissie let a tear silently escape her eyes as she looked at him
Chrissie- I love you please don’t hate me
Jake- so Sharon heard what Den did about Zoë
Chrissie nodded
Chrissie- she walked out and he followed I don’t know what was said but it wasn’t pleasant and when Den returned he was furious
Jake- what did he do
Chrissie- he went for me it got out of hand
Jake- who killed him
Chrissie looked at him a tear escaped as she uttered the words he dreaded
Chrissie- I did
She burst into tears
Jake bent down in front of her and with his free hand wiped away her tears
Chrissie- he was gonna kill me and Zoë hit him with Pauline’s doorstop she’d left it in the pub we thought he was dead we didn’t know what to do so I got Sam and Zoë to turn the lights out and lock the doors I thought he was dead
Jake- but he wasn’t
Chrissie- he grabbed my ankle I just saw the doorstop I hit him again this time he was dead, I felt sick, the thud, the blood
Jake- shhhh it’s ok
Chrissie- no it isn’t Sharon wants to look for him I can’t bare for anyone else to know
Jake- you should have told me
Chrissie- I didn’t want to lose you
Jake- where is he Den where did you…
Chrissie got up and walked over to the concrete bending down she ran her fingers over it
Chrissie- it was the only place
Jake- he’s here in the Vic
Chrissie nodded
awwww jakes so nice!!! :wub:
mroe soon please!!! :thumbsup:
awwwwww... i'm glad he's sticking with her... yey yey yey... uh-oh Karrie been arrested again... i suppose that can't be good... more more more
fab! :D looks like jakes not gonna be angry thats good! :) more very very soon please, cant wait
Ooops! Sorry I missed a couple of parts! I've read them now. Jake is so sweet!Quote:
Originally Posted by Amber
Ah, he knows!